This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay based on a recent Cambridge IELTS 21 book on the topic of studying abroad and work placement.

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IELTS Cambridge 21: Work Placement

All university undergraduate courses should include a period of time spent studying abroad or doing a work placement.

Do you think the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people believe every undergraduate degree course should require students to study abroad or complete a work placement before graduating. While this policy may present logistical challenges, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because it better prepares students for both employment and life after university.

The greatest benefit would be that students could gain practical skills and experience that cannot be learned in a classroom. A work placement allows engineering, nursing, or business students, for instance, to apply theoretical knowledge to real-world situations while developing communication, teamwork, and problem-solving abilities. An accounting student who spends six months working at a reputable firm will graduate with experience using professional financial software, interacting with clients, and meeting strict deadlines. This makes the student significantly more competitive than classmates whose experience is limited to lectures and textbooks.

Studying abroad also provides valuable personal and cultural development. Living in another country forces students to adapt to unfamiliar customs, languages, and academic systems, making them more independent and open-minded. For instance, a Japanese student completing a semester in Germany may collaborate on research projects with classmates from several continents while learning to navigate daily life in a different language. Although these programs can be expensive and may delay graduation for some students, universities can mitigate these disadvantages through scholarships, exchange partnerships, and flexible course structures.

Overall, I believe requiring overseas study or work placements would benefit the vast majority of university students. Graduates would leave university with stronger practical skills, greater confidence, and broader international perspectives that are increasingly valuable in today’s global workforce.

Analysis

1. Many people believe every undergraduate degree course should require students to study abroad or complete a work placement before graduating. 2. While this policy may present logistical challenges, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because it better prepares students for both employment and life after university.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. The greatest benefit would be that students could gain practical skills and experience that cannot be learned in a classroom. 2. A work placement allows engineering, nursing, or business students, for instance, to apply theoretical knowledge to real-world situations while developing communication, teamwork, and problem-solving abilities. 3. An accounting student who spends six months working at a reputable firm will graduate with experience using professional financial software, interacting with clients, and meeting strict deadlines. 4. This makes the student significantly more competitive than classmates whose experience is limited to lectures and textbooks.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Better to have more detail.

1. Studying abroad also provides valuable personal and cultural development. 2. Living in another country forces students to adapt to unfamiliar customs, languages, and academic systems, making them more independent and open-minded. 3. For instance, a Japanese student completing a semester in Germany may collaborate on research projects with classmates from several continents while learning to navigate daily life in a different language. 4. Although these programs can be expensive and may delay graduation for some students, universities can mitigate these disadvantages through scholarships, exchange partnerships, and flexible course structures.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.

1. Overall, I believe requiring overseas study or work placements would benefit the vast majority of university students. 2. Graduates would leave university with stronger practical skills, greater confidence, and broader international perspectives that are increasingly valuable in today’s global workforce.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many people believe every undergraduate degree course should require students to study abroad or complete a work placement before graduating. While this policy may present logistical challenges, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because it better prepares students for both employment and life after university.

The greatest benefit would be that students could gain practical skills and experience that cannot be learned in a classroom. A work placement allows engineering, nursing, or business students, for instance, to apply theoretical knowledge to real-world situations while developing communication, teamwork, and problem-solving abilities. An accounting student who spends six months working at a reputable firm will graduate with experience using professional financial software, interacting with clients, and meeting strict deadlines. This makes the student significantly more competitive than classmates whose experience is limited to lectures and textbooks.

Studying abroad also provides valuable personal and cultural development. Living in another country forces students to adapt to unfamiliar customs, languages, and academic systems, making them more independent and open-minded. For instance, a Japanese student completing a semester in Germany may collaborate on research projects with classmates from several continents while learning to navigate daily life in a different language. Although these programs can be expensive and may delay graduation for some students, universities can mitigate these disadvantages through scholarships, exchange partnerships, and flexible course structures.

Overall, I believe requiring overseas study or work placements would benefit the vast majority of university students. Graduates would leave university with stronger practical skills, greater confidence, and broader international perspectives that are increasingly valuable in today’s global workforce.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

undergraduate degree course → bachelor’s degree programme

study abroad → study in another country

complete a work placement before graduating → undertake work experience before finishing university

While this policy may present logistical challenges → Although this policy may create practical difficulties

the advantages outweigh the disadvantages → the benefits are greater than the drawbacks

better prepares students for both employment and life after university → equips students more effectively for both careers and life after graduation

The greatest benefit → The most significant advantage

gain practical skills and experience → acquire hands-on skills and experience

engineering → engineering studies

nursing → nursing studies

business students → students studying business

apply theoretical knowledge to real-world situations → put academic knowledge into practice in real-life contexts

developing communication → improving communication

teamwork → collaboration skills

problem-solving abilities → capacity to solve problems

accounting → accounting studies

a reputable firm → a well-respected company

experience using professional financial software → gain experience with specialised financial software

interacting with clients → communicating with customers

meeting strict deadlines → completing tasks within demanding time limits

competitive → highly competitive

limited to lectures and textbooks → restricted to classroom teaching and academic materials

provides valuable personal and cultural development → offers important opportunities for personal and cultural growth

adapt to unfamiliar customs → adjust to unfamiliar traditions

languages → linguistic environments

academic systems → educational systems

independent → self-reliant

open-minded → receptive to new ideas

completing a semester in → spending a semester studying in

collaborate on research projects with → work jointly on research projects with

several continents → multiple continents

navigate daily life in a different language → manage everyday life using another language

delay graduation → postpone graduation

mitigate these disadvantages through → reduce these drawbacks by means of

scholarships → financial awards for students

exchange partnerships → student-exchange agreements

and flexible course structures → and adaptable academic programmes

requiring overseas study or work placements → making international study or work experience compulsory

the vast majority of → the overwhelming majority of

stronger practical skills → more developed hands-on abilities

greater confidence → increased self-assurance

and broader international perspectives → and wider global perspectives

increasingly valuable in today’s global workforce → becoming more important in the modern international job market

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

undergraduate degree course — /ˌʌndəˈɡrædʒuət dɪˈɡriː kɔːs/

study abroad — /ˌstʌdi əˈbrɔːd/

complete a work placement before graduating — /kəmˈpliːt ə wɜːk ˈpleɪsmənt bɪˈfɔː ˈɡrædʒuətɪŋ/

While this policy may present logistical challenges — /waɪl ðɪs ˈpɒləsi meɪ prɪˈzent ləˈdʒɪstɪkəl ˈtʃælɪndʒɪz/

the advantages outweigh the disadvantages — /ði ədˈvɑːntɪdʒɪz ˌaʊtˈweɪ ðə ˌdɪsədˈvɑːntɪdʒɪz/

better prepares students for both employment and life after university — /ˈbetə prɪˈpeəz ˈstjuːdənts fə bəʊθ ɪmˈplɔɪmənt ənd laɪf ˈɑːftə ˌjuːnɪˈvɜːsəti/

The greatest benefit — /ðə ˈɡreɪtɪst ˈbenɪfɪt/

gain practical skills and experience — /ɡeɪn ˈpræktɪkəl skɪlz ənd ɪkˈspɪəriəns/

engineering — /ˌendʒɪˈnɪərɪŋ/

nursing — /ˈnɜːsɪŋ/

business students — /ˈbɪznəs ˈstjuːdənts/

apply theoretical knowledge to real-world situations — /əˈplaɪ ˌθɪəˈretɪkəl ˈnɒlɪdʒ tə ˌrɪəl ˈwɜːld ˌsɪtʃuˈeɪʃənz/

developing communication — /dɪˈveləpɪŋ kəˌmjuːnɪˈkeɪʃən/

teamwork — /ˈtiːmwɜːk/

problem-solving abilities — /ˈprɒbləm ˌsɒlvɪŋ əˈbɪlətiz/

accounting — /əˈkaʊntɪŋ/

a reputable firm — /ə ˈrepjətəbəl fɜːm/

experience using professional financial software — /ɪkˈspɪəriəns ˈjuːzɪŋ prəˈfeʃənəl faɪˈnænʃəl ˈsɒftweə/

interacting with clients — /ˌɪntərˈæktɪŋ wɪð ˈklaɪənts/

meeting strict deadlines — /ˈmiːtɪŋ strɪkt ˈdedlaɪnz/

competitive — /kəmˈpetətɪv/

limited to lectures and textbooks — /ˈlɪmɪtɪd tə ˈlektʃəz ənd ˈtekstbʊks/

provides valuable personal and cultural development — /prəˈvaɪdz ˈvæljuəbəl ˈpɜːsənəl ənd ˈkʌltʃərəl dɪˈveləpmənt/

adapt to unfamiliar customs — /əˈdæpt tə ˌʌnfəˈmɪliə ˈkʌstəmz/

languages — /ˈlæŋɡwɪdʒɪz/

academic systems — /ˌækəˈdemɪk ˈsɪstəmz/

independent — /ˌɪndɪˈpendənt/

open-minded — /ˌəʊpən ˈmaɪndɪd/

completing a semester in — /kəmˈpliːtɪŋ ə sɪˈmestə ɪn/

collaborate on research projects with — /kəˈlæbəreɪt ɒn rɪˈsɜːtʃ ˈprɒdʒekts wɪð/

several continents — /ˈsevrəl ˈkɒntɪnənts/

navigate daily life in a different language — /ˈnævɪɡeɪt ˈdeɪli laɪf ɪn ə ˈdɪfrənt ˈlæŋɡwɪdʒ/

delay graduation — /dɪˈleɪ ˌɡrædʒuˈeɪʃən/

mitigate these disadvantages through — /ˈmɪtɪɡeɪt ðiːz ˌdɪsədˈvɑːntɪdʒɪz θruː/

scholarships — /ˈʃɒləʃɪps/

exchange partnerships — /ɪksˈtʃeɪndʒ ˈpɑːtnəʃɪps/

and flexible course structures — /ənd ˈfleksəbəl kɔːs ˈstrʌktʃəz/

requiring overseas study or work placements — /rɪˈkwaɪərɪŋ ˌəʊvəˈsiːz ˈstʌdi ɔː wɜːk ˈpleɪsmənts/

the vast majority of — /ðə vɑːst məˈdʒɒrəti əv/

stronger practical skills — /ˈstrɒŋɡə ˈpræktɪkəl skɪlz/

greater confidence — /ˈɡreɪtə ˈkɒnfɪdəns/

and broader international perspectives — /ənd ˈbrɔːdə ˌɪntəˈnæʃənəl pəˈspektɪvz/

increasingly valuable in today’s global workforce — /ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˈvæljuəbəl ɪn təˈdeɪz ˈɡləʊbəl ˈwɜːkfɔːs/

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many people believe every undergraduate _______ course should require students to study _____d or complete ___________________ graduating. While ___________________________challenges, I believe the advantages ___________ disadvantages because it better _________________________________________________after university.

The _________ benefit would be that students could gain ________________ experience that cannot be learned in a classroom. A work placement allows e________g, n_______g, or business ________________, for instance, to apply _____________________________ situations while developing __________, te________k, and p________________________s. An a__________g student who spends six months working at a reputable _____m will graduate with experience __________________________ software, interacting _________clients, and meeting ___________deadlines. This makes the student significantly more c__________e than classmates whose experience is limited ___________ textbooks.

Studying abroad also provides _________________________ development. Living in another country forces students to adapt _______________________ customs, l__________s, and academic _______s, making them more i________t and open-______d. For instance, a Japanese student completing ___________ in Germany may collaborate ________________ with classmates from several _________s while learning to navigate _________________language. Although these programs can be expensive and may delay _________n for some students, universities can mitigate _______________________________ scholarships, exchange ________________s, and flexible ______________structures.

Overall, I believe requiring ______________________placements would benefit the vast _________of university students. Graduates would leave university with stronger ___________skills, greater ___________e, and broader _______________perspectives that are increasingly________________________________ workforce.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.savemyexams.com/learning-hub/careers/10-work-experience-ideas-for-students/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work (alternate)

What do you do for work?

What are your responsibilities?

Is there some other kind of work you would rather do?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic:

In an era of globalization, some people think that studying abroad is the best way to attain a well-paid job while others believe other options are better.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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