This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of competition between older and younger people from the real IELTS exam.
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IELTS Essay: Competition between Older and Younger People
Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs.
What problems does this cause?
What are the solutions?
In many workplaces, there is a natural conflict between younger and older employees. In my opinion, this can impact staff morale in a number of ways and the best solutions involve competent management and hiring practices.
The ramifications of an age-diversified workplace relate to the environment. When new employees join, there is often resentment from older workers who feel threatened or must compensate for their new colleagues’ inexperience. If the younger workers are arrogant, this conflict will grow into animosity and result in a toxic workplace culture. Similarly, if they are unable to quickly adapt to the company, older workers will likely become frustrated. Conversely, there is also the possibility, particularly if the work involves emerging technologies, that the more experienced workers will lag behind and younger workers will feel hampered. This can also lead to an unhealthy workplace atmosphere.
The solutions for the problems detailed above relate to management and hiring. A company that selects a qualified young employee with a positive mindset does not have to fear negative effects on morale. After hiring, management also plays a key role in dissolving tensions and preventing their initial occurrences. For example, managers who know the strengths and weaknesses of their employees well will not team up workers with contrary personalities. Additionally, by ensuring older employees stay current with new technology, managers will avoid the potential conflict arising from changes in their field. Finally, the manager must also take steps to guarantee the workplace has strong cohesion by valuing contributions from all employees, setting a relaxed atmosphere, being transparent, and ensuring there are no double standards due to age.
In conclusion, the issues stemming from a variety of ages working together concern the environment and the solutions involve strong management. In this way, these seemingly inevitable conflicts can be mitigated.
Analysis
1. In many workplaces, there is a natural conflict between younger and older employees. 2. In my opinion, this can impact staff morale in a number of ways and the best solutions involve competent management and hiring practices.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.
1. The ramifications of an age-diversified workplace relate to the environment. 2. When new employees join, there is often resentment from older workers who feel threatened or must compensate for their new colleagues’ inexperience. 3. If the younger workers are arrogant, this conflict will grow into animosity and result in a toxic workplace culture. 4. Similarly, if they are unable to quickly adapt to the company, older workers will likely become frustrated. 5. Conversely, there is also the possibility, particularly if the work involves emerging technologies, that the more experienced workers will lag behind and younger workers will feel hampered. 6. This can also lead to an unhealthy workplace atmosphere.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific examples.
- Keep developing it fully.
- You should vary long and short sentences.
- And always relate back to the essay topic.
1. The solutions for the problems detailed above relate to management and hiring. 2. A company that selects a qualified young employee with a positive mindset does not have to fear negative effects on morale. 3. After hiring, management also plays a key role in dissolving tensions and preventing their initial occurrences. 4. For example, managers who know the strengths and weaknesses of their employees well will not team up workers with contrary personalities. 5. Additionally, by ensuring older employees stay current with new technology, managers will avoid the potential conflict arising from changes in their field. 6. Finally, the manager must also take steps to guarantee the workplace has strong cohesion by valuing contributions from all employees, setting a relaxed atmosphere, being transparent, and ensuring there are no double standards due to age.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Continue developing it…
- as fully as possible!
- Any extra detail will help you get a better mark.
1. In conclusion, the issues stemming from a variety of ages working together concern the environment and the solutions involve strong management. 2. In this way, these seemingly inevitable conflicts can be mitigated.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
Vocabulary
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
In many workplaces, there is a natural conflict between younger and older employees. In my opinion, this can impact staff morale in a number of ways and the best solutions involve competent management and hiring practices.
The ramifications of an age-diversified workplace relate to the environment. When new employees join, there is often resentment from older workers who feel threatened or must compensate for their new colleagues’ inexperience. If the younger workers are arrogant, this conflict will grow into animosity and result in a toxic workplace culture. Similarly, if they are unable to quickly adapt to the company, older workers will likely become frustrated. Conversely, there is also the possibility, particularly if the work involves emerging technologies, that the more experienced workers will lag behind and younger workers will feel hampered. This can also lead to an unhealthy workplace atmosphere.
The solutions for the problems detailed above relate to management and hiring. A company that selects a qualified young employee with a positive mindset does not have to fear negative effects on morale. After hiring, management also plays a key role in dissolving tensions and preventing their initial occurrences. For example, managers who know the strengths and weaknesses of their employees well will not team up workers with contrary personalities. Additionally, by ensuring older employees stay current with new technology, managers will avoid the potential conflict arising from changes in their field. Finally, the manager must also take steps to guarantee the workplace has strong cohesion by valuing contributions from all employees, setting a relaxed atmosphere, being transparent, and ensuring there are no double standards due to age.
In conclusion, the issues stemming from a variety of ages working together concern the environment and the solutions involve strong management. In this way, these seemingly inevitable conflicts can be mitigated.
Answers
workplaces offices and other places where people work
natural conflict inevitable tension
staff morale how employees feel
involve has to do with
competent management capable bosses
hiring practices how people are employed
ramifications implications
age-diversified different ages
environment the atmosphere
resentment anger towards
threatened feel insecure
compensate make up for
inexperience not having done the work before
arrogant believing too much in yourself
conflict problems
animosity strong resentment, hatred
toxic poisonous, bad
culture atmosphere
similarly not so different
adapt change to
frustrated anger
possibility chance
particularly especially
emerging technologies innovations
lag behind not stay current with changes
hampered held back
unhealthy workplace atmosphere bad feelings among employees
detailed above described before
positive mindset good outlook
plays a key role has a big part in
dissolving tensions making people feel better, solving conflicts
preventing stopping from happening to begin with
initial occurrences happening the first time
strengths and weaknesses what you are good and bad at
team up work together
contrary personalities people likely to not get along
ensuring guaranteeing
stay current keep up to date
avoid prevent from happening
potential conflict possible fights
arising coming from
take steps act on
guarantee make sure
strong cohesion linked together well
valuing contributions considering what employees do important
setting a relaxed atmosphere making everything feel good
transparent honest and open
ensuring making sure
double standards different standards for different people
stemming from coming from
concern have to do with
seemingly inevitable appears it will happen no matter what
mitigated curged, controlled, limited
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:
ˈwɜːkˌpleɪsɪz
ˈnæʧrəl ˈkɒnflɪkt
stɑːf mɒˈrɑːl
ɪnˈvɒlv
ˈkɒmpɪtənt ˈmænɪʤmənt
ˈhaɪərɪŋ ˈpræktɪsɪz
ˌræmɪfɪˈkeɪʃənz
eɪʤ-daɪˈvɜːsɪfaɪd
ɪnˈvaɪərənmənt
rɪˈzɛntmənt
ˈθrɛtnd
ˈkɒmpɛnseɪt
ˌɪnɪksˈpɪərɪəns
ˈærəʊgənt
ˈkɒnflɪkt
ˌænɪˈmɒsɪti
ˈtɒksɪk
ˈkʌlʧə
ˈsɪmɪləli
əˈdæpt
frʌsˈtreɪtɪd
ˌpɒsəˈbɪlɪti
pəˈtɪkjʊləli
ɪˈmɜːʤɪŋ tɛkˈnɒləʤiz
læg bɪˈhaɪnd
ˈhæmpəd
ʌnˈhɛlθi ˈwɜːkˌpleɪs ˈætməsfɪə
ˈdiːteɪld əˈbʌv
ˈpɒzətɪv ˈmaɪndsɛt
pleɪz ə kiː rəʊl
dɪˈzɒlvɪŋ ˈtɛnʃənz
prɪˈvɛntɪŋ
ɪˈnɪʃəl əˈkʌrənsɪz
strɛŋθs ænd ˈwiːknɪsɪz
tiːm ʌp
ˈkɒntrəri ˌpɜːsəˈnælɪtiz
ɪnˈʃʊərɪŋ
steɪ ˈkʌrənt
əˈvɔɪd
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl ˈkɒnflɪkt
əˈraɪzɪŋ
teɪk stɛps
ˌgærənˈtiː
strɒŋ kəʊˈhiːʒən
ˈvæljuːɪŋ ˌkɒntrɪˈbjuːʃənz
ˈsɛtɪŋ ə rɪˈlækst ˈætməsfɪə
trænsˈpeərənt
ɪnˈʃʊərɪŋ
ˈdʌbl ˈstændədz
ˈstɛmɪŋ frɒm
kənˈsɜːn
ˈsiːmɪŋli ɪnˈɛvɪtəbl
ˈmɪtɪgeɪtɪd
Vocabulary Practice
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
In many w__________s, there is a n________________t between younger and older employees. In my opinion, this can impact s____________e in a number of ways and the best solutions i__________e c____________t m____________t and h__________________s.
The r______________s of an a________________d workplace relate to the e_______________t. When new employees join, there is often r__________t from older workers who feel t____________d or must c_____________e for their new colleagues’ i______________e. If the younger workers are a___________t, this c________t will grow into a___________y and result in a t_______c workplace c___________e. S__________y, if they are unable to quickly a______t to the company, older workers will likely become f_____________d. Conversely, there is also the p____________y, p_____________y if the work involves e___________________________s, that the more experienced workers will l________________d and younger workers will feel h___________d. This can also lead to an u_____________________________________e.
The solutions for the problems d_______________e relate to management and hiring. A company that selects a qualified young employee with a p______________t does not have to fear negative effects on morale. After hiring, management also p_________________e in d_________________s and p____________g their i____________________s. For example, managers who know the s__________________________s of their employees well will not t______________p workers with c_______________________s. Additionally, by e____________g older employees s______________t with new technology, managers will a________d the p___________________t a_________g from changes in their field. Finally, the manager must also t___________s to g___________e the workplace has s____________________n by v_____________________s from all employees, s_______________________________e, being t______________t, and e___________g there are no d____________________s due to age.
In conclusion, the issues s______________m a variety of ages working together c_____________n the environment and the solutions involve strong management. In this way, these s___________________e conflicts can be m_____________d.
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:
Reading Practice
Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:
https://www.who.int/ageing/features/workplace-ageism/en/
Speaking Practice
Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:
Work
- Why did you choose your job?
- How much work do you do in a week?
- Do you have to work on weekends as well?
Writing Practice
Practice with the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:
When a person spends most of his or her time working a job with little job satisfaction, their life loses meaning.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Interesting essay but also complicated
Yes, hope it can help you to improve – aim for the stars!
Vocabulary practice ♥ ☜☆☞
Thanks, Harjot!
My vocabulary isn’t very wide. I read books to help, but I can hardly remember the definitions of complex words even after I look them up. Do you have any methods that can help me?
Sure, there are many methods.
You need to push them deep into your brain so the best ways to do that are to hear/read them again and again in different readings and listenings. Look up similar videos and read different articles.
To make them even more memorable you must use them: take notes, write sentences, use them in speaking, etc.
Get creative!
These days, it is increasingly more common to see that there is stiff competition between older and younger individuals for different job positions. in my opinion, this can result in an increasing unemployment rate in the older groups and can be remediated by changing economic policies related to foreign investment.
it is a common site to see lots of people struggle to find an appropriate job even in developed countries. there is a cut throat competition in different sections of the economy. one natural result would be that lots of people cannot survive in this atmosphere and they should fight with others for some limited positions. generally speaking, young people have more chance to be recruited as they have more energy overall. furthermore, lots of them are single and can apply for jobs even in far places. something that is not true for older ones because they often bond with their families. consequently, we can expect a higher portion of older people to be out of work.
The government can alleviate labor market problems by changing economic policies to facilitate foreign investment. relying on domestic revenues alone would have debilitating effects on the countries economic growth. there are lots of companies overseas which want to invest in different sections and they should be allowed to do that. their money can create a lot of job options and older people unemployment rate can be solved readily. a stand out example in this area is China. after Mao (the leader of China in the 20th century) changed the country policy and open the door for foreigners, statistics showed that economy growth skyrocketed and abundant job positions were produced in that part of the world.
to sum up, older people can have more problems in finding suitable jobs and the government can change the scenery by adopting new policies regarding foreign investment. better work conditions for all age groups can curb loss of social issues related to unemployment too.