IELTS Essay: Vegetarianism

IELTS Essay: Vegetarianism

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of vegetarianism from the real IELTS exam:

Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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IELTS Essay: Happiness

IELTS Essay: Happiness

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of happiness from the real IELTS exam

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IELTS Essay: Happiness

Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many are of the belief that happiness is a result of financial success, while others feel there are more crucial factors. In my opinion, a certain degree of financial stability is a basic requirement for happiness but is less important overall than one’s family and health.

Those who claim that happiness correlates highly with earnings argue that it affords individuals a higher standard of living. A person with a considerable salary is able to buy a nice house, provide for their family, and purchase luxuries ranging from good food and frequent holidays to expensive vehicles and fashionable clothing. Each item taken on its own only contributes a small degree of pleasure, however, such purchases add up to a generally content, comfortable and enjoyable lifestyle. If a person is inclined to equate pleasure with happiness, then there is a legitimate argument to be made for the pursuit of happiness being the pursuit of money.

However, the majority of individuals, wealthy and otherwise, would state that happiness is more a consequence of quality time with family and good health. A comfortable home filled with luxuries is enjoyable but the most sustained happiness comes from relationships. Someone who has lost touch with their family and has frayed interpersonal bonds with their relatives, is not likely to be able to fill such a void with physical possessions. Anecdotally, towards the end of life most people recognize that their happiest moments were spent in the presence of loved ones. Additionally, good health is a more powerful pre-condition for happiness since no amount of wealth can buy relief from chronic suffering.

In conclusion, happiness depends more on one’s relationship with their family and physical health rather than financial success. There are, naturally, exceptions as happiness is subjective and can be defined differently.

Analysis

1. Many are of the belief that happiness is a result of financial success, while others feel there are more crucial factors. 2. In my opinion, a certain degree of financial stability is a basic requirement for happiness but is less important overall than one’s family and health.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who claim that happiness correlates highly with earnings argue that it affords individuals a higher standard of living. 2. A person with a considerable salary is able to buy a nice house, provide for their family, and purchase luxuries ranging from good food and frequent holidays to expensive vehicles and fashionable clothing. 3. Each item taken on its own only contributes a small degree of pleasure, however, such purchases add up to a generally content, comfortable and enjoyable lifestyle. 4. If a person is inclined to equate pleasure with happiness, then there is a legitimate argument to be made for the pursuit of happiness being the pursuit of money.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. However, the majority of individuals, wealthy and otherwise, would state that happiness is more a consequence of quality time with family and good health. 2. A comfortable home filled with luxuries is enjoyable but the most sustained happiness comes from relationships. 3. Someone who has lost touch with their family and has frayed interpersonal bonds with their relatives, is not likely to be able to fill such a void with physical possessions. 4. Anecdotally, towards the end of life most people recognize that their happiest moments were spent in the presence of loved ones. 5. Additionally, good health is a more powerful pre-condition for happiness since no amount of wealth can buy relief from chronic suffering.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Continue developing it…
  5. as fully as possible!

1. In conclusion, happiness depends more on one’s relationship with their family and physical health rather than financial success. 2. There are, naturally, exceptions as happiness is subjective and can be defined differently.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many are of the belief that happiness is a result of financial success, while others feel there are more crucial factors. In my opinion, a certain degree of financial stability is a basic requirement for happiness but is less important overall than one’s family and health.

Those who claim that happiness correlates highly with earnings argue that it affords individuals a higher standard of living. A person with a considerable salary is able to buy a nice house, provide for their family, and purchase luxuries ranging from good food and frequent holidays to expensive vehicles and fashionable clothing. Each item taken on its own only contributes a small degree of pleasure, however, such purchases add up to a generally content, comfortable and enjoyable lifestyle. If a person is inclined to equate pleasure with happiness, then there is a legitimate argument to be made for the pursuit of happiness being the pursuit of money.

However, the majority of individuals, wealthy and otherwise, would state that happiness is more a consequence of quality time with family and good health. A comfortable home filled with luxuries is enjoyable but the most sustained happiness comes from relationships. Someone who has lost touch with their family and has frayed interpersonal bonds with their relatives, is not likely to be able to fill such a void with physical possessions. Anecdotally, towards the end of life most people recognize that their happiest moments were spent in the presence of loved ones. Additionally, good health is a more powerful pre-condition for happiness since no amount of wealth can buy relief from chronic suffering.

In conclusion, happiness depends more on one’s relationship with their family and physical health rather than financial success. There are, naturally, exceptions as happiness is subjective and can be defined differently.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

result of caused by

financial success making money

crucial factors important elements

certain degree some amount of

financial stability have enough money

basic requirement minimum

overall generally

claim argue

correlates highly relates directly to

earnings argue money say

affords can pay for

higher standard of living good quality of life

considerable major

provide for allow for

purchase luxuries ranging from buy nice things including

frequent often

expensive vehicles pricey cars

fashionable clothing nice fashion

item taken on its own thing by itself

contributes adds to

small degree of pleasure a little enjoyment

add up contribute to

generally content overall happy

comfortable easy and nice

enjoyable lifestyle nice living standard

inclined likely to

equate pleasure make enjoyment equal to

legitimate argument clear case

pursuit of happiness trying to satisfy yourself

majority most of

otherwise or this will happen

state say

consequence result

quality time good time spent with

filled with full of

most sustained constant

relationships interpersonal connections

lost touch not talking to, estranged

frayed interpersonal bonds not on good terms with

relatives family members

void absence

physical possessions things

anecdotally from stories

recognize know

spent in the presence of loved ones around family

additionally also

pre-condition minimum requirement

since no amount of wealth as no level of money

buy relief purchase a reprieve

chronic suffering constantly hurt by

depends more on has more to do with

rather than instead of

naturally of course

exceptions cases outside the norm

subjective can be judged individually

defined differently described in different ways

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

rɪˈzʌlt ɒv 
faɪˈnænʃəl səkˈsɛs
ˈkruːʃəl ˈfæktəz
ˈsɜːtn dɪˈgriː 
faɪˈnænʃəl stəˈbɪlɪti 
ˈbeɪsɪk rɪˈkwaɪəmənt 
ˈəʊvərɔːl 
kleɪm 
ˈkɒrɪleɪts ˈhaɪli 
ˈɜːnɪŋz ˈɑːgjuː 
əˈfɔːdz 
ˈhaɪə ˈstændəd ɒv ˈlɪvɪŋ
kənˈsɪdərəbl 
prəˈvaɪd fɔː 
ˈpɜːʧəs ˈlʌkʃəriz ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm 
ˈfriːkwənt 
ɪksˈpɛnsɪv ˈviːɪklz 
ˈfæʃnəbl ˈkləʊðɪŋ
ˈaɪtəm ˈteɪkən ɒn ɪts əʊn 
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)ts 
smɔːl dɪˈgriː ɒv ˈplɛʒə
æd ʌp 
ˈʤɛnərəli ˈkɒntɛnt
ˈkʌmf(ə)təbl 
ɪnˈʤɔɪəbl ˈlaɪfˌstaɪl
ɪnˈklaɪnd 
ɪˈkweɪt ˈplɛʒə 
lɪˈʤɪtɪmɪt ˈɑːgjʊmənt 
pəˈsjuːt ɒv ˈhæpɪnɪs 
məˈʤɒrɪti 
ˈʌðəwaɪz
steɪt 
ˈkɒnsɪkwəns 
ˈkwɒlɪti taɪm 
fɪld wɪð 
məʊst səsˈteɪnd 
rɪˈleɪʃənʃɪps
lɒst tʌʧ 
freɪd ˌɪntəˈpɜːsən(ə)l bɒndz 
ˈrɛlətɪvz
vɔɪd 
ˈfɪzɪkəl pəˈzɛʃənz
ˌænɪkˈdəʊt(ə)li
ˈrɛkəgnaɪz 
spɛnt ɪn ðə ˈprɛzns ɒv lʌvd wʌnz
əˈdɪʃənli
priː-kənˈdɪʃən 
sɪns nəʊ əˈmaʊnt ɒv wɛlθ 
baɪ rɪˈliːf 
ˈkrɒnɪk ˈsʌfərɪŋ
dɪˈpɛndz mɔːr ɒn 
ˈrɑːðə ðæn 
ˈnæʧrəli
ɪkˈsɛpʃənz 
səbˈʤɛktɪv 
dɪˈfaɪnd ˈdɪfrəntli

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many are of the belief that happiness is a r__________f f_______________s, while others feel there are more c__________________s. In my opinion, a c________________e of f_____________________y is a b___________________t for happiness but is less important o________l than one’s family and health.

Those who c________m that happiness c__________________y with e________________e that it a________s individuals a h_____________________________g. A person with a c_______________e salary is able to buy a nice house, p__________r their family, and p__________________s r________________m good food and f__________t holidays to e___________________s and f____________________g. Each i______________________n only c________________s a s_________________________e, however, such purchases a________p to a g______________________t, c_____________e and e____________________e. If a person is i__________d to e_________________e with happiness, then there is a l_________________________t to be made for the p____________________s being the pursuit of money.

However, the m_________y of individuals, wealthy and o___________e, would s______e that happiness is more a c______________e of q______________e with family and good health. A comfortable home f____________h luxuries is enjoyable but the m________________d happiness comes from r_______________s. Someone who has l_____________h with their family and has f__________________________s with their r__________s, is not likely to be able to fill such a v______d with p__________________________s. A________________y, towards the end of life most people r____________e that their happiest moments were s___________________________________s. A_______________y, good health is a more powerful p______________n for happiness s____________________________________h can b______________f from c______________g.

In conclusion, happiness d______________________n one’s relationship with their family and physical health r_____________n financial success. There are, n______________y, e____________s as happiness is s_____________e and can be d_____________________y.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.cntraveler.com/gallery/the-10-happiest-countries-in-the-world

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Happy Occasions

  1. How do people in your country celebrate happy occasions?
  2. Why do occasions usually make people happy?
  3. How important is the money spent on the occasion for making people happy?
  4. Is it a good idea to spend a lot of money on a birthday party?
  5. Is happiness today the same as it was in the past?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past.

Why is this?

What can be learned from this?

IELTS Essay: Violent Entertainment (Games and Movies)

IELTS Essay: Violent Entertainment (Games and Movies)

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of violent entertainment (games and movies) from the real general training IELTS exam.

Please consider supporting me on Patreon.com/howtodoielts to receive my exclusive IELTS Ebooks – you can even sign up for private live lessons with me!

Dave

IELTS Essay: Violent Entertainment (Games and Movies)

Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some feel that violence in entertainment is a root cause of problems in society and should thus be censored. In my opinion, while there is legitimate cause to establish reasonable boundaries, such content has little actual negative impact.

On the one hand, there is a general level of acceptance that gratuitous violence should be restricted. This is particularly the case if films are being broadcast on public channels or it is possible to gain easy access to violent games. In most nations, programming during the daytime has higher thresholds for acceptable content due to fears of influencing impressionable children. The worry is that very young children and teenagers will become desensitized to violence and potentially establish either a confrontational way of interacting or, in extreme cases, a pattern of behavior. Studies have not shown much evidence for these claims however they possess a commonsensical logic.

On the other hand, the majority of individuals have no difficulty distinguishing between fiction and reality. Consumers of violent entertainment are simply passing the time or experiencing a vicarious thrill. There is even the slight chance that by watching violent entertainment, audiences will be dissuaded from such behavior or feel their need for violence has been sufficiently expressed. For instance, an individual who plays violent computer games or is obsessed with horror films, according to research, is no more likely to commit a violent crime or display abnormal behavior. The actual causes of problems in society relate to employment, economics, discrimination, income inequality, and various systemic barriers.

In conclusion, though there are certain levels of violence that should be censored depending on the context, most explicit content ought to be permitted in games and movies. Efforts to heavily censor would be short-sighted and misguided.

Analysis

1. Some feel that violence in entertainment is a root cause of problems in society and should thus be censored. 2. In my opinion, while there is legitimate cause to establish reasonable boundaries, such content has little actual negative impact.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. On the one hand, there is a general level of acceptance that gratuitous violence should be restricted. 2. This is particularly the case if films are being broadcast on public channels or it is possible to gain easy access to violent games. 3. In most nations, programming during the daytime has higher thresholds for acceptable content due to fears of influencing impressionable children. 4. The worry is that very young children and teenagers will become desensitized to violence and potentially establish either a confrontational way of interacting or, in extreme cases, a pattern of behavior. 5. Studies have not shown much evidence for these claims however they possess a commonsensical logic.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. The more support, the higher your task achievement mark!

1. On the other hand, the majority of individuals have no difficulty distinguishing between fiction and reality. 2. Consumers of violent entertainment are simply passing the time or experiencing a vicarious thrill. 3. There is even the slight chance that by watching violent entertainment, audiences will be dissuaded from such behavior or feel their need for violence has been sufficiently expressed. 4. For instance, an individual who plays violent computer games or is obsessed with horror films, according to research, is no more likely to commit a violent crime or display abnormal behavior. 5. The actual causes of problems in society relate to employment, economics, discrimination, income inequality, and various systemic barriers.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Continue developing it…
  5. as fully as possible!

1. In conclusion, though there are certain levels of violence that should be censored depending on the context, most explicit content ought to be permitted in games and movies. 2. Efforts to heavily censor would be short-sighted and misguided.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some feel that violence in entertainment is a root cause of problems in society and should thus be censored. In my opinion, while there is legitimate cause to establish reasonable boundaries, such content has little actual negative impact.

On the one hand, there is a general level of acceptance that gratuitous violence should be restricted. This is particularly the case if films are being broadcast on public channels or it is possible to gain easy access to violent games. In most nations, programming during the daytime has higher thresholds for acceptable content due to fears of influencing impressionable children. The worry is that very young children and teenagers will become desensitized to violence and potentially establish either a confrontational way of interacting or, in extreme cases, a pattern of behavior. Studies have not shown much evidence for these claims however they possess a commonsensical logic.

On the other hand, the majority of individuals have no difficulty distinguishing between fiction and reality. Consumers of violent entertainment are simply passing the time or experiencing a vicarious thrill. There is even the slight chance that by watching violent entertainment, audiences will be dissuaded from such behavior or feel their need for violence has been sufficiently expressed. For instance, an individual who plays violent computer games or is obsessed with horror films, according to research, is no more likely to commit a violent crime or display abnormal behavior. The actual causes of problems in society relate to employment, economics, discrimination, income inequality, and various systemic barriers.

In conclusion, though there are certain levels of violence that should be censored depending on the context, most explicit content ought to be permitted in games and movies. Efforts to heavily censor would be short-sighted and misguided.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

violence hitting, killing, hurting, etc.

root cause base reason

censored limited, some areas cut out

while although

legitimate cause real reason

establish reasonable boundaries set clear limits

content what is in shows, games, movies, etc.

little actual negative impact doesn’t actually hurt

on the one hand on one side

general level overall amount

acceptance believed in

gratuitous not for any real purpose

restricted contained

particularly the case especially true

broadcast show

public channels TV stations open to all

possible can happen

gain easy access not hard to get

in most nations in many countries

programming what’s on TV

higher thresholds more difficult to meet the standards

acceptable content appopriate stuff

fears worries

influencing impressionable children having an effect on kids

worry fear

desensitized stop being deeply affected by

potentially establish possibly create

confrontational way of interacting aggressive

in extreme cases in rare exceptions

pattern trend

behavior way of acting

claims arguments

possess have

commonsensical logic make sense

on the other hand however

majority most of

no difficulty distinguishing between fiction and reality cant tell apart the real and not real world

consumers people who buy things

passing the time occupying yourself

experiencing going through

vicarious thrill experiencing through others

slight chance small probability

dissuaded not encouraged to do it

sufficiently expressed fully done

obsessed care a lot about

according to research studies have shown

commit do

violent crime murder, etc.

display abnormal behavior

actual real

relate to employment concern jobs

economics finances

discrimination prejudice

income inequality people not earning equal amounts of money

various systemic barriers areas of society opposing people

levels amount of something

depending on having to do with

context situation

explicit very visual

permitted allowed to

efforts attempts

heavily strongly

short-sighted not looking at the long-term

misguided badly intentioned

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈvaɪələns 
ruːt kɔːz 
ˈsɛnsəd
waɪl 
lɪˈʤɪtɪmɪt kɔːz 
ɪsˈtæblɪʃ ˈriːznəbl ˈbaʊndəriz
ˈkɒntɛnt 
ˈlɪtl ˈækʧʊəl ˈnɛgətɪv ˈɪmpækt
ɒn ðə wʌn hænd
ˈʤɛnərəl ˈlɛvl 
əkˈsɛptəns 
grəˈtju(ː)ɪtəs 
rɪsˈtrɪktɪd
pəˈtɪkjʊləli ðə keɪs 
ˈbrɔːdkɑːst 
ˈpʌblɪk ˈʧænlz 
ˈpɒsəbl 
geɪn ˈiːzi ˈæksɛs 
ɪn məʊst ˈneɪʃənz
ˈprəʊgræmɪŋ 
ˈhaɪə ˈθrɛʃˌhəʊldz 
əkˈsɛptəbl ˈkɒntɛnt 
fɪəz 
ˈɪnflʊənsɪŋ ɪmˈprɛʃnəbl ˈʧɪldrən
ˈwʌri 
ˌdiːˈsɛnsɪtaɪzd 
pəʊˈtɛnʃəli ɪsˈtæblɪʃ 
ˌkɒnfrʌnˈteɪʃən(ə)l weɪ ɒv ˌɪntərˈæktɪŋ 
ɪn ɪksˈtriːm ˈkeɪsɪz,
ˈpætən 
bɪˈheɪvjə
kleɪmz 
pəˈzɛs 
ˈkɒmənsɛnsikəl ˈlɒʤɪk
ɒn ði ˈʌðə hænd
məˈʤɒrɪti 
nəʊ ˈdɪfɪkəlti dɪsˈtɪŋgwɪʃɪŋ bɪˈtwiːn ˈfɪkʃən ænd ri(ː)ˈælɪti
kənˈsjuːməz 
ˈpɑːsɪŋ ðə taɪm 
ɪksˈpɪərɪənsɪŋ 
vaɪˈkeərɪəs θrɪl
slaɪt ʧɑːns 
dɪˈsweɪdɪd 
səˈfɪʃəntli ɪksˈprɛst 
əbˈsɛst 
əˈkɔːdɪŋ tuː rɪˈsɜːʧ
kəˈmɪt 
ˈvaɪələnt kraɪm 
dɪsˈpleɪ æbˈnɔːməl bɪˈheɪvjə
ˈækʧʊəl 
rɪˈleɪt tuː ɪmˈplɔɪmənt
ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪks
dɪsˌkrɪmɪˈneɪʃən
ˈɪnkʌm ˌɪni(ː)ˈkwɒlɪti 
ˈveərɪəs sɪˈstɛmɪk ˈbærɪəz
ˈlɛvlz 
dɪˈpɛndɪŋ ɒn 
ˈkɒntɛkst 
ɪksˈplɪsɪt 
pəˈmɪtɪd 
ˈɛfəts 
ˈhɛvɪli 
ʃɔːt-ˈsaɪtɪd 
ˌmɪsˈgaɪdɪd

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Some feel that v____________e in entertainment is a r_____________e of problems in society and should thus be c______________d. In my opinion, w_____e there is l_________________e to e______________________________s, such c__________t has l__________________________________t.

O_________________d, there is a g_________________l of a____________e that g_____________s violence should be r______________d. This is p____________________e if films are being b______________t on p____________________s or it is p___________e to g________________s to violent games. I__________________s, p_________________g during the daytime has h____________________s for a____________________t due to f_______s of i______________________________n. The w___y is that very young children and teenagers will become d_____________d to violence and p___________________h either a c______________________________g or, i___________________s, a p_________n of b__________r. Studies have not shown much evidence for these claims however they p__________s a c___________________________c.

O__________________d, the m___________y of individuals have n_____________________________________________y. C_______________s of violent entertainment are simply p_____________________e or e__________________g a v________________l. There is even the s___________________e that by watching violent entertainment, audiences will be d_______________d from such behavior or feel their need for violence has been s______________________d. For instance, an individual who plays violent computer games or is o_______________d with horror films, a_____________________________h, is no more likely to c_________t a v_____________e or d_____________________________r. The a____________l causes of problems in society r______________o e_________________t, e____________s, d_______________n, i_____________________________y, and v________________________s.

In conclusion, though there are certain l_______s of violence that should be censored d________________n the c__________t, most e_________t content ought to be p______________d in games and movies. E_________s to h__________y censor would be s_______________d and m__________d.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Film/Movie Star

  1. Who is your favourite film star?
  2. Would you like to be a film star?
  3. Have you ever met a film star in person?
  4. Are film stars popular in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games.

Why do they do this?

Is this a positive or negative development?

IELTS Essay: Jobs and Personal Information

IELTS Essay: Jobs and Personal Information

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of jobs and whether or not employers should be allowed to ask for personal information from the real general training IELTS exam.

Please consider supporting me on Patreon.com/howtodoielts to receive my exclusive IELTS Ebooks – you can even sign up for private live lessons with me!

Dave

IELTS Essay: Jobs and Personal Information

Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many are of the opinion that there is little value to the sensitive personal information that employers may inquire about during job interviews. In my opinion, though there are certain logical limits, I believe these questions are generally useful as it helps employers understand candidates better.

On the one hand, applicants may rightly feel these questions can be uncomfortable. An employer who asks questions about family background, sexual orientation, and medical history is certainly violating all ethical bounds. If the candidate feels triggered or uncomfortable, there is the chance an interview could become the catalyst for a mental health setback or result in the candidate deciding not to apply for the position. A hypothetical example of this that shows the potential harm is that if an LGBTQ candidate must continually disclose their orientation, and the environment is very traditional or homophobic, they may find themselves frustrated and feel unfairly discriminated against.

Nonetheless, as long as inquiries are within acceptable limits, these questions aid potential employers in constructing an accurate picture of a potential employee. Naturally, an employee can lie about personal questions if they have a particularly disturbing private life, however, that might itself be of some value. Interviewers likely have experience and can detect the presence of lies and make judgments accordingly. For candidates who answer honestly, the interviewer will be able to compare their responses with past employee performance. For example, there is a strong likelihood that socially competent individuals with lots of friends and active hobbies will be outgoing and morale-boosting additions to a staff.

In conclusion, despite the risks of causing offense, these questions have value in forming a general opinion of a candidate for any given position. Employers should therefore continue asking such questions.

Analysis

1. Many are of the opinion that there is little value to the sensitive personal information that employers may inquire about during job interviews. 2. In my opinion, though there are certain logical limits, I believe these questions are generally useful as it helps employers understand candidates better.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. On the one hand, applicants may rightly feel these questions can be uncomfortable. 2. An employer who asks questions about family background, sexual orientation, and medical history is certainly violating all ethical bounds. 3. If the candidate feels triggered or uncomfortable, there is the chance an interview could become the catalyst for a mental health setback or result in the candidate deciding not to apply for the position. 4. A hypothetical example of this that shows the potential harm is that if an LGBTQ candidate must continually disclose their orientation, and the environment is very traditional or homophobic, they may find themselves frustrated and feel unfairly discriminated against.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. Nonetheless, as long as inquiries are within acceptable limits, these questions aid potential employers in constructing an accurate picture of a potential employee. 2. Naturally, an employee can lie about personal questions if they have a particularly disturbing private life, however, that might itself be of some value. 3. Interviewers likely have experience and can detect the presence of lies and make judgments accordingly. 4. For candidates who answer honestly, the interviewer will be able to compare their responses with past employee performance. 5. For example, there is a strong likelihood that socially competent individuals with lots of friends and active hobbies will be outgoing and morale-boosting additions to a staff.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Continue developing it…
  5. as fully as possible!

1. In conclusion, despite the risks of causing offense, these questions have value in forming a general opinion of a candidate for any given position. 2. Employers should therefore continue asking such questions.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many are of the opinion that there is little value to the sensitive personal information that employers may inquire about during job interviews. In my opinion, though there are certain logical limits, I believe these questions are generally useful as it helps employers understand candidates better.

On the one hand, applicants may rightly feel these questions can be uncomfortable. An employer who asks questions about family background, sexual orientation, and medical history is certainly violating all ethical bounds. If the candidate feels triggered or uncomfortable, there is the chance an interview could become the catalyst for a mental health setback or result in the candidate deciding not to apply for the position. A hypothetical example of this that shows the potential harm is that if an LGBTQ candidate must continually disclose their orientation, and the environment is very traditional or homophobic, they may find themselves frustrated and feel unfairly discriminated against.

Nonetheless, as long as inquiries are within acceptable limits, these questions aid potential employers in constructing an accurate picture of a potential employee. Naturally, an employee can lie about personal questions if they have a particularly disturbing private life, however, that might itself be of some value. Interviewers likely have experience and can detect the presence of lies and make judgments accordingly. For candidates who answer honestly, the interviewer will be able to compare their responses with past employee performance. For example, there is a strong likelihood that socially competent individuals with lots of friends and active hobbies will be outgoing and morale-boosting additions to a staff.

In conclusion, despite the risks of causing offense, these questions have value in forming a general opinion of a candidate for any given position. Employers should therefore continue asking such questions.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

little value not much importance

sensitive personal information delicate facts about your private life

may inquire might ask

during job interviews when applying for a job

certain logical limits definite reasonable boundaries

generally useful overall valuable

employers companies

candidates people who are applying for jobs

on the one hand on one side

applicants people applying for a job

rightly correctly

uncomfortable not feeling at ease

family background history of your family members

sexual orientation whether you are straight or LGTBQ

medical history any past conditions

certainly violating definitely harming

ethical bounds moral restrictions

triggered causes you to be upset

chance some opportunity

catalyst cause of

mental health setback feel upset, depressed, etc.

result in cause

apply for the position try to get the job

hypothetical example imaginary instance

potential harm possible hurt

LGBTQ  Lesbian · Gay · Bisexual · Transgender · Transsexual

continually disclose keep admitting

orientation which gender you prefer

environment context

traditional conservative

homophobic discrimination against homosexuals

frustrated made angry

unfairly discriminated against prejudiced against

nonetheless regardless

inquiries questions

acceptable limits reasonable boundaries

aid help

constructing making

accurate picture

potential possible

naturally of course

particularly disturbing private life especially alarming lifestyle

experience past

detect notice

presence existence

make judgments accordingly decide based on that

compare contrast

responses answers

past employee performance how well workers did in the past

strong likelihood good chance

socially competent individuals outgoing, friendly people

active hobbies not passive pastimes

outgoing sociable

morale-boosting additions make people happy with a new employee

staff workers

despite regardless of

risks threats

causing offense making upset

forming a general opinion having an idea of

any given position some random job

therefore thus

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈlɪtl ˈvæljuː 
ˈsɛnsɪtɪv ˈpɜːsnl ˌɪnfəˈmeɪʃən 
meɪ ɪnˈkwaɪə 
ˈdjʊərɪŋ ʤɒb ˈɪntəvjuːz
ˈsɜːtn ˈlɒʤɪkəl ˈlɪmɪts
ˈʤɛnərəli ˈjuːsfʊl 
ɪmˈplɔɪəz 
ˈkændɪˌdeɪts 
ɒn ðə wʌn hænd
ˈæplɪkənts 
ˈraɪtli 
ʌnˈkʌmfətəbl
ˈfæmɪli ˈbækgraʊnd
ˈsɛksjʊəl ˌɔːriɛnˈteɪʃən
ˈmɛdɪkəl ˈhɪstəri 
ˈsɜːtnli ˈvaɪəleɪtɪŋ 
ˈɛθɪkəl baʊndz
ˈtrɪgəd 
ʌnˈkʌmfətəbl
ʧɑːns 
ˈkætəlɪst 
ˈmɛntl hɛlθ ˈsɛtbæk 
rɪˈzʌlt ɪn 
əˈplaɪ fɔː ðə pəˈzɪʃən
ˌhaɪpəʊˈθɛtɪkəl ɪgˈzɑːmpl 
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl hɑːm 
ɛl-ʤiː-biː-tiː-kjuː 
kənˈtɪnjʊəli dɪsˈkləʊz 
ˌɔːriɛnˈteɪʃən
ɪnˈvaɪərənmənt 
trəˈdɪʃənl 
ˈhəʊməʊˈfəʊbɪ:ə
frʌsˈtreɪtɪd 
ʌnˈfeəli dɪsˈkrɪmɪneɪtɪd əˈgɛnst
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ɪnˈkwaɪəriz 
əkˈsɛptəbl ˈlɪmɪts
eɪd 
kənˈstrʌktɪŋ 
ˈækjʊrɪt ˈpɪkʧə 
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl 
ˈnæʧrəli
pəˈtɪkjʊləli dɪsˈtɜːbɪŋ ˈpraɪvɪt laɪf
ɪksˈpɪərɪəns 
dɪˈtɛkt 
ˈprɛzns 
meɪk ˈʤʌʤmənts əˈkɔːdɪŋli
kəmˈpeə 
rɪsˈpɒnsɪz 
pɑːst ˌɛmplɔɪˈiː pəˈfɔːməns
strɒŋ ˈlaɪklɪhʊd 
ˈsəʊʃəli ˈkɒmpɪtənt ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəlz 
ˈæktɪv ˈhɒbiz 
aʊtˈgəʊɪŋ 
mɒˈrɑːl-ˈbuːstɪŋ əˈdɪʃ(ə)nz 
stɑːf
dɪsˈpaɪt 
rɪsks 
ˈkɔːzɪŋ əˈfɛns
ˈfɔːmɪŋ ə ˈʤɛnərəl əˈpɪnjən 
ˈɛni ˈgɪvn pəˈzɪʃən
ˈðeəfɔː 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many are of the opinion that there is l________________e to the s________________________n that employers m____________e about d_________________s. In my opinion, though there are c____________________s, I believe these questions are g___________________l as it helps e______________s understand c______________s better.

O____________________d, a_____________s may r________y feel these questions can be u______________e. An employer who asks questions about f__________________d, s_____________________n, and m________________y is c________________g all e_________________s. If the candidate feels t______________d or u_________________e, there is the c_______e an interview could become the c___________t for a m________________k or r________n the candidate deciding not to a_____________________n. A h______________________e of this that shows the p_______________m is that if an L________Q candidate must c______________________e their o______________n, and the e_______________t is very t______________l or h_______________c, they may find themselves f_______________d and feel u______________________t.

N_______________s, as long as i___________s are within a________________s, these questions a___d potential employers in c_______________g an a___________________e of a p______________l employee. N____________y, an employee can lie about personal questions if they have a p______________________________e, however, that might itself be of some value. Interviewers likely have e_______________e and can d_________t the p_____________e of lies and m________________________y. For candidates who answer honestly, the interviewer will be able to c____________e their r_____________s with p_____________________________e. For example, there is a s______________d that s__________________________s with lots of friends and a___________________s will be o___________g and m_________________________s to a s_____f.

In conclusion, d___________e the r_______s of c____________________e, these questions have value in f_______________________________n of a candidate for a___________________n. Employers should t____________e continue asking such questions.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.theatlantic.com/membership/archive/2018/01/the-art-of-the-interview/551891/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work 1 (Model answer available on my Patreon)

  1. Do you work or are you a student?
  2. Do you like your current job?
  3. In the future, do you want to change jobs?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

IELTS Essay: Success

IELTS Essay: Success

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of success from the real IELTS general training exam.

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IELTS Essay: Success

Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many would argue that those who contribute significantly to society, such as artists, teachers and scientists, are more successful than the affluent. In my opinion, although earnings can be a sign of success, one’s worldly impact should be held in higher esteem.

On the one hand, wealth allows an individual to enjoy their life to the fullest. It is common in popular culture to elevate values related to altruism, however, most honest individuals would admit that success can be equated with what one can afford. The wealthy can afford the possessions and lifestyle they desire and also have the free time and peace of mind to completely enjoy their leisure. In past centuries, such people were admired as shameless examples of personal enjoyment. Therefore, this financial freedom can be viewed as the strictest and more direct definition of success.

However, money itself does not always engender a feeling of satisfaction in the same way as more active pursuits in life. Many wealthy individuals feel that they have contributed little to society and this diminishes their enjoyment of their gains. Such dissatisfaction is less present in individuals who, as long as they are not living in destitute poverty, pursue meaningful outlets for their energies. For example, renowned scientists throughout history are often not extremely wealthy, yet they are considered great successes due to their contributions and the personal joy they derive from the full exercise of their abilities. This fact can be extended to all other professions that involve determination, creativity, and the growth of one’s influence.

In conclusion, despite the material benefits of wealth, it is clear that one’s ability to shape the world is a surer symbol of success. Every individual and society must locate a balance between these two ideals.

Analysis

1. Many would argue that those who contribute significantly to society, such as artists, teachers and scientists, are more successful than the affluent. 2. In my opinion, although earnings can be a sign of success, one’s worldly impact should be held in higher esteem.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. On the one hand, wealth allows an individual to enjoy their life to the fullest. 2. It is common in popular culture to elevate values related to altruism, however, most honest individuals would admit that success can be equated with what one can afford. 3. The wealthy can afford the possessions and lifestyle they desire and also have the free time and peace of mind to completely enjoy their leisure. 4. In past centuries, such people were admired as shameless examples of personal enjoyment. 5. Therefore, this financial freedom can be viewed as the strictest and more direct definition of success.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Extend with some short sentences as well.

1. However, money itself does not always engender a feeling of satisfaction in the same way as more active pursuits in life. 2. Many wealthy individuals feel that they have contributed little to society and this diminishes their enjoyment of their gains. 3. Such dissatisfaction is less present in individuals who, as long as they are not living in destitute poverty, pursue meaningful outlets for their energies. 4. For example, renowned scientists throughout history are often not extremely wealthy, yet they are considered great successes due to their contributions and the personal joy they derive from the full exercise of their abilities. 5. This fact can be extended to all other professions that involve determination, creativity, and the growth of one’s influence.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Continue developing it…
  5. as fully as possible!

1. In conclusion, despite the material benefits of wealth, it is clear that one’s ability to shape the world is a surer symbol of success. 2. Every individual and society must locate a balance between these two ideals.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many would argue that those who contribute significantly to society, such as artists, teachers and scientists, are more successful than the affluent. In my opinion, although earnings can be a sign of success, one’s worldly impact should be held in higher esteem.

On the one hand, wealth allows an individual to enjoy their life to the fullest. It is common in popular culture to elevate values related to altruism, however, most honest individuals would admit that success can be equated with what one can afford. The wealthy can afford the possessions and lifestyle they desire and also have the free time and peace of mind to completely enjoy their leisure. In past centuries, such people were admired as shameless examples of personal enjoyment. Therefore, this financial freedom can be viewed as the strictest and more direct definition of success.

However, money itself does not always engender a feeling of satisfaction in the same way as more active pursuits in life. Many wealthy individuals feel that they have contributed little to society and this diminishes their enjoyment of their gains. Such dissatisfaction is less present in individuals who, as long as they are not living in destitute poverty, pursue meaningful outlets for their energies. For example, renowned scientists throughout history are often not extremely wealthy, yet they are considered great successes due to their contributions and the personal joy they derive from the full exercise of their abilities. This fact can be extended to all other professions that involve determination, creativity, and the growth of one’s influence.

In conclusion, despite the material benefits of wealth, it is clear that one’s ability to shape the world is a surer symbol of success. Every individual and society must locate a balance between these two ideals.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

argue claim

contribute significantly give a lot to

affluent rich

although however

earnings money made

sign of success symbol of achievement

worldly impact effect on everyone

held in higher esteem considered more important

on the one hand firstly

wealth money

enjoy their life to the fullest have a good life

common pervasive

elevate values raised importance

related to concerning

altruism doing things for others

however regardless

honest truthful

admit confide, say

equated made equal

afford be able to pay for

possessions things you have

lifestyle standard of living

desire want

free time spare time

peace of mind not worried

completely totally

leisure free time

in past centuries hundreds of years ago

admired looked upon fondly

shameless examples not feeling bad about themselves role models

personal enjoyment loving for themselves

therefore thus

financial freedom ability to buy things

strictest most severe

direct definition clear description

engender create

satisfaction feeling good about

active pursuits not passive jobs

contributed added to

diminishes gets smaller

gains increases

dissatisfaction not satisfied with

less present not there as much

as long as so far as

destitute poverty very, very poor

pursue meaningful outlets do something important in life

energies attempts, abilities

renowned famous

throughout history for a long time from the past to now

considered regarded as

contributions giving something back

personal joy sense of achievement

derive get

full exercise complete use

extended lengthened

professions jobs

determination grit

creativity imagination

growth getting bigger

despite regardless of

material benefits money, things

shape influence

surer symbol better sign

locate find

balance keep equal

ideals principles

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈɑːgjuː 
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)t sɪgˈnɪfɪkəntli 
ˈæflʊənt
ɔːlˈðəʊ 
ˈɜːnɪŋz 
saɪn ɒv səkˈsɛs
ˈwɜːldli ˈɪmpækt 
hɛld ɪn ˈhaɪər ɪsˈtiːm.
ɒn ðə wʌn hænd
wɛlθ 
ɪnˈʤɔɪ ðeə laɪf tuː ðə ˈfʊlɪst
ˈkɒmən 
ˈɛlɪveɪt ˈvæljuːz
rɪˈleɪtɪd tuː 
ˈæltrʊɪzm
haʊˈɛvə
ˈɒnɪst 
ədˈmɪt 
ɪˈkweɪtɪd 
əˈfɔːd
pəˈzɛʃənz 
ˈlaɪfˌstaɪl 
dɪˈzaɪə 
friː taɪm 
piːs ɒv maɪnd 
kəmˈpliːtli 
ˈlɛʒə
ɪn pɑːst ˈsɛnʧʊriz
ədˈmaɪəd 
ˈʃeɪmlɪs ɪgˈzɑːmplz 
ˈpɜːsnl ɪnˈʤɔɪmənt
ˈðeəfɔː
faɪˈnænʃəl ˈfriːdəm 
ˈstrɪktɪst 
dɪˈrɛkt ˌdɛfɪˈnɪʃən 
ɪnˈʤɛndə 
ˌsætɪsˈfækʃən 
ˈæktɪv pəˈsjuːts 
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)tɪd 
dɪˈmɪnɪʃɪz 
geɪnz
dɪsˌsætɪsˈfækʃən 
lɛs ˈprɛznt 
æz lɒŋ æz 
ˈdɛstɪtjuːt ˈpɒvəti
pəˈsjuː ˈmiːnɪŋfʊl ˈaʊtlɛts 
ˈɛnəʤiz
rɪˈnaʊnd 
θru(ː)ˈaʊt ˈhɪstəri 
kənˈsɪdəd 
ˌkɒntrɪˈbjuːʃənz 
ˈpɜːsnl ʤɔɪ 
dɪˈraɪv 
fʊl ˈɛksəsaɪz 
ɪksˈtɛndɪd 
prəˈfɛʃənz 
dɪˌtɜːmɪˈneɪʃən
ˌkriːeɪˈtɪvɪti
grəʊθ 
dɪsˈpaɪt 
məˈtɪərɪəl ˈbɛnɪfɪts 
ʃeɪp 
ˈʃʊərə ˈsɪmbəl 
ləʊˈkeɪt 
ˈbæləns 
aɪˈdɪəlz

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many would a_____e that those who c__________________________y to society, such as artists, teachers and scientists, are more successful than the a_________t. In my opinion, a__________h e_________s can be a s_________________s, one’s w_____________t should be h_________________m.

O________________d, w_________h allows an individual to e_______________________________t. It is c________n in popular culture to e______________s r____________o a____________m, h_____________r, most h____________t individuals would a_________t that success can be e____________d with what one can a________d. The wealthy can afford the p________________s and l_____________e they d_______e and also have the f___________e and p_______________d to c______________y enjoy their l___________e. I__________________s, such people were a____________d as s_____________________s of p_____________________t. T____________e, this f________________m can be viewed as the s____________t and more d____________________n of success.

However, money itself does not always e_________r a feeling of s_____________n in the same way as more a__________________s in life. Many wealthy individuals feel that they have c_____________d little to society and this d_______________s their enjoyment of their g_______s. Such d__________________n is l____________t in individuals who, a_____________s they are not living in d_________________y, p___________________________s for their e_____________s. For example, r__________d scientists t_________________y are often not extremely wealthy, yet they are c___________d great successes due to their c_____________s and the p________________y they d_______e from the f______________e of their abilities. This fact can be e_____________d to all other p_____________s that involve d________________n, c______________y, and the g__________h of one’s influence.

In conclusion, d________e the m_________________s of wealth, it is clear that one’s ability to s_______e the world is a s_____________l of success. Every individual and society must l________e a b________e between these two i______s.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.discovermagazine.com/the-sciences/the-10-greatest-scientists-of-all-time

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam

Success

  1. When a person is successful, are they also happy?
  2. What is success?
  3. Do relationships affect success?
  4. Which is more important for success: opportunity or hard work?
  5. What defines success for people in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Some think schools should rewards students who have the best academic results, while others think it’s more important to reward students who achieve other types of success (such as sports, music, and good behaviour).

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.