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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer Essay: Planning for the Future (Real Past IELTS Exam/Test)
Some feel that it is a waste of time to plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Real Past IELTS Exam
There is growing sentiment today that making plans for the future can take one out of the present moment. Although it is important to have some general future goals, individuals ought to prioritise right now.
The clear advantage of having goals is that they dictate and align your actions. A good counter-example to support this comes from aimless individuals without any fixed aspirations. It is not uncommon for recent university graduates to feel lost and drift from job to job. This can be a rewarding experience but if it continues too long then one will likely remain in low-paying positions and fall behind one’s peers. A clear goal can motivate a decision on long-term vocation and force one to put in the hard work required to excel.
Despite the general advantages of having some long-term goals listed above, obsessing over the future can impair connection with the present. There are many famous literary examples of this that reveal underlying tensions between capitalist striving and individual contentment, such as in the famous novel Babbitt by Sinclair Lewis. The titular character Babbitt has spent most of his life looking to the future and accomplishing middle class goals. He grows dissatisfied with this life because he no longer feels a vibrant connection to the present moment and his true feelings. His suspension of his deepest desires to meet extrinsic goals set by society alienates him from the present. This is commonly referred to as a mid-life crisis and is very common among driven individuals who reach a pinnacle of success.
In conclusion, emphasis on future goals is one source of modern unhappiness. Individuals must carefully select their goals to distinguish between the life they want and the life they are expected to want.
Analysis
1. There is growing sentiment today that making plans for the future can take one out of the present moment. 2. Although it is important to have some general future goals, individuals ought to prioritise right now.
- Paraphrase the overall topic for the essay.
- Give a clear opinion.
1. The clear advantage of having goals is that they dictate and align your actions. 2. A good counter-example to support this comes from aimless individuals without any fixed aspirations. 3. It is not uncommon for recent university graduates to feel lost and drift from job to job. 4. This can be a rewarding experience but if it continues too long then one will likely remain in low-paying positions and fall behind one’s peers. 5. A clear goal can motivate a decision on long-term vocation and force one to put in the hard work required to excel.
- Write a clear topic sentence with a main idea at the end.
- Here I use a counter-example to support my argument.
- Develop the example.
- Keep developing it.
- Bring it back to your overall argument for the paragraph.
1. Despite the general advantages of having some long-term goals listed above, obsessing over the future can impair connection with the present. 2. There are many famous literary examples of this that reveal underlying tensions between capitalist striving and individual contentment, such as in the famous novel Babbitt by Sinclair Lewis. 3. The titular character Babbitt has spent most of his life looking to the future and accomplishing middle class goals. 4. He grows dissatisfied with this life because he no longer feels a vibrant connection to the present moment and his true feelings. 5. His suspension of his deepest desires to meet extrinsic goals set by society alienates him from the present. 6. This is commonly referred to as a mid-life crisis and is very common among driven individuals who reach a pinnacle of success.
- Write another clear topic sentence with another main idea at the end.
- Use another example to develop your main idea. Here I use an example from a novel.
- Explain your example fully.
- Keep developing it for the entire paragraph.
- Continue developing it…
- Conclude with a link back to your overall argument.
1. In conclusion, emphasis on future goals is one source of modern unhappiness. 2. Individuals must carefully select their goals to distinguish between the life they want and the life they are expected to want.
- Repeat your opinion.
- Add in a final detail/thought.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?
There is growing sentiment today that making plans for the future can take one out of the present moment. Although it is important to have some general future goals, individuals ought to prioritise right now.
The clear advantage of having goals is that they dictate and align your actions. A good counter-example to support this comes from aimless individuals without any fixed aspirations. It is not uncommon for recent university graduates to feel lost and drift from job to job. This can be a rewarding experience but if it continues too long then one will likely remain in low-paying positions and fall behind one’s peers. A clear goal can motivate a decision on long-term vocation and force one to put in the hard work required to excel.
Despite the general advantages of having some long-term goals listed above, obsessing over the future can impair connection with the present. There are many famous literary examples of this that reveal underlying tensions between capitalist striving and individual contentment, such as in the famous novel Babbitt by Sinclair Lewis. The titular character Babbitt has spent most of his life looking to the future and accomplishing middle class goals. He grows dissatisfied with this life because he no longer feels a vibrant connection to the present moment and his true feelings. His suspension of his deepest desires to meet extrinsic goals set by society alienates him from the present. This is commonly referred to as a mid-life crisis and is very common among driven individuals who reach a pinnacle of success.
In conclusion, emphasis on future goals is one source of modern unhappiness. Individuals must carefully select their goals to distinguish between the life they want and the life they are expected to want.
Answers
growing sentiment increasing opinion about
take one out of remove from
present moment right now
general future goals some plans for the future
prioritise make more important
dictate force
align keep in order
counter-example example showing the opposite case
aimless individuals people without goals
fixed aspirations clear goals
not uncommon common
recent university graduates people who just got out of university/college
drift from job to job no fixed career
rewarding experience fulfilling
low-paying positions bad jobs
fall behind one’s peers lost ground to
long-term vocation career
excel be the best at
general advantages benefits overall
obsessing fixated on
impair connection hurt the relationship between
literary examples from books
underlying tensions problems beneath the surface
capitalist striving trying to make money
individual contentment how fulfilled you are
Babbitt the main character and name of the novel
Sinclair Lewis a write from the 1920s in the United States
titular character character the book is named after
looking to the future anticipating
accomplishing middle class goals making money, having a family, etc.
dissatisfied unhappy with
vibrant connection strong relationship
suspension stopped, cut
deepest desires what you most want
extrinsic goals set by society what others think you should desire
alienates distanced from, resentful of
commonly referred to usually called
mid-life crisis time in life where you feel lost
driven individuals ambitious people
reach a pinnacle of success become the best
emphasis focus on
modern unhappiness discontent today
carefully select choose wisely
distinguish separate
the life they are expected to want what people think they should desire
Pronunciation
Listen and repeat:
ˈgrəʊɪŋ ˈsɛntɪmənt
teɪk wʌn aʊt ɒv
ˈprɛznt ˈməʊmənt
ˈʤɛnərəl ˈfjuːʧə gəʊlz
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz
ˈdɪkteɪt
əˈlaɪn
ˈkaʊntər-ɪgˈzɑːmpl
ˈeɪmlɪs ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəlz
fɪkst ˌæspəˈreɪʃ(ə)nz
nɒt ʌnˈkɒmən
ˈriːsnt ˌjuːnɪˈvɜːsɪti ˈgrædjʊəts
drɪft frɒm ʤɒb tuː ʤɒb
rɪˈwɔːdɪŋ ɪksˈpɪərɪəns
ləʊ-ˈpeɪɪŋ pəˈzɪʃənz
fɔːl bɪˈhaɪnd wʌnz pɪəz
ˈlɒŋtɜːm vəʊˈkeɪʃən
ɪkˈsɛl
ˈʤɛnərəl ədˈvɑːntɪʤɪz
əbˈsɛsɪŋ
ɪmˈpeə kəˈnɛkʃən
ˈlɪtərəri ɪgˈzɑːmplz
ˌʌndəˈlaɪɪŋ ˈtɛnʃənz
ˈkæpɪtəlɪst ˈstraɪvɪŋ
ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəl kənˈtɛntmənt
ˈbæbɪt
sɪn deə ˈlu(ː)ɪs
ˈtɪtjʊlə ˈkærɪktə
ˈlʊkɪŋ tuː ðə ˈfjuːʧə
əˈkɒmplɪʃɪŋ ˈmɪdl klɑːs gəʊlz
ˌdɪsˈsætɪsfaɪd
ˈvaɪbrənt kəˈnɛkʃən
səsˈpɛnʃən
ˈdiːpɪst dɪˈzaɪəz
ɛksˈtrɪnsɪk gəʊlz sɛt baɪ səˈsaɪəti
ˈeɪliəneɪts
ˈkɒmənli rɪˈfɜːd tuː
mɪd-laɪf ˈkraɪsɪs
ˈdrɪvn ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəlz
riːʧ ə ˈpɪnəkl ɒv səkˈsɛs
ˈɛmfəsɪs
ˈmɒdən ʌnˈhæpɪnəs
ˈkeəfli sɪˈlɛkt
dɪsˈtɪŋgwɪʃ
ðə laɪf ðeɪ ɑːr ɪksˈpɛktɪd tuː wɒnt
Vocabulary Practice
Remember and fill in the blanks:
There is g__________________t today that making plans for the future can t____________________f the p_____________________t. Although it is important to have some g__________________s, individuals ought to p______________e right now.
The clear advantage of having goals is that they d________e and a______n your actions. A good c__________________e to support this comes from a_______________________s without any f__________________s. It is n______________________n for r_______________________s to feel lost and d___________________________b. This can be a r________________________e but if it continues too long then one will likely remain in l______________________s and f________________________s. A clear goal can motivate a decision on l__________________________n and force one to put in the hard work required to e_______l.
Despite the g______________________s of having some long-term goals listed above, o______________g over the future can i_____________________n with the present. There are many famous l______________________s of this that reveal u______________________s between c_____________________g and i____________________________t, such as in the famous novel B___________t by S________________s. The t__________________r Babbitt has spent most of his life l________________________e and a______________________________________s. He grows d______________d with this life because he no longer feels a v_______________________n to the present moment and his true feelings. His s_______________n of his d_______________s to meet e___________________________y a______________s him from the present. This is c_____________________o as a m__________________s and is very common among d___________________s who r___________________________s.
In conclusion, e____________s on future goals is one source of m______________________s. Individuals must c_______________t their goals to d___________________h between the life they want and t_______________________________t.
Listen and check:
Listening Practice
Learn more about connecting with the present moment below:
Reading Practice
Here’s an interesting New York Times article on the same topic:
https://www.nytimes.com/2017/05/19/opinion/sunday/why-the-future-is-always-on-your-mind.html
Speaking Practice
Answer the following questions from the real exam about health:
Health
- How often do people in your country go to the doctor?
- Are doctors always trustworthy?
- How will hospitals change in the future?
- Is traditional medicine an important part of your culture?
- What makes a person healthy?
Writing Practice
Write about the related topic below then check with my sample answer:
Some think that ambition is a good quality.
Is it important to be ambitious?
Is it a positive or negative characteristic?
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