This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of fast food becoming cheaper and more available and the advantages/disadvantages.
There is one element to this question that makes it a bit tricky.
It asks for advantageS and disadvantageS – plural.
That means you must have 2 per paragraph and still development them fully.
Read below to see how I solved this problem.
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IELTS Essay: Fast Food
In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available.
Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?
Many today are of the belief that the ubiquity of fast food provides enough enjoyment and economic positives to outweigh its impact on public health. In my opinion, the disadvantages related to health make this a negative development.
Those supporting the fast food industry typically point to the pleasure consumers derive and the employment it provides. There is little to argue about in terms of enjoyment. Fast food is affordable and tastes good. That explains its popularity and makes it accessible for people from even the lowest socioeconomic backgrounds. Moreover, there are obvious economic benefits. Companies like McDonald’s, Burger King, Baskin Robbins, and Domino’s Pizza are some of the largest employers globally. Their economic contributions extend beyond providing poorly paid jobs as they are taxed and thereby strengthen the federal budgets of both developing and developed nations.
Nonetheless, fast food has a huge impact in the health sector. Most tangibly, this concerns to obesity. Studies have shown that obesity rates soar in countries where fast food has become entrenched in the local market. The best known example of this is in the United States, where obesity is reaching epidemic proportions. Related and often symptomatic drawbacks include cardiovascular disease, diabetes, and high blood pressure. Foods high in fat, sugar, and overprocessed ingredients have been proven to exacerbate these conditions, with heart disease now the single greatest cause of death around the world. This cannot be blamed entirely on fast food but there are very few healthy options on most fast food menus and the majority of companies specialise in quintessentially unhealthy foods like deep fried chicken, cheeseburgers, pizzas, and tacos.
In conclusion, despite the boons for enjoyment and the economy, fast food is a negative taken as a whole given its impact on well-being. It is therefore important to regulate fast food companies to curb their influence.
Analysis
1. Many today are of the belief that the ubiquity of fast food provides enough enjoyment and economic positives to outweigh its impact on public health. 2. In my opinion, the disadvantages related to health make this a negative development.
- Paraphrase the overall topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Those supporting the fast food industry typically point to the pleasure consumers derive and the employment it provides. 2. There is little to argue about in terms of enjoyment. 3. Fast food is affordable and tastes good. 4. That explains its popularity and makes it accessible for people from even the lowest socioeconomic backgrounds. 5. Moreover, there are obvious economic benefits. 6. Companies like McDonald’s, Burger King, Baskin Robbins, and Domino’s Pizza are some of the largest employers globally. 7. Their economic contributions extend beyond providing poorly paid jobs as they are taxed and thereby strengthen the federal budgets of both developing and developed nations.
- Write a clear topic sentence with your main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop your main idea with specific support.
- Continue to develop the idea.
- This question asks for advantages/disadvantages so make sure that you switch to a second main idea.
- Develop the second main idea as fully as possible.
1. Nonetheless, fast food has a huge impact in the health sector. 2. Most tangibly, this concerns to obesity. 3. Studies have shown that obesity rates soar in countries where fast food has become entrenched in the local market. 4. The best known example of this is in the United States, where obesity is reaching epidemic proportions. 5. Related and often symptomatic drawbacks include cardiovascular disease, diabetes, and high blood pressure. 6. Foods high in fat, sugar, and overprocessed ingredients have been proven to exacerbate these conditions, with heart disease now the single greatest cause of death around the world. 7. This cannot be blamed entirely on fast food but there are very few healthy options on most fast food menus and the majority of companies specialise in quintessentially unhealthy foods like deep fried chicken, cheeseburgers, pizzas, and tacos.
- Write another simple topic sentence with a new main idea.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop your main idea – using studies/research are a good way to start.
- Give a specific example.
- Use specific details to develop your example.
- Switch to a related or similar disadvantage.
- This paragraph is longer because it is the idea I agree with.
1. In conclusion, despite the boons for enjoyment and the economy, fast food is a negative taken as a whole given its impact on well-being. 2. It is therefore important to regulate fast food companies to curb their influence.
- Summarise your main ideas and repeat your opinion.
- Add a final thought/detail. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?
Many today are of the belief that the ubiquity of fast food provides enough enjoyment and economic positives to outweigh its impact on public health. In my opinion, the disadvantages related to health make this a negative development.
Those supporting the fast food industry typically point to the pleasure consumers derive and the employment it provides. There is little to argue about in terms of enjoyment. Fast food is affordable and tastes good. That explains its popularity and makes it accessible for people from even the lowest socioeconomic backgrounds. Moreover, there are obvious economic benefits. Companies like McDonald’s, Burger King, Baskin Robbins, and Domino’s Pizza are some of the largest employers globally. Their economic contributions extend beyond providing poorly paid jobs as they are taxed and thereby strengthen the federal budgets of both developing and developed nations.
Nonetheless, fast food has a huge impact in the health sector. Most tangibly, this concerns to obesity. Studies have shown that obesity rates soar in countries where fast food has become entrenched in the local market. The best known example of this is in the United States, where obesity is reaching epidemic proportions. Related and often symptomatic drawbacks include cardiovascular disease, diabetes, and high blood pressure. Foods high in fat, sugar, and overprocessed ingredients have been proven to exacerbate these conditions, with heart disease now the single greatest cause of death around the world. This cannot be blamed entirely on fast food but there are very few healthy options on most fast food menus and the majority of companies specialise in quintessentially unhealthy foods like deep fried chicken, cheeseburgers, pizzas, and tacos.
In conclusion, despite the boons for enjoyment and the economy, fast food is a negative taken as a whole given its impact on well-being. It is therefore important to regulate fast food companies to curb their influence.
Answers
of the belief believe
ubiquity common
enjoyment like a lot
economic positives helps the economy
outweigh stronger than
public health wellness of most people
related to concern
supporting arguing for
typically point to usually cite
pleasure consumers derive joy people get from
employment jobs
provides create
little to argue about not much to disagree about
in terms of as it relates to
affordable cheap
explains a reason for
accessible can get
lowest socioeconomic backgrounds poor people
are some of the are among the
globally around the world
economic contributions extend beyond money they generate also includes
taxed pay money to the government
strengthen make stronger
federal budgets money the government has to spend
developing poorer countries
developed nations rich countries
health sector health
most tangibly most obviously and clearly
concerns relate to
obesity being very fat
studies have shown research indicates
obesity rates soar more people become fat
entrenched become a strong part of
local market economy
the best known example of this is clearest instance is
reaching epidemic proportions becoming an emergency
symptomatic drawbacks resultant disadvantages
cardiovascular disease heart disease
diabetes a condition related to eating too much sugary food
high blood pressure heart conditions
foods high in fat food with a lot of fat in them
overprocessed ingredients foods being manufactured repeatedly
exacerbate make worse
heart disease heart conditions
single greatest cause of death around the world #1 killer
blamed entirely 100% at fault for
healthy options healthy alternatives
specialise focus on
quintessentially unhealthy definitively unhealthy
boons advantages
taken as a whole given considered overall considering
well-being health
regulate control
curb limit
influence effect
Pronunciation
ɒv ðə bɪˈliːf
ju(ː)ˈbɪkwɪti
ɪnˈʤɔɪmənt
ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˈpɒzətɪvz
aʊtˈweɪ
ˈpʌblɪk hɛlθ
rɪˈleɪtɪd tuː
səˈpɔːtɪŋ
ˈtɪpɪk(ə)li pɔɪnt tuː
ˈplɛʒə kənˈsjuːməz dɪˈraɪv
ɪmˈplɔɪmənt
prəˈvaɪdz
ˈlɪtl tuː ˈɑːgjuː əˈbaʊt
ɪn tɜːmz ɒv
əˈfɔːdəbl
ɪksˈpleɪnz
əkˈsɛsəbl
ˈləʊɪst ˌsəʊsɪəʊˌɛkəˈnɒmɪk ˈbækgraʊndz
ɑː sʌm ɒv ðiː
ˈgləʊbəli
ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˌkɒntrɪˈbjuːʃənz ɪksˈtɛnd bɪˈjɒnd
tækst
ˈstrɛŋθən
ˈfɛdərəl ˈbʌʤɪts
dɪˈvɛləpɪŋ
dɪˈvɛləpt ˈneɪʃənz
hɛlθ ˈsɛktə
məʊst ˈtænʤəbli
kənˈsɜːnz
əʊˈbiːsɪti
ˈstʌdiz hæv ʃəʊn
əʊˈbiːsɪti reɪts sɔː
ɪnˈtrɛnʧt
ˈləʊkəl ˈmɑːkɪt
ðə bɛst nəʊn ɪgˈzɑːmpl ɒv ðɪs ɪz
ˈriːʧɪŋ ˌɛpɪˈdɛmɪk prəˈpɔːʃənz
ˌsɪmptəˈmætɪk ˈdrɔːbæks
ˌkɑːdɪəʊˈvæskjʊlə dɪˈziːz
ˌdaɪəˈbiːtiːz
haɪ blʌd ˈprɛʃə
fuːdz haɪ ɪn fæt
ˈəʊvə ˈprəʊsɛst ɪnˈgriːdiənts
ɛksˈæsə(ː)beɪt
hɑːt dɪˈziːz
ˈsɪŋgl ˈgreɪtɪst kɔːz ɒv dɛθ əˈraʊnd ðə wɜːld
bleɪmd ɪnˈtaɪəli
ˈhɛlθi ˈɒpʃənz
ˈspɛʃ(ə)laɪz
ˌkwɪntɪˈsɛnʃəli ʌnˈhɛlθi
buːnz
ˈteɪkən æz ə həʊl ˈgɪvn
wɛl-ˈbiːɪŋ
ˈrɛgjʊleɪt
kɜːb
ˈɪnflʊəns
Vocabulary Practice
Remember and fill in the blanks:
Many today are o___________f that the u___________y of fast food provides enough e_____________t and e_______________s to o_________h its impact on p_______________h. In my opinion, the disadvantages r______________o health make this a negative development.
Those s_____________g the fast food industry t_______________o the p_________________________e and the e___________t it p__________s. There is l_____________________t i_______________f enjoyment. Fast food is a_____________e and tastes good. That e___________s its popularity and makes it a____________e for people from even the l___________________________s. Moreover, there are obvious economic benefits. Companies like McDonald’s, Burger King, Baskin Robbins, and Domino’s Pizza a____________________e largest employers g____________y. Their e_____________________________________d providing poorly paid jobs as they are t_________d and thereby s_____________n the f_______________s of both d_______________g and d_________________s.
Nonetheless, fast food has a huge impact in the h______________r. M_________________y, this c___________s to o___________y. S_______________n that o__________________r in countries where fast food has become e_____________d in the l_______________t. T_____________________________s in the United States, where obesity is r_____________________________s. Related and often s_______________________s include c____________________e, d_____________s, and h_________________e. F__________________t, sugar, and o__________________________s have been proven to e________________e these conditions, with h___________________e now the s_____________________________________d. This cannot be b_________________y on fast food but there are very few h_________________s on most fast food menus and the majority of companies s_____________e in q________________________y foods like deep fried chicken, cheeseburgers, pizzas, and tacos.
In conclusion, despite the b_________s for enjoyment and the economy, fast food is a negative t______________________n its impact on w__________g. It is therefore important to r___________e fast food companies to c______b their i_________________e.
Listening Practice
Learn more about fast food from around the world below:
Reading Practice
Read some interesting articles from Vice on fast food:
https://www.vice.com/en_us/topic/fast-food
Speaking Practice
Talk about the following related topics from the IELTS speaking test:
Baking
- Did you learn to bake as a child?
- Do you bake often?
- What foods are baked in your country?
- Is baking popular in your country?
Writing Practice
Write about the following topic then check with my sample answer:
Some feel that countries should produce most of the food that is eaten in their country and import as little as possible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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