This is an IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer on the topic of internet and phone dependence from the real IELTS exam/test.
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IELTS Writing Task 2 General Training: Internet & Phone Dependence (Real Past IELTS Tests/Exams)
More and more people today are becoming overly dependent on the internet and phones.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Real Past IELTS Tests/Exams
The advent of smartphones has led to widespread internet addiction. Although this shift has its conveniences, it signals a decline in healthy activity.
Those who contend that the overall value of phones and the internet is a net positive can easily point to its versatility. The vast majority of people today would either reluctantly or enthusiastically admit they cannot live without their phones. If you are on a road trip or meeting a friend at a new cafe, you will need Google maps to find your way. The best method of booking a restaurant or researching online and offline businesses is through Facebook. All that only touches the surface of what the internet allows for ranging from sending emails, trading stocks online, posting on social media, to binge watching videos on streaming sites.
Despite the pile of advantages listed above, phones and the internet take up more time than they merit. The reason for this is that people get stuck in feedback loops, exchanging their time for momentary bursts of dopamine, no different from any other drug addict. Before the internet an individual might waste time watching television but still engage in a greater proportion of healthy habits like hanging out with friends, reading books, making art, exercising or taking up another worthwhile hobby. The healthy rush from those activities is chemically identical to scrolling through an algorithm mindlessly. The only distinction is that some distractions have more value in terms of physical and mental health than others.
In conclusion, the ubiquity of an internet living in your pocket has led to a decrease in engagement with healthy activities. In order to remedy this, people must take it on themselves to break their dependence as no government will ever regulate this drug properly.
Analysis
1. The advent of smartphones has led to widespread internet addiction. 2. Although this shift has its conveniences, it signals a decline in healthy activity.
- Paraphrase the overall topic of the whole essay.
- Give your opinion – choose a side and make it clear!
1. Those who contend that the overall value of phones and the internet is a net positive can easily point to its versatility. 2. The vast majority of people today would either reluctantly or enthusiastically admit they cannot live without their phones. 3. If you are on a road trip or meeting a friend at a new cafe, you will need Google maps to find your way. 4. The best method of booking a restaurant or researching online and offline businesses is through Facebook. 5. All that only touches the surface of what the internet allows for ranging from sending emails, trading stocks online, posting on social media, to binge watching videos on streaming sites.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end of the sentence.
- Explain your main idea.
- Begin to develop it with specific examples.
- Keep developing it and be as specific as possible – real companies, real situations.
- Add in more support. For the internet, there are so many areas to touch on so I listed a lot of them at the end.
1. Despite the pile of advantages listed above, phones and the internet take up more time than they merit. 2. The reason for this is that people get stuck in feedback loops, exchanging their time for momentary bursts of dopamine, no different from any other drug addict. 3. Before the internet an individual might waste time watching television but still engage in a greater proportion of healthy habits like hanging out with friends, reading books, making art, exercising or taking up another worthwhile hobby. 4. The healthy rush from those activities is chemically identical to scrolling through an algorithm mindlessly. 5. The only distinction is that some distractions have more value in terms of physical and mental health than others.
- Another topic sentence with a clear main idea.
- Explain your main idea.
- Again – be as specific as you can with your supporting ideas and examples.
- Continue developing the same main idea and don’t swtich to a new main idea.
- Conclude your paragraph by drawing conclusions/results from your main idea.
1. In conclusion, the ubiquity of an internet living in your pocket has led to a decrease in engagement with healthy activities. 2. In order to remedy this, people must take it on themselves to break their dependence as no government will ever regulate this drug properly.
- Repeat your opinion.
- Add in an extra detail/final thought to finish the essay.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?
The advent of smartphones has led to widespread internet addiction. Although this shift has its conveniences, it signals a decline in healthy activity.
Those who contend that the overall value of phones and the internet is a net positive can easily point to its versatility. The vast majority of people today would either reluctantly or enthusiastically admit they cannot live without their phones. If you are on a road trip or meeting a friend at a new cafe, you will need Google maps to find your way. The best method of booking a restaurant or researching online and offline businesses is through Facebook. All that only touches the surface of what the internet allows for ranging from sending emails, trading stocks online, posting on social media, to binge watching videos on streaming sites.
Despite the pile of advantages listed above, phones and the internet take up more time than they merit. The reason for this is that people get stuck in feedback loops, exchanging their time for momentary bursts of dopamine, no different from any other drug addict. Before the internet an individual might waste time watching television but still engage in a greater proportion of healthy habits like hanging out with friends, reading books, making art, exercising or taking up another worthwhile hobby. The healthy rush from those activities is chemically identical to scrolling through an algorithm mindlessly. The only distinction is that some distractions have more value in terms of physical and mental health than others.
In conclusion, the ubiquity of an internet living in your pocket has led to a decrease in engagement with healthy activities. In order to remedy this, people must take it on themselves to break their dependence as no government will ever regulate this drug properly.
Answers
advent start of
widespread ubiquitous
addiction can’t stop using/dependent on
shift change to
conveniences useful
signals is indicative of
contend argue
net positive overall good
easily point to not hard to argue that
versatility flexible
vast majority most of
reluctantly don’t want to
enthusiastically admit happy to say
cannot live without need
road trip holiday
Google maps app for finding where you’re going
find your way follow directions
booking a restaurant reserve a seat
offline businesses real world shop
touches the surface superficial
ranging from including
trading stocks online selling shares in companies
posting on social media sharing
binge watching watching multiple episodes in a row
streaming sites YouTube, Netflix, Hulu, etc.
pile list/stack up
take up occupy
merit deserve
stuck can’t escape
feedback loops addiction cycle
exchanging trading
momentary bursts small surges
dopamine neurochemical that makes you feel happy
drug addict user
waste time fritter away your life
engage in do/use
greater proportion large percentage of
taking up occupying
worthwhile hobby good use of time
healthy rush sense of accomplishment
chemically identical the same in terms of what you feel from it
scrolling looking through
algorithm mindlessly thoughtlessly scrolling through feeds
distinction what sets it apart
value what it is worth
ubiquity common
remedy fix
take it on themselves take responsibility
dependence rely on
regulate limit
properly correctly
Pronunciation
ˈædvənt
ˈwaɪdsprɛd
əˈdɪkʃ(ə)n
ʃɪft
kənˈviːniənsɪz
ˈsɪgnlz
kənˈtɛnd
nɛt ˈpɒzətɪv
ˈiːzɪli pɔɪnt tuː
ˌvɜːsəˈtɪlɪti
vɑːst məˈʤɒrɪti
rɪˈlʌktəntli
ɪnˌθjuːzɪˈæstɪk(ə)li ədˈmɪt
ˈkænɒt lɪv wɪˈðaʊt
rəʊd trɪp
ˈguːgəl mæps
faɪnd jɔː weɪ
ˈbʊkɪŋ ə ˈrɛstrɒnt
ˌɒfˈlaɪn ˈbɪznɪsɪz
ˈtʌʧɪz ðə ˈsɜːfɪs
ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm
ˈtreɪdɪŋ stɒks ˈɒnˌlaɪn
ˈpəʊstɪŋ ɒn ˈsəʊʃəl ˈmiːdiə
bɪnʤ ˈwɒʧɪŋ
ˈstriːmɪŋ saɪts
paɪl
teɪk ʌp
ˈmɛrɪt
stʌk
ˈfiːdbæk luːps
ɪksˈʧeɪnʤɪŋ
ˈməʊməntəri bɜːsts
dəʊpəmiːn
drʌg ˈædɪkt
weɪst taɪm
ɪnˈgeɪʤ ɪn
ˈgreɪtə prəˈpɔːʃən
ˈteɪkɪŋ ʌp
ˈwɜːθˈwaɪl ˈhɒbi
ˈhɛlθi rʌʃ
ˈkɛmɪkəli aɪˈdɛntɪkəl
ˈskrəʊlɪŋ
ˈælgərɪðm ˈmaɪndlɪsli
dɪsˈtɪŋkʃən
ˈvæljuː
ju(ː)ˈbɪkwɪti
ˈrɛmɪdi
teɪk ɪt ɒn ðəmˈsɛlvz
dɪˈpɛndəns
ˈrɛgjʊleɪt
ˈprɒpəli
Listen and repeat:
Vocabulary Practice
The a_____________ of smartphones has led to w_____________ internet a_____________. Although this s_____________ has its c_____________, it s_____________ a decline in healthy activity.
Those who c_____________ that the overall value of phones and the internet is a n_____________ can e_____________ its v_____________. The v_____________ of people today would either r_____________ or e_____________ they c_____________ their phones. If you are on a r_____________ or meeting a friend at a new cafe, you will need G_____________ to f_____________. The best method of b_____________ or researching online and o _____________ is through Facebook. All that only t_____________ of what the internet allows for r_____________ sending emails, t_____________, p _____________, to b_____________ videos on s_____________.
Despite the p_____________ of advantages listed above, phones and the internet t_____________ more time than they m_____________. The reason for this is that people get s_____________ in f_____________, e_____________ their time for m_____________ of d_____________, no different from any other d_____________. Before the internet an individual might w_____________ watching television but still e_____________ a g_____________ of healthy habits like hanging out with friends, reading books, making art, exercising or t_____________ another w _____________. The h _____________ from those activities is c_____________ to s_____________ through an a_____________. The only d_____________ is that some distractions have more v_____________ in terms of physical and mental health than others.
In conclusion, the u_____________ of an internet living in your pocket has led to a decrease in engagement with healthy activities. In order to r_____________ this, people must t_____________ to break their d_____________ as no government will ever r_____________ this drug p_____________.
Listen and check:
Listening Practice
Watch the video below to improve your listening. Some tips for how to listen are here:
Reading Practice
Read the article below and use these tips to improve your reading:
https://www.wired.com/story/wired-guide-to-internet-addiction/
Speaking Practice
Use the questions below from the real IELTS speaking test to practice about this topic:
Mobile Phones and Smartphones
- What are the advantages of smartphones?
- Should children be allowed to own smartphones?
- Do you think they have a major or minor impact on mental health?
- Where in your country is it not appropriate to use a phone?
- Do you think smartphone usage may decline in the future?
Is this agree/disagree type?
Yes, basically.
It’s always advisable to write about both sides regardless of the question type so don’t worry much about that.