This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of globalization from the real IELTS exam.
Please consider supporting me on Patreon.com/howtodoielts to receive my exclusive IELTS Ebooks – you can even sign up for private live lessons with me!
Dave
IELTS Essay: Globalization
Globalization is positive for economies but its negative sides should not be ignored.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many feel that the positives of globalization justify ignoring the downsides. In my opinion, modest benefits should not overshadow legitimate threats.
The most commonly cited advantages of globalization are economic. The argument here is that by allowing companies to operate across national borders, this is a boon to both consumers and national economies. For example, in the last several decades, many Asian countries such as Vietnam and China have allowed for foreign investment, thereby stimulating their economic growth. Individuals can enjoy a variety of products from around the world and the companies themselves contribute in the form of taxes and employment opportunities. However, many would caution that multinational companies are exploitive and have driven local businesses to bankruptcy. The overall impact for the average person is therefore uncertain.
Globalization also creates apparent cultural advantages. Individuals from all around the world can experience the latest Hollywood movies and listen to their favorite artists on applications like Spotify. This undoubtedly influences and encourages other entertainers to work hard and produce quality content. Nonetheless, it can foster a harmful homogeneity. The film industry is a prime example of this. The standard American structure for films and television shows is now copied globally and funded by powerful entertainment studios such as Netflix. These companies are almost exclusively interested in specific genres, most commonly crime and action. Over time, entertainment may become less unique and no longer showcase true diversity.
In conclusion, the cultural and economic advantages of globalization have concomitant tradeoffs. It is therefore important for each nation to carefully manage and balance their relationship to global society.
Analysis
1. Many feel that the positives of globalization justify ignoring the downsides. 2. In my opinion, modest benefits should not overshadow legitimate threats.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. The most commonly cited advantages of globalization are economic. 2. The argument here is that by allowing companies to operate across national borders, this is a boon to both consumers and national economies. 3. For example, in the last several decades, many Asian countries such as Vietnam and China have allowed for foreign investment, thereby stimulating their economic growth. 4. Individuals can enjoy a variety of products from around the world and the companies themselves contribute in the form of taxes and employment opportunities. 5. However, many would caution that multinational companies are exploitive and have driven local businesses to bankruptcy. 6. The overall impact for the average person is therefore uncertain.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
- Keep developing it fully.
- Switch to talk about the disadvantages.
- Develop that side too.
1. Globalization also creates apparent cultural advantages. 2. Individuals from all around the world can experience the latest Hollywood movies and listen to their favorite artists on applications like Spotify. 3. This undoubtedly influences and encourages other entertainers to work hard and produce quality content. 4. Nonetheless, it can foster a harmful homogeneity. 5. The film industry is a prime example of this. 6. The standard American structure for films and television shows is now copied globally and funded by powerful entertainment studios such as Netflix. 7. These companies are almost exclusively interested in specific genres, most commonly crime and action. 8. Over time, entertainment may become less unique and no longer showcase true diversity.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Continue developing it…
- as fully as possible!
- Be sure to develop the other side fully.
- Including specific examples.
- As well as the furthest possible result.
1. In conclusion, the cultural and economic advantages of globalization have concomitant tradeoffs. 2. It is therefore important for each nation to carefully manage and balance their relationship to global society.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
Many feel that the positives of globalization justify ignoring the downsides. In my opinion, modest benefits should not overshadow legitimate threats.
The most commonly cited advantages of globalization are economic. The argument here is that by allowing companies to operate across national borders, this is a boon to both consumers and national economies. For example, in the last several decades, many Asian countries such as Vietnam and China have allowed for foreign investment, thereby stimulating their economic growth. Individuals can enjoy a variety of products from around the world and the companies themselves contribute in the form of taxes and employment opportunities. However, many would caution that multinational companies are exploitive and have driven local businesses to bankruptcy. The overall impact for the average person is therefore uncertain.
Globalization also creates apparent cultural advantages. Individuals from all around the world can experience the latest Hollywood movies and listen to their favorite artists on applications like Spotify. This undoubtedly influences and encourages other entertainers to work hard and produce quality content. Nonetheless, it can foster a harmful homogeneity. The film industry is a prime example of this. The standard American structure for films and television shows is now copied globally and funded by powerful entertainment studios such as Netflix. These companies are almost exclusively interested in specific genres, most commonly crime and action. Over time, entertainment may become less unique and no longer showcase true diversity.
In conclusion, the cultural and economic advantages of globalization have concomitant tradeoffs. It is therefore important for each nation to carefully manage and balance their relationship to global society.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
positives benefits
globalization the world being the same
justify give good reason for
ignoring not paying attention to
downsides negatives
modest benefits small advantages
overshadow stronger than
legitimate threats real risks
most commonly cited advantages drawbacks talked about the most
economic related to the economy
argument debate
allowing companies permitting corporations
operate across national borders work in various countries
boon benefit
consumers customers
national economies money earned in a country
in the last several decades last 20-30 years
Asian from Asia
allowed permitted
foreign investment money from other countries
stimulating making grow
economic growth countries making more money, higher GDP
variety different kinds of
products things that are sold
contribute add ot
in the form of as/made up of
taxes money paid to the government
employment opportunities job chances
exploitive take advantage of
driven local businesses made small businesses
bankruptcy out of business
overall impact whole effect
average person normal citizen
uncertain not clear
apparent cultural advantages seeming benefits for art
all around the world globally
experience watching/viewing
latest Hollywood movies new films at the cinema
listen hear
artists people who make music, films
Spotify application for streaming music
undoubtedly influences definitely affects
encourages motivates
produce quality content make good stuff
nonetheless regardless
foster engender
harmful homogeneity everything the same in a bad way
prime example good instance
standard all the same
structure way it is put together
copied duplicated
funded by given money by
studios companies that make movies
Netflix streaming website
exclusively interested only care about
specific genres individual types of movies
commonly normally
over time for a long time
unique singular
showcase true diversity show off real difference
concomitant tradeoffs resulting drawbacks
carefully manage diligently take care of
balance keep equal
relationship interaction
global society the whole world
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:
ˈpɒzətɪvz
ˌgləʊb(ə)laɪˈzeɪʃ(ə)n
ˈʤʌstɪfaɪ
ɪgˈnɔːrɪŋ
ˈdaʊnˌsaɪdz
ˈmɒdɪst ˈbɛnɪfɪts
ˌəʊvəˈʃædəʊ
lɪˈʤɪtɪmɪt θrɛts
məʊst ˈkɒmənli ˈsaɪtɪd ədˈvɑːntɪʤɪz
ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk
ˈɑːgjʊmənt
əˈlaʊɪŋ ˈkʌmpəniz
ˈɒpəreɪt əˈkrɒs ˈnæʃənl ˈbɔːdəz
buːn
kənˈsjuːməz
ˈnæʃənl i(ː)ˈkɒnəmiz
ɪn ðə lɑːst ˈsɛvrəl ˈdɛkeɪdz
ˈeɪʃ(ə)n
əˈlaʊd
ˈfɒrɪn ɪnˈvɛstmənt
ˈstɪmjʊleɪtɪŋ
ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk grəʊθ
vəˈraɪəti
ˈprɒdʌkts
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)t
ɪn ðə fɔːm ɒv
ˈtæksɪz
ɪmˈplɔɪmənt ˌɒpəˈtjuːnɪtiz
ˈɛksplɔɪtɪv
ˈdrɪvn ˈləʊkəl ˈbɪznɪsɪz
ˈbæŋkrəptsi
ˈəʊvərɔːl ˈɪmpækt
ˈævərɪʤ ˈpɜːsn
ʌnˈsɜːtn
əˈpærənt ˈkʌlʧərəl ədˈvɑːntɪʤɪz
ɔːl əˈraʊnd ðə wɜːld
ɪksˈpɪərɪəns
ˈleɪtɪst ˈhɒlɪwʊd ˈmuːviz
ˈlɪsn
ˈɑːtɪsts
spɒtifaɪ
ʌnˈdaʊtɪdli ˈɪnflʊənsɪz
ɪnˈkʌrɪʤɪz
ˈprɒdjuːs ˈkwɒlɪti ˈkɒntɛnt
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ˈfɒstə
ˈhɑːmfʊl ˌhɒməʊʤɛˈniːɪti
praɪm ɪgˈzɑːmpl
ˈstændəd
ˈstrʌkʧə
ˈkɒpid
ˈfʌndɪd baɪ
ˈstjuːdɪəʊz
nɛtflɪks
ɪksˈkluːsɪvli ˈɪntrɪstɪd
spɪˈsɪfɪk ˈ(d)ʒɑːŋrəz
ˈkɒmənli
ˈəʊvə taɪm
juːˈniːk
ˈʃəʊkeɪs truː daɪˈvɜːsɪti
kənˈkɒmɪtənt treɪd ɒfs
ˈkeəfli ˈmænɪʤ
ˈbæləns
rɪˈleɪʃənʃɪp
ˈgləʊbəl səˈsaɪəti
Vocabulary Practice
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
Many feel that the p____________s of g_________________n j__________y i__________g the d_____________s. In my opinion, m______________s should not o_______________________________________s.
The m___________________________s of globalization are e____________c. The a___________t here is that by a_______________________s to o_____________________________s, this is a b_______n to both c____________s and n______________________s. For example, i________________________s, many A______n countries such as Vietnam and China have a__________d for f______________________t, thereby s_______________g their e_________________h. Individuals can enjoy a v_________y of p_________s from around the world and the companies themselves c___________e i_______________f t____s and e____________________________s. However, many would caution that multinational companies are e_______________e and have d_________________________________s to b______________y. The o_______________t for the a________________n is therefore u__________n.
Globalization also creates a_______________________________s. Individuals from a_________________________d can e______________e the l________________________s and l_______n to their favorite a_________s on applications like S__________y. This u____________________s and e______________s other entertainers to work hard and p_______________________t. N_____________s, it can f_________r a h_______________________y. The film industry is a p________________e of this. The s___________d American s___________e for films and television shows is now c_______d globally and f___________y powerful entertainment s________s such as N_________x. These companies are almost e______________________d in s_________________s, most c___________y crime and action. O___________e, entertainment may become less u________e and no longer s____________________________y.
In conclusion, the cultural and economic advantages of globalization have c_________________________s. It is therefore important for each nation to c____________________e and b_____________e their r_______________p to g___________________y.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:
Reading Practice
Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:
Speaking Practice
Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:
International Events/Parties
- What sort of international events does your country host?
- Do you think these types of events divide people?
- Why are these events celebrated?
- What activities are common for these celebrations?
- Are there many events that are celebrated across national borders?
Writing Practice
Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:
The growth of multinational companies and the resulting rise of globalization creates positive effects for all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Thank you so much
You’re very welcome!
Welcom
Ielts
Thank u sooo much sir your method of explaining is too good
You’re welcome, Amanat!
Really helpful
Thanks!
Lovely
Hello, in 1st sentence, I think there should be ‘do not’ between globalisation and justify! Like, positives of globalisation do not justify ignoring the downsides.(according to the main title or your topic of the essay)
It’s not needed here Sandra – the positives justify… is a simple subject + verb + object clause.
You can add in ‘do not’ but it is not needed.
Thanx for explanation!
No worries, Sandra!