Full IELTS Speaking Exam September 2024

IELTS Essay: Choosing a Job

by Dave | Sep 6, 2024 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of choosing a job.

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IELTS Essay: Choosing a Job

Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want, but other people think they should be more realistic and think more about their future.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Today, the debate over whether young people should follow their passion when selecting a career or adopt a more pragmatic approach is increasingly pertinent. In my opinion, it is a wiser option to select an occupation that is most likely to provide for the future.

Proponents of pursuing one’s passion argue that job satisfaction is crucial for long-term career success. When young individuals choose careers based on their interests, they are likely to experience higher levels of motivation and commitment. Consider the case of Steve Jobs, who famously dropped out of college to pursue his interest in computing. His passion for technology led to the creation of Apple Inc., demonstrating how following one’s passion can lead to extraordinary achievements. As one grows older, jobs that align with personal interests can contribute to a more fulfilling life. A study conducted by the American Psychological Association revealed that individuals who work in fields they are passionate about report higher levels of job satisfaction and overall well-being compared to those in less satisfying roles.

Critics of the passion-driven approach highlight that not all interests are financially viable or offer long-term stability. For example, a young person with a passion for arts may find it challenging to secure a stable income, especially in highly competitive fields. In contrast, pursuing a career in fields like engineering or medicine, while possibly less exciting to some, often provides greater job security and financial stability. According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics, careers in engineering are projected to grow substantially over the next decade, offering quality job opportunities and security. Similarly, a passion for environmental science might lead to additional qualifications in data analysis to increase employability and career prospects. Therefore, a pragmatic approach recognizes economic factors and the long-term viability of a chosen career path.

In conclusion, while pursuing a career based on personal passion has its advantages, a realistic approach that considers market trends and financial stability better ensures long-term career success and security. Therefore, young people should prioritize practical considerations when choosing their careers, even if it means incorporating their interests in a more balanced manner.

Analysis

1. Today, the debate over whether young people should follow their passion when selecting a career or adopt a more pragmatic approach is increasingly pertinent. 2. In my opinion, it is a wiser option to select an occupation that is most likely to provide for the future.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Proponents of pursuing one’s passion argue that job satisfaction is crucial for long-term career success. 2. When young individuals choose careers based on their interests, they are likely to experience higher levels of motivation and commitment. 3. Consider the case of Steve Jobs, who famously dropped out of college to pursue his interest in computing. 4. His passion for technology led to the creation of Apple Inc., demonstrating how following one’s passion can lead to extraordinary achievements. 5. As one grows older, jobs that align with personal interests can contribute to a more fulfilling life. 6. A study conducted by the American Psychological Association revealed that individuals who work in fields they are passionate about report higher levels of job satisfaction and overall well-being compared to those in less satisfying roles.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.
5. Better to have more detail.
6. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. Critics of the passion-driven approach highlight that not all interests are financially viable or offer long-term stability. 2. For example, a young person with a passion for arts may find it challenging to secure a stable income, especially in highly competitive fields. 3. In contrast, pursuing a career in fields like engineering or medicine, while possibly less exciting to some, often provides greater job security and financial stability. 4. According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics, careers in engineering are projected to grow substantially over the next decade, offering quality job opportunities and security. 5. Similarly, a passion for environmental science might lead to additional qualifications in data analysis to increase employability and career prospects. 6. Therefore, a pragmatic approach recognizes economic factors and the long-term viability of a chosen career path.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.
6. Vary long and short sentences.

1. In conclusion, while pursuing a career based on personal passion has its advantages, a realistic approach that considers market trends and financial stability better ensures long-term career success and security. 2. Therefore, young people should prioritize practical considerations when choosing their careers, even if it means incorporating their interests in a more balanced manner.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Today, the debate over whether young people should follow their passion when selecting a career or adopt a more pragmatic approach is increasingly pertinent. In my opinion, it is a wiser option to select an occupation that is most likely to provide for the future.

Proponents of pursuing one’s passion argue that job satisfaction is crucial for long-term career success. When young individuals choose careers based on their interests, they are likely to experience higher levels of motivation and commitment. Consider the case of Steve Jobs, who famously dropped out of college to pursue his interest in computing. His passion for technology led to the creation of Apple Inc., demonstrating how following one’s passion can lead to extraordinary achievements. As one grows older, jobs that align with personal interests can contribute to a more fulfilling life. A study conducted by the American Psychological Association revealed that individuals who work in fields they are passionate about report higher levels of job satisfaction and overall well-being compared to those in less satisfying roles.

Critics of the passion-driven approach highlight that not all interests are financially viable or offer long-term stability. For example, a young person with a passion for arts may find it challenging to secure a stable income, especially in highly competitive fields. In contrast, pursuing a career in fields like engineering or medicine, while possibly less exciting to some, often provides greater job security and financial stability. According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics, careers in engineering are projected to grow substantially over the next decade, offering quality job opportunities and security. Similarly, a passion for environmental science might lead to additional qualifications in data analysis to increase employability and career prospects. Therefore, a pragmatic approach recognizes economic factors and the long-term viability of a chosen career path.

In conclusion, while pursuing a career based on personal passion has its advantages, a realistic approach that considers market trends and financial stability better ensures long-term career success and security. Therefore, young people should prioritize practical considerations when choosing their careers, even if it means incorporating their interests in a more balanced manner.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

Certainly! Here are the synonymous phrases with the original words included:

1. The debate over whether

• The discussion regarding whether

1. Follow their passion

• Follow their interests

1. Selecting a career

• Choosing a profession

1. Adopt a more pragmatic approach

• Embrace a more realistic strategy

1. Increasingly pertinent

• Becoming increasingly relevant

1. A wiser option to

• A more prudent choice for

1. Provide for the future

• Plan for the future

1. Proponents of

• Advocates of

1. Crucial for long-term career success

• Essential for lasting career achievement

1. Based on
   • Founded on
2. Higher levels of motivation and commitment
   • Greater degrees of enthusiasm and dedication
3. Consider the case of
   • Examine the example of
4. Dropped out of college
   • Left college
5. Computing
   • Information technology
6. Led to the creation of
   • Resulted in the development of
7. Lead to extraordinary achievements
   • Lead to remarkable accomplishments
8. Align with personal interests
   • Match personal passions
9. Fields
   • Sectors
10. Report higher levels of job satisfaction
    • Report higher levels of job contentment
11. Overall well-being compared to
    • General well-being in comparison to
12. Less satisfying roles
    • Less fulfilling positions
13. Critics of the passion-driven approach highlight
    • Opponents of the passion-driven strategy emphasize
14. Financially viable
    • Financially feasible
15. Offer long-term stability
    • Provide enduring security
16. Find it challenging to secure a stable income
    • Struggle to obtain a stable income
17. Highly competitive fields
    • Highly competitive industries
18. In contrast
    • Conversely
19. Possibly less exciting
    • Potentially less stimulating
20. Job security and financial stability
    • Employment security and financial consistency
21. According to
    • As stated by
22. Projected to grow substantially over the next decade
    • Expected to expand significantly over the next ten years
23. Similarly
    • Likewise
24. Qualifications
    • Credentials
25. Data analysis
    • Statistical analysis
26. Employability
    • Job marketability
27. Career prospects
    • Career opportunities
28. Recognizes economic factors and the long-term viability of a chosen career path
    • Considers financial aspects and the future sustainability of a career choice
29. Pursuing a career based on personal passion
    • Choosing a profession based on personal passion
30. A realistic approach
    • A practical approach
31. Market trends
    • Industry trends
32. Financial stability better ensures long-term career success and security
    • Financial security more effectively guarantees long-term career success and stability
33. Prioritize practical considerations
    • Emphasize practical factors
34. Incorporating
    • Integrating
35. A more balanced manner
    • A more nuanced approach

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ðə dɪˈbeɪt ˈəʊvə ˈwɛðə

ˈfɒləʊ ðeə ˈpæʃᵊn

sɪˈlɛktɪŋ ə kəˈrɪə

əˈdɒpt ə mɔː præɡˈmætɪk əˈprəʊʧ

ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˈpɜːtɪnənt

ə ˈwaɪzər ˈɒpʃᵊn tuː

prəˈvaɪd fɔː ðə ˈfjuːʧə

prəˈpəʊnənts ɒv

ˈkruːʃᵊl fɔː ˈlɒŋtɜːm kəˈrɪə səkˈsɛs

beɪst ɒn

ˈhaɪə ˈlɛvᵊlz ɒv ˌməʊtɪˈveɪʃᵊn ænd kəˈmɪtmənt

kənˈsɪdə ðə keɪs ɒv

drɒpt aʊt ɒv ˈkɒlɪʤ

kəmˈpjuːtɪŋ

lɛd tuː ðə kriˈeɪʃᵊn ɒv

liːd tuː ɪkˈstrɔːdᵊnᵊri əˈʧiːvmənts

əˈlaɪn wɪð ˈpɜːsᵊnᵊl ˈɪntrɛsts

fiːldz

rɪˈpɔːt ˈhaɪə ˈlɛvᵊlz ɒv ʤɒb ˌsætɪsˈfækʃᵊn

ˌəʊvəˈrɔːl ˌwɛlˈbiːɪŋ kəmˈpeəd tuː

lɛs ˈsætɪsfaɪɪŋ rəʊlz

ˈkrɪtɪks ɒv ðə ˈpæʃᵊn-ˈdrɪvᵊn əˈprəʊʧ ˈhaɪlaɪt

faɪˈnænʃᵊli ˈvaɪəbᵊl

ˈɒfə ˈlɒŋtɜːm stəˈbɪləti

faɪnd ɪt ˈʧælɪnʤɪŋ tuː sɪˈkjʊər ə ˈsteɪbᵊl ˈɪnkʌm

ˈhaɪli kəmˈpɛtɪtɪv fiːldz

ɪn ˈkɒntrɑːst

ˈpɒsəbli lɛs ɪkˈsaɪtɪŋ

ʤɒb sɪˈkjʊərəti ænd faɪˈnænʃᵊl stəˈbɪləti

əˈkɔːdɪŋ tuː

prəˈʤɛktɪd tuː ɡrəʊ səbˈstænʃᵊli ˈəʊvə ðə nɛkst ˈdɛkeɪd

ˈsɪmɪləli

ˌkwɒlɪfɪˈkeɪʃᵊnz

ˈdeɪtə əˈnæləsɪs

ɪmˌplɔɪəˈbɪləti

kəˈrɪə ˈprɒspɛkts

ˈrɛkəɡnaɪzɪz ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˈfæktəz ænd ðə ˈlɒŋtɜːm ˌvaɪəˈbɪləti ɒv ə ˈʧəʊzᵊn kəˈrɪə pɑːθ

pəˈsjuːɪŋ ə kəˈrɪə beɪst ɒn ˈpɜːsᵊnᵊl ˈpæʃᵊn

ə ˌrɪəˈlɪstɪk əˈprəʊʧ

ˈmɑːkɪt trɛndz

faɪˈnænʃᵊl stəˈbɪləti ˈbɛtər ɪnˈʃɔːz ˈlɒŋtɜːm kəˈrɪə səkˈsɛs ænd sɪˈkjʊərəti

praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz ˈpræktɪkᵊl kənˌsɪdəˈreɪʃᵊnz

ɪnˈkɔːpᵊreɪtɪŋ

ə mɔː ˈbælᵊnst ˈmænə

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Today, t_________________________r young people should f______________________n when s___________________r or a___________________________________h is i_____________________t. In my opinion, it is a______________________o select an occupation that is most likely to p________________e.

P________________f pursuing one’s passion argue that job satisfaction is c_______________________________s. When young individuals choose careers b________n their interests, they are likely to experience h____________________________________t. C_____________________f Steve Jobs, who famously d_______________e to pursue his interest in c__________. His passion for technology l______________________f Apple Inc., demonstrating how following one’s passion can l__________________________________-s. As one grows older, jobs that a________________________s can contribute to a more fulfilling life. A study conducted by the American Psychological Association revealed that individuals who work in f_____s they are passionate about r________________________________-n and o________________________o those in l__________________s.

C___________________________________________t that not all interests are f______________e or o___________________y. For example, a young person with a passion for arts may f_________________________________________e, especially in h_________________s. I_________-t, pursuing a career in fields like engineering or medicine, while p__________________g to some, often provides greater j_________________________________y. A__________o the Bureau of Labor Statistics, careers in engineering are p_______________________________________________e, offering quality job opportunities and security. S__________y, a passion for environmental science might lead to additional q_____________s in d________________s to increase e____________y and c_____________________s. Therefore, a pragmatic approach r________________________________________________________________________________h.

In conclusion, while p_____________________________________n has its advantages, a______________________h that considers m________________s and f______________________________________________y. Therefore, young people should p_________________________s when choosing their careers, even if it means i____________g their interests in a_______________________r.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

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https://www.rd.com/list/dangerous-jobs-around-world/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work

Do you like your job?

What do you find most interesting about your work/job?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

Some people say that individuals should change jobs during their working life often while others believe that doing the same job has advantages to individuals, companies, and society.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS Essay: Financial Matters

by Dave | Aug 21, 2024 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of financial matters.

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IELTS Essay: Financial Matters

In numerous nations, there is a growing trend for individuals to frequently discuss financial matters, such as their earnings or expenditures, in everyday conversation.

What are the reasons behind this phenomenon?

Is it advantageous or detrimental?

There is an increasing tendency for individuals in the modern world to openly discuss their finances in daily conversation. In my opinion, this is a result of a general lack of self-awareness and is decidedly negative given the opportunity cost it engenders.

The primary reason many people today are prone to talk about their financial dealings originates in society generally. In the past, a sense of modesty or concern for decorum might have compelled reticence. Today, some of the most widely discussed topics in the media, online, in film, and in literature concern cryptocurrencies, the real estate market, stock equities, the price of gold, and other investments. A person discussing these matters is likely only interested in subtle boasting or venting frustrations without awareness of the emotions or engagement of their interlocutor. The result over time has been that many people have developed a shameless habit.

In my view, discussion finances often precludes a number of more worthwhile topics of conversation. Since the majority of useful financial research can be conducted online or done in professional settings, there are more pressing areas that should be discussed in daily life. For example, two friends having a conversation at a cafe would derive greater value from telling stories, joking with one another, or delving into a more serious topic related to politics, the arts, or psychology. Such discussions are likely to develop their understanding of the world and their emotional intelligence. Discussion of money, on the other hand, wastes valuable time and energy for little concrete outcome.

In conclusion, the inclination to speak of one’s personal finances stems from a fundamentally modern self-indulgence and often prevents the discussion of more enjoyable or meaningful topics. Naturally, these generalizations do not apply to all individuals.

Analysis

1. There is an increasing tendency for individuals in the modern world to openly discuss their finances in daily conversation. 2. In my opinion, this is a result of a general lack of self-awareness and is decidedly negative given the opportunity cost it engenders.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. The primary reason many people today are prone to talk about their financial dealings originates in society generally. 2. In the past, a sense of modesty or concern for decorum might have compelled reticence. 3. Today, some of the most widely discussed topics in the media, online, in film, and in literature concern cryptocurrencies, the real estate market, stock equities, the price of gold, and other investments. 4. A person discussing these matters is likely only interested in subtle boasting or venting frustrations without awareness of the emotions or engagement of their interlocutor. 5. The result over time has been that many people have developed a shameless habit.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.
5. Better to have more detail.

1. In my view, discussion finances often precludes a number of more worthwhile topics of conversation. 2. Since the majority of useful financial research can be conducted online or done in professional settings, there are more pressing areas that should be discussed in daily life. 3. For example, two friends having a conversation at a cafe would derive greater value from telling stories, joking with one another, or delving into a more serious topic related to politics, the arts, or psychology. 4. Such discussions are likely to develop their understanding of the world and their emotional intelligence. 5. Discussion of money, on the other hand, wastes valuable time and energy for little concrete outcome.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.

1. In conclusion, the inclination to speak of one’s personal finances stems from a fundamentally modern self-indulgence and often prevents the discussion of more enjoyable or meaningful topics. 2. Naturally, these generalizations do not apply to all individuals.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

There is an increasing tendency for individuals in the modern world to openly discuss their finances in daily conversation. In my opinion, this is a result of a general lack of self-awareness and is decidedly negative given the opportunity cost it engenders.

The primary reason many people today are prone to talk about their financial dealings originates in society generally. In the past, a sense of modesty or concern for decorum might have compelled reticence. Today, some of the most widely discussed topics in the media, online, in film, and in literature concern cryptocurrencies, the real estate market, stock equities, the price of gold, and other investments. A person discussing these matters is likely only interested in subtle boasting or venting frustrations without awareness of the emotions or engagement of their interlocutor. The result over time has been that many people have developed a shameless habit.

In my view, discussion finances often precludes a number of more worthwhile topics of conversation. Since the majority of useful financial research can be conducted online or done in professional settings, there are more pressing areas that should be discussed in daily life. For example, two friends having a conversation at a cafe would derive greater value from telling stories, joking with one another, or delving into a more serious topic related to politics, the arts, or psychology. Such discussions are likely to develop their understanding of the world and their emotional intelligence. Discussion of money, on the other hand, wastes valuable time and energy for little concrete outcome.

In conclusion, the inclination to speak of one’s personal finances stems from a fundamentally modern self-indulgence and often prevents the discussion of more enjoyable or meaningful topics. Naturally, these generalizations do not apply to all individuals.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

Here are synonyms for each line:

1. There is an increasing tendency for

• There is a growing inclination for

1. in the modern world

• in contemporary society

1. openly discuss their finances in daily conversation

• candidly talk about their financial matters in everyday discussions

1. this is a result of

• this is due to

1. general lack of self-awareness

• overall deficiency in self-awareness

1. decidedly negative given the opportunity cost it engenders

• distinctly disadvantageous considering the opportunity cost it creates

1. prone

• inclined

1. financial dealings originates in society generally

• financial transactions stem from societal norms

1. a sense of modesty

• an air of humility

1. concern for decorum
   • regard for propriety
2. compelled reticence
   • enforced restraint
3. most widely discussed topics
   • most frequently talked-about subjects
4. media
   • press
5. cryptocurrencies
   • digital currencies
6. real estate market
   • property market
7. stock equities
   • shares
8. investments
   • financial placements
9. matters
   • issues
10. subtle boasting
    • understated bragging
11. venting frustrations
    • expressing discontent
12. awareness
    • consciousness
13. engagement
    • involvement
14. interlocutor
    • conversation partner
15. The result over time has been that
    • Consequently, over time
16. developed a shameless habit
    • acquired an unabashed practice
17. precludes
    • prevents
18. worthwhile
    • valuable
19. the majority of
    • most
20. financial research
    • economic analysis
21. conducted
    • performed
22. professional settings
    • work environments
23. pressing areas
    • urgent issues
24. derive greater value from
    • gain more benefit from
25. delving into
    • exploring
26. develop their understanding of the world
    • enhance their comprehension of the world
27. emotional intelligence
    • emotional acuity
28. wastes valuable time and energy for little concrete outcome
    • squanders precious time and effort with minimal tangible results
29. inclination
    • tendency
30. stems from a fundamentally modern self-indulgence
    • arises from a fundamentally contemporary self-gratification
31. prevents
    • hinders
32. meaningful
    • significant
33. Naturally
    • Obviously
34. generalizations
    • broad statements

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ðeər ɪz ən ɪnˈkriːsɪŋ ˈtɛndənsi fɔː

ɪn ðə ˈmɒdᵊn wɜːld

ˈəʊpᵊnli dɪˈskʌs ðeə ˈfaɪnænsɪz ɪn ˈdeɪli ˌkɒnvəˈseɪʃᵊn

ðɪs ɪz ə rɪˈzʌlt ɒv

ˈʤɛnᵊrᵊl læk ɒv sɛlf-əˈweənəs

dɪˈsaɪdɪdli ˈnɛɡətɪv ˈɡɪvᵊn ði ˌɒpəˈʧuːnəti kɒst ɪt ɪnˈʤɛndəz

prəʊn

faɪˈnænʃᵊl ˈdiːlɪŋz əˈrɪʤɪneɪts ɪn səˈsaɪəti ˈʤɛnᵊrᵊli

ə sɛns ɒv ˈmɒdɪsti

kənˈsɜːn fɔː dɪˈkɔːrəm

kəmˈpɛld ˈrɛtɪsᵊns

məʊst ˈwaɪdli dɪˈskʌst ˈtɒpɪks

ˈmiːdiə

ˈkrɪptəʊˌkʌrᵊnsiz

rɪəl ɪˈsteɪt ˈmɑːkɪt

stɒk ˈɛkwɪtiz

ɪnˈvɛstmənts

ˈmætəz

ˈsʌtᵊl ˈbəʊstɪŋ

ˈvɛntɪŋ frʌsˈtreɪʃᵊnz

əˈweənəs

ɪnˈɡeɪʤmənt

ˌɪntəˈlɒkjətə

ðə rɪˈzʌlt ˈəʊvə taɪm hæz biːn ðæt

dɪˈvɛləpt ə ˈʃeɪmləs ˈhæbɪt

prɪˈkluːdz

ˌwɜːθˈwaɪl

ðə məˈʤɒrəti ɒv

faɪˈnænʃᵊl rɪˈsɜːʧ

kənˈdʌktɪd

prəˈfɛʃᵊnᵊl ˈsɛtɪŋz

ˈprɛsɪŋ ˈeəriəz

dɪˈraɪv ˈɡreɪtə ˈvæljuː frɒm

ˈdɛlvɪŋ ˈɪntuː

dɪˈvɛləp ðeər ˌʌndəˈstændɪŋ ɒv ðə wɜːld

ɪˈməʊʃᵊnᵊl ɪnˈtɛlɪʤᵊns

weɪsts ˈvæljəbᵊl taɪm ænd ˈɛnəʤi fɔː ˈlɪtᵊl ˈkɒŋkriːt ˈaʊtkʌm

ˌɪnklɪˈneɪʃᵊn

stɛmz frɒm ə ˌfʌndəˈmɛntᵊli ˈmɒdᵊn ˌsɛlfɪnˈdʌlʤᵊns

prɪˈvɛnts

ˈmiːnɪŋfᵊl

ˈnæʧᵊrᵊli

ˌʤɛnᵊrᵊlaɪˈzeɪʃᵊnz

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

T___________________________r individuals i_________________d to o_____________________________________________n. In my opinion, t______________________f a g__________________________s and is d______________________________________________s.

The primary reason many people today are p__e to talk about their f______________s o____________________________y. In the past, a__________________________y or c________________m might have c_______________e. Today, some of the m_________________________s in the m_____a, online, in film, and in literature concern c______________________s, the r________________________t, s____________s, the price of gold, and other i___________s. A person discussing these m_______s is likely only interested in s__________g or v_________________s without a______________s of the emotions or e____________t of their i_____________r. T______________________________t many people have d_______________________t.

In my view, discussion finances often p_________s a number of more w____________e topics of conversation. Since t_________________f useful f______________h can be c__________d online or done in p______________s, there are more p____________s that should be discussed in daily life. For example, two friends having a conversation at a cafe would d_________________________m telling stories, joking with one another, or d___________o a more serious topic related to politics, the arts, or psychology. Such discussions are likely to d________________________________________d and their e____________________e. Discussion of money, on the other hand, w_____________________________________________________e.

In conclusion, the i____________n to speak of one’s personal finances s________________________________________e and often p_________s the discussion of more enjoyable or m__________l topics. N___________y, these g________________s do not apply to all individuals.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.bogleheads.org/#:~:text=Bogleheads.org%20%E2%80%93%20Investing%20advice%20inspired%20by%20John%20Bogle&text=The%20Bogleheads%C2%AE%20emphasize%20starting,plan%20regardless%20of%20market%20conditions.

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work-life balance (IELTS Speaking Part 3)

Question 1: What kinds of jobs do young people not want to do in your country?

Question 2: Who is best at advising young people about choosing a job: teachers or parents?

Question 3: Is money always the most important thing when choosing a job?

Question 4: Do you agree that most people nowadays are under pressure to work longer hours and take less holiday?

Question 5: What is the impact on society of people having a poor work-life balance?

Question 6: Could you recommend some effective strategies for governments and employers to ensure people have a good work-life balance?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

IELTS Essay: Having Children at an Older Age

by Dave | Jul 29, 2024 | Real Past Tests

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of having children at an older age and the reasons and advantages and disadvantages of this.

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IELTS Essay: Having Children at an Older Age

Some people choose to have their first child at an older age.

What are the reasons?

Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, an increasing number of individuals have opted to start their families later in life. This trend raises the question of why more people are choosing to have their first child at an older age and whether the benefits of doing so justify the drawbacks.

One of the primary reasons for delaying parenthood is the pursuit of career stability in a worrying economic climate. In today’s competitive job market, many individuals, particularly women, prefer to establish themselves professionally before starting a family. By focusing on their careers in their twenties and early thirties, they can achieve financial security and attain higher positions, which often translates to job satisfaction and greater resources for their future children. This growing trend is reflected in how mainstream society now places significant emphasis on personal development and achieving personal goals before embarking on parenthood. For that reason, many young adults prioritize their own personal and financial welfare, a situation that engenders an atmosphere less conducive to having children early in life.

There are legitimate disadvantages connected with having children later in life. One of the primary concerns is the potential health risks for both the mother and the child. Advanced maternal age is often associated with a higher risk of complications such as gestational diabetes, hypertension, and chromosomal abnormalities. However, despite these drawbacks, the advantages of having children later in life due to greater maturity overshadow the hypothetical drawbacks. The emotional maturity and life experience that older parents bring to child-rearing can result in a more stable and nurturing environment. Older parents are likely to be more financially secure and better prepared to provide for their children’s education and well-being. The ability to make well-considered decisions and the patience developed over time can contribute to a more thoughtful and deliberate approach to parenting.

In conclusion, while there are valid concerns regarding the health risks associated with having children later in life, the benefits, such as financial stability, emotional maturity, and better preparation for parenthood, outweigh these disadvantages. As societal norms and medical advancements continue to evolve, the trend of delaying parenthood is likely to remain prevalent, reflecting the changing priorities and values of modern individuals.

Analysis

1. In recent years, an increasing number of individuals have opted to start their families later in life. 2. This trend raises the question of why more people are choosing to have their first child at an older age and whether the benefits of doing so justify the drawbacks.

1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. One of the primary reasons for delaying parenthood is the pursuit of career stability in a worrying economic climate. 2. In today’s competitive job market, many individuals, particularly women, prefer to establish themselves professionally before starting a family. 3. By focusing on their careers in their twenties and early thirties, they can achieve financial security and attain higher positions, which often translates to job satisfaction and greater resources for their future children. 4. This growing trend is reflected in how mainstream society now places significant emphasis on personal development and achieving personal goals before embarking on parenthood. 5. For that reason, many young adults prioritize their own personal and financial welfare, a situation that engenders an atmosphere less conducive to having children early in life.

1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
2. Explain your main idea.
3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
4. Keep developing it fully.
5. Better to have more detail.

1. There are legitimate disadvantages connected with having children later in life. 2. One of the primary concerns is the potential health risks for both the mother and the child. 3. Advanced maternal age is often associated with a higher risk of complications such as gestational diabetes, hypertension, and chromosomal abnormalities. 4. However, despite these drawbacks, the advantages of having children later in life due to greater maturity overshadow the hypothetical drawbacks. 5. The emotional maturity and life experience that older parents bring to child-rearing can result in a more stable and nurturing environment. 6. Older parents are likely to be more financially secure and better prepared to provide for their children’s education and well-being. 7. The ability to make well-considered decisions and the patience developed over time can contribute to a more thoughtful and deliberate approach to parenting.

1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
2. Explain your new main idea.
3. Include specific details and examples.
4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
5. Don’t overuse linking phrases to start sentences.
6. Make your examples very specific and detailed.
7. This essay is a bit long – aim for about 275 words.

1. In conclusion, while there are valid concerns regarding the health risks associated with having children later in life, the benefits, such as financial stability, emotional maturity, and better preparation for parenthood, outweigh these disadvantages. 2. As societal norms and medical advancements continue to evolve, the trend of delaying parenthood is likely to remain prevalent, reflecting the changing priorities and values of modern individuals.

1. Summarise your main ideas.
2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

In recent years, an increasing number of individuals have opted to start their families later in life. This trend raises the question of why more people are choosing to have their first child at an older age and whether the benefits of doing so justify the drawbacks.

One of the primary reasons for delaying parenthood is the pursuit of career stability in a worrying economic climate. In today’s competitive job market, many individuals, particularly women, prefer to establish themselves professionally before starting a family. By focusing on their careers in their twenties and early thirties, they can achieve financial security and attain higher positions, which often translates to job satisfaction and greater resources for their future children. This growing trend is reflected in how mainstream society now places significant emphasis on personal development and achieving personal goals before embarking on parenthood. For that reason, many young adults prioritize their own personal and financial welfare, a situation that engenders an atmosphere less conducive to having children early in life.

There are legitimate disadvantages connected with having children later in life. One of the primary concerns is the potential health risks for both the mother and the child. Advanced maternal age is often associated with a higher risk of complications such as gestational diabetes, hypertension, and chromosomal abnormalities. However, despite these drawbacks, the advantages of having children later in life due to greater maturity overshadow the hypothetical drawbacks. The emotional maturity and life experience that older parents bring to child-rearing can result in a more stable and nurturing environment. Older parents are likely to be more financially secure and better prepared to provide for their children’s education and well-being. The ability to make well-considered decisions and the patience developed over time can contribute to a more thoughtful and deliberate approach to parenting.

In conclusion, while there are valid concerns regarding the health risks associated with having children later in life, the benefits, such as financial stability, emotional maturity, and better preparation for parenthood, outweigh these disadvantages. As societal norms and medical advancements continue to evolve, the trend of delaying parenthood is likely to remain prevalent, reflecting the changing priorities and values of modern individuals.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

Certainly! Here’s a rephrased version of each line using synonyms or alternative phrases:

1. In recent years, an increasing number of
   In recent times, a growing number of
2. opted to start
   chose to begin
3. later in life
   at a more advanced age
4. This trend raises the question of why
   This phenomenon prompts the inquiry into why
5. at an older age
   in later years
6. justify
   explain
7. One of the primary reasons for delaying parenthood
   A key factor for postponing parenthood
8. pursuit of career stability in a worrying economic climate
   quest for job security in an uncertain economic environment
9. today’s competitive job market
   the current cutthroat employment landscape
10. prefer to establish themselves professionally
    choose to secure their professional standing
11. focusing on their careers
    concentrating on their professional lives
12. achieve financial security
    attain economic stability
13. attain higher positions
    reach elevated roles
14. translates
    equates
15. job satisfaction
    employment fulfillment
16. greater resources
    increased assets
17. This growing trend is reflected in how mainstream society
    This rising pattern is evident in how mainstream culture
18. places significant emphasis on personal development
    emphasizes individual growth
19. achieving personal goals
    reaching personal objectives
20. embarking on parenthood
    starting a family
21. For that reason
    Consequently
22. prioritize
    focus on
23. financial welfare
    economic well-being
24. situation
    circumstances
25. engenders
    creates
26. atmosphere less conducive to having children early in life
    environment less favorable to early parenthood
27. legitimate disadvantages connected with
    valid drawbacks associated with
28. One of the primary concerns is
    A major concern is
29. potential health risks for
    possible health hazards for
30. Advanced maternal age is often associated with a higher risk of complications
    Older maternal age is frequently linked with increased risk of issues
31. gestational diabetes
    pregnancy-related diabetes
32. hypertension
    high blood pressure
33. chromosomal abnormalities
    genetic disorders
34. despite
    even with
35. due to greater maturity
    because of enhanced maturity
36. hypothetical drawbacks
    theoretical disadvantages
37. emotional maturity
    psychological readiness
38. child-rearing
    parenting
39. result in a more stable and nurturing environment
    lead to a more secure and supportive setting
40. financially secure
    economically stable
41. provide for their children’s education and well-being
    support their children’s education and welfare
42. make well-considered decisions
    make thoughtful choices
43. patience developed over time can contribute to
    experience gained over time can aid in
44. thoughtful
    considerate
45. deliberate approach
    intentional strategy
46. valid concerns regarding
    legitimate worries about
47. health risks associated with
    health hazards linked to
48. financial stability
    economic security
49. emotional maturity
    psychological development
50. better preparation for parenthood
    improved readiness for raising children
51. As societal norms and medical advancements continue to evolve
    As societal standards and healthcare progress keep changing
52. trend
    pattern
53. delaying parenthood
    postponing starting a family
54. remain prevalent
    continue to be widespread
55. reflecting the changing priorities and values of modern individuals
    mirroring the evolving priorities and values of contemporary people

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ɪn ˈriːsᵊnt jɪəz, ən ɪnˈkriːsɪŋ ˈnʌmbər ɒv

ˈɒptɪd tuː stɑːt

ˈleɪtər ɪn laɪf

ðɪs trɛnd ˈreɪzɪz ðə ˈkwɛsʧən ɒv waɪ

æt ən ˈəʊldər eɪʤ

ˈʤʌstɪfaɪ

wʌn ɒv ðə ˈpraɪmᵊri ˈriːzᵊnz fɔː dɪˈleɪɪŋ ˈpeərᵊnthʊd

pəˈsjuːt ɒv kəˈrɪə stəˈbɪləti ɪn ə ˈwʌriɪŋ ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˈklaɪmət

təˈdeɪz kəmˈpɛtɪtɪv ʤɒb ˈmɑːkɪt

priˈfɜː tuː ɪˈstæblɪʃ ðəmˈsɛlvz prəˈfɛʃᵊnᵊli

ˈfəʊkəsɪŋ ɒn ðeə kəˈrɪəz

əˈʧiːv faɪˈnænʃᵊl sɪˈkjʊərəti

əˈteɪn ˈhaɪə pəˈzɪʃᵊnz

trænzˈleɪts

ʤɒb ˌsætɪsˈfækʃᵊn

ˈɡreɪtə rɪˈzɔːsɪz

ðɪs ˈɡrəʊɪŋ trɛnd ɪz rɪˈflɛktɪd ɪn haʊ ˈmeɪnstriːm səˈsaɪəti

ˈpleɪsɪz sɪɡˈnɪfɪkᵊnt ˈɛmfəsɪs ɒn ˈpɜːsᵊnᵊl dɪˈvɛləpmənt

əˈʧiːvɪŋ ˈpɜːsᵊnᵊl ɡəʊlz

ɪmˈbɑːkɪŋ ɒn ˈpeərᵊnthʊd

fɔː ðæt ˈriːzᵊn

praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz

faɪˈnænʃᵊl ˈwɛlfeə

ˌsɪʧuˈeɪʃᵊn

ɪnˈʤɛndəz

ˈætməsfɪə lɛs kənˈdjuːsɪv tuː ˈhævɪŋ ˈʧɪldrən ˈɜːli ɪn laɪf

lɪˈʤɪtɪmɪt ˌdɪsədˈvɑːntɪʤɪz kəˈnɛktɪd wɪð

wʌn ɒv ðə ˈpraɪmᵊri kənˈsɜːnz ɪz

pəˈtɛnʃᵊl hɛlθ rɪsks fɔː

ədˈvɑːnst məˈtɜːnᵊl eɪʤ ɪz ˈɒfᵊn əˈsəʊsieɪtɪd wɪð ə ˈhaɪə rɪsk ɒv ˌkɒmplɪˈkeɪʃᵊnz

ʤɛsˈteɪʃᵊnᵊl ˌdaɪəˈbiːtiːz

ˌhaɪpəˈtɛnʃᵊn

chromosomal ˌæbnɔːˈmælətiz

dɪˈspaɪt

djuː tuː ˈɡreɪtə məˈʧʊərəti

ˌhaɪpəˈθɛtɪkᵊl ˈdrɔːbæks

ɪˈməʊʃᵊnᵊl məˈʧʊərəti

ʧaɪld-ˈrɪərɪŋ

rɪˈzʌlt ɪn ə mɔː ˈsteɪbᵊl ænd ˈnɜːʧərɪŋ ɪnˈvaɪrᵊnmənt

faɪˈnænʃᵊli sɪˈkjʊə

prəˈvaɪd fɔː ðeə ˈʧɪldrənz ˌɛʤʊˈkeɪʃᵊn ænd ˌwɛlˈbiːɪŋ

meɪk wɛl-kənˈsɪdəd dɪˈsɪʒᵊnz

ˈpeɪʃᵊns dɪˈvɛləpt ˈəʊvə taɪm kæn kənˈtrɪbjuːt tuː

ˈθɔːtfᵊl

dɪˈlɪbərɪt əˈprəʊʧ

ˈvælɪd kənˈsɜːnz rɪˈɡɑːdɪŋ

hɛlθ rɪsks əˈsəʊsieɪtɪd wɪð

faɪˈnænʃᵊl stəˈbɪləti

ɪˈməʊʃᵊnᵊl məˈʧʊərəti

ˈbɛtə ˌprɛpᵊrˈeɪʃᵊn fɔː ˈpeərᵊnthʊd

æz səˈsaɪətᵊl nɔːmz ænd ˈmɛdɪkᵊl ədˈvɑːnsmənts kənˈtɪnjuː tuː ɪˈvɒlv

trɛnd

dɪˈleɪɪŋ ˈpeərᵊnthʊd

rɪˈmeɪn ˈprɛvᵊlənt

rɪˈflɛktɪŋ ðə ˈʧeɪnʤɪŋ praɪˈɒrətiz ænd ˈvæljuːz ɒv ˈmɒdᵊn ˌɪndɪˈvɪʤuəlz

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

I______________s, a__________________f individuals have o___________t their families l___________e. T______________________________________y more people are choosing to have their first child a______________e and whether the benefits of doing so j______y the drawbacks.

O_______________________________________d is the p________________________________________________________________e. In t________________________________t, many individuals, particularly women, p_____________________________________________y before starting a family. By f________________________s in their twenties and early thirties, they can a______________________y and a_____________________________-s, which often t__________s to j____________n and g__________________s for their future children. T_______________________________________________________________y now p_______________________________________________t and a_______________________s before e________________d. F______________-n, many young adults p__________e their own personal and f________________e, a s__________n that e_______________s an a________________________________________________e.

There are l____________________________________h having children later in life. O_________________________s the p___________________________r both the mother and the child. A_____________________________________________________________________s such as g________________s, h_____________n, and c______________________________________s. However, d_______e these drawbacks, the advantages of having children later in life d_________________________________y overshadow the h___________________s. The e_________________y and life experience that older parents bring to c_____________g can r_______________________________t. Older parents are likely to be more f______________-e and better prepared to p_______________________________________g. The ability to m________________________s and the p_______________________________o a more t______________l and d______________h to parenting.

In conclusion, while there are v_______________________________g the h_____________________________h having children later in life, the benefits, such as f__________________y, e__________________y, and b__________________________________d, outweigh these disadvantages. A________________________________________________________________e, the t_____d of d___________________________________d is likely to r____________________t, r___________________________________________________s.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://kidshealth.org/en/parents/nine-steps.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Bringing Up Children (IELTS Speaking Part 3)

Question 1: Do you think that parents should make all decisions for their children?

Question 2: At what age do you think children can be trusted to make their own decisions?

Question 3: What are some of the biggest challenges that parents face when raising children?

Question 4: Do you think that parents today face different challenges than parents did in the past? Why or why not?

Question 5: What do you think are some of the most important things that parents can do to help their children grow up to be responsible and successful adults?

Question 6: In your opinion, what are some of the most effective discipline techniques for children?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children.

To what extent do you agree?