IELTS Essay: Water

IELTS Essay: Water

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of water, specifically fresh water, from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Water

Some people think that the government should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource, while others it should not be regulated.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many believe that it is crucial for governments to oversee public supplies of fresh water. In my opinion, this is an advisable strategy though there are natural risks that must be taken into consideration.

The most significant drawbacks to this proposal are the possibilities of government malfeasance and incompetence. Governments are notoriously bureaucratic organizations that often waste time and money while not greatly furthering the interests of the general public. A pertinent example of this would be the lengthy litigation battles concerning the cleanup of polluted reservoirs in many democratic nations. By the time any progress is made, the harm for some residents may already be irreversible. There is the chance that the government is corrupt. It is common for both elected and unelected officials to be vulnerable to bribery that results in prioritizing corporate and private interests above average citizens.

Nonetheless, government control of fresh water supplies is the best guarantee of public safety. Today, in many arid nations, such as those near Sub-Saharan Africa, finding fresh water is a massive challenge. Conflicts over limited water resources often contribute to political instability. In an ideal world, a just government could ensure water is equally and fairly distributed. Moreover, there are potential safety concerns. Water can easily be contaminated by industrial factors including rainwater pollution, landfill seepage, and new procedures like fracking. If governments regulate water with disinterested autonomy, they will be able to protect the general public from the excesses of corporate recklessness.

In conclusion, despite the potential that governments will poorly manage water supplies, they are still the best protectors of public health and safety. This is why the supervision of water authorities is also key.

Analysis

1. Many believe that it is crucial for governments to oversee public supplies of fresh water. 2. In my opinion, this is an advisable strategy though there are natural risks that must be taken into consideration.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. The most significant drawbacks to this proposal are the possibilities of government malfeasance and incompetence. 2. Governments are notoriously bureaucratic organizations that often waste time and money while not greatly furthering the interests of the general public. 3. A pertinent example of this would be the lengthy litigation battles concerning the cleanup of polluted reservoirs in many democratic nations. 4. By the time any progress is made, the harm for some residents may already be irreversible. 5. There is the chance that the government is corrupt. 6. It is common for both elected and unelected officials to be vulnerable to bribery that results in prioritizing corporate and private interests above average citizens.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Include some short sentences.
  6. Finish development.

1. Nonetheless, government control of fresh water supplies is the best guarantee of public safety. 2. Today, in many arid nations, such as those near Sub-Saharan Africa, finding fresh water is a massive challenge. 3. Conflicts over limited water resources often contribute to political instability. 4. In an ideal world, a just government could ensure water is equally and fairly distributed. 5. Moreover, there are potential safety concerns. 6. Water can easily be contaminated by industrial factors including rainwater pollution, landfill seepage, and new procedures like fracking. 7. If governments regulate water with disinterested autonomy, they will be able to protect the general public from the excesses of corporate recklessness.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.
  6. This paragraph can be longer than the other one.
  7. Be sure each idea has support.

1. In conclusion, despite the potential that governments will poorly manage water supplies, they are still the best protectors of public health and safety. 2. This is why the supervision of water authorities is also key.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many believe that it is crucial for governments to oversee public supplies of fresh water. In my opinion, this is an advisable strategy though there are natural risks that must be taken into consideration.

The most significant drawbacks to this proposal are the possibilities of government malfeasance and incompetence. Governments are notoriously bureaucratic organizations that often waste time and money while not greatly furthering the interests of the general public. A pertinent example of this would be the lengthy litigation battles concerning the cleanup of polluted reservoirs in many democratic nations. By the time any progress is made, the harm for some residents may already be irreversible. There is the chance that the government is corrupt. It is common for both elected and unelected officials to be vulnerable to bribery that results in prioritizing corporate and private interests above average citizens.

Nonetheless, government control of fresh water supplies is the best guarantee of public safety. Today, in many arid nations, such as those near Sub-Saharan Africa, finding fresh water is a massive challenge. Conflicts over limited water resources often contribute to political instability. In an ideal world, a just government could ensure water is equally and fairly distributed. Moreover, there are potential safety concerns. Water can easily be contaminated by industrial factors including rainwater pollution, landfill seepage, and new procedures like fracking. If governments regulate water with disinterested autonomy, they will be able to protect the general public from the excesses of corporate recklessness.

In conclusion, despite the potential that governments will poorly manage water supplies, they are still the best protectors of public health and safety. This is why the supervision of water authorities is also key.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

crucial really important

oversee watch over, control

public supplies what is available to all

fresh water not salt water

advisable strategy good idea

though nonetheless

natural risks organic threats

taken into consideration thought about

most significant drawbacks biggest problems

proposal idea

possibilities chances

malfeasance bad behavior

incompetence not good at what they do

notoriously bureaucratic organizations lots of red tape, inefficient

while although

greatly furthering the interests of the general public helping people a lot

pertinent example relevant instance

lengthy litigation battles long legal fights

concerning relatint to

cleanup fixing

polluted reservoirs dirty sources of water

democratic nations countries that have democracy

progress making changes

harm hurting

residents people living there

irreversible can’t be fixed

corrupt dishonest

elected voted into office

unelected officials people not voted into office

vulnerable weak

bribery money given in exchange for favors

results in the outcome is

prioritizing making important

corporate related to business

private interests for individuals, companies

above average citizens more important than most people

nonetheless regardless

control power over

best guarantee greatest safeguard

public safety health of most people

arid nations dry places

Sub-Saharan Africa countries near a dessert in Africa

massive challenge big obstacle

conflicts fights

limited water resources not enough water

contributes to adds to

political instability problems in government, unstable

in an ideal world in the perfect world

just right, fair

ensure make sure of

equally the same treatment

fairly distributed equal

potential safety concerns possible problems related to how safe people are

contaminated infiltrated, polluted

industrial factors related to industry

rainwater pollution acid rain

landfill seepage sewage from trash buried in the ground

procedures methods

fracking a way of extracting oil

regulate control

disinterested autonomy not biased power

protect keep safe

general public citizens

excesses recklessness

corporate recklessness companies doing crazy things

despite regardless of

potential possible

poorly manage hard to handle

best protectors people who can keep the most safe

public health safety of most people

supervision watching over

water authorities people in charge of water

key crucial

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈkruːʃəl 
ˌəʊvəˈsiː 
ˈpʌblɪk səˈplaɪz 
frɛʃ ˈwɔːtə
ədˈvaɪzəbl ˈstrætɪʤi 
ðəʊ 
ˈnæʧrəl rɪsks 
ˈteɪkən ˈɪntuː kənˌsɪdəˈreɪʃən
məʊst sɪgˈnɪfɪkənt ˈdrɔːbæks 
prəˈpəʊzəl 
ˌpɒsəˈbɪlɪtiz 
mælˈfiːzəns 
ɪnˈkɒmpɪtəns
nəʊˈtɔːrɪəsli ˌbjʊərəʊˈkrætɪk ˌɔːgənaɪˈzeɪʃənz 
waɪl 
ˈgreɪtli ˈfɜːðərɪŋ ði ˈɪntrɪsts ɒv ðə ˈʤɛnərəl ˈpʌblɪk
ˈpɜːtɪnənt ɪgˈzɑːmpl 
ˈlɛŋθi ˌlɪtɪˈgeɪʃən ˈbætlz 
kənˈsɜːnɪŋ 
ˈkliːnʌp 
pəˈluːtɪd ˈrɛzəvwɑːz 
ˌdɛməˈkrætɪk ˈneɪʃənz
ˈprəʊgrəs 
hɑːm 
ˈrɛzɪdənts 
ˌɪrɪˈvɜːsəbl
kəˈrʌpt 
ɪˈlɛktɪd 
ˌʌnɪˈlɛktɪd əˈfɪʃəlz 
ˈvʌlnərəbl 
ˈbraɪbəri 
rɪˈzʌlts ɪn 
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪzɪŋ 
ˈkɔːpərɪt 
ˈpraɪvɪt ˈɪntrɪsts 
əˈbʌv ˈævərɪʤ ˈsɪtɪznz
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs 
kənˈtrəʊl 
bɛst ˌgærənˈtiː 
ˈpʌblɪk ˈseɪfti
ˈærɪd ˈneɪʃənz 
sʌb-səˈhɑːrən ˈæfrɪkə
ˈmæsɪv ˈʧælɪnʤ
ˈkɒnflɪkts 
ˈlɪmɪtɪd ˈwɔːtə rɪˈsɔːsɪz 
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)ts tuː 
pəˈlɪtɪkəl ˌɪnstəˈbɪlɪti
ɪn ən aɪˈdɪəl wɜːld 
ʤʌst 
ɪnˈʃʊə 
ˈiːkwəli 
ˈfeəli dɪsˈtrɪbju(ː)tɪd
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl ˈseɪfti kənˈsɜːnz
kənˈtæmɪneɪtɪd 
ɪnˈdʌstrɪəl ˈfæktəz 
ˈreɪnˌwɔːtə pəˈluːʃən
ˈlændfɪl ˈsiːpɪʤ 
prəˈsiːʤəz 
frækiŋ
ˈrɛgjʊleɪt 
dɪsˈɪntrɪstɪd ɔːˈtɒnəmi
prəˈtɛkt 
ˈʤɛnərəl ˈpʌblɪk 
ɪkˈsɛsɪz 
ˈkɔːpərɪt ˈrɛklɪsnəs
dɪsˈpaɪt 
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl 
ˈpʊəli ˈmænɪʤ 
bɛst prəˈtɛktəz 
ˈpʌblɪk hɛlθ 
ˌsjuːpəˈvɪʒən 
ˈwɔːtər ɔːˈθɒrɪtiz 
kiː

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many believe that it is c_______l for governments to o________e p_______________s of f_____________r. In my opinion, this is an a________________y t__________h there are n___________s that must be t________________________n.

The m_______________________s to this p________l are the p_____________s of government m___________e and i____________e. Governments are n_____________________________s that often waste time and money w_____e not g_______________________________________________c. A p________________e of this would be the l________________________________g the c___________p of p_____________s in many d_________________s. By the time any p______________s is made, the h_____m for some r____________s may already be i______________e. There is the chance that the government is c______t. It is common for both e_______d and u___________________s to be v_____________e to b________y that r______________n p____________g c____________e and p________________s a_____________________s.

N_____________s, government c_________l of fresh water supplies is the b_______________e of p_________________y. Today, in many a______________s, such as those near S___________________a, finding fresh water is a m___________________e. C__________s over l________________________s often c_______________________y. I________________d, a j____t government could e______e water is e________y and f____________________d. Moreover, there are p______________________s. Water can easily be c_________________d by i______________________s including r__________________n, l_______________e, and new p___________s like f_________g. If governments r_________e water with d_______________________y, they will be able to p_________t the g_________________c from the e____________s of c_________________________s.

In conclusion, d__________e the p________l that governments will p________________e water supplies, they are still the b_______________s of p______________h and safety. This is why the s___________n of w________________s is also k__y.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.theguardian.com/global-development/2020/jan/08/water-wars-early-warning-tool-uses-climate-data-to-predict-conflict-hotspots

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Coffee

  1. Do you prefer to drink coffee or tea?
  2. How do you like to drink coffee?
  3. Is coffee a popular drink in your country?
  4. When was the last time you had some coffee?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing.

Why is this?

What can be done?

IELTS Essay: Holidays

IELTS Essay: Holidays

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay Ebook on the topic of holidays from a real exam.

My essay is only available as an Ebook on Patreon.com/howtodoielts

Here is the question itself:

Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the year. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vacations.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS Essay: Children Developing Skills

IELTS Essay: Children Developing Skills

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of children developing skills from the real exam.

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Dave

IELTS Essay: Children Developing Skills

Some people believe that engaging in an active pastime does more to develop children’s life skills than time spent reading.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many today would argue that the best way to aid in a child’s life skills development is to take part in active pursuits, rather than more passive ones such as reading. I am generally in agreement though reading has become increasingly important in contemporary society.

Those who argue against this contention point to the primacy of reading. In the past, large proportions of the world’s population were illiterate. Today, children must be able to read in order to interact with the world online. It could be argued that reading, and writing by extension, are the two most important life skills children can learn. Without them, children will feel alienated from mainstream culture and not be able to stay in touch with friends and family, apply online for jobs, and do research on the internet.

However, reading skills develop organically for children and there are more critical skills that are often neglected in a technological society. Most people would relate to the experience of watching their grandparents display a wide range of life skills including automotive maintenance, cooking, and sewing. These life skills have diverse applicability. A person who is adept with their hands will be able to handle a variety of household tasks, repairs, and renovations. Moreover, there are less concrete benefits. These activities are likely to make an individual more creative, and physically and mentally healthier. Research has shown that more time spent being active, and less time on devices, improves mood, develops lateral thinking ability, and lessens the risk of chronic anxiety disorders.

In conclusion, despite the centrality of reading due to advances in technology, truly valuable life skills require more active participation. Unfortunately, shifts in society related to technology are likely irreversible.

Analysis

1. Many today would argue that the best way to aid in a child’s life skills development is to take part in active pursuits, rather than more passive ones such as reading. 2. I am generally in agreement though reading has become increasingly important in contemporary society.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who argue against this contention point to the primacy of reading. 2. In the past, large proportions of the world’s population were illiterate. 3. Today, children must be able to read in order to interact with the world online. 4. It could be argued that reading, and writing by extension, are the two most important life skills children can learn. 5. Without them, children will feel alienated from mainstream culture and not be able to stay in touch with friends and family, apply online for jobs, and do research on the internet.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Finish development.

1. However, reading skills develop organically for children and there are more critical skills that are often neglected in a technological society. 2. Most people would relate to the experience of watching their grandparents display a wide range of life skills including automotive maintenance, cooking, and sewing. 3. These life skills have diverse applicability. 4. A person who is adept with their hands will be able to handle a variety of household tasks, repairs, and renovations. 5. Moreover, there are less concrete benefits. 6. These activities are likely to make an individual more creative, and physically and mentally healthier. 7. Research has shown that more time spent being active, and less time on devices, improves mood, develops lateral thinking ability, and lessens the risk of chronic anxiety disorders.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.
  6. This paragraph can be longer than the other one.
  7. Be sure each idea has support.

1. In conclusion, despite the centrality of reading due to advances in technology, truly valuable life skills require more active participation. 2. Unfortunately, shifts in society related to technology are likely irreversible.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many today would argue that the best way to aid in a child’s life skills development is to take part in active pursuits, rather than more passive ones such as reading. I am generally in agreement though reading has become increasingly important in contemporary society.

Those who argue against this contention point to the primacy of reading. In the past, large proportions of the world’s population were illiterate. Today, children must be able to read in order to interact with the world online. It could be argued that reading, and writing by extension, are the two most important life skills children can learn. Without them, children will feel alienated from mainstream culture and not be able to stay in touch with friends and family, apply online for jobs, and do research on the internet.

However, reading skills develop organically for children and there are more critical skills that are often neglected in a technological society. Most people would relate to the experience of watching their grandparents display a wide range of life skills including automotive maintenance, cooking, and sewing. These life skills have diverse applicability. A person who is adept with their hands will be able to handle a variety of household tasks, repairs, and renovations. Moreover, there are less concrete benefits. These activities are likely to make an individual more creative, and physically and mentally healthier. Research has shown that more time spent being active, and less time on devices, improves mood, develops lateral thinking ability, and lessens the risk of chronic anxiety disorders.

In conclusion, despite the centrality of reading due to advances in technology, truly valuable life skills require more active participation. Unfortunately, shifts in society related to technology are likely irreversible.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

aid in help

life skills development learning useful abilities for life in general

take part in active pursuits do non-passive activities like exercising or doing art

rather than instead of

passive not active

I am generally in agreement I mostly agree

increasingly important more and more crucial

contemporary society the world today

Those who argue against this contention point to people not agreeing say

primacy central importance

large proportions big percentages

illiterate unable to read or write

in order to so that

interact with talk to, communicate

It could be argued that some might say that

by extension further

without them not having them

alienated not feeling connected, close to others, society

mainstream culture how most people in the world think and act

stay in touch talk to

apply online send in applications over the internet

research learn about

organically naturally

critical skills key abilities

neglected not paying attention to

technological society more internet usage today and machines

relate to concern

display showcase

wide range lots of variety

automotive maintenance fixing cars

diverse applicability can be used in different ways

adept with good at

handle deal with

variety many types of

household tasks chores, things to be done around the home

repairs fixes

renovations changes, fixing up

concrete real

creative imaginative

physically related to the body

mentally healthier related to mood, feelings, the mind

on devices smartphones, tablets, etc.

improves mood allows for better personality

lateral thinking ability creativity

lessens reduces

risk chances

chronic anxiety disorders always feeling nervous

despite regardless of

centrality importance

truly valuable really important

require need

active participation not passive

unfortunately too bad

shifts changes

irreversible can’t be fixed

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

eɪd ɪn 
laɪf skɪlz dɪˈvɛləpmənt 
teɪk pɑːt ɪn ˈæktɪv pəˈsjuːts 
ˈrɑːðə ðæn 
ˈpæsɪv 
aɪ æm ˈʤɛnərəli ɪn əˈgriːmənt 
ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ɪmˈpɔːtənt 
kənˈtɛmpərəri səˈsaɪəti 
ðəʊz huː ˈɑːgjuː əˈgɛnst ðɪs kənˈtɛnʃən pɔɪnt tuː 
ˈpraɪməsi 
lɑːʤ prəˈpɔːʃənz 
ɪˈlɪtərɪt 
ɪn ˈɔːdə tuː 
ˌɪntərˈækt wɪð 
ɪt kʊd biː ˈɑːgjuːd ðæt 
baɪ ɪksˈtɛnʃən 
wɪˈðaʊt ðɛm 
ˈeɪliəneɪtɪd 
ˈmeɪnstriːm ˈkʌlʧə 
steɪ ɪn tʌʧ 
əˈplaɪ ˈɒnˌlaɪn 
rɪˈsɜːʧ 
ɔːˈgænɪk(ə)li 
ˈkrɪtɪkəl skɪlz 
nɪˈglɛktɪd 
ˌtɛknəˈlɒʤɪk(ə)l səˈsaɪəti
rɪˈleɪt tuː 
dɪsˈpleɪ 
waɪd reɪnʤ 
ˌɔːtəˈməʊtɪv ˈmeɪntənəns
daɪˈvɜːs ˌæplɪkəˈbɪlɪti
ˈædɛpt wɪð 
ˈhændl 
vəˈraɪəti 
ˈhaʊshəʊld tɑːsks
rɪˈpeəz,
ˌrɛnəʊˈveɪʃənz
ˈkɒnkriːt 
kri(ː)ˈeɪtɪv,
ˈfɪzɪkəli 
ˈmɛntəli ˈhɛlθɪə
ɒn dɪˈvaɪsɪz
ɪmˈpruːvz muːd 
ˈlætərəl ˈθɪŋkɪŋ əˈbɪlɪti 
ˈlɛsnz 
rɪsk 
ˈkrɒnɪk æŋˈzaɪəti dɪsˈɔːdəz
dɪsˈpaɪt 
sentrælɪti:
ˈtruːli ˈvæljʊəbl 
rɪˈkwaɪə 
ˈæktɪv pɑːˌtɪsɪˈpeɪʃən
ʌnˈfɔːʧnɪtli
ʃɪfts 
ˌɪrɪˈvɜːsəbl

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many today would argue that the best way to a______n a child’s l_______________________t is to t________________n a____________________s, r___________n more p_________e ones such as reading. I_____________________________t though reading has become i_____________________t in c_____________________y.

T_______________________________________________o the p_________y of reading. In the past, l_____________________s of the world’s population were i____________e. Today, children must be able to read i____________o i___________h the world online. I_____________________t reading, and writing b_____________n, are the two most important life skills children can learn. W______________m, children will feel a_____________d from m_______________e and not be able to s_____________h with friends and family, a_____________e for jobs, and do r_________h on the internet.

However, reading skills develop o_____________y for children and there are more c____________s that are often n_________d in a t________________y. Most people would r________o the experience of watching their grandparents d_____y a w____________e of life skills including a_____________________e, cooking, and sewing. These life skills have d________________________y. A person who is a__________h their hands will be able to h______e a v_______y of h_____________s, r________s, and r___________s. Moreover, there are less c______e benefits. These activities are likely to make an individual more c________e, and p__________y and m_______________r. Research has shown that more time spent being active, and less time o__________s, i___________d, develops l_____________________y, and l_______s the r____k of c__________________s.

In conclusion, d_________e the c__________y of reading due to advances in technology, t_____________e life skills r________e more a______________n. U_______________y, s_______s in society related to technology are likely i_____________e.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

https://www.youtube.com/c/StorylineOnlineSAF

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.todaysparent.com/family/activities/15-ways-to-keep-kids-active-indoors-even-if-you-dont-have-much-space/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Reading

  1. Do you enjoy reading?
  2. What kinds of books do you like?
  3. Do you have a favorite author?
  4. Is reading a popular pastime in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Many believe that reading books is a waste of time and children would be better served doing something more useful.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Essay: Map of a Park

IELTS Essay: Map of a Park

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of park in 1980 and now from the real IELTS exam.

Find my full IELTS Ebooks here.

Dave

IELTS Essay: Map of a Park

The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now.

The map details alterations to a park in 1980 and the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the park has become more developed for visitors with additional recreational space for outdoor eating, seating, and playing. The only subtraction relates to the flowers.

In 1980, there was an entrance on the left side above a pond surrounded by 3 benches and a second gate at the bottom of the park. Now, both gates have disappeared, the road is less straight and the pond has more benches around it. There are also two additional roads coming from the top and right of the diagram, sectioning off an area with trees, chairs, desks, and barbecue options (previously only containing trees).

In the bottom right corner of the map, a flowerbed has been replaced by a playground. A second space for flowers in the bottom left below the pond has also been removed in favor of wild bush.

Analysis

1. The map details alterations to a park in 1980 and the present day. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the park has become more developed for visitors with additional recreational space for outdoor eating, seating, and playing. 3. The only subtraction relates to the flowers.

  1. Paraphrase what the table shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.
  3. You might need another sentence for your overview.

1. In 1980, there was an entrance on the left side above a pond surrounded by 3 benches and a second gate at the bottom of the park. 2. Now, both gates have disappeared, the road is less straight and the pond has more benches around it. 3. There are also two additional roads coming from the top and right of the diagram, sectioning off an area with trees, chairs, desks, and barbecue options (previously only containing trees).

  1. Begin writing about the first part of the map.
  2. Make sure you compare as much as possible.
  3. Don’t leave anything out!

1. In the bottom right corner of the map, a flowerbed has been replaced by a playground. 2. A second space for flowers in the bottom left below the pond has also been removed in favor of wild bush.

  1. Write about the final, other parts of the map – include everything!
  2. Mention anything that has not changed on the map too.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Take some notes on a piece of paper to aid your memory:

The map details alterations to a park in 1980 and the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the park has become more developed for visitors with additional recreational space for outdoor eating, seating, and playing. The only subtraction relates to the flowers.

In 1980, there was an entrance on the left side above a pond surrounded by 3 benches and a second gate at the bottom of the park. Now, both gates have disappeared, the road is less straight and the pond has more benches around it. There are also two additional roads coming from the top and right of the diagram, sectioning off an area with trees, chairs, desks, and barbecue options (previously only containing trees).

In the bottom right corner of the map, a flowerbed has been replaced by a playground. A second space for flowers in the bottom left below the pond has also been removed in favor of wild bush.

Answers

Try to write down or think of an antonym/opposite word for further practice:

details shows

alterations changes

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the overall

park public place to walk around

developed changed

visitors people doing there

additional recreational space more places to do stuff

outdoor outside

seating places to sit down

subtraction getting rid of

relates to concerns

flowers tulips, roses, etc.

single entrance one way to get in

left side above a pond on the left over the small lake

surrounded by 3 benches seats on all sides around it

disappeared gone

less straight curvy, bent

additional extra

diagram image

sectioning off cutting off from

barbecue options places to cook meat outside

previously before

containing keeping

flowerbed place where flowers are

replaced by substituted for

playground place where kids play

below under

removed in favor of taken away so that there could be

wild bush outside plants and buses

Pronunciation

Practice saying the words below using this tip with Google voice dictation:

ˈdiːteɪlz 
ˌɔːltəˈreɪʃ(ə)nz 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt ðiː 
pɑːk 
dɪˈvɛləpt 
ˈvɪzɪtəz 
əˈdɪʃənl ˌrɛkrɪˈeɪʃənl speɪs 
ˈaʊtdɔː 
ˈsiːtɪŋ
səbˈtrækʃən 
rɪˈleɪts tuː 
ˈflaʊəz
ˈsɪŋgl ˈɛntrəns 
lɛft saɪd əˈbʌv ə pɒnd 
səˈraʊndɪd baɪ 3 ˈbɛnʧɪz
ˌdɪsəˈpɪəd 
lɛs streɪt 
əˈdɪʃənl 
ˈdaɪəgræm
ˈsɛkʃənɪŋ ɒf 
ˈbɑːbɪkjuː ˈɒpʃənz 
ˈpriːviəsli 
kənˈteɪnɪŋ 
ˈflaʊəbɛd 
rɪˈpleɪst baɪ 
ˈpleɪgraʊnd
bɪˈləʊ 
rɪˈmuːvd ɪn ˈfeɪvər ɒv 
waɪld bʊʃ

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks. Note it on a piece of paper so you can remember better:

The map d__________s a____________s to a park in 1980 and the present day. L________________________________________________________e p____k has become more d_________d for v_________s with a____________________________________e for o__________r eating, s________g, and playing. The only s_____________n r___________o the f__________s.

In 1980, there was an entrance o_______________e above a p_________________________y 3 benches and a second g____e at the bottom of the park. Now, both gates have d_____________d, , the road is l______________t and the pond has more benches around it. There are also two a_____________l roads coming from the top and right of the d___________m, s________________f an area with trees, chairs, desks, and b___________________s (p__________y only c__________g trees).

In the bottom right corner of the map, a f____________d has been r_____________y a p________d. A second space for flowers in the bottom left b______w the pond has also been r__________________________f w___________h.

Listening Practice

Listen to the related topic below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.onthegotours.com/blog/2017/11/best-national-parks-in-asia/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Outdoors

  1. Did you like to go outdoors when you were younger?
  2. Do you still go outdoors a lot now?
  3. Do you like reading outside?
  4. Where do people in your country like to go outside?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related chart below and then check with my sample answer:

IELTS Essay: Advertising to Children

IELTS Essay: Advertising to Children

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of advertising to children from the real exam.

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IELTS Essay: Advertising to Children

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of advertisements which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys, and other goods. Parents often claim that these ads are unfair.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some are of the opinion that it is unethical to advertise to children. In my opinion, although at certain ages these advertisements should be permitted, in general children are too vulnerable a segment of the population.

Those who argue in favor of advertising to children point out it is not necessarily unfair. There are situations when even these proponents would concede advertising is exploitive, such as when there are commercials for cereals with high sugar content during cartoon shows. However, this is only a single instance. Many children, especially as they get older, are capable of thinking rationally, controlling their need for instant gratification, and would therefore like to be informed about new products they are interested in. If a child who is 10 years old sees an advertisement for a water park or sporting event, they might convince their parents to enjoy a fun, outdoors activity.

Nonetheless, most children are negatively impacted by advertisements as they lack self-control. Adults are more capable of inhibiting their desires while children are not experienced enough and their cognitive development does not allow for higher-order reasoning. For instance, if a young child sees an advertisement for alcohol or a violent videogame, there is a strong likelihood they will want to try it. Even if they do not actually get an opportunity to use an age-inappropriate product, the appeal of these products has already been deeply implanted. Recent research supports the contention that habits and impressions formed in early childhood are harder to leave behind later in life.

In conclusion, despite the feasibility of certain advertisements for older children, most marketing directed at impressionable children should be banned. This will be a difficult process to manage but many countries have undertaken it already.

Analysis

1. Some are of the opinion that it is unethical to advertise to children. 2. In my opinion, although at certain ages these advertisements should be permitted, in general children are too vulnerable a segment of the population.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who argue in favor of advertising to children point out it is not necessarily unfair. 2. There are situations when even these proponents would concede advertising is exploitive, such as when there are commercials for cereals with high sugar content during cartoon shows. 3. However, this is only a single instance. 4. Many children, especially as they get older, are capable of thinking rationally, controlling their need for instant gratification, and would therefore like to be informed about new products they are interested in. 5. If a child who is 10 years old sees an advertisement for a water park or sporting event, they might convince their parents to enjoy a fun, outdoors activity.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Finish development.

1. Nonetheless, most children are negatively impacted by advertisements as they lack self-control. 2. Adults are more capable of inhibiting their desires while children are not experienced enough and their cognitive development does not allow for higher-order reasoning. 3. For instance, if a young child sees an advertisement for alcohol or a violent videogame, there is a strong likelihood they will want to try it. 4. Even if they do not actually get an opportunity to use an age-inappropriate product, the appeal of these products has already been deeply implanted. 5. Recent research supports the contention that habits and impressions formed in early childhood are harder to leave behind later in life.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.

1. In conclusion, despite the feasibility of certain advertisements for older children, most marketing directed at impressionable children should be banned. 2. This will be a difficult process to manage but many countries have undertaken it already.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some are of the opinion that it is unethical to advertise to children. In my opinion, although at certain ages these advertisements should be permitted, in general children are too vulnerable a segment of the population.

Those who argue in favor of advertising to children point out it is not necessarily unfair. There are situations when even these proponents would concede advertising is exploitive, such as when there are commercials for cereals with high sugar content during cartoon shows. However, this is only a single instance. Many children, especially as they get older, are capable of thinking rationally, controlling their need for instant gratification, and would therefore like to be informed about new products they are interested in. If a child who is 10 years old sees an advertisement for a water park or sporting event, they might convince their parents to enjoy a fun, outdoors activity.

Nonetheless, most children are negatively impacted by advertisements as they lack self-control. Adults are more capable of inhibiting their desires while children are not experienced enough and their cognitive development does not allow for higher-order reasoning. For instance, if a young child sees an advertisement for alcohol or a violent videogame, there is a strong likelihood they will want to try it. Even if they do not actually get an opportunity to use an age-inappropriate product, the appeal of these products has already been deeply implanted. Recent research supports the contention that habits and impressions formed in early childhood are harder to leave behind later in life.

In conclusion, despite the feasibility of certain advertisements for older children, most marketing directed at impressionable children should be banned. This will be a difficult process to manage but many countries have undertaken it already.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

some are of the opinion that certain people think

unethical not moral, immoral

certain ages particular times in life

permitted allowed

in general overall

vulnerable susceptible

segment part

those who argue in favor of people who support

point out argue

not necessarily unfair don’t have to be unethical

situations contexts

proponents those in favor of

concede admit

exploitive take advantage of

commercials ads on TV

cereals breakfast food

high sugar content too sweet

cartoon shows animated TV programming

single instance one example

especially in particular

capable are able to

rationally reasonably

controlling in charge of

instant gratification just wanting pleasure right away

therefore thus

informed know about

interested in care about

water park place to go on slides and other water rides

sporting event matches, games

convince persuade

outdoors outside

nonetheless still

negatively impacted badly hurt

lack self-control can’t control their own desires, impulses

capable able to

inhibiting controlling

desires what you want to do

not experienced enough too immature

cognitive development how the brain develops

allow for higher-order reasoning can think critically

strong likelihood good chance of

opportunity chance

age-inappropriate not suitable for that age

appeal desire

deeply implanted becomes a part of you

recent research supports the contention new studies also say that

habits actions you do over a long time

impressions formed in early childhood things you remember from when you are young

leave behind later in life forget about as you get older

despite regardless of

feasibility how possible it is

marketing directed at impressionable ads taking advantage of vulnerable

banned not permitted

difficult process to manage hard to actually implement

undertaken done by

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

sʌm ɑːr ɒv ði əˈpɪnjən ðæt 
ˌʌnˈɛθɪkəl 
ˈsɜːtn ˈeɪʤɪz 
pəˈmɪtɪd
ɪn ˈʤɛnərəl 
ˈvʌlnərəbl 
ˈsɛgmənt 
ðəʊz huː ˈɑːgjuː ɪn ˈfeɪvər ɒv 
pɔɪnt aʊt 
nɒt ˈnɛsɪsərɪli ʌnˈfeə
ˌsɪtjʊˈeɪʃənz 
prəˈpəʊnənts 
kənˈsiːd 
ˈɛksplɔɪtɪv
kəˈmɜːʃəlz 
ˈsɪərɪəlz 
haɪ ˈʃʊgə ˈkɒntɛnt 
kɑːˈtuːn ʃəʊz
ˈsɪŋgl ˈɪnstəns
ɪsˈpɛʃəli 
ˈkeɪpəbl 
ˈræʃnəli
kənˈtrəʊlɪŋ 
ˈɪnstənt ˌgrætɪfɪˈkeɪʃən
ˈðeəfɔː 
ɪnˈfɔːmd 
ˈɪntrɪstɪd ɪn
ˈwɔːtə pɑːk 
ˈspɔːtɪŋ ɪˈvɛnt
kənˈvɪns 
ˌaʊtˈdɔːz 
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ˈnɛgətɪvli ɪmˈpæktɪd 
læk sɛlf-kənˈtrəʊl
ˈkeɪpəbl 
ɪnˈhɪbɪtɪŋ 
dɪˈzaɪəz 
nɒt ɪksˈpɪərɪənst ɪˈnʌf 
ˈkɒgnɪtɪv dɪˈvɛləpmənt 
əˈlaʊ fɔː ˈhaɪər-ˈɔːdə ˈriːznɪŋ
strɒŋ ˈlaɪklɪhʊd 
ˌɒpəˈtjuːnɪti 
eɪʤ-ˌɪnəˈprəʊprɪɪt 
əˈpiːl 
ˈdiːpli ɪmˈplɑːntɪd
ˈriːsnt rɪˈsɜːʧ səˈpɔːts ðə kənˈtɛnʃən 
ˈhæbɪts 
ɪmˈprɛʃənz fɔːmd ɪn ˈɜːli ˈʧaɪldhʊd 
liːv bɪˈhaɪnd ˈleɪtər ɪn laɪf
dɪsˈpaɪt 
ˌfiːzəˈbɪlɪti 
ˈmɑːkɪtɪŋ dɪˈrɛktɪd æt ɪmˈprɛʃnəbl 
bænd
ˈdɪfɪkəlt ˈprəʊsɛs tuː ˈmænɪʤ 
ˌʌndəˈteɪkən 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

S______________________________t it is u_________l to advertise to children. In my opinion, although at c_____________s these advertisements should be p_____________d, i________l children are too v___________e a s________t of the population.

T________________________________f advertising to children p______________t it is n________________________r. There are s____________s when even these p____________s would c__________e advertising is e___________e, such as when there are c_______________s for c_________s with h_________________________t during c_____________s. However, this is only a s___________________e. Many children, e________y as they get older, are c__________e of thinking r_______________y, c___________g their need for i__________________n, and would t____________e like to be i______________d about new products they are i_______________n. If a child who is 10 years old sees an advertisement for a w______________k or s_____________t, they might c_______e their parents to enjoy a fun, o________s activity.

N_____________s, most children are n__________________d by advertisements as they l______________l. Adults are more c__________e of i_________g their d_______s while children are n______________________h and their c_______________________t does not a____________________________g. For instance, if a young child sees an advertisement for alcohol or a violent videogame, there is a s__________________d they will want to try it. Even if they do not actually get an o_____________y to use an a_____________________e product, the a________l of these products has already been d________________d. R____________________________________n that h______s and i__________________________________d are harder to l______________________________________e.

In conclusion, d_______e the f_____________y of certain advertisements for older children, most m____________________________________e children should be b________d. This will be a d________________________________e but many countries have u___________n it already.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.stuff.co.nz/national/127531009/harmful-advertising-heavily-outweighs-childrens-exposure-to-branding-study-finds

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Advertising

  1. What kind of ads are common in your country?
  2. Do you think companies should be allowed to advertise to children?
  3. Are there laws regulating ads where you live?
  4. What makes a good advertisement?
  5. Will ads still be useful and common in the future?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?