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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer Essay: Plagiarism (Real Past IELTS Tests/Exams)
Plagiarism in academics has become a pressing problem in many countries today.
What are the causes of this problem?
What are some possible solutions?
Real Past IELTS Tests/Exams
Plagiarism has become a serious issue in academic circles in recent decades. The main causes of this center around the dissemination of information to countries with varying attitudes to intellectual property rights and the solutions are strict censures of plagiarised works.
In many countries, plagiarism is not considered an offence or treated very lightly. For example, students in Vietnam grow up in an environment where copyright is largely just for show. It is common practice for photocopy shops to print or copy entire books with no legal repercussions. In school, many students are instructed to memorise and reproduce the works of others and prohibited from coming up with their own ideas. The rise of Facebook, which hardly polices IP rights, has led to further lawlessness. Altogether, theft is culturally permitted if not encouraged. Countries around the world all have differing standards based on their history, culture, and legal frameworks.
The best solutions for plagiarism are to implement degrees of punishments. Those who outright copy and paste works and pass them off as their own for commercial purposes should be subject to full criminal and civil prosecution. This will limit the most extreme cases. Sharing and posting materials on the internet is a thornier issue because the perpetrators do not always receive direct financial benefit and can be difficult to track down. In these cases, it is the websites, such as Facebook, that must police members and initiate warnings and bans to repeat offenders.
In conclusion, the pertinent threat of plagiarism means both companies and countries must work in tandem to limit any potential damage. In the future, this issue will only become more difficult to extricate so it is advisable that preventive measures be put in place now.
Analysis
1. Plagiarism has become a serious issue in academic circles in recent decades. 2. The main causes of this center around the dissemination of information to countries with varying attitudes to intellectual property rights and the solutions are strict censures of plagiarised works.
- For your first sentence, just paraphrase what the whole topic is about – short and simple because it is not that important.
- Now write your opinion – you don’t have to include your main ideas but if you do it will help your cohesion and coherence score.
1. In many countries, plagiarism is not considered an offence or treated very lightly. 2. For example, students in Vietnam grow up in an environment where copyright is largely just for show. 3. It is common practice for photocopy shops to print or copy entire books with no legal repercussions. 4. In school, many students are instructed to memorise and reproduce the works of others and prohibited from coming up with their own ideas. 5. The rise of Facebook, which hardly polices IP rights, has led to further lawlessness. 6. Altogether, theft is culturally permitted if not encouraged. 7. Countries around the world all have differing standards based on their history, culture, and legal frameworks.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea. This question asks for the reasonS, plural, so try to include two related reasons.
- Begin your example right away – don’t waste any time.
- Continue to develop the same example.
- Try to pull out a second reason related to your example if you can.
- Keep developing the same example.
- The more specific, the better!
- I conclude the paragraph by making it more general – this is good to do if you wrote a very specific example like I did. (7 sentences is a bit long – aim for about 5.)
1. The best solutions for plagiarism are to implement degrees of punishments. 2. Those who outright copy and paste works and pass them off as their own for commercial purposes should be subject to full criminal and civil prosecution. 3. This will limit the most extreme cases. 4. Sharing and posting materials on the internet is a thornier issue because the perpetrators do not always receive direct financial benefit and can be difficult to track down. 5. In these cases, it is the websites, such as Facebook, that must police members and initiate warnings and bans to repeat offenders.
- Write a new, simple topic sentence with another main idea. This one also asks for more than 1 solution, so try to include a couple of related solutions.
- Don’t waste time – write specifically about your first solution.
- Develop it with at least one more sentence.
- Switch over to another solution.
- Develop that example as fully and specifically as possible.
1. In conclusion, the pertinent threat of plagiarism means both companies and countries must work in tandem to limit any potential damage. 2. In the future, this issue will only become more difficult to extricate so it is advisable that preventive measures be put in place now.
- Repeat your solutions or the cause. This sentence isn’t that important.
- Include an extra detail – this sentence is very important because some examiners will limit your task achievement score to band 7 without it!
Vocabulary
Try to figure out the words in bold below:
Plagiarism has become a serious issue in academic circles in recent decades. The main causes of this center around the dissemination of information to countries with varying attitudes to intellectual property rights and the solutions are strict censures of plagiarised works.
In many countries, plagiarism is not considered an offence or treated very lightly. For example, students in Vietnam grow up in an environment where copyright is largely just for show. It is common practice for photocopy shops to print or copy entire books with no legal repercussions. In school, many students are instructed to memorise and reproduce the works of others and prohibited from coming up with their own ideas. The rise of Facebook, which hardly polices IP rights, has led to further lawlessness. Altogether, theft is culturally permitted if not encouraged. Countries around the world all have differing standards based on their history, culture, and legal frameworks.
The best solutions for plagiarism are to implement degrees of punishments. Those who outright copy and paste works and pass them off as their own for commercial purposes should be subject to full criminal and civil prosecution. This will limit the most extreme cases. Sharing and posting materials on the internet is a thornier issue because the perpetrators do not always receive direct financial benefit and can be difficult to track down. In these cases, it is the websites, such as Facebook, that must police members and initiate warnings and bans to repeat offenders.
In conclusion, the pertinent threat of plagiarism means both companies and countries must work in tandem to limit any potential damage. In the future, this issue will only become more difficult to extricate so it is advisable that preventive measures be put in place now.
Answers
plagiarism stealing others work and pretending it is your own
serious issue important problem
center around relate to
dissemination spread
varying attitudes different opinions about
intellectual property rights copyright
strict censures severe disapproval
plagiarised works stolen writing
offence crime
treated very lightly not punished severely
copyright your ownership rights
largely just for show not actually enforced
common practice happens a lot
no legal repercussions get away with it
reproduce copy
works of others other people’s writing/words
prohibited not allowed
coming up with their own ideas think of their own concepts
hardly polices IP rights does not care about copyright
lawlessness no law
altogether taken as a whole
culturally permitted allowed in this society
if not encouraged actually kind of encouraged
differing standards not the same feelings towards
legal frameworks laws
implement put in place
outright copy and paste works brazenly steal
pass them off as their own pretend they wrote them
commercial purposes to make money for themselves
subject to full criminal and civil prosecution go to trial/court
most extreme cases very bad times
thornier complicated
perpetrators criminals
direct financial benefit actualy money from it
track down find
police verb for police/enforce
initiate warnings send out warning messages
repeat offenders those who do it repeatedly
pertinent threat pressing problem
work in tandem collaborate
potential damage possible hurt
extricate untangle
advisable good idea to
preventive measures methods to stop from happening
put in place implement
Pronunciation
ˈpleɪʤərɪz(ə)m
ˈsɪərɪəs ˈɪʃuː
ˈsɛntər əˈraʊnd
dɪˌsɛmɪˈneɪʃən
ˈveəriɪŋ ˈætɪtjuːdz
ˌɪntɪˈlɛktjʊəl ˈprɒpəti raɪts
strɪkt ˈsɛnʃəz
ˈpleɪʤəraɪzd wɜːks
əˈfɛns
ˈtriːtɪd ˈvɛri ˈlaɪtli
ˈkɒpɪraɪt
ˈlɑːʤli ʤʌst fɔː ʃəʊ
ˈkɒmən ˈpræktɪs
nəʊ ˈliːgəl ˌriːpɜːˈkʌʃənz
ˌriːprəˈdjuːs
wɜːks ɒv ˈʌðəz
prəˈhɪbɪtɪd
ˈkʌmɪŋ ʌp wɪð ðeər əʊn aɪˈdɪəz
ˈhɑːdli pəˈliːsɪz aɪ-piː raɪts
ˈlɔːlɪsnəs
ˌɔːltəˈgɛðə
ˈkʌlʧərəli pəˈmɪtɪd
ɪf nɒt ɪnˈkʌrɪʤd
ˈdɪfərɪŋ ˈstændədz
ˈliːgəl ˈfreɪmwɜːks
ˈɪmplɪmənt
ˈaʊtraɪt ˈkɒpi ænd peɪst wɜːks
pɑːs ðɛm ɒf æz ðeər əʊn
kəˈmɜːʃəl ˈpɜːpəsɪz
ˈsʌbʤɪkt tuː fʊl ˈkrɪmɪnl ænd ˈsɪvl ˌprɒsɪˈkjuːʃən
məʊst ɪksˈtriːm ˈkeɪsɪz
ˈθɔːnɪə
ˈpɜːpɪtreɪtəz
dɪˈrɛkt faɪˈnænʃəl ˈbɛnɪfɪt
træk daʊn
pəˈliːs
ɪˈnɪʃɪɪt ˈwɔːnɪŋz
rɪˈpiːt əˈfɛndəz
ˈpɜːtɪnənt θrɛt
wɜːk ɪn ˈtændəm
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl ˈdæmɪʤ
ˈɛkstrɪkeɪt
ədˈvaɪzəbl
prɪˈvɛntɪv ˈmɛʒəz
pʊt ɪn pleɪs
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Vocabulary Practice
Remember and fill in the blanks:
_____________ has become a _____________ in academic circles in recent decades. The main causes of this _____________ the _____________ of information to countries with _____________ to _____________ and the solutions are _____________ of _____________.
In many countries, plagiarism is not considered an _____________ or _____________. For example, students in Vietnam grow up in an environment where _____________ is _____________. It is _____________ for photocopy shops to print or copy entire books with _____________. In school, many students are instructed to memorise and _____________ the _____________ and _____________ from _____________. The rise of Facebook, which _____________, has led to further _____________. _____________, theft is _____________ _____________. Countries around the world all have _____________ based on their history, culture, and _____________.
The best solutions for plagiarism are to _____________ degrees of punishments. Those who _____________ and _____________ for _____________ should be _____________. This will limit the _____________. Sharing and posting materials on the internet is a _____________ issue because the _____________ do not always receive _____________ and can be difficult to _____________. In these cases, it is the websites, such as Facebook, that must _____________ members and _____________ and bans to _____________.
In conclusion, the _____________ of plagiarism means both companies and countries must _____________ to limit any _____________. In the future, this issue will only become more difficult to _____________ so it is _____________ that _____________ be _____________ now.
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