This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of whether or not historical objects should be returned to their country of origin.
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IELTS Essay: Historical Objects
Historical objects should be brought back to their country of origin.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many today are calling for historical objects currently residing in, largely Western, museums to be returned to their nation of origin. In my opinion, though these items were typically acquired fairly, repatriating them would go a long way to easing international resentment against past colonial powers.
The argument of the institutions currently displaying these items is that they have a legal right. Some objects were unlawfully stolen, but the majority of those have already been sent back. The artifacts now in exhibitions have proofs of sale. The prices appear to modern observers as scandalously low but they were agreed upon in another era and there is no legal basis to revoke these sales. The British Museum in England, for example, has produced unequivocal evidence that all the items they preserve were fairly bargained for and obtained. In any other situation, demanding a product that has been sold be returned would not even be broached and items of historical and cultural importance should be no different.
Regardless of the just case museums can make, there is a practical argument for returning these objects that does not exist for keeping them. A good example of this is in many African countries where their historic artifacts were pillaged during colonialism. The powers that, in effect, stole their history tended to be predominately white, European nations like The United Kingdom, The Netherlands, Belgium, Germany, France, and Spain. Since many of these wealthy countries now charge expensive fees to view artefacts from poorer African countries, a natural resentment festers. By returning the property, some of the pain of colonialism could abate. Countries subjected to colonial rule will be able to move past feelings of hostility if there is an attempt made to rectify and sanction the offenders.
In conclusion, though many of these cultural relics were bought legally, there is critical value in giving them back as they can repair historically fraught relations. Every country must balance these an abstract respect for justice against these more utilitarian concerns.
Analysis
1. Many today are calling for historical objects currently residing in, largely Western, museums to be returned to their nation of origin. 2. In my opinion, though these items were typically acquired fairly, repatriating them would go a long way to easing international resentment against past colonial powers.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Give a clear opinion – choose a side! Read more about introductions here.
1. The argument of the institutions currently displaying these items is that they have a legal right. 2. Some objects were unlawfully stolen, but the majority of those have already been sent back. 3. The artifacts now in exhibitions have proofs of sale. 4. The prices appear to modern observers as scandalously low but they were agreed upon in another era and there is no legal basis to revoke these sales. 5. The British Museum in England, for example, has produced unequivocal evidence that all the items they preserve were fairly bargained for and obtained. 6. In any other situation, demanding a product that has been sold be returned would not even be broached and items of historical and cultural importance should be no different.
- Write a clear topic sentence with a main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Continue to explain or develop your main idea.
- Don’t switch to a new idea – keep adding more detail to your first one.
- Give a clear example.
- Conclude with the further possible results/implications.
1. Regardless of the just case museums can make, there is a practical argument for returning these objects that does not exist for keeping them. 2. A good example of this is in many African countries where their historic artifacts were pillaged during colonialism. 3. The powers that, in effect, stole their history tended to be predominately white, European nations like The United Kingdom, The Netherlands, Belgium, Germany, France, and Spain. 4. Since many of these wealthy countries now charge expensive fees to view artefacts from poorer African countries, a natural resentment festers. 5. By returning the property, some of the pain of colonialism could abate. 6. Countries subjected to colonial rule will be able to move past feelings of hostility if there is an attempt made to rectify and sanction the offenders.
- Write another topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Begin an example early in the paragraph if possible.
- Explain the example.
- Keep developing the example.
- Vary long and short sentences.
- Conclude your example with a strong statement.
1. In conclusion, though many of these cultural relics were bought legally, there is critical value in giving them back as they can repair historically fraught relations. 2. Every country must balance these an abstract respect for justice against these more utilitarian concerns.
- Repeat your opinion and summarise your main ideas.
- Add a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?
Many today are calling for historical objects currently residing in, largely Western, museums to be returned to their nation of origin. In my opinion, though these items were typically acquired fairly, repatriating them would go a long way to easing international resentment against past colonial powers.
The argument of the institutions currently displaying these items is that they have a legal right. Some objects were unlawfully stolen, but the majority of those have already been sent back. The artifacts now in exhibitions have proofs of sale. The prices appear to modern observers as scandalously low but they were agreed upon in another era and there is no legal basis to revoke these sales. The British Museum in England, for example, has produced unequivocal evidence that all the items they preserve were fairly bargained for and obtained. In any other situation, demanding a product that has been sold be returned would not even be broached and items of historical and cultural importance should be no different.
Regardless of the just case museums can make, there is a practical argument for returning these objects that does not exist for keeping them. A good example of this is in many African countries where their historic artifacts were pillaged during colonialism. The powers that, in effect, stole their history tended to be predominately white, European nations like The United Kingdom, The Netherlands, Belgium, Germany, France, and Spain. Since many of these wealthy countries now charge expensive fees to view artefacts from poorer African countries, a natural resentment festers. By returning the property, some of the pain of colonialism could abate. Countries subjected to colonial rule will be able to move past feelings of hostility if there is an attempt made to rectify and sanction the offenders.
In conclusion, though many of these cultural relics were bought legally, there is critical value in giving them back as they can repair historically fraught relations. Every country must balance these an abstract respect for justice against these more utilitarian concerns.
Answers
calling for requesting
historical objects relics from a country
residing in staying in, housed
largely Western mostly from European countries
returned to given back
nation of origin where they come from
typically acquired fairly usually bought legally
repatriating giving back to the original country
go a long way contributes a lot towards
easing international resentment reducing tension between countries
past colonial powers countries that used to own other countries
institutions governments, companies, etc.
displaying showing
legal right entitled to
unlawfully stolen taken illegally
majority most of
already been sent back repatriated already
artifacts documents, relics, paintings, sculptures, etc. from the past
exhibitions displays of items
proofs of sale documents showing something was bought
appear seem
modern observers modern people, people today
scandalously low shockingly little
agreed upon contracted
another era a different time
no legal basis unlawful
revoke these sales overturn the contract
British Museum a museum in England with many historic items
unequivocal evidence clear proof
preserve keep safe
fairly bargained for agreed upon fairly
obtained received
in any other situation in comparable conditions
demanding asking for
broached asked
cultural importance key for a country’s culture
no different the same
regardless of nonetheless
just case fair situation
practical argument pragmatic view
historic artifacts relics from the past
pillaged stolen
colonialism a period when European countries controlled countries around the world
powers important countries
in effect essentially
stole their history took their relics, artifacts
predominately white mostly white
wealthy countries rich nations
charge expensive fees ask for a lot of money
natural resentment festers normal animosity grows
property what someone owns
pain of colonialism resentment from the past
abate disappear
subjected to colonial rule under the rule of European countries
move past get over
hostility resentment towards
attempt made tried to
rectify fix
sanction punish
offenders those who did something wrong
cultural relics historic artifacts
legally within the bounds of the law
critical value very important
repair historically fraught relations fix problems between countries
balance not over-value
abstract respect undefined reverence for
utilitarian concerns practical worries
Pronunciation
ˈkɔːlɪŋ fɔː
hɪsˈtɒrɪkəl ˈɒbʤɪkts
rɪˈzaɪdɪŋ ɪn
ˈlɑːʤli ˈwɛstən
rɪˈtɜːnd tuː
ˈneɪʃən ɒv ˈɒrɪʤɪn
ˈtɪpɪk(ə)li əˈkwaɪəd ˈfeəli
riːˈpætrɪeɪtɪŋ
gəʊ ə lɒŋ weɪ
ˈiːzɪŋ ˌɪntə(ː)ˈnæʃənl rɪˈzɛntmənt
pɑːst kəˈləʊniəl ˈpaʊəz
ˌɪnstɪˈtjuːʃənz
dɪsˈpleɪɪŋ
ˈliːgəl raɪt
ʌnˈlɔːfʊli ˈstəʊlən
məˈʤɒrɪti
ɔːlˈrɛdi biːn sɛnt bæk
ˈɑːtɪˌfækts
ˌɛksɪˈbɪʃənz
pruːfs ɒv seɪl
əˈpɪə
ˈmɒdən əbˈzɜːvəz
ˈskændələsli ləʊ
əˈgriːd əˈpɒn
əˈnʌðər ˈɪərə
nəʊ ˈliːgəl ˈbeɪsɪs
rɪˈvəʊk ðiːz seɪlz
ˈbrɪtɪʃ mju(ː)ˈzɪəm
ˌʌnɪˈkwɪvəkəl ˈɛvɪdəns
prɪˈzɜːv
ˈfeəli ˈbɑːgɪnd fɔː
əbˈteɪnd
ɪn ˈɛni ˈʌðə ˌsɪtjʊˈeɪʃən
dɪˈmɑːndɪŋ
brəʊʧt
ˈkʌlʧərəl ɪmˈpɔːtəns
nəʊ ˈdɪfrənt
rɪˈgɑːdlɪs ɒv
ʤʌst keɪs
ˈpræktɪkəl ˈɑːgjʊmənt
hɪsˈtɒrɪk ˈɑːtɪˌfækts
ˈpɪlɪʤd
kəˈləʊniəlɪz(ə)m
ˈpaʊəz
ɪn ɪˈfɛkt
stəʊl ðeə ˈhɪstəri ˈtɛndɪd tuː
prɪˈdɒmɪneɪtli waɪt
ˈwɛlθi ˈkʌntriz
ʧɑːʤ ɪksˈpɛnsɪv fiːz
ˈnæʧrəl rɪˈzɛntmənt ˈfɛstəz
ˈprɒpəti
peɪn ɒv kəˈləʊniəlɪz(ə)m
əˈbeɪt
səbˈʤɛktɪd tuː kəˈləʊniəl ruːl
muːv pɑːst
hɒsˈtɪlɪti
əˈtɛmpt meɪd
ˈrɛktɪfaɪ
ˈsæŋkʃən
əˈfɛndəz
ˈkʌlʧərəl ˈrɛlɪks
ˈliːgəli
ˈkrɪtɪkəl ˈvæljuː
rɪˈpeə hɪsˈtɒrɪkəli frɔːt rɪˈleɪʃənz
ˈbæləns
ˈæbstrækt rɪsˈpɛkt
ˌjuːtɪlɪˈteərɪən kənˈsɜːnz
Vocabulary Practice
Remember and fill in the blanks:
Many today are c______________r h___________________s currently r_______________n, l_________________n, museums to be r_____________o their n________________n. In my opinion, though these items were t__________________________y, r__________________g them would g_______________y to e______________________________t against p_______________________s.
The argument of the i___________________s currently d_________________g these items is that they have a l______________t. Some objects were u_______________________n, but the m_____________y of those have a___________________________k. The a_____________s now in e______________s have p_______________e. The prices a____________r to m___________________s as s_____________________w but they were a_______________n in a______________a and there is n_________________s to r__________________s. The B_______________m in England, for example, has produced u_________________________e that all the items they p______________e were f_________________________r and o_____________d. I_____________________n, d_______________g a product that has been sold be returned would not even be b______________d and items of historical and c_________________e should be n_________________t.
R__________________f the j______________e museums can make, there is a p_____________________t for returning these objects that does not exist for keeping them. A good example of this is in many African countries where their h____________________s were p___________d during c______________m. The p__________s that, i__________t, s__________________y tended to be p_________________________e, European nations like The United Kingdom, The Netherlands, Belgium, Germany, France, and Spain. Since many of these w_____________________s now c______________________s to view artefacts from poorer African countries, a n_____________________________s. By returning the p_____________y, some of the p______________________m could a_________e. Countries s______________________________e will be able to m____________t feelings of h___________y if there is an a______________e to r__________y and s__________n the o___________s.
In conclusion, though many of these c_________________s were bought l___________y, there is c________________e in giving them back as they can r__________________________________s. Every country must b__________e these an a_____________________t for justice against these more u_________________________s.
Listening Practice
Learn more about the British Museum below:
Reading Practice
Read more about this complex topic below:
Speaking Practice
Answer the following questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:
History
- Do you like reading books about history?
- Which country’s history is most interesting to you?
- Which historical event or period do you find most interesting?
- Why is it important to read about history?
Writing Practice
Write about the following related topic and then check with my sample answer:
Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
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