IELTS Essay: U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel

IELTS Essay: U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of U.S. energy consumption by fuel from 1980 to 2030.

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IELTS Essay: U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel

The line chart details fuel consumption from 1980 to 2030 in the United States. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that petrol and oil have been and will continue to be the dominant fuel sources, followed by coal and natural gas, and more distantly by renewable energies. All varieties of fuel have increased and are expected to continue rising with the exception of hydropower which will remain stable overall.

Petrol and oil consumption stood at 35 quadrillion units in 1980 before a slight dip with minor fluctuations around 33 million quadrillion units until approximately 2000. From that point on, a steadier rise begins that is anticipated to reach nearly 50 quadrillion by 2030, by far the greatest data point in the chart. Coal and natural gas were considerably lower and displayed broadly similar trends. Natural gas began the period at 20 quadrillion units and coal was 4 quadrillion lower. Over the following years, the figures were erratic and their relative positions in the chart switched several times until coal began to separate itself around 2015, predicted to finish around 8 quadrillion units higher than natural gas at 30 quadrillion.

The consumption of cleaner energy sources was less significant with nuclear the highest, rising to just over 6 quadrillion by the end of the projections. Solar and wind power are slightly lower at near 5 quadrillion and hydropower underwent minor fluctuations to finish around 4 quadrillion units.

Analysis

1. The line chart details fuel consumption from 1980 to 2030 in the United States. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that petrol and oil have been and will continue to be the dominant fuel sources, followed by coal and natural gas, and more distantly by renewable energies. 3. All varieties of fuel have increased and are expected to continue rising with the exception of hydropower which will remain stable overall.

  1. Paraphrase what the bar chart shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.
  3. This one is a little complex so it needs a second sentence for the overview.

1. Petrol and oil consumption stood at 35 quadrillion units in 1980 before a slight dip with minor fluctuations around 33 million quadrillion units until approximately 2000. 2. From that point on, a steadier rise begins that is anticipated to reach nearly 50 quadrillion by 2030, by far the greatest data point in the chart. Coal and natural gas were considerably lower and displayed broadly similar trends. 3. Natural gas began the period at 20 quadrillion units and coal was 4 quadrillion lower. 4. Over the following years, the figures were erratic and their relative positions in the chart switched several times until coal began to separate itself around 2015, predicted to finish around 8 quadrillion units higher than natural gas at 30 quadrillion.

  1. Begin writing about the data for the first categories.
  2. Make sure you compare as much as possible.
  3. Keep using the units too.
  4. There is a lot of data so this essay is a little longer than normal.

1. The consumption of cleaner energy sources was less significant with nuclear the highest, rising to just over 6 quadrillion by the end of the projections. 2. Solar and wind power are slightly lower at near 5 quadrillion and hydropower underwent minor fluctuations to finish around 4 quadrillion units.

  1. Write about the final other parts of the graph – include everything!
  2. Compare the categories.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

The line chart details fuel consumption from 1980 to 2030 in the United States. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that petrol and oil have been and will continue to be the dominant fuel sources, followed by coal and natural gas, and more distantly by renewable energies. All varieties of fuel have increased and are expected to continue rising with the exception of hydropower which will remain stable overall.

Petrol and oil consumption stood at 35 quadrillion units in 1980 before a slight dip with minor fluctuations around 33 million quadrillion units until approximately 2000. From that point on, a steadier rise begins that is anticipated to reach nearly 50 quadrillion by 2030, by far the greatest data point in the chart. Coal and natural gas were considerably lower and displayed broadly similar trends. Natural gas began the period at 20 quadrillion units and coal was 4 quadrillion lower. Over the following years, the figures were erratic and their relative positions in the chart switched several times until coal began to separate itself around 2015, predicted to finish around 8 quadrillion units higher than natural gas at 30 quadrillion.

The consumption of cleaner energy sources was less significant with nuclear the highest, rising to just over 6 quadrillion by the end of the projections. Solar and wind power are slightly lower at near 5 quadrillion and hydropower underwent minor fluctuations to finish around 4 quadrillion units.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

details fuel consumption shows how much of a fuel source is used

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that petrol and oil overall fuel for cars and industry

dominant fuel sources most used kinds of energy

followed by coal after that the black rock that comes from mining

natural gas a kind of fuel source

more distantly by renewable energies further behind by cleaner sources

varieties different kinds of

are expected to continue rising with the exception of hydropower will keep going up but not with energy from dams

remain stable overall stay the same by the end of the period

stood at was at the level of

before a slight dip with minor fluctuations around falling down a little with erratic rises and falls near

until approximately reaching the point around

From that point on after that

steadier rise begins going up consistently starts

anticipated to reach nearly expected to get to almost

by far the greatest data point in the chart the biggest number in the whole image

considerably lower much less

displayed broadly similar trends almost the same pattern

began the period at started at

Over the following years the next years

figures data

erratic fluctuating

relative positions where they stand in comparison

switched several times changed position a few times

separate itself go off in a different direction

predicted to finish around expected to end at

cleaner energy sources not polluting kinds of energy

less significant not as important

nuclear from radioactive sources

by the end of the projections at the time the graph finishes predictions

slightly lower a little less

near almost at

underwent minor fluctuations to finish around experienced ups and downs and ended near

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈdiːteɪlz fjʊəl kənˈsʌm(p)ʃən 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪv, ɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt ˈpɛtrəl ænd ɔɪl 
ˈdɒmɪnənt fjʊəl ˈsɔːsɪz
ˈfɒləʊd baɪ kəʊl 
ˈnæʧrəl gæs
mɔː ˈdɪstəntli baɪ rɪˈnjuːəbl ˈɛnəʤiz.
vəˈraɪətiz 
ɑːr ɪksˈpɛktɪd tuː kənˈtɪnju(ː) ˈraɪzɪŋ wɪð ði ɪkˈsɛpʃən ɒv ˈhaɪdrəʊˌpaʊə 
rɪˈmeɪn ˈsteɪbl ˈəʊvərɔːl
stʊd æt 
bɪˈfɔːr ə slaɪt dɪp wɪð ˈmaɪnə ˌflʌktjʊˈeɪʃənz əˈraʊnd 
ənˈtɪl əˈprɒksɪmɪtli 
frɒm ðæt pɔɪnt ɒn 
ˈstɛdɪə raɪz bɪˈgɪnz 
ænˈtɪsɪpeɪtɪd tuː riːʧ ˈnɪəli 
baɪ fɑː ðə ˈgreɪtɪst ˈdeɪtə pɔɪnt ɪn ðə ʧɑːt
kənˈsɪdərəbli ˈləʊə 
dɪsˈpleɪd ˈbrɔːdli ˈsɪmɪlə trɛndz
bɪˈgæn ðə ˈpɪərɪəd æt 
ˈəʊvə ðə ˈfɒləʊɪŋ jɪəz 
ˈfɪgəz 
ɪˈrætɪk 
ˈrɛlətɪv pəˈzɪʃənz 
swɪʧt ˈsɛvrəl taɪmz 
ˈsɛprɪt ɪtˈsɛlf 
prɪˈdɪktɪd tuː ˈfɪnɪʃ əˈraʊnd 
ˈkliːnər ˈɛnəʤi ˈsɔːsɪz 
lɛs sɪgˈnɪfɪkənt 
ˈnjuːklɪə 
baɪ ði ɛnd ɒv ðə prəˈʤɛkʃənz
ˈslaɪtli ˈləʊə 
nɪə 
ˌʌndəˈwɛnt ˈmaɪnə ˌflʌktjʊˈeɪʃənz tuː ˈfɪnɪʃ əˈraʊnd 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

The line chart d______________________________n from 1980 to 2030 in the United States. L______________________________________________________________________l have been and will continue to be the d_________________________________s, f____________________l and n_______________s, and m___________________________________s. All v____________s of fuel have increased and a______________________________________________________________r which will r__________________________l.

Petrol and oil consumption s__________t 35 quadrillion units in 1980 b_________________________________________________d 33 million quadrillion units u__________________________y 2000. F_____________________n, a s_________________________s that is a______________________________y 50 quadrillion by 2030, b_______________________________________t. Coal and natural gas were c_________________________r and d__________________________s. Natural gas b____________________t 20 quadrillion units and coal was 4 quadrillion lower. O_________________________s, the f___________s were e______c and their r__________________s in the chart s_______________________s until coal began to s_________________f around 2015, p______________________________d 8 quadrillion units higher than natural gas at 30 quadrillion.

The consumption of c__________________________s was l_____________________t with n__________r the highest, rising to just over 6 quadrillion b________________________________s. Solar and wind power are s_______________ at n__________r 5 quadrillion and hydropower u_________________________________d 4 quadrillion units.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.theguardian.com/environment/2022/sep/03/energy-citizenship-europes-communities-forging-a-low-carbon-future

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Environment

  1. How are environmental problems dealt with in your country?
  2. What can be done to make people recycle more often?
  3. What is the most pressing environmental problem?
  4. Is recycling a common practice in your country?
  5. Are governments or individuals more responsible?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS chart below:

IELTS Essay: Farm Animals and Vegetables

IELTS Essay: Farm Animals and Vegetables

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of students raising farm animals and vegetables from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Farm Animals and Vegetables

It has been suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some today have argued that it would be a sensible policy to teach children how to farm and raise animals at school. In my opinion, though this would require enormous resources, it would be beneficial in terms of both physical and intellectual development.

Those arguing against this proposal point out the resources needed. In order to implement such an ambitious program, schools would firstly need land nearby where animals and crops could be raised. This might be possible within a school’s pre-existing grounds, but there would still need to be significant investment in infrastructure. Schools would therefore have to reallocate a significant portion of their budget, potentially reducing the money for crucial facilities, staff, and teaching resources.

However, the advantages for the holistic development of children is overwhelming. Students today spend more time than ever before passively using technological devices. By spending more time outdoors learning about animals and crops, students will better understand their position within the natural food chain. Over time, this may lead them to adopt environmentally friendlier, compassionate lifestyle choices such as becoming vegetarians or shopping locally rather than buying from large chains. Moreover, the work outdoors would necessarily involve physical exercise. Since obesity is a growing concern in most countries, this time outside could help to improve standards of physical fitness and establish healthy lifelong habits.

In conclusion, despite the money this reform would require, schools should adopt it when possible so as to achieve a more complete education for students. Governments should consider the long-term effects when deciding on such policies.

Analysis

1. Some today have argued that it would be a sensible policy to teach children how to farm and raise animals at school. 2. In my opinion, though this would require enormous resources, it would be beneficial in terms of both physical and intellectual development.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those arguing against this proposal point out the resources needed. 2. In order to implement such an ambitious program, schools would firstly need land nearby where animals and crops could be raised. 3. This might be possible within a school’s pre-existing grounds, but there would still need to be significant investment in infrastructure. 4. Schools would therefore have to reallocate a significant portion of their budget, potentially reducing the money for crucial facilities, staff, and teaching resources.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. However, the advantages for the holistic development of children is overwhelming. 2. Students today spend more time than ever before passively using technological devices. 3. By spending more time outdoors learning about animals and crops, students will better understand their position within the natural food chain. 4. Over time, this may lead them to adopt environmentally friendlier, compassionate lifestyle choices such as becoming vegetarians or shopping locally rather than buying from large chains. 5. Moreover, the work outdoors would necessarily involve physical exercise. 6. Since obesity is a growing concern in most countries, this time outside could help to improve standards of physical fitness and establish healthy lifelong habits.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Continue your development.
  6. Finish strong.

1. In conclusion, despite the money this reform would require, schools should adopt it when possible so as to achieve a more complete education for students. 2. Governments should consider the long-term effects when deciding on such policies.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some today have argued that it would be a sensible policy to teach children how to farm and raise animals at school. In my opinion, though this would require enormous resources, it would be beneficial in terms of both physical and intellectual development.

Those arguing against this proposal point out the resources needed. In order to implement such an ambitious program, schools would firstly need land nearby where animals and crops could be raised. This might be possible within a school’s pre-existing grounds, but there would still need to be significant investment in infrastructure. Schools would therefore have to reallocate a significant portion of their budget, potentially reducing the money for crucial facilities, staff, and teaching resources.

However, the advantages for the holistic development of children is overwhelming. Students today spend more time than ever before passively using technological devices. By spending more time outdoors learning about animals and crops, students will better understand their position within the natural food chain. Over time, this may lead them to adopt environmentally friendlier, compassionate lifestyle choices such as becoming vegetarians or shopping locally rather than buying from large chains. Moreover, the work outdoors would necessarily involve physical exercise. Since obesity is a growing concern in most countries, this time outside could help to improve standards of physical fitness and establish healthy lifelong habits.

In conclusion, despite the money this reform would require, schools should adopt it when possible so as to achieve a more complete education for students. Governments should consider the long-term effects when deciding on such policies.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

argued pointed out

sensible policy logical idea

farm and raise animals take care of livestock

require enormous resources needs a lot of money, time

beneficial in terms of both physical and intellectual development good for both the body and mind

Those arguing against this proposal point out people who are not in favor of this idea argue

In order to implement such an ambitious program to put in place this reform

firstly need land nearby first of all require the space

animals and crops could be raised livestock and vegetables/fruits to be harvested

possible can happen

school’s pre-existing grounds a school’s campus

significant investment in infrastructure lots of money for buildings, rooms, etc.

reallocate a significant portion of their budget redirect money to

potentially reducing possibly cutting down on

crucial facilities important places at a school

staff people who work there

and teaching resources things for teachers to use when teaching

advantages benefits

holistic development good for overall growth

overwhelming very strong

spend more time than ever before passively using technological devices use smartphones more often

By spending more time outdoors more time outside

understand their position within the natural food chain know how you are part of nature

Over time later on

adopt environmentally friendlier start doing better things for nature

compassionate lifestyle choices caring about the world around you

vegetarians people who don’t eat meat

shopping locally rather than buying from large chains buying from nearby farms instead of big supermarkets

necessarily involve physical exercise of course require you to be active

obesity being overweight

growing concern more and more of a worry

improve standards of physical fitness and establish healthy lifelong habits make them healthy in the long-term

despite the money this reform would require regardless of the resources needed

adopt start doing

achieve accomplish

complete education holistic learning

consider thinking about

long-term effects impact later on

deciding on such policies implementing these ideas

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈɑːgjuːd 
ˈsɛnsəbl ˈpɒlɪsi 
fɑːm ænd reɪz ˈænɪməlz 
rɪˈkwaɪər ɪˈnɔːməs rɪˈsɔːsɪz
ˌbɛnɪˈfɪʃəl ɪn tɜːmz ɒv bəʊθ ˈfɪzɪkəl ænd ˌɪntɪˈlɛktjʊəl dɪˈvɛləpmənt
ðəʊz ˈɑːgjuːɪŋ əˈgɛnst ðɪs prəˈpəʊzəl pɔɪnt aʊt 
ɪn ˈɔːdə tuː ˈɪmplɪmənt sʌʧ ən æmˈbɪʃəs ˈprəʊgræm
ˈfɜːstli niːd lænd ˈnɪəbaɪ 
ˈænɪməlz ænd krɒps kʊd biː reɪzd
ˈpɒsəbl 
skuːlz priː-ɪgˈzɪstɪŋ graʊndz
sɪgˈnɪfɪkənt ɪnˈvɛstmənt ɪn ˈɪnfrəˌstrʌkʧə
ˌriːˈæləʊkeɪt ə sɪgˈnɪfɪkənt ˈpɔːʃən ɒv ðeə ˈbʌʤɪt
pəʊˈtɛnʃəli rɪˈdjuːsɪŋ 
ˈkruːʃəl fəˈsɪlɪtiz
stɑːf
ænd ˈtiːʧɪŋ rɪˈsɔːsɪz
ədˈvɑːntɪʤɪz 
həˈlɪstɪk dɪˈvɛləpmənt 
ˌəʊvəˈwɛlmɪŋ
spɛnd mɔː taɪm ðæn ˈɛvə bɪˈfɔː ˈpæsɪvli ˈjuːzɪŋ ˌtɛknəˈlɒʤɪk(ə)l dɪˈvaɪsɪz
baɪ ˈspɛndɪŋ mɔː taɪm ˌaʊtˈdɔːz 
ˌʌndəˈstænd ðeə pəˈzɪʃən wɪˈðɪn ðə ˈnæʧrəl fuːd ʧeɪn
ˈəʊvə taɪm
əˈdɒpt ɪnˌvaɪərənˈmɛntli ˈfrɛndlɪə
kəmˈpæʃənɪt ˈlaɪfˌstaɪl ˈʧɔɪsɪz 
ˌvɛʤɪˈteərɪənz 
ˈʃɒpɪŋ ˈləʊkəli ˈrɑːðə ðæn ˈbaɪɪŋ frɒm lɑːʤ ʧeɪnz
ˈnɛsɪsərɪli ɪnˈvɒlv ˈfɪzɪkəl ˈɛksəsaɪz
əʊˈbiːsɪti 
ˈgrəʊɪŋ kənˈsɜːn 
ɪmˈpruːv ˈstændədz ɒv ˈfɪzɪkəl ˈfɪtnɪs ænd ɪsˈtæblɪʃ ˈhɛlθi ˈlaɪflɒŋ ˈhæbɪts
dɪsˈpaɪt ðə ˈmʌni ðɪs ˌriːˈfɔːm wʊd rɪˈkwaɪə
əˈdɒpt 
əˈʧiːv eɪ 
kəmˈpliːt ˌɛdju(ː)ˈkeɪʃən 
kənˈsɪdə 
ˈlɒŋtɜːm ɪˈfɛkts 
dɪˈsaɪdɪŋ ɒn sʌʧ ˈpɒlɪsiz

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Some today have a________d that it would be a s____________y to teach children how to f_______________________s at school. In my opinion, though this would r_____________________________s, it would be b______________________________________________________________t.

T____________________________________t the resources needed. I__________________________________________________m, schools would f__________________________y where a__________________________________d. This might be p_______e within a s____________________________________s, but there would still need to be s_______________________________________e. Schools would therefore have to r__________________________________________t, p______________________g the money for c_________________________s, s_______f, a__________________________________s.

However, the a_____________s for the h_____________________t of children is o________________g. Students today s__________________________________________________________________s. B___________________________s learning about animals and crops, students will better u______________________________________________________n. O______e, this may lead them to a____________________________________r, c_____________________________s such as becoming v____________s or s____________________________________________s. Moreover, the work outdoors would n__________________________________e. Since o________y is a g______________n in most countries, this time outside could help to i_________________________________________________________________s.

In conclusion, d______________________________________e, schools should a________t it when possible so as to a________e a more c___________________n for students. Governments should c___________r the l_________________________s when d__________________________s.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.baltictimes.com/why_agriculture_and_farming_should_be_taught_in_schools/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Agriculture

  1. What kinds of crops are grown in your country?
  2. Is farming becoming more sustainable in your country?
  3. Should governments subsidize the agricultural industry?
  4. How will farms look different in the future?
  5. Do most people in your country buy local produce?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:

It is sometimes suggested that primary schoolchildren should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals.

Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS Speaking Part 2: A Movie

IELTS Speaking Part 2: A Movie

This is an IELTS speaking question related to the topic of flowers from the real IELTS speaking part 2 exam.

Check out some of my speaking sample answers for free on TikTok: https://www.tiktok.com/@howtodoielts

Here is the question – comment your answers below for some feedback!

Describe a movie that you like

You should say:
When you watched it
Where you watched it
What it was about
And explain why you like it

Here is a preview of my answer:

The movie I’d like to talk about came out the other year and took the world by storm basically – it’s called Parasite – I’m sure you’ve heard of it because…

If you want sample answer for this question, the full speaking Ebook is available on my Patreon.

IELTS Speaking Test (and Lesson): Band 6/6.5

IELTS Speaking Test (and Lesson): Band 6/6.5

This is an IELTS speaking sample test – but you will notice that the style is not exactly like the real IELTS speaking exam.

Check out some of my speaking sample answers for free on TikTok: https://www.tiktok.com/@howtodoielts

The topics featured are cars, television programs, and concentration.

I let the candidate speak longer so that I would have more to correct.

Here is the test itself:

And here are my corrections:

Enjoy!

IELTS Essay: Outrage

IELTS Essay: Outrage

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of outrage from the real IELTS exam.

This essay is longer than the ones I usually write – I recommend writing under 300 words.

But for this topic I had some ideas I really wanted to write about so it is a little on the long side – no harm to that!

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IELTS Essay: Outrage

There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today.

Why is this?

Is this a positive or a negative development?

There is a common perception today that people are generally angrier than they were in the past. In my opinion, this is a fundamentally negative psychological phenomenon exacerbated by modern technology.

The main reason there are higher levels of anger in society is individuals are vulnerable to the pleasure of feeling outrage. Human beings are naturally attracted to activities that produce the release of certain endorphins. These actions include positive outlets such as exercising and spending time with others and more harmful ones like eating unhealthy foods and abusing narcotic stimulants. Outrage also has the added benefit of a self-esteem boost. The narcotic-like effects of outrage over time become addictive, especially in the current technological age. A person can browse the news and read stories that provoke anger, scroll through social media, and engage in so-called “hate watching” of popular pundits on television espousing extreme views. All these addictive pastimes are available on mobile devices, creating an environment where access to outrage is too readily accessible to be ignored.

In my opinion, outrage endangers the ability of individuals in a society to understand each other and work towards shared goals. When individuals pursue outrage as an end in itself, they are no longer communicating honestly. For example, many online trolls post and engage with other users mainly to provoke and feel outrage themselves with little concern for truth and honest debate. This creates an atmosphere wherein people become increasingly distrustful and alienated from one another. In order for a person to change their views and make actual progress in the world, they must be willing to listen to and understand the arguments of the other side. When this occurs, both sides feel some degree of commonality. However, if neither side is engaging in good-faith conversations, then the unproductive outcome is merely to feel more and more outraged and accomplish less and less.

In conclusion, seeking outrage is fundamentally human, though it leads to a breakdown in social cohesion. People should cultivate healthier habits and abstain from easy, pleasurable feelings of outrage.

Analysis

1. There is a common perception today that people are generally angrier than they were in the past. 2. In my opinion, this is a fundamentally negative psychological phenomenon exacerbated by modern technology.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. The main reason there are higher levels of anger in society is individuals are vulnerable to the pleasure of feeling outrage. 2. Human beings are naturally attracted to activities that produce the release of certain endorphins. 3. These actions include positive outlets such as exercising and spending time with others and more harmful ones like eating unhealthy foods and abusing narcotic stimulants. 4. Outrage also has the added benefit of a self-esteem boost. 5. The narcotic-like effects of outrage over time become addictive, especially in the current technological age. 6. A person can browse the news and read stories that provoke anger, scroll through social media, and engage in so-called “hate watching” of popular pundits on television espousing extreme views. 7. All these addictive pastimes are available on mobile devices, creating an environment where access to outrage is too readily accessible to be ignored.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. You can sometimes include the counterpoint here too.
  6. This essay is a bit long…
  7. Finish strong.

1. In my opinion, outrage endangers the ability of individuals in a society to understand each other and work towards shared goals. 2. When individuals pursue outrage as an end in itself, they are no longer communicating honestly. 3. For example, many online trolls post and engage with other users mainly to provoke and feel outrage themselves with little concern for truth and honest debate. 4. This creates an atmosphere wherein people become increasingly distrustful and alienated from one another. 5. In order for a person to change their views and make actual progress in the world, they must be willing to listen to and understand the arguments of the other side. 6. When this occurs, both sides feel some degree of commonality. 7. However, if neither side is engaging in good-faith conversations, then the unproductive outcome is merely to feel more and more outraged and accomplish less and less.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Continue your development.
  6. Best to write shorter essays than this.
  7. Use a variety of grammar.

1. In conclusion, seeking outrage is fundamentally human, though it leads to a breakdown in social cohesion. 2. People should cultivate healthier habits and abstain from easy, pleasurable feelings of outrage.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

There is a common perception today that people are generally angrier than they were in the past. In my opinion, this is a fundamentally negative psychological phenomenon exacerbated by modern technology.

The main reason there are higher levels of anger in society is individuals are vulnerable to the pleasure of feeling outrage. Human beings are naturally attracted to activities that produce the release of certain endorphins. These actions include positive outlets such as exercising and spending time with others and more harmful ones like eating unhealthy foods and abusing narcotic stimulants. Outrage also has the added benefit of a self-esteem boost. The narcotic-like effects of outrage over time become addictive, especially in the current technological age. A person can browse the news and read stories that provoke anger, scroll through social media, and engage in so-called “hate watching” of popular pundits on television espousing extreme views. All these addictive pastimes are available on mobile devices, creating an environment where access to outrage is too readily accessible to be ignored.

In my opinion, outrage endangers the ability of individuals in a society to understand each other and work towards shared goals. When individuals pursue outrage as an end in itself, they are no longer communicating honestly. For example, many online trolls post and engage with other users mainly to provoke and feel outrage themselves with little concern for truth and honest debate. This creates an atmosphere wherein people become increasingly distrustful and alienated from one another. In order for a person to change their views and make actual progress in the world, they must be willing to listen to and understand the arguments of the other side. When this occurs, both sides feel some degree of commonality. However, if neither side is engaging in good-faith conversations, then the unproductive outcome is merely to feel more and more outraged and accomplish less and less.

In conclusion, seeking outrage is fundamentally human, though it leads to a breakdown in social cohesion. People should cultivate healthier habits and abstain from easy, pleasurable feelings of outrage.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

There is a common perception today that many think now

generally angrier more outrage overall

in the past before

fundamentally negative psychological phenomenon exacerbated by modern technology basically bad human trait made worse by technology today

main reason biggest cause of

higher levels of more of it

vulnerable weak when it comes to

pleasure feeling good

outrage

naturally attracted to of course susceptible to

produce the release of certain endorphins happy feelings in the brain

positive outlets good expressions of

harmful hurts

abusing narcotic stimulants using drugs

added benefit another positive

self-esteem boost feel better about yourself

The narcotic-like effects of outrage over time become addictive, especially in the current technological age the drug addiction coming from feeling angry is hard to resist especially because of smartphones, social media, etc.

read stories that provoke anger follow news that is upsetting

scroll through social media look through Facebook, Instagram, etc.

engage in so-called “hate watching” of popular pundits on television espousing extreme views watch shows you dislike with commentators saying strong opinions

addictive pastimes activities you can’t stop doing

available on mobile devices can be used on phones

creating an environment where access to outrage making an atmosphere where people get angry easily

too readily accessible to be ignored too easy to get

endangers risks

understand each other communicate with others

work towards shared goals accomplish things together

pursue outrage as an end in itself try to make yourself angry

no longer communicating honestly not having honest conversations

online trolls post and engage with other users mainly to provoke and feel outrage themselves people online make others and themselves angry

little concern for truth and honest debate not caring about real conversations

creates an atmosphere wherein make an atmosphere in which

increasingly distrustful and alienated from one another more and more unreliable and people get further way from each other

In order for a person to change their views so a person changes their mind

actual progress real development

listen to and understand the arguments of the other side communicate with others honestly and feel empathy

feel some degree of commonality feel close to others

if neither side is engaging in good-faith conversations neither one is interested in having a real talk

unproductive outcome nothing will come of it

merely simply

feel more and more outraged and accomplish less and less get angrier and angrier and get less done

seeking outrage trying to make yourself angry

fundamentally human basic part of human nature

leads to a breakdown in social cohesion people don’t get along any more

cultivate healthier habits live better

abstain from easy stay away from simple

pleasurable feelings of outrage happy feelings of anger

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ðeər ɪz ə ˈkɒmən pəˈsɛpʃən təˈdeɪ ðæt 
ˈʤɛnərəli ˈæŋgrɪə 
ɪn ðə pɑːst 
ˌfʌndəˈmɛntli ˈnɛgətɪv ˌsaɪkəˈlɒʤɪkəl fɪˈnɒmɪnən ɛksˈæsə(ː)beɪtɪd baɪ ˈmɒdən tɛkˈnɒləʤi
meɪn ˈriːzn 
ˈhaɪə ˈlɛvlz ɒv 
ˈvʌlnərəbl 
ˈplɛʒə 
ˈaʊtreɪʤ
ˈnæʧrəli əˈtræktɪd tuː 
ˈprɒdjuːs ðə rɪˈliːs ɒv ˈsɜːtn endɒrphəns
ˈpɒzətɪv ˈaʊtlɛts 
ˈhɑːmfʊl 
əˈbjuːzɪŋ nɑːˈkɒtɪk ˈstɪmjʊlənts
ˈædɪd ˈbɛnɪfɪt 
sɛlf-ɪsˈtiːm buːst
ðə nɑːˈkɒtɪk-laɪk ɪˈfɛkts ɒv ˈaʊtreɪʤ ˈəʊvə taɪm bɪˈkʌm əˈdɪktɪv, ɪsˈpɛʃəli ɪn ðə ˈkʌrənt ˌtɛknəˈlɒʤɪk(ə)l eɪʤ
riːd ˈstɔːriz ðæt prəˈvəʊk ˈæŋgə
skrəʊl θruː ˈsəʊʃəl ˈmiːdiə 
ɪnˈgeɪʤ ɪn ˈsəʊˈkɔːld “heɪt ˈwɒʧɪŋ” ɒv ˈpɒpjʊlə ˈpʌndɪts ɒn ˈtɛlɪˌvɪʒən ɪsˈpaʊzɪŋ ɪksˈtriːm vjuːz
əˈdɪktɪv ˈpɑːstaɪmz 
əˈveɪləbl ɒn ˈməʊbaɪl dɪˈvaɪsɪz
kri(ː)ˈeɪtɪŋ ən ɪnˈvaɪərənmənt weər ˈæksɛs tuː ˈaʊtreɪʤ 
tuː ˈrɛdɪli əkˈsɛsəbl tuː biː ɪgˈnɔːd
ɪnˈdeɪnʤəz 
ˌʌndəˈstænd iːʧ ˈʌðə 
wɜːk təˈwɔːdz ʃeəd gəʊlz
pəˈsjuː ˈaʊtreɪʤ æz ən ɛnd ɪn ɪtˈsɛlf
nəʊ ˈlɒŋgə kəˈmjuːnɪkeɪtɪŋ ˈɒnɪstli
ˈɒnˌlaɪn trəʊlz pəʊst ænd ɪnˈgeɪʤ wɪð ˈʌðə ˈjuːzəz ˈmeɪnli tuː prəˈvəʊk ænd fiːl ˈaʊtreɪʤ ðəmˈsɛlvz 
ˈlɪtl kənˈsɜːn fɔː truːθ ænd ˈɒnɪst dɪˈbeɪt 
kri(ː)ˈeɪts ən ˈætməsfɪə weərˈɪn 
ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli dɪsˈtrʌstfʊl ænd ˈeɪliəneɪtɪd frɒm wʌn əˈnʌðə
ɪn ˈɔːdə fɔːr ə ˈpɜːsn tuː ʧeɪnʤ ðeə vjuːz 
ˈækʧʊəl ˈprəʊgrəs 
ˈlɪsn tuː ænd ˌʌndəˈstænd ði ˈɑːgjʊmənts ɒv ði ˈʌðə saɪd
fiːl sʌm dɪˈgriː ɒv kommənaliti
ɪf ˈnaɪðə saɪd ɪz ɪnˈgeɪʤɪŋ ɪn gʊd-feɪθ ˌkɒnvəˈseɪʃənz
ˌʌnprəˈdʌktɪv ˈaʊtkʌm 
ˈmɪəli 
fiːl mɔːr ænd mɔːr ˈaʊtreɪʤd ænd əˈkɒmplɪʃ lɛs ænd lɛs
ˈsiːkɪŋ ˈaʊtreɪʤ 
ˌfʌndəˈmɛntli ˈhjuːmən
liːdz tuː ə ˈbreɪkˌdaʊn ɪn ˈsəʊʃəl kəʊˈhiːʒən
ˈkʌltɪveɪt ˈhɛlθɪə ˈhæbɪts 
əbˈsteɪn frɒm ˈiːzi
ˈplɛʒərəbl ˈfiːlɪŋz ɒv ˈaʊtreɪʤ

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

T______________________________________t people are g__________________r than they were i___________________t. In my opinion, this is a f_________________________________________________________________________y.

The m__________________n there are h_________________f anger in society is individuals are v_____________e to the p______________e of feeling o_________e. Human beings are n________________________o activities that p________________________________________________________s. These actions include p____________________s such as exercising and spending time with others and more h_____________l ones like eating unhealthy foods and a________________________________s. Outrage also has the a_____________________t of a s______________________t. T___________________________________________________________________e, e_____________________________________________________e. A person can browse the news and r_______________________________r, s____________________________________a, and e________________________________________________________________________s. All these a______________________s are a______________________________s, c_______________________________________________e is t____________________________________d.

In my opinion, outrage e______________s the ability of individuals in a society to u_________________________r and w___________________________s. When individuals p___________________________________f, they are n_________________________________y. For example, many o___________________________________________________________________________________s with l__________________________________________e. This c__________________________________________________________n people become i_______________________________________________r. I______________________________________________s and make a__________________s in the world, they must be willing to l____________________________________________________e. When this occurs, both sides f_____________________________________y. However, i_________________________________________________s, then the u__________________________e is m_______y to f__________________________________________________________s.

In conclusion, s_________________e is f____________________n, though it l____________________________________________n. People should c_________________________________________s and a__________________________y, p____________________________________e.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.npr.org/2019/10/09/768489375/how-outrage-is-hijacking-our-culture-and-our-minds

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Reading

  1. Do you enjoy reading?
  2. What kinds of books do you like?
  3. Do you have a favorite author?
  4. Is reading a popular pastime in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:

Some children spend hours every day on smartphones.

Why is this the case?

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?