IELTS Essay Task 1: Beachfront Map

IELTS Essay Task 1: Beachfront Map

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of a beachfront map.

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IELTS Essay Task 1: Beachfront Map

The map details a 1950 Australian beachfront location and alterations in the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there has been an increase in leisure facilities and motor vehicle access to the beach. The beach itself is unchanged.

In 1950, the less developed area contained a road above the beach ending at a car park. Today, the road and car park still exist though both the size of the car park and the length of the road have been extended. The present road leads to a lighthouse (present in 1950 as well) and a newly erected surf club by the side of the beach. A small 25m pool remains in the general vicinity of the lighthouse.

Beneath the road in 1950, there was a playground, an area for dining tables and a pavilion, which are largely unchanged in the present day with the exception of the children’s playground being replaced by an additional car park. Closer to the beach, a 25m pool has been enlarged to 50 meters and there is currently a restaurant and another surf club to the left of the beach.

Analysis

1. The map details a 1950 Australian beachfront location and alterations in the present day. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there has been an increase in leisure facilities and motor vehicle access to the beach. The beach itself is unchanged.

  1. Paraphrase what the map or floorplan shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the major trends and differences.

1. In 1950, the less developed area contained a road above the beach ending at a car park. 2. Today, the road and car park still exist though both the size of the car park and the length of the road have been extended. 3. The present road leads to a lighthouse (present in 1950 as well) and a newly erected surf club by the side of the beach. 4. A small 25m pool remains in the general vicinity of the lighthouse.

  1. Begin writing about the changes.
  2. Compare as much as possible.
  3. Vary some long and short sentences.
  4. Make sure everything is detailed.

1. Beneath the road in 1950, there was a playground, an area for dining tables and a pavilion, which are largely unchanged in the present day with the exception of the children’s playground being replaced by an additional car park. 2. Closer to the beach, a 25m pool has been enlarged to 50 meters and there is currently a restaurant and another surf club to the left of the beach.

  1. Write about the rest of the beach.
  2. Make sure you have detailed all the information., even what has not changed.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean?

The map details a 1950 Australian beachfront location and alterations in the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there has been an increase in leisure facilities and motor vehicle access to the beach. The beach itself is unchanged.

In 1950, the less developed area contained a road above the beach ending at a car park. Today, the road and car park still exist though both the size of the car park and the length of the road have been extended. The present road leads to a lighthouse (present in 1950 as well) and a newly erected surf club by the side of the beach. A small 25m pool remains in the general vicinity of the lighthouse.

Beneath the road in 1950, there was a playground, an area for dining tables and a pavilion, which are largely unchanged in the present day with the exception of the children’s playground being replaced by an additional car park. Closer to the beach, a 25m pool has been enlarged to 50 meters and there is currently a restaurant and another surf club to the left of the beach.

Answers

details describes

beachfront beach

alterations changes

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

leisure facilities places to hang out

motor vehicle access cars can go there

less developed not built up

contained had

ending at going to

length the distant

extended lengthened

leads to goes towards

lighthouse old style tower with a light for ships to see

present now

newly erected built recently

surf club place to do surfing

by the side of next to

general vicinity around

beneath under

playground place for kids to play

dining tables places to eat

pavilion place to sit and hang out

unchanged no different

exception not included

replaced took the place of

additional also

closer to the nearer

enlarged expanded

currently now

another a second

Pronunciation

  ˈdiːteɪlz 
biːʧfrʌnt 
ˌɔːltəˈreɪʃ(ə)nz 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
ˈlɛʒə fəˈsɪlɪtiz 
ˈməʊtə ˈviːɪkl ˈæksɛs
lɛs dɪˈvɛləpt 
kənˈteɪnd 
ˈɛndɪŋ æt 
lɛŋθ 
ɪksˈtɛndɪd
liːdz tuː 
ˈlaɪthaʊs 
ˈprɛznt 
ˈnjuːli ɪˈrɛktɪd
sɜːf klʌb 
baɪ ðə saɪd ɒv 
ˈʤɛnərəl vɪˈsɪnɪti 
bɪˈniːθ 
ˈpleɪgraʊnd
ˈdaɪnɪŋ ˈteɪblz 
pəˈvɪljən
ʌnˈʧeɪnʤd 
ɪkˈsɛpʃən 
rɪˈpleɪst 
əˈdɪʃənl 
ˈkləʊsə tuː ðiː 
ɪnˈlɑːʤd 
ˈkʌrəntli 
əˈnʌðə 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

The map d__________s a 1950 Australian b_____________t location and a___________s in the present day. L_________________________________________________t there has been an increase in l_____________s and m___________________s to the beach. The beach itself is unchanged.

In 1950, the l________________d area c____________d a road above the beach e_______________t a car park. Today, the road and car park still exist though both the size of the car park and the l___________h of the road have been e_____________d. The present road l____________o a l____________e (p_________t in 1950 as well) and a n_________________d s______________b b________________f the beach. A small 25m pool remains in the g________________y of the lighthouse.

B_____________h the road in 1950, there was a p______________d, an area for d_________________s and a p_____________n, which are largely u____________d in the present day with the e____________n of the children’s playground being r___________d by an a_______________l car park. C________________e beach, a 25m pool has been e______________d to 50 meters and there is c_____________y a restaurant and a______________r surf club to the left of the beach.

Listening Practice

Listen to the related topic below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.escape.com.au/destinations/australia/shock-beach-named-in-australias-best/image-gallery/d5dcb1ef24a9229126a1f371cf447032

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Scenery

  1. Are there many places in your hometown to see nice scenery?
  2. When you travel, do you stay in rooms with good views?
  3. Would you like to live in a house with beautiful scenery around it?
  4. Why do people like taking pictures of the scenery?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related map below and then check with my sample answer:

IELTS Essay: Map of Pentland
IELTS Essay: Cities vs Trees

IELTS Essay: Cities vs Trees

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of trees and houses in towns and cities from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Cities vs Trees

Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing.

To what extant do you agree or disagree?

Many city and town planners believe that trees, instead of residential buildings, are crucial for the development of the modern city. In my agreement, I agree with this contention despite the legitimate benefits to increased housing in cities.

Those who would rather build more residential buildings argue that both town and city populations are surging. Population figures globally are on the rise and it is logical to provide quality housing for all citizens. This is particularly true in rapidly growing nations such as China and India. The migration of individuals from the countryside to cities and outlying towns means that higher residential numbers have led to deteriorating sanitary conditions and increased pressure on the services that sustain cities such as public transportation. More housing would at least partly alleviate the issues that urban planners face and allow for more cogent plans for densely populated environments.

Nonetheless, the importance of trees transcends the purely practical. For the average city and town resident, trees have aesthetic value. Take for example some of the best known cities in the world including Paris and New York City. The parks and gardens stand out and mitigate living apart from the natural world. Moreover, the more underprivileged segments of society are unlikely to be able to afford trips outside their immediate living vicinity. There is therefore a good chance that many younger children, particularly those in inner cities, will rarely experience nature and their lives will be limited to the dreary confines of the city. Over time, this can have a demoralising effect that is evidenced in the defeatist attitude common among less affluent children.

In conclusion, the importance of housing to meeting rising population demands does not overshadow the importance of trees. Towns and cities must naturally balance these concerns to foster better living environments for residents.

Analysis

1. Many city and town planners believe that trees, instead of residential buildings, are crucial for the development of the modern city. 2. In my agreement, I agree with this contention despite the legitimate benefits to increased housing in cities.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who would rather build more residential buildings argue that both town and city populations are surging. 2. Population figures globally are on the rise and it is logical to provide quality housing for all citizens. 3. This is particularly true in rapidly growing nations such as China and India. 4. The migration of individuals from the countryside to cities and outlying towns means that higher residential numbers have led to deteriorating sanitary conditions and increased pressure on the services that sustain cities such as public transportation. 5. More housing would at least partly alleviate the issues that urban planners face and allow for more cogent plans for densely populated environments.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific examples.
  4. Continue to develop it.
  5. State the result.

1. Nonetheless, the importance of trees transcends the purely practical. 2. For the average city and town resident, trees have aesthetic value. 3. Take for example some of the best known cities in the world including Paris and New York City. 4. The parks and gardens stand out and mitigate living apart from the natural world. 5. Moreover, the more underprivileged segments of society are unlikely to be able to afford trips outside their immediate living vicinity. 6. There is therefore a good chance that many younger children, particularly those in inner cities, will rarely experience nature and their lives will be limited to the dreary confines of the city. 7. Over time, this can have a demoralising effect that is evidenced in the defeatist attitude common among less affluent children.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. The more specific, the better.
  5. Continue your development.
  6. Detail the results if you are struggling to develop your ideas.
  7. Add on any extra detail that you can that is related for a better task achievement score.

1. In conclusion, the importance of housing to meeting rising population demands does not overshadow the importance of trees. 2. Towns and cities must naturally balance these concerns to foster better living environments for residents.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes and then check below.

Many city and town planners believe that trees, instead of residential buildings, are crucial for the development of the modern city. In my agreement, I agree with this contention despite the legitimate benefits to increased housing in cities.

Those who would rather build more residential buildings argue that both town and city populations are surging. Population figures globally are on the rise and it is logical to provide quality housing for all citizens. This is particularly true in rapidly growing nations such as China and India. The migration of individuals from the countryside to cities and outlying towns means that higher residential numbers have led to deteriorating sanitary conditions and increased pressure on the services that sustain cities such as public transportation. More housing would at least partly alleviate the issues that urban planners face and allow for more cogent plans for densely populated environments.

Nonetheless, the importance of trees transcends the purely practical. For the average city and town resident, trees have aesthetic value. Take for example some of the best known cities in the world including Paris and New York City. The parks and gardens stand out and mitigate living apart from the natural world. Moreover, the more underprivileged segments of society are unlikely to be able to afford trips outside their immediate living vicinity. There is therefore a good chance that many younger children, particularly those in inner cities, will rarely experience nature and their lives will be limited to the dreary confines of the city. Over time, this can have a demoralising effect that is evidenced in the defeatist attitude common among less affluent children.

In conclusion, the importance of housing to meeting rising population demands does not overshadow the importance of trees. Towns and cities must naturally balance these concerns to foster better living environments for residents.

Answers

city and town planners people who map out and plan places

instead of residential buildings in place of housing

crucial key

modern city cities of the 21st century

contention despite opinion regardless of

legitimate benefits real advantages

rather prefer

argue claim

surging increasing a lot

population figures globally number of people around the world

logical rational

provide quality housing give good homes

particularly true especially the case

rapidly growing nations countries growing much faster

migration leaving/moving

outlying towns suburbs

higher residential numbers more people living there

deteriorating sanitary conditions less and less clean

increased pressure more stress

services transport, medicine, police, etc.

sustain keep alive

public transportation buses, metros, etc.

at least partly alleviate at the minimum somewhat contain

urban planners face people who plan cities must deal with

cogent plans logical future plans

densely populated environments cities with lots of people

nonetheless regardless

trees transcends is more important than

purely practical just what is necessary

average normal

aesthetic value beauty

stand out make an impression

mitigate lessen

apart away from

natural world nature

underprivileged segments of society poor people

afford can pay for

outside their immediate living vicinity
far from their home

particularly especially

inner cities deep in cities

rarely not often

limited not expansive

dreary confines sad surroundings

over time over period of time

demoralising effect demotivating

evidenced there is evidence for it

defeatist attitude negative outlook

common among prevalent in

less affluent children poor kids

demands what people need

overshadow be stronger than

naturally balance these concerns of course keep both in
check

foster better living environments encourage a nice place to
live

Pronunciation

ˈsɪti ænd taʊn ˈplænəz 
ɪnˈstɛd ɒv ˌrɛzɪˈdɛnʃəl ˈbɪldɪŋz
ˈkruːʃəl 
ˈmɒdən ˈsɪti
kənˈtɛnʃən dɪsˈpaɪt 
lɪˈʤɪtɪmɪt ˈbɛnɪfɪts 
ˈrɑːðə 
ˈɑːgjuː 
ˈsɜːʤɪŋ
ˌpɒpjʊˈleɪʃən ˈfɪgəz ˈgləʊbəli 
ˈlɒʤɪkəl 
prəˈvaɪd ˈkwɒlɪti ˈhaʊzɪŋ 
pəˈtɪkjʊləli truː 
ˈræpɪdli ˈgrəʊɪŋ ˈneɪʃənz 
maɪˈgreɪʃən 
ˈsɪtiz 
ˈaʊtˌlaɪɪŋ taʊnz 
ˈhaɪə ˌrɛzɪˈdɛnʃəl ˈnʌmbəz 
dɪˈtɪərɪəreɪtɪŋ ˈsænɪtəri kənˈdɪʃənz 
ɪnˈkriːst ˈprɛʃə 
ˈsɜːvɪsɪz 
səsˈteɪn 
ˈpʌblɪk ˌtrænspɔːˈteɪʃən
æt liːst ˈpɑːtli əˈliːvɪeɪt 
ˈɜːbən ˈplænəz feɪs 
ˈkəʊʤənt plænz 
ˈdɛnsli ˈpɒpjʊleɪtɪd ɪnˈvaɪərənmənts
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
triːz trænˈsɛndz 
ˈpjʊəli ˈpræktɪkəl
ˈævərɪʤ 
iːsˈθɛtɪk ˈvæljuː
stænd aʊt 
ˈmɪtɪgeɪt 
əˈpɑːt 
ˈnæʧrəl wɜːld
ˌʌndəˈprɪvɪlɪʤd ˈsɛgmənts ɒv səˈsaɪəti 
əˈfɔːd 
ˌaʊtˈsaɪd ðeər ɪˈmiːdiət ˈlɪvɪŋ vɪˈsɪnɪti
pəˈtɪkjʊləli 
ˈɪnə ˈsɪtiz
ˈreəli 
ˈlɪmɪtɪd 
ˈdrɪəri ˈkɒnfaɪnz 
ˈəʊvə taɪm
dɪˈmɒrəlaɪzɪŋ ɪˈfɛkt 
ˈɛvɪdənst 
dɪˈfiːtɪst ˈætɪtjuːd 
ˈkɒmən əˈmʌŋ 
lɛs ˈæflʊənt ˈʧɪldrən
dɪˈmɑːndz
ˌəʊvəˈʃædəʊ 
ˈnæʧrəli ˈbæləns ðiːz kənˈsɜːnz 
ˈfɒstə ˈbɛtə ˈlɪvɪŋ ɪnˈvaɪərənmənts 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many c_________________________s believe that trees, i___________________________s, are c__________l for the development of the m______________y. In my agreement, I agree with this c___________________e the l______________________s to increased housing in cities.

Those who would r_________r build more residential buildings a_____e that both town and city populations are s________g. P_________________________y are on the rise and it is l________l to p_______________________g for all citizens. This is p____________________e in r________________________s such as China and India. The m______________n of individuals from the countryside to cities and o_______________s means that h______________________________s have led to d_____________________________s and i_________________e on the s__________s that s_______n cities such as p________________________n. More housing would a___________________________e the issues that u______________________e and allow for more c_______________s for d_________________________________s.

N_____________s, the importance of t__________________s the p_____________l. For the a___________e city and town resident, trees have a_______________e. Take for example some of the best known cities in the world including Paris and New York City. The parks and gardens s__________t and m__________e living a______t from the n_________________d. Moreover, the more u___________________________________y are unlikely to be able to a_______d trips o_______________________________________y. There is therefore a good chance that many younger children, p___________y those in i__________s, will r________y experience nature and their lives will be l________d to the d_____________s of the city. O___________e, this can have a d____________________t that is e___________d in the d____________________________________________________n.

In conclusion, the importance of housing to meeting rising population d___________s does not o___________w the importance of trees. Towns and cities must n__________________________________s to f__________________________________s for residents.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.getaway.co.za/environment/top-10-cities-with-the-most-trees/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Rubbish/Garbage/Litter

  1. How do you react when you see litter on the streets?
  2. Do you recycle?
  3. How do you help keep the streets tidy?
  4. What would you do if someone else dropped some litter?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:

Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise.

What are the causes of this?

What are some possible solutions?

IELTS Essay: Working Longer Hours

IELTS Essay: Working Longer Hours

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of working longer hours from the real IELTS general training exam.

An interesting and tricky IELTS topic!

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IELTS Essay: Working Longer Hours

Many people are working longer hours.

Why is this happening?

What problems can this cause to people?

It is becoming increasingly common for the average employee to spend more time working. In my opinion, this is the result of structural changes and the resultant problems relate primarily to mental and physical well-being.

Longer modern workdays are largely due to technological innovations. In the past, an office employee might commute to work for a typical 9 to 5 shift, before returning home unencumbered by further assignments. Today, many employees are in near-constant contact with their job through messages, emails, and phone calls. As working hours become flexible and permeable, in some cases leading to remote working, individuals are more likely to spend extra time completing assignments or making an effort to impress their boss. For example, highly motivated employees will often answer emails late into the night or stay up past midnight to finalise reports.

The results of more time spent at work concern mental and physical health. First of all, research has shown that in order to lower levels of cortisol in the brain linked to periods of stressful activity, it is important to compartmentalise work. Since this is less possible today, there has been a concomitant rise in conditions related to depression, anxiety, and general unhappiness. Secondly, more time at work can also take a heavy toll on physical health. Most workers spend the majority of the day sitting at a desk, which, if they have poor posture, can lead to back pain. More importantly, if employees are working too much they might be cutting into their time for exercise. There is only so much that an individual can fit into a single day and exercise is a natural sacrifice when pressed for time.

In conclusion, the tendency to work longer results from fundamental changes to the structure of work due to advances in technology and this has both psychological and physical implications. Individuals must therefore strive for ways to strike a balance to maintain their health.

Analysis

1. It is becoming increasingly common for the average employee to spend more time working. 2. In my opinion, this is the result of structural changes and the resultant problems relate primarily to mental and physical well-being.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Longer modern workdays are largely due to technological innovations. 2. In the past, an office employee might commute to work for a typical 9 to 5 shift, before returning home unencumbered by further assignments. 3. Today, many employees are in near-constant contact with their job through messages, emails, and phone calls. 4. As working hours become flexible and permeable, in some cases leading to remote working, individuals are more likely to spend extra time completing assignments or making an effort to impress their boss. 5. For example, highly motivated employees will often answer emails late into the night or stay up past midnight to finalise reports.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific detail.
  4. Continue to develop it.
  5. Give an example.

1. The results of more time spent at work concern mental and physical health. 2. First of all, research has shown that in order to lower levels of cortisol in the brain linked to periods of stressful activity, it is important to compartmentalise work. 3. Since this is less possible today, there has been a concomitant rise in conditions related to depression, anxiety, and general unhappiness. 4. Secondly, more time at work can also take a heavy toll on physical health. 5. Most workers spend the majority of the day sitting at a desk, which, if they have poor posture, can lead to back pain. 6. More importantly, if employees are working too much they might be cutting into their time for exercise. 7. There is only so much that an individual can fit into a single day and exercise is a natural sacrifice when pressed for time.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. The more specific, the better.
  5. Add on any extra detail that you can that is related for a better task achievement score.
  6. This paragraph can be slightly longer but not too much!
  7. Try to keep your vocabulary academic and conclude the paragraph.

1. In conclusion, the tendency to work longer results from fundamental changes to the structure of work due to advances in technology and this has both psychological and physical implications. 2. Individuals must therefore strive for ways to strike a balance to maintain their health.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean?

It is becoming increasingly common for the average employee to spend more time working. In my opinion, this is the result of structural changes and the resultant problems relate primarily to mental and physical well-being.

Longer modern workdays are largely due to technological innovations. In the past, an office employee might commute to work for a typical 9 to 5 shift, before returning home unencumbered by further assignments. Today, many employees are in near-constant contact with their job through messages, emails, and phone calls. As working hours become flexible and permeable, in some cases leading to remote working, individuals are more likely to spend extra time completing assignments or making an effort to impress their boss. For example, highly motivated employees will often answer emails late into the night or stay up past midnight to finalise reports.

The results of more time spent at work concern mental and physical health. First of all, research has shown that in order to lower levels of cortisol in the brain linked to periods of stressful activity, it is important to compartmentalise work. Since this is less possible today, there has been a concomitant rise in conditions related to depression, anxiety, and general unhappiness. Secondly, more time at work can also take a heavy toll on physical health. Most workers spend the majority of the day sitting at a desk, which, if they have poor posture, can lead to back pain. More importantly, if employees are working too much they might be cutting into their time for exercise. There is only so much that an individual can fit into a single day and exercise is a natural sacrifice when pressed for time.

In conclusion, the tendency to work longer results from fundamental changes to the structure of work due to advances in technology and this has both psychological and physical implications. Individuals must therefore strive for ways to strike a balance to maintain their health.

Answers

increasingly common more and more popular

average employee normal person

structural changes alterations to the shape of the workday

resultant problems issues resulting from this

primarily mostly

mental and physical well-being emotional and body health

longer modern workdays more time working these days

largely mostly

technological innovations new devices

commute travelling to work/school

typical 9 to 5 shift normal workday

returning home unencumbered going back home with no worries/work

further extra

near-constant contact always in communications

flexible can change

permeable goes through barriers

in some cases sometimes

leading to causing

remote working working from home

completing assignments finishing your work

making an effort to impress their boss trying to show off

highly very

answer emails late into the night stay up late at night to respond

stay up past midnight don’t sleep until late

finalise reports finish work

concern worry

research has shown that studies indicate

cortisol the thing in the brain that relates to stress

linked to periods of stressful activity times when you feel stressed

compartmentalise keep in its place

concomitant rise related increase

conditions contexts

anxiety stressful feelings

take a heavy toll on hurts a lot

majority most of

poor posture don’t sit properly

back pain when your back hurts

cutting into reducing

there is only so much that only a limited amount can be done

fit into be part of

natural sacrifice obvious area to limit

pressed for time don’t have much time

tendency inclination

results from fundamental what happens from the basic

implications ramifications

strive try hard

strike a balance keep everything equal

Pronunciation

ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˈkɒmən 
ˈævərɪʤ ˌɛmplɔɪˈiː 
ˈstrʌkʧərəl ˈʧeɪnʤɪz 
rɪˈzʌltənt ˈprɒbləmz 
ˈpraɪmərɪli 
ˈmɛntl ænd ˈfɪzɪkəl wɛl-ˈbiːɪŋ
ˈlɒŋgə ˈmɒdən ˈwɜːkdeɪz 
ˈlɑːʤli 
ˌtɛknəˈlɒʤɪk(ə)l ˌɪnəʊˈveɪʃənz
kəˈmjuːt 
ˈtɪpɪk(ə)l 9 tuː 5 ʃɪft,
rɪˈtɜːnɪŋ həʊm ˌʌnɪnˈkʌmbəd 
ˈfɜːðə 
nɪə-ˈkɒnstənt ˈkɒntækt 
ˈflɛksəbl 
ˈpɜːmiəb(ə)l
ɪn sʌm ˈkeɪsɪz 
ˈliːdɪŋ tuː 
rɪˈməʊt ˈwɜːkɪŋ
kəmˈpliːtɪŋ əˈsaɪnmənts 
ˈmeɪkɪŋ ən ˈɛfət tuː ˈɪmprɛs ðeə bɒs
ˈhaɪli 
ˈɑːnsər ˈiːmeɪlz leɪt ˈɪntuː ðə naɪt 
steɪ ʌp pɑːst ˈmɪdnaɪt 
ˈfaɪnəlaɪz rɪˈpɔːts
kənˈsɜːn 
rɪˈsɜːʧ hæz ʃəʊn ðæt 
kɔːtisəʊl
lɪŋkt tuː ˈpɪərɪədz ɒv ˈstrɛsf(ə)l ækˈtɪvɪti
kəmˈpɑːtməntəlaɪz 
kənˈkɒmɪtənt raɪz 
kənˈdɪʃənz 
æŋˈzaɪəti
teɪk ə ˈhɛvi təʊl ɒn 
məˈʤɒrɪti 
pʊə ˈpɒsʧə
bæk peɪn
ˈkʌtɪŋ ˈɪntuː 
ðeər ɪz ˈəʊnli səʊ mʌʧ ðæt 
fɪt ˈɪntuː 
ˈnæʧrəl ˈsækrɪfaɪs 
prɛst fɔː taɪm
ˈtɛndənsi 
rɪˈzʌlts frɒm ˌfʌndəˈmɛntl 
ˌɪmplɪˈkeɪʃənz
straɪv 
straɪk ə ˈbæləns 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

It is becoming i__________________n for the a_____________________e to spend more time working. In my opinion, this is the result of s__________________s and the r___________________s relate p___________y to m___________________________g.

L_________________________s are l__________y due to t___________________________s. In the past, an office employee might c__________e to work for a t_______________________t, before r___________________________d by f_________r assignments. Today, many employees are in n_______________________t with their job through messages, emails, and phone calls. As working hours become f______________e and p______________e, i________________s l_________________o r____________________g, individuals are more likely to spend extra time c____________________s or m__________________________________s. For example, h__________y motivated employees will often a_____________________________t or s___________________t to f_________________s.

The results of more time spent at work c___________n mental and physical health. First of all, r________________________t in order to lower levels of c___________l in the brain l________________________________________y, it is important to c_________________e work. Since this is less possible today, there has been a c____________________e in c_______________s related to depression, a____________y, and general unhappiness. Secondly, more time at work can also t_______________________n physical health. Most workers spend the m_______________y of the day sitting at a desk, which, if they have p__________________e, can lead to b_____________n. More importantly, if employees are working too much they might be c_____________o their time for exercise. T_____________________________t an individual can f_______o a single day and exercise is a n_______________________e when p___________________e.

In conclusion, the t____________y to work longer r________________________l changes to the structure of work due to advances in technology and this has both psychological and physical i_________________s. Individuals must therefore s______e for ways to s__________________e to maintain their health.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

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https://www.nytimes.com/2012/10/07/business/measure-results-not-hours-to-improve-work-efficiency.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work

  1. Why did you choose your job?
  2. How much work do you do in a week?
  3. Do you have to work on weekends as well?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:

Some think that work and social friends should be kept separate.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Essay: Celebrities and Charity

IELTS Essay: Celebrities and Charity

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Some people think that famous people can help international aid organizations to draw attention to important problems. Others believe that the celebrities can make the problems seem less important.

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IELTS Essay: Internet News

IELTS Essay: Internet News

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IELTS Essay: Internet News

More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programmes to get their news and instead read online.

Is this a positive or negative development?

Increasingly large segments of the population now receive their news online, rather than from the physical editions of newspapers. In my opinion, though the conveniences of technology are self-evident, this trend is a negative on the whole.

Proponents of modern habits of reading news argue it is more convenient. Examples of this abound. Consumers can search Google or Apple News and locate articles from thousands of online papers and websites, enabling them to access the news that matters the most to them more efficiently. Furthermore, they can do this while they are commuting to work or during various periods of inactivity throughout the day. It is even possible on most websites to listen to an audio version of the news, a tremendous advance for the visually impaired. All these modern features of online news only hint at the innovations to come and validate the decline of the publishing industry.

Nonetheless, the quality of online news is considerably lower on most websites. There are exceptions, such as websites that specialise in a given subject-area and employ intelligent contributors, however, the vast majority of the online news industry cynically pursues advertising revenue at any cost. Most stories are written hastily, the headlines are misleading, and the news articles themselves may be rife with unchecked facts and unprofessional prose. Retractions to reporting errors go unnoticed. The situation developing from this is that most individuals now read the news either to confirm their biases and gain a momentary burst of endorphins or out of outrage, so-called ‘hate-reading’, for the very same reason. It is therefore justified to claim that the relationship between publisher and audience is exploitive, not educational.

In conclusion, easier access to news does not outweigh the bad habits instilled by online news. Governments will likely never regulate this industry properly so it falls to individuals to make more informed choices when consuming media.

Analysis

1. Increasingly large segments of the population now receive their news online, rather than from the physical editions of newspapers. 2. In my opinion, though the conveniences of technology are self-evident, this trend is a negative on the whole.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Proponents of modern habits of reading news argue it is more convenient. 2. Examples of this abound. 3. Consumers can search Google or Apple News and locate articles from thousands of online papers and websites, enabling them to access the news that matters the most to them more efficiently. 4. Furthermore, they can do this while they are commuting to work or during various periods of inactivity throughout the day. 5. It is even possible on most websites to listen to an audio version of the news, a tremendous advance for the visually impaired. 6. All these modern features of online news only hint at the innovations to come and validate the decline of the publishing industry.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific examples.
  4. Continue to develop it.
  5. State the result.
  6. Develop it even more fully if possible.

1. Nonetheless, the quality of online news is considerably lower on most websites. 2. There are exceptions, such as websites that specialise in a given subject-area and employ intelligent contributors, however, the vast majority of the online news industry cynically pursues advertising revenue at any cost. 3. Most stories are written hastily, the headlines are misleading, and the news articles themselves may be rife with unchecked facts and unprofessional prose. 4. Retractions to reporting errors go unnoticed. 5. The situation developing from this is that most individuals now read the news either to confirm their biases and gain a momentary burst of endorphins or out of outrage, so-called ‘hate-reading’, for the very same reason. 6. It is therefore justified to claim that the relationship between publisher and audience is exploitive, not educational.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. The more specific, the better.
  5. Continue your development.
  6. Add on any extra detail that you can that is related for a better task achievement score.

1. In conclusion, easier access to news does not outweigh the bad habits instilled by online news. 2. Governments will likely never regulate this industry properly so it falls to individuals to make more informed choices when consuming media.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes and then check below.

Increasingly large segments of the population now receive their news online, rather than from the physical editions of newspapers. In my opinion, though the conveniences of technology are self-evident, this trend is a negative on the whole.

Proponents of modern habits of reading news argue it is more convenient. Examples of this abound. Consumers can search Google or Apple News and locate articles from thousands of online papers and websites, enabling them to access the news that matters the most to them more efficiently. Furthermore, they can do this while they are commuting to work or during various periods of inactivity throughout the day. It is even possible on most websites to listen to an audio version of the news, a tremendous advance for the visually impaired. All these modern features of online news only hint at the innovations to come and validate the decline of the publishing industry.

Nonetheless, the quality of online news is considerably lower on most websites. There are exceptions, such as websites that specialise in a given subject-area and employ intelligent contributors, however, the vast majority of the online news industry cynically pursues advertising revenue at any cost. Most stories are written hastily, the headlines are misleading, and the news articles themselves may be rife with unchecked facts and unprofessional prose. Retractions to reporting errors go unnoticed. The situation developing from this is that most individuals now read the news either to confirm their biases and gain a momentary burst of endorphins or out of outrage, so-calledhate-reading‘, for the very same reason. It is therefore justified to claim that the relationship between publisher and audience is exploitive, not educational.

In conclusion, easier access to news does not outweigh the bad habits instilled by online news. Governments will likely never regulate this industry properly so it falls to individuals to make more informed choices when consuming media.

Answers

increasingly large segments of the population more and more people

rather than instead of

physical editions real copies

conveniences easier to use

self-evident obvious

trend pattern

on the whole in general

proponents supporters

modern habits the way people act now

argue claim

convenient easy and simple to use

abound are common

consumers customers

locate articles find news

enabling allowing for

access get to

matters the most to them care about the most

efficiently without wasting energy

while at the same time

commuting travelling to work/school

during various periods of inactivity throughout the day when not doing something

possible could happen

audio version can be listened to

tremendous advance huge step forward

visually impaired hard to see

modern features new abilities

hint look forward to

innovations to come changes in the future

validate justify

decline decrease

publishing industry magazines, newspapers, books

nonetheless regardless

considerably lower much less

exceptions outliers

specialise focus on

subject-area field of work

employ intelligent contributors hire smart writers

vast majority most of

online news industry websites posting news

cynically pursues just trying to get

advertising revenue money from ads

at any cost unethically

written hastily written quickly

misleading not accurate

rife with unchecked facts full of mistakes

unprofessional prose badly written

retractions mistakes corrected later

reporting errors mistakes

unnoticed not seen

situation context

confirm their biases agree with their views

gain a momentary burst of endorphins feel happy for a minute

out of outrage in anger

so-called allegedly

hate-reading‘ reading just because you hate an article

very same reason exact same cause

therefore justified that’s why it should be so

claim argue

relationship interaction

publisher magazines, sites, etc.

exploitive taking advantage of

educational making your smarter

outweigh stronger than

instilled encouraged

regulate make laws about

properly well

falls to lies with

make more informed choices make better choices

consuming media reading/listening to news

Pronunciation

ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli lɑːʤ ˈsɛgmənts ɒv ðə ˌpɒpjʊˈleɪʃən 
ˈrɑːðə ðæn 
ˈfɪzɪkəl ɪˈdɪʃənz 
kənˈviːniənsɪz 
sɛlf-ˈɛvɪdənt
trɛnd 
ɒn ðə həʊl
prəˈpəʊnənts 
ˈmɒdən ˈhæbɪts 
ˈɑːgjuː 
kənˈviːniənt
əˈbaʊnd
kənˈsjuːməz 
ləʊˈkeɪt ˈɑːtɪklz 
ɪˈneɪblɪŋ 
ˈæksɛs 
ˈmætəz ðə məʊst tuː ðɛm 
ɪˈfɪʃəntli
waɪl 
kəˈmjuːtɪŋ 
ˈdjʊərɪŋ ˈveərɪəs ˈpɪərɪədz ɒv ˌɪnækˈtɪvɪti θru(ː)ˈaʊt ðə deɪ
ˈpɒsəbl 
ˈɔːdɪˌəʊ ˈvɜːʃən 
trɪˈmɛndəs ədˈvɑːns 
ˈvɪzjʊəli ɪmˈpeəd
ˈmɒdən ˈfiːʧəz 
hɪnt 
ˌɪnəʊˈveɪʃənz tuː kʌm 
ˈvælɪdeɪt 
dɪˈklaɪn 
ˈpʌblɪʃɪŋ ˈɪndəstri
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
kənˈsɪdərəbli ˈləʊə 
ɪkˈsɛpʃənz
ˈspɛʃ(ə)laɪz 
ˈsʌbʤɪkt-ˈeərɪə 
ɪmˈplɔɪ ɪnˈtɛlɪʤənt kənˈtrɪbjʊtəz
vɑːst məˈʤɒrɪti 
ˈɒnˌlaɪn njuːz ˈɪndəstri 
ˈsɪnɪkəli pəˈsjuːz 
ˈædvətaɪzɪŋ ˈrɛvɪnjuː 
æt ˈɛni kɒst
ˈrɪtn ˈheɪstɪli
mɪsˈliːdɪŋ
raɪf wɪð ʌnˈʧɛkt fækts 
ˌʌnprəˈfɛʃənl prəʊz
rɪˈtrækʃənz 
rɪˈpɔːtɪŋ ˈɛrəz 
ʌnˈnəʊtɪst
ˌsɪtjʊˈeɪʃən 
kənˈfɜːm ðeə ˈbaɪəsɪz 
geɪn ə ˈməʊməntəri bɜːst ɒv endəʊfins 
aʊt ɒv ˈaʊtreɪʤ
ˈsəʊˈkɔːld 
heɪt-ˈriːdɪŋ
ˈvɛri seɪm ˈriːzn
ˈðeəfɔː ˈʤʌstɪfaɪd 
kleɪm 
rɪˈleɪʃənʃɪp 
ˈpʌblɪʃə 
ˈɛksplɔɪtɪv
ˌɛdju(ː)ˈkeɪʃənl
aʊtˈweɪ 
ɪnˈstɪld 
ˈrɛgjʊleɪt 
ˈprɒpəli 
fɔːlz tuː 
meɪk mɔːr ɪnˈfɔːmd ˈʧɔɪsɪz 
kənˈsjuːmɪŋ ˈmiːdiə

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

I________________________________________n now receive their news online, r_______________n from the p__________________s of newspapers. In my opinion, though the c________________s of technology are s____________t, this t______d is a negative o______________e.

P________________s of m_____________s of reading news a_____e it is more c_______________t. Examples of this a__________d. C__________s can search Google or Apple News and l______________s from thousands of online papers and websites, e__________g them to a_______s the news that m_______________________m more e______________y. Furthermore, they can do this w_______e they are c_____________g to work or d___________________________________________________y. It is even p__________e on most websites to listen to an a______________n of the news, a t____________________e for the v__________________d. All these m__________________s of online news only h____t at the i_______________________e and v____________e the d_________e of the p______________________y.

N____________s, the quality of online news is c____________________r on most websites. There are e_____________s, such as websites that s____________e in a given s________________a and e_________________________s, however, the v___________________y of the o_____________________y c_________________________s a______________________e a______________t. Most stories are w_______________y, the headlines are m_____________g, and the news articles themselves may be r____________________s and u_______________________e. R____________s to r__________________s go u_______________d. The s_____________n developing from this is that most individuals now read the news either to c________________s and g__________________________________s or o________________e, s__________________________g‘, for the v_________________n. It is t____________________d to c_____m that the r_______________p between p_________________r and audience is e______________e, not e_________________l.

In conclusion, easier access to news does not o_______________h the bad habits i___________d by online news. Governments will likely never r____________e this industry p____________y so it f________o individuals to m________________s when c___________________a.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.nytimes.com/2021/01/13/business/media/ny-post-aggregation-fake-news.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Newspapers/Magazines

  1. Do you prefer to read newspapers or magazines?
  2. Do you like reading the news online?
  3. Is it more convenient nowadays to read the news online?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?