There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or a negative development?
There is a common perception today that people are generally angrier than they were in the past. In my opinion, this is a fundamentally negative psychological phenomenon exacerbated by modern technology.
The main reason there are higher levels of anger in society is individuals are vulnerable to the pleasure of feeling outrage. Human beings are naturally attracted to activities that produce the release of certain endorphins. These actions include positive outlets such as exercising and spending time with others and more harmful ones like eating unhealthy foods and abusing narcotic stimulants. Outrage also has the added benefit of a self-esteem boost. The narcotic-like effects of outrage over time become addictive, especially in the current technological age. A person can browse the news and read stories that provoke anger, scroll through social media, and engage in so-called “hate watching” of popular pundits on television espousing extreme views. All these addictive pastimes are available on mobile devices, creating an environment where access to outrage is too readily accessible to be ignored.
In my opinion, outrage endangers the ability of individuals in a society to understand each other and work towards shared goals. When individuals pursue outrage as an end in itself, they are no longer communicating honestly. For example, many online trolls post and engage with other users mainly to provoke and feel outrage themselves with little concern for truth and honest debate. This creates an atmosphere wherein people become increasingly distrustful and alienated from one another. In order for a person to change their views and make actual progress in the world, they must be willing to listen to and understand the arguments of the other side. When this occurs, both sides feel some degree of commonality. However, if neither side is engaging in good-faith conversations, then the unproductive outcome is merely to feel more and more outraged and accomplish less and less.
In conclusion, seeking outrage is fundamentally human, though it leads to a breakdown in social cohesion. People should cultivate healthier habits and abstain from easy, pleasurable feelings of outrage.
Analysis
1. There is a common perception today that people are generally angrier than they were in the past. 2. In my opinion, this is a fundamentally negative psychological phenomenon exacerbated by modern technology.
Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. The main reason there are higher levels of anger in society is individuals are vulnerable to the pleasure of feeling outrage. 2. Human beings are naturally attracted to activities that produce the release of certain endorphins. 3. These actions include positive outlets such as exercising and spending time with others and more harmful ones like eating unhealthy foods and abusing narcotic stimulants. 4. Outrage also has the added benefit of a self-esteem boost. 5. The narcotic-like effects of outrage over time become addictive, especially in the current technological age. 6. A person can browse the news and read stories that provoke anger, scroll through social media, and engage in so-called “hate watching” of popular pundits on television espousing extreme views. 7. All these addictive pastimes are available on mobile devices, creating an environment where access to outrage is too readily accessible to be ignored.
Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
Explain your main idea.
Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
Keep developing it fully.
You can sometimes include the counterpoint here too.
This essay is a bit long…
Finish strong.
1. In my opinion, outrage endangers the ability of individuals in a society to understand each other and work towards shared goals. 2. When individuals pursue outrage as an end in itself, they are no longer communicating honestly. 3. For example, many online trolls post and engage with other users mainly to provoke and feel outrage themselves with little concern for truth and honest debate. 4. This creates an atmosphere wherein people become increasingly distrustful and alienated from one another. 5. In order for a person to change their views and make actual progress in the world, they must be willing to listen to and understand the arguments of the other side. 6. When this occurs, both sides feel some degree of commonality. 7. However, if neither side is engaging in good-faith conversations, then the unproductive outcome is merely to feel more and more outraged and accomplish less and less.
Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
Explain your new main idea.
Include specific details and examples.
Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
Continue your development.
Best to write shorter essays than this.
Use a variety of grammar.
1. In conclusion, seeking outrage is fundamentally human, though it leads to a breakdown in social cohesion. 2. People should cultivate healthier habits and abstain from easy, pleasurable feelings of outrage.
Summarise your main ideas.
Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
There is a common perception today that people are generally angrier than they were in the past. In my opinion, this is a fundamentally negative psychological phenomenonexacerbated by modern technology.
The main reason there are higher levels of anger in society is individuals are vulnerable to the pleasure of feeling outrage. Human beings are naturally attracted to activities that produce the release of certain endorphins. These actions include positive outlets such as exercising and spending time with others and more harmful ones like eating unhealthy foods and abusing narcotic stimulants. Outrage also has the added benefit of a self-esteem boost. The narcotic-like effects of outrage over time become addictive, especially in the current technological age. A person can browse the news and read stories that provoke anger, scroll through social media, and engage in so-called “hate watching” of popular pundits on television espousing extreme views. All these addictive pastimes are available on mobile devices, creating an environment where access to outrage is too readily accessible to be ignored.
In my opinion, outrage endangers the ability of individuals in a society to understand each other and work towards shared goals. When individuals pursue outrage as an end in itself, they are no longer communicating honestly. For example, many online trolls post and engage with other users mainly to provoke and feel outrage themselves with little concern for truth and honest debate. This creates an atmosphere wherein people become increasingly distrustful and alienated from one another. In order for a person to change their views and make actual progress in the world, they must be willing to listen to and understand the arguments of the other side. When this occurs, both sides feel some degree of commonality. However, if neither side is engaging in good-faith conversations, then the unproductive outcome is merely to feel more and more outraged and accomplish less and less.
In conclusion, seeking outrage is fundamentally human, though it leads to a breakdown in social cohesion. People should cultivate healthier habits and abstain from easy, pleasurable feelings of outrage.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
There is a common perception today that many think now
generally angrier more outrage overall
in the past before
fundamentally negative psychological phenomenonexacerbated by modern technology basically bad human trait made worse by technology today
main reason biggest cause of
higher levels of more of it
vulnerable weak when it comes to
pleasure feeling good
outrage
naturally attracted to of course susceptible to
produce the release of certain endorphins happy feelings in the brain
positive outlets good expressions of
harmful hurts
abusing narcotic stimulants using drugs
added benefit another positive
self-esteem boost feel better about yourself
The narcotic-like effects of outrage over time become addictive, especially in the current technological age the drug addiction coming from feeling angry is hard to resist especially because of smartphones, social media, etc.
read stories that provoke anger follow news that is upsetting
scroll through social media look through Facebook, Instagram, etc.
engage in so-called “hate watching” of popular pundits on television espousing extreme views watch shows you dislike with commentators saying strong opinions
addictive pastimes activities you can’t stop doing
available on mobile devices can be used on phones
creating an environment where access to outrage making an atmosphere where people get angry easily
too readily accessible to be ignored too easy to get
endangers risks
understand each other communicate with others
work towards shared goals accomplish things together
pursue outrage as an end in itself try to make yourself angry
no longer communicating honestly not having honest conversations
online trolls post and engage with other users mainly to provoke and feel outrage themselves people online make others and themselves angry
little concern for truth and honest debate not caring about real conversations
creates an atmosphere wherein make an atmosphere in which
increasingly distrustful and alienated from one another more and more unreliable and people get further way from each other
In order for a person to change their views so a person changes their mind
actual progress real development
listen to and understand the arguments of the other side communicate with others honestly and feel empathy
feel some degree of commonality feel close to others
if neither side is engaging in good-faith conversations neither one is interested in having a real talk
unproductive outcome nothing will come of it
merely simply
feel more and more outraged and accomplish less and less get angrier and angrier and get less done
seeking outrage trying to make yourself angry
fundamentally human basic part of human nature
leads to a breakdown in social cohesion people don’t get along any more
cultivate healthier habits live better
abstain from easy stay away from simple
pleasurable feelings of outrage happy feelings of anger
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
T______________________________________t people are g__________________r than they were i___________________t. In my opinion, this is a f_________________________________________________________________________y.
The m__________________n there are h_________________f anger in society is individuals are v_____________e to the p______________e of feeling o_________e. Human beings are n________________________o activities that p________________________________________________________s. These actions include p____________________s such as exercising and spending time with others and more h_____________l ones like eating unhealthy foods and a________________________________s. Outrage also has the a_____________________t of a s______________________t. T___________________________________________________________________e, e_____________________________________________________e. A person can browse the news and r_______________________________r, s____________________________________a, and e________________________________________________________________________s. All these a______________________s are a______________________________s, c_______________________________________________e is t____________________________________d.
In my opinion, outrage e______________s the ability of individuals in a society to u_________________________r and w___________________________s. When individuals p___________________________________f, they are n_________________________________y. For example, many o___________________________________________________________________________________s with l__________________________________________e. This c__________________________________________________________n people become i_______________________________________________r. I______________________________________________s and make a__________________s in the world, they must be willing to l____________________________________________________e. When this occurs, both sides f_____________________________________y. However, i_________________________________________________s, then the u__________________________e is m_______y to f__________________________________________________________s.
In conclusion, s_________________e is f____________________n, though it l____________________________________________n. People should c_________________________________________s and a__________________________y, p____________________________________e.
Listening Practice
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These days consumers are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies.
To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertising?
What measures should be taken to protect them?
Advertising has become an increasingly pervasive and, arguably, compelling presence in the modern world. In my opinion, marketing greatly influences the average consumer and there should strict regulations in place to ensure it does not become overly invasive and manipulative.
Shoppers are persuaded by advertising because it exploits vulnerabilities in human psychology. For decades, advertising agencies have been researching and refining their approaches. Over this time, key tenets have been established that maximize the money spent on marketing. These principles include the so-called “fear of missing out,” social proofing, and various ways of raising brand awareness. For instance, many companies will offer limited-time deals such as the famous “Black Friday” sales in the United States. The best evidence of the effectiveness of these techniques is that corporations continue to employ them and advertising is the single wealthiest industry in the world.
In order to guarantee advertising does not pose a threat to society at large, it should be strictly regulated by the state. A standout example of this relates to health. Companies that manufacture products that are naturally addictive to humans, such as junk foods high in sugar, fat, and carbohydrates, often aim their advertisements at the most vulnerable segments of society including children and obese individuals. Governments can play a key role at this stage by legislating that certain audience segments cannot be targeted. This would likely include preventing companies from accessing private information about online users and from directing their marketing budget towards locations near schools and playgrounds.
In conclusion, advertising is an effective practice and must be stringently regulated by the federal government. These laws will only become more essential in the future as marketing becomes more sophisticated.
Analysis
1. Advertising has become an increasingly pervasive and, arguably, compelling presence in the modern world. 2. In my opinion, marketing greatly influences the average consumer and there should strict regulations in place to ensure it does not become overly invasive and manipulative.
Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Shoppers are persuaded by advertising because it exploits vulnerabilities in human psychology. 2. For decades, advertising agencies have been researching and refining their approaches. 3. Over this time, key tenets have been established that maximize the money spent on marketing. 4. These principles include the so-called “fear of missing out,” social proofing, and various ways of raising brand awareness. 5. For instance, many companies will offer limited-time deals such as the famous “Black Friday” sales in the United States. 6. The best evidence of the effectiveness of these techniques is that corporations continue to employ them and advertising is the single wealthiest industry in the world.
Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
Explain your main idea.
Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
Keep developing it fully.
You can sometimes include the counterpoint here too.
Finish strong.
1. In order to guarantee advertising does not pose a threat to society at large, it should be strictly regulated by the state. 2. A standout example of this relates to health. 3. Companies that manufacture products that are naturally addictive to humans, such as junk foods high in sugar, fat, and carbohydrates, often aim their advertisements at the most vulnerable segments of society including children and obese individuals. 4. Governments can play a key role at this stage by legislating that certain audience segments cannot be targeted. 5. This would likely include preventing companies from accessing private information about online users and from directing their marketing budget towards locations near schools and playgrounds.
Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
Explain your new main idea.
Include specific details and examples.
Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
Continue your development.
1. In conclusion, advertising is an effective practice and must be stringently regulated by the federal government. 2. These laws will only become more essential in the future as marketing becomes more sophisticated.
Summarise your main ideas.
Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
Advertising has become an increasingly pervasive and, arguably, compelling presencein the modern world. In my opinion, marketing greatly influences the average consumer and there should strict regulations in place to ensure it does not become overly invasive and manipulative.
Shoppers are persuaded by advertising because it exploits vulnerabilities in human psychology. For decades, advertising agencies have been researching and refining their approaches. Over this time, key tenets have been established that maximize the money spent on marketing. These principles include the so-called “fear of missing out,” social proofing, and various ways of raising brand awareness. For instance, many companies will offer limited-time deals such as the famous “Black Friday” sales in the United States. The best evidence of the effectiveness of these techniques is that corporations continue to employ them and advertising is the single wealthiest industry in the world.
In order to guarantee advertising does not pose a threat to society at large, it should be strictly regulated by the state. A standout example of this relates to health. Companies that manufacture products that are naturally addictive to humans, such as junk foods high in sugar, fat, and carbohydrates, often aim their advertisements at the most vulnerable segments of society including children and obese individuals. Governments can play a key role at this stage by legislating that certain audience segments cannot be targeted. This would likely include preventing companies from accessing private information about online users and from directing their marketing budget towards locations near schools and playgrounds.
In conclusion, advertising is an effective practice and must be stringently regulated by the federal government. These laws will only become more essential in the future as marketing becomes more sophisticated.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
increasingly pervasive more and more common
arguably it can be argued that, maybe
compelling presencein the modern world persuasive effect today
marketing greatly influences the average consumer advertising impacts people a lot
strict regulations in place clear laws enacted
ensure make sure
overly invasive and manipulative taking too much advantage of
persuaded convinced by, compelled to
exploits vulnerabilities take advantage of weaknesses
human psychology how people think
For decades for many years
advertising agencies marketing firms
researching finding out about
refining perfecting
approaches ways
Over this time this period
key tenets foundational principles
established created
maximize used to the fullest
principles core ideas
so-called alleged
“fear of missing out” being afraid you won’t get something
social proofing similar to word of mouth
various ways of raising brand awareness different methods to build up a company
offer limited-time deals temporary discounts
famous “Black Friday” sales well-known sales after Thanksgiving
The best evidence of the effectiveness of these techniques the clearest illustration that this works
corporations companies
employ use
single wealthiest industry in the world richest field
In order to guarantee so that it is sure that
pose a threat to society at large present risk to all people
strictly regulated by the state controlled by governments
A standout example of this relates to health a good instance of this concerns medicine
manufacture products sell items
naturally addictive make you crave them
junk foods high in sugar, fat, and carbohydrates unhealthy foods with unhealthy ingredients
most vulnerable segments of society weakest parts of the world
obese overweight
play a key role at this stage are crucial then
legislating making laws about
certain audience segments some groups of people
targeted try to sell to
preventing companies from accessing private information about online users stopping corporations from keeping info about your online habits
directing their marketing budget towards locations using their advertising money in places
playgrounds where kids play
effective practice works
stringently regulated strong laws controlling them
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
Advertising has become an i____________________________e and, a____________y, c__________________________________________d. In my opinion, m___________________________________________r and there should s__________________e to e________e it does not become o____________________________________e.
Shoppers are p______________d by advertising because it e______________________________s in h__________________y. F_______________s, a________________________s have been r_______________g and r____________g their a_______________s. O___________________e, k________________s have been e________________d that m_____________e the money spent on marketing. These p_______________s include the s_______________d “f__________________________t,” s______________________g, and v____________________________________________s. For instance, many companies will o____________________s such as the f________________________________s in the United States. T_____________________________________________________________s is that c__________________s continue to e__________y them and advertising is the s______________________________________________d.
I____________________e advertising does not p___________________________________________e, it should be s_______________________________________e. A_____________________________________________h. Companies that m_______________________________s that are n_____________________e to humans, such as j_________________________________________s, often aim their advertisements at the m_____________________________________y including children and o______e individuals. Governments can p________________________e by l____________g that c_________________________________s cannot be t____________d. This would likely include p______________________________________________________________s and from d______________________________________________________s near schools and p_______________s.
In conclusion, advertising is an e_____________________e and must be s_________________________d by the f_____________________________t. These laws will only become more e____________l in the future as marketing becomes more s_________________d.
Listening Practice
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