This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of minority languages from the real IELTS exam.
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IELTS Essay: Minority Languages
Some feel governments should invest in preserving minority languages, while others feel this is not a good use of resources.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many are of the belief that it would be worthwhile for governments to prioritise the preservation of various minority languages. In my opinion, despite limited potential efficacy this sentiment is justifiable.
Detractors of this proposal argue that investment is unlikely to have a major impact. In order for minority groups to earn a living and enjoy the conveniences of the modern world, they require knowledge of a nation’s most widely spoken language. In fact, many indigenous peoples themselves desire to move away from their hometowns to live in large cities and join the modern workforce. For example, in the Hmong people of Southeast Asia, it is typically the older generation that seeks to communicate in their native tongue and preserve traditional ways of life. The younger generation, generally, would rather learn the most useful language and integrate with the dominant national culture. Therefore efforts by governments oppose what individuals desire and are unlikely to be successful.
Nonetheless, there is cultural value in preserving a language. A language uniquely represents and codifies the external world. Everything from the verb structures and choice of nouns to the intonation and rhythm of the language present a singular way of interacting with and deciphering the world at large. For example, in many languages there are words that are not precisely translatable and users therefore are more likely to see events and objects differently. As the world becomes increasingly globalised, I would argue that the importance of a plurality of perspectives only becomes more crucial. If such languages die out, they will likely never be resurrected and the world will be poorer for the loss.
In conclusion, regardless of the potential challenges faced in preserving minority languages, their continued existence is essential to diversity. Governments must therefore make every effort to ensure their survival.
Analysis
1. Many are of the belief that it would be worthwhile for governments to prioritise the preservation of various minority languages. 2. In my opinion, despite limited potential efficacy this sentiment is justifiable.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Detractors of this proposal argue that investment is unlikely to have a major impact. 2. In order for minority groups to earn a living and enjoy the conveniences of the modern world, they require knowledge of a nation’s most widely spoken language. 3. In fact, many indigenous peoples themselves desire to move away from their hometowns to live in large cities and join the modern workforce. 4. For example, in the Hmong people of Southeast Asia, it is typically the older generation that seeks to communicate in their native tongue and preserve traditional ways of life. 5. The younger generation, generally, would rather learn the most useful language and integrate with the dominant national culture. 6. Therefore efforts by governments oppose what individuals desire and are unlikely to be successful.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific examples.
- Keep developing it fully.
- Stay focused on the same main idea.
- Finish by adding extra detail.
1. Nonetheless, there is cultural value in preserving a language. 2. A language uniquely represents and codifies the external world. 3. Everything from the verb structures and choice of nouns to the intonation and rhythm of the language present a singular way of interacting with and deciphering the world at large. 4. For example, in many languages there are words that are not precisely translatable and users therefore are more likely to see events and objects differently. 5. As the world becomes increasingly globalised, I would argue that the importance of a plurality of perspectives only becomes more crucial. 6. If such languages die out, they will likely never be resurrected and the world will be poorer for the loss.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Continue developing it…
- as fully as possible!
- Conclude by relating it back to the overall topic.
1. In conclusion, regardless of the potential challenges faced in preserving minority languages, their continued existence is essential to diversity. 2. Governments must therefore make every effort to ensure their survival.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
Many are of the belief that it would be worthwhile for governments to prioritise the preservation of various minority languages. In my opinion, despite limited potential efficacy this sentiment is justifiable.
Detractors of this proposal argue that investment is unlikely to have a major impact. In order for minority groups to earn a living and enjoy the conveniences of the modern world, they require knowledge of a nation’s most widely spoken language. In fact, many indigenous peoples themselves desire to move away from their hometowns to live in large cities and join the modern workforce. For example, in the Hmong people of Southeast Asia, it is typically the older generation that seeks to communicate in their native tongue and preserve traditional ways of life. The younger generation, generally, would rather learn the most useful language and integrate with the dominant national culture. Therefore efforts by governments oppose what individuals desire and are unlikely to be successful.
Nonetheless, there is cultural value in preserving a language. A language uniquely represents and codifies the external world. Everything from the verb structures and choice of nouns to the intonation and rhythm of the language present a singular way of interacting with and deciphering the world at large. For example, in many languages there are words that are not precisely translatable and users therefore are more likely to see events and objects differently. As the world becomes increasingly globalised, I would argue that the importance of a plurality of perspectives only becomes more crucial. If such languages die out, they will likely never be resurrected and the world will be poorer for the loss.
In conclusion, regardless of the potential challenges faced in preserving minority languages, their continued existence is essential to diversity. Governments must therefore make every effort to ensure their survival.
Answers
of the belief believe
worthwhile important
prioritise place more importance on
preservation keep alive
various different types
minority languages less widely spoken languages
despite regardless of
limited potential efficacy no much actual effect
sentiment feeling
justifiable reasonable
detractors critics
proposal suggestion
investment money, time, etc.
major impact large effect
minority small group
earn a living make money
conveniences modern luxury’s
modern world today’s world and lifestyles
require knowledge need to know about
most widely spoken language common languages
indigenous peoples groups native to a country
desire want
move away leave
hometowns where you are from
modern workforce working at companies, in cities, etc.
Hmong an ethnic minority from Asia
typically usually
seeks tries to
native tongue native language
traditional ways of life old modes of living
integrate join in
dominant national culture main culture of a country
efforts trying
oppose go against
desire want to
successful works out
nonetheless regardless
cultural value important for the culture
uniquely represents new ways of showing
codifies makes into a symbol, language
external world outside world, reality
verb structures how verbs are used
intonation the tone of your voice
rhythm the musical quality of a language
present a singular way show a unique method
interacting with communicating with
deciphering figuring out
at large in general
not precisely translatable can’t be put in another language
users people who speak a language
increasingly globalised more and more similar
plurality of perspectives different ways of seeing the world
crucial really important
die out become extinct
resurrected brought back to life
poorer for the loss the world loses out
regardless of despite
potential challenges faced possible difficulties
continued existence stay alive
diversity differences
make every effort try hard
ensure make sure of
survival remain alive
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:
ɒv ðə bɪˈliːf
ˈwɜːθˈwaɪl
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz
ˌprɛzə(ː)ˈveɪʃən
ˈveərɪəs
maɪˈnɒrɪti ˈlæŋgwɪʤɪz
dɪsˈpaɪt
ˈlɪmɪtɪd pəʊˈtɛnʃəl ˈɛfɪkəsi
ˈsɛntɪmənt
ˈʤʌstɪfaɪəbl
dɪˈtræktəz
prəˈpəʊzəl
ɪnˈvɛstmənt
ˈmeɪʤər ˈɪmpækt
maɪˈnɒrɪti
ɜːn ə ˈlɪvɪŋ
kənˈviːniənsɪz
ˈmɒdən wɜːld
rɪˈkwaɪə ˈnɒlɪʤ
məʊst ˈwaɪdli ˈspəʊkən ˈlæŋgwɪʤ
ɪnˈdɪʤɪnəs ˈpiːplz
dɪˈzaɪə
muːv əˈweɪ
ˈhəʊmˈtaʊnz
ˈmɒdən ˈwɜːkˌfɔːs
hʌmʌŋ
ˈtɪpɪk(ə)li
siːks
ˈneɪtɪv tʌŋ
trəˈdɪʃənl weɪz ɒv laɪf
ˈɪntɪgreɪt
ˈdɒmɪnənt ˈnæʃənl ˈkʌlʧə
ˈɛfəts
əˈpəʊz
dɪˈzaɪə
səkˈsɛsfʊl
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ˈkʌlʧərəl ˈvæljuː
juːˈniːkli ˌrɛprɪˈzɛnts
ˈkɒdɪfaɪz
ɛksˈtɜːnl wɜːld
vɜːb ˈstrʌkʧəz
ˌɪntəʊˈneɪʃən
ˈrɪðəm
ˈprɛznt ə ˈsɪŋgjʊlə weɪ
ˌɪntərˈæktɪŋ wɪð
dɪˈsaɪfərɪŋ
æt lɑːʤ
nɒt prɪˈsaɪsli trænsˈleɪtəbl
ˈjuːzəz
ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˌgləʊb(ə)laɪˈzeɪd
plʊəˈrælɪti ɒv pəˈspɛktɪvz
ˈkruːʃəl
daɪ aʊt
ˌrɛzəˈrɛktɪd
ˈpʊərə fɔː ðə lɒs
rɪˈgɑːdlɪs ɒv
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl ˈʧælɪnʤɪz feɪst
kənˈtɪnju(ː)d ɪgˈzɪstəns
daɪˈvɜːsɪti
meɪk ˈɛvri ˈɛfət
ɪnˈʃʊə
səˈvaɪvəl
Vocabulary Practice
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
Many are o_______________f that it would be w___________e for governments to p__________e the p_______________n of v__________s m___________________s. In my opinion, d______________________________y this s___________t is j_____________e.
D____________s of this p____________l argue that i____________t is unlikely to have a m________________t. In order for m__________y groups to e____________g and enjoy the c_____________s of the m____________d, they r_________________e of a nation’s m____________________________e. In fact, many i_____________________s themselves d________e to m_____________y from their h____________s to live in large cities and join the m________________e. For example, in the H______g people of Southeast Asia, it is t__________y the older generation that s________s to communicate in their n_______________e and preserve t______________________e. The younger generation, generally, would rather learn the most useful language and i____________e with the d_________________________e. Therefore e________s by governments o________e what individuals d_________e and are unlikely to be s____________l.
N_____________s, there is c________________e in preserving a language. A language u__________________s and c__________s the e______________d. Everything from the v_______________s and choice of nouns to the i____________n and r________m of the language p______________________y of i__________________h and d________________g the world a__________e. For example, in many languages there are words that are n___________________________e and u_________s therefore are more likely to see events and objects differently. As the world becomes i_________________________d, I would argue that the importance of a p___________________________s only becomes more c__________l. If such languages d_________t, they will likely never be r_________________d and the world will be p____________________s.
In conclusion, r_________________f the p_________________________d in preserving minority languages, their c________________________e is essential to d_____________y. Governments must therefore m____________________t to e_______________e their s_______________l.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:
Reading Practice
Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:
https://www.theatlantic.com/international/archive/2012/07/the-disappearing-languages-of-asia/259530/
Speaking Practice
Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:
Talk about a language you would like to learn. Include
What is the language
Why you want to learn it
If you will learn it
Writing Practice
Practice with the same basic topic below and then check with my sample answer:
Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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