This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer on the topic of education and crime.
It came up on the real IELTS exam recently but these are also topics (crime, education) that come up all the time on listening, reading, writing, and speaking.
It is very useful for you to practice and learn about the topics and vocabulary for when you take IELTS.
Read on for my answer, analysis, vocabulary practice and more!
The most common solution for criminal behaviour is prison but many believe education is a better method.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many feel that instead of locking up criminals, we could better reduce crime by tackling systemic problems in our educational systems. In my opinion, although education is important, deterrence remains the primary inhibitor of criminality.
Many see education as a better remedy as it holds long-term promise. The main cause of crime is poverty and that can be linked directly to education. Take for example countries with strong educational systems. In Singapore, which has one of the most well-regarded school systems in the world, the majority of graduates can find well paid jobs and the crime rate is consequently among the lowest globally. There is no cause to commit a crime if you have enough money to provide for yourself and your family.
Despite the clear results education can bring about, deterrence remains the main reason why people do not commit crimes. If there was no threat of prison, people would feel free to steal, murder or commit whatever crime they choose. A good example of the effect of prison on crime is in countries with strict, mandatory sentencing guidelines. Many Southeast Asian countries have imposed severe sentences on drug related crimes to successfully curb drug trafficking and distribution. There is no substitute for the clearcut logic engendered by the threat of prison.
To sum up, despite the admitted benefits of education, the deterring effect of prison prevents most crime. Countries ought to invest in sustainable solutions such as education and economic reform while not neglecting the irreplaceable role of incarceration.
Sample Answer Analysis
1. Many feel that instead of locking up criminals, we could better reduce crime by tackling systemic problems in our educational systems. 2. In my opinion, although education is important, deterrence remains the primary inhibitor of criminality.
The first sentence of your essay should simply restate what the general topic is.
My second sentence gives my opinion – make your opinion totally clear or you will get band 5 for task achievement automatically.
1. Many see education as a better remedy as it holds long-term promise. 2. The main cause of crime is poverty and that can be linked directly to education. 3. Take for example countries with strong educational systems. 4. In Singapore, which has one of the most well-regarded school systems in the world, the majority of graduates can find well paid jobs and the crime rate is consequently among the lowest globally. 5. There is no cause to commit a crime if you have enough money to provide for yourself and your family.
My first sentence is a topic sentence with my main idea for tha paragraph: education has long-term progress. Stick to 1 main idea so that you can develop it fully.
The next sentence begins to develop this main idea.
My third sentence begins my example. Try to make your examples as specific as possible: a real person, country, etc.
The fourth sentence continues my example by making it even more specific and detailed.
My fifth sentence concludes the paragraph by reiterating the link between lack of education and crime.
1. Despite the clear results education can bring about, deterrence remains the main reason why people do not commit crimes. 2. If there was no threat of prison, people would feel free to steal, murder or commit whatever crime they choose. 3. A good example of the effect of prison on crime is in countries with strict, mandatory sentencing guidelines. 4. Many Southeast Asian countries have imposed severe sentences on drug related crimes to successfully curb drug trafficking and distribution. 5. There is no substitute for the clearcut logic engendered by the threat of prison.
My first sentence is another topic sentence with the main idea for this paragraph which is that prison deters people from committing crimes.
The next sentence explains my main idea.
My third sentence starts another example – make your examples the centerpiece of your paragraph!
The fourth sentence develops the example by describing Southeast Asian countries.
My fifth sentence finishes the paragraph by repeating why I think deterrence is more important than education.
1. To sum up, despite the admitted benefits of education, the deterring effect of prison prevents most crime. 2. Countries ought to invest in sustainable solutions such as education and economic reform while not neglecting the irreplaceable role of incarceration.
The first sentence of my conlusion simple repeats my opinion.
My last sentence adds an extra, extended detail that examiners will typically require for band 7+ for task achievement.
Vocabulary
Try to figure out the words in bold from the context of the sentence. Write down a definition or synonym for each.
Many feel that instead of locking up criminals, we could better reduce crime by tackling systemic problems in our educational systems. In my opinion, although education is important, deterrence remains the primary inhibitor of criminality.
Many see education as a better remedy as it holds long-term promise. The main cause of crime is poverty and that can be linked directly to education. Take for example countries with strong educational systems. In Singapore, which has one of the most well-regarded school systems in the world, the majority of graduates can find well paid jobs and the crime rate is consequently among the lowest globally. There is no cause to commit a crime if you have enough money to provide for yourself and your family.
Despite the clear results education can bring about, deterrence remains the main reason why people do not commit crimes. If there was no threat of prison, people would feel free to steal, murder or commit whatever crime they choose. A good example of the effect of prison on crime is in countries with strict, mandatory sentencing guidelines. Many Southeast Asian countries have imposed severe sentences on drug related crimes to successfully curb drug trafficking and distribution. There is no substitute for the clearcut logic engendered by the threat of prison.
To sum up, despite the admitted benefits of education, the deterring effect of prison prevents most crime. Countries ought to invest in sustainable solutions such as education and economic reform while not neglecting the irreplaceable role of incarceration.
Answers
locking up: incarcerate
tackling systemic problems: dealing with institutational issues
deterrence dissuade
inhibitor deterring factor
criminality crime
better remedy superior solution
holds long-term promise will have an impact in the future
linked directly stems from
well-regarded school systems good schools
well paid jobs good jobs
crime rate the level of crime
consequently as a result
commit a crime take part in a crime
provide for support
clear results definite outcomes
bring about cause
threat danger
strict harsh
mandatory sentencing guidelines rules for prison terms
imposed severe sentences hand out long prison sentences
curb drug trafficking slow down the transport of drugs
Many feel that instead of ________________ criminals, we could better reduce crime by ________________ in our educational systems. In my opinion, although education is important, ________________ remains the primary ________________ of ________________.
Many see education as a ________________ as it ________________. The main cause of crime is poverty and that can be ________________ to education. Take for example countries with strong educational systems. In Singapore, which has one of the most________________ in the world, the majority of graduates can find ________________ and the is ________________ among the lowest globally. There is no cause to ________________ if you have enough money to ________________ yourself and your family.
Despite the ________________ education can ________________, deterrence remains the main reason why people do not commit crimes. If there was no ________________ of prison, people would feel free to steal, murder or commit whatever crime they choose. A good example of the effect of prison on crime is in countries with ________________, ________________. Many Southeast Asian countries have ________________ on drug related crimes to successfully ________________________________ and ________________ . the ________________ by the threat of prison.
To sum up, despite the ________________ benefits of education, the deterring effect of prison prevents most crime. Countries ought to invest in ________________ such as education and ________________ while not ________________ the ________________ of ________________ .
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Reading Practice
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The recent questions from the IELTS writing task 2 exam are here, task 1 is here and the speaking questions and topics are here.
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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer: The Ideal/Perfect Society
People have historically attempted to achieve a perfect society. However, it is difficult to decide what a perfect society would be like. What would be the most important element of an ideal society? What can normal people do to make society more perfect?
Real IELTS Essay Society
The best way to improve our society is a topic of understandable concern for all governments and citizens. In my opinion, the key to this is increased tolerance of difference and people can take the individual step of examining their own beliefs in order to not pass ingrained prejudices on to the next generation.
The most momentous shifts in society in the last centuries have involved progress related to tolerance of different types of people. The original pilgrims left England to found new colonies in order to have religious freedom to worship as they wish. Racism and slavery in the 19th century is a direct result of considering one group of people separate. The most recent example is the movement to be more accepting of a variety of sexualities. These have all made society more perfect and their evolution and nascent spread throughout the world will allow the greatest number of people to enjoy a full range of freedom and opportunity.
To achieve the more open society mentioned above, individuals can closely evaluate their beliefs and try to impart more tolerant values to the younger generation. A good example of this can be seen in the embrace of gay marriage by many in the last decade. In the 20th century, it was political suicide to support gay marriage. However, people began to question the rationale for denying this basic human right. Now most schools and parents teach their children about alternative lifestyles and it is much more common to see LGBT couples in popular culture. This is one step towards a utopian, inclusive society free of prejudice.
In conclusion, the movement to accept more diverse elements of society is already underway. With continued effort, it is reasonable to expect a generally positive attitude towards all people in the coming years, though this progressivism will vary widely from country to country.
Word Count: 310
Analysis
1. The best way to improve our society is a topic of understandable concern for all governments and citizens. 2. In my opinion, the key to this is increased tolerance of difference and people can take the individual step of examining their own beliefs in order to not pass ingrained prejudices on to the next generation.
The first sentence of my introduction is just restating the topic – keep it simple!
My second sentence is more important because it contains my opinion. Make your opinion 100% clear!
1. The most momentous shifts in society in the last centuries have involved progress related to tolerance of different types of people. 2. The original pilgrims left England to found new colonies in order to have religious freedom to worship as they wish. 3. Racism and slavery in the 19th century is a direct result of considering one group of people separate. 4. The most recent example is the movement to be more accepting of a variety of sexualities. 5. These have all made society more perfect and their evolution and nascent spread throughout the world will allow the greatest number of people to enjoy a full range of freedom and opportunity.
The first sentence is a topic sentence with my main idea for that paragraph – tolerance.
My second sentence begins my example – don’t waste any time getting to your example.
The third sentence further develops my main idea with a related example.
Next I continue by giving a modern day example.
Finally I conclude the paragraph by saying that tolerance has evolved over time and is the key to a good society.
1. To achieve the more open society mentioned above, individuals can closely evaluate their beliefs and try to impart more tolerant values to the younger generation. 2. A good example of this can be seen in the embrace of gay marriage by many in the last decade. 3. In the 20th century, it was political suicide to support gay marriage. 4. However, people began to question the rationale for denying this basic human right. 5. Now most schools and parents teach their children about alternative lifestyles and it is much more common to see LGBT couples in popular culture. 6. This is one step towards a utopian, inclusive society free of prejudice.
My first sentence is another topic sentence with my new main idea – people can change themselves to be more tolerant.
The second sentence begins my example.
For this paragraph I develop one example fully. In this sentence I give the background related to gay marriage.
My fourth sentence develops my example further.
The fifth sentence also develops the same example – the more you develop, the higher your task achievement score will be!
My fifth sentence concludes how this could have an impact on the perfect society.
1. In conclusion, the movement to accept more diverse elements of society is already underway. 2. With continued effort, it is reasonable to expect a generally positive attitude towards all people in the coming years, though this progressivism will vary widely from country to country.
My conclusion begins by repeating my opinion (and making it completely clear).
The last sentence is an extra related detail that a lot of examiners will look for to give you band 7+ for task achievement.
Vocabulary
The best way to improve our society is a topic of understandable concern for all governments and citizens. In my opinion, the key to this is increased tolerance of difference and people can take the individual step ofexamining their own beliefs in order to not pass ingrained prejudices on to the next generation.
The most momentous shifts in society in the last centuries have involved progress related to tolerance of different types of people. The original pilgrims left England to found new colonies in order to have religious freedom to worship as they wish. Racism and slavery in the 19th century is a direct result of considering one group of people separate. The most recent example is the movement to be more accepting of a variety of sexualities. These have all made society more perfect and their evolution and nascent spread throughout the world will allow the greatest number of people to enjoy a full range of freedom and opportunity.
To achieve the more open society mentioned above, individuals can closely evaluate their beliefs and try to impart more tolerant values to the younger generation. A good example of this can be seen in the embrace of gay marriage by many in the last decade. In the 20th century, it was political suicide to support gay marriage. However, people began to question the rationale for denying this basic human right. Now most schools and parents teach their children about alternative lifestyles and it is much more common to see LGBT couples in popular culture. This is one step towards a utopian, inclusive society free of prejudice.
In conclusion, the movement to accept more diverse elements of society is already underway. With continued effort, it is reasonable to expect a generally positive attitude towards all people in the coming years, though this progressivism will vary widely from country to country.
Answers
understandable concern: good reason to worry increased tolerance of difference: inclusiveness take the individual step of: personally can examining their own beliefs: being self-critical pass ingrained prejudices on: breed racist beliefs momentous shifts: changes in thinking original pilgrims: first settlers found new colonies: start new states religious freedom: ability to worship as you wish worship: pray to direct result: main effect considering: regarding movement: swell of support for accepting: allowing for sexualities: different sexual orientations more perfect: better nascent spread: beginning to spread full range: variety of open society: inclusive society closely evaluate: watch intently impart: teach tolerant values: allowing for difference embrace: acceptance political suicide: ruin your political career question the rationale: dispute the reasoning denying this basic human right: not allowing a fundamental right alternative lifestyles: different ways of living LGBT couples: lesbian, gay, bisexual, and transsexual popular culture: movies, tv, books, etc. one step: one solution utopian: perfect inclusive society free of prejudice: ideal society diverse elements: different parts already underway: incipient continued effort: keep going reasonable: logical expect: hope for generally positive attitude: friendly outlook progressivism: liberalism vary widely: major differences
The best way to improve our society is a topic of understandable concern for all governments and citizens. In my opinion, the key to this is increased tolerance of difference and people can take the individual step ofexamining their own beliefs in order to not pass ingrained prejudices on to the next generation.
The most momentous shifts in society in the last centuries have involved progress related to tolerance of different types of people. The original pilgrims left England to found new colonies in order to have religious freedom to worship as they wish. Racism and slavery in the 19th century is a direct result of considering one group of people separate. The most recent example is the movement to be more accepting of a variety of sexualities. These have all made society more perfect and their evolution and nascent spread throughout the world will allow the greatest number of people to enjoy a full range of freedom and opportunity.
To achieve the more open society mentioned above, individuals can closely evaluate their beliefs and try to impart more tolerant values to the younger generation. A good example of this can be seen in the embrace of gay marriage by many in the last decade. In the 20th century, it was political suicide to support gay marriage. However, people began to question the rationale for denying this basic human right. Now most schools and parents teach their children about alternative lifestyles and it is much more common to see LGBT couples in popular culture. This is one step towards a utopian, inclusive society free of prejudice.
In conclusion, the movement to accept more diverse elements of society is already underway. With continued effort, it is reasonable to expect a generally positive attitude towards all people in the coming years, though this progressivism will vary widely from country to country.
This is an IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer on the topic of medical testing on animals. Here is the question:
Some people say that it is acceptable to test medicine intended for people on animals. Others, however, believe that it is not right to use animals in this research.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer: Medical Testing (Real Test)
Many believe that using animals for scientific testing purposes is fundamentally immoral, while others see it as a necessary evil. In my opinion, even though it is decidedly unethical, the overall impact on human progress justifies its continuance.
Detractors of animal testing often point out that animals have rights. We would never condone this type of testing on a human, even with one with a low IQ and it follows that we should treat animals with some measure of respect. The strongest argument supporting this is the level of cruelty involved in animal testing. Many drugs that are tested on animals have painful side-effects and the test subjects may die slow, painful deaths. This is undeniably unjustifiable regarding testing in non-essential medical fields such as cosmetics.
Despite the moral quagmire detailed above, I believe animal testing does enough to advance medical testing to warrant its use. Some cursory research will reveal the importance of animal testing in fields such as diabetic medicine, cancer research, experimental surgery, and stem cells. Testing insulin for diabetics on dogs may be the most well-known example of this kind of impactful research. Many other advances in medicine often attributed to animal testing have saved countless human lives to an extent that would be impossible if researchers were working under the moral constraints of human test subjects.
In conclusion, animal testing is the best way to make breakthroughs in medicine and should be strongly encouraged. Governments should work with medical institutions to implement more medical testing on animals across the board.
Word Count: 255
Analysis
1. Many believe that using animals for scientific testing purposes is fundamentally immoral, while others see it as a necessary evil. 2. In my opinion, even though it is decidedly unethical, the overall impact on human progress justifies its continuance.
The first sentence paraphrases the whole topic for the essay – don’t spend too much time on this sentence!
Give your opinion in the introduction and the conclusion and make it 100% clear!
1. Detractors of animal testing often point out that animals have rights. 2. We would never condone this type of testing on a human, even with one with a low IQ and it follows that we should treat animals with some measure of respect. 3. The strongest argument supporting this is the level of cruelty involved in animal testing. 4. Many drugs that are tested on animals have painful side-effects and the test subjects may die slow, painful deaths. 5. This is undeniably unjustifiable regarding testing in non-essential medical fields such as cosmetics.
My first sentence is a topic sentence that shows what the paragraph will be about – why animals have rights.
The second sentence explains my main idea for the paragraph.
My third sentence continues to develop this same idea – don’t switch over to a new main idea!
The fourth sentence develops it with specific effects – be as specific as possible!
My fifth sentence concludes the paragraph by stating that in the case of testing for makeup it is unacceptable.
1. Despite the moral quagmire detailed above, I believe animal testing does enough to advance medical testing to warrant its use. 2. Some cursory research will reveal the importance of animal testing in fields such as diabetic medicine, cancer research, experimental surgery, and stem cells. 3. Testing insulin for diabetics on dogs may be the most well-known example of this kind of impactful research. 4. Many other advances in medicine often attributed to animal testing have saved countless human lives to an extent that would be impossible if researchers were working under the moral constraints of human test subjects.
My first sentence is a topic sentence that gives my other main idea – animal testing helps to advance medical science.
The next sentence develops my main idea by listing the specific medical fields that it helps.
My third sentence gives a specific example of the kind of medical advances that animal testing can lead to.
The final sentence concludes my paragraph by reiterating the importance of testing on animals to advance medical science.
1. In conclusion, animal testing is the best way to make breakthroughs in medicine and should be strongly encouraged. 2. Governments should work with medical institutions to implement more medical testing on animals across the board.
My first sentence repeats my opinion – be sure that you choose a side and don’t sit in the middle!
The last sentence gives a suggestion/extra detail than lots of examiners will require for band 7+ for task achievement.
Word Count: 255 (aim for around 275 – 300 words, maximum)
Vocabulary
Many believe that using animals for scientific testing purposes is fundamentally immoral, while others see it as a necessary evil. In my opinion, even though it is decidedly unethical, the overall impact on human progress justifies its continuance.
Detractors of animal testing often point out that animals have rights. We would never condone this type of testing on a human, even with one with a low IQ and it follows that we should treat animals with some measure of respect. The strongest argument supporting this is the level of cruelty involved in animal testing. Many drugs that are tested on animals have painful side-effects and the test subjects may die slow, painful deaths. This is undeniably unjustifiable regarding testing in non-essential medical fields such as cosmetics.
Despite the moral quagmire detailed above, I believe animal testing does enough to advance medical testing to warrant its use. Some cursory research will reveal the importance of animal testing in fields such as diabetic medicine, cancer research, experimental surgery, and stem cells. Testing insulin for diabetics on dogs may be the most well-known example of this kind of impactful research. Many other advances in medicine often attributed to animal testing have saved countless human lives to an extent that would be impossible if researchers were working under the moral constraints of human test subjects.
In conclusion, animal testing is the best way to make breakthroughs in medicine and should be strongly encouraged. Governments should work with medical institutions to implement more medical testing on animals across the board.
Answers
fundamentally immoral: completely evil
necessary evil: can’t avoid doing something bad
decidedly unethical: clearly wrong
human progress: the advancement of mankind
justifies its continuance: should be allowed to continue
detractors: critics
point out: argue
condone: allow/encourage
low IQ: unintelligent
treat animals: handle animals
some measure of respect: a certain amount of consideration
level of cruelty: some meanness
painful side-effects: unintended effects from the drugs that hurt them
slow, painful deaths: dying slowly in pain
undeniably unjustifiable: no one can argue it is right
regarding: concerning
non-essential: does not have to be done
cosmetics: makeup
moral quagmire: difficult right/wrong questions
warrant: justify
cursory research: quick bit of research
reveal: show
diabetic medicine: medicine for people with diabetes
cancer research: research into cancer
experimental surgery: new types of surgery
stem cells: a type of cell important in medicine
insulin: used to help diabetics
well-known example: famous example
impactful: lots of impact
attributed to: can be traced back to
countless: lots of
to an extent: to some degree
moral constraints: help back by ethical concerns
test subjects: candidates drugs/medicine is tested on
make breakthroughs: make big discoveries/progress
strongly encouraged: lots of support
implement: put into place
across the board: everywhere
Listen and repeat:
Practice
Fill in the gaps:
Many believe that using animals for scientific testing purposes is __________________, while others see it as a __________________. In my opinion, even though it is __________________, the overall impact on __________________.
__________________ of animal testing often __________________ that animals have rights. We would never __________________ this type of testing on a human, even with one with a __________________ and it follows that we should __________________ with __________________. The strongest argument supporting this is the __________________ involved in animal testing. Many drugs that are tested on animals have __________________ and the test subjects may die __________________. This is __________________ testing in __________________ medical fields such as __________________ .
Despite the __________________ detailed above, I believe animal testing does enough to advance medical testing to __________________ its use. Some __________________ will __________________ the importance of animal testing in fields such as __________________, __________________, __________________, and __________________. Testing __________________ for diabetics on dogs may be the most __________________ of this kind of __________________ research. Many other advances in medicine often __________________ animal testing have saved __________________ human lives __________________ that would be impossible if researchers were working under the __________________ of human __________________.
In conclusion, animal testing is the best way to __________________ in medicine and should be __________________. Governments should work with medical institutions to __________________ more medical testing on animals __________________.
Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodworking should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family.
On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter, explain
In an era of globalization, some people think that studying abroad is the best way to attain a well-paid job while others believe other options are better.
Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled and that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
Some people say that individuals should change jobs during their working life often while others believe that doing the same job has advantages to individuals, companies, and society.
In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include
There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit.
Some people say that at all levels of education, from primary school to university, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.
Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
There is little difference in the shops now operating in various nations. Some people think this is positive development,while other believe it is negative.
Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities.
Some people think that students in high or secondary school can choose courses freely, others think that courses such as mathematics must be compulsory.
Some people believe that children should do sports so that they will grow up as healthy adults, but others feel sports are just about enjoying yourself.
Discuss these both views and give your own opinion.
You live with a roommate at university but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include:
Some people believe that wild animals should not be kept in zoos or other man-made environments as there is no longer a need for them in the 21st century.
You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include
Instead of requiring primary school students to do experiments themselves, schools should only alllow them to watch experiments demonstrated by teachers.
Some people say young people should be completely free to choose their future job but others think young people must be more realistic in their choice.
There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit.
Some think schools should rewards students who have the best academic results, while others think it’s more important to reward students who achieve other types of success (such as sports, music, and good behaviour).
Some believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough.
Many parents feel that cell phones are harmful to children, while others do not.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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It is better to children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and so on should be involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The roads in major cities today are often difficult to travel on.
Many children today are exposed to violent videogames and TV programmes.
How harmful is this?
What can be done to fight this problem?
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Many believe that modern inventions have brought more negatives than positives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Reported on IELTS January 19th
Many university students do part-time work while studying at university.
Is this a positive or negative development?
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Some people feel that music should be taught in schools while others believe it is better to focus on the sciences.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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In the past, people wore clothes more closely related to their culture but today people are more likely to wear clothes from all over the world.
Is this a positive or negative development?
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Some believe that children should be taught from a young age how to handle money.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Reported on IELTS January 13th
Many people today think that homework is still an important part of school while others think that it is becoming outdated.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Some people become famous at a very young age.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Reported on IELTS January 7th
In many countries, people would rather rent a house instead of buying one.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of both.
Reported on IELTS January 5th
Some people feel that children should be able to choose the subjects they are interested in while others feel they should study the basic require subjects.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Reported on IELTS January 1st
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Write a letter to the local school in your neighborhood to give suggestions about improving its buildings and play area. Include
Why they should be improved
Suggestions for how
When they could be improved
Reported on IELTS January 21st
Write a letter to a friend who is currently moving into a new home. Write to your friend
Asking about the new home
Telling them you can help
Describing how you can help
Reported on IELTS January 19th
You were recently helped by an employee at the airport. Write to the airport to
Describe the problem
Talk about how you were helped
Suggest how to reward the employee
Reported on IELTS January 16
You visited your friend’s hometown last month and promised to meet him but you could not. Write to your friend
Expressing your apology
Explaining why you couldn’t meet
Suggesting when to meet later
Reported on IELTS January 14th
Write a letter to a friend asking for help to build your website. Include
The purpose of the site
Your requirements
When you will need it
Your expecatations of payment
Reported on IELTS January 12th
Write a letter to the organiser of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include
Feedback about last year
An offer to volunteer
Questions about the festival
Reported on IELTS January 11th
Write a letter to the manager of your company to ask about providing bicycle parking. Write
The purpose of the site
Your requirements
When you will need it
Reported on IELTS January 3rd
You just finished a course and borrowed a book from the teacher but couldn’t return it on time. You would like to return the book now. Write to your teacher
Describing the book
Saying how helpful the book was
Explaining why you didn’t return it before
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December 2019
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Write a letter to a friend who invited you to meet up but you missed the appointment.
Apologise for not messaging
Explain why you could not go
Suggest another date
You work in an international company and want to request some time off to attend a family event. Write to your manager and
Ask for time off
Describe the event
Say how you will make up time missed
You recently ate at a local restaurant with your family and want to write to the local newspaper to tell them
About the restaurant
What you ate
Why you would/wouldn’t recommend this restaurant
A friend is planning to visit the town where you live. Write a letter to make some suggestions about
The best time to visit your town
The most interesting places to check out
Where to find inexpensive accommodation
Your colleague loaned you a book to use in a presentation at work. Write to your friend to say
What the presentation was about
Why it was important
How the book helped you
You recently took a trip and the tour guide was very helpful. Write a letter to the tour company to
Describe the tour
Talk about the tour guide
Recommend a way to thank the guide
Writing Task 2
Some people think that it is better to build more public parks and sports facilities in new towns rather than shopping malls.
Some people think that children should be taught how to cook and grow food at school.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many think that all decisions within a company should be made by managers whereas others feel it is better to include employees in the process.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Many people believe there should be a curfew law so that people under the age of 18 are not out past midnight.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think it is more important to spend time developing their career while others think time with friends and family is more important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
November 2019
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Write a letter to a friend who invited you to meet up but you missed the appointment.
Apologise for not messaging
Explain why you could not go
Suggest another date
You work for an international company and want to resign your job. Explain
Why you want to resign
When you plan to leave
What you liked about the company
Write a letter to a friend who invited you to meet up but you missed the appointment.
Apologise for not messaging
Explain why you could not go
Suggest another date
You are working for an international company and you would like to request time off for a family event. Write a letter to your boss
Explaining what the celebration is
Asking for the time off
Explaining how you can get work done when you take time off
You had a problem with the flight staff on a recent flight. Write a letter to the airline manage to complain.
Include the flight details
Explain what happened
Tell the manager what you want them to do
Writing Task 2
Many people believe that money is a good gift for a teenagers while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Despite greater access to school education, many adults today still cannot read or write?
How does this affect them in life?
What can the government do to help them?
Many people today spend more time watching sports than playing sports.
Is this a positive or negative development?
In many countries today, people are renting instead of buying homes because they feel there are more advantages.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Team sports help school students to learn valuable skills and lessons.
What lessons can they learn?
How can these lessons benefit them in the future?
A lot of people today move to other countries for their work. This has advantages and disadvantages for the children of such people.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Some believe that a student’s success is mainly based on the quality of their teaching while others think it has more to do with the student’s attitude.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
October 2019
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there.
You are going on vacation soon. Write a letter to a friend
Telling them the reason for the holiday
Your plan
Invite them to come with you
You and a co-worker want to make use of a company room. Write a letter to your manager to ask for permission. Include
Why you need the room
Which room and why
Changes you will need made to the room
Write a leters to a sports club president about an upcoming event at the club you would like to propose. Include
The kind of event
Who should be invited
Your role in the event
You are attending night classes at a local college and you are unhappy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director and include
What course you are studying
What has made you unhappy
What you expect the director to do about it
You had dinner with a family friend. Write a letter to your friend to say
What you liked about the dinner
Your feelings about their family
Invite your friend and their family to your place
Writing Task 2
Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods.
Some people think that young people should follow the examples of their elders while others feel it is natural for teenagers to question them.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays people work too hard at their jobs.
What are the reasons for this?
What can employers do to help out?
Many parents, mostly mothers, stay at home to take care of the house and look after children. Many believe that the government should pay them a wage for this.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People today are not as fit as they were in the past.
What are the causes of this?
What can governments do to deal with this issue?
Many people think that working from home in beneficial in most respects while others think that it may hurt family life.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
The number of old people is increasing. Some think this will cause problems for countries while others believe old people still have value.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
September 2019
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Write a letter to your friend who is visiting a city that you know well. Recommend
Places worth visiting
Where to eat
How to get around the city
Writing Task 2
Many people use online language translation apps today.
Do the advantages of these apps outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people think nations and individuals should focus on their own personal problems rather than global ones.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some believe that the best way to encourage people to exercise is through sporting events like the Olympics. Others think there are better ways.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Cultures around the world are becoming more and more similar.
What are the reasons for this?
Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?
August 2019
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
You recently had a job interview which went well but you are still awaiting their decision. Write a letter to the HR manager of the company
Give the job details
Explain why the interview went well
Ask when you will know their decision
Your friend’s parents are coming to visit your hometown. Write a letter to
Tell them where they should visit
Suggest where they should stay
Offer to do something for them
Your child’s school is planning a field trip outside the country for 3 days and is asking for parents to come along. Write a letter
Asking about the trip
Explaining why you want to join
Explainin how you can help out
Write a letter to a tour company manager to give your appreciation for your tour guide. Include in your letter
Your tour details
What you liked about the guide
Ways for the manager to reward the guide
Write a letter to a translation agency about a report that you need to have translated urgently. Include
The content of your report
Why you need it translated
Why it is urgent
Writing Task 2
Some people believe it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show how much we care about them while others think there are better ways.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that living in a country for a period of time is needed to learn its language and culture.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that children should always ask for their parent’s advice while others feel this is not important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people prefer living in hot climates while others prefer colder countries.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Technology has made people less social.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists and researchers.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many believe that being good at a sport is a result of talent while others think that it comes from hard work.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
July 2019
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Write a letter to a friend whose birthday party you missed. In you letter include
An apology
Why you missed it
Questions about how fun it was
Your friend has asked you to help find a music teacher for their child. Write to your friend describing the teacher you have found.
Explain why they are suitable
Explain their background
Explaing how they can get in touch
Write a letter to a company manager about a problem with an item that you purchased online.
Describe the item
Tell the manager what the problem is
Explain what you want them to do
You recently took a two day course. Write feedback to the course organiser. In your letter
Detail the course
Explain what you liked
Tell them what they should do better
At a hotel where you were staying you requested a wake-up call but it did not arrive. Write to the hotel manager
Why you requested the call
What the inconvenience caused
What they can do to avoid this in the future
Write a letter to a college in Australia, telling them about a short training course you want to take related to your work. Include in your letter
About the course
Why you want to do the course
Your expectations about the course
Write a letter to an organiser who booked a hotel for you for your company. Include in your letter
Details about the booking
What you didn’t like about the hotel
What you want the organiser to do
Your company sent you abroad to take a training course and you want to extend your stay abroad. Write to your manager
About the benefits of the course
Why you want to stay
When you will come back
Your landlord wishes to increase your rent. Write a letter to him stating
Why the rent should not be increased
Current issues in the apartment
What you will do if he does
Writing Task 2
In many countries, people follow the latest fashions for clothes and hair very closely.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Many people imitate famous people that they read about or see on TV.
Why is this done?
Is this a good idea?
Celebrities sometimes give their opinions on public matters.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays the amount of garbage on the street is a real concern.
Why is this happening?
What can be done to resolve it?
Shopping has become a common pastime for many young people.
Why is this the case?
Should young people be encouraged to have other hobbies?
Medical science has greatly lengthened the average lifespan for most people. Some think this is a positive development while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some believe that allowing people to work after the age of 60 causes problems for both them and society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some think that competitive sports should be mandatory subjects in school while others think this has a negative effect on children.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, internet and television have given ordinary people the opportunity to become famous.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
With recent improvements online, it is increasingly possible for people to leave reviews for goods and services they have purchased.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Some parents think it is a good idea to let their children have mobile phones while others disagree.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Nowadays a lot of people make friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some think this is good while others feel face to face interaction is important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
June 2019
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Write a letter to the manager of a theater where your friend had an accident and they helped out. In your letter include
How it happened
How they helped
What they can do to prevent accidents in the future
You are working for a large company that provides financial help to local community groups and your company director has asked for recommendations about which group to help next year. In your letter
Include the group you want to suggest
Include what you expect the company to do
Explain how that will help the group
Write a letter to a young friend who will join your company next month. Include in your letter
What the work done at the company is
What they should bring on the first day
What they will do on the first day of work
Write a letter to the manager of a restaurant near you regarding renovations that you will be having done on your apartment. Include in your letter
What the repairs are
How it will affect their restaurant
Some possible solutions
You want to join a gym. Write a letter to a friend asking them to join with you. Include
Why you want to exercise
What types of exercises you are planning to do
Why you want your friend to join you
Write a letter to a friend who will be looking after your apartment while you are gone. Include
Where the keys are
What they should take care of
What to do when you come back
You friend has recently had a baby and you bought a gift. Write them a letter
Explaining the gift you bought
Describing the features of the gift
Asking when you can come drop it off
You recently travelled by train and it was very late causing your some problems. Write to the manager of the company
Telling them where you were going
Describing the problems you faces
Asking them to take action
You lost your driver’s license but someone found it and send it back to your address. Write a letter including
Thanking them
Asking where they found it
Explaining why you need it
You are moving to a new city with your family. Write a letter to a real estate agent to enquire about accommodations. Include in your letter
Why you are moving
Where you want to live
The type of accommodation required
Your local newspaper is giving out an award to the persona who has done the most to help the local community. Write to the newspaper about
A person who could win
How you know this person
How he has helped the neighborhood
Write a letter of invitation to a friend for a special celebration. In your letter include
An invitation for your friend
What the celebration is about
Travel and accommodation suggestions
Writing Task 2
These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this. However, others believe it makes life more difficult for the children.
Discuss both these views.
In many countries, people are experiencing more health problems because they have unhealthy lifestyles.
Why do people live unhealthy lives?
What can be done about this problem?
In some countries, children under the age of 16 are not allowed to leave school by law and enter the workforce.
Is this positive or negative?
Many think that secondary and high school students should learn money management as it is an important life skill.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some think that money is a good gift for teenagers. Others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some think that protecting the environment is the role of the individual while others think the government is responsible.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some think that parents reading books for entertainment to their children is a waste of thime and they should only read them serious educational books.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some think that the media should be allowed to publish personal information about citizens but others think that some restrictions should be placed on this information.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many students do part-time work while they are studying.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people prefer the lifestyle of living in a hot country while other people like colder climates.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
May
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Write a letter to an admissions officer at a community college. Explain to them
Which course you want to attend
Why you want to attend this course
How it related to your background
You have just returned from a conference and want to give a presentation to your colleagues. Write a letter to your manager about this. Include
What the conference was about
Your plans for the presentation
Its impact on your company
A company is appealing to your local city council to open a factory near where you live. You and your neighbors are opposed to the idea. Write to the city council
Stating why it is a bad idea
Where it should be built
Tell the council what you want them to do
Write a letter to your public city council to complain about garbage being left near your house. Include in your letter
Who you think left it
Why it is a problem
What you want the city to do
Write a letter to a friend recommending a restaurant to them for a family celebration. Include in your letter
The location of the restaurant
Why the restaurant is suitable
Suggestions for making contact
Write a letter to your local city council about the closure of a children’s playground. Include in your letter
Where the park is
What makes the park special
Suggestions for how to keep it open
Write a letter of recommendation for a friend to help them get a job where you are currently working. Include
Who the person is
How you know them
Why you recommend them
Writing Task 2
Many people consider money to be the most important factor for achieving happiness.
Do you agree or disagree?
These days people of all ages spend more time indoors than indoors.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Some people think that sports prepare children for work life while others think they do not.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people think that in order to learn a language well you must live in the country where that language is spoken.
Do you agree or disagree?
A lot of social problems today are caused by teenagers. Many people believe this is because parents don’t spend enough time with them.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many think that large international sporting events are not worth the cost for the host country.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many companies today use advertisements to increase their sales.
What makes an advertisement effective?
Is this positive or negative for society?
Some people believe that teenagers are facing more problems in their life than they did in the past and this is because parents are spending more time at work than at home.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that more money will make them happier.
How important is money for happiness?
These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
April
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Write a letter to a hotel manager about a party that you want to arrange for somebody you know. Include in your letter
Where you want to hold the party
Details of the party
Your budget for the party
Someone returned to you a bag that you lost with all its belongings still inside it. Write a letter to thank the person:
Thank the person
Explain how you lost it
Explain why its belongings were so important
An item of clothing that you purchased at a store has some issues and you wish to return it. Write a letter:
Describing the item in question
Detailing the issues
Telling the manager what you expect them to do with it
You are working at an international company and recently your responsibilities have changed and you think more training is required. Write to your boss saying
How your job has changed
Describing the training you need
Suggesting how traning could be done efficiently
A local magazine has asked for the opinion of readers as to how the magazine could be improved. Write to the magazine
Telling them why your read it
What you like and dislike about it
What improvements you would like to see in it
Write a letter to an online seller about an order that you have not yet received. Include in your letter
The details of your order
Why you need it right away
What you expect the company to do
Write a letter to a friend who you spent a weekend with helping to move and hosting a party. Include in your letter
What you like most about the new apartment
What you did over the weekend
Where and when you would like to meet again
Write a letter to a co-worker telling that about a visit you are planning to their town. Include
When you will arrive
The purpose of your visit
Suggestions for things you can do together
Writing Task 2
One of the best methods to motivate and encourage workers is to pay them according to their level of production.
Is this the best way?
Some believe that it is the responsibility of residents to maintain clean streets while others think this is the duty of the government.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In many countries, weddings are becoming much more expensive compared to the past.
What are the causes of this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
In many countries the legal driving age is 18 and people have suggested raising it to 25 to reduce vehicular accidents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
March
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
An historic building in your city is in bad condition. Write to the local government. Include in your letter:
Why the building is important
Its present condition
What action must be taken
Write a letter to your son’s friend who is coming to your town on holiday. He wants to stay with you but you cannot accommodate him. Include:
An apology
Reasons why he can’t stay in your home
Suggestions for other accommodation
Write a letter to your friend who is travelling overseas. You have been staying at their apartment and these was a storm. Tell your friend:
About the storm.
About the damage
What repairs must be made
You booked tickets to the theatre in advance but will not be able to make it. Write a letter to your friend:
Apologising
Explaining why you can’t make it
Suggesting what to do with the tickets
Write a letter to your friend who wants suggestions for a product to export out of your country. Include
The product you suggest
The region it comes from
Why it is a good product to export
Write a letter to you friend who you were not able to say goodbye to when you left. You worked together at a multinational company.
Apologise to them
Tell them why you left
Tell them what you’ll miss about them
In our technological era, some think that print magazines and newspapers will soon cease to exist.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Fast food is a part of life for many people. Some people think it has a negative effect on both lifestyle and diet.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many parents send their children on educational trips inside and outside of their country.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Most people today have computer, laptops and telephones so they can work from home.
Do you think working from home has more advantages or disadvantages?
Some believe that violent games and movies have a negative impact on people while others see them as a harmless form of relaxation.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many small shops are going out of business because people prefer to shop in stores in big cities.
Do the disadvantages of this development outweigh the advantages?
The best manager is one who is warm and friendly with their staff.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is an increasing amount of noise in our daily lives today.
Why is this a problem?
What can be done about it?
Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions are there to this problem?
February
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Some people don’t mind spending their leisure time with colleagues while others prefer keeping their private life separate from work life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that watching sport is a waste of free time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Write a letter to invite and English-speaking friend to watch a movie with you about your country. In your letter:
Include some background about the film
Explain why it might interest him/her
Suggest arrangements for watching the film
Write a letter to a friend asking for help with a new job you have taken that your friend has been doing for a long time with another company. In your letter,
Ask about the challenges for the job
Ask about possible solutions
Arrange to meet and talk
You are planning to give a presentation at your company. Write a letter to a colleague asking for help. Include:
When and where will the presentation be
What the topic is
What help you would like
Write a letter of complaint to an airline company.
Give details of the flight
Explain the problem
Tell them what you would like done
You’re interested in a music course that you saw advertised.
Expain why you’re interested
Request more information
Talk about your experience level
Writing Task 2
Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think watching movies is a waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many people today do not know their neighbors as well as they did in the past.
What is the cause of this problem?
What can be done to solve it?
Some people think that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way.
Do you agree or disagree?
February
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
Your local council has asked for suggestions for how to keep the city cleaner. Write to your representative to
Explain what the council can do
What people can do to help
How the community will benefit from a cleaner city
You work part time and are attending a course and your manager has offered to give you time off to attend your classes full time.
Write to your boss informing him/her
Of your decision
Your gratitude
Further steps to be taken
Write a letter to your manager who is leaving the company. Include
How you feel about this
What you liked about working with him/her
Questions about his/her future plans
A friend has asked about the details of a course that you recently complete in a training centre.
Explain the course details
Why your friend should take the course
How the course has benefited you
January
Writing Task 1 (A Letter)
You are relocating back to your country. There is some furniture that you would like to return to your friend. In your letter tell them
What furniture you will be giving back
Detail on the condition of the furniture
How they can come and collect the furniture
A colleague at work is organising a goodbye party which you’re not able to attend. Write a letter to him. In the letter, say:
Why you can’t attend
Something you appreciate about him from work
How you will stay in touch with him in the future
You recently attended a course in another country but had to the course in the middle and return to your country. Write a letter to your teacher:
Thank him/her
Tell him/her your situation
Tell them what you will remember best
Write a letter inviting your friend to a family function. Tell him/her:
What the occasion is
What your plans are
Why it is important he/she comes
You recently stayed in a hotel and after returning back home you realized you left a piece of clothing at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel including
What it was
Where you left it
What actions you want them to take
Write a letter to the manager or a taxi company about documents that you left in one of their vehicles.
This is an IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer related to changing jobs from the real IELTS exam.
I was lucky with this question because I just read a book on this topic a few weeks ago!
That is probably not going to happen for you on the test – but sometimes you might know a book or documentary on the topic in question.
You can read on to see how I dealt with summarising a book as my main argument.
Or… you can watch this video with the full answer and analysis.
I recommend that you write about the question yourself and then compare your answer with mine (in terms of grammar, vocabulary, and your ideas, especially):
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer: Changing Jobs (Real Test)
The job market today is very competitive and it is best to choose a career or field of study early in order to get a good job later in life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Real IELTS Exam
Today’s hyper-competitive job market encourages parents and educators to push specialization at increasingly earlier ages. Although choosing a career early on is a safe option, it will not produce the best results in my opinion.
The reason that opting in to a career from an early age has
become so prevalent is that it affords people a sense of security that is at
least somewhat justified. In Vietnam, the vast majority of High School
graduates are pushed early by their parents into safe fields like finance and
the sciences. There are a number of hard skills required for these fields such
as good mathematical acumen, industriousness, and logical thinking. If students
start to learn these skills at a very young age or beginning in High School
then they will have a head start on their peers that can continue through
university into the job market. This is the theory that guides specialization.
It is difficult to dispute the above logic, however, recent
research has shown that having a breadth of knowledge and experience is a much
better predictor of future success. A recent book by David Epstein titled ‘Range’
debunked the commonly held belief that early specialization is safer. In fact,
the majority of leaders in their fields experimented with a large number of
subject areas and professions before settling on one. The early specialisers
were the exceptions and are therefore a poor model to imitate. The core
argument of that book is that experience in multiple fields helps you to make
connections and learn a diverse range of skills that you can later bring to
bear on your chosen profession.
In conclusion, having a range of experience is more
important than locking yourself into a field of study early in order to enhance
later career options. Universities ought to make a shift to adopt some of the
principles of liberal arts schools to better prepare graduates for an uncertain
future world economy.
Word Count: 323
Analysis
1. Today’s hyper-competitive job market encourages parents and educators to push specialization at increasingly earlier ages. 2. Although choosing a career early on is a safe option, it will not produce the best results in my opinion.
The first sentence simply paraphrases the topic for the essay – write this sentence quickly to get on to the more important ones!
My second sentence is my opinion. Be sure to have a clear opinion – don’t sit in the middle. (I include my main idea for one paragraph, but you don’t have to.)
1. The reason that opting in to a career from an early age has become so prevalent is that it affords people a sense of security that is at least somewhat justified. 2. In Vietnam, the vast majority of High School graduates are pushed early by their parents into safe fields like finance and the sciences. 3. There are a number of hard skills required for these fields such as good mathematical acumen, industriousness, and logical thinking. 4. If students start to learn these skills at a very young age or beginning in High School then they will have a head start on their peers that can continue through university into the job market. 5. This is the theory that guides specialization.
This is a topic sentence with my main idea for the paragraph – specialising early is a safe bet.
In my second sentence I focus on the example right away – don’t waste time, be specific and detailed!
The third sentence further develops my example with the specific skills you can learn.
My fourth sentnence relates this back to the job market. If you start to stray from the main question, be sure to relate your example back to it.
The last sentence concludes the paragraph. This sentence is not totally necessary and if you are worried about time, don’t write it!
1. It is difficult to dispute the above logic, however, recent research has shown that having a breadth of knowledge and experience is a much better predictor of future success. 2. A recent book by David Epstein titled ‘Range’ debunked the commonly held belief that early specialization is safer. 3. In fact, the majority of leaders in their fields experimented with a large number of subject areas and professions before settling on one. 4. The early specialisers were the exceptions and are therefore a poor model to imitate. 5. The core argument of that book is that experience in multiple fields helps you to make connections and learn a diverse range of skills that you can later bring to bear on your chosen profession.
My first sentence is another topic sentence with my main idea for the paragraph – have a range of skills is more important for success.
The second sentence begins my main example which comes from a book called ‘Range.’
My third sentence continues to talk about the book – develop your examples fully!
The fourth sentence also further develops the same example – stick to one, fully developed example!
The final sentence concludes the argument from the book and my paragraph.
1. In conclusion, having a range of experience is more important than locking yourself into a field of study early in order to enhance later career options. 2. Universities ought to make a shift to adopt some of the principles of liberal arts schools to better prepare graduates for an uncertain future world economy.
My first sentence summarises my opinion – make sure that you have a clear opinion – don’t sit in the middle!
The final sentence adds an extra detail/piece of support that a lot of examiners will require for band 7+ for task achievement.
Word Count: 323 (Try to keep your writing to 275-300 words)
Vocabulary
Try to figure out or think of a synonym for the vocabulary in bold below:
Today’s hyper-competitive job market encourages parents and educators to push specialization at increasingly earlier ages. Although choosing a career early on is a safe option, it will not produce the best results in my opinion.
The reason that opting in to a career from an early age has become so prevalent is that it affords people a sense of security that is at least somewhat justified. In Vietnam, the vast majority of High School graduates are pushed early by their parents into safe fields like finance and the sciences. There are a number of hard skills required for these fields such as good mathematical acumen, industriousness, and logical thinking. If students start to learn these skills at a very young age or beginning in High School then they will have a head start on their peers that can continue through university into the job market. This is the theory that guides specialization.
It is difficult to dispute the above logic, however, recent research has shown that having a breadth of knowledge and experience is a much better predictor of future success. A recent book by David Epstein titled ‘Range’ debunked the commonly held belief that early specialization is safer. In fact, the majority of leaders in their fields experimented with a large number of subject areas and professions before settling on one. The early specialisers were the exceptions and are therefore a poor model to imitate. The core argument of that book is that experience in multiple fields helps you to make connections and learn a diverse range of skills that you can later bring to bear on your chosen profession.
In conclusion, having a range of experience is more important than locking yourself into a field of study early in order to enhance later career options. Universities ought to make a shift to adopt some of the principles of liberal arts schools to better prepare graduates for an uncertain future world economy.
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Answers
hyper-competitive job market: very difficult to get a job
push specialization: encourage kids to focus on one area
early on: from a young age
safe option: choice most likely to result in a good job
best results: good outcome
opting in: signing up for
prevalent: common
affords: allows for
sense of security: feeling safe
somewhat justified: some good reason for it
vast majority: most people
safe fields: less risky occupations
the sciences: chemistry, biology, computer sciences, etc.
hard skills: discrete skills
mathematical acumen: good mathematical ability
industriousness: hard-working
head start: more advanced than others
peers: classmates/coworkers
guides: underpins
dispute: argue with
breadth of knowledge: wide range of areas you know about
predictor: indicates/predicts
debunked: disproven
commonly held belief: unquestioned belief
early specialization: focusing on one area from a young age
experimented: tried out
subject areas: fields of study
settling on: deciding on
exceptions: different cases
poor model: bad example
imitate: copy
core argument: crux of their position
connections: links
diverse range: lots of different areas
bring to bear: able to call on
chosen profession: chosen field
locking yourself into: getting stuck with
enhance later career options: have a better job in the future
shift: change/alter
adopt: start using
liberal arts schools: schools where you study a range of subjects
better prepare: more ready for
uncertain future world economy: uncertain future job market
Today’s _________________ encourages parents and educators to push _________________ at increasingly earlier ages. Although choosing a career early _________________ is a safe _________________, it will not produce the best _________________ in my opinion.
The reason that opting _________________ to a career from an early age has become so _________________ is that it _________________ people a sense of _________________ that is at least somewhat _________________. In Vietnam, the vast _________________ of High School graduates are pushed early by their parents into safe _________________ like finance and the _________________. There are a number of hard _________________ required for these fields such as good mathematical _________________, _________________, and logical thinking. If students start to learn these skills at a very young age or beginning in High School then they will have a head _________________ on their _________________ that can continue through university into the job market. This is the theory that _________________ specialization.
It is difficult to _________________ the above logic, however, recent research has shown that having a breadth of _________________ and experience is a much better _________________ of future success. A recent book by David Epstein titled ‘Range’ _________________ the commonly held _________________ that early _________________ is safer. In fact, the majority of leaders in their fields _________________ with a large number of subject _________________ and professions before settling _________________ one. The early specialisers were the _________________ and are therefore a poor _________________ to _________________. The core _________________ of that book is that experience in multiple fields helps you to make _________________ and learn a diverse _________________ of skills that you can later bring to _________________ on your chosen _________________.
In conclusion, having a range of experience is more important than locking yourself _________________ a field of study early in order to enhance later career _________________. Universities ought to make a _________________ to _________________ some of the principles of liberal arts _________________ to better _________________ graduates for an uncertain future world _________________.
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