This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of international cooperation from the real IELTS exam.
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IELTS Essay: International Cooperation
Many today feel that most urgent problems can only be solved by international cooperation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are those who claim that we can only solve pressing global issues today if countries work in concert. In my opinion, international cooperation holds some promise but it is difficult to align the priorities of self-interested nations.
Proponents argue that global issues require active participation from all countries. The best, most recent example of this is climate change. Threats to the environment are becoming more dire annually and this affects every nation on Earth equally. Therefore, the best solutions involve signing international accords. These agreements force nations to abide by certain regulations and meet benchmarks in order to form a cohesive, global policy that can mitigate and reverse the effects of climate change. If many governments are unwilling to commit, it is unlikely that individual nations will then have the desire to make drastic changes and very little might be done to curb an imminent global catastrophe.
However, the accords mentioned above have been notorious failures as each nation has its own individual priorities. Many developed nations that already have well-developed green industries and eco-friendly policies in place are happy to sign agreements that benefit both the Earth and their own financial interests. Other nations, chiefly in the Middle East where their economies are reliant on fossil fuel production and in developing countries where the economic consequences would be dire, are less enthusiastic. Many poorer countries can also justly argue that they contributed little to the current climate problems in the past so it is unfair to hinder their development now. This applies for issues outside climate change as nations will always be in conflict and international cooperation is therefore an impractical solution to important problems.
In conclusion, though the entire planet working in tandem would be an ideal approach, it will typically fail due to competing interests. It is more important that countries act on their own or with like-minded nations and not push for global reforms.
Analysis
1. There are those who claim that we can only solve pressing global issues today if countries work in concert. 2. In my opinion, international cooperation holds some promise but it is difficult to align the priorities of self-interested nations.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about writing introductions here.
1. Proponents argue that global issues require active participation from all countries. 2. The best, most recent example of this is climate change. 3. Threats to the environment are becoming more dire annually and this affects every nation on Earth equally. 4. Therefore, the best solutions involve signing international accords. 5. These agreements force nations to abide by certain regulations and meet benchmarks in order to form a cohesive, global policy that can mitigate and reverse the effects of climate change. 6. If many governments are unwilling to commit, it is unlikely that individual nations will then have the desire to make drastic changes and very little might be done to curb an imminent global catastrophe.
- Write a clear topic sentence with your main idea at the end.
- Begin a specific example.
- Develop your example.
- State the results to keep developing it.
- Don’t switch to a new example – keep developing the same one.
- State your final conclusions.
1. However, the accords mentioned above have been notorious failures as each nation has its own individual priorities. 2. Many developed nations that already have well-developed green industries and eco-friendly policies in place are happy to sign agreements that benefit both the Earth and their own financial interests. 3. Other nations, chiefly in the Middle East where their economies are reliant on fossil fuel production and in developing countries where the economic consequences would be dire, are less enthusiastic. 4. Many poorer countries can also justly argue that they contributed little to the current climate problems in the past so it is unfair to hinder their development now. 5. This applies for issues outside climate change as nations will always be in conflict and international cooperation is therefore an impractical solution to important problems.
- Write another topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Give specific examples as I do here.
- Develop those examples as full as possible.
- Generalise to other situations if your example was very specific.
1. In conclusion, though the entire planet working in tandem would be an ideal approach, it will typically fail due to competing interests. 2. It is more important that countries act on their own or with like-minded nations and not push for global reforms.
- Summarise your main ideas and repeat your opinion.
- Include a final thought/detail.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?
There are those who claim that we can only solve pressing global issues today if countries work in concert. In my opinion, international cooperation holds some promise but it is difficult to align the priorities of self-interested nations.
Proponents argue that global issues require active participation from all countries. The best, most recent example of this is climate change. Threats to the environment are becoming more dire annually and this affects every nation on Earth equally. Therefore, the best solutions involve signing international accords. These agreements force nations to abide by certain regulations and meet benchmarks in order to form a cohesive, global policy that can mitigate and reverse the effects of climate change. If many governments are unwilling to commit, it is unlikely that individual nations will then have the desire to make drastic changes and very little might be done to curb an imminent global catastrophe.
However, the accords mentioned above have been notorious failures as each nation has its own individual priorities. Many developed nations that already have well-developed green industries and eco-friendly policies in place are happy to sign agreements that benefit both the Earth and their own financial interests. Other nations, chiefly in the Middle East where their economies are reliant on fossil fuel production and in developing countries where the economic consequences would be dire, are less enthusiastic. Many poorer countries can also justly argue that they contributed little to the current climate problems in the past so it is unfair to hinder their development now. This applies for issues outside climate change as nations will always be in conflict and international cooperation is therefore an impractical solution to important problems.
In conclusion, though the entire planet working in tandem would be an ideal approach, it will typically fail due to competing interests. It is more important that countries act on their own or with like-minded nations and not push for global reforms.
Answers
claim argue
solve pressing global issues fix problems affecting the whole world
in concert working together
international cooperation globally working together
holds some promise might work
align get on the same page
priorities what they value
self-interested nations selfish countries
proponents advocates
active participation committing fully
climate change global warming
threats potential dangers
becoming more dire annually getting more serious every year
signing international accords agreeing to global pacts
agreements pacts, accords
abide by follow
regulations rules
meet benchmarks reach goals
cohesive unified
global policy plan for the whole Earth
mitigate lessen
reverse fix
commit choose to participate
drastic changes big reforms
curb slow down
imminent global catastrophe coming soon big problems
notorious failures famously haven’t worked
individual priorities their own interests
well-developed green industries solar, wind, electric, etc.
eco-friendly policies in place already have clean energy laws
financial interests invested in
reliant depend on
fossil fuel production oil and gas
economic consequences hurt their economy
dire very bad
less enthusiastic not excited for
justly argue rightly claim
contributed little don’t give much
hinder their development hold back their progress
applies is the case for
conflict not in agreement
impractical solution won’t work
entire completely
working in tandem working together
ideal approach perfect solution
competing interests in conflict
like-minded nations countries that think the same way
push for global reforms try to make changes the whole world follows
Pronunciation
kleɪm
sɒlv ˈprɛsɪŋ ˈgləʊbəl ˈɪʃuːz
ɪn ˈkɒnsə(ː)t
ˌɪntə(ː)ˈnæʃənl kəʊˌɒpəˈreɪʃən
həʊldz sʌm ˈprɒmɪs
əˈlaɪn
praɪˈɒrɪtiz
sɛlf-ˈɪntrɪstɪd ˈneɪʃənz
prəˈpəʊnənts
ˈæktɪv pɑːˌtɪsɪˈpeɪʃən
ˈklaɪmɪt ʧeɪnʤ
θrɛts
bɪˈkʌmɪŋ mɔː ˈdaɪər ˈænjʊəli
ˈsaɪnɪŋ ˌɪntə(ː)ˈnæʃənl əˈkɔːdz
əˈgriːmənts
əˈbaɪd baɪ
ˌrɛgjʊˈleɪʃənz
miːt ˈbɛnʧmɑːks
kəʊˈhiːsɪv
ˈgləʊbəl ˈpɒlɪsi
ˈmɪtɪgeɪt
rɪˈvɜːs
kəˈmɪt
ˈdræstɪk ˈʧeɪnʤɪz
kɜːb
ˈɪmɪnənt ˈgləʊbəl kəˈtæstrəfi
nəʊˈtɔːrɪəs ˈfeɪljəz
ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəl praɪˈɒrɪtiz
wɛl-dɪˈvɛləpt griːn ˈɪndəstriz
ˈiːkəʊ-ˈfrɛndli ˈpɒlɪsiz ɪn pleɪs
faɪˈnænʃəl ˈɪntrɪsts
rɪˈlaɪənt
ˈfɒsl fjʊəl prəˈdʌkʃən
ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˈkɒnsɪkwənsɪz
ˈdaɪə
lɛs ɪnˌθjuːzɪˈæstɪk
ˈʤʌstli ˈɑːgjuː
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)tɪd ˈlɪtl
ˈhaɪndə ðeə dɪˈvɛləpmənt
əˈplaɪz
ˈkɒnflɪkt
ɪmˈpræktɪkəl səˈluːʃən
ɪnˈtaɪə
ˈwɜːkɪŋ ɪn ˈtændəm
aɪˈdɪəl əˈprəʊʧ
kəmˈpiːtɪŋ ˈɪntrɪsts
ˈlaɪkˈmaɪndɪd ˈneɪʃənz
pʊʃ fɔː ˈgləʊbəl ˌriːˈfɔːmz
Vocabulary Practice
Remember and fill in the blanks:
There are those who c_______m that we can only s___________________________s today if countries work i____________t. In my opinion, i_____________________n h_______________________e but it is difficult to a_______n the p_____________s of s______________________s.
P________________s argue that global issues require a_____________________n from all countries. The best, most recent example of this is c________________e. T__________s to the environment are b___________________________y and this affects every nation on Earth equally. Therefore, the best solutions involve s_______________________s. These a__________________s force nations to a____________y certain r_____________s and m_____________________s in order to form a c____________e, g_______________y that can m___________e and r__________e the effects of climate change. If many governments are unwilling to c____________t, it is unlikely that individual nations will then have the desire to make d_______________s and very little might be done to c_____b an i________________________e.
However, the accords mentioned above have been n__________________s as each nation has its own i_____________________s. Many developed nations that already have w_____________________________s and e_____________________________e are happy to sign agreements that benefit both the Earth and their own f____________________s. Other nations, chiefly in the Middle East where their economies are r___________t on f_______________________n and in developing countries where the e________________________s would be d____e, are l_____________________c. Many poorer countries can also j____________e that they c_________________e to the current climate problems in the past so it is unfair to h______________________t now. This a__________s for issues outside climate change as nations will always be in c___________t and international cooperation is therefore an i_____________________n to important problems.
In conclusion, though the e________e planet w________________m would be an i_______________h, it will typically fail due to c___________________s. It is more important that countries act on their own or with l____________________s and not p_____________________s.
Listening Practice
Learn below about how the United Nations work – a potential good example in your writing:
Reading Practice
Read more about failed talks related to climate change from The New York Times below:
https://www.nytimes.com/2019/09/23/climate/climate-summit-global-warming.html
Speaking Practice
Answer the following questions from the real speaking exam related to the environment:
Environment (NEW BOOKLET)
- Why do people throw rubbish the streets?
- How can people be encouraged to not litter?
- What are the results of littering?
- What steps has your government taken to make people pick up after themselves?
- Do the efforts of a single person have an impact on the world as a whole?
Writing Practice
Write about the following related topic and check with my sample answer:
Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Thanks a lot for the essay! It is so helpful)
You’re very welcome, Khamdam!
There has been an increasing debate on whether global collaboration can resolve pertinent issues that we face. Although it can be argued that it economically benefits all nations, I personally agree that international collaboration alone is not feasible to resolve issues.
Those who decry this claim point out the economic gains between nations. The greatest threat to global development is poverty. In recent times, non-profit organizations are established that aims to alleviate poverty globally. For example, by providing financial aid to Africa, United Nations has helped to build a factory to leverage their natural crude oil for exports. This has effectively resulted in massive local employment which allowed impoverished people to afford food on a daily basis and therefore eliminating poverty to some extent. Consequently, developed nations profit through outsourcing their technological equipment in favour of low employment wages and by doing so, their economic profits improve substantially. As a result, developing and developed nations both exchange their strengths in order for better economic progress.
Nonetheless, these instances are often taken advantage of and thus, justifying that international cooperation alone does not solve poverty. Most underprivileged nations facing poverty are unsupported with good governance and corruption is a highly evident causative factor that hinders developmental progress. For instance, though Africa benefited greatly from crude oil profits, the corrupted political system in Africa used illicit tactics to capture a portion of the revenue and therefore, preventing economic sustainability. Hence, international cooperation can only bring a certain extent of financial aid with the signing of treaties and policies but other factors are often neglected in this process. As a result, developed countries further advances while developing nations are most likely left behind.
In conclusion, though global cooperation can benefit nations through economic pursuits, this is often on the premises of other issues being ignored. Nations should, however, be more focused on building their own nation than uniting as global forms.
Well written!
Try to paraphrase your vocabulary slightly more throughout the essay, your examples are really good but there are some simple grammar mistakes related to word order and articles.
Continue pushing yourself!
Hi Dave
Thank you so much for the feedback. Your essays have really motivated me to support my main idea and give better explanations. Really appreciate it.
Also, what band range do you think this essay falls under?
Thank you.
Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
in this type of question cant we write – disadvantages outweigh the advantages ?