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IELTS Essay: Meat
Some people think eating meat is bad for health.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals eat less meat compared to previous generations as there is clear evidence it may not be nutritious. In my opinion, although meat is often eaten in unhealthy contexts, it is generally healthy if prepared correctly.
Those who argue that meat is inherently unhealthy point out modern insights into nutrition. Many meats, most infamously red meats such as pork and beef, contain fats that can build up and contribute to the leading cause of death globally: cardiovascular disease. Added to this is the fact that meaty dishes are often saturated with heavy carbohydrates, salt, sugar, and other unhealthy fats like butter. One standout example of this would be the cheeseburger, one of the most eaten meal items globally. Not only is the red meat bad for heart health but the buns, cheese, and potentially other toppings only hinder short and long-term nutritional goals.
However, meat on its own is crucial due to high protein levels. Many vegetarians and vegans would argue that protein can be sourced from a variety of nutritious and vitamin-dense nuts and vegetables. Though there is some truth in this, the levels of protein in other foods are low and there are certain essential compounds that can only be found in meat. The best evidence for this comes not only from nutritional studies but also human prehistory. For thousands of years, people have been subsisting on diets high in meat that have greatly contributed to the flourishing of the human race generally and civilization more specifically. Consumed without unhealthy ingredients, there is simply no greater source of energy for the average person.
In conclusion, though many meat dishes are high in fat, salt, sugar, and carbohydrates, meat itself is an excellent and healthy source of protein that has historically been a part of the human diet. Individuals in this case as in all others should therefore pursue a more moderate approach.
Analysis
1. Many individuals eat less meat compared to previous generations as there is clear evidence it may not be nutritious. 2. In my opinion, although meat is often eaten in unhealthy contexts, it is generally healthy if prepared correctly.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Those who argue that meat is inherently unhealthy point out modern insights into nutrition. 2. Many meats, most infamously red meats such as pork and beef, contain fats that can build up and contribute to the leading cause of death globally: cardiovascular disease. 3. Added to this is the fact that meaty dishes are often saturated with heavy carbohydrates, salt, sugar, and other unhealthy fats like butter. 4. One standout example of this would be the cheeseburger, one of the most eaten meal items globally. 5. Not only is the red meat bad for heart health but the buns, cheese, and potentially other toppings only hinder short and long-term nutritional goals.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
- Keep developing it fully.
- Make sure your examples are specific.
- And you fully detail the results.
1. However, meat on its own is crucial due to high protein levels. 2. Many vegetarians and vegans would argue that protein can be sourced from a variety of nutritious and vitamin-dense nuts and vegetables. 3. Though there is some truth in this, the levels of protein in other foods are low and there are certain essential compounds that can only be found in meat. 4. The best evidence for this comes not only from nutritional studies but also human prehistory. 5. For thousands of years, people have been subsisting on diets high in meat that have greatly contributed to the flourishing of the human race generally and civilization more specifically. 6. Consumed without unhealthy ingredients, there is simply no greater source of energy for the average person.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
- Finish the paragraph strong.
1. In conclusion, though many meat dishes are high in fat, salt, sugar, and carbohydrates, meat itself is an excellent and healthy source of protein that has historically been a part of the human diet. 2. Individuals in this case as in all others should therefore pursue a more moderate approach.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
Many individuals eat less meat compared to previous generations as there is clear evidence it may not be nutritious. In my opinion, although meat is often eaten in unhealthy contexts, it is generally healthy if prepared correctly.
Those who argue that meat is inherently unhealthy point out modern insights into nutrition. Many meats, most infamously red meats such as pork and beef, contain fats that can build up and contribute to the leading cause of death globally: cardiovascular disease. Added to this is the fact that meaty dishes are often saturated with heavy carbohydrates, salt, sugar, and other unhealthy fats like butter. One standout example of this would be the cheeseburger, one of the most eaten meal items globally. Not only is the red meat bad for heart health but the buns, cheese, and potentially other toppings only hinder short and long-term nutritional goals.
However, meat on its own is crucial due to high protein levels. Many vegetarians and vegans would argue that protein can be sourced from a variety of nutritious and vitamin-dense nuts and vegetables. Though there is some truth in this, the levels of protein in other foods are low and there are certain essential compounds that can only be found in meat. The best evidence for this comes not only from nutritional studies but also human prehistory. For thousands of years, people have been subsisting on diets high in meat that have greatly contributed to the flourishing of the human race generally and civilization more specifically. Consumed without unhealthy ingredients, there is simply no greater source of energy for the average person.
In conclusion, though many meat dishes are high in fat, salt, sugar, and carbohydrates, meat itself is an excellent and healthy source of protein that has historically been a part of the human diet. Individuals in this case as in all others should therefore pursue a more moderate approach.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
eat less meat compared to previous generations as don’t eat as many animal products compared to the past
clear evidence real proof
unhealthy contexts not in good foods/meals
generally healthy if prepared correctly overall better for you when made well
Those who argue that the people against
inherently in itself, naturally
point out modern insights into nutrition argue new ideas about eating healthy
infamously red meats notoriously beef, pork, lamb, etc.
contain have inside
build up increase
contribute to add to
leading cause of death globally main reason people die around the world
cardiovascular disease heart disease
meaty full of meat
saturated with heavy carbohydrates, salt, sugar, and other unhealthy fats full of unhealthy breads, salty foods, sweet foods and other oily foods
One standout example of this would be an illustrative instance of this is
most eaten meal items globally food that most people consume around the world
heart health cardiovascular health
buns bread for burgers
potentially possibly
toppings what you put on a burger
hinder short and long-term nutritional goals impair now and the future your health
on its own by itself
crucial due to high protein levels essential because of an essential amino acid
vegetarians people who don’t eat meat
vegans people who don’t eat any animal products
protein chicken, beef, etc.
sourced from gotten from
nutritious and vitamin-dense healthy and full of nutrients
Though there is some truth in this however this is somewhat the case
levels how much of it
low not high
certain essential compounds nutritious vitamins
found in located in
The best evidence for this comes not only from nutritional studies but also human prehistory this is best supported by science and the history of humanity
subsisting on diets high in consuming foods with lots of
greatly contributed to the flourishing of the human race generally a main reason why civilization exists
civilization more specifically society especially
Consumed without eaten but not with
ingredients what’s inside a food
no greater source of energy for the average person no better way to get energy for most people
meat dishes meals with meat
high in fat, salt, sugar, and carbohydrates lots of fat, salt, sugar, and carbs
excellent and healthy source of protein main way to get a nutrient for your muscles and energy
historically looking at the past
a part of the human diet something people eat on a daily basis
in this case as in all others always true
therefore pursue a more moderate approach thus look for a better way
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:
iːt lɛs miːt kəmˈpeəd tuː ˈpriːviəs ˌʤɛnəˈreɪʃᵊnz æz
klɪər ˈɛvɪdᵊns
ʌnˈhɛlθi ˈkɒntɛksts
ˈʤɛnərəli ˈhɛlθi ɪf prɪˈpeəd kəˈrɛktli
ðəʊz huː ˈɑːɡjuː ðæt
ɪnˈhɛrᵊntli
pɔɪnt aʊt ˈmɒdᵊn ˈɪnsaɪts ˈɪntuː njuːˈtrɪʃᵊn
ˈɪnfəməsli rɛd miːts
kənˈteɪn
bɪld ʌp
kənˈtrɪbjuːt tuː
ˈliːdɪŋ kɔːz ɒv dɛθ ˈɡləʊbᵊli
ˌkɑːdiəʊˈvæskjələ dɪˈziːz
ˈmiːti
ˈsæʧəreɪtɪd wɪð ˈhɛvi ˈkɑːbəʊˈhaɪdreɪts, sɒlt, ˈʃʊɡə, ænd ˈʌðər ʌnˈhɛlθi fæts
wʌn ˈstændaʊt ɪɡˈzɑːmpᵊl ɒv ðɪs wʊd biː
məʊst ˈiːtᵊn miːl ˈaɪtəmz ˈɡləʊbᵊli
hɑːt hɛlθ
bʌnz
pəˈtɛnʃᵊli
ˈtɒpɪŋz
ˈhaɪndə ʃɔːt ænd ˈlɒŋtɜːm njuːˈtrɪʃᵊnᵊl ɡəʊlz
ɒn ɪts əʊn
ˈkruːʃᵊl djuː tuː haɪ ˈprəʊtiːn ˈlɛvᵊlz
ˌvɛʤɪˈteəriənz
ˈviːɡənz
ˈprəʊtiːn
sɔːst frɒm
njuːˈtrɪʃəs ænd ˈvɪtəmɪn-dɛns
ðəʊ ðeər ɪz sʌm truːθ ɪn ðɪs
ˈlɛvᵊlz
ləʊ
ˈsɜːtᵊn ɪˈsɛnʃᵊl ˈkɒmpaʊndz
faʊnd ɪn
ðə bɛst ˈɛvɪdᵊns fɔː ðɪs kʌmz nɒt ˈəʊnli frɒm njuːˈtrɪʃᵊnᵊl ˈstʌdiz bʌt ˈɔːlsəʊ ˈhjuːmən priː ˈhɪstəri
səbˈsɪstɪŋ ɒn ˈdaɪəts haɪ ɪn
ˈɡreɪtli kənˈtrɪbjuːtɪd tuː ðə ˈflʌrɪʃɪŋ ɒv ðə ˈhjuːmən reɪs ˈʤɛnərəli
ˌsɪvᵊlaɪˈzeɪʃᵊn mɔː spəˈsɪfɪkᵊli
kənˈsjuːmd wɪˈðaʊt
ɪnˈɡriːdiənts
nəʊ ˈɡreɪtə sɔːs ɒv ˈɛnəʤi fɔː ði ˈævərɪʤ ˈpɜːsᵊn
miːt ˈdɪʃɪz
haɪ ɪn fæt, sɒlt, ˈʃʊɡə, ænd ˈkɑːbəʊˈhaɪdreɪts
ˈɛksᵊlᵊnt ænd ˈhɛlθi sɔːs ɒv ˈprəʊtiːn
hɪˈstɒrɪkᵊli
ə pɑːt ɒv ðə ˈhjuːmən ˈdaɪət
ɪn ðɪs keɪs æz ɪn ɔːl ˈʌðəz
ˈðeəfɔː pəˈsjuː ə mɔː ˈmɒdərɪt əˈprəʊʧ
Vocabulary Practice
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
Many individuals e________________________________________________________s there is c______________e it may not be nutritious. In my opinion, although meat is often eaten in u_________________s, it is g_______________________________________y.
T______________________t meat is i_____________y unhealthy p_________________________________________n. Many meats, most i____________________________s such as pork and beef, c_________n fats that can b_______p and c__________o the l_________________________________________________e. Added to this is the fact that m______y dishes are often s_______________________________________________________________________s like butter. O______________________________________________e the cheeseburger, one of the m_______________________________y. Not only is the red meat bad for h_____________h but the b___s, cheese, and p______________y other t_____________s only h_____________________________________________s.
However, meat o________n is c____________________________________s. Many v______________s and v_________s would argue that p____________n can be s____________m a variety of n______________________e nuts and vegetables. T____________________________________s, the l________s of protein in other foods are l___w and there are c_______________________________s that can only be f_______n meat. T_______________________________________________________________________________________y. For thousands of years, people have been s______________________n meat that have g____________________________________________________________y and c________________________y. C______________________t unhealthy i____________s, there is simply n_______________________________________________________n.
In conclusion, though many m____________s are h___________________________________s, meat itself is an e______________________________________________n that has h______________y been a___________________t. Individuals i________________________s should t________________________________________h.
Listening Practice
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Reading Practice
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Speaking Practice
Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:
Favorite Foods
- What are your favorite foods?
- What were your favorite foods as a child?
- What foods are becoming more popular in your country now?
- What foods do you not like?
Writing Practice
Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:
Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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