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IELTS Essay: The Internet and Books
In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a fact of modern life that most information today is stored online, rather than in physical books as it was in the past. In my opinion, this is a negative overall despite its obvious conveniences.
Supporters of this trend can point to the numerous ways knowledge kept online can be disseminated and used. Online information is almost universally accessible, narrowing socioeconomic differences in society and allowing for various conveniences. First of all, users can find relevant information on search engines from a wide range of sources including user-generated sites like Wikipedia to news outlets like The New York Times and academic journals as well. Once an individual locates the information they are looking for, it is also easier to search within that article, share it with others, have it wherever they go and store more than would be possible if it were a hard copy.
Nonetheless, storing information online encourages a dependence on computer technology that is harmful for the human mind. In the past, if a person wanted to research a given topic, they would have to check out a library book or talk with an expert. This process was much slower and open to the possibility of bias. However, it also meant that individuals were more conscientious and patiently learned from fuller, more nuanced sources. Nowadays, most people read short articles, hastily written to attract more clicks and generate advertising revenue. These tap into a fundamental human need to be constantly engaged and feeling pleasure. Over time, this has led to a generation addicted to devices, lacking the healthy habits engendered by careful research and study.
In conclusion, despite the handiness of online information, the impact on the human psyche makes this a negative trend on level. Individuals must themselves find ways to counter these potentially injurious effects.
Analysis
1. It is a fact of modern life that most information today is stored online, rather than in physical books as it was in the past. 2. In my opinion, this is a negative overall despite its obvious conveniences.
- Paraphrase what the overall topic is about.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Supporters of this trend can point to the numerous ways knowledge kept online can be disseminated and used. 2. Online information is almost universally accessible, narrowing socioeconomic differences in society and allowing for various conveniences. 3. First of all, users can find relevant information on search engines from a wide range of sources including user-generated sites like Wikipedia to news outlets like The New York Times and academic journals as well. 4. Once an individual locates the information they are looking for, it is also easier to search within that article, share it with others, have it wherever they go and store more than would be possible if it were a hard copy.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Begin to develop it with specific examples.
- Finish developing the same main idea fully.
1. Nonetheless, storing information online encourages a dependence on computer technology that is harmful for the human mind. 2. In the past, if a person wanted to research a given topic, they would have to check out a library book or talk with an expert. 3. This process was much slower and open to the possibility of bias. 4. However, it also meant that individuals were more conscientious and patiently learned from fuller, more nuanced sources. 5. Nowadays, most people read short articles, hastily written to attract more clicks and generate advertising revenue. 6. These tap into a fundamental human need to be constantly engaged and feeling pleasure. 7. Over time, this has led to a generation addicted to devices, lacking the healthy habits engendered by careful research and study.
- Write another topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea again.
- Begin to add detail.
- Use specific support and don’t switch to new main idea.
- Use specific examples as support
- Draw out the results/conclusions of your examples.
- Conclude with a strong statement.
1. In conclusion, despite the handiness of online information, the impact on the human psyche makes this a negative trend on level. 2. Individuals must themselves find ways to counter these potentially injurious effects.
- Summarise your ideas and repeat your opinion.
- Add a final thought/detail. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?
It is a fact of modern life that most information today is stored online, rather than in physical books as it was in the past. In my opinion, this is a negative overall despite its obvious conveniences.
Supporters of this trend can point to the numerous ways knowledge kept online can be disseminated and used. Online information is almost universally accessible, narrowing socioeconomic differences in society and allowing for various conveniences. First of all, users can find relevant information on search engines from a wide range of sources including user-generated sites like Wikipedia to news outlets like The New York Times and academic journals as well. Once an individual locates the information they are looking for, it is also easier to search within that article, share it with others, have it wherever they go and store more than would be possible if it were a hard copy.
Nonetheless, storing information online encourages a dependence on computer technology that is harmful for the human mind. In the past, if a person wanted to research a given topic, they would have to check out a library book or talk with an expert. This process was much slower and open to the possibility of bias. However, it also meant that individuals were more conscientious and patiently learned from fuller, more nuanced sources. Nowadays, most people read short articles, hastily written to attract more clicks and generate advertising revenue. These tap into a fundamental human need to be constantly engaged and feeling pleasure. Over time, this has led to a generation addicted to devices, lacking the healthy habits engendered by careful research and study.
In conclusion, despite the handiness of online information, the impact on the human psyche makes this a negative trend on level. Individuals must themselves find ways to counter these potentially injurious effects.
Answers
a fact of modern life true about the world now
stored online kept on the internet
physical books real books
negative overall bad in general
obvious conveniences clearly helpful
supporters of this trend those in favour of it
point to argue about
numerous ways many methods
disseminated spread around
almost universally accessible nearly used by everyone
narrowing socioeconomic differences less difference between classes
allowing for opening up the possibility of
first of all firstly
relevant information what you are looking for
search engines Google, etc.
wide range of sources many places to find information
user-generated sites websites where people visiting create the content
news outlets the media
academic journals formal papers, magazines
locates finds
search within find inside of
share give to others
more than would be possible couldn’t happen with
hard copy real edition
nonetheless regardless
encourages makes people want to
dependence can’t stop using
harmful injurious
a given topic whatever they are looking up
check out take out
expert person who knows a lot
process steps
possibility of bias maybe prejudiced
conscientious careful
patiently slowly and carefully
fuller, more nuanced sources more complete articles, books
hastily written quickly written
attract more clicks get more people to go to it
generate advertising revenue make money
tap into exploit
fundamental human basic human
constantly engaged always occupied
feeling pleasure happy
over time in the long-term
led to caused
generation group of people around the same age
addicted to devices can’t stop using phones
lacking not having
healthy habits good habits
engendered by created by
despite regardless of
handiness convenience
human psyche human mind, psychology
on level overall
counter fight against
potentially injurious effects possibly harmful results
Pronunciation
ə fækt ɒv ˈmɒdən laɪf
stɔːd ˈɒnˌlaɪn
ˈfɪzɪkəl bʊks
ˈnɛgətɪv ˈəʊvərɔːl
ˈɒbvɪəs kənˈviːniənsɪz
səˈpɔːtəz ɒv ðɪs trɛnd
pɔɪnt tuː
ˈnjuːmərəs weɪz
dɪˈsɛmɪneɪtɪd
ˈɔːlməʊst ˌjuːnɪˈvɜːsəli əkˈsɛsəbl
ˈnærəʊɪŋ ˌsəʊsɪəʊˌɛkəˈnɒmɪk ˈdɪfrənsɪz
əˈlaʊɪŋ fɔː
fɜːst ɒv ɔːl
ˈrɛlɪvənt ˌɪnfəˈmeɪʃən
sɜːʧ ˈɛnʤɪnz
waɪd reɪnʤ ɒv ˈsɔːsɪz
ˈjuːzə-ˈʤɛnəreɪtɪd saɪts
njuːz ˈaʊtlɛts
ˌækəˈdɛmɪk ˈʤɜːnlz
ləʊˈkeɪts
sɜːʧ wɪˈðɪn
ʃeə
mɔː ðæn wʊd biː ˈpɒsəbl
hɑːd ˈkɒpi
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ɪnˈkʌrɪʤɪz
dɪˈpɛndəns
ˈhɑːmfʊl
ə ˈgɪvn ˈtɒpɪk
ʧɛk aʊt
ˈɛkspɜːt
ˈprəʊsɛs
ˌpɒsəˈbɪlɪti ɒv ˈbaɪəs
ˌkɒnʃɪˈɛnʃəs
ˈpeɪʃəntli
ˈfʊlə, mɔː nju(ː)ˈɑːnst ˈsɔːsɪz
ˈheɪstɪli ˈrɪtn
əˈtrækt mɔː klɪks
ˈʤɛnəreɪt ˈædvətaɪzɪŋ ˈrɛvɪnjuː
tæp ˈɪntuː
ˌfʌndəˈmɛntl ˈhjuːmən
ˈkɒnstəntli ɪnˈgeɪʤd
ˈfiːlɪŋ ˈplɛʒə
ˈəʊvə taɪm
lɛd tuː
ˌʤɛnəˈreɪʃən
əˈdɪktɪd tuː dɪˈvaɪsɪz
ˈlækɪŋ
ˈhɛlθi ˈhæbɪts
ɪnˈʤɛndəd baɪ
dɪsˈpaɪt
ˈhændɪnəs
ˈhjuːmən ˈsaɪki(ː)
ɒn ˈlɛvl
ˈkaʊntə
pəʊˈtɛnʃəli ɪnˈʤʊərɪəs ɪˈfɛkts
Vocabulary Practice
Remember and fill in the blanks:
It is a________________________e that most information today is s______________e, rather than in p_________________s as it was in the past. In my opinion, this is a n____________________l despite its o____________________________s.
S__________________________d can p__________o the n__________________s knowledge kept online can be d___________________d and used. Online information is a_____________________________e, n_______________________________________s in society and a___________________r various conveniences. F____________l, users can find r________________________n on s__________________s from a w_________________________s including u____________________s like Wikipedia to n_________________s like The New York Times and a____________________s as well. Once an individual l___________s the information they are looking for, it is also easier to s_________________n that article, s_________e it with others, have it wherever they go and store m__________________________e if it were a h____________y.
N________________s, storing information online e_________________s a d________________e on computer technology that is h______________l for the human mind. In the past, if a person wanted to research a_______________c, they would have to c_____________t a library book or talk with an e_________t. This p________s was much slower and open to the p_________________s. However, it also meant that individuals were more c________________s and p____________y learned from f________________________________s. Nowadays, most people read short articles, h_______________n to a_____________________s and g___________________________________e. These t_____________o a f_____________________________n need to be c_____________________d and f_________________________e. O___________e, this has l_______o a g________________n a______________________s, l____________g the h________________s e__________________y careful research and study.
In conclusion, d_________e the h____________s of online information, the impact on the h______________e makes this a negative trend o__________l. Individuals must themselves find ways to c___________r these p_______________________________s.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic below and use these ideas to practice:
Reading Practice
Read more about doing research online here and practice with these ideas:
https://www.elearners.com/education-resources/online-learning/how-to-conduct-research-online/
Speaking Practice
Practice with the following questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:
The Internet
- How often do most people use the internet?
- Are there drawbacks to its overuse?
- What kind of information can people find online?
- How has this changed the way that people get their information?
- How will the internet change society in the future?
Writing Practice
Practice with the writing below then check with my sample answer:
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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