IELTS Essay: Family & Friends

IELTS Essay: Family & Friends

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IELTS Essay: Family & Friends

Some people believe that family is more important than friends.

To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Many believe that family obligations outweigh those towards friends. In my opinion, though this varies by individual to some extent, family holds the stronger claim.

Those who feel friends are more important argue that as an adult, friends are more influential. While still living at home, there is little doubt that one’s family has more sway; this reverses after university when a person lives on their own. They will probably end up spending more time with friends from work or school, especially if they are living far from home. Additionally, friends are chosen and family is not. This autonomy in selecting a circle of friends means that they are more likely to, relative to one’s family, share similar beliefs and personal qualities.

Nonetheless, friends pass in and out of life and family lasts forever. Family has, naturally, the greatest influence in the developmental years of life when researchers believe the majority of identity formation takes place. Coupled with genetic factors, this is why family members have similar attitudes and beliefs, in general. Unlike friends, a person’s relationship with their family, assuming they are not estranged, will span their entire life. At various points throughout adulthood, most people will turn to their immediate or extended family for critical advice or support, strengthening familial bonds. This enduring link makes family a more powerful force than friends.

In conclusion, though friends can take on increasing value, family have the greatest importance taken as a whole. It is therefore key that families stay in touch and maintain friendly relations.

Analysis

1. Many believe that family obligations outweigh those towards friends. 2. In my opinion, though this varies by individual to some extent, family holds the stronger claim.

  1. Paraphrase the essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who feel friends are more important argue that as an adult, friends are more influential. 2. While still living at home, there is little doubt that one’s family has more sway; this reverses after university when a person lives on their own. 3. They will probably end up spending more time with friends from work or school, especially if they are living far from home. 4. Additionally, friends are chosen and family is not. 5. This autonomy in selecting a circle of friends means that they are more likely to, relative to one’s family, share similar beliefs and personal qualities.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Write about it specifically.
  4. Add more support for the same main idea.
  5. Conclude with a strong statement.

1. Nonetheless, friends pass in and out of life and family lasts forever. 2. Family has, naturally, the greatest influence in the developmental years of life when researchers believe the majority of identity formation takes place. 3. Coupled with genetic factors, this is why family members have similar attitudes and beliefs, in general. 4. Unlike friends, a person’s relationship with their family, assuming they are not estranged, will span their entire life. 5. At various points throughout adulthood, most people will turn to their immediate or extended family for critical advice or support, strengthening familial bonds. 6. This enduring link makes family a more powerful force than friends.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a main idea at the end.
  2. Begin to explain your main idea.
  3. Continue developing it.
  4. Make sure your arguments are specific.
  5. Your arguments should be nuanced.
  6. Relate it back to your main idea and the overall question.

1. In conclusion, though friends can take on increasing value, family have the greatest importance taken as a whole. 2. It is therefore key that families stay in touch and maintain friendly relations.

  1. Summarise your main ideas and repeat your opinion.
  2. Add a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean?

Many believe that family obligations outweigh those towards friends. In my opinion, though this varies by individual to some extent, family holds the stronger claim.

Those who feel friends are more important argue that as an adult, friends are more influential. While still living at home, there is little doubt that one’s family has more sway; this reverses after university when a person lives on their own. They will probably end up spending more time with friends from work or school, especially if they are living far from home. Additionally, friends are chosen and family is not. This autonomy in selecting a circle of friends means that they are more likely to, relative to one’s family, share similar beliefs and personal qualities.

Nonetheless, friends pass in and out of life and family lasts forever. Family has, naturally, the greatest influence in the developmental years of life when researchers believe the majority of identity formation takes place. Coupled with genetic factors, this is why family members have similar attitudes and beliefs, in general. Unlike friends, a person’s relationship with their family, assuming they are not estranged, will span their entire life. At various points throughout adulthood, most people will turn to their immediate or extended family for critical advice or support, strengthening familial bonds. This enduring link makes family a more powerful force than friends.

In conclusion, though friends can take on increasing value, family have the greatest importance taken as a whole. It is therefore key that families stay in touch and maintain friendly relations.

Answers

obligations duties

outweigh stronger than

varies there is difference

to some extent to a degree

holds has

stronger claim better belief

argue feel

influential shape/sway

there is little doubt not much question

sway influence

reverses changes course

lives on their own not living at home

end up finally

especially in particular

far from distantly

additionally also

autonomy freedom

selecting choosing

circle of friends closest friends

relative to related to

share give

personal qualities characteristics, personality

pass in and out of life not permanent fixtures

lasts stays

naturally of course

greatest influence biggest force

developmental years when growing up

researchers scientists

majority most of

identity formation takes place personalities begin to form

coupled with genetic factors combined with natural elements

attitudes views

beliefs opinions

in general overall

unlike friends in contrast to friends

estranged no longer have a relationship with, became strangers

span entire width

entire life whole life

various points different parts

throughout adulthood as an adult

turn to seek help from

immediate or extended family close family and more distant relatives

critical advice good suggestions

support help

strengthening familial bonds making families closer

enduring link strong relationship

more powerful force influential

take on increasing value becoming more important

taken as a whole overall

therefore thus

stay in touch keep in contact

maintain friendly relations still on good terms with

Pronunciation

ˌɒblɪˈgeɪʃənz 
aʊtˈweɪ 
ˈveəriz 
tuː sʌm ɪksˈtɛnt
həʊldz 
ˈstrɒŋgə kleɪm
ˈɑːgjuː 
ˌɪnflʊˈɛnʃəl
ðeər ɪz ˈlɪtl daʊt
sweɪ
rɪˈvɜːsɪz 
lɪvz ɒn ðeər əʊn
ɛnd ʌp 
ɪsˈpɛʃəli 
fɑː frɒm 
əˈdɪʃənli
ɔːˈtɒnəmi 
sɪˈlɛktɪŋ 
ˈsɜːkl ɒv frɛndz
ˈrɛlətɪv tuː 
ʃeə 
ˈpɜːsnl ˈkwɒlɪtiz
pɑːs ɪn ænd aʊt ɒv laɪf 
lɑːsts 
ˈnæʧrəli,
ˈgreɪtɪst ˈɪnflʊəns 
dɪˌvɛləpˈmɛntl jɪəz 
rɪˈsɜːʧəz 
məˈʤɒrɪti 
aɪˈdɛntɪti fɔːˈmeɪʃən teɪks pleɪs
ˈkʌpld wɪð ʤɪˈnɛtɪk ˈfæktəz
ˈætɪtjuːdz 
bɪˈliːfs
ɪn ˈʤɛnərəl
ʌnˈlaɪk frɛndz
ɪsˈtreɪnʤd
spæn 
ɪnˈtaɪə laɪf
ˈveərɪəs pɔɪnts 
θru(ː)ˈaʊt əˈdʌlthʊd
tɜːn tuː 
ɪˈmiːdiət ɔːr ɪksˈtɛndɪd ˈfæmɪli 
ˈkrɪtɪkəl ədˈvaɪs 
səˈpɔːt
ˈstrɛŋθənɪŋ ˈfæmɪliəl bɒndz
ɪnˈdjʊərɪŋ lɪŋk 
mɔː ˈpaʊəfʊl fɔːs 
teɪk ɒn ɪnˈkriːsɪŋ ˈvæljuː
ˈteɪkən æz ə həʊl
ˈðeəfɔː 
steɪ ɪn tʌʧ 
meɪnˈteɪn ˈfrɛndli rɪˈleɪʃənz

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

Many believe that family o_______________s o___________h those towards friends. In my opinion, though this v_______s by individual t_____________t, family h______s the s______________m.

Those who feel friends are more important a_______e that as an adult, friends are more i______________l. While still living at home, t____________________t that one’s family has more s_____y; this r__________s after university when a person l____________________n. They will probably e_______p spending more time with friends from work or school, e____________y if they are living f___________m home. A________________y, friends are chosen and family is not. This a___________y in s___________g a c________________s means that they are more likely to, r________________o one’s family, s___________e similar beliefs and p_____________________s.

Nonetheless, friends p________________________e and family l______s forever. Family has, n______________y, the g________________e in the d_____________________s of life when r_________________s believe the m_____________y of i_______________________n t_____________e. C__________________________s, this is why family members have similar a_____________s and b_________s, i________________l. U_______________s, a person’s relationship with their family, assuming they are not e______________d, will s_____n their e____________e. At v__________________________________d, most people will t________o their i_____________________________________y for c__________________e or s__________t, s______________________________s. This e____________k makes family a m____________________e than friends.

In conclusion, though friends can t_________n i____________________e, family have the greatest importance t____________________e. It is t_____________e key that families s______________h and m_________________________s.

Listening Practice

Listen below and use the activities in here to practice:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and practice with these ideas:

https://www.wired.com/gallery/long-distance-gear-to-stay-connected/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Friends

  1. Do you talk about yourself to your friends?
  2. Do you like to listen or talk with your friends?
  3. Do you often change your mind about your friends?
  4. Is it important to have friends?

Writing Practice

Write about the related question below and then check with my sample answer:

It is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and so on are involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Essay Task 1 Water Usage Australia

IELTS Essay Task 1 Water Usage Australia

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay related to water usage in Australia.

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IELTS Essay Task 1 Water Usage Australia

The charts show the total usage proportions for water in Australia and a breakdown of its residential purposes. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the vast majority of water is dedicated to houses, followed by apartments, industry, businesses and finally other. In terms of the residential use, it is mainly for bathrooms and gardens, with lower numbers for washing clothes, toilets and kitchens.

Looking first of all at the pie chart, houses represent 57% of total water usage, far surpassing apartments at 13%, industry at 11%, business 10%, government 6%, and lastly other (3%).

The bar chart delineates the uses of residential water, including both homes and apartments. Nearly 30% of all water was used for bathrooms, the highest figure, while gardens was slightly lower at 26%. Washing clothes translates to 20% of usage, followed by toilets at 15%, and kitchen use totaling just 10%.

Analysis

1. The charts show the total usage proportions for water in Australia and a breakdown of its residential purposes. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the vast majority of water is dedicated to houses, followed by apartments, industry, businesses and finally other. 3. In terms of the residential use, it is mainly for bathrooms and gardens, with lower numbers for washing clothes, toilets and kitchens.

  1. Paraphrase what the charts show.
  2. Write an overview of the first chart.
  3. And the second one! Read more about overviews here.

1. Looking first of all at the pie chart, houses represent 57% of total water usage, far surpassing apartments at 13%, industry at 11%, business 10%, government 6%, and lastly other (3%).

  1. Describe the data fully.

1. The bar chart delineates the use of residential water, including both homes and apartments. 2. Nearly 30% of all water was used for bathrooms, the highest figure, while gardens was slightly lower at 26%. 3. Washing clothes translates to 20% of usage, followed by toilets at 15%, and kitchen use totaling just 10%.

  1. Move on to the other graph.
  2. Describe the data.
  3. Make sure you don’t miss out on any data.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean?

The charts show the total usage proportions for water in Australia and a breakdown of its residential purposes. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the vast majority of water is dedicated to houses, followed by apartments, industry, businesses and finally other. In terms of the residential use, it is mainly for bathrooms and gardens, with lower numbers for washing clothes, toilets and kitchens.

Looking first of all at the pie chart, houses represent 57% of total water usage, far surpassing apartments at 13%, industry at 11%, business 10%, government 6%, and lastly other (3%).

The bar chart delineates the uses of residential water, including both homes and apartments. Nearly 30% of all water was used for bathrooms, the highest figure, while gardens was slightly lower at 26%. Washing clothes translates to 20% of usage, followed by toilets at 15%, and kitchen use totaling just 10%.

Answers

total usage proportions complete percentages

breakdown detailed

residential purposes how it is used for homes

looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent in general

vast majority most of

dedicated to used for

followed by then

in terms of as it relates to

mainly mostly

lower numbers not as high

looking first of all at firstly

represent are

far surpassing a lot above

lastly finally

delineates describes

nearly almost

highest figure biggest number

slightly lower a little less

translates means

followed by next

totaling just all together only

Pronunciation

ˈtəʊtl ˈjuːzɪʤ prəˈpɔːʃənz 
ˈbreɪkˌdaʊn 
ˌrɛzɪˈdɛnʃəl ˈpɜːpəsɪz
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt 
vɑːst məˈʤɒrɪti 
ˈdɛdɪkeɪtɪd tuː 
ˈfɒləʊd baɪ 
ɪn tɜːmz ɒv 
ˈmeɪnli 
ˈləʊə ˈnʌmbəz 
ˈlʊkɪŋ fɜːst ɒv ɔːl æt 
ˌrɛprɪˈzɛnt 
fɑː sɜːˈpɑːsɪŋ 
ˈlɑːstli 
dɪˈlɪnɪeɪts 
ˈnɪəli 
ˈhaɪɪst ˈfɪgə
ˈslaɪtli ˈləʊə 
trænsˈleɪts 
ˈfɒləʊd baɪ 
ˈtəʊtlɪŋ ʤʌst 

Vocabulary Practice

The charts show the total usage proportions for water in Australia and a breakdown of its residential purposes. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the vast majority of water is dedicated to houses, followed by apartments, industry, businesses and finally other. In terms of the residential use, it is mainly for bathrooms and gardens, with lower numbers for washing clothes, toilets and kitchens.

Looking first of all at the pie chart, houses represent 57% of total water usage, far surpassing apartments at 13%, industry at 11%, business 10%, government 6%, and lastly other (3%).

The bar chart delineates the uses of residential water, including both homes and apartments. Nearly 30% of all water was used for bathrooms, the highest figure, while gardens was slightly lower at 26%. Washing clothes translates to 20% of usage, followed by toilets at 15%, and kitchen use totaling just 10%.

Listening Practice

Learn more about water scarcity below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read about water in Australia and practice with these ideas:

https://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-7471497/Australias-water-shame-waste-90-precious-resource-not-recycling-enough.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Water

  1. Do you drink a lot of water?
  2. Do you prefer bottled or tap water?
  3. Did you drink a lot of water when you were younger?
  4. Would you say that bottled water is expensive in your country?

Writing Practice

Write about the chart below and then check with my sample answer:

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Answer Essay IELTS Cambridge 15: Coffee and Tea Buying and Drinking Habits (Cambridge IELTS 15)
IELTS Essay: Learning Literature

IELTS Essay: Learning Literature

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of learning literature from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Learning Literature

Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many today claim that learning about literature should no longer be a key component of the high school curriculum. In my opinion, there are practical reasons for this sentiment but literature still serves a purpose.

Proponents of this reform argue other subjects deserve prioritisation. There is little doubt that in the 21st century, the most important subjects for students’ future careers relate to the sciences, such as engineering and computer science, or the practical humanities, like business. The earlier that students begin specialising, the more likely they are to have a head start on the competition and secure a well-paying job immediately after graduating high school or university. In contrast, the novels and poems that students read in high school are usually completely forgotten within a few years and do not teach any tangible skills that will help them advance in the real world.

Nonetheless, literature contains many of the most important and fundamental truths about the human condition. Life is about more than a career and great authors tackle the most fundamental philosophical and psychological questions. For example, the masters of 19th century Russian literature, including Tolstoy and Dostoevsky, are primarily concerned with human psychology and how this fits into a larger context of man’s search for meaning. Their exploration of these issues is relevant to everyone and cannot be replaced with a steady career. Moreover, the way in which great writers develop their themes, the aesthetic quality of their writing itself, imparts to careful readers the importance of artistic expression and may help them see outside the narrow modern confines of accumulating the most material wealth.

In conclusion, the utilitarian benefits of studying practical subjects do not outweigh the deeper values of literature. It is therefore advisable that literature be emphasised in high school classrooms.

Analysis

1. Many today claim that learning about literature should no longer be a key component of the high school curriculum. 2. In my opinion, there are practical reasons for this sentiment but literature still serves a purpose.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Proponents of this reform argue other subjects deserve prioritisation. 2. There is little doubt that in the 21st century, the most important subjects for students’ future careers relate to the sciences, such as engineering and computer science, or the practical humanities, like business. 3. The earlier that students begin specialising, the more likely they are to have a head start on the competition and secure a well-paying job immediately after graduating high school or university. 4. In contrast, the novels and poems that students read in high school are usually completely forgotten within a few years and do not teach any tangible skills that will help them advance in the real world.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it specifically.
  4. Use a counter-example to fully develop your main idea.

1. Nonetheless, literature contains many of the most important and fundamental truths about the human condition. 2. Life is about more than a career and great authors tackle the most fundamental philosophical and psychological questions. 3. For example, the masters of 19th century Russian literature, including Tolstoy and Dostoevsky, are primarily concerned with human psychology and how this fits into a larger context of man’s search for meaning. 4. Their exploration of these issues is relevant to everyone and cannot be replaced with a steady career. 5. Moreover, the way in which great writers develop their themes, the aesthetic quality of their writing itself, imparts to careful readers the importance of artistic expression and may help them see outside the narrow modern confines of accumulating the most material wealth.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Start a specific example.
  4. Develop the example.
  5. Develop it fully to finish the paragraph.

1. In conclusion, the utilitarian benefits of studying practical subjects do not outweigh the deeper values of literature. 2. It is therefore advisable that literature be emphasised in high school classrooms.

  1. Repeat your opinion and summarise your main ideas.
  2. Add a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean?

Many today claim that learning about literature should no longer be a key component of the high school curriculum. In my opinion, there are practical reasons for this sentiment but literature still serves a purpose.

Proponents of this reform argue other subjects deserve prioritisation. There is little doubt that in the 21st century, the most important subjects for students’ future careers relate to the sciences, such as engineering and computer science, or the practical humanities, like business. The earlier that students begin specialising, the more likely they are to have a head start on the competition and secure a well-paying job immediately after graduating high school or university. In contrast, the novels and poems that students read in high school are usually completely forgotten within a few years and do not teach any tangible skills that will help them advance in the real world.

Nonetheless, literature contains many of the most important and fundamental truths about the human condition. Life is about more than a career and great authors tackle the most fundamental philosophical and psychological questions. For example, the masters of 19th century Russian literature, including Tolstoy and Dostoevsky, are primarily concerned with human psychology and how this fits into a larger context of man’s search for meaning. Their exploration of these issues is relevant to everyone and cannot be replaced with a steady career. Moreover, the way in which great writers develop their themes, the aesthetic quality of their writing itself, imparts to careful readers the importance of artistic expression and may help them see outside the narrow modern confines of accumulating the most material wealth.

In conclusion, the utilitarian benefits of studying practical subjects do not outweigh the deeper values of literature. It is therefore advisable that literature be emphasised in high school classrooms.

Answers

claim argue

no longer not anymore

key component crucial part

curriculum what you’re learning at school

practical reasons real justifications

sentiment feeling

serves a purpose has a reason

proponents supporters

reform change

deserve prioritisation warrants valuing highly

there is little doubt that it is clear that

21st century 2000 – 2100

relate to has to do with

sciences chemistry, math, biology, physics, etc.

engineering figuring out how things work

computer science learning about computers

practical humanities business and economics

business learning about money, economics

specialising focusing on one area

head start getting ahead

competition fighting

secure safe

well-paying making good money

immediately after right following that

in contrast however

completely forgotten not remembered

tangible skills concrete abilities

advance getting ahead

real world reality

fundamental truths important facts about life

human condition people living in the world

tackle deal with

fundamental philosophical basic relating to life and death

psychological questions issues about the human mind

masters the best at something

19th century Russian literature books from Russia in the 1900s

Tolstoy Leo Tolstoy, writer of War and Peace

Dostoevsky Fyodor Dostoevsky, writer of The Brothers Karamazov

primarily concerned mainly to do with

human psychology how people think

fits into relates to

larger context what it concerns

man’s search for meaning finding a purpose in life

exploration finding out about

relevant related to

replaced instead of

steady career good job

moreover also

the way in which how it is done

develop their themes explore their concerns

aesthetic quality beauty, art

imparts gives

careful readers conscientious

artistic expression self-expression

see outside the narrow modern confines expand their worldview

accumulating the most material wealth getting richer

utilitarian benefits get something real from it

outweigh more important than

deeper values very important

advisable should be done

emphasised focused on

Pronunciation

kleɪm 
nəʊ ˈlɒŋgə 
kiː kəmˈpəʊnənt 
kəˈrɪkjʊləm
ˈpræktɪkəl ˈriːznz 
ˈsɛntɪmənt 
sɜːvz ə ˈpɜːpəs
prəˈpəʊnənts 
ˌriːˈfɔːm 
dɪˈzɜːv praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪzaɪˈzeɪʃən
ðeər ɪz ˈlɪtl daʊt ðæt 
ˈtwɛnti fɜːst ˈsɛnʧʊri
rɪˈleɪt tuː 
ˈsaɪənsɪz
ˌɛnʤɪˈnɪərɪŋ 
kəmˈpjuːtə ˈsaɪəns
ˈpræktɪkəl hju(ː)ˈmænɪtiz
ˈbɪznɪs
ˈspɛʃ(ə)laɪzɪŋ
hɛd stɑːt 
ˌkɒmpɪˈtɪʃən 
sɪˈkjʊə 
wɛl-ˈpeɪɪŋ 
ɪˈmiːdiətli ˈɑːftə 
ɪn ˈkɒntrɑːst
kəmˈpliːtli fəˈgɒtn 
ˈtænʤəbl skɪlz 
ədˈvɑːns 
rɪəl wɜːld
ˌfʌndəˈmɛntl truːðz 
ˈhjuːmən kənˈdɪʃən
ˈtækl 
ˌfʌndəˈmɛntl ˌfɪləˈsɒfɪkəl 
ˌsaɪkəˈlɒʤɪkəl ˈkwɛsʧənz
ˈmɑːstəz 
ˈnaɪnˈtiːŋθ ˈsɛnʧʊri ˈrʌʃ(ə)n ˈlɪtərɪʧə
ˈtɒlstɔɪ 
ˌdɒstɔɪˈɛfski
ˈpraɪmərɪli kənˈsɜːnd 
ˈhjuːmən saɪˈkɒləʤi 
fɪts ˈɪntuː 
ˈlɑːʤə ˈkɒntɛkst 
mænz sɜːʧ fɔː ˈmiːnɪŋ
ˌɛksplɔːˈreɪʃən 
ˈrɛlɪvənt 
rɪˈpleɪst 
ˈstɛdi kəˈrɪə
mɔːˈrəʊvə
ðə weɪ ɪn wɪʧ 
dɪˈvɛləp ðeə θiːmz
iːsˈθɛtɪk ˈkwɒlɪti 
ɪmˈpɑːts 
ˈkeəfʊl ˈriːdəz 
ɑːˈtɪstɪk ɪksˈprɛʃən 
siː ˌaʊtˈsaɪd ðə ˈnærəʊ ˈmɒdən ˈkɒnfaɪnz 
əˈkjuːmjʊleɪtɪŋ ðə məʊst məˈtɪərɪəl wɛlθ
ˌjuːtɪlɪˈteərɪən ˈbɛnɪfɪts 
aʊtˈweɪ 
ˈdiːpə ˈvæljuːz 
ədˈvaɪzəbl 
ˈɛmfəsaɪzd 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

Many today c_____m that learning about literature should n__________r be a k______________t of the high school c______________m. In my opinion, there are p_______________s for this s_____________t but literature still s_________________e.

P_______________s of this r_________m argue other subjects d_________________________n. T_____________________________t in the 2______________________y, the most important subjects for students’ future careers r___________o the s_________s, such as e______________g and c__________________e, or the p______________________s, like b_____________s. The earlier that students begin s_____________g, the more likely they are to have a h____________t on the c______________n and s__________e a w_____________g job i________________________r graduating high school or university. I__________________t, the novels and poems that students read in high school are usually c__________________n within a few years and do not teach any t_______________s that will help them a____________e in the r____________d.

Nonetheless, literature contains many of the most important and f________________s about the h________________n. Life is about more than a career and great authors t_________e the most f___________________________l and p__________________________s. For example, the m___________s of 1_________________________________e, including T___________y and D_____________y, are p____________________d with h__________________y and how this f__________o a l______________t of m__________________________g. Their e____________n of these issues is r_____________t to everyone and cannot be r_________d with a s_______________r. M__________r, t_____________________h great writers d__________________s, the a______________________y of their writing itself, i___________s to c_________________s the importance of a_________________n and may help them s________________________________s of a_________________________________________h.

In conclusion, the u_____________________s of studying practical subjects do not o_____________h the d______________s of literature. It is therefore a_____________e that literature be e_______________d in high school classrooms.

Listening Practice

Listen with the video below and use the following activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and practice with these ideas:

https://www.nytimes.com/2019/03/30/opinion/sunday/fix-high-school-education.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Books

  1. Do you like reading books?
  2. What kind of books do you like most?
  3. What sort of books did you read as a child?
  4. Is it important to read?

Writing Practice

Write about the related topic below, then check with my sample answer:

Some people say that school children should be mainly taught about the literature (e.g fiction and poetry) of their own country because it is more important than that of other countries.

To what extent do you agree?

IELTS Essay: Taking Care of Elderly People

IELTS Essay: Taking Care of Elderly People

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay from the general training exam on the topic of taking care of elderly people.

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IELTS Essay: Taking Care of Elderly People

Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them.

What are the problems related to this?

What are some possible solutions?

The caretakers of elderly individuals are often overworked and feel they are neglecting their duties. In my opinion, this hurts quality of care and the best solution is comprehensive, societal reform.

The main issues resulting from lack of time to look after the elderly have to do with poor care. A nurse with several patients to visit, who might all require around the clock care, must prioritise. The neglected patients are then more likely to develop bed sores, poor nutrition, and depression. In more extreme situations, patients with dementia or life-threatening conditions for example, there may be serious injury. An Alzheimer’s patient may wander out of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. A critically ill patient may need urgent care and not be able to contact the hospital in an emergency.

These problems can be partly remedied if society felt responsible for the elderly. There are examples of nations, chiefly Asian countries like Japan, where old people are highly respected. This permeates all levels of society and translates to children and grandchildren being more willing to take on the burden of care, as well as more attentive doctors and better government-funded social welfare programs. All these measures combined not only have a tangible, daily impact but also shift the societal mindset from considering the elderly a nuisance to regarding them as a milestone in life that all must pass through, deserving of respect.

In conclusion, the problems related to limited opportunities for looking after the elderly concern their level of care and can be combatted with a number of measures permeating multiple layers of society. Though unlikely, these reforms would evidence a core of human compassion.

Analysis

1. The caretakers of elderly individuals are often overworked and feel they are neglecting their duties. 2. In my opinion, this hurts quality of care and the best solution is comprehensive, societal reform.

  1. Paraphrase the essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions for IELTS here.

1. The main issues resulting from lack of time to look after the elderly have to do with poor care. 2. A nurse with several patients to visit, who might all require around the clock care, must prioritise. 3. The neglected patients are then more likely to develop bed sores, poor nutrition, and depression. 4. In more extreme situations, patients with dementia or life-threatening conditions for example, there may be serious injury. 5. An Alzheimer’s patient may wander out of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. 6. A critically ill patient may need urgent care and not be able to contact the hospital in an emergency.

  1. Write a topic sentence with your main idea at the end.
  2. Give a specific example.
  3. Develop it fully through the results.
  4. Continue the development.
  5. Use a similar example for further development.
  6. State the full results.

1. These problems can be partly remedied if society felt responsible for the elderly. 2. There are examples of nations, chiefly Asian countries like Japan, where old people are highly respected. 3. This permeates all levels of society and translates to children and grandchildren being more willing to take on the burden of care, as well as more attentive doctors and better government-funded social welfare programs. 4. All these measures combined not only have a tangible, daily impact but also shift the societal mindset from considering the elderly a nuisance to regarding them as a milestone in life that all must pass through, deserving of respect.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Begin a specific example.
  3. Develop it.
  4. Make sure that is as fully developed as possible.

1. In conclusion, the problems related to limited opportunities for looking after the elderly concern their level of care and can be combatted with a number of measures permeating multiple layers of society. 2. Though unlikely, these reforms would evidence a core of human compassion.

  1. Summarise your main ideas and repeat your opinions.
  2. Add a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean?

The caretakers of elderly individuals are often overworked and feel they are neglecting their duties. In my opinion, this hurts quality of care and the best solution is comprehensive, societal reform.

The main issues resulting from lack of time to look after the elderly have to do with poor care. A nurse with several patients to visit, who might all require around the clock care, must prioritise. The neglected patients are then more likely to develop bed sores, poor nutrition, and depression. In more extreme situations, patients with dementia or life-threatening conditions for example, there may be serious injury. An Alzheimer’s patient may wander out of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. A critically ill patient may need urgent care and not be able to contact the hospital in an emergency.

These problems can be partly remedied if society felt responsible for the elderly. There are examples of nations, chiefly Asian countries like Japan, where old people are highly respected. This permeates all levels of society and translates to children and grandchildren being more willing to take on the burden of care, as well as more attentive doctors and better government-funded social welfare programs. All these measures combined not only have a tangible, daily impact but also shift the societal mindset from considering the elderly a nuisance to regarding them as a milestone in life that all must pass through, deserving of respect.

In conclusion, the problems related to limited opportunities for looking after the elderly concern their level of care and can be combatted with a number of measures permeating multiple layers of society. Though unlikely, these reforms would evidence a core of human compassion.

Answers

caretakers people who take care

elderly individuals old people

overworked work too much

neglecting their duties not doing their jobs

quality of care how well someone is looked after

comprehensive complete

societal reform changes to society

main issues resulting from big problems coming from

poor care not well taken care of

several a bunch

around the clock care 24 hour care

prioritise make more important

neglected not paying attention to

bed sores lesions from not moving much

poor nutrition not eating well

depression feeling sad

in more extreme situations some bad cases

dementia forgetting things

life-threatening conditions cancer, paralysis, etc.

serious injury get hurt badly

Alzheimer’s patient condition where the mind deteriorates

wander out go outside

critically ill patient dying person

urgent care emergency situations

contact call

emergency urgent problem

partly remedied somewhat fixed

chiefly mainly

highly respected valued a lot

permeates all levels of society gets to all people

translates to means

take on the burden of care must take care of

attentive concientious

government-funded social welfare programs giving money to old people in retirement plans, checks, etc.

measures combined actions all together

tangible concrete

shift change

societal mindset way that society thinks

considering regarding

nuisance annoying

regarding as it relates to

milestone major moment in life

pass through go through

deserving of respect should be valued

limited opportunities not many chances

concern worry

level of care how well they are taken care of

combatted with fought

number of measures many steps

permeating going through

multiple layers of society many people

unlikely not going to happen probably

evidence support

core of human compassion people caring about others

Pronunciation

ˈkeəˌteɪkəz 
ˈɛldəli ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəlz 
ˌəʊvəˈwɜːkt 
nɪˈglɛktɪŋ ðeə ˈdjuːtiz
ˈkwɒlɪti ɒv keə 
ˌkɒmprɪˈhɛnsɪv
səˈsaɪətl ˌriːˈfɔːm
meɪn ˈɪʃuːz rɪˈzʌltɪŋ frɒm 
pʊə keə
ˈsɛvrəl 
əˈraʊnd ðə klɒk keə
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz.
nɪˈglɛktɪd 
bɛd sɔːz
pʊə nju(ː)ˈtrɪʃən
dɪˈprɛʃən
ɪn mɔːr ɪksˈtriːm ˌsɪtjʊˈeɪʃənz
dɪˈmɛnʃɪə 
laɪf-ˈθrɛtnɪŋ kənˈdɪʃənz 
ˈsɪərɪəs ˈɪnʤəri
ˈæltsˌhaɪməz ˈpeɪʃənt 
ˈwɒndər aʊt 
ˈkrɪtɪkəli ɪl ˈpeɪʃənt 
ˈɜːʤənt keə 
ˈkɒntækt 
ɪˈmɜːʤənsi
ˈpɑːtli ˈrɛmɪdid 
ˈʧiːfli 
ˈhaɪli rɪsˈpɛktɪd
ˈpɜːmɪeɪts ɔːl ˈlɛvlz ɒv səˈsaɪəti 
trænsˈleɪts tuː 
teɪk ɒn ðə ˈbɜːdn ɒv keə
əˈtɛntɪv 
ˈgʌvnmənt-ˈfʌndɪd ˈsəʊʃəl ˈwɛlfeə ˈprəʊgræmz
ˈmɛʒəz kəmˈbaɪnd 
ˈtænʤəbl
ʃɪft 
səˈsaɪətl ˈmaɪndsɛt 
kənˈsɪdərɪŋ 
ˈnjuːsns 
rɪˈgɑːdɪŋ 
ˈmaɪlstəʊn 
pɑːs θruː
dɪˈzɜːvɪŋ ɒv rɪsˈpɛkt
ˈlɪmɪtɪd ˌɒpəˈtjuːnɪtiz 
kənˈsɜːn 
ˈlɛvl ɒv keə
ˈkɒmbætɪd wɪð 
ˈnʌmbər ɒv ˈmɛʒəz 
ˈpɜːmɪeɪtɪŋ 
ˈmʌltɪpl ˈleɪəz ɒv səˈsaɪəti
ʌnˈlaɪkli
ˈɛvɪdəns 
kɔːr ɒv ˈhjuːmən kəmˈpæʃən

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

The c____________s of e_____________________s are often o________________d and feel they are n_______________________s. In my opinion, this hurts q________________e and the best solution is c_______________e, s______________________m.

The m________________s r__________________m lack of time to look after the elderly have to do with p_____________e. A nurse with s_________l patients to visit, who might all require a______________________e, must p_____________e. The n____________d patients are then more likely to develop b__________s, p_________________n, and d_____________n. I________________________s, patients with d_______________a or l____________________________s for example, there may be s________________y. An A_________________t may w__________t of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. A c_____________________t may need u_______________e and not be able to c_________t the hospital in an e______________y.

These problems can be p_________________d if society felt responsible for the elderly. There are examples of nations, c_______y Asian countries like Japan, where old people are h__________________d. This p_________________________y and t________________o children and grandchildren being more willing to t_____________________________e, as well as more a_______________e doctors and better g______________________________________s. All these m___________________d not only have a t___________e, daily impact but also s_____t the s_________________t from c________________g the elderly a n__________e to r_____________g them as a m_________e in life that all must p_____________h, d_________________t.

In conclusion, the problems related to l__________________________s for looking after the elderly c_______________n their l_______________e and can be c________________h a n______________s p________________g m____________________________y. Though u___________y, these reforms would e___________e a c________________________________n.

Listening Practice

Listen more about this topic and use these activities to practice:

Reading Practice

Read about a good example of societal changes in Japan below and practice with these ideas:

https://www.nytimes.com/2017/02/12/world/asia/japan-yokohama-aging-population-food.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with these related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Old People (Model answer available on my Patreon)

  1. What are the advantages of having an elderly person at home? 
  2. Is there anything that older people should learn from the younger generation?
  3. What can the younger generation learn from the older generation? 
  4. What qualities does a person need to take care of older people? 
  5. Do you think elderly people should be allowed to work? 

Writing Practice

Write about the related topic below and check with my sample answer:

Many people think that it is better to get advice from old rather than young people.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Speaking Test: Lists, Famous People, Food

This is an IELTS speaking practice test example from the real IELTS speaking exam.

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Speaking Part 1

Work

  1. Why did you choose your job?
  2. How much work do you do in a week?
  3. Do you have to work on weekends as well?

Lists

  1. Do you often make lists?
  2. Do you prefer making lists on paper or mobile phones?
  3. Do you make lists before you go shopping?
  4. Why do some people not like making lists?

Famous People

  1. Have you ever met a celebrity?
  2. What kinds of celebrities are you interested in?
  3. Are there any celebrities you would want to interview?

Speaking Part 2

Talk about a typical food that is eaten at special events in your country

What it is

When it is eaten

If you like it

Speaking Part 3

Food & Drink

  1. Is it common to eat with others in your country?
  2. Did you eat with your family a lot?
  3. Should people eat together more often?
  4. What foods are popular at holidays?