IELTS Essay: Satellites

by Dave | Jan 10, 2025 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of satellites and space debris.

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IELTS Essay: Satellites

The increasing frequency of satellite launches and space debris is becoming a threat to the Earth.

What are the main causes of this phenomenon?

What measures can be taken to address the issue?

The growing frequency of satellite launches and the resulting increase in space debris is a pressing issue that has become a major concern for both scientists and policymakers. In my opinion, the primary causes of this phenomenon concern modern technological demands, and there are governmental measures that can be taken to mitigate the issue.

The origins of the increase in satellite launches are significant advancements in technology and a growing demand for global connectivity. Technological progress has reduced the cost of satellite launches, leading to an explosion in the number of satellites sent into orbit. For example, companies like SpaceX and Amazon have made plans to launch constellations of thousands of satellites into low Earth orbit to provide global internet coverage. As a result, this increase in the number of satellites in orbit has drastically contributed to the rise in space debris. The collisions between satellites and space junk further exacerbate the situation, generating even more debris, all of which is a result of the demand on Earth for more convenient internet access.

To tackle the growing threat posed by space debris, several measures must be taken at national and international levels. First and foremost, governments and space agencies must impose stricter regulations on the disposal of defunct satellites and debris. One potential solution is to require satellite operators to include de-orbiting mechanisms in their designs. For example, the European Space Agency Recently  launched a mission called “ClearSpace-1,” which aims to demonstrate the capability of removing space debris by capturing and de-orbiting defunct satellites using a robotic arm. In addition to the European Space Agency’s initiative, many nations are collaborating on creating spacecraft that can capture and remove space junk. These efforts, if scaled up and integrated into global space policy, could significantly help in clearing up space debris, safeguarding both satellites and future space missions.

In conclusion, the main causes of more satellites and debris in space include technological advances and to address these challenges, strict state management must be prioritized. By taking such measures seriously, one can ensure that space remains a safe and sustainable environment for future generations.

Analysis

1. The growing frequency of satellite launches and the resulting increase in space debris is a pressing issue that has become a major concern for both scientists and policymakers. 2. In my opinion, the primary causes of this phenomenon concern modern technological demands, and there are governmental measures that can be taken to mitigate the issue.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. The origins of the increase in satellite launches are significant advancements in technology and a growing demand for global connectivity. 2. Technological progress has reduced the cost of satellite launches, leading to an explosion in the number of satellites sent into orbit. 3. For example, companies like SpaceX and Amazon have made plans to launch constellations of thousands of satellites into low Earth orbit to provide global internet coverage. 4. As a result, this increase in the number of satellites in orbit has drastically contributed to the rise in space debris. 5. The collisions between satellites and space junk further exacerbate the situation, generating even more debris, all of which is a result of the demand on Earth for more convenient internet access.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.
5. Better to have more detail.

1. To tackle the growing threat posed by space debris, several measures must be taken at national and international levels. 2. First and foremost, governments and space agencies must impose stricter regulations on the disposal of defunct satellites and debris. 3. One potential solution is to require satellite operators to include de-orbiting mechanisms in their designs. 4. For example, the European Space Agency Recently  launched a mission called “ClearSpace-1,” which aims to demonstrate the capability of removing space debris by capturing and de-orbiting defunct satellites using a robotic arm. 5. In addition to the European Space Agency’s initiative, many nations are collaborating on creating spacecraft that can capture and remove space junk. 6. These efforts, if scaled up and integrated into global space policy, could significantly help in clearing up space debris, safeguarding both satellites and future space missions.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.

1. In conclusion, the main causes of more satellites and debris in space include technological advances and to address these challenges, strict state management must be prioritized. 2. By taking such measures seriously, one can ensure that space remains a safe and sustainable environment for future generations.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

The growing frequency of satellite launches and the resulting increase in space debris is a pressing issue that has become a major concern for both scientists and policymakers. In my opinion, the primary causes of this phenomenon concern modern technological demands, and there are governmental measures that can be taken to mitigate the issue.

The origins of the increase in satellite launches are significant advancements in technology and a growing demand for global connectivity. Technological progress has reduced the cost of satellite launches, leading to an explosion in the number of satellites sent into orbit. For example, companies like SpaceX and Amazon have made plans to launch constellations of thousands of satellites into low Earth orbit to provide global internet coverage. As a result, this increase in the number of satellites in orbit has drastically contributed to the rise in space debris. The collisions between satellites and space junk further exacerbate the situation, generating even more debris, all of which is a result of the demand on Earth for more convenient internet access.

To tackle the growing threat posed by space debris, several measures must be taken at national and international levels. First and foremost, governments and space agencies must impose stricter regulations on the disposal of defunct satellites and debris. One potential solution is to require satellite operators to include de-orbiting mechanisms in their designs. For example, the European Space Agency Recently  launched a mission called “ClearSpace-1,” which aims to demonstrate the capability of removing space debris by capturing and de-orbiting defunct satellites using a robotic arm. In addition to the European Space Agency’s initiative, many nations are collaborating on creating spacecraft that can capture and remove space junk. These efforts, if scaled up and integrated into global space policy, could significantly help in clearing up space debris, safeguarding both satellites and future space missions.

In conclusion, the main causes of more satellites and debris in space include technological advances and to address these challenges, strict state management must be prioritized. By taking such measures seriously, one can ensure that space remains a safe and sustainable environment for future generations.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

1. Growing frequency of satellite launches – Increasing rate of satellite deployments
2. Resulting increase in space debris – Corresponding surge in orbital debris
3. Pressing issue – Urgent challenge
4. A major concern for both scientists and policymakers – A critical issue for researchers and decision-makers
5. The primary causes of this phenomenon concern modern technological demands – The main drivers of this trend stem from contemporary technological needs
6. Governmental measures – Official actions
7. Mitigate the issue – Alleviate the problem
8. Origins – Causes
9. Significant advancements in technology – Notable progress in innovation
10. Growing demand for global connectivity – Rising necessity for worldwide connectivity
11. Technological progress – Scientific development
12. Reduced the cost of – Lowered the expense of
13. Leading to an explosion in the number of satellites sent into orbit – Resulting in a rapid growth in satellite deployments
14. Have made plans to launch constellations of thousands of satellites – Have proposed initiatives to deploy networks with thousands of satellites
15. Low Earth orbit – Near-Earth orbit
16. Provide global internet coverage – Deliver worldwide internet access
17. As a result – Consequently
18. Drastically contributed to the rise in space debris – Significantly escalated the accumulation of orbital waste
19. Collisions – Impacts
20. Space junk further exacerbate the situation – Orbital debris worsens the problem
21. Generating even more debris – Creating additional fragments
22. Demand on Earth for more convenient internet access – Increasing need for seamless global connectivity
23. Tackle – Address
24. Growing threat posed by – Rising danger from
25. National and international levels – Both domestic and global scales
26. First and foremost – Primarily
27. Space agencies – Aerospace organizations
28. Impose stricter regulations on – Enforce tighter rules regarding
29. Disposal of defunct satellites and debris – Management of inactive satellites and orbital waste
30. One potential solution is – A feasible approach could be
31. Require satellite operators – Mandate that satellite providers
32. Include de-orbiting mechanisms in their designs – Integrate re-entry technologies into their models
33. Which aims to demonstrate – Intended to showcase
34. Capability – Competence
35. Capturing and de-orbiting defunct satellites using a robotic arm – Securing and removing inactive satellites with automated tools
36. Collaborating – Partnering
37. Capture and remove space junk – Retrieve and eliminate orbital debris
38. Scaled up and integrated into global space policy – Expanded and incorporated into worldwide space regulations
39. Significantly help – Greatly assist
40. Safeguarding both satellites and future space missions – Protecting orbital assets and upcoming explorations
41. Technological advances – Innovations in technology
42. Address these challenges – Overcome these obstacles
43. Strict state management – Rigorous governmental oversight
44. Prioritized – Given precedence
45. By taking such measures seriously – Through earnest implementation of these steps
46. Ensure – Guarantee
47. Remains a safe and sustainable environment for future generations – Continues to be a secure and viable space for posterity

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈɡrəʊɪŋ ˈfriːkwənsi ɒv ˈsætᵊlaɪt ˈlɔːnʧɪz

rɪˈzʌltɪŋ ˈɪnkriːs ɪn speɪs ˈdɛbriː

ˈprɛsɪŋ ˈɪʃuː

ə ˈmeɪʤə kənˈsɜːn fɔː bəʊθ ˈsaɪəntɪsts ænd ˈpɒləsɪˌmeɪkəz

ðə ˈpraɪmᵊri ˈkɔːzɪz ɒv ðɪs fəˈnɒmɪnən kənˈsɜːn ˈmɒdᵊn ˌtɛknəˈlɒʤɪkᵊl dɪˈmɑːndz

ˌɡʌvᵊnˈmɛntᵊl ˈmɛʒəz

ˈmɪtɪɡeɪt ði ˈɪʃuː

ˈɒrɪʤɪnz

sɪɡˈnɪfɪkᵊnt ədˈvɑːnsmənts ɪn tɛkˈnɒləʤi

ˈɡrəʊɪŋ dɪˈmɑːnd fɔː ˈɡləʊbᵊl ˌkɒnɛkˈtɪvəti

ˌtɛknəˈlɒʤɪkᵊl ˈprəʊɡrɛs

rɪˈdjuːst ðə kɒst ɒv

ˈliːdɪŋ tuː ən ɪkˈspləʊʒᵊn ɪn ðə ˈnʌmbər ɒv ˈsætᵊlaɪts sɛnt ˈɪntuː ˈɔːbɪt

hæv meɪd plænz tuː lɔːnʧ ˌkɒnstəˈleɪʃᵊnz ɒv ˈθaʊzᵊndz ɒv ˈsætᵊlaɪts

ləʊ ɜːθ ˈɔːbɪt

prəˈvaɪd ˈɡləʊbᵊl ˈɪntənɛt ˈkʌvᵊrɪʤ

æz ə rɪˈzʌlt

ˈdræstɪkᵊli kənˈtrɪbjuːtɪd tuː ðə raɪz ɪn speɪs ˈdɛbriː

kəˈlɪʒᵊnz

speɪs ʤʌŋk ˈfɜːðər ɪɡˈzæsəbeɪt ðə ˌsɪʧuˈeɪʃᵊn

ˈʤɛnəreɪtɪŋ ˈiːvᵊn mɔː ˈdɛbriː

dɪˈmɑːnd ɒn ɜːθ fɔː mɔː kənˈviːniənt ˈɪntənɛt ˈæksɛs

ˈtækᵊl

ˈɡrəʊɪŋ θrɛt pəʊzd baɪ

ˈnæʃᵊnᵊl ænd ˌɪntəˈnæʃᵊnᵊl ˈlɛvᵊlz

fɜːst ænd ˈfɔːməʊst

speɪs ˈeɪʤᵊnsiz

ɪmˈpəʊz ˈstrɪktə ˌrɛɡjəˈleɪʃᵊnz ɒn

dɪˈspəʊzᵊl ɒv dɪˈfʌŋkt ˈsætᵊlaɪts ænd ˈdɛbriː

wʌn pəˈtɛnʃᵊl səˈluːʃᵊn ɪz

rɪˈkwaɪə ˈsætᵊlaɪt ˈɒpᵊreɪtəz

ɪnˈkluːd diː-ˈɔːbɪtɪŋ ˈmɛkənɪzᵊmz ɪn ðeə dɪˈzaɪnz

wɪʧ eɪmz tuː ˈdɛmənstreɪt

ˌkeɪpəˈbɪləti

ˈkæpʧərɪŋ ænd diː-ˈɔːbɪtɪŋ dɪˈfʌŋkt ˈsætᵊlaɪts ˈjuːzɪŋ ə rəʊˈbɒtɪk ɑːm

kəˈlæbəreɪtɪŋ

ˈkæpʧər ænd rɪˈmuːv speɪs ʤʌŋk

skeɪld ʌp ænd ˈɪntɪɡreɪtɪd ˈɪntuː ˈɡləʊbᵊl speɪs ˈpɒləsi

sɪɡˈnɪfɪkᵊntli hɛlp

ˈseɪfɡɑːdɪŋ bəʊθ ˈsætᵊlaɪts ænd ˈfjuːʧə speɪs ˈmɪʃᵊnz

ˌtɛknəˈlɒʤɪkᵊl ədˈvɑːnsɪz

əˈdrɛs ðiːz ˈʧælɪnʤɪz

strɪkt steɪt ˈmænɪʤmənt

praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪzd

baɪ ˈteɪkɪŋ sʌʧ ˈmɛʒəz ˈsɪəriəsli

ɪnˈʃɔː

rɪˈmeɪnz ə seɪf ænd səˈsteɪnəbᵊl ɪnˈvaɪrᵊnmənt fɔː ˈfjuːʧə ˌʤɛnəˈreɪʃᵊnz

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

The g__________________________________s and the r_______________________________________s is a pressing issue that has become a_________________________________________________s. In my opinion, t_____________________________________________________s, and there are g____________________________s that can be taken to m______________________e.

The o____s of the increase in satellite launches are s____________________________________y and a g___________________________________________y. T____________________s has r__________________f satellite launches, l_______________________________________________________________t. For example, companies like SpaceX and Amazon h___________________________________________________________s into l__________________t to p__________________________e. A_________t, this increase in the number of satellites in orbit has d___________________________________________________s. The c___________s between satellites and s_______________________________________n, g________________________________s, all of which is a result of the d_____________________________________________________s.

To t_______e the g___________________y space debris, several measures must be taken at n___________________________s. F_____________________t, governments and s____________s must i___________________n the d_________________________s. O__________________________s to r____________________s to i______________________________s. For example, the European Space Agency Recently  launched a mission called “ClearSpace-1,” w_________________________e the c___________y of removing space debris by c____________________________________________m. In addition to the European Space Agency’s initiative, many nations are collaborating on creating spacecraft that can c__________________________k. These efforts, if s_______________________________________________y, could s___________________p in clearing up space debris, s__________________________________________________s.

In conclusion, the main causes of more satellites and debris in space include t_____________________s and to a____________________________s, s___________________________t must be p_____________d. B________________________y, one can e__________________________________________________________________________________s.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.nasa.gov/headquarters/library/find/bibliographies/space-debris/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Outer Space

Question 1: Have you ever learnt about outer space and stars?

Question 2: Do you want to know more about outer space?

Question 3: Do you want to go into outer space in the future?

Question 4: Do you like science fiction movies? (Why/Why not?)

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Essay: Performance-Enhancing Drugs in Sports

by Dave | Jan 1, 2025 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of performance-enhancing drugs in sports.

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IELTS Essay: Performance-Enhancing Drugs in Sports

In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports.

What are the consequences of doping for athletes?

What measures should be taken to combat this issue?

There has been a considerable rise in detections for performance-enhancing substances in athletic competitions recently. In my opinion, the most likely consequences for athletes concern their careers and this infraction is best tackled through more sophisticated screening tests.

In the majority of cases, athletes risk lasting career repercussions when caught doping. The first and most obvious consequences are financial. An athlete who tests positive for a banned substance will certainly be banned for a defined amount of time, potentially permanently in serious cases, and will forfeit salary and prize money over this period. Beyond raw salary, most athletes receive endorsements and a worsening public image will undoubtedly damage those business relationships as well. Relatedly, an athlete’s legacy is also at stake. A well-known example of this would be the baseball player Barry Bonds who not only lost the final years of an illustrious career to suspensions but has also not been inducted into the Baseball Hall of Fame due to his past transgressions and numerous failed tests.

In order to combat the pervasiveness of performance-enhancing drugs, sporting authorities must invest in modernized testing procedures. The most complex testing is currently utilized in the Olympics, however there are flaws in this system as it is often compromised by corruption and the equally sophisticated doping methods of certain nations. A more pertinent case study would be in sports such as boxing and MMA where testing can literally mean the difference between life and death. In boxing, athletes often agree to their own testing procedures contractually. This method is inferior to vesting power in an authority, such as the UFC, that can ensure tests are modern and fairly conducted. Most UFC athletes are tested at random points throughout the year as well as prior to and immediately after bouts. Applying such a policy across various sports would not only catch the vast majority of infractions but also, more importantly, deter abuse from even beginning.

In conclusion, athletes risk reputational and financial damage by doping and this can be prevented as testing becomes more comprehensive and potent. These measures are necessary to safeguard the integrity of sporting competitions around the world.

Analysis

1. There has been a considerable rise in detections for performance-enhancing substances in athletic competitions recently. 2. In my opinion, the most likely consequences for athletes concern their careers and this infraction is best tackled through more sophisticated screening tests.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. In the majority of cases, athletes risk lasting career repercussions when caught doping. 2. The first and most obvious consequences are financial. 3. An athlete who tests positive for a banned substance will certainly be banned for a defined amount of time, potentially permanently in serious cases, and will forfeit salary and prize money over this period. 4. Beyond raw salary, most athletes receive endorsements and a worsening public image will undoubtedly damage those business relationships as well. 5. Relatedly, an athlete’s legacy is also at stake. 6. A well-known example of this would be the baseball player Barry Bonds who not only lost the final years of an illustrious career to suspensions but has also not been inducted into the Baseball Hall of Fame due to his past transgressions and numerous failed tests.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.
5. Better to have more detail.
6. The more specific an example, the better.

1. In order to combat the pervasiveness of performance-enhancing drugs, sporting authorities must invest in modernized testing procedures. 2. The most complex testing is currently utilized in the Olympics, however there are flaws in this system as it is often compromised by corruption and the equally sophisticated doping methods of certain nations. 3. A more pertinent case study would be in sports such as boxing and MMA where testing can literally mean the difference between life and death. 4. In boxing, athletes often agree to their own testing procedures contractually. 5. This method is inferior to vesting power in an authority, such as the UFC, that can ensure tests are modern and fairly conducted. 6. Most UFC athletes are tested at random points throughout the year as well as prior to and immediately after bouts. 7. Applying such a policy across various sports would not only catch the vast majority of infractions but also, more importantly, deter abuse from even beginning.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. Include short and long sentences.
6. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.
7. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. In conclusion, athletes risk reputational and financial damage by doping and this can be prevented as testing becomes more comprehensive and potent. 2. These measures are necessary to safeguard the integrity of sporting competitions around the world.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

There has been a considerable rise in detections for performance-enhancing substances in athletic competitions recently. In my opinion, the most likely consequences for athletes concern their careers and this infraction is best tackled through more sophisticated screening tests.

In the majority of cases, athletes risk lasting career repercussions when caught doping. The first and most obvious consequences are financial. An athlete who tests positive for a banned substance will certainly be banned for a defined amount of time, potentially permanently in serious cases, and will forfeit salary and prize money over this period. Beyond raw salary, most athletes receive endorsements and a worsening public image will undoubtedly damage those business relationships as well. Relatedly, an athlete’s legacy is also at stake. A well-known example of this would be the baseball player Barry Bonds who not only lost the final years of an illustrious career to suspensions but has also not been inducted into the Baseball Hall of Fame due to his past transgressions and numerous failed tests.

In order to combat the pervasiveness of performance-enhancing drugs, sporting authorities must invest in modernized testing procedures. The most complex testing is currently utilized in the Olympics, however there are flaws in this system as it is often compromised by corruption and the equally sophisticated doping methods of certain nations. A more pertinent case study would be in sports such as boxing and MMA where testing can literally mean the difference between life and death. In boxing, athletes often agree to their own testing procedures contractually. This method is inferior to vesting power in an authority, such as the UFC, that can ensure tests are modern and fairly conducted. Most UFC athletes are tested at random points throughout the year as well as prior to and immediately after bouts. Applying such a policy across various sports would not only catch the vast majority of infractions but also, more importantly, deter abuse from even beginning.

In conclusion, athletes risk reputational and financial damage by doping and this can be prevented as testing becomes more comprehensive and potent. These measures are necessary to safeguard the integrity of sporting competitions around the world.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

1. There has been a considerable rise in detections
   • There has been a significant increase in identifications
2. performance-enhancing substances
   • performance-boosting substances
3. athletic competitions
   • sporting events
4. most likely consequences for
   • probable outcomes for
5. concern t
   • worry regarding
6. infraction
   • violation
7. best tackled through more sophisticated screening tests
   • most effectively addressed by advanced screening techniques
8. In the majority of cases
   • In most instances
9. caught doping
   • caught using banned substances
10. The first and most obvious consequences

• The primary and most evident repercussions

11. financial

• monetary

12. tests positive for a banned substance

• returns a positive result for a prohibited substance

13. certainly be banned for a defined amount of time

• will undoubtedly face a suspension for a specified period

14. potentially permanently in serious cases

• possibly indefinitely in extreme situations

15. forfeit salary

• lose wages

16. prize money

• winnings

17. Beyond raw salary

• Apart from basic salary

18. receive endorsements

• obtain sponsorship deals

19. worsening public image

• deteriorating public perception

20. undoubtedly damage those business relationships

• will certainly harm professional connections

21. Relatedly

• In connection with this

22. legacy is also at stake

• reputation is also at risk

23. A well-known example of this would be

• A famous illustration of this is

24. lost the final years of an illustrious career to suspensions

• forfeited the final years of a distinguished career due to bans

25. inducted into the Baseball Hall of Fame due to his past transgressions and numerous failed tests

• excluded from the Baseball Hall of Fame because of his previous offenses and repeated failures in drug tests

26. In order to combat

• To counteract

27. pervasiveness

• widespread nature

28. sporting authorities

• sports governing bodies

29. invest in modernized testing procedures

• allocate resources to advanced testing systems

30. most complex testing

• the most intricate testing

31. currently utilized in the Olympics

• presently employed in the Olympic Games

32. flaws in this system

• weaknesses in this system

33. compromised by corruption and the equally sophisticated doping methods of certain nations

• undermined by corruption and equally advanced doping techniques used by certain countries

34. A more pertinent case study would be in

• A more relevant example would be in

35. literally mean the difference between life and death

• could truly determine life or death

36. agree to their own testing procedures contractually

• contractually consent to their own testing protocols

37. This method is inferior to vesting power in an authority

• This approach is less effective than empowering an authority

38. UFC

• Ultimate Fighting Championship

39. ensure tests are modern and fairly conducted

• guarantee that tests are up-to-date and conducted impartially

40. tested at random points throughout the year

• randomly tested throughout the year

41. prior to and immediately after bouts

• before and right after matches

42. Applying such a policy across various sports would

• Implementing this policy across different sports would

43. catch the vast majority of infractions

• identify the overwhelming majority of violations

44. more importantly

• more significantly

45. deter abuse from even beginning

• prevent misuse from starting in the first place

46. risk reputational and financial damage

• incur potential harm to reputation and finances

47. prevented

• avoided

48. comprehensive and potent

• thorough and effective

49. measures

• strategies

50. safeguard the integrity of sporting competitions around the world

• protect the fairness of global sports events

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ðeə hæz biːn ə kənˈsɪdᵊrəbᵊl raɪz ɪn dɪˈtɛkʃᵊnz

pəˈfɔːməns-ɪnˈhɑːnsɪŋ ˈsʌbstᵊnsɪz

æθˈlɛtɪk ˌkɒmpəˈtɪʃᵊnz

məʊst ˈlaɪkli ˈkɒnsɪkwənsɪz fɔː

kənˈsɜːn tiː

ɪnˈfrækʃᵊn

bɛst ˈtækᵊld θruː mɔː səˈfɪstɪkeɪtɪd ˈskriːnɪŋ tɛsts

ɪn ðə məˈʤɒrəti ɒv ˈkeɪsɪz

kɔːt ˈdəʊpɪŋ

ðə fɜːst ænd məʊst ˈɒbviəs ˈkɒnsɪkwənsɪz

faɪˈnænʃᵊl

tɛsts ˈpɒzətɪv fɔːr ə bænd ˈsʌbstᵊns

ˈsɜːtᵊnli biː bænd fɔːr ə dɪˈfaɪnd əˈmaʊnt ɒv taɪm

pəˈtɛnʃᵊli ˈpɜːmənəntli ɪn ˈsɪəriəs ˈkeɪsɪz

ˈfɔːfɪt ˈsæləri

praɪz ˈmʌni

bɪˈjɒnd rɔː ˈsæləri

rɪˈsiːv ɪnˈdɔːsmənts

ˈwɜːsᵊnɪŋ ˈpʌblɪk ˈɪmɪʤ

ʌnˈdaʊtɪdli ˈdæmɪʤ ðəʊz ˈbɪznɪs rɪˈleɪʃᵊnʃɪps

rɪˈleɪtɪdli

ˈlɛɡəsi ɪz ˈɔːlsəʊ æt steɪk

ə ˌwɛlˈnəʊn ɪɡˈzɑːmpᵊl ɒv ðɪs wʊd biː

lɒst ðə ˈfaɪnᵊl jɪəz ɒv ən ɪˈlʌstriəs kəˈrɪə tuː səˈspɛnʃᵊnz

ɪnˈdʌktɪd ˈɪntuː ðə ˈbeɪsbɔːl hɔːl ɒv feɪm djuː tuː hɪz pɑːst trænzˈɡrɛʃᵊnz ænd ˈnjuːmərəs feɪld tɛsts

ɪn ˈɔːdə tuː ˈkɒmbæt

pɜːˈveɪsɪvnəs

ˈspɔːtɪŋ ɔːˈθɒrətiz

ɪnˈvɛst ɪn ˈmɒdᵊnaɪzd ˈtɛstɪŋ prəˈsiːʤəz

məʊst ˈkɒmplɛks ˈtɛstɪŋ

ˈkʌrᵊntli ˈjuːtɪlaɪzd ɪn ði əˈlɪmpɪks

flɔːz ɪn ðɪs ˈsɪstəm

ˈkɒmprəmaɪzd baɪ kəˈrʌpʃᵊn ænd ði ˈiːkwəli səˈfɪstɪkeɪtɪd ˈdəʊpɪŋ ˈmɛθədz ɒv ˈsɜːtᵊn ˈneɪʃᵊnz

ə mɔː ˈpɜːtɪnənt keɪs ˈstʌdi wʊd biː ɪn

ˈlɪtᵊrᵊli miːn ðə ˈdɪfᵊrᵊns bɪˈtwiːn laɪf ænd dɛθ

əˈɡriː tuː ðeər əʊn ˈtɛstɪŋ prəˈsiːʤəz kənˈtrækʧuəli

ðɪs ˈmɛθəd ɪz ɪnˈfɪəriə tuː ˈvɛstɪŋ ˈpaʊər ɪn ən ɔːˈθɒrəti

juː-ɛf-siː

ɪnˈʃɔː tɛsts ɑː ˈmɒdᵊn ænd ˈfeəli kənˈdʌktɪd

ˈtɛstɪd æt ˈrændəm pɔɪnts θruːˈaʊt ðə jɪə

ˈpraɪə tuː ænd ɪˈmiːdiətli ˈɑːftə baʊts

əˈplaɪɪŋ sʌʧ ə ˈpɒləsi əˈkrɒs ˈveəriəs spɔːts wʊd

kæʧ ðə vɑːst məˈʤɒrəti ɒv ɪnˈfrækʃᵊnz

mɔːr ɪmˈpɔːtᵊntli

dɪˈtɜːr əˈbjuːs frɒm ˈiːvᵊn bɪˈɡɪnɪŋ

rɪsk ˌrɛpjəˈteɪʃᵊnᵊl ænd faɪˈnænʃᵊl ˈdæmɪʤ

prɪˈvɛntɪd

ˌkɒmprɪˈhɛnsɪv ænd ˈpəʊtᵊnt

ˈmɛʒəz

ˈseɪfɡɑːd ði ɪnˈtɛɡrəti ɒv ˈspɔːtɪŋ ˌkɒmpəˈtɪʃᵊnz əˈraʊnd ðə wɜːld

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

T__________________________________________s for p____________________________s in a________________________s recently. In my opinion, the m____________________________r athletes c________n their careers and this i____________n is b______________________________________s.

I______________________s, athletes risk lasting career repercussions when c___________g. T_________________________________s are f_______________l. An athlete who t_______________________e will c___________________________________________e, p___________________________________s, and will f_______________y and p____________y over this period. B___________________y, most athletes r_______________________s and a w_____________________e will u___________________________________s as well. R___________y, an athlete’s l______________________e. A__________________________________e the baseball player Barry Bonds who not only l___________________________________________________s but has also not been i_________________________________e d_____________________________________________________-s.

I______________t the p_____________s of performance-enhancing drugs, s______________s must i___________________________________-s. The m_________________g is c__________________________s, however there are f_______________m as it is often c___________________________________________________________________________s. A____________________________n sports such as boxing and MMA where testing can l________________________________h. In boxing, athletes often a______________________________________y. T________________________________________________y, such as the U__C, that can e________________________________________________d. Most UFC athletes are t____________________________________________r as well as p___________________________________________s. A_____________________________________d not only c______________________________________s but also, m____________y, d______________________g.

In conclusion, athletes r_________________________________________e by doping and this can be p____________d as testing becomes more c____________________________________t. These m__________s are necessary to s_______________________________________________________________d.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

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https://www.britannica.com/biography/Lance-Armstrong

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Health

Question 1: Do you have any unhealthy habits?

Question 2: In what ways do you try to stay healthy?

Question 3: Do you do any sports?

Question 4: Do you think more about your health now than when you were younger?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS Essay: Neighbors

by Dave | Dec 14, 2024 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of neighbors.

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IELTS Essay: Neighbors

Today, many people do not know their neighbors.

Why is this?

What can be done about this?

These days, there is increasing disconnect among neighbors, leading to a situation where many individuals are unfamiliar with those living nearby. In my opinion, this is largely a result of advanced technologies and the optimal solution relates to fostering community interaction.

One primary reason for this lack of acquaintance is the rise of technology and social media. In today’s digital age, many people prefer to interact online rather than face-to-face. Platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter allow individuals to connect with friends and family from a distance, often at the expense of local relationships. For instance, a person may spend hours engaging in online discussions while neglecting the opportunity to engage with their neighbors over a cup of coffee. This virtual interaction, while beneficial in certain respects, can lead to social isolation in physical neighborhoods. There is supporting statistical data that evidences the contention that more time spent on addictive digital devices fulfills a human’s social needs to a bare minimum and discourages in-person meetings.

One effective solution for this modern phenomenon would be organizing community events. Local councils or neighborhood associations could host gatherings such as block parties, picnics, or holiday celebrations. For example, a community could set up a monthly potluck dinner, where residents bring a dish to share. This not only provides an opportunity for neighbors to meet but also fosters a spirit of cooperation and camaraderie. Another related example would be community gardening, which could serve to encourage collaboration among residents, as they work together to cultivate plants and vegetables. This type of initiative not only enhances a neighborhood’s aesthetic appeal but also instills a sense of responsibility and ownership among its members. A community garden can become a focal point where neighbors meet regularly, share gardening tips, and even exchange produce, further strengthening local bonds.

In conclusion, the disconnect among neighbors is a multifaceted issue stemming largely from technological reliance. However, by implementing community-oriented initiatives such as social events and gardening projects, it is possible to cultivate a more connected and engaged neighborhood. In doing so, we can foster a sense of belonging that enriches the lives of individuals and enhances communal well-being.

Analysis

1. These days, there is increasing disconnect among neighbors, leading to a situation where many individuals are unfamiliar with those living nearby. 2. In my opinion, this is largely a result of advanced technologies and the optimal solution relates to fostering community interaction.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. One primary reason for this lack of acquaintance is the rise of technology and social media. 2. In today’s digital age, many people prefer to interact online rather than face-to-face. 3. Platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter allow individuals to connect with friends and family from a distance, often at the expense of local relationships. 4. For instance, a person may spend hours engaging in online discussions while neglecting the opportunity to engage with their neighbors over a cup of coffee. 5. This virtual interaction, while beneficial in certain respects, can lead to social isolation in physical neighborhoods. 6. There is supporting statistical data that evidences the contention that more time spent on addictive digital devices fulfills a human’s social needs to a bare minimum and discourages in-person meetings.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.
5. Better to have more detail.
6. Don’t write too long.

1. One effective solution for this modern phenomenon would be organizing community events. 2. Local councils or neighborhood associations could host gatherings such as block parties, picnics, or holiday celebrations. 3. For example, a community could set up a monthly potluck dinner, where residents bring a dish to share. 4. This not only provides an opportunity for neighbors to meet but also fosters a spirit of cooperation and camaraderie. 5. Another related example would be community gardening, which could serve to encourage collaboration among residents, as they work together to cultivate plants and vegetables. 6. This type of initiative not only enhances a neighborhood’s aesthetic appeal but also instills a sense of responsibility and ownership among its members. 7. A community garden can become a focal point where neighbors meet regularly, share gardening tips, and even exchange produce, further strengthening local bonds.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. Keep adding detail.
6. Be specific instead of general.
7. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.

1. In conclusion, the disconnect among neighbors is a multifaceted issue stemming largely from technological reliance. 2. However, by implementing community-oriented initiatives such as social events and gardening projects, it is possible to cultivate a more connected and engaged neighborhood. 3. In doing so, we can foster a sense of belonging that enriches the lives of individuals and enhances communal well-being.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
3. No more than 3 sentences.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

These days, there is increasing disconnect among neighbors, leading to a situation where many individuals are unfamiliar with those living nearby. In my opinion, this is largely a result of advanced technologies and the optimal solution relates to fostering community interaction.

One primary reason for this lack of acquaintance is the rise of technology and social media. In today’s digital age, many people prefer to interact online rather than face-to-face. Platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter allow individuals to connect with friends and family from a distance, often at the expense of local relationships. For instance, a person may spend hours engaging in online discussions while neglecting the opportunity to engage with their neighbors over a cup of coffee. This virtual interaction, while beneficial in certain respects, can lead to social isolation in physical neighborhoods. There is supporting statistical data that evidences the contention that more time spent on addictive digital devices fulfills a human’s social needs to a bare minimum and discourages in-person meetings.

One effective solution for this modern phenomenon would be organizing community events. Local councils or neighborhood associations could host gatherings such as block parties, picnics, or holiday celebrations. For example, a community could set up a monthly potluck dinner, where residents bring a dish to share. This not only provides an opportunity for neighbors to meet but also fosters a spirit of cooperation and camaraderie. Another related example would be community gardening, which could serve to encourage collaboration among residents, as they work together to cultivate plants and vegetables. This type of initiative not only enhances a neighborhood’s aesthetic appeal but also instills a sense of responsibility and ownership among its members. A community garden can become a focal point where neighbors meet regularly, share gardening tips, and even exchange produce, further strengthening local bonds.

In conclusion, the disconnect among neighbors is a multifaceted issue stemming largely from technological reliance. However, by implementing community-oriented initiatives such as social events and gardening projects, it is possible to cultivate a more connected and engaged neighborhood. In doing so, we can foster a sense of belonging that enriches the lives of individuals and enhances communal well-being.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

Original and Synonymous Rewrite

1. Original: These days
   Synonymous: Nowadays
2. Original: Increasing disconnect among
   Synonymous: Growing detachment among people
3. Original: Leading to a situation where
   Synonymous: Resulting in circumstances where
4. Original: Unfamiliar
   Synonymous: Unknown to one another
5. Original: Living nearby
   Synonymous: Residing in proximity
6. Original: This is largely a result of advanced technologies
   Synonymous: This is primarily due to modern technological advancements
7. Original: Optimal solution relates to fostering community interaction
   Synonymous: The best approach involves promoting community connections
8. Original: One primary reason for this lack of acquaintance
   Synonymous: A key factor behind this unfamiliarity
9. Original: The rise of technology and social media
   Synonymous: The proliferation of digital tools and social networks
10. Original: In today’s digital age
    Synonymous: In the current era of technology
11. Original: Interact online rather than face-to-face
    Synonymous: Engage online rather than meeting in person
12. Original: Platforms
    Synonymous: Applications
13. Original: Connect with friends and family from a distance
    Synonymous: Stay in touch with distant friends and relatives
14. Original: Often at the expense of local relationships
    Synonymous: Often at the cost of local bonds
15. Original: Engaging in online discussions
    Synonymous: Participating in virtual conversations
16. Original: Neglecting the opportunity to engage with their neighbors over a cup of coffee
    Synonymous: Ignoring the chance to connect with neighbors over a casual chat
17. Original: Virtual interaction
    Synonymous: Online communication
18. Original: While beneficial in certain respects
    Synonymous: Though advantageous in some ways
19. Original: Social isolation in physical neighborhoods
    Synonymous: Physical isolation within neighborhoods
20. Original: There is supporting statistical data
    Synonymous: Statistical evidence supports the claim
21. Original: Evidences
    Synonymous: Proves the argument
22. Original: Time spent on addictive digital devices fulfills a human’s social needs to a bare minimum and discourages in-person meetings
    Synonymous: Time spent on engrossing digital platforms barely satisfies social needs and discourages face-to-face interaction
23. Original: One effective solution for this modern phenomenon would be organizing community events
    Synonymous: A practical remedy for this contemporary challenge could be arranging community activities
24. Original: Local councils
    Synonymous: Municipal authorities
25. Original: Neighborhood associations
    Synonymous: Local groups
26. Original: Host gatherings
    Synonymous: Organize events
27. Original: Block parties
    Synonymous: Neighborhood celebrations
28. Original: Set up a monthly potluck dinner
    Synonymous: Plan a monthly shared meal
29. Original: Residents bring a dish to share
    Synonymous: Where individuals contribute a dish
30. Original: Provides an opportunity for
    Synonymous: Creates an avenue for
31. Original: Fosters a spirit of cooperation and camaraderie
    Synonymous: Promotes teamwork and friendship
32. Original: Community gardening
    Synonymous: Shared gardening projects
33. Original: Could serve to encourage collaboration among residents
    Synonymous: Could inspire collaboration among neighbors
34. Original: Cultivate plants and vegetables
    Synonymous: Grow crops and greens
35. Original: This type of initiative not only enhances
    Synonymous: Such activities not only improve
36. Original: Aesthetic appeal
    Synonymous: Visual charm
37. Original: Instills
    Synonymous: Encourages
38. Original: Ownership
    Synonymous: A sense of responsibility
39. Original: Members
    Synonymous: Participants
40. Original: A focal point
    Synonymous: A central gathering spot
41. Original: Meet regularly
    Synonymous: Assemble frequently
42. Original: Share gardening tips
    Synonymous: Exchange cultivation ideas
43. Original: Exchange produce
    Synonymous: Trade homegrown crops
44. Original: Further strengthening
    Synonymous: Deepening
45. Original: Disconnect
    Synonymous: Division
46. Original: Multifaceted issue stemming largely from
    Synonymous: Complex problem arising mainly from
47. Original: Implementing community-oriented initiatives
    Synonymous: Adopting neighborhood-focused programs
48. Original: Cultivate
    Synonymous: Foster
49. Original: Connected and engaged neighborhood
    Synonymous: United and interactive community
50. Original: In doing so
    Synonymous: By taking this approach
51. Original: Enriches
    Synonymous: Improves
52. Original: Enhances communal well-being
    Synonymous: Boosts collective harmony

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ðiːz deɪz
ɪnˈkriːsɪŋ ˌdɪskəˈnɛkt əˈmʌŋ
ˈliːdɪŋ tuː ə ˌsɪʧuˈeɪʃᵊn weə
ʌnfəˈmɪliə
ˈlɪvɪŋ ˈnɪəbaɪ
ðɪs ɪz ˈlɑːʤli ə rɪˈzʌlt ɒv ədˈvɑːnst tɛkˈnɒləʤiz
ˈɒptɪmᵊl səˈluːʃᵊn rɪˈleɪts tuː ˈfɒstərɪŋ kəˈmjuːnəti ˌɪntəˈrækʃᵊn
wʌn ˈpraɪmᵊri ˈriːzᵊn fɔː ðɪs læk ɒv əˈkweɪntᵊns
ðə raɪz ɒv tɛkˈnɒləʤi ænd ˈsəʊʃᵊl ˈmiːdiə
ɪn təˈdeɪz ˈdɪʤɪtᵊl eɪʤ
ˌɪntəˈrækt ˈɒnˌlaɪn ˈrɑːðə ðæn feɪs-tuː-feɪs
ˈplætfɔːmz
kəˈnɛkt wɪð frɛndz ænd ˈfæmᵊli frɒm ə ˈdɪstᵊns
ˈɒfᵊn æt ði ɪkˈspɛns ɒv ˈləʊkᵊl rɪˈleɪʃᵊnʃɪps
ɪnˈɡeɪʤɪŋ ɪn ˈɒnˌlaɪn dɪˈskʌʃᵊnz
nɪˈɡlɛktɪŋ ði ˌɒpəˈʧuːnəti tuː ɪnˈɡeɪʤ wɪð ðeə ˈneɪbəz ˈəʊvər ə kʌp ɒv ˈkɒfi
ˈvɜːʧuəl ˌɪntəˈrækʃᵊn
waɪl ˌbɛnɪˈfɪʃᵊl ɪn ˈsɜːtᵊn rɪˈspɛkts
ˈsəʊʃᵊl ˌaɪsəˈleɪʃᵊn ɪn ˈfɪzɪkᵊl ˈneɪbəhʊdz
ðeər ɪz səˈpɔːtɪŋ stəˈtɪstɪkᵊl ˈdeɪtə
ˈɛvɪdᵊnsɪz
kənˈtɛnʃᵊn
taɪm spɛnt ɒn əˈdɪktɪv ˈdɪʤɪtᵊl dɪˈvaɪsɪz fʊlˈfɪlz ə ˈhjuːmənz ˈsəʊʃᵊl niːdz tuː ə beə ˈmɪnɪməm ænd dɪˈskʌrɪʤɪz ɪn-ˈpɜːsᵊn ˈmiːtɪŋz
wʌn ɪˈfɛktɪv səˈluːʃᵊn fɔː ðɪs ˈmɒdᵊn fəˈnɒmɪnən wʊd biː ˈɔːɡᵊnaɪzɪŋ kəˈmjuːnəti ɪˈvɛnts
ˈləʊkᵊl ˈkaʊnsᵊlz
ˈneɪbəhʊd əˌsəʊsiˈeɪʃᵊnz
həʊst ˈɡæðᵊrɪŋz
blɒk ˈpɑːtiz
sɛt ʌp ə ˈmʌnθli ˌpɒtˈlʌk ˈdɪnə
ˈrɛzɪdᵊnts brɪŋ ə dɪʃ tuː ʃeə
prəˈvaɪdz ən ˌɒpəˈʧuːnəti fɔː
ˈfɒstəz ə ˈspɪrɪt ɒv kəʊˌɒpᵊrˈeɪʃᵊn ænd ˌkæməˈrɑːdᵊri
kəˈmjuːnəti ˈɡɑːdᵊnɪŋ
kʊd sɜːv tuː ɪnˈkʌrɪʤ kəˌlæbəˈreɪʃᵊn əˈmʌŋ ˈrɛzɪdᵊnts
ˈkʌltɪveɪt plɑːnts ænd ˈvɛʤtəbᵊlz
ðɪs taɪp ɒv ɪˈnɪʃətɪv nɒt ˈəʊnli ɪnˈhɑːnsɪz
iːsˈθɛtɪk əˈpiːl
ɪnˈstɪlz
ˈəʊnəʃɪp
ˈmɛmbəz
ə ˈfəʊkᵊl pɔɪnt
miːt ˈrɛɡjələli
ʃeə ˈɡɑːdᵊnɪŋ tɪps
ɪksˈʧeɪnʤ ˈprɒdjuːs
ˈfɜːðə ˈstrɛŋθᵊnɪŋ
ˌdɪskəˈnɛkt
ˌmʌltɪˈfæsɪtɪd ˈɪʃuː ˈstɛmɪŋ ˈlɑːʤli frɒm
ˈɪmplɪmɛntɪŋ kəˈmjuːnəti-ˈɔːriɛntɪd ɪˈnɪʃətɪvz
ˈkʌltɪveɪt
kəˈnɛktɪd ænd ɪnˈɡeɪʤd ˈneɪbəhʊd
ɪn ˈduːɪŋ səʊ
ɪnˈrɪʧɪz
ɪnˈhɑːnsɪz ˈkɒmjənᵊl ˌwɛlˈbiːɪŋ

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

These days, there is increasing disconnect among neighbors, leading to a situation where many individuals are unfamiliar with those living nearby. In my opinion, this is largely a result of advanced technologies and the optimal solution relates to fostering community interaction.

One primary reason for this lack of acquaintance is the rise of technology and social media. In today’s digital age, many people prefer to interact online rather than face-to-face. Platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter allow individuals to connect with friends and family from a distance, often at the expense of local relationships. For instance, a person may spend hours engaging in online discussions while neglecting the opportunity to engage with their neighbors over a cup of coffee. This virtual interaction, while beneficial in certain respects, can lead to social isolation in physical neighborhoods. There is supporting statistical data that evidences the contention that more time spent on addictive digital devices fulfills a human’s social needs to a bare minimum and discourages in-person meetings.

One effective solution for this modern phenomenon would be organizing community events. Local councils or neighborhood associations could host gatherings such as block parties, picnics, or holiday celebrations. For example, a community could set up a monthly potluck dinner, where residents bring a dish to share. This not only provides an opportunity for neighbors to meet but also fosters a spirit of cooperation and camaraderie. Another related example would be community gardening, which could serve to encourage collaboration among residents, as they work together to cultivate plants and vegetables. This type of initiative not only enhances a neighborhood’s aesthetic appeal but also instills a sense of responsibility and ownership among its members. A community garden can become a focal point where neighbors meet regularly, share gardening tips, and even exchange produce, further strengthening local bonds.

In conclusion, the disconnect among neighbors is a multifaceted issue stemming largely from technological reliance. However, by implementing community-oriented initiatives such as social events and gardening projects, it is possible to cultivate a more connected and engaged neighborhood. In doing so, we can foster a sense of belonging that enriches the lives of individuals and enhances communal well-being.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

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Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Where You Live (Full EBook for this topic here on Patreon.)

Do you live in an apartment or house?

What views can you see through the windows?

What kind of apartment or house do you want to have in the future?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

Nowadays some older people choose to live in retirement communities and centers with other people, rather than living with their adult children.

Is this a positive or negative development?

IELTS Essay: Outdoor Spaces

by Dave | Dec 5, 2024 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of outdoor spaces and small homes in cities from the real exam.

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IELTS Essay: Outdoor Spaces

With growing populations in cities, many people are living in small homes that do not do not have adequate outdoor spaces.

Is this a positive or negative development?

As urban populations continue to grow at unprecedented rates, many city dwellers find themselves living in small homes without adequate outdoor spaces. While this development has enabled more people to reside in urban centers, it engenders a host of challenges that make it a negative trend overall.

Critics might argue that small homes and a lack of outdoor spaces are a necessary trade-off for living in active urban centers with abundant job opportunities and cultural amenities. In the vast majority of major cities today, real estate prices are soaring and most individuals can only afford city life by renting or purchasing a smaller home. If there were a law that mandated all homes needed to have outdoor spaces, this would make real estate in cities prohibitively expensive and exacerbate existing social divisions. The result for those such a bill would intend to protect would be that they would have to relocate to areas outside of cities and suffer through long commutes or move to the countryside where standards of living are lower in most nations.

The significant downsides of living in small homes without outdoor spaces concern physical and mental health. When residents lack access to private gardens or balconies, they are less likely to engage in outdoor activities, which are crucial for maintaining a healthy lifestyle. For instance, consider families with young children. In the absence of a backyard, children may spend more time indoors on electronic devices rather than playing outside, running, or engaging in physical exercise. Over time, a sedentary lifestyle can lead to an increased risk of obesity and other health problems. Natural environments, such as gardens or even small patios with greenery, have also been shown to reduce stress and improve mental health. During the COVID-19 pandemic, many urban residents without outdoor spaces reported feeling trapped and overwhelmed, as they lacked a private area to relax or disconnect from their indoor environment. In contrast, those with access to a small balcony or garden often described these spaces as sanctuaries that provided much-needed relief.

In conclusion, while small homes may seem like a practical solution to urban overcrowding, the long-term consequences render it a largely negative development. To ensure the well-being of urban populations, cities must innovate and invest in creating accessible outdoor spaces for all residents.

Analysis

1. As urban populations continue to grow at unprecedented rates, many city dwellers find themselves living in small homes without adequate outdoor spaces. 2. While this development has enabled more people to reside in urban centers, it engenders a host of challenges that make it a negative trend overall.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Critics might argue that small homes and a lack of outdoor spaces are a necessary trade-off for living in active urban centers with abundant job opportunities and cultural amenities. 2. In the vast majority of major cities today, real estate prices are soaring and most individuals can only afford city life by renting or purchasing a smaller home. 3. If there were a law that mandated all homes needed to have outdoor spaces, this would make real estate in cities prohibitively expensive and exacerbate existing social divisions. 4. The result for those such a bill would intend to protect would be that they would have to relocate to areas outside of cities and suffer through long commutes or move to the countryside where standards of living are lower in most nations.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.

1. The significant downsides of living in small homes without outdoor spaces concern physical and mental health. 2. When residents lack access to private gardens or balconies, they are less likely to engage in outdoor activities, which are crucial for maintaining a healthy lifestyle. 3. For instance, consider families with young children. 4. In the absence of a backyard, children may spend more time indoors on electronic devices rather than playing outside, running, or engaging in physical exercise. 5. Over time, a sedentary lifestyle can lead to an increased risk of obesity and other health problems. 6. Natural environments, such as gardens or even small patios with greenery, have also been shown to reduce stress and improve mental health. 7. During the COVID-19 pandemic, many urban residents without outdoor spaces reported feeling trapped and overwhelmed, as they lacked a private area to relax or disconnect from their indoor environment. 8. In contrast, those with access to a small balcony or garden often described these spaces as sanctuaries that provided much-needed relief.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. This paragraph can be longer since it is the side I agree with.
6. The more development, the better.
7. Be sure to be very specific.
8. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.

1. In conclusion, while small homes may seem like a practical solution to urban overcrowding, the long-term consequences render it a largely negative development. 2. To ensure the well-being of urban populations, cities must innovate and invest in creating accessible outdoor spaces for all residents.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

As urban populations continue to grow at unprecedented rates, many city dwellers find themselves living in small homes without adequate outdoor spaces. While this development has enabled more people to reside in urban centers, it engenders a host of challenges that make it a negative trend overall.

Critics might argue that small homes and a lack of outdoor spaces are a necessary trade-off for living in active urban centers with abundant job opportunities and cultural amenities. In the vast majority of major cities today, real estate prices are soaring and most individuals can only afford city life by renting or purchasing a smaller home. If there were a law that mandated all homes needed to have outdoor spaces, this would make real estate in cities prohibitively expensive and exacerbate existing social divisions. The result for those such a bill would intend to protect would be that they would have to relocate to areas outside of cities and suffer through long commutes or move to the countryside where standards of living are lower in most nations.

The significant downsides of living in small homes without outdoor spaces concern physical and mental health. When residents lack access to private gardens or balconies, they are less likely to engage in outdoor activities, which are crucial for maintaining a healthy lifestyle. For instance, consider families with young children. In the absence of a backyard, children may spend more time indoors on electronic devices rather than playing outside, running, or engaging in physical exercise. Over time, a sedentary lifestyle can lead to an increased risk of obesity and other health problems. Natural environments, such as gardens or even small patios with greenery, have also been shown to reduce stress and improve mental health. During the COVID-19 pandemic, many urban residents without outdoor spaces reported feeling trapped and overwhelmed, as they lacked a private area to relax or disconnect from their indoor environment. In contrast, those with access to a small balcony or garden often described these spaces as sanctuaries that provided much-needed relief.

In conclusion, while small homes may seem like a practical solution to urban overcrowding, the long-term consequences render it a largely negative development. To ensure the well-being of urban populations, cities must innovate and invest in creating accessible outdoor spaces for all residents.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

Synonymous Phrases

1. Urban populations
   • City inhabitants
2. Grow at unprecedented rates
   • Expand at unparalleled speeds
3. City dwellers
   • Urban residents
4. Without adequate outdoor spaces
   • Lacking sufficient green areas
5. Enabled
   • Permitted
6. Reside in urban centers
   • Live in metropolitan areas
7. Engenders a host of challenges
   • Brings about numerous issues
8. A negative trend overall
   • A broadly unfavorable pattern
9. Critics might argue that
   • Opponents may claim that
10. A necessary trade-off for living in active urban centers with abundant job opportunities and cultural amenities
    • An inevitable compromise for thriving cities offering employment and cultural attractions
11. In the vast majority of major cities today
    • Across most large metropolitan areas today
12. Real estate prices are soaring
    • Property values are skyrocketing
13. Afford city life
    • Sustain an urban lifestyle
14. Mandated
    • Compelled
15. Prohibitively expensive
    • Excessively costly
16. Exacerbate existing social divisions
    • Deepen current societal inequalities
17. The result for
    • The outcome for
18. Bill
    • Invoice
19. Relocate
    • Move elsewhere
20. Suffer through long commutes
    • Endure extended travel times
21. Move to the countryside
    • Relocate to rural areas
22. Standards of living
    • Quality of life
23. Lower in most nations
    • Inferior across many countries
24. The significant downsides of
    • Major drawbacks of
25. Concern physical and mental health
    • Affect both body and mind
26. Lack access to private gardens or balconies
    • Are deprived of personal outdoor spaces
27. Less likely to engage in outdoor activities
    • Unlikely to participate in open-air recreation
28. Crucial for maintaining a healthy lifestyle
    • Essential for sustaining overall wellness
29. Consider
    • Take into account
30. In the absence of a backyard
    • Without a personal outdoor area
31. On electronic devices
    • Using digital gadgets
32. Engaging in physical exercise
    • Participating in fitness activities
33. Over time
    • Gradually
34. Sedentary lifestyle
    • Inactive way of living
35. Increased risk of obesity
    • Greater likelihood of weight-related issues
36. Natural environments
    • Outdoor settings
37. Small patios with greenery
    • Compact terraces featuring plants
38. Have also been shown to reduce stress and improve mental health
    • Are proven to alleviate stress and enhance psychological well-being
39. During the COVID-19 pandemic
    • Amid the global health crisis
40. Reported feeling trapped and overwhelmed
    • Expressed experiencing confinement and distress
41. Lacked a private area to relax or disconnect from their indoor environment
    • Did not have personal space to unwind or escape their interiors
42. In contrast
    • Conversely
43. Described
    • Characterized
44. Sanctuaries
    • Retreats
45. Provided much-needed relief
    • Offered essential comfort
46. Practical solution
    • Feasible remedy
47. Urban overcrowding
    • Metropolitan congestion
48. Long-term consequences render
    • Prolonged effects make
49. Largely negative development
    • Predominantly harmful trend
50. To ensure the well-being of
    • To promote the welfare of
51. Innovate
    • Develop new approaches
52. Invest
    • Allocate resources
53. Accessible outdoor spaces for all residents
    • Inclusive green areas for everyone

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈɜːbᵊn ˌpɒpjəˈleɪʃᵊnz
ɡrəʊ æt ʌnˈprɛsɪdɛntɪd reɪts
ˈsɪti ˈdwɛləz
wɪˈðaʊt ˈædəkwət ˈaʊtˌdɔː ˈspeɪsɪz
ɪˈneɪbᵊld
rɪˈzaɪd ɪn ˈɜːbᵊn ˈsɛntəz
ɪnˈʤɛndəz ə həʊst ɒv ˈʧælɪnʤɪz
ə ˈnɛɡətɪv trɛnd ˌəʊvəˈrɔːl
ˈkrɪtɪks maɪt ˈɑːɡjuː ðæt
ə ˈnɛsəsᵊri treɪd-ɒf fɔː ˈlɪvɪŋ ɪn ˈæktɪv ˈɜːbᵊn ˈsɛntəz wɪð əˈbʌndᵊnt ʤɒb ˌɒpəˈʧuːnətiz ænd ˈkʌlʧᵊrᵊl əˈmiːnətiz
ɪn ðə vɑːst məˈʤɒrəti ɒv ˈmeɪʤə ˈsɪtiz təˈdeɪ
rɪəl ɪˈsteɪt ˈpraɪsɪz ɑː ˈsɔːrɪŋ
əˈfɔːd ˈsɪti laɪf
ˈmændeɪtɪd
prəˈhɪbɪtɪvli ɪkˈspɛnsɪv
ɪɡˈzæsəbeɪt ɪɡˈzɪstɪŋ ˈsəʊʃᵊl dɪˈvɪʒᵊnz
ðə rɪˈzʌlt fɔː
bɪl
ˌriːləʊˈkeɪt
ˈsʌfə θruː lɒŋ kəˈmjuːts
muːv tuː ðə ˈkʌntrɪsaɪd
ˈstændədz ɒv ˈlɪvɪŋ
ˈləʊər ɪn məʊst ˈneɪʃᵊnz
ðə sɪɡˈnɪfɪkᵊnt ˈdaʊnˌsaɪdz ɒv
kənˈsɜːn ˈfɪzɪkᵊl ænd ˈmɛntᵊl hɛlθ
læk ˈæksɛs tuː ˈpraɪvət ˈɡɑːdᵊnz ɔː ˈbælkəniz
lɛs ˈlaɪkli tuː ɪnˈɡeɪʤ ɪn ˈaʊtˌdɔːr ækˈtɪvətiz
ˈkruːʃᵊl fɔː meɪnˈteɪnɪŋ ə ˈhɛlθi ˈlaɪfstaɪl
kənˈsɪdə
ɪn ði ˈæbsᵊns ɒv ə ˌbækˈjɑːd
ɒn ˌɛlɛkˈtrɒnɪk dɪˈvaɪsɪz
ɪnˈɡeɪʤɪŋ ɪn ˈfɪzɪkᵊl ˈɛksəsaɪz
ˈəʊvə taɪm
ˈsɛdᵊntᵊri ˈlaɪfstaɪl
ɪnˈkriːst rɪsk ɒv əʊˈbiːsəti
ˈnæʧᵊrᵊl ɪnˈvaɪrᵊnmənts
smɔːl ˈpætiəʊz wɪð ˈɡriːnᵊri
hæv ˈɔːlsəʊ biːn ʃəʊn tuː rɪˈdjuːs strɛs ænd ɪmˈpruːv ˈmɛntᵊl hɛlθ
ˈdjʊərɪŋ ðə ˈkəʊvɪd-19 pænˈdɛmɪk
rɪˈpɔːtɪd ˈfiːlɪŋ træpt ænd ˌəʊvəˈwɛlmd
lækt ə ˈpraɪvət ˈeəriə tuː rɪˈlæks ɔː ˌdɪskəˈnɛkt frɒm ðeər ˌɪnˈdɔːr ɪnˈvaɪrᵊnmənt
ɪn ˈkɒntrɑːst
dɪˈskraɪbd
ˈsæŋkʧʊəriz
prəˈvaɪdɪd mʌʧ-ˈniːdɪd rɪˈliːf
ˈpræktɪkᵊl səˈluːʃᵊn
ˈɜːbᵊn ˌəʊvəˈkraʊdɪŋ
ˈlɒŋtɜːm ˈkɒnsɪkwənsɪz ˈrɛndə
ˈlɑːʤli ˈnɛɡətɪv dɪˈvɛləpmənt
tuː ɪnˈʃɔː ðə ˌwɛlˈbiːɪŋ ɒv
ˈɪnəveɪt
ɪnˈvɛst
əkˈsɛsəbᵊl ˈaʊtˌdɔː ˈspeɪsɪz fɔːr ɔːl ˈrɛzɪdᵊnts

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

As u_________________s continue to g_______________________s, many c____________s find themselves living in small homes w_________________________s. While this development has e________d more people to r__________________s, it e_______________________s that make it a____________________l.

C_______________________t small homes and a lack of outdoor spaces are a_______________________________________________________________________________s. I__________________________________y, r________________________________g and most individuals can only a_____________e by renting or purchasing a smaller home. If there were a law that m_________d all homes needed to have outdoor spaces, this would make real estate in cities p____________________e and e_____________________s. T_____________r those such a b___l would intend to protect would be that they would have to r________e to areas outside of cities and s____________________________s or m______________________________e where s_____________________g are l________________s.

T________________________________f living in small homes without outdoor spaces c________________________________h. When residents l______________________________________s, they are l____________________________________s, which are c___________________________________e. For instance, c________r families with young children. I_______________________d, children may spend more time indoors o__________________s rather than playing outside, running, or e_____________________e. O_________e, a s__________________e can lead to an i_______________________y and other health problems. N_______________________s, such as gardens or even s_________________y, h___________________________________________________h. D___________________c, many urban residents without outdoor spaces r_________________________________d, as they l________________________________________________________t. I______________t, those with access to a small balcony or garden often d____________d these spaces as s___________s that p________________________f.

In conclusion, while small homes may seem like a p_______________n to u_______________g, the l____________________________r it a l______________________________t. T_________________f urban populations, cities must i_______e and i______t in creating a___________________________________s.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

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Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Where You Live (Full EBook for this topic here on Patreon.)

Do you live in an apartment or house?

What views can you see through the windows?

What kind of apartment or house do you want to have in the future?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.