IELTS Essay: Learning Literature

IELTS Essay: Learning Literature

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of learning literature from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Learning Literature

Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many today claim that learning about literature should no longer be a key component of the high school curriculum. In my opinion, there are practical reasons for this sentiment but literature still serves a purpose.

Proponents of this reform argue other subjects deserve prioritisation. There is little doubt that in the 21st century, the most important subjects for students’ future careers relate to the sciences, such as engineering and computer science, or the practical humanities, like business. The earlier that students begin specialising, the more likely they are to have a head start on the competition and secure a well-paying job immediately after graduating high school or university. In contrast, the novels and poems that students read in high school are usually completely forgotten within a few years and do not teach any tangible skills that will help them advance in the real world.

Nonetheless, literature contains many of the most important and fundamental truths about the human condition. Life is about more than a career and great authors tackle the most fundamental philosophical and psychological questions. For example, the masters of 19th century Russian literature, including Tolstoy and Dostoevsky, are primarily concerned with human psychology and how this fits into a larger context of man’s search for meaning. Their exploration of these issues is relevant to everyone and cannot be replaced with a steady career. Moreover, the way in which great writers develop their themes, the aesthetic quality of their writing itself, imparts to careful readers the importance of artistic expression and may help them see outside the narrow modern confines of accumulating the most material wealth.

In conclusion, the utilitarian benefits of studying practical subjects do not outweigh the deeper values of literature. It is therefore advisable that literature be emphasised in high school classrooms.

Analysis

1. Many today claim that learning about literature should no longer be a key component of the high school curriculum. 2. In my opinion, there are practical reasons for this sentiment but literature still serves a purpose.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Proponents of this reform argue other subjects deserve prioritisation. 2. There is little doubt that in the 21st century, the most important subjects for students’ future careers relate to the sciences, such as engineering and computer science, or the practical humanities, like business. 3. The earlier that students begin specialising, the more likely they are to have a head start on the competition and secure a well-paying job immediately after graduating high school or university. 4. In contrast, the novels and poems that students read in high school are usually completely forgotten within a few years and do not teach any tangible skills that will help them advance in the real world.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it specifically.
  4. Use a counter-example to fully develop your main idea.

1. Nonetheless, literature contains many of the most important and fundamental truths about the human condition. 2. Life is about more than a career and great authors tackle the most fundamental philosophical and psychological questions. 3. For example, the masters of 19th century Russian literature, including Tolstoy and Dostoevsky, are primarily concerned with human psychology and how this fits into a larger context of man’s search for meaning. 4. Their exploration of these issues is relevant to everyone and cannot be replaced with a steady career. 5. Moreover, the way in which great writers develop their themes, the aesthetic quality of their writing itself, imparts to careful readers the importance of artistic expression and may help them see outside the narrow modern confines of accumulating the most material wealth.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Start a specific example.
  4. Develop the example.
  5. Develop it fully to finish the paragraph.

1. In conclusion, the utilitarian benefits of studying practical subjects do not outweigh the deeper values of literature. 2. It is therefore advisable that literature be emphasised in high school classrooms.

  1. Repeat your opinion and summarise your main ideas.
  2. Add a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean?

Many today claim that learning about literature should no longer be a key component of the high school curriculum. In my opinion, there are practical reasons for this sentiment but literature still serves a purpose.

Proponents of this reform argue other subjects deserve prioritisation. There is little doubt that in the 21st century, the most important subjects for students’ future careers relate to the sciences, such as engineering and computer science, or the practical humanities, like business. The earlier that students begin specialising, the more likely they are to have a head start on the competition and secure a well-paying job immediately after graduating high school or university. In contrast, the novels and poems that students read in high school are usually completely forgotten within a few years and do not teach any tangible skills that will help them advance in the real world.

Nonetheless, literature contains many of the most important and fundamental truths about the human condition. Life is about more than a career and great authors tackle the most fundamental philosophical and psychological questions. For example, the masters of 19th century Russian literature, including Tolstoy and Dostoevsky, are primarily concerned with human psychology and how this fits into a larger context of man’s search for meaning. Their exploration of these issues is relevant to everyone and cannot be replaced with a steady career. Moreover, the way in which great writers develop their themes, the aesthetic quality of their writing itself, imparts to careful readers the importance of artistic expression and may help them see outside the narrow modern confines of accumulating the most material wealth.

In conclusion, the utilitarian benefits of studying practical subjects do not outweigh the deeper values of literature. It is therefore advisable that literature be emphasised in high school classrooms.

Answers

claim argue

no longer not anymore

key component crucial part

curriculum what you’re learning at school

practical reasons real justifications

sentiment feeling

serves a purpose has a reason

proponents supporters

reform change

deserve prioritisation warrants valuing highly

there is little doubt that it is clear that

21st century 2000 – 2100

relate to has to do with

sciences chemistry, math, biology, physics, etc.

engineering figuring out how things work

computer science learning about computers

practical humanities business and economics

business learning about money, economics

specialising focusing on one area

head start getting ahead

competition fighting

secure safe

well-paying making good money

immediately after right following that

in contrast however

completely forgotten not remembered

tangible skills concrete abilities

advance getting ahead

real world reality

fundamental truths important facts about life

human condition people living in the world

tackle deal with

fundamental philosophical basic relating to life and death

psychological questions issues about the human mind

masters the best at something

19th century Russian literature books from Russia in the 1900s

Tolstoy Leo Tolstoy, writer of War and Peace

Dostoevsky Fyodor Dostoevsky, writer of The Brothers Karamazov

primarily concerned mainly to do with

human psychology how people think

fits into relates to

larger context what it concerns

man’s search for meaning finding a purpose in life

exploration finding out about

relevant related to

replaced instead of

steady career good job

moreover also

the way in which how it is done

develop their themes explore their concerns

aesthetic quality beauty, art

imparts gives

careful readers conscientious

artistic expression self-expression

see outside the narrow modern confines expand their worldview

accumulating the most material wealth getting richer

utilitarian benefits get something real from it

outweigh more important than

deeper values very important

advisable should be done

emphasised focused on

Pronunciation

kleɪm 
nəʊ ˈlɒŋgə 
kiː kəmˈpəʊnənt 
kəˈrɪkjʊləm
ˈpræktɪkəl ˈriːznz 
ˈsɛntɪmənt 
sɜːvz ə ˈpɜːpəs
prəˈpəʊnənts 
ˌriːˈfɔːm 
dɪˈzɜːv praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪzaɪˈzeɪʃən
ðeər ɪz ˈlɪtl daʊt ðæt 
ˈtwɛnti fɜːst ˈsɛnʧʊri
rɪˈleɪt tuː 
ˈsaɪənsɪz
ˌɛnʤɪˈnɪərɪŋ 
kəmˈpjuːtə ˈsaɪəns
ˈpræktɪkəl hju(ː)ˈmænɪtiz
ˈbɪznɪs
ˈspɛʃ(ə)laɪzɪŋ
hɛd stɑːt 
ˌkɒmpɪˈtɪʃən 
sɪˈkjʊə 
wɛl-ˈpeɪɪŋ 
ɪˈmiːdiətli ˈɑːftə 
ɪn ˈkɒntrɑːst
kəmˈpliːtli fəˈgɒtn 
ˈtænʤəbl skɪlz 
ədˈvɑːns 
rɪəl wɜːld
ˌfʌndəˈmɛntl truːðz 
ˈhjuːmən kənˈdɪʃən
ˈtækl 
ˌfʌndəˈmɛntl ˌfɪləˈsɒfɪkəl 
ˌsaɪkəˈlɒʤɪkəl ˈkwɛsʧənz
ˈmɑːstəz 
ˈnaɪnˈtiːŋθ ˈsɛnʧʊri ˈrʌʃ(ə)n ˈlɪtərɪʧə
ˈtɒlstɔɪ 
ˌdɒstɔɪˈɛfski
ˈpraɪmərɪli kənˈsɜːnd 
ˈhjuːmən saɪˈkɒləʤi 
fɪts ˈɪntuː 
ˈlɑːʤə ˈkɒntɛkst 
mænz sɜːʧ fɔː ˈmiːnɪŋ
ˌɛksplɔːˈreɪʃən 
ˈrɛlɪvənt 
rɪˈpleɪst 
ˈstɛdi kəˈrɪə
mɔːˈrəʊvə
ðə weɪ ɪn wɪʧ 
dɪˈvɛləp ðeə θiːmz
iːsˈθɛtɪk ˈkwɒlɪti 
ɪmˈpɑːts 
ˈkeəfʊl ˈriːdəz 
ɑːˈtɪstɪk ɪksˈprɛʃən 
siː ˌaʊtˈsaɪd ðə ˈnærəʊ ˈmɒdən ˈkɒnfaɪnz 
əˈkjuːmjʊleɪtɪŋ ðə məʊst məˈtɪərɪəl wɛlθ
ˌjuːtɪlɪˈteərɪən ˈbɛnɪfɪts 
aʊtˈweɪ 
ˈdiːpə ˈvæljuːz 
ədˈvaɪzəbl 
ˈɛmfəsaɪzd 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

Many today c_____m that learning about literature should n__________r be a k______________t of the high school c______________m. In my opinion, there are p_______________s for this s_____________t but literature still s_________________e.

P_______________s of this r_________m argue other subjects d_________________________n. T_____________________________t in the 2______________________y, the most important subjects for students’ future careers r___________o the s_________s, such as e______________g and c__________________e, or the p______________________s, like b_____________s. The earlier that students begin s_____________g, the more likely they are to have a h____________t on the c______________n and s__________e a w_____________g job i________________________r graduating high school or university. I__________________t, the novels and poems that students read in high school are usually c__________________n within a few years and do not teach any t_______________s that will help them a____________e in the r____________d.

Nonetheless, literature contains many of the most important and f________________s about the h________________n. Life is about more than a career and great authors t_________e the most f___________________________l and p__________________________s. For example, the m___________s of 1_________________________________e, including T___________y and D_____________y, are p____________________d with h__________________y and how this f__________o a l______________t of m__________________________g. Their e____________n of these issues is r_____________t to everyone and cannot be r_________d with a s_______________r. M__________r, t_____________________h great writers d__________________s, the a______________________y of their writing itself, i___________s to c_________________s the importance of a_________________n and may help them s________________________________s of a_________________________________________h.

In conclusion, the u_____________________s of studying practical subjects do not o_____________h the d______________s of literature. It is therefore a_____________e that literature be e_______________d in high school classrooms.

Listening Practice

Listen with the video below and use the following activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and practice with these ideas:

https://www.nytimes.com/2019/03/30/opinion/sunday/fix-high-school-education.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Books

  1. Do you like reading books?
  2. What kind of books do you like most?
  3. What sort of books did you read as a child?
  4. Is it important to read?

Writing Practice

Write about the related topic below, then check with my sample answer:

Some people say that school children should be mainly taught about the literature (e.g fiction and poetry) of their own country because it is more important than that of other countries.

To what extent do you agree?

IELTS Essay: Taking Care of Elderly People

IELTS Essay: Taking Care of Elderly People

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay from the general training exam on the topic of taking care of elderly people.

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IELTS Essay: Taking Care of Elderly People

Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them.

What are the problems related to this?

What are some possible solutions?

The caretakers of elderly individuals are often overworked and feel they are neglecting their duties. In my opinion, this hurts quality of care and the best solution is comprehensive, societal reform.

The main issues resulting from lack of time to look after the elderly have to do with poor care. A nurse with several patients to visit, who might all require around the clock care, must prioritise. The neglected patients are then more likely to develop bed sores, poor nutrition, and depression. In more extreme situations, patients with dementia or life-threatening conditions for example, there may be serious injury. An Alzheimer’s patient may wander out of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. A critically ill patient may need urgent care and not be able to contact the hospital in an emergency.

These problems can be partly remedied if society felt responsible for the elderly. There are examples of nations, chiefly Asian countries like Japan, where old people are highly respected. This permeates all levels of society and translates to children and grandchildren being more willing to take on the burden of care, as well as more attentive doctors and better government-funded social welfare programs. All these measures combined not only have a tangible, daily impact but also shift the societal mindset from considering the elderly a nuisance to regarding them as a milestone in life that all must pass through, deserving of respect.

In conclusion, the problems related to limited opportunities for looking after the elderly concern their level of care and can be combatted with a number of measures permeating multiple layers of society. Though unlikely, these reforms would evidence a core of human compassion.

Analysis

1. The caretakers of elderly individuals are often overworked and feel they are neglecting their duties. 2. In my opinion, this hurts quality of care and the best solution is comprehensive, societal reform.

  1. Paraphrase the essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions for IELTS here.

1. The main issues resulting from lack of time to look after the elderly have to do with poor care. 2. A nurse with several patients to visit, who might all require around the clock care, must prioritise. 3. The neglected patients are then more likely to develop bed sores, poor nutrition, and depression. 4. In more extreme situations, patients with dementia or life-threatening conditions for example, there may be serious injury. 5. An Alzheimer’s patient may wander out of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. 6. A critically ill patient may need urgent care and not be able to contact the hospital in an emergency.

  1. Write a topic sentence with your main idea at the end.
  2. Give a specific example.
  3. Develop it fully through the results.
  4. Continue the development.
  5. Use a similar example for further development.
  6. State the full results.

1. These problems can be partly remedied if society felt responsible for the elderly. 2. There are examples of nations, chiefly Asian countries like Japan, where old people are highly respected. 3. This permeates all levels of society and translates to children and grandchildren being more willing to take on the burden of care, as well as more attentive doctors and better government-funded social welfare programs. 4. All these measures combined not only have a tangible, daily impact but also shift the societal mindset from considering the elderly a nuisance to regarding them as a milestone in life that all must pass through, deserving of respect.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Begin a specific example.
  3. Develop it.
  4. Make sure that is as fully developed as possible.

1. In conclusion, the problems related to limited opportunities for looking after the elderly concern their level of care and can be combatted with a number of measures permeating multiple layers of society. 2. Though unlikely, these reforms would evidence a core of human compassion.

  1. Summarise your main ideas and repeat your opinions.
  2. Add a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean?

The caretakers of elderly individuals are often overworked and feel they are neglecting their duties. In my opinion, this hurts quality of care and the best solution is comprehensive, societal reform.

The main issues resulting from lack of time to look after the elderly have to do with poor care. A nurse with several patients to visit, who might all require around the clock care, must prioritise. The neglected patients are then more likely to develop bed sores, poor nutrition, and depression. In more extreme situations, patients with dementia or life-threatening conditions for example, there may be serious injury. An Alzheimer’s patient may wander out of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. A critically ill patient may need urgent care and not be able to contact the hospital in an emergency.

These problems can be partly remedied if society felt responsible for the elderly. There are examples of nations, chiefly Asian countries like Japan, where old people are highly respected. This permeates all levels of society and translates to children and grandchildren being more willing to take on the burden of care, as well as more attentive doctors and better government-funded social welfare programs. All these measures combined not only have a tangible, daily impact but also shift the societal mindset from considering the elderly a nuisance to regarding them as a milestone in life that all must pass through, deserving of respect.

In conclusion, the problems related to limited opportunities for looking after the elderly concern their level of care and can be combatted with a number of measures permeating multiple layers of society. Though unlikely, these reforms would evidence a core of human compassion.

Answers

caretakers people who take care

elderly individuals old people

overworked work too much

neglecting their duties not doing their jobs

quality of care how well someone is looked after

comprehensive complete

societal reform changes to society

main issues resulting from big problems coming from

poor care not well taken care of

several a bunch

around the clock care 24 hour care

prioritise make more important

neglected not paying attention to

bed sores lesions from not moving much

poor nutrition not eating well

depression feeling sad

in more extreme situations some bad cases

dementia forgetting things

life-threatening conditions cancer, paralysis, etc.

serious injury get hurt badly

Alzheimer’s patient condition where the mind deteriorates

wander out go outside

critically ill patient dying person

urgent care emergency situations

contact call

emergency urgent problem

partly remedied somewhat fixed

chiefly mainly

highly respected valued a lot

permeates all levels of society gets to all people

translates to means

take on the burden of care must take care of

attentive concientious

government-funded social welfare programs giving money to old people in retirement plans, checks, etc.

measures combined actions all together

tangible concrete

shift change

societal mindset way that society thinks

considering regarding

nuisance annoying

regarding as it relates to

milestone major moment in life

pass through go through

deserving of respect should be valued

limited opportunities not many chances

concern worry

level of care how well they are taken care of

combatted with fought

number of measures many steps

permeating going through

multiple layers of society many people

unlikely not going to happen probably

evidence support

core of human compassion people caring about others

Pronunciation

ˈkeəˌteɪkəz 
ˈɛldəli ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəlz 
ˌəʊvəˈwɜːkt 
nɪˈglɛktɪŋ ðeə ˈdjuːtiz
ˈkwɒlɪti ɒv keə 
ˌkɒmprɪˈhɛnsɪv
səˈsaɪətl ˌriːˈfɔːm
meɪn ˈɪʃuːz rɪˈzʌltɪŋ frɒm 
pʊə keə
ˈsɛvrəl 
əˈraʊnd ðə klɒk keə
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz.
nɪˈglɛktɪd 
bɛd sɔːz
pʊə nju(ː)ˈtrɪʃən
dɪˈprɛʃən
ɪn mɔːr ɪksˈtriːm ˌsɪtjʊˈeɪʃənz
dɪˈmɛnʃɪə 
laɪf-ˈθrɛtnɪŋ kənˈdɪʃənz 
ˈsɪərɪəs ˈɪnʤəri
ˈæltsˌhaɪməz ˈpeɪʃənt 
ˈwɒndər aʊt 
ˈkrɪtɪkəli ɪl ˈpeɪʃənt 
ˈɜːʤənt keə 
ˈkɒntækt 
ɪˈmɜːʤənsi
ˈpɑːtli ˈrɛmɪdid 
ˈʧiːfli 
ˈhaɪli rɪsˈpɛktɪd
ˈpɜːmɪeɪts ɔːl ˈlɛvlz ɒv səˈsaɪəti 
trænsˈleɪts tuː 
teɪk ɒn ðə ˈbɜːdn ɒv keə
əˈtɛntɪv 
ˈgʌvnmənt-ˈfʌndɪd ˈsəʊʃəl ˈwɛlfeə ˈprəʊgræmz
ˈmɛʒəz kəmˈbaɪnd 
ˈtænʤəbl
ʃɪft 
səˈsaɪətl ˈmaɪndsɛt 
kənˈsɪdərɪŋ 
ˈnjuːsns 
rɪˈgɑːdɪŋ 
ˈmaɪlstəʊn 
pɑːs θruː
dɪˈzɜːvɪŋ ɒv rɪsˈpɛkt
ˈlɪmɪtɪd ˌɒpəˈtjuːnɪtiz 
kənˈsɜːn 
ˈlɛvl ɒv keə
ˈkɒmbætɪd wɪð 
ˈnʌmbər ɒv ˈmɛʒəz 
ˈpɜːmɪeɪtɪŋ 
ˈmʌltɪpl ˈleɪəz ɒv səˈsaɪəti
ʌnˈlaɪkli
ˈɛvɪdəns 
kɔːr ɒv ˈhjuːmən kəmˈpæʃən

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

The c____________s of e_____________________s are often o________________d and feel they are n_______________________s. In my opinion, this hurts q________________e and the best solution is c_______________e, s______________________m.

The m________________s r__________________m lack of time to look after the elderly have to do with p_____________e. A nurse with s_________l patients to visit, who might all require a______________________e, must p_____________e. The n____________d patients are then more likely to develop b__________s, p_________________n, and d_____________n. I________________________s, patients with d_______________a or l____________________________s for example, there may be s________________y. An A_________________t may w__________t of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. A c_____________________t may need u_______________e and not be able to c_________t the hospital in an e______________y.

These problems can be p_________________d if society felt responsible for the elderly. There are examples of nations, c_______y Asian countries like Japan, where old people are h__________________d. This p_________________________y and t________________o children and grandchildren being more willing to t_____________________________e, as well as more a_______________e doctors and better g______________________________________s. All these m___________________d not only have a t___________e, daily impact but also s_____t the s_________________t from c________________g the elderly a n__________e to r_____________g them as a m_________e in life that all must p_____________h, d_________________t.

In conclusion, the problems related to l__________________________s for looking after the elderly c_______________n their l_______________e and can be c________________h a n______________s p________________g m____________________________y. Though u___________y, these reforms would e___________e a c________________________________n.

Listening Practice

Listen more about this topic and use these activities to practice:

Reading Practice

Read about a good example of societal changes in Japan below and practice with these ideas:

https://www.nytimes.com/2017/02/12/world/asia/japan-yokohama-aging-population-food.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with these related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Old People (Model answer available on my Patreon)

  1. What are the advantages of having an elderly person at home? 
  2. Is there anything that older people should learn from the younger generation?
  3. What can the younger generation learn from the older generation? 
  4. What qualities does a person need to take care of older people? 
  5. Do you think elderly people should be allowed to work? 

Writing Practice

Write about the related topic below and check with my sample answer:

Many people think that it is better to get advice from old rather than young people.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Speaking Test: Lists, Famous People, Food

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Speaking Part 1

Work

  1. Why did you choose your job?
  2. How much work do you do in a week?
  3. Do you have to work on weekends as well?

Lists

  1. Do you often make lists?
  2. Do you prefer making lists on paper or mobile phones?
  3. Do you make lists before you go shopping?
  4. Why do some people not like making lists?

Famous People

  1. Have you ever met a celebrity?
  2. What kinds of celebrities are you interested in?
  3. Are there any celebrities you would want to interview?

Speaking Part 2

Talk about a typical food that is eaten at special events in your country

What it is

When it is eaten

If you like it

Speaking Part 3

Food & Drink

  1. Is it common to eat with others in your country?
  2. Did you eat with your family a lot?
  3. Should people eat together more often?
  4. What foods are popular at holidays?

IELTS Essay: Retirement & Society

IELTS Essay: Retirement & Society

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of retirement and society from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Retirement & Society

Nowadays people live longer after they retire.

How does this affect individuals and society?

What can be done about this?

As average life expectancy rises, people are living longer and longer after retirement, which poses a number of problems for individuals and society. In my opinion, these tensions can be remedied through government action.

People retiring older can lead to conflict between individuals and an increased burden on society generally. For the young, the process of fully integrating older people into society can be challenging. For example, many older people have quieter lifestyles and disputes may arise with younger individuals who are in the habit of hosting loud parties or coming home late at night, particularly in cases where young people are taking care of older relatives. The strain on society can also be great as older people require more medical support to treat conditions ranging from arthritis to cancer to heart disease. This translates to a greater proportion of taxes going to the older generation and can foster societal resentment and ageism.

The best fixes for these problems can be achieved by governments. Firstly, governments can ease the integration of generations by providing better retirements plans for individuals. For example, in the United States, social security benefits are rarely enough to cover retirement and so many must depend on their children. As for society, governments must be more conscientious in planning for more substantial medical expenses. The government should anticipate this trend only continuing in the future and set aside funds to research and apply advanced treatments for retired citizens well into their 80s. These measures combined would alleviate some of the weight of supporting older populations.

In conclusion, the pressures resulting from growth in the average life span can be countered with forward-thinking governmental policy. This will only become more important in the future as people live even longer.

Analysis

1. As average life expectancy rises, people are living longer and longer after retirement, which poses a number of problems for individuals and society. 2. In my opinion, these tensions can be remedied through government action.

  1. Paraphrase the essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion answering both questions. Read more about introductions here.

1. People retiring older can lead to conflict between individuals and an increased burden on society generally. 2. For the young, the process of fully integrating older people into society can be challenging. 3. For example, many older people have quieter lifestyles and disputes may arise with younger individuals who are in the habit of hosting loud parties or coming home late at night, particularly in cases where young people are taking care of older relatives. 4. The strain on society can also be great as older people require more medical support to treat conditions ranging from arthritis to cancer to heart disease. 5. This translates to a greater proportion of taxes going to the older generation and can foster societal resentment and ageism.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Give an example.
  4. Move on to a problem related to society.
  5. Develop it fully.

1. The best fixes for these problems can be achieved by governments. 2. Firstly, governments can ease the integration of generations by providing better retirements plans for individuals. 3. For example, in the United States, social security benefits are rarely enough to cover retirement and so many must depend on their children. 4. As for society, governments must be more conscientious in planning for more substantial medical expenses. 5. The government should anticipate this trend only continuing in the future and set aside funds to research and apply advanced treatments for retired citizens well into their 80s. 6. These measures combined would alleviate some of the weight of supporting older populations.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea.
  2. Explain it.
  3. Give a specific example.
  4. Develop the example.
  5. Switch to another related solution.
  6. Develop it fully.

1. In conclusion, the pressures resulting from growth in the average life span can be countered with forward-thinking governmental policy. 2. This will only become more important in the future as people live even longer.

  1. Repeat your arguments.
  2. Add a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words below mean?

As average life expectancy rises, people are living longer and longer after retirement, which poses a number of problems for individuals and society. In my opinion, these tensions can be remedied through government action.

People retiring older can lead to conflict between individuals and an increased burden on society generally. For the young, the process of fully integrating older people into society can be challenging. For example, many older people have quieter lifestyles and disputes may arise with younger individuals who are in the habit of hosting loud parties or coming home late at night, particularly in cases where young people are taking care of older relatives. The strain on society can also be great as older people require more medical support to treat conditions ranging from arthritis to cancer to heart disease. This translates to a greater proportion of taxes going to the older generation and can foster societal resentment and ageism.

The best fixes for these problems can be achieved by governments. Firstly, governments can ease the integration of generations by providing better retirements plans for individuals. For example, in the United States, social security benefits are rarely enough to cover retirement and so many must depend on their children. As for society, governments must be more conscientious in planning for more substantial medical expenses. The government should anticipate this trend only continuing in the future and set aside funds to research and apply advanced treatments for retired citizens well into their 80s. These measures combined would alleviate some of the weight of supporting older populations.

In conclusion, the pressures resulting from growth in the average life span can be countered with forward-thinking governmental policy. This will only become more important in the future as people live even longer.

Answers

average life expectancy how long most people live

longer and longer more time

retirement after stopping working

poses a number of problems causes a lot of issues

tensions strains

remedied fixed

government action governments helping

conflict problems

increased burden more pressure

generally overall

process the way

fully integrating becoming part of

challenging having trouble

quieter lifestyles calm life

disputes may arise conflicts come up

in the habit of used to

hosting loud parties having noisy parties

particularly in cases where especially when

taking care of older relatives looking after grandparents

strain pressure

require more medical support need more hospital care

treat conditions deal with medical problems

ranging from including

arthritis achy joints

translates to means

proportion ratio

foster societal resentment increase animosity in society

ageism disliking older people

best fixes better remedies

achieved accomplished

ease make less of a problem

integration mix

generations people of different ages

providing better retirements plans funding pensions

social security benefits retirement fund in the U.S.A.

rarely not often

cover pay for

depend on rely on

conscientious careful

more substantial larger

medical expenses money for medicine

anticipate look forward to

trend pattern

set aside funds save money for

advanced treatments new medicines

well into their 80s past 85 or so

measures combined efforts together

alleviate fix

weight pressure

supporting older populations helping old people

pressures resulting from strains coming from

life span how long you live

countered fixed

forward-thinking anticipating

governmental policy laws of the government

Pronunciation

ˈævərɪʤ laɪf ɪksˈpɛktənsi 
ˈlɒŋgər ænd ˈlɒŋgə 
rɪˈtaɪəmənt
ˈpəʊzɪz ə ˈnʌmbər ɒv ˈprɒbləmz 
ˈtɛnʃənz 
ˈrɛmɪdid 
ˈgʌvnmənt ˈækʃ(ə)n
ˈkɒnflɪkt 
ɪnˈkriːst ˈbɜːdn 
ˈʤɛnərəli
ˈprəʊsɛs 
ˈfʊli ˈɪntɪgreɪtɪŋ 
ˈʧælɪnʤɪŋ
ˈkwaɪətə ˈlaɪfˌstaɪlz 
dɪsˈpjuːts meɪ əˈraɪz 
ɪn ðə ˈhæbɪt ɒv 
ˈhəʊstɪŋ laʊd ˈpɑːtiz 
pəˈtɪkjʊləli ɪn ˈkeɪsɪz weə 
ˈteɪkɪŋ keər ɒv ˈəʊldə ˈrɛlətɪvz
streɪn 
rɪˈkwaɪə mɔː ˈmɛdɪkəl səˈpɔːt 
triːt kənˈdɪʃənz 
ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm 
ɑːˈθraɪtɪs 
trænsˈleɪts tuː 
prəˈpɔːʃən 
ˈfɒstə səˈsaɪətl rɪˈzɛntmənt 
ˈeɪʤɪz(ə)m
bɛst ˈfɪksɪz 
əˈʧiːvd 
iːz 
ˌɪntɪˈgreɪʃən 
ˌʤɛnəˈreɪʃənz 
prəˈvaɪdɪŋ ˈbɛtə rɪˈtaɪəmənts plænz 
ˈsəʊʃəl sɪˈkjʊərɪti ˈbɛnɪfɪts 
ˈreəli 
ˈkʌvə 
dɪˈpɛnd ɒn 
ˌkɒnʃɪˈɛnʃəs 
mɔː səbˈstænʃəl 
ˈmɛdɪkəl ɪksˈpɛnsɪz
ænˈtɪsɪpeɪt 
trɛnd 
sɛt əˈsaɪd fʌndz 
ədˈvɑːnst ˈtriːtmənts 
wɛl ˈɪntuː ðeə 80ɛs
ˈmɛʒəz kəmˈbaɪnd 
əˈliːvɪeɪt 
weɪt 
səˈpɔːtɪŋ ˈəʊldə ˌpɒpjʊˈleɪʃənz
ˈprɛʃəz rɪˈzʌltɪŋ frɒm 
laɪf spæn 
ˈkaʊntəd 
ˈfɔːwəd-ˈθɪŋkɪŋ 
ˌgʌvənˈmɛntl ˈpɒlɪsi

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

As a______________________y rises, people are living l___________________r after r_________________t, which p__________________________s for individuals and society. In my opinion, these t___________s can be r__________d through g__________________________n.

People retiring older can lead to c__________t between individuals and an i___________________n on society g______________y. For the young, the p________s of f_______________g older people into society can be c____________g. For example, many older people have q___________________s and d_____________________e with younger individuals who are i________________f h________________________s or coming home late at night, p_________________________e young people are t_______________________________s. The s________n on society can also be great as older people r_______________________________t to t_______________s r____________________m a_____________s to cancer to heart disease. This t__________________o a greater p_______________n of taxes going to the older generation and can f__________________________t and a_________m.

The b____________s for these problems can be a_____________d by governments. Firstly, governments can e_____e the i______________n of g_________________s by p________________________________s for individuals. For example, in the United States, s_____________________________s are r_________y enough to c________r retirement and so many must d_____________n their children. As for society, governments must be more c______________s in planning for m____________________l m____________________s. The government should a____________e this t_______d only continuing in the future and s_______________________s to research and apply a____________________s for retired citizens w___________________________s. These m___________________d would a_______________e some of the w________t of s_______________________________s.

In conclusion, the p_______________________m growth in the average l__________n can be c____________d with f_______________________g g____________________________y. This will only become more important in the future as people live even longer.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic and practice with these ideas:

Reading Practice

Use these activities to practice with the reading below:

https://www.theatlantic.com/family/archive/2020/05/what-the-heros-journey-teaches-about-happy-retirement/611194/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking topics from the real speaking exam:

Age

  1. Do you like your current age?
  2. What was the biggest decision you made in your life?
  3. At what age are people happiest?

Writing Practice

Write about the related topic below and check with my sample answer:

Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries.

What are the advantages of disadvantages of this?

IELTS Essay: Bicycles

IELTS Essay: Bicycles

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay from the general training exam on the topic of bicycles.

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IELTS Essay: Bicycles

Some people say that the bicycles are a good, modern means of transportation. Other say riding a bicycle has clear disadvantages.

Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.

Many people today are taking advantage of the environmental and health benefits of using bicycles as a primary means of transportation. I am largely in agreement with this practice, despite potential safety concerns.

Critics often point out that cycling can be dangerous. This conclusion is based on numerous studies showing the fatality and serious injury rates for accidents involving bicycles are considerably higher than for most other vehicles. Even if a cyclist is wearing a helmet, the rest of their body is completely unprotected and bikes themselves do not stand up well to collisions. Added to this are the driving conditions in most major cities, where there might not be bike lanes or cars and motorbikes may not respect cyclists’ right of way. The cyclists themselves contribute to the danger if they are overconfident and try to keep up with or pass motorised vehicles.

Nonetheless, the marginally increased risks involved in cycling do not outweigh its environmental and health benefit. Bikes are a modern, clean form of transportation because they do not burn any fossil fuels or require intensive industrial production methods for their manufacturing. This is the main reason many forward-looking, environmentally-conscious cities now encourage biking to work with bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes. The second advantage is health. Cycling is great cardiovascular exercise at a time when lifestyles are becoming increasingly sedentary due to advances in consumer technology. Riding a bicycle allows the average person to get in their daily exercise efficiently on their way to work.

In conclusion, bikes may increase the odds of serious injury, but these exceptions are dwarfed by health and environmental prerogatives. Cities should therefore enact laws to help cycling flourish.

Analysis

1. Many people today are taking advantage of the environmental and health benefits of using bicycles as a primary means of transportation. 2. I am largely in agreement with this practice, despite potential safety concerns.

  1. Paraphrase the essay topic.
  2. Add a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Critics often point out that cycling can be dangerous. 2. This conclusion is based on numerous studies showing the fatality and serious injury rates for accidents involving bicycles are considerably higher than for most other vehicles. 3. Even if a cyclist is wearing a helmet, the rest of their body is completely unprotected and bikes themselves do not stand up well to collisions. 4. Added to this are the driving conditions in most major cities, where there might not be bike lanes or cars and motorbikes may not respect cyclists’ right of way. 5. The cyclists themselves contribute to the danger if they are overconfident and try to keep up with or pass motorised vehicles.

  1. Write a clear topic sentence with your main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it fully.
  4. Move on to a second disadvantage.
  5. Develop it fully.

1. Nonetheless, the marginally increased risks involved in cycling do not outweigh its environmental and health benefit. 2. Bikes are a modern, clean form of transportation because they do not burn any fossil fuels or require intensive industrial production methods for their manufacturing. 3. This is the main reason many forward-looking, environmentally-conscious cities now encourage biking to work with bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes. 4. The second advantage is health. 5. Cycling is great cardiovascular exercise at a time when lifestyles are becoming increasingly sedentary due to advances in consumer technology. 6. Riding a bicycle allows the average person to get in their daily exercise efficiently on their way to work.

  1. Write another topic sentence with a new main idea.
  2. Develop it.
  3. Continue to develop it as fully as possible.
  4. Vary long and short sentences.
  5. Develop the second idea.
  6. Conclude with the full development of the second idea.

1. In conclusion, bikes may increase the odds of serious injury, but these exceptions are dwarfed by health and environmental prerogatives. 2. Cities should therefore enact laws to help cycling flourish.

  1. Summarise your main ideas and repeat your opinion.
  2. Add a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean?

Many people today are taking advantage of the environmental and health benefits of using bicycles as a primary means of transportation. I am largely in agreement with this practice, despite potential safety concerns.

Critics often point out that cycling can be dangerous. This conclusion is based on numerous studies showing the fatality and serious injury rates for accidents involving bicycles are considerably higher than for most other vehicles. Even if a cyclist is wearing a helmet, the rest of their body is completely unprotected and bikes themselves do not stand up well to collisions. Added to this are the driving conditions in most major cities, where there might not be bike lanes or cars and motorbikes may not respect cyclists’ right of way. The cyclists themselves contribute to the danger if they are overconfident and try to keep up with or pass motorised vehicles.

Nonetheless, the marginally increased risks involved in cycling do not outweigh its environmental and health benefit. Bikes are a modern, clean form of transportation because they do not burn any fossil fuels or require intensive industrial production methods for their manufacturing. This is the main reason many forward-looking, environmentally-conscious cities now encourage biking to work with bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes. The second advantage is health. Cycling is great cardiovascular exercise at a time when lifestyles are becoming increasingly sedentary due to advances in consumer technology. Riding a bicycle allows the average person to get in their daily exercise efficiently on their way to work.

In conclusion, bikes may increase the odds of serious injury, but these exceptions are dwarfed by health and environmental prerogatives. Cities should therefore enact laws to help cycling flourish.

Answers

taking advantage of exploiting

primary means main way

I am largely in agreement with I agree

practice development

despite potential safety concerns possible dangers

critics often point out detractors usually argue

conclusion realisation

based on numerous studies because of research

fatality death

serious injury rates the figures for getting hurt a lot

considerably higher a lot more

other vehicles cars, motorbikes, buses, etc.

cyclist person who rides a bike

rest all other parts

completely unprotected not safe

stand up well can withstand

collisions getting hit, accidents

added to this also

driving conditions the quality of roads, driving

bike lanes side lanes for bicycles

respect be considerate of

right of way the car/person who should go first when driving

contribute add to

overconfident arrogant

keep up with maintain the same speeds

pass motorised vehicles go around cars

nonetheless regardless

marginally increased risks slightly higher danger

outweigh stronger than

clean form environmentally-friendly way

burn any fossil fuels use oil/gas

require intensive industrial production methods need a lot of machinery to make

manufacturing the process of making something

forward-looking looking to the future

environmentally-conscious caring about the environment

encourage support

bike-sharing schemes the option to have communal bikes

cardiovascular exercise good for your heart

increasingly sedentary more and more sitting around

advances in consumer technology more sophisticated phones, devices

average person normal person

get in do

daily exercise efficiently exercising without using much time

way to work while going to work

increase the odds a better chance

serious injury hurt a lot

exceptions cases where this is not true

dwarfed a lot less than

prerogatives should be considered more important

enact laws pass regulations

flourish do really well

Pronunciation

ˈteɪkɪŋ ədˈvɑːntɪʤ ɒv 
ˈpraɪməri miːnz 
aɪ æm ˈlɑːʤli ɪn əˈgriːmənt wɪð 
ˈpræktɪs
dɪsˈpaɪt pəʊˈtɛnʃəl ˈseɪfti kənˈsɜːnz
ˈkrɪtɪks ˈɒf(ə)n pɔɪnt aʊt 
kənˈkluːʒən 
beɪst ɒn ˈnjuːmərəs ˈstʌdiz 
fəˈtælɪti 
ˈsɪərɪəs ˈɪnʤəri reɪts 
kənˈsɪdərəbli ˈhaɪə 
ˈʌðə ˈviːɪklz
ˈsaɪklɪst 
rɛst 
kəmˈpliːtli ˌʌnprəˈtɛktɪd 
stænd ʌp wɛl 
kəˈlɪʒənz
ˈædɪd tuː ðɪs 
ˈdraɪvɪŋ kənˈdɪʃənz 
baɪk leɪnz 
rɪsˈpɛkt 
raɪt ɒv weɪ
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)t 
ˌəʊvəˈkɒnfɪdənt 
kiːp ʌp wɪð 
pɑːs ˈməʊtəˌraɪzd ˈviːɪklz
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ˈmɑːʤɪnəli ɪnˈkriːst rɪsks 
aʊtˈweɪ 
kliːn fɔːm 
bɜːn ˈɛni ˈfɒsl fjʊəlz 
rɪˈkwaɪər ɪnˈtɛnsɪv ɪnˈdʌstrɪəl prəˈdʌkʃən ˈmɛθədz 
ˌmænjʊˈfækʧərɪŋ
ˈfɔːwədˈlʊkɪŋ
ɪnˌvaɪərənˈmɛntli-ˈkɒnʃəs 
ɪnˈkʌrɪʤ 
baɪk leɪnz 
baɪk-ˈʃeərɪŋ skiːmz
ˌkɑːdɪəʊˈvæskjʊlər ˈɛksəsaɪz 
ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˈsɛdntəri 
ədˈvɑːnsɪz ɪn kənˈsjuːmə tɛkˈnɒləʤi
ˈævərɪʤ ˈpɜːsn 
gɛt ɪn 
ˈdeɪli ˈɛksəsaɪz ɪˈfɪʃəntli 
weɪ tuː wɜːk
ˈɪnkriːs ði ɒdz 
ˈsɪərɪəs ˈɪnʤəri
ɪkˈsɛpʃənz 
dwɔːft 
prɪˈrɒgətɪvz
ɪˈnækt lɔːz 
ˈflʌrɪʃ

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

Many people today are t________________________f the environmental and health benefits of using bicycles as a p___________________s of transportation. I_______________________________h this p_________e, d_________________________________s.

C__________________________t that cycling can be dangerous. This c________________n is b_________________________s showing the f____________y and s____________________s for accidents involving bicycles are c_____________________r than for most o__________________s. Even if a c________t is wearing a helmet, the r____t of their body is c_________________________d and bikes themselves do not s______________l to c_____________s. A_____________s are the d_________________s in most major cities, where there might not be b_____________s or cars and motorbikes may not r___________t cyclists’ r_____________y. The cyclists themselves c___________e to the danger if they are o_______________t and try to k_________________h or p_____________________s.

N______________s, the m__________________________s involved in cycling do not o______________h its environmental and health benefit. Bikes are a modern, c_______________m of transportation because they do not b_____________________s or r____________________________________________s for their m__________________g. This is the main reason many f__________________g, e_____________________________s cities now e____________e biking to work with b_____________s and b____________________s. The second advantage is health. Cycling is great c_____________________e at a time when lifestyles are becoming i______________________y due to a_______________________________y. Riding a bicycle allows the a__________________n to g______n their d____________________y on their w_________________k.

In conclusion, bikes may i____________________s of s___________________y, but these e_____________s are d____________d by health and environmental p_______________s. Cities should therefore e____________s to help cycling f___________h.

Listening Practice

Learn more about bikes here and use these activities to practice:

Reading Practice

Read more and use these ideas to practice reading the news:

https://www.wired.com/story/most-bike-friendly-cities-2019-copenhagenize-design-index/

Speaking Practice

Practice with these speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Health

  1. How can people improve their physical health?
  2. What about their mental health?
  3. In what ways can teachers encourage students to do sports?
  4. What is the role of doctors in raising health awareness?
  5. Can social media also play a role?

Writing Practice

Write about the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:

When cars and cyclists use the same roads, there are often problems.

Why is this the case?

What are the solutions?