This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of multinational companies from the real IELTS exam.
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IELTS Essay: Multinational Companies
The growth of multinational companies and the resulting rise of globalization creates positive effects for all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The pervasiveness of multinationals has led many to question their relative merits. In my opinion, their impact is negative on the whole despite legitimate economic advantages.
Those in favor of a globalised world argue that international conglomerates bring wealth to a country. This is the result of a variety of related effects including increased tax revenue, employment opportunities, and, most importantly, the spread of expertise. A good example of this would be producers of consumer electronics such as Apple. Apple provides jobs in countries all around the world ranging from marketers and factory workers to graphic designers and supply agents. All these employees receive salaries typically above the average wages in a given region, which is then directed back towards the local consumer economy. Such workers are also likely to pick up specialised skills that they can utilize in the long-term and later pass on to others.
Nonetheless, multinationals are negative due to their effects on local businesses and the environment. A good example of the former point would be the rise of fast food chains globally. Well-known brands such as McDonald’s and KFC are in hundreds of countries and provide serious competition to local restaurants. Their ability to offer cheap, uniform meals with limited nutritional value that are very addictive hurt both the health of the local populace and also make it harder for small restaurants to turn a profit and remain in operation. Moreover, such large corporations contribute to climate change by exploiting the use of airplanes and trucks to ship their products globally. Combined with the plastic packaging often employed by these companies, their impact on the environment far surpasses the minor lifestyle choices of individuals.
In conclusion, despite meagre economic benefits arising from multinationals, I believe this is a negative trend due to the effect on small businesses and the environment. Governments must therefore attempt to carefully regulate and balance the introduction of international companies.
Analysis
1. The pervasiveness of multinationals has led many to question their relative merits. 2. In my opinion, their impact is negative on the whole despite legitimate economic advantages.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Those in favor of a globalised world argue that international conglomerates bring wealth to a country. 2. This is the result of a variety of related effects including increased tax revenue, employment opportunities, and, most importantly, the spread of expertise. 3. A good example of this would be producers of consumer electronics such as Apple. 4. Apple provides jobs in countries all around the world ranging from marketers and factory workers to graphic designers and supply agents. 5. All these employees receive salaries typically above the average wages in a given region, which is then directed back towards the local consumer economy. 6. Such workers are also likely to pick up specialised skills that they can utilize in the long-term and later pass on to others.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific examples.
- Keep developing.
- Develop it fully.
- The more detail, the higher your task achievement score.
1. Nonetheless, multinationals are negative due to their effects on local businesses and the environment. 2. A good example of the former point would be the rise of fast food chains globally. 3. Well-known brands such as McDonald’s and KFC are in hundreds of countries and provide serious competition to local restaurants. 4. Their ability to offer cheap, uniform meals with limited nutritional value that are very addictive hurt both the health of the local populace and also make it harder for small restaurants to turn a profit and remain in operation. 5. Moreover, such large corporations contribute to climate change by exploiting the use of airplanes and trucks to ship their products globally. 6. Combined with the plastic packaging often employed by these companies, their impact on the environment far surpasses the minor lifestyle choices of individuals.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Continue developing or switch to a second disadvantage.
- Develop this one fully.
- State the furthest possible result.
1. In conclusion, despite meagre economic benefits arising from multinationals, I believe this is a negative trend due to the effect on small businesses and the environment. 2. Governments must therefore attempt to carefully regulate and balance the introduction of international companies.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
The pervasiveness of multinationals has led many to question their relative merits. In my opinion, their impact is negative on the whole despite legitimate economic advantages.
Those in favor of a globalised world argue that international conglomerates bring wealth to a country. This is the result of a variety of related effects including increased tax revenue, employment opportunities, and, most importantly, the spread of expertise. A good example of this would be producers of consumer electronics such as Apple. Apple provides jobs in countries all around the world ranging from marketers and factory workers to graphic designers and supply agents. All these employees receive salaries typically above the average wages in a given region, which is then directed back towards the local consumer economy. Such workers are also likely to pick up specialised skills that they can utilize in the long-term and later pass on to others.
Nonetheless, multinationals are negative due to their effects on local businesses and the environment. A good example of the former point would be the rise of fast food chains globally. Well-known brands such as McDonald’s and KFC are in hundreds of countries and provide serious competition to local restaurants. Their ability to offer cheap, uniform meals with limited nutritional value that are very addictive hurt both the health of the local populace and also make it harder for small restaurants to turn a profit and remain in operation. Moreover, such large corporations contribute to climate change by exploiting the use of airplanes and trucks to ship their products globally. Combined with the plastic packaging often employed by these companies, their impact on the environment far surpasses the minor lifestyle choices of individuals.
In conclusion, despite meagre economic benefits arising from multinationals, I believe this is a negative trend due to the effect on small businesses and the environment. Governments must therefore attempt to carefully regulate and balance the introduction of international companies.
Answers
pervasiveness ubiquity
multinationals international companies
question doubt
relative merits how much value they actually have
negative on the whole bad overall
legitimate real, justified
those in favor of supporters
globalised world world where everyone is connected
international conglomerates big companies
wealth money
this is the result of the cause of this is
variety lots of different kinds
increased tax revenue more money from taxes
employment opportunities chances to get a job
most importantly more valuable
spread of expertise people learning more
producers of consumer electronics people who make phones, etc.
ranging from marketers including advertisers
factory workers people working in factories
graphic designers those who design images for publications and online
supply agents those who help in supplying, getting items
average wages normal salaries
in a given region in one specific area
directed back sent back to
local consumer economy the economy in the country
pick up learn
specialised skills useful abilities
utilize take advantage of
long-term over a long period of time
later pass on to others after that tell other people
nonetheless regardless
former point mentioned before
fast food chains KFC, McDonald’s, etc.
well-known brands famous companies
provide serious competition make it very difficult
uniform meals food all the same
limited nutritional value not healthy
addictive can’t stop eating
local populace people living there
turn a profit earn money
remain in operation stay in business
contribute add to
exploiting tasking advantage of
ship their products globally send items around the world
combined with in conjunction with
plastic packaging wrappers, boxes, etc.
far surpasses much more than
minor not major
meagre insignificant
arising from coming from
carefully regulate control well
balance keep equal
introduction entering the market
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:
pɜːˈveɪsɪvnəs
ˌmʌltɪˈnæʃənlz
ˈkwɛsʧən
ˈrɛlətɪv ˈmɛrɪts
ˈnɛgətɪv ɒn ðə həʊl
lɪˈʤɪtɪmɪt
ðəʊz ɪn ˈfeɪvər ɒv
ˌgləʊb(ə)laɪˈzd wɜːld
ˌɪntə(ː)ˈnæʃənl kənˈglɒmərɪts
wɛlθ
ðɪs ɪz ðə rɪˈzʌlt ɒv
vəˈraɪəti
ɪnˈkriːst tæks ˈrɛvɪnjuː
ɪmˈplɔɪmənt ˌɒpəˈtjuːnɪtiz
məʊst ɪmˈpɔːtəntli
sprɛd ɒv ˌɛkspɜːˈtiːz
prəˈdjuːsəz ɒv kənˈsjuːmər ɪlɛkˈtrɒnɪks
ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm ˈmɑːkɪtəz
ˈfæktəri ˈwɜːkəz
ˈgræfɪk dɪˈzaɪnəz
səˈplaɪ ˈeɪʤənts
ˈævərɪʤ ˈweɪʤɪz
ɪn ə ˈgɪvn ˈriːʤən
dɪˈrɛktɪd bæk
ˈləʊkəl kənˈsjuːmər i(ː)ˈkɒnəmi
pɪk ʌp
ˈspɛʃ(ə)laɪzd skɪlz
ˈjuːtɪˌlaɪz
ˈlɒŋtɜːm
ˈleɪtə pɑːs ɒn tuː ˈʌðəz
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ˈfɔːmə pɔɪnt
fɑːst fuːd ʧeɪnz
wɛl-nəʊn brændz
prəˈvaɪd ˈsɪərɪəs ˌkɒmpɪˈtɪʃən
ˈjuːnɪfɔːm miːlz
ˈlɪmɪtɪd nju(ː)ˈtrɪʃən(ə)l ˈvæljuː
əˈdɪktɪv
ˈləʊkəl ˈpɒpjʊləs
tɜːn ə ˈprɒfɪt
rɪˈmeɪn ɪn ˌɒpəˈreɪʃən
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)t
ɪksˈplɔɪtɪŋ
ʃɪp ðeə ˈprɒdʌkts ˈgləʊbəli
kəmˈbaɪnd wɪð
ˈplæstɪk ˈpækɪʤɪŋ
fɑː sɜːˈpɑːsɪz
ˈmaɪnə
ˈmiːgə
əˈraɪzɪŋ frɒm
ˈkeəfli ˈrɛgjʊleɪt
ˈbæləns
ˌɪntrəˈdʌkʃən
Vocabulary Practice
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
The p______________s of m________________s has led many to q_________n their r__________________s. In my opinion, their impact is n_______________________e despite l____________e economic advantages.
T________________f a g_________________d argue that i__________________________s bring w_________h to a country. T_____________________f a v___________y of related effects including i_____________________e, e__________________________________s, and, m__________________y, the s_________________e. A good example of this would be p______________________________s such as Apple. Apple provides jobs in countries all around the world r________________________s and f_____________________s to g___________________s and s________________s. All these employees receive salaries typically above the a_________________s i___________________________n, which is then d__________________k towards the l_______________________________y. Such workers are also likely to p___________________________________s that they can u_________e in the l____________m and l______________________________s.
N___________________s, multinationals are negative due to their effects on local businesses and the environment. A good example of the f________________t would be the rise of f___________________s globally. W______________________s such as McDonald’s and KFC are in hundreds of countries and p_________________________n to local restaurants. Their ability to offer cheap, u___________________s with l__________________________e that are very a_____________e hurt both the health of the l________________e and also make it harder for small restaurants to t_______________t and r___________________________n. Moreover, such large corporations c_____________e to climate change by e______________g the use of airplanes and trucks to s_____________________________y. C_________________h the p______________________g often employed by these companies, their impact on the environment f___________________s the m__________r lifestyle choices of individuals.
In conclusion, despite m___________e economic benefits a______________m multinationals, I believe this is a negative trend due to the effect on small businesses and the environment. Governments must therefore attempt to c_______________________e and b___________e the i___________________n of international companies.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:
Reading Practice
Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:
https://www.nytimes.com/2020/03/05/business/coronavirus-globalism.html
Speaking Practice
Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:
Work 1 (Model answer available on my Patreon)
- Do you work or are you a student?
- Do you like your current job?
- In the future, do you want to change jobs?
Writing Practice
Practice with the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:
In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?
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