IELTS Writing Sample Correction: Online Learning and Laws

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IELTS Writing Sample Correction: Online Learning and Laws

Here is a sample of a recent writing correction that I did – the essay is around band 7 but with some room for improvement.

Check it out and let me know what you think in the comments below!

Dave

Here is the corrected document as well:

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  1. mg on September 22, 2022 at 2:08 am

    hi, Dave If 2 main body paragraphs are targeting on advantages of online learning, rather than one advantage and one disadvantage. Is it good as well ?

    • Dave on September 22, 2022 at 7:27 am

      Sure, for an agree/disagree question, that approach is fine!

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