This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of weddings from the real IELTS exam.
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IELTS Essay: Weddings
Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive.
What is the reason for this?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Weddings around the world have become more expensive and larger in recent decades. In my opinion, this is a natural progression and is positive in the vast majority of contexts.
One explanation for more lavish weddings is increasingly higher expectations coupled with a burgeoning global middle class. It is a natural desire for humans to strive to surpass previous standards. Any person who has attended weddings in the past will naturally attempt to exceed what they have experienced both in terms of size and expense. This propensity to exceed past achievements is combined with increased disposable income. Economies around the world, particularly in developing nations, have risen dramatically recently, enabling individuals to spend on a variety of luxuries including memorable wedding parties.
I believe this development is positive overall due to the impact it has on the average person. Admittedly, excessive spending in any area can be a negative if it greatly exceeds one’s earnings. Assuming a person is planning a wedding that will not hinder them financially in the future, then it is a massive positive for the bride, groom, and all attendees. Most people, even beyond those getting married and their family, consider weddings to meaningful and enduring memories. The small and large bursts of happiness produced by such an event in the aggregate are worth more than a wide range of other expenses that individuals often prioritize.
In conclusion, weddings are larger and costlier today because of raised expectations and this is largely positive given the impact on individuals. It is nonetheless essential that weddings are not taken to extreme excesses beyond one’s means.
Analysis
1. Weddings around the world have become more expensive and larger in recent decades. 2. In my opinion, this is a natural progression and is positive in the vast majority of contexts.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. One explanation for more lavish weddings is increasingly higher expectations coupled with a burgeoning global middle class. 2. It is a natural desire for humans to strive to surpass previous standards. 3. Any person who has attended weddings in the past will naturally attempt to exceed what they have experienced both in terms of size and expense. 4. This propensity to exceed past achievements is combined with increased disposable income. 5. Economies around the world, particularly in developing nations, have risen dramatically recently, enabling individuals to spend on a variety of luxuries including memorable wedding parties.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
- Keep developing it fully.
- Use short and long sentences.
1. I believe this development is positive overall due to the impact it has on the average person. 2. Admittedly, excessive spending in any area can be a negative if it greatly exceeds one’s earnings. 3. Assuming a person is planning a wedding that will not hinder them financially in the future, then it is a massive positive for the bride, groom, and all attendees. 4. Most people, even beyond those getting married and their family, consider weddings to meaningful and enduring memories. 5. The small and large bursts of happiness produced by such an event in the aggregate are worth more than a wide range of other expenses that individuals often prioritize.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
- Develop the example fully.
1. In conclusion, weddings are larger and costlier today because of raised expectations and this is largely positive given the impact on individuals. 2. It is nonetheless essential that weddings are not taken to extreme excesses beyond one’s means.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
Weddings around the world have become more expensive and larger in recent decades. In my opinion, this is a natural progression and is positive in the vast majority of contexts.
One explanation for more lavish weddings is increasingly higher expectations coupled with a burgeoning global middle class. It is a natural desire for humans to strive to surpass previous standards. Any person who has attended weddings in the past will naturally attempt to exceed what they have experienced both in terms of size and expense. This propensity to exceed past achievements is combined with increased disposable income. Economies around the world, particularly in developing nations, have risen dramatically recently, enabling individuals to spend on a variety of luxuries including memorable wedding parties.
I believe this development is positive overall due to the impact it has on the average person. Admittedly, excessive spending in any area can be a negative if it greatly exceeds one’s earnings. Assuming a person is planning a wedding that will not hinder them financially in the future, then it is a massive positive for the bride, groom, and all attendees. Most people, even beyond those getting married and their family, consider weddings to meaningful and enduring memories. The small and large bursts of happiness produced by such an event in the aggregate are worth more than a wide range of other expenses that individuals often prioritize.
In conclusion, weddings are larger and costlier today because of raised expectations and this is largely positive given the impact on individuals. It is nonetheless essential that weddings are not taken to extreme excesses beyond one’s means.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
weddings big parties to celebrate getting married
expensive cost a lot of money
larger bigger
in recent decades the last 20 or 30 years or so
natural progression normal development
positive good
vast majority of contexts many different situations
explanation reason
lavish very expensive and large
increasingly higher expectations wanting more
coupled with combined with
burgeoning global middle class more people with money
natural desire normal feeling
strive try hard for
surpass previous standards exceed past achievements
attended went to
naturally attempt of course try
exceed do better than
experienced went to
in terms of concerning
expense money
propensity tendency
exceed past achievements do better than in the past
combined with coupled with
increased disposable income more money to spend
economies money earned and spent in a country
particularly in especially in
developing nations less wealthy countries
risen dramatically recently gone up a lot
enabling allowing for
spend use money
variety different types
luxuries items you don’t need
memorable wedding parties big weddings
due to because of
average person normal citizen
admittedly it must be admitted
excessive spending not spending too much
in any area in any respect
greatly exceeds a lot more than
earnings wages
assuming if it’s true that
hinder hold back
financially related to money
massive positive really good
bride woman getting married
groom man getting married
attendees people going to
beyond past
consider think about
meaningful important
enduring lasting
bursts sudden jolts
produced by created by
in the aggregate combined
wide range of different types of
expenses money to be spent
prioritize consider more important
costlier costs more money
raised expectations higher hopes
largely positive mostly good
given the considering that
nonetheless regardless
essential crucial
extreme excesses beyond one’s means spending a lot more than one can afford
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:
ˈwɛdɪŋz
ɪksˈpɛnsɪv
ˈlɑːʤə
ɪn ˈriːsnt ˈdɛkeɪdz
ˈnæʧrəl prəʊˈgrɛʃən
ˈpɒzətɪv
vɑːst məˈʤɒrɪti ɒv ˈkɒntɛksts
ˌɛkspləˈneɪʃən
ˈlævɪʃ
ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˈhaɪər ˌɛkspɛkˈteɪʃənz
ˈkʌpld wɪð
ˈbɜːʤənɪŋ ˈgləʊbəl ˈmɪdl klɑːs
ˈnæʧrəl dɪˈzaɪə
straɪv
sɜːˈpɑːs ˈpriːviəs ˈstændədz
əˈtɛndɪd
ˈnæʧrəli əˈtɛmpt
ɪkˈsiːd
ɪksˈpɪərɪənst
ɪn tɜːmz ɒv
ɪksˈpɛns
prəˈpɛnsɪti
ɪkˈsiːd pɑːst əˈʧiːvmənts
kəmˈbaɪnd wɪð
ɪnˈkriːst dɪsˈpəʊzəbl ˈɪnkʌm
i(ː)ˈkɒnəmiz
pəˈtɪkjʊləli ɪn
dɪˈvɛləpɪŋ ˈneɪʃənz
ˈrɪzn drəˈmætɪk(ə)li ˈriːsntli
ɪˈneɪblɪŋ
spɛnd
vəˈraɪəti
ˈlʌkʃəriz
ˈmɛmərəbl ˈwɛdɪŋ ˈpɑːtiz
djuː tuː
ˈævərɪʤ ˈpɜːsn
ədˈmɪtɪdli
ɪkˈsɛsɪv ˈspɛndɪŋ
ɪn ˈɛni ˈeərɪə
ˈgreɪtli ɪkˈsiːdz
ˈɜːnɪŋz
əˈsjuːmɪŋ
ˈhaɪndə
faɪˈnænʃəli
ˈmæsɪv ˈpɒzətɪv
braɪd
grʊm
ətendi:z
bɪˈjɒnd
kənˈsɪdə
ˈmiːnɪŋfʊl
ɪnˈdjʊərɪŋ
bɜːsts
prəˈdjuːst baɪ
ɪn ði ˈægrɪgɪt
waɪd reɪnʤ ɒv
ɪksˈpɛnsɪz
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz
ˈkɒstlɪə
reɪzd ˌɛkspɛkˈteɪʃənz
ˈlɑːʤli ˈpɒzətɪv
ˈgɪvn ðiː
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ɪˈsɛnʃəl
ɪksˈtriːm ɪkˈsɛsɪz bɪˈjɒnd wʌnz miːnz
Vocabulary Practice
W_________s around the world have become more e___________e and l_____________________s. In my opinion, this is a n________________________n and is p___________e in the v_____________________s.
One e______________n for more l______h weddings is i________________________________s c_____________h a b______________________________s. It is a n_______________e for humans to s________e to s_______________________s. Any person who has a____________d weddings in the past will n_________________t to e_______d what they have e_____________d both i____________________f size and e__________e. This p_________y to e______________________s is c________________h i________________________e. E____________s around the world, p_____________________n d_______________s, have r______________________________y, e__________g individuals to s_______d on a v_______y of l____________s including m____________________________s.
I believe this development is positive overall d________o the impact it has on the a____________________n. A____________y, e______________________g i___________a can be a negative if it g_______________________s one’s e__________s. A__________g a person is planning a wedding that will not h________r them f_____________y in the future, then it is a m________________e for the b_______e, g_________m, and all a___________s. Most people, even b________d those getting married and their family, c_________r weddings to m___________l and e__________g memories. The small and large b____s of happiness p_____________y such an event i__________________e are worth more than a w_______________f other e____________s that individuals often p___________e.
In conclusion, weddings are larger and c__________r today because of r_______________s and this is l_______________e g_____________e impact on individuals. It is n______________s e_________l that weddings are not taken to e_______________________________________s.
Listening Practice
Reading Practice
https://www.tatlerasia.com/the-scene/weddings/hk-millionaire-dollar-wedding-most-expensive-weddings
Speaking Practice
Family
- Are you close with your family?
- Who do you talk to in your family the most?
- Do you have a large family?
- Are families becoming more distant in your country?
Writing Practice
Some people spend a lot of money celebrating personal family events, such as weddings and birthdays.
How important is it to celebrate such events?
Do you think people spend too much money on these events?
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