This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of the value of the arts from the real IELTS exam.
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IELTS Essay: Value of the Arts
In today’s world of advanced science and technology, many still greatly value artists such as musicians, painters and writers.
What can the arts tell us about life that science cannot?
Many people today continue to value the arts despite a growing emphasis on science and technology. In my opinion, this is because only the arts allow for self-expression and create fundamentally crucial and uplifting truths about humanity.
The first reason the arts continue to be relevant relates to their capacity for self-expression. This is important not only for individuals but also for society at large. For individuals, the ability to express themselves is a crucial element of being fully human and having strong mental health. This explains the popularity of classes for painting, music, and dance as a means of relaxing and expressing one’s thoughts and feelings. In the aggregate, millions of people expressing their viewpoints leads to a plurality of perspectives that can enrich society. For instance, all the most revered periods of human history, such as the Renaissance, were defined by a flourishing of the arts.
Secondly, art has the capacity to create value in a way that science cannot. Although science is capable of making tangible improvements in the lives of individuals, it is unable to impart meaning. In contrast, the arts are interpretations of the world that can uplift and enliven. For example, great filmmakers over the course of the 20th century have explored complex subject matter in classic films such as The Godfather, not only entertaining viewers but also presenting a vision and insightful understanding of American history. If the arts are extended to include the writings and teachings of religious leaders, it is easy to see their impact on values and morality.
In conclusion, the arts still occupy a prominent position in society as they allow for individual self-expression and the creation of ideals. Therefore, it is important that governments continue to fund and support these seemingly less worthwhile pursuits.
Analysis
1. Many people today continue to value the arts despite a growing emphasis on science and technology. 2. In my opinion, this is because only the arts allow for self-expression and create fundamentally crucial and uplifting truths about humanity.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. The first reason the arts continue to be relevant relates to their capacity for self-expression. 2. This is important not only for individuals but also for society at large. 3. For individuals, the ability to express themselves is a crucial element of being fully human and having strong mental health. 4. This explains the popularity of classes for painting, music, and dance as a means of relaxing and expressing one’s thoughts and feelings. 5. In the aggregate, millions of people expressing their viewpoints leads to a plurality of perspectives that can enrich society. 6. For instance, all the most revered periods of human history, such as the Renaissance, were defined by a flourishing of the arts.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
- Keep developing it fully.
- Extend with some short sentences as well.
- State the furthest possible result.
1. Secondly, art has the capacity to create value in a way that science cannot. 2. Although science is capable of making tangible improvements in the lives of individuals, it is unable to impart meaning. 3. In contrast, the arts are interpretations of the world that can uplift and enliven. 4. For example, great filmmakers over the course of the 20th century have explored complex subject matter in classic films such as The Godfather, not only entertaining viewers but also presenting a vision and insightful understanding of American history. 5. If the arts are extended to include the writings and teachings of religious leaders, it is easy to see their impact on values and morality.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Continue developing it…
- as fully as possible!
1. In conclusion, the arts still occupy a prominent position in society as they allow for individual self-expression and the creation of ideals. 2. Therefore, it is important that governments continue to fund and support these seemingly less worthwhile pursuits.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
Many people today continue to value the arts despite a growing emphasis on science and technology. In my opinion, this is because only the arts allow for self-expression and create fundamentally crucial and uplifting truths about humanity.
The first reason the arts continue to be relevant relates to their capacity for self-expression. This is important not only for individuals but also for society at large. For individuals, the ability to express themselves is a crucial element of being fully human and having strong mental health. This explains the popularity of classes for painting, music, and dance as a means of relaxing and expressing one’s thoughts and feelings. In the aggregate, millions of people expressing their viewpoints leads to a plurality of perspectives that can enrich society. For instance, all the most revered periods of human history, such as the Renaissance, were defined by a flourishing of the arts.
Secondly, art has the capacity to create value in a way that science cannot. Although science is capable of making tangible improvements in the lives of individuals, it is unable to impart meaning. In contrast, the arts are interpretations of the world that can uplift and enliven. For example, great filmmakers over the course of the 20th century have explored complex subject matter in classic films such as The Godfather, not only entertaining viewers but also presenting a vision and insightful understanding of American history. If the arts are extended to include the writings and teachings of religious leaders, it is easy to see their impact on values and morality.
In conclusion, the arts still occupy a prominent position in society as they allow for individual self-expression and the creation of ideals. Therefore, it is important that governments continue to fund and support these seemingly less worthwhile pursuits.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
value importance
arts painting, film, poetry, music, literature, fashion, etc.
despite regardless of
growing emphasis more and more importance
allow for self-expression let you show your views and feelings
create fundamentally crucial make very important
uplifting truths interpretations that raise people up
humanity people, mankind
relevant still important
relates to have to do with
capacity ability
self-expression ability to show your thoughts and feelings
society at large everyone
ability capacity
crucial element key part
fully human 100% a person
strong mental health healthy attitude and outlook
explains is the reason for
popularity people like it
as a means of in order to
in the aggregate all combined
viewpoints opinions
leads to creates
a plurality of perspectives many different viewpoints
enrich make better
revered periods of human history best times in the past
the Renaissance period in Italy when the arts flourished
defined characterized by
flourishing doing well
although despite
tangible improvements real developments
unable can’t
impart meaning give purpose
in contrast however
interpretations views
uplift bring up
enliven bring to life
over the course of the 20th century from 1900 – 2000
explored complex subject matter dealt with interesting issues
classic films famous movies
The Godfather an American movie about gangsters
entertaining fun
presenting showing
vision opinion
insightful understanding deep view
extended allowed to include
include to also have
religious leaders Jesus, Buddha, etc.
impact effect
morality ethics
occupy take a place
prominent position important spot
ideals morals
fund give money
support aid
seemingly less worthwhile pursuits ostensibly less important areas
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:
ˈvæljuː
ɑːts
dɪsˈpaɪt
ˈgrəʊɪŋ ˈɛmfəsɪs
əˈlaʊ fɔː sɛlf-ɪksˈprɛʃən
kri(ː)ˈeɪt ˌfʌndəˈmɛntli ˈkruːʃəl
ʌpˈlɪftɪŋ truːðz
hju(ː)ˈmænɪti
ˈrɛlɪvənt
rɪˈleɪts tuː
kəˈpæsɪti
sɛlf-ɪksˈprɛʃən
səˈsaɪəti æt lɑːʤ
əˈbɪlɪti
ˈkruːʃəl ˈɛlɪmənt
ˈfʊli ˈhjuːmən
strɒŋ ˈmɛntl hɛlθ
ɪksˈpleɪnz
ˌpɒpjʊˈlærɪti
æz ə miːnz ɒv
ɪn ði ˈægrɪgɪt
ˈvjuːpɔɪnts
liːdz tuː
ə plʊəˈrælɪti ɒv pəˈspɛktɪvz
ɪnˈrɪʧ
rɪˈvɪəd ˈpɪərɪədz ɒv ˈhjuːmən ˈhɪstəri
ðə rəˈneɪsəns
dɪˈfaɪnd
ˈflʌrɪʃɪŋ
ɔːlˈðəʊ
ˈtænʤəbl ɪmˈpruːvmənts
ʌnˈeɪbl
ɪmˈpɑːt ˈmiːnɪŋ
ɪn ˈkɒntrɑːst
ɪnˌtɜːprɪˈteɪʃənz
ˈʌplɪft
ɪnˈlaɪvn
ˈəʊvə ðə kɔːs ɒv ðə ˈtwɛntɪəθ ˈsɛnʧʊri
ɪksˈplɔːd ˈkɒmplɛks ˈsʌbʤɪkt ˈmætə
ˈklæsɪk fɪlmz
ðə ˈgɒdˌfɑːðə
ˌɛntəˈteɪnɪŋ
prɪˈzɛntɪŋ
ˈvɪʒən
ˈɪnsaɪtf(ə)l ˌʌndəˈstændɪŋ
ɪksˈtɛndɪd
ɪnˈkluːd
rɪˈlɪʤəs ˈliːdəz
ˈɪmpækt
məˈrælɪti
ˈɒkjʊpaɪ
ˈprɒmɪnənt pəˈzɪʃən
aɪˈdɪəlz
fʌnd
səˈpɔːt
ˈsiːmɪŋli lɛs ˈwɜːθˈwaɪl pəˈsjuːts
Vocabulary Practice
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
Many people today continue to v_____e the a____s d_______e a g__________________s on science and technology. In my opinion, this is because only the arts a__________r s_________________n and c___________________________l and u_________________s about h__________y.
The first reason the arts continue to be r_________t r_________o their c__________y for s_____________n. This is important not only for individuals but also for s_________________e. For individuals, the a________y to express themselves is a c____________________t of being f_______________n and having s_____________________h. This e___________s the p___________y of classes for painting, music, and dance a_______________f relaxing and expressing one’s thoughts and feelings. I__________________e, millions of people expressing their v______________s l______________________________s that can e________s society. For instance, all the most r_______________________________y, such as t__________________e, were d_________d by a f____________g of the arts.
Secondly, art has the capacity to create value in a way that science cannot. A_________h science is capable of making t____________________s in the lives of individuals, it is u_________e to i_________________g. I_______________t, the arts are i_________________________s of the world that can u________t and e________n. For example, great filmmakers over the course of the 20th century have e____________________________r in c______________s such as T______________r, not only e______________g viewers but also p_____________g a v_______n and i_____________________g of American history. If the arts are e____________d to i__________e the writings and teachings of r___________________s, it is easy to see their i_________t on values and m__________y.
In conclusion, the arts still o________y a p__________________n in society as they allow for individual self-expression and the creation of i_________s. Therefore, it is important that governments continue to f_____d and s__________t these s_______________________________s.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:
And a realted IELTS speaking test here:
Reading Practice
Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:
Speaking Practice
Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam
Art
- Have you ever been to an art gallery?
- Would you like to learn more about art?
- Do you hang any art in your home?
- Do people in your country enjoy making art?
Writing Practice
Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:
Some think that quality art can be made by anyone while others think that it requires special talent and ability.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Wow, your essay is so spot on and relevant to the topic.
I found this to be a particularly difficult and unique topic.
I was unable to write this essay as I couldn’t think of any ideas at all.
This topic definitely requires a high knowledge of English.
Yes, probably one of the trickiest topics I’ve ever seen on IELTS so don’t feel bad about it, Samaira!
There is an argument about whether the creation of art requires professional technique or not. In my opinion, anyone can express their feeling via art work such as paintings or songs, but outstanding art works need art skills and talent for sure.
Nowadays, everyone has their chance to create art. More and more art studios show up in cities. In these kinds of studios, people can be taught to paint, play music, and even use clay to build a bowl. With the assistance of teachers, many people can produce some artworks in normal quality. Moreover, with the development of social media, people can present their works to their surroundings. However, it is solely a good opportunity to relax, but it is impossible to find an art master among them. Their works only express their feelings, but they ignore the art quality.
People with professional training can create excellent works that are accepted by the public and art experts. One of the best examples is the famous Chinese painter Qi Baishi, who is very skilled at drawing fish. The fish he drew not only looks like a real one, but also expresses the emotion of a fish, which relates to his own feelings. He shows his talent for painting fish when he was young. What’s more, a famous painting teacher adopted him and taught him to draw. More examples, like painter Da Venci and pianist Li Yundi, are all accepted art training. It is easy to find similarities among famous artists, which are talent and technique.
In sum, people have their chance to experiance the process of creating art works because of the development of society, but they are still to far away to create an impressive one. Therefore, the best quality of art still comes from artists who have talent and capacity.
Great, Gakki!
Some spelling mistakes like with ‘experience’ and really nice examples and ideas in both paragraphs – keep it up!
A number of people today continue to value the arts despite a growing emphasis on science and technology. I believe art can help us express and deal with our emotions better than science and technology.
Art in form of paintings, writings and music has continued to be in existence for several thousand centuries due to its essential role in an individual’s emotions such as sadness, happiness excitement and much more. In other words, it helps us express what we feel in form of various artforms such as music, sculptures, paintings and so on. For example, it would be easier for us to draw something that we are imagining then to say it out. Through this way, art can assist us to show our feelings in ways that science fails to do.
Moreover, it can also aid us to handle some emotions like depression and sadness. This means that we can be at some comfort as art can help us deal with the pain. For example, when someone is depressed, a cheerful music would help him overcome his sadness to some extent. In this way, art helps us human to deal with emotions and give us a sense of joy in our lives whereas science fails to help us with that issue
To conclude, the arts still have its value maintained over the years as it allows us to deal and express our emotions. Therefore, even if science and technology are considered to be advanced, people have not totally neglected and is still valued.
Heyy there, Dave. I’ve written this essay, a few lines was sorta inspired by yours essay. Besides that can you guess which band this essay would get. yours essay are top notch btw thanks for everything.
Nice work, Patel and thanks for your support!
Your grammar and vocabulary are high level and you should expect around a band 6 – you should try to rely less on linking phrases and long, informal topic sentences.
Keep working hard, Patel!
Thankyou so much for your response. I’ll try to work on that from now on, but I already wrote this one and it would mean a lot if you can check it and maybe point out what could I improve, I know you’d be busy so it’ll be okay if you don’t wanna read and give a feedback.
Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In recent years, business meet-ups and teachings via internet has become more and more popular than traditional ways. It is indubitable that there are many advantages to this method like better convenience and less pollution while there also are some deficits to it such as no hands-on experience and lack of exposure. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of it.
Firstly, online mode of business would certainly be better in terms of convenience. As one can have comforts of home while having an online meeting, it will be much more convenient way than actual meeting. Secondly, it will most certainly help our environment as carbon emissions, which were emitted while people are travelling to go to work, are much lesser. For example, someone who has offline business coaching would use a mode of transportation which would most likely release pollution into the environment. Therefore, online business trainings and meets are better in terms of one’s convenience and environment’s safety.
However, this would mean that students would not be able to have hands-on encounter like they could have in the real world. For example, in vocational businesses one would get better experience if they had gone in the place of work. People would also be lacking in experience on how to deal with their clients. For instance, a student who has been taught online would may not be knowing how to tackle customers in real world. So, in terms of experience and exposure, teaching business via internet is inadequate.
To conclude, although there are some downsides like experience and exposure to online form of business teaching and meetings, they are overcome by concepts like convenience and mother nature’s protection.
Nice, work Patel!
There are some informal parts but it is generally accurate and would be around a 6/6.5 in all likelihood!
Hi Dave,I’m from Vietnam, can u suggest to me some of the academic adjectives which can be used in most contexts and can easily replace A2 words? thanks in advance!
There are lots but you shouldn’t do that really – words can’t just be switched out.
Just learn lots of academic collocations from my essays instead!