IELTS Task 1 Essay: Average Daily Sales by Serving
The bar chart details average daily sales (by total number of servings) at a restaurant according to season. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that warmer food products where much more popular in the winter, while the inverse is true in the summer. Hot coffee is the most common order generally and salads’ popularity does not vary according to the season.
There are approximately 75 servings of hot coffee sold during the winter and just 30 in the summer. Similarly, soup is twice as popular in the summer months with 50 orders compared to only 25 in winter.
In contrast, there are hardly any iced coffees sold in winter and nearly 40 purchased in the summer. This is comparable to ice creams bought (38 in summer) though the winter figure is relatively high (27). The only exception to the pattern of seasonal ordering is salads with roughly 25 orders for each half of the year.
Analysis
1. The bar chart details average daily sales (by total number of servings) at a restaurant according to season. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that warmer food products where much more popular in the winter, while the inverse is true in the summer. 3. Hot coffee is the most common order generally and salads’ popularity does not vary according to the season.
Paraphrase what the bar chart shows.
Write a clear overview summarising the differences and the overall trend.
This one is a little complex so it needs a second sentence for the overview.
1. There are approximately 75 servings of hot coffee sold during the winter and just 30 in the summer. 2. Similarly, soup is twice as popular in the summer months with 50 orders compared to only 25 in winter.
Begin writing about the data for the first categories.
Compare between each sentence.
1. In contrast, there are hardly any iced coffees sold in winter and nearly 40 purchased in the summer. 2. This is comparable to ice creams bought (38 in summer) though the winter figure is relatively high (27). 3. The only exception to the pattern of seasonal ordering is salads with roughly 25 orders for each half of the year.
Write about the final other parts of the graph – include everything!
Include all the data.
Mention any exceptions.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
The bar chart details average daily sales (by total number of servings) at a restaurant according to season. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that warmer food products where much more popular in the winter, while the inverse is true in the summer. Hot coffee is the most common order generally and salads’ popularity does not vary according to the season.
There are approximately 75 servings of hot coffee sold during the winter and just 30 in the summer. Similarly, soup is twice as popular in the summer months with 50 orders compared to only 25 in winter.
In contrast, there are hardly any iced coffees sold in winter and nearly 40 purchased in the summer. This is comparable to ice creams bought (38 in summer) though the winter figure is relatively high (27). The only exception to the pattern of seasonal ordering is salads with roughly 25 orders for each half of the year.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
details average daily sales shows how much was sold per day
total number of servings number of items sold
according to season depending on the time of year
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall
winter colder months
while the inverse is true in but the opposite is true for
summer warmer months
common popular
generally slowly
popularity how common it is
not vary according to the season not change because of the weather
approximately about
just only
Similarly not different
twice as popular in two times as common
compared to only relative to just
In contrast in comparison
hardly only just
comparable to similar to
though but
relatively high comparably bigger
The only exception to the pattern the only different area is
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
The bar chart d_______________________s (by t__________________s) at a restaurant a______________________n. L____________________________________________________________t warmer food products where much more popular in the w_______r, w____________________n the s________r. Hot coffee is the most c_________n order g___________y and salads’ p_________y does n_____________________________________n.
There are a______________y 75 servings of hot coffee sold during the winter and j___t 30 in the summer. S__________y, soup is t______________n the summer months with 50 orders c______________y 25 in winter.
I____________t, there are h________y any iced coffees sold in winter and nearly 40 purchased in the summer. This is c________________o ice creams bought (38 in summer) t__________h the winter figure is r______________h (27). T________________________________n of s_________l ordering is salads with r___________y 25 orders for each half of the year.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:
Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than other ones.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While some argue that certain historic structures hold more value and should be carefully preserved, others contend that all old buildings warrant equal attention. In my opinion, there are particular buildings with cultural and community value that deserve prioritization.
There is tremendous value to maintaining buildings with significant historical importance. These structures serve as tangible links to the past, showcasing architectural marvels and preserving ancestral links. For instance, ancient castles and palaces symbolize the grandeur of bygone eras, offering a glimpse into the lives of kings, queens, and nobles. By safeguarding these structures, we ensure that future generations can appreciate and connect with their cultural heritage. These buildings also often showcase the craftsmanship and artistic vision of renowned architects and craftsmen. Take, for example, the iconic Taj Mahal in India, a testament to the exquisite beauty of Mughal architecture. Similarly, Gothic cathedrals, Renaissance villas, and Art Deco skyscrapers are not merely bricks and mortar; they are enduring artistic monuments.
Moreover, preserving certain old buildings can contribute to the flourishing of a given community or locale. Historic town centers, with quaint buildings and cobblestone streets, create a sense of place and give residents a shared heritage to cherish. These spaces foster strong community bonds and attract tourists, boosting local economies through heritage tourism. Further restoration and adaptive reuse of these old buildings can generate local economic opportunities. Repurposing a historic building into a boutique hotel, a museum, or an art gallery not only revitalizes the structure but also stimulates job creation and economic growth. Such projects often attract private investors and public funding, injecting resources into the local economy and enhancing the overall quality of life for residents.
In conclusion, certain structures serve as living testaments to the past, encouraging feelings of identity and pride. Therefore, buildings should be selected that have inherent value and they should be maintained by governments.
Analysis
1. While some argue that certain historic structures hold more value and should be carefully preserved, others contend that all old buildings warrant equal attention. 2. In my opinion, there are particular buildings with cultural and community value that deserve prioritization.
Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. There is tremendous value to maintaining buildings with significant historical importance. 2. These structures serve as tangible links to the past, showcasing architectural marvels and preserving ancestral links. 3. For instance, ancient castles and palaces symbolize the grandeur of bygone eras, offering a glimpse into the lives of kings, queens, and nobles. 4. By safeguarding these structures, we ensure that future generations can appreciate and connect with their cultural heritage. 5. These buildings also often showcase the craftsmanship and artistic vision of renowned architects and craftsmen. 6. Take, for example, the iconic Taj Mahal in India, a testament to the exquisite beauty of Mughal architecture. 7. Similarly, Gothic cathedrals, Renaissance villas, and Art Deco skyscrapers are not merely bricks and mortar; they are enduring artistic monuments.
Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
Explain your main idea.
Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
Keep developing it fully.
Add in as much detail as possible.
Vary long and short sentences.
Finish strong.
1. Moreover, preserving certain old buildings can contribute to the flourishing of a given community or locale. 2. Historic town centers, with quaint buildings and cobblestone streets, create a sense of place and give residents a shared heritage to cherish. 3. These spaces foster strong community bonds and attract tourists, boosting local economies through heritage tourism. 4. Further restoration and adaptive reuse of these old buildings can generate local economic opportunities. 5. Repurposing a historic building into a boutique hotel, a museum, or an art gallery not only revitalizes the structure but also stimulates job creation and economic growth. 6. Such projects often attract private investors and public funding, injecting resources into the local economy and enhancing the overall quality of life for residents.
Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
Explain your new main idea.
Include specific details and examples.
Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
Use really concrete examples.
Keep adding detail.
1. In conclusion, certain structures serve as living testaments to the past, encouraging feelings of identity and pride. 2. Therefore, buildings should be selected that have inherent value and they should be maintained by governments.
Summarise your main ideas.
Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
While some argue that certain historic structures hold more value and should be carefully preserved, others contend that all old buildings warrant equal attention. In my opinion, there are particular buildings with cultural and community value that deserve prioritization.
There is tremendous value to maintaining buildings with significant historical importance. These structures serve as tangible links to the past, showcasing architectural marvels and preserving ancestral links. For instance, ancient castles and palaces symbolize the grandeur of bygone eras, offering a glimpse into the lives of kings, queens, and nobles. By safeguarding these structures, we ensure that future generations can appreciate and connect with their cultural heritage. These buildings also often showcase the craftsmanship and artistic vision of renowned architects and craftsmen. Take, for example, the iconic Taj Mahal in India, a testament to the exquisite beauty of Mughal architecture. Similarly, Gothic cathedrals, Renaissance villas, and Art Deco skyscrapers are not merely bricks and mortar; they are enduring artistic monuments.
Moreover, preserving certain old buildings can contribute to the flourishing of a given community or locale. Historic town centers, with quaint buildings and cobblestone streets, create a sense of place and give residents a shared heritage to cherish. These spaces foster strong community bonds and attract tourists, boosting local economies through heritage tourism. Further restoration and adaptive reuse of these old buildings can generate local economic opportunities. Repurposing a historic building into a boutique hotel, a museum, or an art gallery not only revitalizes the structure but also stimulates job creation and economic growth. Such projects often attract private investors and public funding, injecting resources into the local economy and enhancing the overall quality of life for residents.
In conclusion, certain structures serve as living testaments to the past, encouraging feelings of identity and pride. Therefore, buildings should be selected that have inherent value and they should be maintained by governments.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
certain historic structures hold more value: specific historic structures possess greater significance carefully preserved: meticulously conserved contend: argue warrant equal attention: justify equal consideration particular: specific cultural and community value: cultural and societal worth deserve prioritization: merit prioritized treatment There is tremendous value to maintaining buildings: preserving buildings holds immense value significant historical importance: notable historical significance serve as tangible links to the past: act as tangible connections to history showcasing architectural marvels: displaying architectural wonders preserving ancestral links: safeguarding ancestral connections ancient castles: age-old fortresses palaces symbolize the grandeur of bygone eras: palaces represent the magnificence of past periods offering a glimpse into the lives of: providing insight into the lives of safeguarding: protecting ensure: guarantee future generations: forthcoming generations appreciate: value connect with: establish a connection with cultural heritage: cultural legacy showcase: exhibit craftsmanship: artistry artistic vision: creative vision renowned architects: celebrated architects craftsmen: artisans iconic: emblematic testament: proof exquisite beauty: exquisite magnificence Similarly: Likewise Gothic cathedrals: Old European churches Renaissance villas: old Italian mansions Art Deco skyscrapers: old style high-rises bricks and mortar: physical structures enduring artistic monuments: long-lasting artistic landmarks contribute to the flourishing of a given community or locale: contribute to the prosperity of a specific community or area Historic town centers: Historical city centers quaint buildings: charming structures cobblestone streets: stone-paved roads sense of place: feeling of belonging give residents a shared heritage to cherish: provide residents with a shared legacy to treasure spaces foster strong community bonds: areas foster strong communal connections attract tourists, boosting local economies through heritage tourism: attract tourists, stimulating local economies through cultural tourism restoration: renovation adaptive reuse: repurposing generate local economic opportunities: create local economic prospects Repurposing: Reutilization boutique hotel: upscale hotel revitalizes: rejuvenates stimulates job creation and economic growth: stimulates employment generation and economic expansion attract private investors: allure private investors public funding: government funding injecting resources into the local economy: infusing resources into the local economy enhancing the overall quality of life for residents: improving the overall quality of life for inhabitants living testaments: living evidence encouraging feelings of identity: fostering a sense of identity pride: self-esteem selected: chosen inherent value: intrinsic worth maintained by: upheld by
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
While some argue that c________________________________e and should be c________________d, others c_______d that all old buildings w______________________n. In my opinion, there are p_________r buildings with c__________________________________e that d______________________n.
T________________________________________________________s with s______________________________e. These structures s______________________________t, s______________________________s and p_______________________s. For instance, a_____________________s and p_________________________________s, o____________________________________f kings, queens, and nobles. By s__________g these structures, we e_________e that f___________s can a___________e and c___________h their c______________e. These buildings also often s___________e the c_____________p and a___________n of r______________s and c________n. Take, for example, the i______c Taj Mahal in India, a t__________t to the e__________y of Mughal architecture. S_________y, G_____________s, R________________s, and A__________________s are not merely b________________r; they are e_______________________s.
Moreover, preserving certain old buildings can c_________________________________________________________e. H_______________s, with q__________________s and c_____________s, create a s__________e and g__________________________________________h. These s__________________________s and a_______________s, b_________________________________m. Further r____________n and a_________e of these old buildings can g__________________________________________s. R_____________g a historic building into a b____________l, a museum, or an art gallery not only r___________s the structure but also s_________________________________________h. Such projects often a______________________s and p____________g, i______________________________________y and e__________________________________________________s.
In conclusion, certain structures serve as l_____________s to the past, e______________________________y and p______e. Therefore, buildings should be s________d that have i_______________e and they should be m_______________y governments.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:
In your opinion, what are the benefits of preserving historic buildings in a city or community?
Does preserving historic buildings cost too much?
How do you think preserving historic buildings can contribute to the cultural identity of a city or region?
In some cases, historic buildings may not be well-maintained or may be at risk of demolition due to safety concerns. What measures do you think should be taken to balance preservation with public safety?
What would you say to those who prioritize development over the preservation of historic architecture?
Writing Practice
Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below
In numerous nations, more and more people are intrigued in the idea of researching the history or past of the where they now live.
In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.
Why do you think this is happening?
How can this issue be solved?
The decline in the number of animal and plant species is a pressing issue facing many countries worldwide. In my opinion, this is a result of human activity and can be countered by adopting sustainable policy initiatives.
Fewer animal and plant species is mainly a human problem. Firstly, there is now rampant deforestation for agricultural expansion, logging, and infrastructure development. In the Amazon rainforest, pristine habitats are being cleared for cattle ranching, depriving countless species of their natural homes. Relatedly, pollution, including industrial discharge and agricultural runoff, poses a significant threat. The global release of toxic chemicals into rivers and oceans leads to the death of marine life and disrupts delicate aquatic ecosystems. An additional human activity that deserves attention is illegal wildlife trade. This practice is driven by high demand for exotic pets, traditional medicine, and animal parts, pushing many species towards endangerment and potential extinction.
The keys to reversing natural degradation are conservation and restoration efforts. Biodiversity conservation programs should focus on preserving and restoring specific habitats. For instance, reforestation initiatives can aim to replant native tree species in deforested areas, providing crucial habitats for various wildlife species. Marine protected areas can be established to safeguard vulnerable marine ecosystems and promote sustainable fishing practices. Captive breeding and reintroduction programs can help revive endangered species. Evidence for this approach comes from initiatives to breed and release critically endangered species like the black rhinoceros. Complementary sustainable practices in agriculture, forestry, and fishing can also be promoted to minimize human impact on ecosystems.
Decreasing population figures for animal and plant species is a critical issue that demands immediate attention and action. It is humanity’s collective responsibility to protect and restore the natural world given the origin of these issues.
Analysis
1. The decline in the number of animal and plant species is a pressing issue facing many countries worldwide. 2. In my opinion, this is a result of human activity and can be countered by adopting sustainable policy initiatives.
Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Fewer animal and plant species is mainly a human problem. 2. Firstly, there is now rampant deforestation for agricultural expansion, logging, and infrastructure development. 3. In the Amazon rainforest, pristine habitats are being cleared for cattle ranching, depriving countless species of their natural homes. 4. Relatedly, pollution, including industrial discharge and agricultural runoff, poses a significant threat. 5. The global release of toxic chemicals into rivers and oceans leads to the death of marine life and disrupts delicate aquatic ecosystems. 6. An additional human activity that deserves attention is illegal wildlife trade. 7. This practice is driven by high demand for exotic pets, traditional medicine, and animal parts, pushing many species towards endangerment and potential extinction.
Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
Explain your main idea.
Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
Keep developing it fully.
Add in as much detail as possible.
Vary long and short sentences.
Finish strong.
1. The keys to reversing natural degradation are conservation and restoration efforts. 2. Biodiversity conservation programs should focus on preserving and restoring specific habitats. 3. For instance, reforestation initiatives can aim to replant native tree species in deforested areas, providing crucial habitats for various wildlife species. 4. Marine protected areas can be established to safeguard vulnerable marine ecosystems and promote sustainable fishing practices. 5. Captive breeding and reintroduction programs can help revive endangered species. 6. Evidence for this approach comes from initiatives to breed and release critically endangered species like the black rhinoceros. 7. Complementary sustainable practices in agriculture, forestry, and fishing can also be promoted to minimize human impact on ecosystems.
Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
Explain your new main idea.
Include specific details and examples.
Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
Use really concrete examples.
Keep adding detail.
Better a little too long instead of a little too short.
1. Decreasing population figures for animal and plant species is a critical issue that demands immediate attention and action. 2. It is humanity’s collective responsibility to protect and restore the natural world given the origin of these issues.
Summarise your main ideas.
Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
The decline in the number of animal and plant species is a pressing issue facing many countries worldwide. In my opinion, this is a result of human activity and can be countered by adopting sustainable policy initiatives.
Fewer animal and plant species is mainly a human problem. Firstly, there is now rampant deforestation for agricultural expansion, logging, and infrastructure development. In the Amazon rainforest, pristine habitats are being cleared for cattle ranching, depriving countless species of their natural homes. Relatedly, pollution, including industrial discharge and agricultural runoff, poses a significant threat. The global release of toxic chemicals into rivers and oceans leads to the death of marine life and disrupts delicateaquatic ecosystems. An additional human activity that deserves attention is illegal wildlife trade. This practice is driven by high demand forexotic pets, traditional medicine, and animal parts, pushing many species towards endangerment and potential extinction.
The keys to reversing natural degradation are conservation and restoration efforts. Biodiversity conservation programs should focus on preserving and restoring specific habitats. For instance, reforestation initiatives can aim to replant nativetree species in deforested areas, providing crucial habitats for various wildlife species. Marine protected areas can be established to safeguard vulnerable marine ecosystems and promote sustainable fishing practices. Captive breeding and reintroduction programs can help revive endangered species. Evidence for this approach comes from initiatives to breed and release critically endangered species like the black rhinoceros. Complementary sustainable practices in agriculture, forestry, and fishing can also be promoted to minimize human impact on ecosystems.
Decreasing population figures for animal and plant species is a critical issue that demands immediate attention and action. It is humanity’s collective responsibility to protect and restore the natural worldgiven the origin of these issues.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
decline: decrease, diminish, dwindle, wane, recede pressing issue facing many countries worldwide: urgent concern, critical problem, grave matter this is a result of human activity: caused by human actions, stemming from human behavior countered: opposed, combated, resisted, challenged adopting sustainable policy initiatives: embracing eco-friendly strategies, implementing green policy measures rampant deforestation: widespread tree loss, uncontrolled forest destruction, extensive logging agricultural expansion: farming growth, agricultural sprawl, cultivation expansion logging: timber harvesting, tree cutting, lumber extraction infrastructure development: construction of infrastructure, urban development, built environment expansion Amazon rainforest: Amazonian jungle, the Amazon basin, the tropical rainforest of the Amazon pristine habitats: untouched environments, unspoiled ecosystems, immaculate habitats cleared: removed, eradicated, obliterated, wiped out cattle ranching: beef farming, livestock rearing, raising cattle depriving countless species: robbing numerous species, depriving a multitude of organisms, stripping away biodiversity natural homes: native habitats, original dwellings, inherent abodes Relatedly: in connection, correspondingly, in a related vein including industrial discharge: encompassing factory effluents, incorporating industrial emissions, comprising discharge from industries agricultural runoff: farming effluents, agricultural discharge, crop production drainage poses a significant threat: presents a major danger, constitutes a considerable risk, signifies a substantial peril global release of toxic chemicals into rivers and oceans leads to: worldwide discharge of harmful substances into waterways and seas results in, global dumping of poisonous compounds in rivers and oceans causes marine life: aquatic organisms, sea creatures, oceanic fauna disrupts delicate aquatic ecosystems: disturbs fragile water ecosystems, interrupts vulnerable aquatic habitats, undermines intricate marine environments additional: extra, supplementary, further deserves attention: merits consideration, warrants focus, calls for awareness illegal wildlife trade: illicit animal trafficking, unlawful wildlife commerce, black market exchange of fauna practice: activity, custom, habit, tradition driven by high demand for exotic: propelled by a strong desire for rare, pushed by a great demand for unusual traditional medicine: folk medicine, alternative healing practices, ancient remedies pushing many species towards endangerment: pushing numerous species toward the brink, driving multiple species to endangerment, propelling various species closer to extinction potential extinction: possible eradication, likely annihilation, plausible extinction keys: crucial elements, vital components, essential factors reversing natural degradation: halting ecological decline, undoing environmental deterioration, reversing natural deterioration conservation: preservation, protection, safeguarding restoration efforts: rehabilitation initiatives, rejuvenation endeavors, revitalization projects Biodiversity conservation programs: programs for preserving biodiversity, initiatives to protect species diversity, efforts to conserve biological variety focus on preserving and restoring specific habitats: concentrate on safeguarding and reviving particular environments, emphasize the preservation and restoration of specific ecosystems reforestation initiatives: tree-planting programs, afforestation efforts, reestablishment campaigns aim: goal, objective, purpose, target replant native tree species: reintroduce indigenous tree species, reforest with local tree varieties, replant endemic trees deforested areas: cleared regions, logged zones, treeless landscapes crucial: essential, vital, critical, indispensable Marine protected areas: ocean sanctuaries, marine reserves, protected marine zones established: set up, created, founded, instituted safeguard vulnerable: protect at-risk, defend susceptible, secure endangered promote sustainable fishing practices: encourage eco-friendly fishing methods, advocate for responsible fishing techniques, support sustainable harvesting in fisheries Captive breeding: controlled reproduction, breeding in captivity, artificial breeding reintroduction programs: release programs, reintroduction initiatives, species reestablishment efforts revive endangered species: restore at-risk species, rejuvenate threatened organisms, bring back endangered populations Evidence: proof, substantiation, confirmation approach: method, strategy, approach, technique initiatives: projects, endeavors, campaigns breed: propagate, reproduce, generate, produce offspring release critically endangered species: set free highly endangered species, reintroduce critically endangered organisms, liberate critically endangered populations black rhinoceros: African rhinoceros, Diceros bicornis Complementary sustainable practices in agriculture: supplementary eco-friendly practices in farming, sustainable agricultural approaches that work together, additional environmentally conscious methods in farming forestry: forest management, woodland cultivation, timber production promoted: encouraged, advocated, endorsed critical issue: pressing matter, urgent concern, crucial problem demands immediate attention and action: requires prompt focus and action, necessitates instant attention and intervention, calls for immediate concern and response humanity’s collective responsibility to protect and restore: the shared duty of humankind to safeguard and rehabilitate, the collective obligation of humanity to preserve and revive, theshared responsibility of humans to protect and restore
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
The d_______e in the number of animal and plant species is a p_________________________________________e. In my opinion, t_____________________________y and can be c____________d by a___________________________________s.
Fewer animal and plant species is mainly a human problem. Firstly, there is now r__________________________n for a____________________n, l________g, and i______________________t. In the A____________________t, p________________s are being c________d for c__________g, d___________________________s of their n_____________s. R_______y, pollution, i_______________e and a________________f, p_____________________________t. The g___________________________________________________________o the death of m___________e and d_____________________________s. An a___________________l human activity that d______________________n is i_________________e. This p_______e is d_________________________________c pets, t_____________________e, and animal parts, p_____________________________________t and p_____________________n.
The k____s to r_________________n are c__________n and r____________________s. B_________________________________s should f_______________________________s. For instance, r___________________s can a__m to r_______________________s in d_____________s, providing c________l habitats for various wildlife species. M________________s can be e______________d to s______________e marine ecosystems and p_________________________s. C___________g and r______________s can help r____________________________s. E_______e for this a______h comes from i_________s to b______d and r____________________________________________s like the b________________s. C___________________________________________________________e, f___________y, and fishing can also be p__________d to minimize human impact on ecosystems.
Decreasing population figures for animal and plant species is a c__________e that d______________________________________n. It is h____________________________________________________e the n_________________________________________________s.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:
Some people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people, while others argue that their behavior both on and off the field has a negative influence.
Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that famous people can help international aid organizations to draw attention to important problems. Others believe that the celebrities can make the problems seem less important.
Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many would argue that the purpose of music is to help individuals de-stress and relax. In my opinion, although this is a key function, it is more important for music to uplift.
Those in favor of considering music a form of relaxation point out how it is used by most listeners. Though this is impossible to verify empirically, most would concede on an anecdotal level that music is primarily used to relax. Students and workers on their daily commute and after a long day listen to music to forget about their anxieties. Scientific research has shown that listening to any genre of music results in reduced blood pressure and increased heart rate volatility, key indicators of lower stress levels. Though music is also used at parties as a way to celebrate and have fun, these situations are less common overall for the average subscriber to an application such as Spotify or Apple Music.
However, there is a higher function of music that relates to raising one’s perspective on life. When a person listens to a beautiful and meaningful song such as “Jealous Guy” by John Lennon or “No Woman, No Cry” by Bob Marley, they are being lifted by the melody and lyrics. Similar to other forms of art, they present a way of seeing the world that transforms ordinary life into an aesthetic experience. Some of these aesthetic interpretations by artists may not always be positive, such as when a singer sings about loss or addiction, but they nonetheless ennoble and allow for greater understanding of the darkest elements of the human condition.
In conclusion, though music is one way of relaxing for many people, I would contend that it’s most crucial aim is to enrich the world through a particular artistic interpretation. It is still possible for particular listeners to enjoy music as they see fit.
Analysis
1. Many would argue that the purpose of music is to help individuals de-stress and relax. 2. In my opinion, although this is a key function, it is more important for music to uplift.
Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. Those in favor of considering music a form of relaxation point out how it is used by most listeners. 2. Though this is impossible to verify empirically, most would concede on an anecdotal level that music is primarily used to relax. 3. Students and workers on their daily commute and after a long day listen to music to forget about their anxieties. 4. Scientific research has shown that listening to any genre of music results in reduced blood pressure and increased heart rate volatility, key indicators of lower stress levels. 5. Though music is also used at parties as a way to celebrate and have fun, these situations are less common overall for the average subscriber to an application such as Spotify or Apple Music.
Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
Explain your main idea.
Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
Keep developing it fully.
Add in as much detail as possible.
1. However, there is a higher function of music that relates to raising one’s perspective on life. 2. When a person listens to a beautiful and meaningful song such as “Jealous Guy” by John Lennon or “No Woman, No Cry” by Bob Marley, they are being lifted by the melody and lyrics. 3. Similar to other forms of art, they present a way of seeing the world that transforms ordinary life into an aesthetic experience. 4. Some of these aesthetic interpretations by artists may not always be positive, such as when a singer sings about loss or addiction, but they nonetheless ennoble and allow for greater understanding of the darkest elements of the human condition.
Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
Explain your new main idea.
Include specific details and examples.
Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
1. In conclusion, though music is one way of relaxing for many people, I would contend that it’s most crucial aim is to enrich the world through a particular artistic interpretation. 2. It is still possible for particular listeners to enjoy music as they see fit.
Summarise your main ideas.
Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean?Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
Many would argue that the purpose of music is to help individuals de-stress and relax. In my opinion, although this is a key function, it is more important for music to uplift.
Those in favor of considering music a form of relaxation point out how it is used by most listeners. Though this is impossible to verify empirically, most would concede on an anecdotal level that music is primarily used to relax. Students and workers on their daily commute and after a long day listen to music to forget about their anxieties. Scientific research has shown that listening to any genre of music results in reduced blood pressure and increased heart rate volatility, key indicators of lower stress levels. Though music is also used at parties as a way to celebrate and have fun, these situations are less common overall for the average subscriber to an application such as Spotify or Apple Music.
However, there is a higher function of music that relates to raising one’s perspective on life. When a person listens to a beautiful and meaningful song such as “Jealous Guy” by John Lennon or “No Woman, No Cry” by Bob Marley, they are being lifted by the melody and lyrics. Similar to other forms of art, they present a way of seeing the world that transforms ordinary life into an aesthetic experience. Some of these aesthetic interpretations by artists may not always be positive, such as when a singer sings about loss or addiction, but they nonetheless ennoble and allow for greater understanding of the darkest elements of the human condition.
In conclusion, though music is one way of relaxing for many people, I would contend that it’s most crucial aim is to enrich the world through a particular artistic interpretation. It is still possible for particular listeners to enjoy music as they see fit.
Answers
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
purpose: objective, aim, goal, intention
de-stress: relax, unwind, decompress
key function: primary role, main purpose, central task
uplift: inspire, elevate, boost
Those in favor of considering music a form of relaxation point out: supporters argue
impossibleto verify empirically: cannot be proven through experiments
concede on an anecdotal level: acknowledge, admit (on an anecdotal level)
primarily used to relax: mainly, predominantly used to relax
daily commute: regular journey, everyday travel
after a long day: following an exhausting day, post a tiring day
forget about their anxieties: let go of, put aside their anxieties
Scientific research has shown: studies indicate
genre: category, type, style
results in reduced blood pressure: leads to better heart health
increasedheart rate volatility: heightened, elevated heart rate health
key indicators oflower stress levels: significant signs of, important markers for lower stress levels
situations: circumstances, conditions, scenarios
less common: not as frequent, uncommon
average subscriber: typical member, regular participant
higher function: elevated role, superior purpose
relates to raising one’s perspective on life: pertains to, connects to raising one’s perspective on life
meaningful: significant, profound
lifted by the melody and lyrics: uplifted, carried by the melody and lyrics
presenta way of seeing the world: provide a way of seeing life
transformsordinary life into an aesthetic experience: turns normal life to something special
positive: optimistic, favorable
loss: defeat, setback
addiction: dependency, compulsion
nonethelessennoble: nevertheless, still make better
darkest elements ofthe human condition: the bleakest aspects of, the most shadowy facets of life
contend: argue, assert
most crucial aim: paramount objective, primary goal
enrich: enhance, improve
a particular artistic interpretation: a specific artistic rendition, a distinct artistic portrayal
particular: specific, individual
as they see fit: according to their own judgment, in a way that suits them
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
Many would argue that the p__________e of music is to help individuals d_________s and relax. In my opinion, although this is a k________n, it is more important for music to u_______t.
T_____________________________________________________________________t how it is used by most listeners. Though this is i_____________________y, most would c_____________________________l that music is p______________________x. Students and workers on their d_____________e and a_________________y listen to music to f__________________________s. S________________________n that listening to any g_______e of music r_________________________________________e and i______________________________y, k________________________________s. Though music is also used at parties as a way to celebrate and have fun, these s____________s are l_____________n overall for the a______________r to an application such as Spotify or Apple Music.
However, there is a h________________n of music that r__________________________________________e. When a person listens to a beautiful and m____________l song such as “Jealous Guy” by John Lennon or “No Woman, No Cry” by Bob Marley, they are being l_______________________s. S______________________t, they p_________________________________d that t____________________________________________________e. Some of these aesthetic interpretations by artists may not always be p__________e, such as when a singer sings about l____s or a__________n, but they n_______________e and allow for greater understanding of the d____________________________________n.
In conclusion, though music is one way of relaxing for many people, I would c_________d that it’s m_______________m is to e_______h the world through a__________________________________n. It is still possible for p___________r listeners to enjoy music a__________________t.
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