This is an IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer related to changing jobs from the real IELTS exam.
I was lucky with this question because I just read a book on this topic a few weeks ago!
That is probably not going to happen for you on the test – but sometimes you might know a book or documentary on the topic in question.
You can read on to see how I dealt with summarising a book as my main argument.
Or… you can watch this video with the full answer and analysis.
I recommend that you write about the question yourself and then compare your answer with mine (in terms of grammar, vocabulary, and your ideas, especially):
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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer: Changing Jobs (Real Test)
The job market today is very competitive and it is best to choose a career or field of study early in order to get a good job later in life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Real IELTS Exam
Today’s hyper-competitive job market encourages parents and educators to push specialization at increasingly earlier ages. Although choosing a career early on is a safe option, it will not produce the best results in my opinion.
The reason that opting in to a career from an early age has become so prevalent is that it affords people a sense of security that is at least somewhat justified. In Vietnam, the vast majority of High School graduates are pushed early by their parents into safe fields like finance and the sciences. There are a number of hard skills required for these fields such as good mathematical acumen, industriousness, and logical thinking. If students start to learn these skills at a very young age or beginning in High School then they will have a head start on their peers that can continue through university into the job market. This is the theory that guides specialization.
It is difficult to dispute the above logic, however, recent research has shown that having a breadth of knowledge and experience is a much better predictor of future success. A recent book by David Epstein titled ‘Range’ debunked the commonly held belief that early specialization is safer. In fact, the majority of leaders in their fields experimented with a large number of subject areas and professions before settling on one. The early specialisers were the exceptions and are therefore a poor model to imitate. The core argument of that book is that experience in multiple fields helps you to make connections and learn a diverse range of skills that you can later bring to bear on your chosen profession.
In conclusion, having a range of experience is more important than locking yourself into a field of study early in order to enhance later career options. Universities ought to make a shift to adopt some of the principles of liberal arts schools to better prepare graduates for an uncertain future world economy.
Word Count: 323
Analysis
1. Today’s hyper-competitive job market encourages parents and educators to push specialization at increasingly earlier ages. 2. Although choosing a career early on is a safe option, it will not produce the best results in my opinion.
- The first sentence simply paraphrases the topic for the essay – write this sentence quickly to get on to the more important ones!
- My second sentence is my opinion. Be sure to have a clear opinion – don’t sit in the middle. (I include my main idea for one paragraph, but you don’t have to.)
1. The reason that opting in to a career from an early age has become so prevalent is that it affords people a sense of security that is at least somewhat justified. 2. In Vietnam, the vast majority of High School graduates are pushed early by their parents into safe fields like finance and the sciences. 3. There are a number of hard skills required for these fields such as good mathematical acumen, industriousness, and logical thinking. 4. If students start to learn these skills at a very young age or beginning in High School then they will have a head start on their peers that can continue through university into the job market. 5. This is the theory that guides specialization.
- This is a topic sentence with my main idea for the paragraph – specialising early is a safe bet.
- In my second sentence I focus on the example right away – don’t waste time, be specific and detailed!
- The third sentence further develops my example with the specific skills you can learn.
- My fourth sentnence relates this back to the job market. If you start to stray from the main question, be sure to relate your example back to it.
- The last sentence concludes the paragraph. This sentence is not totally necessary and if you are worried about time, don’t write it!
1. It is difficult to dispute the above logic, however, recent research has shown that having a breadth of knowledge and experience is a much better predictor of future success. 2. A recent book by David Epstein titled ‘Range’ debunked the commonly held belief that early specialization is safer. 3. In fact, the majority of leaders in their fields experimented with a large number of subject areas and professions before settling on one. 4. The early specialisers were the exceptions and are therefore a poor model to imitate. 5. The core argument of that book is that experience in multiple fields helps you to make connections and learn a diverse range of skills that you can later bring to bear on your chosen profession.
- My first sentence is another topic sentence with my main idea for the paragraph – have a range of skills is more important for success.
- The second sentence begins my main example which comes from a book called ‘Range.’
- My third sentence continues to talk about the book – develop your examples fully!
- The fourth sentence also further develops the same example – stick to one, fully developed example!
- The final sentence concludes the argument from the book and my paragraph.
1. In conclusion, having a range of experience is more important than locking yourself into a field of study early in order to enhance later career options. 2. Universities ought to make a shift to adopt some of the principles of liberal arts schools to better prepare graduates for an uncertain future world economy.
- My first sentence summarises my opinion – make sure that you have a clear opinion – don’t sit in the middle!
- The final sentence adds an extra detail/piece of support that a lot of examiners will require for band 7+ for task achievement.
Word Count: 323 (Try to keep your writing to 275-300 words)
Vocabulary
Try to figure out or think of a synonym for the vocabulary in bold below:
Today’s hyper-competitive job market encourages parents and educators to push specialization at increasingly earlier ages. Although choosing a career early on is a safe option, it will not produce the best results in my opinion.
The reason that opting in to a career from an early age has become so prevalent is that it affords people a sense of security that is at least somewhat justified. In Vietnam, the vast majority of High School graduates are pushed early by their parents into safe fields like finance and the sciences. There are a number of hard skills required for these fields such as good mathematical acumen, industriousness, and logical thinking. If students start to learn these skills at a very young age or beginning in High School then they will have a head start on their peers that can continue through university into the job market. This is the theory that guides specialization.
It is difficult to dispute the above logic, however, recent research has shown that having a breadth of knowledge and experience is a much better predictor of future success. A recent book by David Epstein titled ‘Range’ debunked the commonly held belief that early specialization is safer. In fact, the majority of leaders in their fields experimented with a large number of subject areas and professions before settling on one. The early specialisers were the exceptions and are therefore a poor model to imitate. The core argument of that book is that experience in multiple fields helps you to make connections and learn a diverse range of skills that you can later bring to bear on your chosen profession.
In conclusion, having a range of experience is more important than locking yourself into a field of study early in order to enhance later career options. Universities ought to make a shift to adopt some of the principles of liberal arts schools to better prepare graduates for an uncertain future world economy.
Word Count: 323
Answers
hyper-competitive job market: very difficult to get a job
push specialization: encourage kids to focus on one area
early on: from a young age
safe option: choice most likely to result in a good job
best results: good outcome
opting in: signing up for
prevalent: common
affords: allows for
sense of security: feeling safe
somewhat justified: some good reason for it
vast majority: most people
safe fields: less risky occupations
the sciences: chemistry, biology, computer sciences, etc.
hard skills: discrete skills
mathematical acumen: good mathematical ability
industriousness: hard-working
head start: more advanced than others
peers: classmates/coworkers
guides: underpins
dispute: argue with
breadth of knowledge: wide range of areas you know about
predictor: indicates/predicts
debunked: disproven
commonly held belief: unquestioned belief
early specialization: focusing on one area from a young age
experimented: tried out
subject areas: fields of study
settling on: deciding on
exceptions: different cases
poor model: bad example
imitate: copy
core argument: crux of their position
connections: links
diverse range: lots of different areas
bring to bear: able to call on
chosen profession: chosen field
locking yourself into: getting stuck with
enhance later career options: have a better job in the future
shift: change/alter
adopt: start using
liberal arts schools: schools where you study a range of subjects
better prepare: more ready for
uncertain future world economy: uncertain future job market
Pronunciation
ˈhaɪpə-kəmˈpɛtɪtɪv ʤɒb ˈmɑːkɪt
pʊʃ ˌspɛʃəlaɪˈzeɪʃən
ˈɜːli ɒn
seɪf ˈɒpʃən
bɛst rɪˈzʌlts
ˈɒptɪŋ ɪn
ˈprɛvələnt
əˈfɔːdz
sɛns ɒv sɪˈkjʊərɪti
ˈsʌmwɒt ˈʤʌstɪfaɪd
vɑːst məˈʤɒrɪti
seɪf fiːldz
ðə ˈsaɪənsɪz
hɑːd skɪlz
ˌmæθɪˈmætɪkəl əˈkjuːmɛn
ɪnˈdʌstrɪəsnəs
hɛd stɑːt
pɪəz
gaɪdz
dɪsˈpjuːt
brɛdθ ɒv ˈnɒlɪʤ
prɪˈdɪktə
ˌdiːˈbʌŋkt
ˈkɒmənli hɛld bɪˈliːf
ˈɜːli ˌspɛʃəlaɪˈzeɪʃən
ɪksˈpɛrɪmɛntɪd
ˈsʌbʤɪkt ˈeərɪəz
ˈsɛtlɪŋ ɒn
ɪkˈsɛpʃənz
pʊə ˈmɒdl
ˈɪmɪteɪt
kɔːr ˈɑːgjʊmənt
kəˈnɛkʃənz
daɪˈvɜːs reɪnʤ
brɪŋ tuː beə
ˈʧəʊzn prəˈfɛʃən
ˈlɒkɪŋ jɔːˈsɛlf ˈɪntuː
ɪnˈhɑːns ˈleɪtə kəˈrɪər ˈɒpʃənz
ʃɪft
əˈdɒpt
ˈlɪbərəl ɑːts skuːlz
ˈbɛtə prɪˈpeə
ʌnˈsɜːtn ˈfjuːʧə wɜːld i(ː)ˈkɒnəmi
Listen and repeat:
Vocabulary Practice
Fill in the blanks:
Today’s _________________ encourages parents and educators to push _________________ at increasingly earlier ages. Although choosing a career early _________________ is a safe _________________, it will not produce the best _________________ in my opinion.
The reason that opting _________________ to a career from an early age has become so _________________ is that it _________________ people a sense of _________________ that is at least somewhat _________________. In Vietnam, the vast _________________ of High School graduates are pushed early by their parents into safe _________________ like finance and the _________________. There are a number of hard _________________ required for these fields such as good mathematical _________________, _________________, and logical thinking. If students start to learn these skills at a very young age or beginning in High School then they will have a head _________________ on their _________________ that can continue through university into the job market. This is the theory that _________________ specialization.
It is difficult to _________________ the above logic, however, recent research has shown that having a breadth of _________________ and experience is a much better _________________ of future success. A recent book by David Epstein titled ‘Range’ _________________ the commonly held _________________ that early _________________ is safer. In fact, the majority of leaders in their fields _________________ with a large number of subject _________________ and professions before settling _________________ one. The early specialisers were the _________________ and are therefore a poor _________________ to _________________. The core _________________ of that book is that experience in multiple fields helps you to make _________________ and learn a diverse _________________ of skills that you can later bring to _________________ on your chosen _________________.
In conclusion, having a range of experience is more important than locking yourself _________________ a field of study early in order to enhance later career _________________. Universities ought to make a _________________ to _________________ some of the principles of liberal arts _________________ to better _________________ graduates for an uncertain future world _________________.
Listen and check:
Listening Practice
Reading Practice
https://www.nytimes.com/2019/05/28/books/review/david-epstein-range.html
Speaking Practice:
Answer the following questions related to changing jobs. You can use the activities here if you don’t have a speaking partner.
Do you think that it is risky to change jobs a lot?
How important is it to work or study in various different fields?
How did you choose your career?
Sample IELTS Speaking Questions
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