IELTS Essay: The Main Benefit of International Cooperation

by Dave | Oct 5, 2024 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of international cooperation.

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IELTS Essay: The Main Benefit of International Cooperation

Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many today argue that international collaboration mainly serves to benefit businesses while others feel there are greater advantages overall for the environment. I would side with the former viewpoint due to the concrete and tangible outcomes.

Proponents of the environmental benefits of international cooperation emphasize the global challenges now being met by collective action. Climate change, for instance, is a quintessential example of an issue transcending national borders. The 2015 Paris Agreement, which saw nearly 200 countries commit to limiting global temperature rise, illustrates how international cooperation tackles environmental crises. This agreement, borne out of multilateral negotiations, demonstrates how countries now work together to implement emission reduction targets, promote sustainable development, and support climate resilience efforts in vulnerable regions. These efforts along with various wildlife protection treaties, underscore the reality of cross-border efforts to conserve natural habitats and endangered species.

Conversely, the global economy is intricately linked through trade agreements, investment treaties, and multinational corporations. Free trade agreements, such as the North American Free Trade Agreement (NAFTA) and the European Union’s Single Market, demonstrate how countries collaborate to facilitate trade, reduce tariffs, and stimulate economic growth. These agreements benefit businesses by opening new markets, enhancing supply chain efficiencies, and fostering innovation. As a result, international business partnerships can drive technological and economic development. For instance, collaborations between tech giants and global firms enable the sharing of resources, knowledge, and technology, accelerating progress in various sectors, from information technology to renewable energy. Such partnerships illustrate how business interests have been a significant driver of international cooperation, with economic gains often translating into tangible improved living standards.

In conclusion, while international cooperation undoubtedly benefits both the environment and the business world, the latter, unfortunately, enjoys the greatest general advantages. Nonetheless, balancing economic interests with environmental stewardship is crucial for fostering a sustainable and equitable future.

Analysis

1. Many today argue that international collaboration mainly serves to benefit businesses while others feel there are greater advantages overall for the environment. 2. I would side with the former viewpoint due to the concrete and tangible outcomes.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Proponents of the environmental benefits of international cooperation emphasize the global challenges now being met by collective action. 2. Climate change, for instance, is a quintessential example of an issue transcending national borders. 3. The 2015 Paris Agreement, which saw nearly 200 countries commit to limiting global temperature rise, illustrates how international cooperation tackles environmental crises. 4. This agreement, borne out of multilateral negotiations, demonstrates how countries now work together to implement emission reduction targets, promote sustainable development, and support climate resilience efforts in vulnerable regions. 5. These efforts along with various wildlife protection treaties, underscore the reality of cross-border efforts to conserve natural habitats and endangered species.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.
5. Better to have more detail.

1. Conversely, the global economy is intricately linked through trade agreements, investment treaties, and multinational corporations. 2. Free trade agreements, such as the North American Free Trade Agreement (NAFTA) and the European Union’s Single Market, demonstrate how countries collaborate to facilitate trade, reduce tariffs, and stimulate economic growth. 3. These agreements benefit businesses by opening new markets, enhancing supply chain efficiencies, and fostering innovation. 4. As a result, international business partnerships can drive technological and economic development. For instance, collaborations between tech giants and global firms enable the sharing of resources, knowledge, and technology, accelerating progress in various sectors, from information technology to renewable energy. 5. Such partnerships illustrate how business interests have been a significant driver of international cooperation, with economic gains often translating into tangible improved living standards.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.

1. In conclusion, while international cooperation undoubtedly benefits both the environment and the business world, the latter, unfortunately, enjoys the greatest general advantages. 2. Nonetheless, balancing economic interests with environmental stewardship is crucial for fostering a sustainable and equitable future.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many today argue that international collaboration mainly serves to benefit businesses while others feel there are greater advantages overall for the environment. I would side with the former viewpoint due to the concrete and tangible outcomes.

Proponents of the environmental benefits of international cooperation emphasize the global challenges now being met by collective action. Climate change, for instance, is a quintessential example of an issue transcending national borders. The 2015 Paris Agreement, which saw nearly 200 countries commit to limiting global temperature rise, illustrates how international cooperation tackles environmental crises. This agreement, borne out of multilateral negotiations, demonstrates how countries now work together to implement emission reduction targets, promote sustainable development, and support climate resilience efforts in vulnerable regions. These efforts along with various wildlife protection treaties, underscore the reality of cross-border efforts to conserve natural habitats and endangered species.

Conversely, the global economy is intricately linked through trade agreements, investment treaties, and multinational corporations. Free trade agreements, such as the North American Free Trade Agreement (NAFTA) and the European Union’s Single Market, demonstrate how countries collaborate to facilitate trade, reduce tariffs, and stimulate economic growth. These agreements benefit businesses by opening new markets, enhancing supply chain efficiencies, and fostering innovation. As a result, international business partnerships can drive technological and economic development. For instance, collaborations between tech giants and global firms enable the sharing of resources, knowledge, and technology, accelerating progress in various sectors, from information technology to renewable energy. Such partnerships illustrate how business interests have been a significant driver of international cooperation, with economic gains often translating into tangible improved living standards.

In conclusion, while international cooperation undoubtedly benefits both the environment and the business world, the latter, unfortunately, enjoys the greatest general advantages. Nonetheless, balancing economic interests with environmental stewardship is crucial for fostering a sustainable and equitable future.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

1. International collaboration mainly serves to benefit businesses while others feel there are greater advantages overall for the environment.
   International collaboration primarily aims to benefit enterprises, while others perceive greater overall advantages for the environment.
2. I would side with the former viewpoint due to concrete and tangible outcomes.
   I lean toward the former perspective due to clear and measurable results.
3. Proponents of the environmental benefits of international cooperation emphasize global challenges now being met by collective action.
   Advocates of the ecological advantages of global cooperation highlight that collective action is now addressing worldwide challenges.
4. A quintessential example of an issue transcending national borders.
   A prime illustration of an issue that surpasses national boundaries.
5. Commit to limiting global temperature rise.
   Commit to restricting the increase in global temperatures.
6. Tackles environmental crises.
   Addresses environmental emergencies.
7. Borne out of multilateral negotiations.
   Arising from multilateral discussions.
8. Implement emission reduction targets.
   Establish emission reduction goals.
9. Promote sustainable development.
   Encourage sustainable growth.
10. Support climate resilience efforts in vulnerable regions.
    Aid climate resilience initiatives in at-risk areas.
11. Along with various wildlife protection treaties.
    In conjunction with various wildlife conservation agreements.
12. Underscore the reality of cross-border efforts to conserve natural habitats and endangered species.
    Highlight the truth of transnational efforts to protect natural environments and endangered species.
13. Conversely.
    On the other hand,
14. The global economy.
    The worldwide economy.
15. Intricately linked through trade agreements.
    Closely interconnected through trade agreements.
16. Investment treaties.
    Investment pacts.
17. Multinational corporations.
    Global enterprises.
18. Facilitate trade.
    Promote commerce.
19. Reduce tariffs.
    Lower tariffs.
20. Stimulate economic growth.
    Boost economic expansion.
21. Opening new markets.
    Opening fresh markets.
22. Enhancing supply chain efficiencies.
    Improving supply chain efficiency.
23. Fostering innovation.
    Encouraging innovation.
24. As a result.
    Consequently,
25. International business partnerships.
    Global business alliances.
26. Drive technological and economic development.
    Propel technological and economic advancement.
27. Tech giants.
    Technology giants.
28. Global firms.
    International companies.
29. Sharing of resources.
    Resource sharing.
30. Accelerating progress in various sectors.
    Speeding up progress across diverse sectors.
31. From information technology to renewable energy.
    From information technology to renewable energy.
32. Business interests.
    Business motivations.
33. Significant driver of international cooperation.
    A significant force behind international collaboration.
34. Economic gains often translating into tangible improved living standards.
    Economic benefits frequently lead to noticeable improvements in living standards.
35. Undoubtedly.
    Undeniably,
36. The latter.
    The latter perspective.
37. Unfortunately.
    Regrettably,
38. Enjoys the greatest general advantages.
    Reaps the most substantial overall benefits.
39. Nonetheless.
    Nevertheless,
40. Balancing economic interests with environmental stewardship is crucial for fostering a sustainable and equitable future.
    Balancing economic goals with environmental responsibility is vital for cultivating a sustainable and just future.

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˌɪntəˈnæʃᵊnᵊl kəˌlæbəˈreɪʃᵊn ˈmeɪnli sɜːvz tuː ˈbɛnɪfɪt ˈbɪznɪsɪz waɪl ˈʌðəz fiːl ðeə

ˈɡreɪtər ədˈvɑːntɪʤɪz ˌəʊvəˈrɔːl fɔː ði ɪnˈvaɪrᵊnmənt

aɪ wʊd saɪd wɪð ðə ˈfɔːmə ˈvjuːpɔɪnt djuː tuː

ˈkɒŋkriːt ænd ˈtænʤəbᵊl ˈaʊtkʌmz

prəˈpəʊnənts ɒv ði ɪnˌvaɪrᵊnˈmɛntᵊl ˈbɛnɪfɪts ɒv ˌɪntəˈnæʃᵊnᵊl kəʊˌɒpᵊrˈeɪʃᵊn ˈɛmfəsaɪz

ˈɡləʊbᵊl ˈʧælɪnʤɪz naʊ ˈbiːɪŋ mɛt baɪ kəˈlɛktɪv ˈækʃᵊn

ə ˌkwɪntɪˈsɛnʃᵊl ɪɡˈzɑːmpᵊl ɒv

ˈɪʃuː trænˈsɛndɪŋ ˈnæʃᵊnᵊl ˈbɔːdəz

kəˈmɪt tuː ˈlɪmɪtɪŋ ˈɡləʊbᵊl ˈtɛmprəʧə raɪz

ˈtækᵊlz ɪnˌvaɪrᵊnˈmɛntᵊl ˈkraɪsiːz

bɔːn aʊt ɒv ˌmʌltɪˈlætᵊrᵊl nəˌɡəʊʃiˈeɪʃᵊnz

ˈɪmplɪmənt ɪˈmɪʃᵊn rɪˈdʌkʃᵊn ˈtɑːɡɪts

prəˈməʊt səˈsteɪnəbᵊl dɪˈvɛləpmənt

səˈpɔːt ˈklaɪmət rɪˈzɪliəns ˈɛfəts ɪn ˈvʌlnᵊrəbᵊl ˈriːʤᵊnz

əˈlɒŋ wɪð ˈveəriəs ˈwaɪldlaɪf prəˈtɛkʃᵊn ˈtriːtiz

ˌʌndəˈskɔː ðə riˈæləti ɒv krɒs-ˈbɔːdər ˈɛfəts tuː kənˈsɜːv ˈnæʧᵊrᵊl ˈhæbɪtæts ænd ɪnˈdeɪnʤəd ˈspiːʃiːz

ˈkɒnvɜːsli

ðə ˈɡləʊbᵊl ɪˈkɒnəmi

ˈɪntrɪkɪtli lɪŋkt θruː treɪd əˈɡriːmənts

ɪnˈvɛstmənt ˈtriːtiz

ˌmʌltɪˈnæʃᵊnᵊl ˌkɔːpᵊrˈeɪʃᵊnz

fəˈsɪlɪteɪt treɪd

rɪˈdjuːs ˈtærɪfs

ˈstɪmjəleɪt ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ɡrəʊθ

ˈəʊpᵊnɪŋ njuː ˈmɑːkɪts

ɪnˈhɑːnsɪŋ səˈplaɪ ʧeɪn ɪˈfɪʃᵊnsiz

ˈfɒstərɪŋ ˌɪnəˈveɪʃᵊn

æz ə rɪˈzʌlt

ˌɪntəˈnæʃᵊnᵊl ˈbɪznɪs ˈpɑːtnəʃɪps

draɪv ˌtɛknəˈlɒʤɪkᵊl ænd ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk dɪˈvɛləpmənt

tɛk ˈʤaɪᵊnts

ˈɡləʊbᵊl fɜːmz

ˈʃeərɪŋ ɒv rɪˈzɔːsɪz

əkˈsɛləreɪtɪŋ ˈprəʊɡrɛs ɪn ˈveəriəs ˈsɛktəz

frɒm ˌɪnfəˈmeɪʃᵊn tɛkˈnɒləʤi tuː rɪˈnjuːəbᵊl ˈɛnəʤi

ˈbɪznɪs ˈɪntrɛsts

sɪɡˈnɪfɪkᵊnt ˈdraɪvər ɒv ˌɪntəˈnæʃᵊnᵊl kəʊˌɒpᵊrˈeɪʃᵊn

ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ɡeɪnz ˈɒfᵊn trænzˈleɪtɪŋ ˈɪntuː ˈtænʤəbᵊl ɪmˈpruːvd ˈlɪvɪŋ ˈstændədz

ʌnˈdaʊtɪdli

ðə ˈlætə

ʌnˈfɔːʧᵊnətli

ɪnˈʤɔɪz ðə ˈɡreɪtɪst ˈʤɛnᵊrᵊl ədˈvɑːntɪʤɪz

ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs

ˈbælᵊnsɪŋ ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˈɪntrɛsts wɪð ɪnˌvaɪrᵊnˈmɛntᵊl ˈstjuːədʃɪp ɪz ˈkruːʃᵊl fɔː ˈfɒstərɪŋ

səˈsteɪnəbᵊl ænd ˈɛkwɪtəbᵊl ˈfjuːʧə

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many today argue that i________________________________________s to benefit businesses while others feel there are g_________________________________________________t. I__________________________________________o the c_____________________________________s.

P________________________________________________________________________________e the g_____________________________________________________________n. Climate change, for instance, is a_________________________f an i___________________________________s. The 2015 Paris Agreement, which saw nearly 200 countries c__________________________________e, illustrates how international cooperation t______________________s. This agreement, b__________________________________s, demonstrates how countries now work together to i__________________________________s, p_________________________t, and s___________________________________________________s. These efforts a_______________________________s, u_______________________________________________________________________________s.

C____________y, t__________________y is i__________________________________________s, i____________________s, and m______________________________s. Free trade agreements, such as the North American Free Trade Agreement (NAFTA) and the European Union’s Single Market, demonstrate how countries collaborate to f________________e, r_______________s, and s______________________________h. These agreements benefit businesses by o__________________s, e_______________________________s, and f__________________n. A___________t, i__________________________________s can d____________________________________________t. For instance, collaborations between t________s and g__________s enable the sh_____________s, knowledge, and technology, a______________________________________s, f_______________________________________y. Such partnerships illustrate how b_______________s have been a s________________________________________________________n, with e________________________________________________s.

In conclusion, while international cooperation u___________y benefits both the environment and the business world, t________r, u_____________y, e______________________________________s. N_________s, b____________________________________________________________g a s___________________________e.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.un.org/en/whyitmatters/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Working With People (IELTS Speaking Part 3)

Question 1: What kinds of people do you like to work with?

Question 2: What matters most about a colleague’s personality?

Question 3: Which one is more important to you at work, development in work related skills or the recognition from your supervisors?

Question 4: Do you think managers can be friends with their subordinates?

Question 5: Why should children be kind to their classmates?

Question 6: Can children choose their desk mate?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related topic:

Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS Essay: Choosing a Job

by Dave | Sep 6, 2024 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of choosing a job.

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IELTS Essay: Choosing a Job

Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want, but other people think they should be more realistic and think more about their future.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Today, the debate over whether young people should follow their passion when selecting a career or adopt a more pragmatic approach is increasingly pertinent. In my opinion, it is a wiser option to select an occupation that is most likely to provide for the future.

Proponents of pursuing one’s passion argue that job satisfaction is crucial for long-term career success. When young individuals choose careers based on their interests, they are likely to experience higher levels of motivation and commitment. Consider the case of Steve Jobs, who famously dropped out of college to pursue his interest in computing. His passion for technology led to the creation of Apple Inc., demonstrating how following one’s passion can lead to extraordinary achievements. As one grows older, jobs that align with personal interests can contribute to a more fulfilling life. A study conducted by the American Psychological Association revealed that individuals who work in fields they are passionate about report higher levels of job satisfaction and overall well-being compared to those in less satisfying roles.

Critics of the passion-driven approach highlight that not all interests are financially viable or offer long-term stability. For example, a young person with a passion for arts may find it challenging to secure a stable income, especially in highly competitive fields. In contrast, pursuing a career in fields like engineering or medicine, while possibly less exciting to some, often provides greater job security and financial stability. According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics, careers in engineering are projected to grow substantially over the next decade, offering quality job opportunities and security. Similarly, a passion for environmental science might lead to additional qualifications in data analysis to increase employability and career prospects. Therefore, a pragmatic approach recognizes economic factors and the long-term viability of a chosen career path.

In conclusion, while pursuing a career based on personal passion has its advantages, a realistic approach that considers market trends and financial stability better ensures long-term career success and security. Therefore, young people should prioritize practical considerations when choosing their careers, even if it means incorporating their interests in a more balanced manner.

Analysis

1. Today, the debate over whether young people should follow their passion when selecting a career or adopt a more pragmatic approach is increasingly pertinent. 2. In my opinion, it is a wiser option to select an occupation that is most likely to provide for the future.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Proponents of pursuing one’s passion argue that job satisfaction is crucial for long-term career success. 2. When young individuals choose careers based on their interests, they are likely to experience higher levels of motivation and commitment. 3. Consider the case of Steve Jobs, who famously dropped out of college to pursue his interest in computing. 4. His passion for technology led to the creation of Apple Inc., demonstrating how following one’s passion can lead to extraordinary achievements. 5. As one grows older, jobs that align with personal interests can contribute to a more fulfilling life. 6. A study conducted by the American Psychological Association revealed that individuals who work in fields they are passionate about report higher levels of job satisfaction and overall well-being compared to those in less satisfying roles.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.
5. Better to have more detail.
6. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. Critics of the passion-driven approach highlight that not all interests are financially viable or offer long-term stability. 2. For example, a young person with a passion for arts may find it challenging to secure a stable income, especially in highly competitive fields. 3. In contrast, pursuing a career in fields like engineering or medicine, while possibly less exciting to some, often provides greater job security and financial stability. 4. According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics, careers in engineering are projected to grow substantially over the next decade, offering quality job opportunities and security. 5. Similarly, a passion for environmental science might lead to additional qualifications in data analysis to increase employability and career prospects. 6. Therefore, a pragmatic approach recognizes economic factors and the long-term viability of a chosen career path.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.
6. Vary long and short sentences.

1. In conclusion, while pursuing a career based on personal passion has its advantages, a realistic approach that considers market trends and financial stability better ensures long-term career success and security. 2. Therefore, young people should prioritize practical considerations when choosing their careers, even if it means incorporating their interests in a more balanced manner.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Today, the debate over whether young people should follow their passion when selecting a career or adopt a more pragmatic approach is increasingly pertinent. In my opinion, it is a wiser option to select an occupation that is most likely to provide for the future.

Proponents of pursuing one’s passion argue that job satisfaction is crucial for long-term career success. When young individuals choose careers based on their interests, they are likely to experience higher levels of motivation and commitment. Consider the case of Steve Jobs, who famously dropped out of college to pursue his interest in computing. His passion for technology led to the creation of Apple Inc., demonstrating how following one’s passion can lead to extraordinary achievements. As one grows older, jobs that align with personal interests can contribute to a more fulfilling life. A study conducted by the American Psychological Association revealed that individuals who work in fields they are passionate about report higher levels of job satisfaction and overall well-being compared to those in less satisfying roles.

Critics of the passion-driven approach highlight that not all interests are financially viable or offer long-term stability. For example, a young person with a passion for arts may find it challenging to secure a stable income, especially in highly competitive fields. In contrast, pursuing a career in fields like engineering or medicine, while possibly less exciting to some, often provides greater job security and financial stability. According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics, careers in engineering are projected to grow substantially over the next decade, offering quality job opportunities and security. Similarly, a passion for environmental science might lead to additional qualifications in data analysis to increase employability and career prospects. Therefore, a pragmatic approach recognizes economic factors and the long-term viability of a chosen career path.

In conclusion, while pursuing a career based on personal passion has its advantages, a realistic approach that considers market trends and financial stability better ensures long-term career success and security. Therefore, young people should prioritize practical considerations when choosing their careers, even if it means incorporating their interests in a more balanced manner.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

Certainly! Here are the synonymous phrases with the original words included:

1. The debate over whether

• The discussion regarding whether

1. Follow their passion

• Follow their interests

1. Selecting a career

• Choosing a profession

1. Adopt a more pragmatic approach

• Embrace a more realistic strategy

1. Increasingly pertinent

• Becoming increasingly relevant

1. A wiser option to

• A more prudent choice for

1. Provide for the future

• Plan for the future

1. Proponents of

• Advocates of

1. Crucial for long-term career success

• Essential for lasting career achievement

1. Based on
   • Founded on
2. Higher levels of motivation and commitment
   • Greater degrees of enthusiasm and dedication
3. Consider the case of
   • Examine the example of
4. Dropped out of college
   • Left college
5. Computing
   • Information technology
6. Led to the creation of
   • Resulted in the development of
7. Lead to extraordinary achievements
   • Lead to remarkable accomplishments
8. Align with personal interests
   • Match personal passions
9. Fields
   • Sectors
10. Report higher levels of job satisfaction
    • Report higher levels of job contentment
11. Overall well-being compared to
    • General well-being in comparison to
12. Less satisfying roles
    • Less fulfilling positions
13. Critics of the passion-driven approach highlight
    • Opponents of the passion-driven strategy emphasize
14. Financially viable
    • Financially feasible
15. Offer long-term stability
    • Provide enduring security
16. Find it challenging to secure a stable income
    • Struggle to obtain a stable income
17. Highly competitive fields
    • Highly competitive industries
18. In contrast
    • Conversely
19. Possibly less exciting
    • Potentially less stimulating
20. Job security and financial stability
    • Employment security and financial consistency
21. According to
    • As stated by
22. Projected to grow substantially over the next decade
    • Expected to expand significantly over the next ten years
23. Similarly
    • Likewise
24. Qualifications
    • Credentials
25. Data analysis
    • Statistical analysis
26. Employability
    • Job marketability
27. Career prospects
    • Career opportunities
28. Recognizes economic factors and the long-term viability of a chosen career path
    • Considers financial aspects and the future sustainability of a career choice
29. Pursuing a career based on personal passion
    • Choosing a profession based on personal passion
30. A realistic approach
    • A practical approach
31. Market trends
    • Industry trends
32. Financial stability better ensures long-term career success and security
    • Financial security more effectively guarantees long-term career success and stability
33. Prioritize practical considerations
    • Emphasize practical factors
34. Incorporating
    • Integrating
35. A more balanced manner
    • A more nuanced approach

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ðə dɪˈbeɪt ˈəʊvə ˈwɛðə

ˈfɒləʊ ðeə ˈpæʃᵊn

sɪˈlɛktɪŋ ə kəˈrɪə

əˈdɒpt ə mɔː præɡˈmætɪk əˈprəʊʧ

ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˈpɜːtɪnənt

ə ˈwaɪzər ˈɒpʃᵊn tuː

prəˈvaɪd fɔː ðə ˈfjuːʧə

prəˈpəʊnənts ɒv

ˈkruːʃᵊl fɔː ˈlɒŋtɜːm kəˈrɪə səkˈsɛs

beɪst ɒn

ˈhaɪə ˈlɛvᵊlz ɒv ˌməʊtɪˈveɪʃᵊn ænd kəˈmɪtmənt

kənˈsɪdə ðə keɪs ɒv

drɒpt aʊt ɒv ˈkɒlɪʤ

kəmˈpjuːtɪŋ

lɛd tuː ðə kriˈeɪʃᵊn ɒv

liːd tuː ɪkˈstrɔːdᵊnᵊri əˈʧiːvmənts

əˈlaɪn wɪð ˈpɜːsᵊnᵊl ˈɪntrɛsts

fiːldz

rɪˈpɔːt ˈhaɪə ˈlɛvᵊlz ɒv ʤɒb ˌsætɪsˈfækʃᵊn

ˌəʊvəˈrɔːl ˌwɛlˈbiːɪŋ kəmˈpeəd tuː

lɛs ˈsætɪsfaɪɪŋ rəʊlz

ˈkrɪtɪks ɒv ðə ˈpæʃᵊn-ˈdrɪvᵊn əˈprəʊʧ ˈhaɪlaɪt

faɪˈnænʃᵊli ˈvaɪəbᵊl

ˈɒfə ˈlɒŋtɜːm stəˈbɪləti

faɪnd ɪt ˈʧælɪnʤɪŋ tuː sɪˈkjʊər ə ˈsteɪbᵊl ˈɪnkʌm

ˈhaɪli kəmˈpɛtɪtɪv fiːldz

ɪn ˈkɒntrɑːst

ˈpɒsəbli lɛs ɪkˈsaɪtɪŋ

ʤɒb sɪˈkjʊərəti ænd faɪˈnænʃᵊl stəˈbɪləti

əˈkɔːdɪŋ tuː

prəˈʤɛktɪd tuː ɡrəʊ səbˈstænʃᵊli ˈəʊvə ðə nɛkst ˈdɛkeɪd

ˈsɪmɪləli

ˌkwɒlɪfɪˈkeɪʃᵊnz

ˈdeɪtə əˈnæləsɪs

ɪmˌplɔɪəˈbɪləti

kəˈrɪə ˈprɒspɛkts

ˈrɛkəɡnaɪzɪz ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˈfæktəz ænd ðə ˈlɒŋtɜːm ˌvaɪəˈbɪləti ɒv ə ˈʧəʊzᵊn kəˈrɪə pɑːθ

pəˈsjuːɪŋ ə kəˈrɪə beɪst ɒn ˈpɜːsᵊnᵊl ˈpæʃᵊn

ə ˌrɪəˈlɪstɪk əˈprəʊʧ

ˈmɑːkɪt trɛndz

faɪˈnænʃᵊl stəˈbɪləti ˈbɛtər ɪnˈʃɔːz ˈlɒŋtɜːm kəˈrɪə səkˈsɛs ænd sɪˈkjʊərəti

praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz ˈpræktɪkᵊl kənˌsɪdəˈreɪʃᵊnz

ɪnˈkɔːpᵊreɪtɪŋ

ə mɔː ˈbælᵊnst ˈmænə

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Today, t_________________________r young people should f______________________n when s___________________r or a___________________________________h is i_____________________t. In my opinion, it is a______________________o select an occupation that is most likely to p________________e.

P________________f pursuing one’s passion argue that job satisfaction is c_______________________________s. When young individuals choose careers b________n their interests, they are likely to experience h____________________________________t. C_____________________f Steve Jobs, who famously d_______________e to pursue his interest in c__________. His passion for technology l______________________f Apple Inc., demonstrating how following one’s passion can l__________________________________-s. As one grows older, jobs that a________________________s can contribute to a more fulfilling life. A study conducted by the American Psychological Association revealed that individuals who work in f_____s they are passionate about r________________________________-n and o________________________o those in l__________________s.

C___________________________________________t that not all interests are f______________e or o___________________y. For example, a young person with a passion for arts may f_________________________________________e, especially in h_________________s. I_________-t, pursuing a career in fields like engineering or medicine, while p__________________g to some, often provides greater j_________________________________y. A__________o the Bureau of Labor Statistics, careers in engineering are p_______________________________________________e, offering quality job opportunities and security. S__________y, a passion for environmental science might lead to additional q_____________s in d________________s to increase e____________y and c_____________________s. Therefore, a pragmatic approach r________________________________________________________________________________h.

In conclusion, while p_____________________________________n has its advantages, a______________________h that considers m________________s and f______________________________________________y. Therefore, young people should p_________________________s when choosing their careers, even if it means i____________g their interests in a_______________________r.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.rd.com/list/dangerous-jobs-around-world/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work

Do you like your job?

What do you find most interesting about your work/job?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

Some people say that individuals should change jobs during their working life often while others believe that doing the same job has advantages to individuals, companies, and society.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS Essay: Financial Matters

by Dave | Aug 21, 2024 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of financial matters.

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IELTS Essay: Financial Matters

In numerous nations, there is a growing trend for individuals to frequently discuss financial matters, such as their earnings or expenditures, in everyday conversation.

What are the reasons behind this phenomenon?

Is it advantageous or detrimental?

There is an increasing tendency for individuals in the modern world to openly discuss their finances in daily conversation. In my opinion, this is a result of a general lack of self-awareness and is decidedly negative given the opportunity cost it engenders.

The primary reason many people today are prone to talk about their financial dealings originates in society generally. In the past, a sense of modesty or concern for decorum might have compelled reticence. Today, some of the most widely discussed topics in the media, online, in film, and in literature concern cryptocurrencies, the real estate market, stock equities, the price of gold, and other investments. A person discussing these matters is likely only interested in subtle boasting or venting frustrations without awareness of the emotions or engagement of their interlocutor. The result over time has been that many people have developed a shameless habit.

In my view, discussion finances often precludes a number of more worthwhile topics of conversation. Since the majority of useful financial research can be conducted online or done in professional settings, there are more pressing areas that should be discussed in daily life. For example, two friends having a conversation at a cafe would derive greater value from telling stories, joking with one another, or delving into a more serious topic related to politics, the arts, or psychology. Such discussions are likely to develop their understanding of the world and their emotional intelligence. Discussion of money, on the other hand, wastes valuable time and energy for little concrete outcome.

In conclusion, the inclination to speak of one’s personal finances stems from a fundamentally modern self-indulgence and often prevents the discussion of more enjoyable or meaningful topics. Naturally, these generalizations do not apply to all individuals.

Analysis

1. There is an increasing tendency for individuals in the modern world to openly discuss their finances in daily conversation. 2. In my opinion, this is a result of a general lack of self-awareness and is decidedly negative given the opportunity cost it engenders.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. The primary reason many people today are prone to talk about their financial dealings originates in society generally. 2. In the past, a sense of modesty or concern for decorum might have compelled reticence. 3. Today, some of the most widely discussed topics in the media, online, in film, and in literature concern cryptocurrencies, the real estate market, stock equities, the price of gold, and other investments. 4. A person discussing these matters is likely only interested in subtle boasting or venting frustrations without awareness of the emotions or engagement of their interlocutor. 5. The result over time has been that many people have developed a shameless habit.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.
5. Better to have more detail.

1. In my view, discussion finances often precludes a number of more worthwhile topics of conversation. 2. Since the majority of useful financial research can be conducted online or done in professional settings, there are more pressing areas that should be discussed in daily life. 3. For example, two friends having a conversation at a cafe would derive greater value from telling stories, joking with one another, or delving into a more serious topic related to politics, the arts, or psychology. 4. Such discussions are likely to develop their understanding of the world and their emotional intelligence. 5. Discussion of money, on the other hand, wastes valuable time and energy for little concrete outcome.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.

1. In conclusion, the inclination to speak of one’s personal finances stems from a fundamentally modern self-indulgence and often prevents the discussion of more enjoyable or meaningful topics. 2. Naturally, these generalizations do not apply to all individuals.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

There is an increasing tendency for individuals in the modern world to openly discuss their finances in daily conversation. In my opinion, this is a result of a general lack of self-awareness and is decidedly negative given the opportunity cost it engenders.

The primary reason many people today are prone to talk about their financial dealings originates in society generally. In the past, a sense of modesty or concern for decorum might have compelled reticence. Today, some of the most widely discussed topics in the media, online, in film, and in literature concern cryptocurrencies, the real estate market, stock equities, the price of gold, and other investments. A person discussing these matters is likely only interested in subtle boasting or venting frustrations without awareness of the emotions or engagement of their interlocutor. The result over time has been that many people have developed a shameless habit.

In my view, discussion finances often precludes a number of more worthwhile topics of conversation. Since the majority of useful financial research can be conducted online or done in professional settings, there are more pressing areas that should be discussed in daily life. For example, two friends having a conversation at a cafe would derive greater value from telling stories, joking with one another, or delving into a more serious topic related to politics, the arts, or psychology. Such discussions are likely to develop their understanding of the world and their emotional intelligence. Discussion of money, on the other hand, wastes valuable time and energy for little concrete outcome.

In conclusion, the inclination to speak of one’s personal finances stems from a fundamentally modern self-indulgence and often prevents the discussion of more enjoyable or meaningful topics. Naturally, these generalizations do not apply to all individuals.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

Here are synonyms for each line:

1. There is an increasing tendency for

• There is a growing inclination for

1. in the modern world

• in contemporary society

1. openly discuss their finances in daily conversation

• candidly talk about their financial matters in everyday discussions

1. this is a result of

• this is due to

1. general lack of self-awareness

• overall deficiency in self-awareness

1. decidedly negative given the opportunity cost it engenders

• distinctly disadvantageous considering the opportunity cost it creates

1. prone

• inclined

1. financial dealings originates in society generally

• financial transactions stem from societal norms

1. a sense of modesty

• an air of humility

1. concern for decorum
   • regard for propriety
2. compelled reticence
   • enforced restraint
3. most widely discussed topics
   • most frequently talked-about subjects
4. media
   • press
5. cryptocurrencies
   • digital currencies
6. real estate market
   • property market
7. stock equities
   • shares
8. investments
   • financial placements
9. matters
   • issues
10. subtle boasting
    • understated bragging
11. venting frustrations
    • expressing discontent
12. awareness
    • consciousness
13. engagement
    • involvement
14. interlocutor
    • conversation partner
15. The result over time has been that
    • Consequently, over time
16. developed a shameless habit
    • acquired an unabashed practice
17. precludes
    • prevents
18. worthwhile
    • valuable
19. the majority of
    • most
20. financial research
    • economic analysis
21. conducted
    • performed
22. professional settings
    • work environments
23. pressing areas
    • urgent issues
24. derive greater value from
    • gain more benefit from
25. delving into
    • exploring
26. develop their understanding of the world
    • enhance their comprehension of the world
27. emotional intelligence
    • emotional acuity
28. wastes valuable time and energy for little concrete outcome
    • squanders precious time and effort with minimal tangible results
29. inclination
    • tendency
30. stems from a fundamentally modern self-indulgence
    • arises from a fundamentally contemporary self-gratification
31. prevents
    • hinders
32. meaningful
    • significant
33. Naturally
    • Obviously
34. generalizations
    • broad statements

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ðeər ɪz ən ɪnˈkriːsɪŋ ˈtɛndənsi fɔː

ɪn ðə ˈmɒdᵊn wɜːld

ˈəʊpᵊnli dɪˈskʌs ðeə ˈfaɪnænsɪz ɪn ˈdeɪli ˌkɒnvəˈseɪʃᵊn

ðɪs ɪz ə rɪˈzʌlt ɒv

ˈʤɛnᵊrᵊl læk ɒv sɛlf-əˈweənəs

dɪˈsaɪdɪdli ˈnɛɡətɪv ˈɡɪvᵊn ði ˌɒpəˈʧuːnəti kɒst ɪt ɪnˈʤɛndəz

prəʊn

faɪˈnænʃᵊl ˈdiːlɪŋz əˈrɪʤɪneɪts ɪn səˈsaɪəti ˈʤɛnᵊrᵊli

ə sɛns ɒv ˈmɒdɪsti

kənˈsɜːn fɔː dɪˈkɔːrəm

kəmˈpɛld ˈrɛtɪsᵊns

məʊst ˈwaɪdli dɪˈskʌst ˈtɒpɪks

ˈmiːdiə

ˈkrɪptəʊˌkʌrᵊnsiz

rɪəl ɪˈsteɪt ˈmɑːkɪt

stɒk ˈɛkwɪtiz

ɪnˈvɛstmənts

ˈmætəz

ˈsʌtᵊl ˈbəʊstɪŋ

ˈvɛntɪŋ frʌsˈtreɪʃᵊnz

əˈweənəs

ɪnˈɡeɪʤmənt

ˌɪntəˈlɒkjətə

ðə rɪˈzʌlt ˈəʊvə taɪm hæz biːn ðæt

dɪˈvɛləpt ə ˈʃeɪmləs ˈhæbɪt

prɪˈkluːdz

ˌwɜːθˈwaɪl

ðə məˈʤɒrəti ɒv

faɪˈnænʃᵊl rɪˈsɜːʧ

kənˈdʌktɪd

prəˈfɛʃᵊnᵊl ˈsɛtɪŋz

ˈprɛsɪŋ ˈeəriəz

dɪˈraɪv ˈɡreɪtə ˈvæljuː frɒm

ˈdɛlvɪŋ ˈɪntuː

dɪˈvɛləp ðeər ˌʌndəˈstændɪŋ ɒv ðə wɜːld

ɪˈməʊʃᵊnᵊl ɪnˈtɛlɪʤᵊns

weɪsts ˈvæljəbᵊl taɪm ænd ˈɛnəʤi fɔː ˈlɪtᵊl ˈkɒŋkriːt ˈaʊtkʌm

ˌɪnklɪˈneɪʃᵊn

stɛmz frɒm ə ˌfʌndəˈmɛntᵊli ˈmɒdᵊn ˌsɛlfɪnˈdʌlʤᵊns

prɪˈvɛnts

ˈmiːnɪŋfᵊl

ˈnæʧᵊrᵊli

ˌʤɛnᵊrᵊlaɪˈzeɪʃᵊnz

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

T___________________________r individuals i_________________d to o_____________________________________________n. In my opinion, t______________________f a g__________________________s and is d______________________________________________s.

The primary reason many people today are p__e to talk about their f______________s o____________________________y. In the past, a__________________________y or c________________m might have c_______________e. Today, some of the m_________________________s in the m_____a, online, in film, and in literature concern c______________________s, the r________________________t, s____________s, the price of gold, and other i___________s. A person discussing these m_______s is likely only interested in s__________g or v_________________s without a______________s of the emotions or e____________t of their i_____________r. T______________________________t many people have d_______________________t.

In my view, discussion finances often p_________s a number of more w____________e topics of conversation. Since t_________________f useful f______________h can be c__________d online or done in p______________s, there are more p____________s that should be discussed in daily life. For example, two friends having a conversation at a cafe would d_________________________m telling stories, joking with one another, or d___________o a more serious topic related to politics, the arts, or psychology. Such discussions are likely to d________________________________________d and their e____________________e. Discussion of money, on the other hand, w_____________________________________________________e.

In conclusion, the i____________n to speak of one’s personal finances s________________________________________e and often p_________s the discussion of more enjoyable or m__________l topics. N___________y, these g________________s do not apply to all individuals.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

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https://www.bogleheads.org/#:~:text=Bogleheads.org%20%E2%80%93%20Investing%20advice%20inspired%20by%20John%20Bogle&text=The%20Bogleheads%C2%AE%20emphasize%20starting,plan%20regardless%20of%20market%20conditions.

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work-life balance (IELTS Speaking Part 3)

Question 1: What kinds of jobs do young people not want to do in your country?

Question 2: Who is best at advising young people about choosing a job: teachers or parents?

Question 3: Is money always the most important thing when choosing a job?

Question 4: Do you agree that most people nowadays are under pressure to work longer hours and take less holiday?

Question 5: What is the impact on society of people having a poor work-life balance?

Question 6: Could you recommend some effective strategies for governments and employers to ensure people have a good work-life balance?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?