Here is a sample of a recent writing correction that I did – the essay is around band 7 but with some room for improvement.
Check it out and let me know what you think in the comments below!
Dave
Here is the corrected document as well:
IELTS Writing Sample Correction: Online Learning and Laws
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hi, Dave If 2 main body paragraphs are targeting on advantages of online learning, rather than one advantage and one disadvantage. Is it good as well ?
Sure, for an agree/disagree question, that approach is fine!