IELTS Essay Task 1: Consumption of Vegetables and Fish

IELTS Essay Task 1: Consumption of Vegetables and Fish

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of consumption of vegetables and fish (a bar chart) from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay Task 1: Consumption of Vegetables and Fish

The bar chart illustrates the number of people in the UK eating more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish per day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS bar chart consumption fish vegetables
IELTS Bar Chart: Consumption of Fish & Vegetables

The bar chart illustrates statistics concerning individuals in the UK consuming 5 or more portions of vegetables and fish per day from 2011 to 2017. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that percentages for women, children and men all rose over the period and women had the highest numbers throughout. The increase for children, comparatively, was modest.

Women began the period with 20% consuming more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish a day and this figure was stable until 2013 when it began to rise precipitously to eventually reach a high of 36% in 2016, before a fall to 30% to end the period. The numbers for males finished slightly lower at 26%, however their growth was steadier, rising in each year besides 2016 from a starting point of 16% in 2011.

The figures for children were much lower to begin (10%), preceding a relative surge to 14% the next year. Percentages then fluctuated around 14% and finished at a peak of 15% by the end of the period.

Analysis

1. The bar chart illustrates statistics concerning individuals in the UK consuming 5 or more portions of vegetables and fish per day from 2011 to 2017. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that percentages for women, children and men all rose over the period and women had the highest numbers throughout. 3. The increase for children, comparatively, was modest.

  1. Paraphrase what the bar chart shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.
  3. You might need a second sentence for your overview.

1. Women began the period with 20% consuming more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish a day and this figure was stable until 2013 when it began to rise precipitously to eventually reach a high of 36% in 2016, before a fall to 30% to end the period. 2. The numbers for males finished slightly lower at 26%, however their growth was steadier, rising in each year besides 2016 from a starting point of 16% in 2011.

  1. Begin writing about the data for the first category.
  2. Describe the next area and compare it to the area before.

1. The figures for children were much lower to begin (10%), preceding a relative surge to 14% the next year. 2. Percentages then fluctuated around 14% and finished at a peak of 15% by the end of the period.

  1. Write about the final other parts of the bar chart – include everything!
  2. There is a lot of data in this one but try to get to all of it.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Take some notes on a piece of paper to aid your memory:

The bar chart illustrates statistics concerning individuals in the UK consuming 5 or more portions of vegetables and fish per day from 2011 to 2017. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that percentages for women, children and men all rose over the period and women had the highest numbers throughout. The increase for children, comparatively, was modest.

Women began the period with 20% consuming more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish a day and this figure was stable until 2013 when it began to rise precipitously to eventually reach a high of 36% in 2016, before a fall to 30% to end the period. The numbers for males finished slightly lower at 26%, however their growth was steadier, rising in each year besides 2016 from a starting point of 16% in 2011.

The figures for children were much lower to begin (10%), preceding a relative surge to 14% the next year. Percentages then fluctuated around 14% and finished at a peak of 15% by the end of the period.

Answers

Try to write down or think of an antonym/opposite word for further practice:

illustrates shows

statistics data

concerning as it relates to

the UK England

consuming eating

portions amount of food

per day each day

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

rose increased

period time in question

highest numbers biggest figures

throughout the whole time

comparatively compared/relative to

modest small

began the period started

a day each day

stable no chance

when as

rise precipitously grow a lot

eventually in the end

reach a high of get to a top point of

before a fall preceding a decrease

to end the period to finish the time

slightly lower a little less

growth rise

steadier with less fluctuation

besides also

from a starting point of beginning at

much lower a lot less

relative surge compared to other rises, a large rise

the next year the following year

fluctuated was erratic

at a peak of to a high point of

Pronunciation

Practice saying the words below using this tip with Google voice dictation:

ˈɪləstreɪts 
stəˈtɪstɪks 
kənˈsɜːnɪŋ 
ðə juː-keɪ 
kənˈsjuːmɪŋ 
ˈpɔːʃənz 
pɜː deɪ 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
rəʊz 
ˈpɪərɪəd 
ˈhaɪɪst ˈnʌmbəz 
θru(ː)ˈaʊt
kəmˈpærətɪvli
ˈmɒdɪst
bɪˈgæn ðə ˈpɪərɪəd 
ə deɪ 
ˈsteɪbl 
wɛn 
raɪz prɪˈsɪpɪtəsli 
ɪˈvɛnʧəli 
riːʧ ə haɪ ɒv 
bɪˈfɔːr ə fɔːl 
tuː ɛnd ðə ˈpɪərɪəd
ˈslaɪtli ˈləʊə 
grəʊθ 
ˈstɛdɪə
bɪˈsaɪdz 
frɒm ə ˈstɑːtɪŋ pɔɪnt ɒv 
mʌʧ ˈləʊə 
ˈrɛlətɪv sɜːʤ 
ðə nɛkst jɪə
ˈflʌktjʊeɪtɪd 
æt ə piːk ɒv 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks. Note it on a piece of paper so you can remember better:

The bar chart i________________s s______________s c______________g individuals in t______K c______________g 5 or more p__________s of vegetables and fish p_________y from 2011 to 2017. L____________________________________________________t percentages for women, children and men all r_____e over the p_______d and women had the h______________s t______________t. The increase for children, c_______________y, was m_________t.

Women b___________________d with 20% consuming more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish a________y and this figure was s__________e until 2013 w______n it began to r_________________y to e__________________________f 36% in 2016, b_____________l to 30% t__________________d. The numbers for males finished s_________________r at 26%, however their g_________h was s___________r, rising in each year b__________s 2016 f________________________f 16% in 2011.

The figures for children were m__________r to begin (10%), preceding a r________________e to 14% t_______________r. Percentages then f___________d around 14% and finished a_________________f 15% by the end of the period.

Listening Practice

Listen to the related topic below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.healthline.com/nutrition/meal-plans

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Sweets

  1. Do you like sweets?
  2. Did you like sweets when you were younger?
  3. What kind of sweet foods are popular in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related table below and then check with my sample answer:

IELTS Essay: Time Spent with Parents Bar Chart
IELTS Essay General Training: Strict Teachers

IELTS Essay General Training: Strict Teachers

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of more crimes being committed by youngsters from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay General Training: Strict Teachers

Some people believe that teacher should be strict in order to best motivate students while others say that friendly teachers are more important.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many feel that strict teaching better encourages academic excellence. In my opinion, though there is value is discipline, it is more important to motivate hard work through healthier means.

On the one hand, a harsh teacher can ensure a basic minimum of good behavior. Most individuals will remember a strict teacher from their childhood who carefully monitored and inspired fear. The punishment for not paying attention, cheating, or performing badly would be a critical comment at best and, at worst, corporal punishment. This fear of being physically or mentally injured is the primary catalyst that then compels hard work and discourages misbehavior. Though modern viewpoints categorize this as abuse, there is little doubt that it was effective in the past at curbing the actions that negatively affect academic performance.

However, to inspire a healthy attitude towards achievement, teachers must foster a more positive learning environment. The above-mentioned methods, including both positive and negative reinforcement, focus on the external opinion of teacher’s and, by extension, society at large. This can overburden students and stands in contrast to a freer learning style that encourages students to explore their own passions, make mistakes, and learn simply for the sake of learning. Evidence for the superiority of this approach can be found in recent research showing the impact of a positive mindset on learning and the importance of growing in a safe environment without the risk of punishment. Following this approach is therefore more likely to result in a long-lasting positive attitude towards learning.

In conclusion, despite the value of strict discipline for discouraging bad behavior, it cannot motivate passionate commitment as well as more modern methodologies. Teachers should strive for a balance but focus on a friendly atmosphere that allows for self-expression.

Analysis

1. Many feel that strict teaching better encourages academic excellence. 2. In my opinion, though there is value is discipline, it is more important to motivate hard work through healthier means.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. On the one hand, a harsh teacher can ensure a basic minimum of good behavior. 2. Most individuals will remember a strict teacher from their childhood who carefully monitored and inspired fear. 3. The punishment for not paying attention, cheating, or performing badly would be a critical comment at best and, at worst, corporal punishment. 4. This fear of being physically or mentally injured is the primary catalyst that then compels hard work and discourages misbehavior. 5. Though modern viewpoints categorize this as abuse, there is little doubt that it was effective in the past at curbing the actions that negatively affect academic performance.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Stay focused on the same main idea.

1. However, to inspire a healthy attitude towards achievement, teachers must foster a more positive learning environment. 2. The above-mentioned methods, including both positive and negative reinforcement, focus on the external opinion of teacher’s and, by extension, society at large. 3. This can overburden students and stands in contrast to a freer learning style that encourages students to explore their own passions, make mistakes, and learn simply for the sake of learning. 4. Evidence for the superiority of this approach can be found in recent research showing the impact of a positive mindset on learning and the importance of growing in a safe environment without the risk of punishment. 5. Following this approach is therefore more likely to result in a long-lasting positive attitude towards learning.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Continue developing it fully!
  5. Conclude with a strong statement.

1. In conclusion, despite the value of strict discipline for discouraging bad behavior, it cannot motivate passionate commitment as well as more modern methodologies. 2. Teachers should strive for a balance but focus on a friendly atmosphere that allows for self-expression.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many feel that strict teaching better encourages academic excellence. In my opinion, though there is value is discipline, it is more important to motivate hard work through healthier means.

On the one hand, a harsh teacher can ensure a basic minimum of good behavior. Most individuals will remember a strict teacher from their childhood who carefully monitored and inspired fear. The punishment for not paying attention, cheating, or performing badly would be a critical comment at best and, at worst, corporal punishment. This fear of being physically or mentally injured is the primary catalyst that then compels hard work and discourages misbehavior. Though modern viewpoints categorize this as abuse, there is little doubt that it was effective in the past at curbing the actions that negatively affect academic performance.

However, to inspire a healthy attitude towards achievement, teachers must foster a more positive learning environment. The above-mentioned methods, including both positive and negative reinforcement, focus on the external opinion of teacher’s and, by extension, society at large. This can overburden students and stands in contrast to a freer learning style that encourages students to explore their own passions, make mistakes, and learn simply for the sake of learning. Evidence for the superiority of this approach can be found in recent research showing the impact of a positive mindset on learning and the importance of growing in a safe environment without the risk of punishment. Following this approach is therefore more likely to result in a long-lasting positive attitude towards learning.

In conclusion, despite the value of strict discipline for discouraging bad behavior, it cannot motivate passionate commitment as well as more modern methodologies. Teachers should strive for a balance but focus on a friendly atmosphere that allows for self-expression.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

strict harsh

encourages fosters

academic excellence doing well in school

value importance

discipline not breaking the rules, working hard

motivate want to do

healthier means better ways

on the one hand on the one side

harsh strict, mean

ensure make sure

basic minimum least required

good behavior acting nice

remember recall

childhood when you were a kid

carefully monitored watched carefully

inspired fear makes people afraid

punishment being disciplined

not paying attention day-dreaming

cheating taking someone else’s answers

performing badly doing poorly

critical comment bad feedback

at best in the best situation

at worst in the worst situation

corporal punishment being hit

fear scared of

physically related to the body

mentally injured hurt related to the mind, emotions

primary catalyst main cause

compels forces

discourages misbehavior keep from behaving badly

modern viewpoints new opinions

categorize put into a category/group

abuse hurting someone else

little doubt not much chance it is not true

effective impactful

curbing the actions slowing down behavior

negatively affect hurt

academic performance how well you do in school

inspire fill with motivation

healthy attitude towards achievement good way of thinking about school and work

foster encourage, create

more positive learning environment better atmosphere for learning

above-mentioned methods ways talked about above

positive and negative reinforcement praise and punishment

focus on emphasize

external opinion outside viewpoints

by extension generalized

society at large all people

overburden put too much on

stands in contrast is in opposition to

freer learning style freedom to learn how you want

explore discover

passions caring a lot about

make mistakes do things wrong

learn simply for the sake of learning for no other end/reason

evidence support

superiority better

approach way

recent research studies from the last few years

positive mindset good attitude

importance value

growing in a safe environment becoming confident in a good atmosphere

without the risk of punishment no chance of being reprimanded

following using

result in causes

long-lasting life-long

despite regardless of

discouraging not encouraging

commitment dedication

modern methodologies new ways of teaching

strive try hard

balance keep equal

focus on put emphasis on

friendly atmosphere nice classroom setting

allows for self-expression students can act freely

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

strɪkt 
ɪnˈkʌrɪʤɪz 
ˌækəˈdɛmɪk ˈɛksələns
ˈvæljuː 
ˈdɪsɪplɪn
ˈməʊtɪveɪt 
ˈhɛlθɪə miːnz
ɒn ðə wʌn hænd
hɑːʃ 
ɪnˈʃʊə 
ˈbeɪsɪk ˈmɪnɪməm 
gʊd bɪˈheɪvjə
rɪˈmɛmbə 
ˈʧaɪldhʊd 
ˈkeəfli ˈmɒnɪtəd 
ɪnˈspaɪəd fɪə
ˈpʌnɪʃmənt 
nɒt ˈpeɪɪŋ əˈtɛnʃ(ə)n
ˈʧiːtɪŋ
pəˈfɔːmɪŋ ˈbædli 
ˈkrɪtɪkəl ˈkɒmɛnt 
æt bɛst 
æt wɜːst
ˈkɔːpərəl ˈpʌnɪʃmənt
fɪə 
ˈfɪzɪkəli 
ˈmɛntəli ˈɪnʤəd 
ˈpraɪməri ˈkætəlɪst 
kəmˈpɛlz 
dɪsˈkʌrɪʤɪz ˌmɪsbɪˈheɪvjə
ˈmɒdən ˈvjuːpɔɪnts 
ˈkætɪgəraɪz 
əˈbjuːs
ˈlɪtl daʊt 
ɪˈfɛktɪv 
ˈkɜːbɪŋ ði ˈækʃ(ə)nz 
ˈnɛgətɪvli əˈfɛkt 
ˌækəˈdɛmɪk pəˈfɔːməns
ɪnˈspaɪə 
ˈhɛlθi ˈætɪtjuːd təˈwɔːdz əˈʧiːvmənt
ˈfɒstə 
mɔː ˈpɒzətɪv ˈlɜːnɪŋ ɪnˈvaɪərənmənt
əˈbʌvˈmɛnʃ(ə)nd ˈmɛθədz
ˈpɒzətɪv ænd ˈnɛgətɪv ˌriːɪnˈfɔːsmənt
ˈfəʊkəs ɒn 
ɛksˈtɜːnl əˈpɪnjən 
baɪ ɪksˈtɛnʃən
səˈsaɪəti æt lɑːʤ
ˌəʊvəˈbɜːdn 
stændz ɪn ˈkɒntrɑːst 
ˈfriːə ˈlɜːnɪŋ staɪl 
ɪksˈplɔː 
ˈpæʃənz
meɪk mɪsˈteɪks
lɜːn ˈsɪmpli fɔː ðə seɪk ɒv ˈlɜːnɪŋ
ˈɛvɪdəns 
sju(ː)ˌpɪərɪˈɒrɪti 
əˈprəʊʧ 
ˈriːsnt rɪˈsɜːʧ 
ˈpɒzətɪv ˈmaɪndsɛt 
ɪmˈpɔːtəns 
ˈgrəʊɪŋ ɪn ə seɪf ɪnˈvaɪərənmənt 
wɪˈðaʊt ðə rɪsk ɒv ˈpʌnɪʃmənt
ˈfɒləʊɪŋ
rɪˈzʌlt ɪn 
lɒŋ-ˈlɑːstɪŋ 
dɪsˈpaɪt 
dɪsˈkʌrɪʤɪŋ 
kəˈmɪtmənt 
ˈmɒdən ˌmɛθəˈdɒləʤiz
straɪv 
ˈbæləns 
ˈfəʊkəs ɒn 
ˈfrɛndli ˈætməsfɪə 
əˈlaʊz fɔː sɛlf-ɪksˈprɛʃən

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many feel that s______t teaching better e___________s a___________________e. In my opinion, though there is v_______e is d___________e, it is more important to m___________e hard work through h_________________s.

O___________________d, a h________h teacher can e________e a b________________m of g_________________r. Most individuals will r________________r a strict teacher from their c__________d who c_____________________d and i_______________r. The p____________t for n_____________________n, c_________g, or p________________y would be a c______________________t a________t and, a__________t, c_______________________t. This f_______r of being p____________y or m_________________d is the p__________________t that then c__________s hard work and d____________________r. Though m__________________________e this as a_______e, there is l_____________t that it was e__________e in the past at c____________________s that n_____________________________________e.

However, to i__________e a h_______________________________________t, teachers must f__________r a m_______________________________________t. The a______________________________s, including both p_________________________________t, f___________n the e______________n of teacher’s and, b______________n, s__________________e. This can o______________n students and s_____________________o to a f_______________________e that encourages students to e___________e their own p_____________s, m_________________s, and l__________________________________g. E____________e for the s____________y of this a_______________h can be found in r___________________h showing the impact of a p_____________________t on learning and the i__________________e of g_________________________________________________t. F____________g this approach is therefore more likely to r____________n a l_____________g positive attitude towards learning.

In conclusion, d_________e the value of strict discipline for d_________________g bad behavior, it cannot motivate passionate c________________t as well as more m________________________s. Teachers should s__________e for a b_____________e but f______________n a f____________________e that a__________________________n.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic in the funny video below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.theguardian.com/education/2016/dec/30/no-excuses-inside-britains-strictest-school

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Studying

  1. Are you studying or working?
  2. Do you prefer to learn in the morning or in the evening?
  3. What subject do like to study best?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

IELTS Essays: Sports Events and Corporate Sponsorship

IELTS Essays: Sports Events and Corporate Sponsorship

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of sports events and corporate sponsorship/how companies promote these events from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essays: Sports Events and Corporate Sponsorship

Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is common today for large corporations to promote products through various sporting events and teams. In my opinion, though this guarantees financial stability, it is a negative overall due to de-emphasis of the sport itself.

Those in favor of corporate sponsorship argue its financial flexibility. Most televised games, ranging from basketball and baseball in America to international sports such as football and rugby, are free of cost for viewers. This is only possible because of advertising during commercial breaks, billboards around the arenas, and product placement such as on player uniforms. Funds accumulated from such sponsorship not only allows the games to be broadcast free of charge but also enables team owners to maintain professional facilities and afford the salaries of the best players. If advertising were banned, owners would not be able to fund their team and players would eventually leave for wealthier leagues.

However, commodification also entails a reduction in focus on the actual sport. In the past, advertising was less obtrusive and might have consisted of a few commercials and signs in the background. Now, the announcers often work ads into their commentary and every highlight is accompanied by prominent logos on player jerseys. The effect aggregate is that audiences feel the games are only a means of advertising and they become indifferent the millionaire athletes and their multi-billionaire team owners. This has led many individuals, such as fans of English football, to sever connections to their childhood teams in order to support amateur community matches, which are not as commercialized.

In conclusion, despite the financial benefits of company sponsored sports events, the drawbacks related to the purity of the sport itself make this a negative trend. Owners and leagues must strike some balance but should prioritize a largely unadulterated product.

Analysis

1. It is common today for large corporations to promote products through various sporting events and teams. 2. In my opinion, though this guarantees financial stability, it is a negative overall due to de-emphasis of the sport itself.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those in favor of corporate sponsorship argue its financial flexibility. 2. Most televised games, ranging from basketball and baseball in America to international sports such as football and rugby, are free of cost for viewers. 3. This is only possible because of advertising during commercial breaks, billboards around the arenas, and product placement such as on player uniforms. 4. Funds accumulated from such sponsorship not only allows the games to be broadcast free of charge but also enables team owners to maintain professional facilities and afford the salaries of the best players. 5. If advertising were banned, owners would not be able to fund their team and players would eventually leave for wealthier leagues.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. You can have some long sentences like this to really argue your point.

1. However, commodification also entails a reduction in focus on the actual sport. 2. In the past, advertising was less obtrusive and might have consisted of a few commercials and signs in the background. 3. Now, the announcers often work ads into their commentary and every highlight is accompanied by prominent logos on player jerseys. 4. The effect aggregate is that audiences feel the games are only a means of advertising and they become indifferent the millionaire athletes and their multi-billionaire team owners. 5. This has led many individuals, such as fans of English football, to sever connections to their childhood teams in order to support amateur community matches, which are not as commercialized.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Continue developing it…
  5. as fully as possible!

1. In conclusion, despite the financial benefits of company sponsored sports events, the drawbacks related to the purity of the sport itself make this a negative trend. 2. Owners and leagues must strike some balance but should prioritize a largely unadulterated product.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

It is common today for large corporations to promote products through various sporting events and teams. In my opinion, though this guarantees financial stability, it is a negative overall due to de-emphasis of the sport itself.

Those in favor of corporate sponsorship argue its financial flexibility. Most televised games, ranging from basketball and baseball in America to international sports such as football and rugby, are free of cost for viewers. This is only possible because of advertising during commercial breaks, billboards around the arenas, and product placement such as on player uniforms. Funds accumulated from such sponsorship not only allows the games to be broadcast free of charge but also enables team owners to maintain professional facilities and afford the salaries of the best players. If advertising were banned, owners would not be able to fund their team and players would eventually leave for wealthier leagues.

However, commodification also entails a reduction in focus on the actual sport. In the past, advertising was less obtrusive and might have consisted of a few commercials and signs in the background. Now, the announcers often work ads into their commentary and every highlight is accompanied by prominent logos on player jerseys. The effect aggregate is that audiences feel the games are only a means of advertising and they become indifferent the millionaire athletes and their multi-billionaire team owners. This has led many individuals, such as fans of English football, to sever connections to their childhood teams in order to support amateur community matches, which are not as commercialized.

In conclusion, despite the financial benefits of company sponsored sports events, the drawbacks related to the purity of the sport itself make this a negative trend. Owners and leagues must strike some balance but should prioritize a largely unadulterated product.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

common popular

large corporations big companies

promote sponsor, show their products and advertize

various many different kinds

sporting events games, matches, etc.

guarantees makes sure of

financial stability good economic footing

overall on the whole

due to because of

de-emphasis not focused on

sport itself game/match in reality

those in favor of supporters

sponsorship argue advertising point out

financial flexibility ability to buy what you want, economically viable

televised on television

ranging from including

free of cost no price for it

viewers audiences

commercial breaks ads in between play

billboards big signs

arenas venues, stadiums

product placement putting ads into the broadcast

uniforms jerseys

funds accumulated money raised

broadcast free of charge shown on TV for no cost

enables allows for

maintain professional facilities keep up stadiums, training grounds, etc.

afford be able to pay for

banned prohibited

fund give money

eventually over a period of time

wealthier leagues richer groups of teams

commodification turning everything to a product

entails includes

reduction making less

in focus concentration

actual real

in the past in past years

obtrusive too obvious and distracting

consisted of composed of

background behind something

announcers people who talk during games and matches

work ads into their commentary talk about products while talking about the games

highlight replay of a big play

accompanied by comes with

prominent logos noticeable corporate sponsors

jerseys uniforms

effect impact

aggregate all combined

audiences people watching

means ways, methods

indifferent dont care about

millionaire athletes rich players

multi-billionaire many billions of dollars

this has led has caused

fans people who follow teams

sever connections cut links

childhood teams team they support since they are young

support amateur community matches become fans of non-professional games

commercialized 100% about the advertising

company sponsored sports events games, matches featuring advertising for companies

drawbacks related to disadvantages related to

purity not dirtied in any way

negative trend bad pattern

strike some balance find a middle ground

prioritize focus more on

largely unadulterated product mostly pure

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈkɒmən 
lɑːʤ ˌkɔːpəˈreɪʃənz 
prəˈməʊt 
ˈveərɪəs 
ˈspɔːtɪŋ ɪˈvɛnts 
ˌgærənˈtiːz 
faɪˈnænʃəl stəˈbɪlɪti
ˈəʊvərɔːl 
djuː tuː 
diː-ˈɛmfəsɪs 
spɔːt ɪtˈsɛlf
ðəʊz ɪn ˈfeɪvər ɒv 
ˈspɒnsəʃɪp ˈɑːgjuː 
faɪˈnænʃəl ˌflɛksɪˈbɪlɪti
ˈtɛlɪvaɪzd 
ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm 
friː ɒv kɒst 
ˈvjuːəz
kəˈmɜːʃəl breɪks
ˈbɪlbɔːdz 
əˈriːnəz
ˈprɒdʌkt ˈpleɪsmənt 
ˈjuːnɪfɔːmz
fʌndz əˈkjuːmjʊleɪtɪd 
ˈbrɔːdkɑːst friː ɒv ʧɑːʤ 
ɪˈneɪblz 
meɪnˈteɪn prəˈfɛʃənl fəˈsɪlɪtiz 
əˈfɔːd 
bænd
fʌnd 
ɪˈvɛnʧəli 
ˈwɛlθɪə liːgz
kəˈmɒdɪfɪˈkeɪʃən 
ɪnˈteɪlz 
rɪˈdʌkʃən 
ɪn ˈfəʊkəs 
ˈækʧʊəl 
ɪn ðə pɑːst
əbˈtruːsɪv 
kənˈsɪstɪd ɒv 
ˈbækgraʊnd
əˈnaʊnsəz 
wɜːk ædz ˈɪntuː ðeə ˈkɒməntəri 
ˈhaɪˌlaɪt 
əˈkʌmpənid baɪ 
ˈprɒmɪnənt ˈlɒgɒs 
ˈʤɜːziz
ɪˈfɛkt ˈægrɪgɪt 
ˈɔːdiənsɪz 
miːnz 
ɪnˈdɪfrənt 
ˌmɪljəˈneər ˈæθliːts 
ˈmʌltɪ-ˌbɪljəˈneə 
ðɪs hæz lɛd 
fænz 
ˈsɛvə kəˈnɛkʃənz 
ˈʧaɪldhʊd tiːmz 
səˈpɔːt ˈæmətə(ː) kəˈmjuːnɪti ˈmæʧɪz
kəˈmɜːʃəlaɪzd
ˈkʌmpəni ˈspɒnsəd spɔːts ɪˈvɛnts
ˈdrɔːbæks rɪˈleɪtɪd tuː 
ˈpjʊərɪti 
ˈnɛgətɪv trɛnd
straɪk sʌm ˈbæləns 
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz 
ˈlɑːʤli ˌʌnəˈdʌltəreɪtɪd ˈprɒdʌkt

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

It is common today for large corporations to promote products through various sporting events and teams. In my opinion, though this guarantees financial stability, it is a negative overall due to de-emphasis of the sport itself.

Those in favor of corporate sponsorship argue its financial flexibility. Most televised games, ranging from basketball and baseball in America to international sports such as football and rugby, are free of cost for viewers. This is only possible because of advertising during commercial breaks, billboards around the arenas, and product placement such as on player uniforms. Funds accumulated from such sponsorship not only allows the games to be broadcast free of charge but also enables team owners to maintain professional facilities and afford the salaries of the best players. If advertising were banned, owners would not be able to fund their team and players would eventually leave for wealthier leagues.

However, commodification also entails a reduction in focus on the actual sport. In the past, advertising was less obtrusive and might have consisted of a few commercials and signs in the background. Now, the announcers often work ads into their commentary and every highlight is accompanied by prominent logos on player jerseys. The effect aggregate is that audiences feel the games are only a means of advertising and they become indifferent the millionaire athletes and their multi-billionaire team owners. This has led many individuals, such as fans of English football, to sever connections to their childhood teams in order to support amateur community matches, which are not as commercialized.

In conclusion, despite the financial benefits of company sponsored sports events, the drawbacks related to the purity of the sport itself make this a negative trend. Owners and leagues must strike some balance but should prioritize a largely unadulterated product.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:

and here:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.forbes.com/sites/forbesagencycouncil/2021/06/11/global-sports-sponsorships-are-now-purpose-driven-marketing/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Sports

  1. Which sport do you like to play?
  2. Have you ever been on a sports team?
  3. Do you like watching sports on TV?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS Essay Task 1: Consumption of Milk and Butter

IELTS Essay Task 1: Consumption of Milk and Butter

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of consumption and milk and butter (or dairy) from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay Task 1: Consumption of Milk and Butter

The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

AGES
<2526 – 4545 – 6565+
Milk1200ml1650ml1670ml1900ml
Full Fat59%20%45%30%
Low Fat41%80%55%70%
Butter12g19g60g30g
Full Fat60%38%50%49%
Low Fat40%62%50%51%

The table compares milk and butter purchases by age according to how much fat they contain. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that younger people tend to consume less milk and butter, especially those under 25, though the fat content is highest for that group. The oldest group drink the most milk, mainly low fat, while those 45-65 eat the most butter.

Milk consumption for the under 25 group is lowest at 1,200ml, of which 59% is full fat and 41% low fat. This pattern is generally reversed for older people with individuals 26-45, 25-65, and 65+ drinking 1,650ml, 1,670ml, and 1,900ml, respectively. The fat content also is lower at 20% for 26-45, 45% for 45-65, and 30% for the oldest age bracket (and reciprocal figures for low fat consumption).

In terms of butter, younger people also use the least at just 12g, in contrast to 19g for those 26-45, and 60g and 30g for the two older groups in turn. Younger individuals similarly opt for more fat (60% full fat to 40% low fat), while the older demographics have much lower proportions here (38% full fat for 26-45, and around 50% for everyone over 45).

Analysis

1. The table compares milk and butter purchases by age according to how much fat they contain. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that younger people tend to consume less milk and butter, especially those under 25, though the fat content is highest for that group. 3. The oldest group drink the most milk, mainly low fat, while those 45-65 eat the most butter.

  1. Paraphrase what the table shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.
  3. You might need a second sentence for your overview.

1. Milk consumption for the under 25 group is lowest at 1,200ml, of which 59% is full fat and 41% low fat. 2. This pattern is generally reversed for older people with individuals 26-45, 25-65, and 65+ drinking 1,650ml, 1,670ml, and 1,900ml, respectively. 3. The fat content also is lower at 20% for 26-45, 45% for 45-65, and 30% for the oldest age bracket (and reciprocal figures for low fat consumption).

  1. Begin writing about the data for the first category.
  2. Describe the next area and compare it to the area before.

1. In terms of butter, younger people also use the least at just 12g, in contrast to 19g for those 26-45, and 60g and 30g for the two older groups in turn. 2. Younger individuals similarly opt for more fat (60% full fat to 40% low fat), while the older demographics have much lower proportions here (38% full fat for 26-45, and around 50% for everyone over 45).

  1. Write about the final other parts of the table – include everything!
  2. There is a lot of data in this one but try to get to all of it.
  3. Make sure nothing is missed.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Take some notes on a piece of paper to aid your memory:

The table compares milk and butter purchases by age according to how much fat they contain. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that younger people tend to consume less milk and butter, especially those under 25, though the fat content is highest for that group. The oldest group drink the most milk, mainly low fat, while those 45-65 eat the most butter.

Milk consumption for the under 25 group is lowest at 1,200ml, of which 59% is full fat and 41% low fat. This pattern is generally reversed for older people with individuals 26-45, 25-65, and 65+ drinking 1,650ml, 1,670ml, and 1,900ml, respectively. The fat content also is lower at 20% for 26-45, 45% for 45-65, and 30% for the oldest age bracket (and reciprocal figures for low fat consumption).

In terms of butter, younger people also use the least at just 12g, in contrast to 19g for those 26-45, and 60g and 30g for the two older groups in turn. Younger individuals similarly opt for more fat (60% full fat to 40% low fat), while the older demographics have much lower proportions here (38% full fat for 26-45, and around 50% for everyone over 45).

Answers

Try to write down or think of an antonym/opposite word for further practice:

compares shows the differences between

purchases bought

according to related to

fat cluster of fatty acids found in cheese, butter, oil, etc.

contain have inside them

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

tend to usually

consume eat/drink

especially in particular

fat content amount of fat in something

highest biggest

mainly mostly

low fat not much fat content

consumption how much is eaten/used

lowest opposite of highest

pattern trend

generally reversed show the opposite mostly

respectively in turn

age bracket age group

reciprocal figures complementary statistics

in terms of when it comes to

in contrast to compared to

in turn respectively

similarly opt for in the same way choose

while however/in contrast

demographics groups of people

proportions ratios, percentages

around close to

over about

Pronunciation

Practice saying the words below using this tip with Google voice dictation:

kəmˈpeəz 
ˈpɜːʧəsɪz 
əˈkɔːdɪŋ tuː 
fæt 
kənˈteɪn
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
tɛnd tuː
kənˈsjuːm 
ɪsˈpɛʃəli 
fæt ˈkɒntɛnt 
ˈhaɪɪst 
ˈmeɪnli 
ləʊ fæt
kənˈsʌm(p)ʃən 
ˈləʊɪst 
ˈpætən 
ˈʤɛnərəli rɪˈvɜːst 
rɪsˈpɛktɪvli
eɪʤ ˈbrækɪt
rɪˈsɪprəkəl ˈfɪgəz 
ɪn tɜːmz ɒv 
ɪn ˈkɒntrɑːst tuː 
ɪn tɜːn
ˈsɪmɪləli ɒpt fɔː 
waɪl 
ˌdɛməˈgræfɪks 
prəˈpɔːʃənz 
əˈraʊnd 
ˈəʊvə 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks. Note it on a piece of paper so you can remember better:

The table c___________s milk and butter p_________s by age a____________o how much f___t they c__________n. L___________________________________________t younger people t___________o c___________e less milk and butter, e___________y those under 25, though the f____________t is h___________t for that group. The oldest group drink the most milk, m____________y l_________t, while those 45-65 eat the most butter.

Milk c__________________n for the under 25 group is l__________t at 1,200ml, of which 59% is full fat and 41% low fat. This p__________n is g________________________d for older people with individuals 26-45, 25-65, and 65+ drinking 1,650ml, 1,670ml, and 1,900ml, r_______________y. The fat content also is lower at 20% for 26-45, 45% for 45-65, and 30% for the oldest a_____________t (and r____________________s for low fat consumption).

I_____________f butter, younger people also use the least at just 12g, i______________o 19g for those 26-45, and 60g and 30g for the two older groups i_______n. Younger individuals s_____________y o_________r more fat (60% full fat to 40% low fat), w_______e the older d_______________s have much lower p_______________s here (38% full fat for 26-45, and a__________d 50% for everyone o_____r 45).

Listening Practice

Listen to the related topic below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.healthline.com/nutrition/is-dairy-bad-or-good

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Water

  1. Do you drink a lot of water?
  2. Do you prefer bottled or tap water?
  3. Did you drink a lot of water when you were younger?
  4. Would you say that bottled water is expensive in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related table below and then check with my sample answer:

IELTS Essay Task 1: Exports Table
IELTS Speaking: Special Costumes

IELTS Speaking: Special Costumes

These are some IELTS speaking questions related to the topic of special costumes from the real IELTS exam.

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Here are the questions – comment your answers below for some feedback!

  1. Do you like wearing special costumes?
  2. Did you try any special costumes when you were young?
  3. When was your last time to wear a special costume?
  4. Do you ever buy special costumes?

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Here is a preview of an answer to the first question:

  1. Do you like wearing special costumes?

“I wouldn’t say so exactly – it doesn’t come up all that often to be honest. Usually around Halloween all my friends will dress up – as vampires, ghosts, videogame characters, celebrities sometimes – but I tend to go with the easiest costumes possible, usually just a zombie or a mad scientist. I just have to rip my shirt and cover myself in fake blood – no special costume needed!”