This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of robots helping at home and work from the real IELTS exam.
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IELTS Essay: Robots Helping at Home and Work
Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the robotics industry is beginning to penetrate both home and work environments. In my opinion, advances in robotics generally and artificial intelligence more specifically have their merits but are isolating.
Proponents of these innovations point to the eradication of inefficiencies. This applies to both workplaces and homes. At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security. As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel. In homes, the situation is similar as robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.
Nonetheless, the growth of a robotics industry exacerbates a modern trend towards isolation. People today are seemingly more connected than ever before thanks to the internet and social media, however, real world connection is on the decline. The workplace and home are two of the last remaining spaces to build meaningful, interpersonal relationships. A rise in the number of robots, as is the case in Japan where it is now possible to purchase a robot companion, will lead to a concomitant decrease in human relations. It seems unlikely that people would completely stop talking to each other but the pervasiveness of online life can serve as a warning that humanity is only too willing to subsist on one-way, inauthentic relationships.
In conclusion, despite the benefits robots bring for productivity, their isolating effect will make them a negative on level. Individuals must therefore strive to maintain strong human relationships.
Analysis
1. Nowadays, the robotics industry is beginning to penetrate both home and work environments. 2. In my opinion, advances in robotics generally and artificial intelligence more specifically have their merits but are isolating.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Proponents of these innovations point to the eradication of inefficiencies. This applies to both workplaces and homes. 2. At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security. 3. As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel. 4. In homes, the situation is similar as robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific examples.
- Keep developing it fully.
1. Nonetheless, the growth of a robotics industry exacerbates a modern trend towards isolation. 2. People today are seemingly more connected than ever before thanks to the internet and social media, however, real world connection is on the decline. 3. The workplace and home are two of the last remaining spaces to build meaningful, interpersonal relationships. 4. A rise in the number of robots, as is the case in Japan where it is now possible to purchase a robot companion, will lead to a concomitant decrease in human relations. 5. It seems unlikely that people would completely stop talking to each other but the pervasiveness of online life can serve as a warning that humanity is only too willing to subsist on one-way, inauthentic relationships.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Continue developing it…
- as fully as possible!
1. In conclusion, despite the benefits robots bring for productivity, their isolating effect will make them a negative on level. 2. Individuals must therefore strive to maintain strong human relationships.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
Nowadays, the robotics industry is beginning to penetrate both home and work environments. In my opinion, advances in robotics generally and artificial intelligence more specifically have their merits but are isolating.
Proponents of these innovations point to the eradication of inefficiencies. This applies to both workplaces and homes. At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security. As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel. In homes, the situation is similar as robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.
Nonetheless, the growth of a robotics industry exacerbates a modern trend towards isolation. People today are seemingly more connected than ever before thanks to the internet and social media, however, real world connection is on the decline. The workplace and home are two of the last remaining spaces to build meaningful, interpersonal relationships. A rise in the number of robots, as is the case in Japan where it is now possible to purchase a robot companion, will lead to a concomitant decrease in human relations. It seems unlikely that people would completely stop talking to each other but the pervasiveness of online life can serve as a warning that humanity is only too willing to subsist on one-way, inauthentic relationships.
In conclusion, despite the benefits robots bring for productivity, their isolating effect will make them a negative on level. Individuals must therefore strive to maintain strong human relationships.
Answers
robotics industry companies working in making robots
penetrate enter the markets, spread into
work environments offices, factories, etc.
advances innovations
generally overall
artificial intelligence smart computers/robots
merits benefits
isolating staying all alone
proponents supporters
innovations advances
eradication getting rid of
inefficiencies not making good use of resources
range of responsibilities many different duties
carried out doing them
ranging from including
photocopying making copies of papers
slightly more robust tasks a little more complex duties
data input putting numbers into a computer
security protecting a place
self-sufficient can work on their own
efficiency not wasting resources
prioritise consider more important
most excel do their best work
situation context
take over replace
chores cleaning up at home
freeing up allowing for
focus on concentrate on
pleasurable pastimes hobbies
exacerbates makes it worse
modern trend pattern these days
towards in the direction of
isolation alone
seemingly ostensible
connected brought together
thanks to due to
real world connection talking in real life
on the decline getting worse
last remaining spaces final areas
build strengthen
interpersonal between people
as is the case in for example
now possible happens at the moment
concomitant related
human relations people together, bonds between people
pervasiveness common
can serve as a warning is a possible sign that this will happen
only too willing to too happy to settle to do this
subsist make do with
one-way not real interaction
inauthentic not real
isolating effect making people stay alone
on level in general
strive try for
maintain keep up
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:
rəʊˈbɒtɪks ˈɪndəstri
ˈpɛnɪtreɪt
wɜːk ɪnˈvaɪərənmənts
ədˈvɑːnsɪz
ˈʤɛnərəli
ˌɑːtɪˈfɪʃ(ə)l ɪnˈtɛlɪʤəns
ˈmɛrɪts
ˈaɪsəleɪtɪŋ
prəˈpəʊnənts
ˌɪnəʊˈveɪʃənz
ɪˌrædɪˈkeɪʃən
ˌɪnɪˈfɪʃənsiz
reɪnʤ ɒv rɪsˌpɒnsəˈbɪlɪtiz
ˈkærid aʊt
ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm
ˈfəʊtəʊˌkɒpiɪŋ
ˈslaɪtli mɔː rəʊˈbʌst tɑːsks
ˈdeɪtə ˈɪnpʊt
sɪˈkjʊərɪti
sɛlf-səˈfɪʃənt
ɪˈfɪʃənsi
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz
məʊst ɪkˈsɛl
ˌsɪtjʊˈeɪʃən
teɪk ˈəʊvə
ʧɔːz
ˈfriːɪŋ ʌp
ˈfəʊkəs ɒn
ˈplɛʒərəbl ˈpɑːstaɪmz
ɛksˈæsə(ː)beɪts
ˈmɒdən trɛnd
təˈwɔːdz
ˌaɪsəʊˈleɪʃən
ˈsiːmɪŋli
kəˈnɛktɪd
θæŋks tuː
rɪəl wɜːld kəˈnɛkʃən
ɒn ðə dɪˈklaɪn
lɑːst rɪˈmeɪnɪŋ ˈspeɪsɪz
bɪld
ˌɪntəˈpɜːsən(ə)l
æz ɪz ðə keɪs ɪn
naʊ ˈpɒsəbl
kənˈkɒmɪtənt
ˈhjuːmən rɪˈleɪʃənz
pɜːˈveɪsɪvnəs
kæn sɜːv æz ə ˈwɔːnɪŋ
ˈəʊnli tuː ˈwɪlɪŋ tuː
səbˈsɪst
wʌn-weɪ
ɪn ɔːˈθɛntɪk
ˈaɪsəleɪtɪŋ ɪˈfɛkt
ɒn ˈlɛvl
straɪv
meɪnˈteɪn
Vocabulary Practice
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
Nowadays, the r__________________y is beginning to p___________e both home and w____________________s. In my opinion, a___________s in robotics g_____________y and a_______________________e more specifically have their m_______s but are i___________g.
P______________s of these i_______________s point to the e______________n of i_________________s. This applies to both workplaces and homes. At work, there are a r_________________________s being c_______________t by humans that could be done by robots r______________m the transportation of goods and p______________g to s_____________________________s such as d____________t and s__________y. As artificial intelligence becomes more s______________t it is likely that companies will be able to increase e___________y and humans can p____________e the areas where they m__________l. In homes, the s__________n is similar as robots may be able to t___________r c_______s such as washing the dishing and cleaning, f_____________p individuals to f__________n more p______________________s.
Nonetheless, the growth of a robotics industry e_____________s a m___________________________n. People today are s_____________y more c__________d than ever before t_____________o the internet and social media, however, r_________________________n is o_______________e. The workplace and home are two of the l______________________s to b_______d meaningful, i____________________l relationships. A rise in the number of robots, a______________________n Japan where it is n_____________________e to purchase a robot companion, will lead to a c_______________t decrease in h____________________s. It seems unlikely that people would completely stop talking to each other but the p_________________s of online life c_____________________g that humanity is o_________________________t on o______________y, i_____________c relationships.
In conclusion, despite the benefits robots bring for productivity, their i________________t will make them a negative o____________l. Individuals must therefore s_________e to m___________n strong human relationships.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:
Reading Practice
Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:
https://www.wired.com/story/covid-19-robot-companions/
Speaking Practice
Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:
Friends
- Do you talk about yourself to your friends?
- Do you like to listen or talk with your friends?
- Do you often change your mind about your friends?
- Is it important to have friends?
Writing Practice
Practice with the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:
Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
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