IELTS Essay: Working Life and Job Security

IELTS Essay: Working Life and Job Security

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of working life and job security from the general training IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Working Life and Job Security

Some people say that individuals should change jobs during their working life often while others believe that doing the same job has advantages to individuals, companies, and society.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many are of the opinion that it is preferable for individuals, corporations and society more generally for workers to remain in the same position long-term. Although such a contention has transparent benefits, I am largely in disagreement.

Those who argue against employment mobility point out how it can facilitate consistent progress for all parties involved. Firstly, companies are the most likely to profit since they will not have to hire and train new employees and will be able to cultivate a positive company ethos. As companies flourish, it necessarily follows that individuals will be able to gain promotions and raises. This will enable a higher standard of living. Finally, society itself will benefit as the private and public world can achieve a balanced system of mutual benefits. There is then less likelihood of unemployment and civil unrest.

However, I would argue the opportunities that individuals may miss by not changing jobs are more significant. A worker who is unhappy in their job has the power to improve the situation. For instance, if a person is under-utilized and underpaid in their current position, they could apply for a new job or move to a new sector. If the move is successful, they will not regret their decision and if not they can always apply for another job. In the aggregate, citizens finding more satisfying jobs and taking full advantage of their latent abilities will lead to a happier society. This will in turn grow the economy and corporations are likely to be more productive with an engaged workforce.

In conclusion, the tangible impact of remaining in a single job does not outweigh the potential gain for individuals, and society by extension, when seeking a varied career path. There are exceptions to this but most workers should be willing to switch jobs when possible.

Analysis

1. Many are of the opinion that it is preferable for individuals, corporations and society more generally for workers to remain in the same position long-term. 2. Although such a contention has transparent benefits, I am largely in disagreement.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who argue against employment mobility point out how it can facilitate consistent progress for all parties involved. 2. Firstly, companies are the most likely to profit since they will not have to hire and train new employees and will be able to cultivate a positive company ethos. 3. As companies flourish, it necessarily follows that individuals will be able to gain promotions and raises. 4. This will enable a higher standard of living. 5. Finally, society itself will benefit as the private and public world can achieve a balanced system of mutual benefits. 6. There is then less likelihood of unemployment and civil unrest.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Finish development.
  6. Make sure you have dealt with all points in the topic.

1. However, I would argue the opportunities that individuals may miss by not changing jobs are more significant. 2. A worker who is unhappy in their job has the power to improve the situation. 3. For instance, if a person is under-utilized and underpaid in their current position, they could apply for a new job or move to a new sector. 4. If the move is successful, they will not regret their decision and if not they can always apply for another job. 5. In the aggregate, citizens finding more satisfying jobs and taking full advantage of their latent abilities will lead to a happier society. 6. This will in turn grow the economy and corporations are likely to be more productive with an engaged workforce.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.
  6. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. In conclusion, the tangible impact of remaining in a single job does not outweigh the potential gain for individuals, and society by extension, when seeking a varied career path. 2. There are exceptions to this but most workers should be willing to switch jobs when possible.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many are of the opinion that it is preferable for individuals, corporations and society more generally for workers to remain in the same position long-term. Although such a contention has transparent benefits, I am largely in disagreement.

Those who argue against employment mobility point out how it can facilitate consistent progress for all parties involved. Firstly, companies are the most likely to profit since they will not have to hire and train new employees and will be able to cultivate a positive company ethos. As companies flourish, it necessarily follows that individuals will be able to gain promotions and raises. This will enable a higher standard of living. Finally, society itself will benefit as the private and public world can achieve a balanced system of mutual benefits. There is then less likelihood of unemployment and civil unrest.

However, I would argue the opportunities that individuals may miss by not changing jobs are more significant. A worker who is unhappy in their job has the power to improve the situation. For instance, if a person is under-utilized and underpaid in their current position, they could apply for a new job or move to a new sector. If the move is successful, they will not regret their decision and if not they can always apply for another job. In the aggregate, citizens finding more satisfying jobs and taking full advantage of their latent abilities will lead to a happier society. This will in turn grow the economy and corporations are likely to be more productive with an engaged workforce.

In conclusion, the tangible impact of remaining in a single job does not outweigh the potential gain for individuals, and society by extension, when seeking a varied career path. There are exceptions to this but most workers should be willing to switch jobs when possible.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

preferable better

individuals people

corporations companies

society more generally all people in country

workers employees

remain stay

position long-term job for a long time

although however

contention belief

transparent benefits clear advantages

largely mostly

those who argue against people who disagree with

employment mobility changing jobs

point out argue

facilitate consistent progress enable continued growth

parties involved groups, people engaged with this

hire give a job

train teach about

cultivate help grow

positive company ethos good environment

flourish do really well

necessarily follows of necessity causes

gain promotions get a new job

raises increases

enable allow for

higher standard of living better quality of life

private and public personal and society

achieve a balanced system of mutual benefits good social order

less likelihood not as much of a chance

unemployment no job

civil unrest people unhappy in society

opportunities chances

significant meaningful

improve the situation make things better

under-utilized not used enough

underpaid not paid enough money

current right now

new sector different field

regret feel bad about, wish it was different

in the aggregate combined

citizens residents, people in a country

satisfying fulfilling

taking full advantage do the most to enjoy

latent abilities what you are capable of doing

in turn then

productive efficient

engaged workforce workers who care

tangible impact real effect

outweigh stronger than

potential possible

by extension included in this

seeking a varied career path try different jobs

exceptions cases outside the norm

willing happy to

switch change

when possible if they can

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈprɛfərəbl 
ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəlz
ˌkɔːpəˈreɪʃənz 
səˈsaɪəti mɔː ˈʤɛnərəli 
ˈwɜːkəz 
rɪˈmeɪn 
pəˈzɪʃən ˈlɒŋtɜːm
ɔːlˈðəʊ 
kənˈtɛnʃən 
trænsˈpeərənt ˈbɛnɪfɪts
ˈlɑːʤli 
ðəʊz huː ˈɑːgjuː əˈgɛnst 
ɪmˈplɔɪmənt məʊˈbɪlɪti 
pɔɪnt aʊt 
fəˈsɪlɪteɪt kənˈsɪstənt ˈprəʊgrəs 
ˈpɑːtiz ɪnˈvɒlvd
ˈhaɪə 
treɪn 
ˈkʌltɪveɪt 
ˈpɒzətɪv ˈkʌmpəni ˈiːθɒs 
ˈflʌrɪʃ,
ˈnɛsɪsərɪli ˈfɒləʊz 
geɪn prəˈməʊʃənz 
ˈreɪzɪz
ɪˈneɪbl 
ˈhaɪə ˈstændəd ɒv ˈlɪvɪŋ
ˈpraɪvɪt ænd ˈpʌblɪk 
əˈʧiːv ə ˈbælənst ˈsɪstɪm ɒv ˈmjuːtjʊəl ˈbɛnɪfɪts
lɛs ˈlaɪklɪhʊd 
ˌʌnɪmˈplɔɪmənt 
ˈsɪvl ʌnˈrɛst
ˌɒpəˈtjuːnɪtiz 
sɪgˈnɪfɪkənt
ɪmˈpruːv ðə ˌsɪtjʊˈeɪʃən
ˈʌndə-ˈjuːtɪˌlaɪzd 
ˌʌndəˈpeɪd 
ˈkʌrənt 
njuː ˈsɛktə
rɪˈgrɛt 
ɪn ði ˈægrɪgɪt
ˈsɪtɪznz 
ˈsætɪsfaɪɪŋ 
ˈteɪkɪŋ fʊl ədˈvɑːntɪʤ 
ˈleɪtənt əˈbɪlɪtiz 
ɪn tɜːn 
prəˈdʌktɪv 
ɪnˈgeɪʤd ˈwɜːkˌfɔːs
ˈtænʤəbl ˈɪmpækt 
aʊtˈweɪ 
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl 
baɪ ɪksˈtɛnʃən,
ˈsiːkɪŋ ə ˈveərɪd kəˈrɪə pɑːθ
ɪkˈsɛpʃənz 
ˈwɪlɪŋ 
swɪʧ 
wɛn ˈpɒsəbl

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many are of the opinion that it is p____________e for i___________s, c__________s and s______________________y for w_________s to r________n in the same p_________________m. A__________h such a c________n has t_________________s, I am l_______y in disagreement.

T________________________________t e___________________y p____________t how it can f___________e c__________________s for all p_______________d. Firstly, companies are the most likely to profit since they will not have to h____e and t______n new employees and will be able to c__________e a p___________________s. As companies f________h, it n____________s that individuals will be able to g___________________s and r________s. This will e_______e a h________________g. Finally, society itself will benefit as the p__________________c world can a_________________________________________s. There is then less l___________d of u____________t and c____________t.

However, I would argue the o_______________s that individuals may miss by not changing jobs are more s___________t. A worker who is unhappy in their job has the power to i___________________n. For instance, if a person is u________d and u__________d in their c________t position, they could apply for a new job or move to a n__________r. If the move is successful, they will not r________t their decision and if not they can always apply for another job. I______________e, c_______s finding more s____________g jobs and t____________________e of their l_____________s will lead to a happier society. This will i________n grow the economy and corporations are likely to be more p___________e with an e___________________e.

In conclusion, the t______________t of remaining in a single job does not o________h the p_________l gain for individuals, and society b__________n, when s___________________________h. There are e________s to this but most workers should be w_______g to s______h jobs w_____________e.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JaUCiKTNBxQ

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.glassdoor.com/blog/interview-questions-to-ask-to-evaluate-a-companys-work-life-balance/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work (Model answer available on my Patreon)

  1. Are you student or are you working now?
  2. What do you like about your job/school at the moment?
  3. What job would you like to do in the future?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do.

What are the problems associated with this?

What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

IELTS Essay: Supermarkets

IELTS Essay: Supermarkets

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of supermarkets.

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IELTS Essay: Supermarkets

Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced.

What are the reasons for this?

Is this a positive or negative development?

Some feel that supermarkets today sell too many imported products compared to the number of locally produced ones. In my opinion, this is a result of changes in consumer tastes and it is a negative overall.

The main cause behind this phenomenon is an exponential shift among consumers. Over the last century advances in sea and air transport have allowed supermarkets to import products from all over the world. As a result, an individual living in New England can try exotic fruits like mangos and pomegranates that cannot normally be grown in a four season climate. Once a person tries a new food and enjoys it, they are more likely to sample other new fruits and vegetables. They then recommend those foods to others and shifts in taste quickly become mainstream and irreversible.

This change is negative as it hurts local farmers and the environment. Local producers must now compete with large companies that source products such as bananas at lower prices and undercut farmers. Consumers naturally buy the cheaper products and the result is that local farmers often cannot survive without government subsidies or must close their operations. Moreover, this development leads to greater consumption of fossil fuels. Imported products allow consumers to shop out of season, for example eating asparagus year round, but this requires shipping products globally and increasing the burning of fossil fuels involved in transportation.

In conclusion, though supermarkets now enable shoppers to have more varied palates, this poses tremendous risks for local producers and the environment. Therefore, tariffs on imports should be high.

Analysis

1. Some feel that supermarkets today sell too many imported products compared to the number of locally produced ones. 2. In my opinion, this is a result of changes in consumer tastes and it is a negative overall.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. The main cause behind this phenomenon is an exponential shift among consumers. 2. Over the last century advances in sea and air transport have allowed supermarkets to import products from all over the world. 3. As a result, an individual living in New England can try exotic fruits like mangos and pomegranates that cannot normally be grown in a four season climate. 4. Once a person tries a new food and enjoys it, they are more likely to sample other new fruits and vegetables. 5. They then recommend those foods to others and shifts in taste quickly become mainstream and irreversible.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Finish development.

1. This change is negative as it hurts local farmers and the environment. 2. Local producers must now compete with large companies that source products such as bananas at lower prices and undercut farmers. 3. Consumers naturally buy the cheaper products and the result is that local farmers often cannot survive without government subsidies or must close their operations. 4. Moreover, this development leads to greater consumption of fossil fuels. 5. Imported products allow consumers to shop out of season, for example eating asparagus year round, but this requires shipping products globally and increasing the burning of fossil fuels involved in transportation.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.

1. In conclusion, though supermarkets now enable shoppers to have more varied palates, this poses tremendous risks for local producers and the environment. 2. Therefore, tariffs on imports should be high.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some feel that supermarkets today sell too many imported products compared to the number of locally produced ones. In my opinion, this is a result of changes in consumer tastes and it is a negative overall.

The main cause behind this phenomenon is an exponential shift among consumers. Over the last century advances in sea and air transport have allowed supermarkets to import products from all over the world. As a result, an individual living in New England can try exotic fruits like mangos and pomegranates that cannot normally be grown in a four season climate. Once a person tries a new food and enjoys it, they are more likely to sample other new fruits and vegetables. They then recommend those foods to others and shifts in taste quickly become mainstream and irreversible.

This change is negative as it hurts local farmers and the environment. Local producers must now compete with large companies that source products such as bananas at lower prices and undercut farmers. Consumers naturally buy the cheaper products and the result is that local farmers often cannot survive without government subsidies or must close their operations. Moreover, this development leads to greater consumption of fossil fuels. Imported products allow consumers to shop out of season, for example eating asparagus year round, but this requires shipping products globally and increasing the burning of fossil fuels involved in transportation.

In conclusion, though supermarkets now enable shoppers to have more varied palates, this poses tremendous risks for local producers and the environment. Therefore, tariffs on imports should be high.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

supermarkets places where food is sold

imported products foods from other countries

compared to in contrast to

locally produced ones ones made nearby

result consequence

consumer tastes what people like to eat

negative overall bad in general

main cause primary source

phenomenon development

exponential shift getting bigger and bigger change

consumers people who buy things

over the last century the last 100 years

advances new developments

sea and air transport boats and planes

import products from all over the world bring in foods from other countries

as a result the consequence is that

New England New York and nearby states

try exotic fruits eat foods from other countries

normally be grown usually can be produced

four season climate spring, summer, fall, and winter

sample eat

recommend tell others to have

mainstream popular

irreversible can’t be changed

hurts local farmers not good for growers in that country

compete fight with, sell against

source origin

undercut farmers offer lower prices than farmers

naturally of course

survive live

government subsidies state money

close their operations go out of business

development change

greater consumption of fossil fuels using more oil and gas

out of season not grown now

year round the whole year

requires shipping products globally must send out products around the world

burning of fossil fuels involved in transportation using oil and gas to send products

enable allow for

varied palates different tastes

poses tremendous risks cause big problems

tariffs taxes

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈsjuːpəˌmɑːkɪts 
ɪmˈpɔːtɪd ˈprɒdʌkts 
kəmˈpeəd tuː 
ˈləʊkəli prəˈdjuːst wʌnz
rɪˈzʌlt 
kənˈsjuːmə teɪsts 
ˈnɛgətɪv ˈəʊvərɔːl
meɪn kɔːz 
fɪˈnɒmɪnən 
ˌɛkspəˈnɛnʃ(ə)l ʃɪft 
kənˈsjuːməz
ˈəʊvə ðə lɑːst ˈsɛnʧʊri 
ədˈvɑːnsɪz 
siː ænd eə ˈtrænspɔːt 
ˈɪmpɔːt ˈprɒdʌkts frɒm ɔːl ˈəʊvə ðə wɜːld
æz ə rɪˈzʌlt
njuː ˈɪŋglənd 
traɪ ɪgˈzɒtɪk fruːts 
ˈnɔːməli biː grəʊn 
fɔː ˈsiːzn ˈklaɪmɪt
ˈsɑːmpl 
ˌrɛkəˈmɛnd 
ˈmeɪnstriːm 
ˌɪrɪˈvɜːsəbl
hɜːts ˈləʊkəl ˈfɑːməz 
kəmˈpiːt 
sɔːs
ˈʌndəkʌt ˈfɑːməz 
ˈnæʧrəli 
səˈvaɪv 
ˈgʌvnmənt ˈsʌbsɪdiz 
kləʊs ðeər ˌɒpəˈreɪʃənz
dɪˈvɛləpmənt 
ˈgreɪtə kənˈsʌm(p)ʃən ɒv ˈfɒsl fjʊəlz
aʊt ɒv ˈsiːzn
jɪə raʊnd
rɪˈkwaɪəz ˈʃɪpɪŋ ˈprɒdʌkts ˈgləʊbəli 
ˈbɜːnɪŋ ɒv ˈfɒsl fjʊəlz ɪnˈvɒlvd ɪn ˌtrænspɔːˈteɪʃən
ɪˈneɪbl 
ˈveərɪd ˈpælɪts 
ˈpəʊzɪz trɪˈmɛndəs rɪsks 
ˈtærɪfs 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Some feel that s______________s today sell too many i__________________s c_____________o the number of l_________________s. In my opinion, this is a r______t of changes in c________________s and it is a n_________________l.

The m_____________e behind this p________________n is an e__________________t among c_____________s. O___________________________y a__________s in s____________________t have allowed supermarkets to i__________________________d. A__________t, an individual living in N__________d can t_____________s like mangos and pomegranates that cannot n______________n in a f______________e. Once a person tries a new food and enjoys it, they are more likely to s_________e other new fruits and vegetables. They then r_____________d those foods to others and shifts in taste quickly become m_________m and i____________e.

This change is negative as it h_______________s and the environment. Local producers must now c__________e with large companies that s______e products such as bananas at lower prices and u________________s. Consumers n__________y buy the cheaper products and the result is that local farmers often cannot s_________e without g________________s or must c__________________s. Moreover, this d________________t leads to g_______________________________s. Imported products allow consumers to shop o_______________n, for example eating asparagus y_____________d, but this r______________________y and increasing the b_____________________________________________n.

In conclusion, though supermarkets now e_______e shoppers to have more v___________s, this p_______________________s for local producers and the environment. Therefore, t______s on imports should be high.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hOpUeh1QVXo

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Shopping

  1. What do you usually shop for?
  2. Do you often go to malls?
  3. Do you shop online a lot?
  4. How common are shopping centers in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Many large supermarkets are being built today while the number of small shops is decreasing.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS Essay: Combined Pie Chart and Table

IELTS Essay: Combined Pie Chart and Table

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of a combine pie chart and table featuring populations in Australia.

Find all the most recent task 1 topics here and my full IELTS Ebooks here.

Dave

IELTS Essay: Combined Pie Chart and Table

The table and pie chart illustrate populations in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

ielts essay pie chart table

The pie chart and table detail population figures in Australia and if residents tended to live in rural or urban areas. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the vast majority of the population is Australian, followed by sizeable numbers for other and British nationals, and more marginal figures for New Zealanders, Chinese, and the Dutch. All demographics live overwhelmingly in cities, especially individuals from China.

The pie chart indicates that 73% of the Australian population is made up of Australians themselves. This figure is followed distantly by other at 14%, residents from Great Britain at 7%, New Zealanders at 3%, Chinese at 2%, and people from the Netherlands at just 1%.

In terms of livings areas, Australians are most likely to live outside cities, though 80% still live in urban environments. Similarly, 83% of the Dutch live in cities and 17% in the countryside. British and New Zealand residents display nearly identical proportions with around 90% in cities. Finally, the Chinese live predominately in the cities (99%).

Analysis

1. The pie chart and table detail population figures in Australia and if residents tended to live in rural or urban areas. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the vast majority of the population is Australian, followed by sizeable numbers for other and British nationals, and more marginal figures for New Zealanders, Chinese, and the Dutch. 3. All demographics live overwhelmingly in cities, especially individuals from China.

  1. Paraphrase what the table shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.
  3. You might need another sentence for your overview.

1. The pie chart indicates that 73% of the Australian population is made up of Australians themselves. 2. This figure is followed distantly by other at 14%, residents from Great Britain at 7%, New Zealanders at 3%, Chinese at 2%, and people from the Netherlands at just 1%.

  1. Begin writing about the data for the first categories.
  2. Make sure you compare as much as possible.
  3. Don’t leave anything out!

1. In terms of livings areas, Australians are most likely to live outside cities, though 80% still live in urban environments. 2. Similarly, 83% of the Dutch live in cities and 17% in the countryside. 3. British and New Zealand residents display nearly identical proportions with around 90% in cities. 4. Finally, the Chinese live predominately in the cities (99%).

  1. Write about the final, other parts of the graph – include everything!
  2. Compare the categories.
  3. Group categories together too.
  4. Have some short, simple sentences to help your grammar score.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Take some notes on a piece of paper to aid your memory:

The pie chart and table detail population figures in Australia and if residents tended to live in rural or urban areas. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the vast majority of the population is Australian, followed by sizeable numbers for other and British nationals, and more marginal figures for New Zealanders, Chinese, and the Dutch. All demographics live overwhelmingly in cities, especially individuals from China.

The pie chart indicates that 73% of the Australian population is made up of Australians themselves. This figure is followed distantly by other at 14%, residents from Great Britain at 7%, New Zealanders at 3%, Chinese at 2%, and people from the Netherlands at just 1%.

In terms of livings areas, Australians are most likely to live outside cities, though 80% still live in urban environments. Similarly, 83% of the Dutch live in cities and 17% in the countryside. British and New Zealand residents display nearly identical proportions with around 90% in cities. Finally, the Chinese live predominately in the cities (99%).

Answers

Try to write down or think of an antonym/opposite word for further practice:

detail population figures show how many people live there

residents tended people living there usually

rural in the countryside

urban areas in cities

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

vast majority most of

followed by after that

sizeable numbers for a lot for

marginal figures smaller figures

demographics groups of people

overwhelmingly mostly

especially in particular

indicates shows

made up of constituted by

followed distantly a lot further behind

Great Britain England

Netherlands where the Dutch are from

just only

in terms of livings areas when it comes to where they live

outside not inside

urban environments cities

similarly the same

display showed

nearly almost

identical the same

proportions ratios

around about

predominately mostly

Pronunciation

Practice saying the words below using this tip with Google voice dictation:

ˈdiːteɪl ˌpɒpjʊˈleɪʃən ˈfɪgəz 
ˈrɛzɪdənts ˈtɛndɪd 
ˈrʊərəl 
ˈɜːbən ˈeərɪəz
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
vɑːst məˈʤɒrɪti 
ˈfɒləʊd baɪ 
ˈsaɪzəbl ˈnʌmbəz fɔː 
ˈmɑːʤɪnəl ˈfɪgəz 
ˌdɛməˈgræfɪks 
ˌəʊvəˈwɛlmɪŋli 
ɪsˈpɛʃəli 
ˈɪndɪkeɪts 
meɪd ʌp ɒv 
ˈfɒləʊd ˈdɪstəntli 
greɪt ˈbrɪtn 
ˈnɛðələndz 
ʤʌst 
ɪn tɜːmz ɒv ˈlɪvɪŋz ˈeərɪəz
ˌaʊtˈsaɪd 
ˈɜːbən ɪnˈvaɪərənmənts
ˈsɪmɪləli
dɪsˈpleɪd 
ˈnɪəli 
aɪˈdɛntɪkəl 
prəˈpɔːʃənz 
əˈraʊnd 
prɪˈdɒmɪneɪtli 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks. Note it on a piece of paper so you can remember better:

The pie chart and table d____________________________s in Australia and if r_________________d to live in r_____l or u___________s. L_____________________________________________t the v_____________y of the population is Australian, f_____________y s______________________r other and British nationals, and more m_______________s for New Zealanders, Chinese, and the Dutch. All d_____________s live o_____________y in cities, e________y individuals from China.

The pie chart i__________s that 73% of the Australian population is m____________f Australians themselves. This figure is f___________________y by other at 14%, residents from G_____________n at 7%, New Zealanders at 3%, Chinese at 2%, and people from the N______________s at j___t 1%.

I_________________________s, Australians are most likely to live o__________e cities, though 80% still live in u____________________s. S_________y, 83% of the Dutch live in cities and 17% in the countryside. British and New Zealand residents d____________y n_________y i__________l p_________s with a________d 90% in cities. Finally, the Chinese live p________________y in the cities (99%).

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

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https://www.planetware.com/australia/top-rated-beaches-in-australia-aus-1-32.htm

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Your Home Nation/Country

  1. Where are you from?
  2. What do you like the most about your country?
  3. Where would you like to live in your country?
  4. Are people in your country patriotic?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related chart below and then check with my sample answer:

IELTS Essay Task 1: Bookseller Pie Charts
IELTS Essay: Violent Media

IELTS Essay: Violent Media

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay Ebook on the topic of violent media from a real exam.

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Here is the question itself:

Some people believe that violent media directly results in violent behavior.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Here is a preview (the introduction from my essay):

Some argue that violent media serves as a direct catalyst for violent actions in society. In my opinion, although there are examples to support this viewpoint, it is largely untrue due to other contextual factors.

IELTS Essay: Young People and Shopping Malls

IELTS Essay: Young People and Shopping Malls

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of young people spending time at shopping malls from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Young People and Shopping Malls

Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In certain countries, it has becoming increasingly common for young people to spend their free time at malls and this is often viewed as a negative. In my opinion, though there are more productive activities, it should be considered a positive overall given the most likely alternatives.

Proponents of this statement point out that malls are typically not a productive use of one’s time. A person who goes to a mall is likely shopping, watching a movie, hanging out idly with friends, eating from a fast food establishment, or engaging in another similarly passive activity. A better use of time could involve playing sports, reading a book, creating art, or working. The rise of malls globally beginning in the 1980s signaled a period when younger individuals strayed from healthy activities and took part in more socially and personally subversive pastimes.

However, the fears detailed above are overblown compared to other free time activities. These days, most young people who are free spend an outsized proportion of their time doing truly unhealthy, passive activities. These largely center around technology and include wasting time on social media, taking pictures, playing online games, chatting online, streaming movies and videos, and using the internet. The mall is now actually a better use of one’s time since it likely will involve in-person socializing, precisely the domain that is most at risk for younger generations and society today.

In conclusion, though time spent at malls is not the ideal activity for a younger person, it is preferable to a more passive lifestyle and should therefore not be condemned. It is likely, however, that malls will continue to decline in popularity in the future so this concern will become less relevant.

Analysis

1. In certain countries, it has becoming increasingly common for young people to spend their free time at malls and this is often viewed as a negative. 2. In my opinion, though there are more productive activities, it should be considered a positive overall given the most likely alternatives.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Proponents of this statement point out that malls are typically not a productive use of one’s time. 2. A person who goes to a mall is likely shopping, watching a movie, hanging out idly with friends, eating from a fast food establishment, or engaging in another similarly passive activity. 3. A better use of time could involve playing sports, reading a book, creating art, or working. 4. The rise of malls globally beginning in the 1980s signaled a period when younger individuals strayed from healthy activities and took part in more socially and personally subversive pastimes.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. However, the fears detailed above are overblown compared to other free time activities. 2. These days, most young people who are free spend an outsized proportion of their time doing truly unhealthy, passive activities. 3. These largely center around technology and include wasting time on social media, taking pictures, playing online games, chatting online, streaming movies and videos, and using the internet. 4. The mall is now actually a better use of one’s time since it likely will involve in-person socializing, precisely the domain that is most at risk for younger generations and society today.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.

1. In conclusion, though time spent at malls is not the ideal activity for a younger person, it is preferable to a more passive lifestyle and should therefore not be condemned. 2. It is likely, however, that malls will continue to decline in popularity in the future so this concern will become less relevant.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

In certain countries, it has becoming increasingly common for young people to spend their free time at malls and this is often viewed as a negative. In my opinion, though there are more productive activities, it should be considered a positive overall given the most likely alternatives.

Proponents of this statement point out that malls are typically not a productive use of one’s time. A person who goes to a mall is likely shopping, watching a movie, hanging out idly with friends, eating from a fast food establishment, or engaging in another similarly passive activity. A better use of time could involve playing sports, reading a book, creating art, or working. The rise of malls globally beginning in the 1980s signaled a period when younger individuals strayed from healthy activities and took part in more socially and personally subversive pastimes.

However, the fears detailed above are overblown compared to other free time activities. These days, most young people who are free spend an outsized proportion of their time doing truly unhealthy, passive activities. These largely center around technology and include wasting time on social media, taking pictures, playing online games, chatting online, streaming movies and videos, and using the internet. The mall is now actually a better use of one’s time since it likely will involve in-person socializing, precisely the domain that is most at risk for younger generations and society today.

In conclusion, though time spent at malls is not the ideal activity for a younger person, it is preferable to a more passive lifestyle and should therefore not be condemned. It is likely, however, that malls will continue to decline in popularity in the future so this concern will become less relevant.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

certain countries some nations

increasingly common happens more and more

malls shopping centers

often viewed as a negative usually considered bad

productive activities useful uses of your time

considered thought of

positive overall good in general

given the most likely alternatives considering what will probably happen instead

proponents supporters

statement point out statement argue

typically usually

productive use good use

shopping buying things

hanging out idly with friends just spending time with friends

fast food establishment fast food restaurants

engaging in doing

similarly passive activity not very active pastime

involve have to do with

rise increase

globally all over the world

signaled was a mark of

period time

strayed gone off the path to

took part in participated in

socially with others

personally relating to individuals

subversive pastimes undermining uses of time

fears detailed above threats explained before

overblown compared to emphasized too much relative to

outsized proportion too much emphasis

truly really

passive not active

largely center around mostly has to do with

wasting time not good use of free time

social media Facebook, Instagram, TikTok, etc.

streaming movies watching shows online, Netflix

actually in fact

likely probably

involve in-person socializing will be hanging around with friends

precisely exactly

domain area

most at risk concerning area

younger generations not old people, youths

ideal perfect

preferable better

lifestyle how people live

condemned criticized

decline decrease

popularity how common it is

concern worry

less relevant not an issue any more

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈsɜːtn ˈkʌntriz
ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˈkɒmən 
mɔːlz 
ˈɒf(ə)n vjuːd æz ə ˈnɛgətɪv
prəˈdʌktɪv ækˈtɪvɪtiz
kənˈsɪdəd 
ˈpɒzətɪv ˈəʊvərɔːl 
ˈgɪvn ðə məʊst ˈlaɪkli ɔːlˈtɜːnətɪvz
prəˈpəʊnənts 
ˈsteɪtmənt pɔɪnt aʊt 
ˈtɪpɪk(ə)li 
prəˈdʌktɪv juːz 
ˈʃɒpɪŋ
ˈhæŋɪŋ aʊt ˈaɪdli wɪð frɛndz
fɑːst fuːd ɪsˈtæblɪʃmənt 
ɪnˈgeɪʤɪŋ ɪn 
ˈsɪmɪləli ˈpæsɪv ækˈtɪvɪti
ɪnˈvɒlv 
raɪz 
ˈgləʊbəli 
ˈsɪgnld 
ˈpɪərɪəd 
streɪd 
tʊk pɑːt ɪn 
ˈsəʊʃəli 
ˈpɜːsnəli 
səbˈvɜːsɪv ˈpɑːstaɪmz
fɪəz ˈdiːteɪld əˈbʌv 
ˌəʊvəˈbləʊn kəmˈpeəd tuː 
ˈaʊtsaɪzd prəˈpɔːʃən 
ˈtruːli 
ˈpæsɪv 
ˈlɑːʤli ˈsɛntər əˈraʊnd 
ˈweɪstɪŋ taɪm 
ˈsəʊʃəl ˈmiːdiə
ˈstriːmɪŋ ˈmuːviz 
ˈækʧʊəli 
ˈlaɪkli 
ɪnˈvɒlv ɪn-ˈpɜːsn ˈsəʊʃəlaɪzɪŋ
prɪˈsaɪsli 
dəʊˈmeɪn 
məʊst æt rɪsk 
ˈjʌŋə ˌʤɛnəˈreɪʃənz 
aɪˈdɪəl 
ˈprɛfərəbl 
ˈlaɪfˌstaɪl 
kənˈdɛmd
dɪˈklaɪn 
ˌpɒpjʊˈlærɪti 
kənˈsɜːn 
lɛs ˈrɛlɪvənt

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

In c__________________s, it has becoming i___________________n for young people to spend their free time at m____s and this is o________________________e. In my opinion, though there are more p______________________s, it should be c_____________d a p_________________l g_____________________________s.

P___________-s of this s____________t p___________t that malls are t__________y not a p_____________e of one’s time. A person who goes to a mall is likely s___________g, watching a movie, h___________________________s, eating from a f____________________________t, or e____________n another s___________________________y. A better use of time could i_________e playing sports, reading a book, creating art, or working. The r____e of malls g_______y beginning in the 1980s s__________d a p________d when younger individuals s___________d from healthy activities and t_______________n more s_________y and p______________________________s.

However, the f_________________e are o______________n c________d to other free time activities. These days, most young people who are free spend an o__________________n of their time doing t_____y unhealthy, p____e activities. These l________________________d technology and include w____________e on s__________a, taking pictures, playing online games, chatting online, s_______________s and videos, and using the internet. The mall is now a___________y a better use of one’s time since it l_______y will i_________e i____________________g, p___________y the d_________n that is m____________k for y___________________s and society today.

In conclusion, though time spent at malls is not the i_______l activity for a younger person, it is p_________e to a more passive l________e and should therefore not be c__________d. It is likely, however, that malls will continue to d_______e in p____________y in the future so this c_______n will become l_______________t.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

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Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Shopping

  1. What do you usually shop for?
  2. Do you often go to malls?
  3. Do you shop online a lot?
  4. How common are shopping centers in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activities in many countries for young adults.

Why is this?

Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?