This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of wild animals and zoos from the real IELTS exam.
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IELTS Essay General Training: Wild Animals and Zoos
Some people believe that wild animals should not be kept in zoos or other man-made environments as there is no longer a need for them in the 21st century.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many believe that zoos are antiquated and inhumane. In my opinion, though zoos raise legitimate ethical concerns, their value for conservation is greater than ever before.
Critics of zoos argue that the animal life simulated there is unnatural. In the majority of zoos, animals are kept in small enclosures or cages. Any visitor to a zoo is first struck by the lack of energy and vitality present in animals not living in their natural habitats and fending for themselves. This unnatural divorce from their intended purpose in life is inherently unethical. Added to this is the fact that there are now alternatives to zoos. In countries such as Kenya and Tanzania, where the Serengeti is located, there are sprawling national preserves that accomplish the dual aims of aiding animal conservation and allowing interested spectators to see wildlife up close.
Nonetheless, zoos are principal locations for wildlife research and preservation initiatives. Nearly every zoo will not only allow local researchers to learn more about animals, but also contain programs for increasing population numbers. The hastening of climate change has brought disastrous results to animal habitats around the world and thousands of animals are now endangered. It is nearly impossible to quickly restore their homes so the only option remaining is to breed animals in captivity to increase their numbers and then release them into the wild later. This situation is unfortunate but necessary and will only become more essential in years to come as greater numbers of species are threatened and zoos become a key location for raising both public awareness and population levels.
In conclusion, despite the moral hazards zoos entail, their effect on wildlife conservation is crucial. Countries should therefore continue to maintain their current zoos.
Analysis
1. Many believe that zoos are antiquated and inhumane. 2. In my opinion, though zoos raise legitimate ethical concerns, their value for conservation is greater than ever before.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Critics of zoos argue that the animal life simulated there is unnatural. 2. In the majority of zoos, animals are kept in small enclosures or cages. 3. Any visitor to a zoo is first struck by the lack of energy and vitality present in animals not living in their natural habitats and fending for themselves. 4. This unnatural divorce from their intended purpose in life is inherently unethical. 5. Added to this is the fact that there are now alternatives to zoos. 6. In countries such as Kenya and Tanzania, where the Serengeti is located, there are sprawling national preserves that accomplish the dual aims of aiding animal conservation and allowing interested spectators to see wildlife up close.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific examples.
- Keep developing it fully.
- Stay focused on the same main idea.
- You can have some long sentences like this to really argue your point.
1. Nonetheless, zoos are principal locations for wildlife research and preservation initiatives. 2. Nearly every zoo will not only allow local researchers to learn more about animals, but also contain programs for increasing population numbers. 3. The hastening of climate change has brought disastrous results to animal habitats around the world and thousands of animals are now endangered. 4. It is nearly impossible to quickly restore their homes so the only option remaining is to breed animals in captivity to increase their numbers and then release them into the wild later. 5. This situation is unfortunate but necessary and will only become more essential in years to come as greater numbers of species are threatened and zoos become a key location for raising both public awareness and population levels.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Continue developing it…
- as fully as possible!
1. In conclusion, despite the moral hazards zoos entail, their effect on wildlife conservation is crucial. 2. Countries should therefore continue to maintain their current zoos.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
Many believe that zoos are antiquated and inhumane. In my opinion, though zoos raise legitimate ethical concerns, their value for conservation is greater than ever before.
Critics of zoos argue that the animal life simulated there is unnatural. In the majority of zoos, animals are kept in small enclosures or cages. Any visitor to a zoo is first struck by the lack of energy and vitality present in animals not living in their natural habitats and fending for themselves. This unnatural divorce from their intended purpose in life is inherently unethical. Added to this is the fact that there are now alternatives to zoos. In countries such as Kenya and Tanzania, where the Serengeti is located, there are sprawling national preserves that accomplish the dual aims of aiding animal conservation and allowing interested spectators to see wildlife up close.
Nonetheless, zoos are principal locations for wildlife research and preservation initiatives. Nearly every zoo will not only allow local researchers to learn more about animals, but also contain programs for increasing population numbers. The hastening of climate change has brought disastrous results to animal habitats around the world and thousands of animals are now endangered. It is nearly impossible to quickly restore their homes so the only option remaining is to breed animals in captivity to increase their numbers and then release them into the wild later. This situation is unfortunate but necessary and will only become more essential in years to come as greater numbers of species are threatened and zoos become a key location for raising both public awareness and population levels.
In conclusion, despite the moral hazards zoos entail, their effect on wildlife conservation is crucial. Countries should therefore continue to maintain their current zoos.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
zoos places where animals are kept for people to look at
antiquated old and outdated
inhumane not ethical, moral
raise legitimate ethical concerns mention real moral issues
value consider important
conservation keeping safe and alive
greater than ever before more important than in the past
critics detractors
argue claim
simulated recreated
unnatural artificial
majority most of
kept remained
small enclosures cages, small spaces
cages metal bars around an animal
visitor guest
first struck notice initially
lack of energy lacking energy
vitality present in life contained in
natural habitats where animals are from
fending for themselves looking after itself
unnatural divorce artificial separation
intended purpose stated aim
inherently unethical immoral from the beginning
added to this is the fact that also
alternatives different options
Serengeti a really large preservation
sprawling national preserves large place for animals to live
accomplish achieve
dual aims two purposes
interested spectators audiences who want to go there
up close in person
nonetheless regardless
principal locations main places
wildlife research looking into animals
preservation initiatives attempts to save animals
local living nearby
contain programs have initiatives
increasing population numbers more and more animals
hastening speeding up
climate change global warming
brought disastrous results caused something really bad
endangered not many left
restore bring back to life
only option remaining no other choices
breed reproduce
in captivity in zoos
release them into the wild go back to their natural habitat
unfortunate not lucky
necessary needed
more essential really important
species types of animals
threatened at risk
key location important place
raising both public awareness and population levels increasing knowledge about animals and their numbers
despite regardless of
moral hazards ethical concerns
entail involve
crucial really important
continue to maintain keep up
current present day
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:
zuːz
ˈæntɪkweɪtɪd
ˌɪnhju(ː)ˈmeɪn
reɪz lɪˈʤɪtɪmɪt ˈɛθɪkəl kənˈsɜːnz
ˈvæljuː
ˌkɒnsə(ː)ˈveɪʃən
ˈgreɪtə ðæn ˈɛvə bɪˈfɔː
ˈkrɪtɪks
ˈɑːgjuː
ˈsɪmjʊleɪtɪd
ʌnˈnæʧrəl
məˈʤɒrɪti
kɛpt
smɔːl ɪnˈkləʊʒəz
ˈkeɪʤɪz
ˈvɪzɪtə
fɜːst strʌk
læk ɒv ˈɛnəʤi
vaɪˈtælɪti ˈprɛznt ɪn
ˈnæʧrəl ˈhæbɪtæts
ˈfɛndɪŋ fɔː ðəmˈsɛlvz
ʌnˈnæʧrəl dɪˈvɔːs
ɪnˈtɛndɪd ˈpɜːpəs
ɪnˈhɪərəntli ˌʌnˈɛθɪkəl
ˈædɪd tuː ðɪs ɪz ðə fækt ðæt
ɔːlˈtɜːnətɪvz
sɛrɪngɛti:
ˈsprɔːlɪŋ ˈnæʃənl prɪˈzɜːvz
əˈkɒmplɪʃ
ˈdju(ː)əl eɪmz
ˈɪntrɪstɪd spɛkˈteɪtəz
ʌp kləʊs
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ˈprɪnsəpəl ləʊˈkeɪʃənz
ˈwaɪldlaɪf rɪˈsɜːʧ
ˌprɛzə(ː)ˈveɪʃən ɪˈnɪʃɪətɪvz
ˈləʊkəl
kənˈteɪn ˈprəʊgræmz
ɪnˈkriːsɪŋ ˌpɒpjʊˈleɪʃən ˈnʌmbəz
ˈheɪsnɪŋ
ˈklaɪmɪt ʧeɪnʤ
brɔːt dɪˈzɑːstrəs rɪˈzʌlts
ɪnˈdeɪnʤəd
rɪsˈtɔː
ˈəʊnli ˈɒpʃən rɪˈmeɪnɪŋ
briːd
ɪn kæpˈtɪvɪti
rɪˈliːs ðɛm ˈɪntuː ðə waɪld
ʌnˈfɔːʧnɪt
ˈnɛsɪsəri
mɔːr ɪˈsɛnʃəl
ˈspiːʃiːz
ˈθrɛtnd
kiː ləʊˈkeɪʃən
ˈreɪzɪŋ bəʊθ ˈpʌblɪk əˈweənəs ænd ˌpɒpjʊˈleɪʃən ˈlɛvlz
dɪsˈpaɪt
ˈmɒrəl ˈhæzədz
ɪnˈteɪl
ˈkruːʃəl
kənˈtɪnju(ː) tuː meɪnˈteɪn
ˈkʌrənt
Vocabulary Practice
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
Many believe that z____s are a_____________d and i_____________e. In my opinion, though zoos r_____________________________s, their v_______e for c__________________n is g______________________________e.
C______s of zoos a_____e that the animal life s___________d there is u____________l. In the m_________y of zoos, animals are k____t in s________________s or c_______s. Any v_________r to a zoo is f____________k by the l_______________y and v_________________n animals not living in their n_________________s and f________________________s. This u____________________e from their i_________________e in life is i_______________________l. A_____________________________________t there are now a____________s to zoos. In countries such as Kenya and Tanzania, where the S___________i is located, there are s_________________________s that a_____________h the d_________s of aiding animal conservation and allowing i___________________s to see wildlife u_______e.
N______________s, zoos are p________________s for w_________________h and p__________________________s. Nearly every zoo will not only allow l______l researchers to learn more about animals, but also c__________________s for i_________________________________s. The h___________g of c_____________e has b_____________________________s to animal habitats around the world and thousands of animals are now e_____________d. It is nearly impossible to quickly r_________e their homes so the o_____________________g is to b______d animals i______________y to increase their numbers and then r________________________d later. This situation is u_______________e but n_____________y and will only become m_________________l in years to come as greater numbers of s__________s are t______________d and zoos become a k_____________n for r_________________________________________________s.
In conclusion, d_________e the m____________s zoos e________l, their effect on wildlife conservation is c__________l. Countries should therefore c_____________________n their c_________t zoos.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:
Reading Practice
Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:
Speaking Practice
Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:
Wildlife
- Have you ever seen a wild animal?
- What is your favourite wild animal?
- How do you feel when you see animals at the zoo?
- What is the importance of animals to children?
Writing Practice
Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:
Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
I am a bit confused by the word moral hazards.
Would you please explain them more clearly or at least give another example? 😀
Sure Mike – it basically just means there are risks related to morality.
For example, if you were to drive after drinking, that would be a really extreme moral hazard.
Sometimes if you work for a company that does a lot of bad things then that could be called a moral hazard.
It is the risk of doing something immoral or being involved in immorality.
Is that clearer?