IELTS Essay: Fossil Fuels and Alternative Energy

IELTS Essay: Fossil Fuels and Alternative Energy

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IELTS Essay: Laws to Limit Working Hours

Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels. 

Is this a positive or negative development?

Many nations are now supporting the adoption of various energy alternatives in order to reduce fossil fuel consumption. In my opinion, though there may be short-term economic downsides, this is a decidedly positive development due to the implications on the environment generally.

Those who feel the sudden adoption of alternative energies is a negative point out the financial repercussions. There are economies around the world that are currently dependent on exporting fossil fuels, in particular in The Middle East, South America, and Eastern Europe. Many of these countries are still developing and have few other natural resources or industries that could replace a decline in the energy sector. The economic effects will extend far beyond exporters though. Both developed and developing nations ranging from The United States and Vietnam to China and Russia exploit oil for private vehicles and various industries. Substituting cheap oil for a more expensive alternative might result in economic catastrophe with wide-ranging repercussions.

However, the environmental effect is overwhelmingly more important for the long-term health of the planet. The economic results of less dependence on fossil fuels will cause short-term problems but the issues caused by climate change are also becoming a present reality. For instance, there has been a rise in the number of cataclysmic natural disasters related to rising ocean temperatures and deforestation. Even more troubling are the less noticed problems such as habitats being destroyed in remote areas like Antarctica and the Amazon Rainforest. Beyond the animals becoming endangered and extinct, it is only a number of years before human life is affected. This existential threat is the reason alternative energies are a pressing need.

In conclusion, despite the economic drawbacks of a sudden shift to alternative power sources, this reorientation will have a markedly positive long-term impact on the environment. Governments should therefore implement and bolster alternative energy initiatives.

Analysis

1. Many nations are now supporting the adoption of various energy alternatives in order to reduce fossil fuel consumption. 2. In my opinion, though there may be short-term economic downsides, this is a decidedly positive development due to the implications on the environment generally.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who feel the sudden adoption of alternative energies is a negative point out the financial repercussions. 2. There are economies around the world that are currently dependent on exporting fossil fuels, in particular in The Middle East, South America, and Eastern Europe. 3. Many of these countries are still developing and have few other natural resources or industries that could replace a decline in the energy sector. 4. The economic effects will extend far beyond exporters though. Both developed and developing nations ranging from The United States and Vietnam to China and Russia exploit oil for private vehicles and various industries. 5. Substituting cheap oil for a more expensive alternative might result in economic catastrophe with wide-ranging repercussions.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. However, the environmental effect is overwhelmingly more important for the long-term health of the planet. 2. The economic results of less dependence on fossil fuels will cause short-term problems but the issues caused by climate change are also becoming a present reality. 3. For instance, there has been a rise in the number of cataclysmic natural disasters related to rising ocean temperatures and deforestation. 4. Even more troubling are the less noticed problems such as habitats being destroyed in remote areas like Antarctica and the Amazon Rainforest. 5. Beyond the animals becoming endangered and extinct, it is only a number of years before human life is affected. 6. This existential threat is the reason alternative energies are a pressing need.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. In conclusion, despite the economic drawbacks of a sudden shift to alternative power sources, this reorientation will have a markedly positive long-term impact on the environment. 2. Governments should therefore implement and bolster alternative energy initiatives.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many nations are now supporting the adoption of various energy alternatives in order to reduce fossil fuel consumption. In my opinion, though there may be short-term economic downsides, this is a decidedly positive development due to the implications on the environment generally.

Those who feel the sudden adoption of alternative energies is a negative point out the financial repercussions. There are economies around the world that are currently dependent on exporting fossil fuels, in particular in The Middle East, South America, and Eastern Europe. Many of these countries are still developing and have few other natural resources or industries that could replace a decline in the energy sector. The economic effects will extend far beyond exporters though. Both developed and developing nations ranging from The United States and Vietnam to China and Russia exploit oil for private vehicles and various industries. Substituting cheap oil for a more expensive alternative might result in economic catastrophe with wide-ranging repercussions.

However, the environmental effect is overwhelmingly more important for the long-term health of the planet. The economic results of less dependence on fossil fuels will cause short-term problems but the issues caused by climate change are also becoming a present reality. For instance, there has been a rise in the number of cataclysmic natural disasters related to rising ocean temperatures and deforestation. Even more troubling are the less noticed problems such as habitats being destroyed in remote areas like Antarctica and the Amazon Rainforest. Beyond the animals becoming endangered and extinct, it is only a number of years before human life is affected. This existential threat is the reason alternative energies are a pressing need.

In conclusion, despite the economic drawbacks of a sudden shift to alternative power sources, this reorientation will have a markedly positive long-term impact on the environment. Governments should therefore implement and bolster alternative energy initiatives.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

supporting helping

adoption of various energy alternatives use cleaner energies

reduce fossil fuel consumption use less fuel/oil

short-term economic downsides right now how it hurts the economy

decidedly positive development due to definitely good change because

implications results, what happens after

Those who feel the sudden adoption of alternative energies is a negative point out people in favor of more alternative energies argue

financial repercussions economic results

economies finances in a country

currently dependent right now reliant on

exporting fossil fuels sending oil abroad

in particular especially

few other natural resources or industries not many other sources of money

replace a decline in the energy sector substitute a drop in energy-related businesses

extend far beyond exporters though go far past the countries sending out oil

ranging from … to … and … including

exploit oil take advantage of fuel, petrol

private vehicles cars, motorbikes, etc.

Substituting … for changing for

economic catastrophe hurts finances a lot

wide-ranging repercussions effects on lots of areas

overwhelmingly very strong

long-term health of the planet the environment in the future

less dependence on fossil fuels not as reliant on oil

cause short-term problems hurt right now

present reality how the situation is now

rise increase

cataclysmic natural disasters related to rising ocean temperatures really bad storms caused by hotter seas

deforestation cutting down forests

Even more troubling are in fact much worse is

less noticed problems not as apparent issues

habitats where animals live

remote areas places far from cities

Beyond past

endangered not many left

extinct all gone

existential threat risk to their existence

pressing need really important now, an emergency

despite the economic drawbacks of a sudden shift to alternative power sources regardless of the financial downsides of a change to cleaner energy

reorientation shift

markedly positive long-term impact on definitely good for the future effect on

implement put in place

bolster support

initiatives efforts

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

səˈpɔːtɪŋ 
əˈdɒpʃᵊn ɒv ˈveərɪəs ˈɛnəʤi ɔːlˈtɜːnətɪvz 
rɪˈdjuːs ˈfɒsl ˈfjuːəl kənˈsʌmpʃᵊn 
ʃɔːt-tɜːm ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˈdaʊnˌsaɪdz 
dɪˈsaɪdɪdli ˈpɒzətɪv dɪˈvɛləpmənt djuː tuː 
ˌɪmplɪˈkeɪʃᵊnz 
ðəʊz huː fiːl ðə ˈsʌdn əˈdɒpʃᵊn ɒv ɔːlˈtɜːnətɪv ˈɛnəʤiz ɪz ə ˈnɛɡətɪv pɔɪnt aʊt 
faɪˈnænʃəl ˌriːpɜːˈkʌʃᵊnz 
iˈkɒnəmiz 
ˈkʌrəntli dɪˈpɛndənt 
ɛksˈpɔːtɪŋ ˈfɒsl ˈfjuːəlz 
ɪn pəˈtɪkjələ 
fjuː ˈʌðə ˈnæʧrəl rɪˈsɔːsɪz ɔːr ˈɪndəstriz 
rɪˈpleɪs ə dɪˈklaɪn ɪn ði ˈɛnəʤi ˈsɛktə 
ɪksˈtɛnd fɑː bɪˈjɒnd ɛksˈpɔːtəz ðəʊ 
ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm … tuː … ænd …
ˈɛksplɔɪt ɔɪl 
ˈpraɪvət ˈvɪəkᵊlz 
ˈsʌbstɪtjuːtɪŋ … fɔː 
ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk kəˈtæstrəfi 
waɪd-ˈreɪnʤɪŋ ˌriːpɜːˈkʌʃᵊnz 
ˌəʊvəˈwɛlmɪŋli 
ˈlɒŋtɜːm hɛlθ ɒv ðə ˈplænɪt 
lɛs dɪˈpɛndəns ɒn ˈfɒsl ˈfjuːəlz 
kɔːz ʃɔːt-tɜːm ˈprɒbləmz 
ˈprɛzᵊnt riˈæləti 
raɪz 
ˌkætəˈklɪzmɪk ˈnæʧrəl dɪˈzɑːstəz rɪˈleɪtɪd tuː ˈraɪzɪŋ ˈəʊʃən ˈtɛmprɪʧəz 
dɪˌfɒrɪˈsteɪʃᵊn 
ˈiːvən mɔː ˈtrʌbᵊlɪŋ ɑː 
lɛs ˈnəʊtɪst ˈprɒbləmz 
ˈhæbɪtæts 
rɪˈməʊt ˈeərɪəz 
bɪˈjɒnd 
ɪnˈdeɪnʤəd 
ɪksˈtɪŋkt 
ˌɛɡzɪˈstɛnʃəl θrɛt 
ˈprɛsɪŋ niːd.
dɪsˈpaɪt ði ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˈdrɔːbæks ɒv ə ˈsʌdn ʃɪft tuː ɔːlˈtɜːnətɪv ˈpaʊə ˈsɔːsɪz 
ˌriːˌɔːriɛnˈteɪʃᵊn 
ˈmɑːkɪdli ˈpɒzətɪv ˈlɒŋtɜːm ˈɪmpækt ɒn 
ˈɪmplɪmənt 
ˈbəʊlstə 
ɪˈnɪʃɪətɪvz 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many nations are now s___________g the a_____________________________________s in order to r___________________________n. In my opinion, though there may be s________________________s, this is a d_______________________________________o the i____________s on the environment generally.

T_______________________________________________________________________________t the f_____________________s. There are e_____________s around the world that are c_________________t on e______________________________s, i_______________r in The Middle East, South America, and Eastern Europe. Many of these countries are still developing and have f___________________________________s that could r__________________________________________r. The economic effects will e________________________________h. Both developed and developing nations r______________m The United States and Vietnam t___ China a___d Russia e______________l for p___________________s and various industries. S_______________g cheap oil f___r a more expensive alternative might result in e_______________________e with w__________________________s.

However, the environmental effect is o_____________________y more important for the l___________________________________t. The economic results of l_________________s will c_____________________________s but the issues caused by climate change are also becoming a p_________________y. For instance, there has been a r____e in the number of c______________________________________________________s and d______________n. E_______________________e the l________________________s such as h___________s being destroyed in r________________s like Antarctica and the Amazon Rainforest. B__________d the animals becoming e_____________d and e________t, it is only a number of years before human life is affected. This e_____________________t is the reason alternative energies are a p________________d.

In conclusion, d_____________________________________________________________________s, this r_____________n will have a m______________________________n the environment. Governments should therefore i____________t and b__________r alternative energy i____________s.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oIU5fFmDeSc&pp=ygUSYWx0ZXJuYXRpdmUgZW5lcmd5

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.nationalgeographic.org/maps/alternative-energy-use/#:~:text=Alternative%20energy%20here%20includes%20hydroelectric,nuclear%20energy%2C%20and%20biomass%20energy.

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Environment

  1. How are environmental problems dealt with in your country?
  2. What can be done to make people recycle more often?
  3. What is the most pressing environmental problem?
  4. Is recycling a common practice in your country?
  5. Are governments or individuals more responsible?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Essay: Laws to Limit Working Hours

IELTS Essay: Laws to Limit Working Hours

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of laws to limit working hours from the real IELTS general training exam.

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IELTS Essay: Laws to Limit Working Hours

Some countries have introduced laws to limit the working hours that an employer can ask from an employee.

Why are these law introduced?

Is this a positive or negative trend?

In many countries, it is common for the state to constrain the number of hours a person can work within any given day. In my opinion, this law is designed to discourage exploitation and is decidedly positive overall.

The main reason the average workday is limited by law is that otherwise companies could take advantage of their employees. The evidence for this comes from past centuries before such laws were passed. Around the beginning of the industrial revolution, it was a common practice in European countries for individuals to work 12 to 16 hours a day. If an employee protested then they might be fired or even physically harmed. Today, there are very few countries where corporations have the ability to make inhumane physical and mental demands on employees.

Limiting a person’s working laws is beneficial to society as it ensures workers have time for themselves. In countries where these laws do not exist or are poorly defined, there may still be instances of child labor or long working days. For example, in several East Asian countries, factory workers must live and work at their jobs with little opportunity for an outside life. In contrast, in countries with strict labor laws, a person possesses more time for family, hobbies, and friends. Free time is one way of guaranteeing better quality of life and overall satisfaction, benefits which can have ramifications for society as a whole.

In conclusion, laws related to working conditions protect workers and for that reason are positive. It is also essential that countries enforce the laws they have passed.

Analysis

1. In many countries, it is common for the state to constrain the number of hours a person can work within any given day. 2. In my opinion, this law is designed to discourage exploitation and is decidedly positive overall.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. The main reason the average workday is limited by law is that otherwise companies could take advantage of their employees. 2. The evidence for this comes from past centuries before such laws were passed. 3. Around the beginning of the industrial revolution, it was a common practice in European countries for individuals to work 12 to 16 hours a day. 4. If an employee protested then they might be fired or even physically harmed. 5. Today, there are very few countries where corporations have the ability to make inhumane physical and mental demands on employees.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. Limiting a person’s working laws is beneficial to society as it ensures workers have time for themselves. 2. In countries where these laws do not exist or are poorly defined, there may still be instances of child labor or long working days. 3. For example, in several East Asian countries, factory workers must live and work at their jobs with little opportunity for an outside life. 4. In contrast, in countries with strict labor laws, a person possesses more time for family, hobbies, and friends. 5. Free time is one way of guaranteeing better quality of life and overall satisfaction, benefits which can have ramifications for society as a whole.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. In conclusion, laws related to working conditions protect workers and for that reason are positive. 2. It is also essential that countries enforce the laws they have passed.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

In many countries, it is common for the state to constrain the number of hours a person can work within any given day. In my opinion, this law is designed to discourage exploitation and is decidedly positive overall.

The main reason the average workday is limited by law is that otherwise companies could take advantage of their employees. The evidence for this comes from past centuries before such laws were passed. Around the beginning of the industrial revolution, it was a common practice in European countries for individuals to work 12 to 16 hours a day. If an employee protested then they might be fired or even physically harmed. Today, there are very few countries where corporations have the ability to make inhumane physical and mental demands on employees.

Limiting a person’s working laws is beneficial to society as it ensures workers have time for themselves. In countries where these laws do not exist or are poorly defined, there may still be instances of child labor or long working days. For example, in several East Asian countries, factory workers must live and work at their jobs with little opportunity for an outside life. In contrast, in countries with strict labor laws, a person possesses more time for family, hobbies, and friends. Free time is one way of guaranteeing better quality of life and overall satisfaction, benefits which can have ramifications for society as a whole.

In conclusion, laws related to working conditions protect workers and for that reason are positive. It is also essential that countries enforce the laws they have passed.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

it is common for it happens a lot

the state the government

constrain limit

within any given day on a random day

designed to discourage exploitation for the reason of preventing taking advantage of

limited by law constrained by legal rules

otherwise instead of that

take advantage of their employees exploit workers

The evidence for this comes from past centuries proof is from the past

Around the beginning of the industrial revolution when the world started to develop technology and industry

it was a common practice in it happened a lot in

protested demonstrate against

fired laid off

even physically harmed maybe hurt their body

Today now

corporations companies

inhumane physical and mental demands on employees cruel expectations on workers

beneficial good

ensures makes sure of

have time for themselves have free time

do not exist not in the real world

poorly defined hard to pinpoint, not exact

instances examples

child labor or long working days kids working or working too long

East Asian countries countries like China, Japan, etc.

little opportunity for an outside life not much of a chance to have free time

strict labor laws strong regulations

possesses has

better quality of life stronger standard of living

overall satisfaction how you feel overall

ramifications for society as a whole effects for everyone

working conditions protect workers the environment keeps employees safe

for that reason thus

essential crucial

enforce make sure the laws are followed

laws they have passed rules put in place / enacted

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ɪt ɪz ˈkɒmən fɔː 
ðə steɪt 
kənˈstreɪn 
wɪˈðɪn ˈɛni ˈɡɪvn deɪ 
dɪˈzaɪnd tuː dɪsˈkʌrɪʤ ˌɛksplɔɪˈteɪʃᵊn 
ˈlɪmɪtɪd baɪ lɔː 
ˈʌðəwaɪz 
teɪk ədˈvɑːntɪʤ ɒv ðeər ˌɛmplɔɪˈiːz 
ði ˈɛvɪdəns fɔː ðɪs kʌmz frɒm pɑːst ˈsɛnʧʊriz 
əˈraʊnd ðə bɪˈɡɪnɪŋ ɒv ði ɪnˈdʌstrɪəl ˌrɛvəˈluːʃᵊn 
ɪt wɒz ə ˈkɒmən ˈpræktɪs ɪn 
prəˈtɛstɪd 
ˈfaɪəd 
ˈiːvən ˈfɪzɪkəli hɑːmd 
təˈdeɪ 
ˌkɔːpəˈreɪʃᵊnz 
ˌɪnhjuːˈmeɪn ˈfɪzɪkəl ænd ˈmɛntl dɪˈmɑːndz ɒn ˌɛmplɔɪˈiːz 
ˌbɛnɪˈfɪʃəl 
ɪnˈʃʊəz 
hæv taɪm fɔː ðəmˈsɛlvz 
duː nɒt ɪɡˈzɪst 
ˈpʊəli dɪˈfaɪnd 
ˈɪnstənsɪz 
ʧaɪld ˈleɪbər ɔː lɒŋ ˈwɜːkɪŋ deɪz 
iːst ˈeɪʃᵊn ˈkʌntriz 
ˈlɪtl ˌɒpəˈtjuːnəti fɔːr ən ˌaʊtˈsaɪd laɪf 
strɪkt ˈleɪbə lɔːz 
pəˈzɛsɪz 
ˈbɛtə ˈkwɒləti ɒv laɪf 
ˈəʊvərɔːl ˌsætɪsˈfækʃᵊn 
ˌræmɪfɪˈkeɪʃᵊnz fɔː səˈsaɪəti æz ə həʊl 
ˈwɜːkɪŋ kənˈdɪʃᵊnz prəˈtɛkt ˈwɜːkəz 
fɔː ðæt ˈriːzn 
ɪˈsɛnʃəl 
ɪnˈfɔːs 
lɔːz ðeɪ hæv pɑːst 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

In many countries, i_________________r t_________e to c_________n the number of hours a person can work w_________________y. In my opinion, this law is d__________________________________n and is decidedly positive overall.

The main reason the average workday is l_________________w is that o____________e companies could t_______________________________s. T_____________________________________________s before such laws were passed. A____________________________________________________n, i___________________________n European countries for individuals to work 12 to 16 hours a day. If an employee p_________d then they might be f_____d or e___________________d. T_____y, there are very few countries where c_____________s have the ability to make i____________________________________________________________s.

Limiting a person’s working laws is b___________l to society as it e_________s workers h___________________________s. In countries where these laws d_______________t or are p______________d, there may still be i____________s of c_____________________________________s. For example, in several E_____________________s, factory workers must live and work at their jobs with l______________________________________e. In contrast, in countries with s_______________________s, a person p__________s more time for family, hobbies, and friends. Free time is one way of guaranteeing b_______________________e and o_________________n, benefits which can have r____________________________________e.

In conclusion, laws related to w___________________________________s and f_________________n are positive. It is also e__________l that countries e_________e the l____________________________d.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:


Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work (Model answer available on my Patreon)

  1. Are you student or are you working now?
  2. What do you like about your job/school at the moment?
  3. What job would you like to do in the future?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:

Some people say that individuals should change jobs during their working life often while others believe that doing the same job has advantages to individuals, companies, and society.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS Essay: Proposed Plan

IELTS Essay: Proposed Plan

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay from the real test related to a proposed plan.

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IELTS Cambridge 17 Essay: Proposed Plan

The map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the town has become more industrial and accessible with additional roads though the majority of the town is largely unchanged in terms of the structures.

In the present day, there is an airfield to the northwest which connects to a long street (A2) that runs south. The road contains a roundabout from which another road leads east to bisect a railway line near a gas station. The presented plan would move the roundabout slightly south and the airfield would be replaced by an industrial estate with a new road going directly east to the railway. The railway itself would also be interrupted by a new roundabout near the same gas station.

In the easternmost part of the town, there is currently a town center and built-up area around Ring Road, both of which will be unaltered in the future. The final additions suggested are a new road (A4) going from the town center along the southern edge of the town to connect with A2 in the west. There will also be one further street from the town center that will allow for passage to the east and north of the town.

Analysis

1. The map details a town now and a proposed future layout. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the town has become more industrial and accessible with additional roads though the majority of the town is largely unchanged in terms of the structures.

  1. Paraphrase what the table shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.

1. In the present day, there is an airfield to the northwest which connects to a long street (A2) that runs south. 2. The road contains a roundabout from which another road leads east to bisect a railway line near a gas station. 3. The presented plan would move the roundabout slightly south and the airfield would be replaced by an industrial estate with a new road going directly east to the railway. 4. The railway itself would also be interrupted by a new roundabout near the same gas station.

  1. Begin writing about the first part of the map.
  2. Make sure you compare as much as possible.
  3. You can describe one map separately or both together.
  4. Don’t leave anything out!

1. In the easternmost part of the town, there is currently a town center and built-up area around Ring Road, both of which will be unaltered in the future. 2. The final additions suggested are a new road (A4) going from the town center along the southern edge of the town to connect with A2 in the west. 3. There will also be one further street from the town center that will allow for passage to the east and north of the town.

  1. Write about the final, other parts of the map – include everything!
  2. Mention anything that has not changed on the map too.
  3. If it is a little long that’s ok, but include everything.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

The map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the town has become more industrial and accessible with additional roads though the majority of the town is largely unchanged in terms of the structures.

In the present day, there is an airfield to the northwest which connects to a long street (A2) that runs south. The road contains a roundabout from which another road leads east to bisect a railway line near a gas station. The presented plan would move the roundabout slightly south and the airfield would be replaced by an industrial estate with a new road going directly east to the railway. The railway itself would also be interrupted by a new roundabout near the same gas station.

In the easternmost part of the town, there is currently a town center and built-up area around Ring Road, both of which will be unaltered in the future. The final additions suggested are a new road (A4) going from the town center along the southern edge of the town to connect with A2 in the west. There will also be one further street from the town center that will allow for passage to the east and north of the town.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

details shows

proposed future layout suggested plan

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

industrial related to making things and industry

accessible able to get there

additional roads extra streets

the majority of the town most of the area

largely unchanged in terms of mostly unchanged concerning

structures buildings

In the present day now

airfield place to land planes

connects joins

runs goes along

roundabout from which rotary by which

bisect a railway line near a gas station cut in half a railroad next to a petrol station

presented shows

slightly a little

replaced by takes the place of

industrial estate place for making things

going directly east to the heading to the right

interrupted by stopped by

In the easternmost part of the town all the way over to the right

both of which the two of them

unaltered unchanged

final additions suggested last alterations in the plan

town center middle of a city

southern edge of the town to connect with bottom part of the city to join with

one further street another road

allow for passage to the make it possible to go to

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈdiːteɪlz 
prəˈpəʊzd ˈfjuːʧə ˈleɪaʊt 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
ɪnˈdʌstrɪəl 
əkˈsɛsəbᵊl 
əˈdɪʃənl rəʊdz 
ðə məˈʤɒrəti ɒv ðə taʊn 
ˈlɑːʤli ʌnˈʧeɪnʤd ɪn tɜːmz ɒv 
ˈstrʌkʧəz 
ɪn ðə ˈprɛzᵊnt deɪ 
ˈeəfiːld 
kəˈnɛkts 
rʌnz 
ˈraʊndəbaʊt frɒm wɪʧ 
baɪˈsɛkt ə ˈreɪlweɪ laɪn nɪər ə ɡæs ˈsteɪʃᵊn 
prɪˈzɛntɪd 
ˈslaɪtli 
rɪˈpleɪst baɪ 
ɪnˈdʌstrɪəl ɪsˈteɪt 
ˈɡəʊɪŋ dɪˈrɛktli iːst tuː ðiː 
ˌɪntəˈrʌptɪd baɪ 
ɪn ði ˈiːstənməʊst pɑːt ɒv ðə taʊn 
bəʊθ ɒv wɪʧ 
ʌnˈɔːltəd 
ˈfaɪnl əˈdɪʃᵊnz səˈʤɛstɪd 
taʊn ˈsɛntə 
ˈsʌðən ɛʤ ɒv ðə taʊn tuː kəˈnɛkt wɪð 
wʌn ˈfɜːðə striːt 
əˈlaʊ fɔː ˈpæsɪʤ tuː ðiː 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

The map d________s a town now and a p________________t. L__________________________________________________t the town has become more i_____________l and a__________e with a_____________s though t_______________________n is l_________________________f the s____________s.

I_____________________y, there is an a________d to the northwest which c_________s to a long street that r____s south. The road contains a r__________________________h another road leads east to b__________________________________n. The p___________d plan would move the roundabout s________y south and the airfield would be r______________y an i_________________e with a new road g____________________________e railway. The railway itself would also be i__________________y a new roundabout near the same gas station.

I___________________________________________n, there is currently a town center and built-up area around Ring Road, b_____________h will be u__________d in the future. The f_________________d are a new road (A4) going from the t______________r along the s___________________________________h A2 in the west. There will also be o____________________t from the town center that will a_________________________e east and north of the town.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.re-thinkingthefuture.com/2020/11/28/a2181-8-cities-in-the-world-famous-for-their-urban-planning/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Where you Live

  1. Where is your hometown?
  2. Would you like to live there in the future?
  3. What don’t you like about your home?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:

IELTS Essay: Attention Spans

IELTS Essay: Attention Spans

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of attention spans from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Attention Spans

Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some today have argued that individuals now possess generally shorter attention spans largely as a result of the growth of various social media platforms. In my opinion, though this claim might be slightly overstated, it is true on the whole.

Those who argue that shorter attention spans are not due to social media point out the influence of other new forms of media and technology. The length of a person’s attention span was never a topic of consideration for debate before the onset of the digital age and the development of television, radio, the internet, and so on. The stimulation from these technologies represents unprecedented challenges for humans who have not evolved to live in a digital world. Although modern kinds of media lead to over-stimulation and an addictive craving for more, constant stimulation, social media is merely one distraction among many.

However, social media is the greatest single cause of declining attention spans due to their unique design features. Social media companies have specifically crafted their applications to provide momentary bursts of pleasure. For instance, an application like TikTok is specifically designed to provide a stream of addictive videos under 10 seconds in length. As their algorithm perfects a curated feed for any given user, individuals easily become hooked on short entertainment and their attention spans concomitantly suffer. This is in marked contrast to the focus required to watch a film or listen to a radio broadcast.

In conclusion, I agree social media has caused the average person to struggle with concentration for extended periods due to the manner in which these websites have been constructed. Governments should therefore regulate them in order to mitigate the harms they cause for society as a whole.

Analysis

1. Some today have argued that individuals now possess generally shorter attention spans largely as a result of the growth of various social media platforms. 2. In my opinion, though this claim might be slightly overstated, it is true on the whole.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who argue that shorter attention spans are not due to social media point out the influence of other new forms of media and technology. 2. The length of a person’s attention span was never a topic of consideration for debate before the onset of the digital age and the development of television, radio, the internet, and so on. 3. The stimulation from these technologies represents unprecedented challenges for humans who have not evolved to live in a digital world. 4. Although modern kinds of media lead to over-stimulation and an addictive craving for more, constant stimulation, social media is merely one distraction among many.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. However, social media is the greatest single cause of declining attention spans due to their unique design features. 2. Social media companies have specifically crafted their applications to provide momentary bursts of pleasure. 3. For instance, an application like TikTok is specifically designed to provide a stream of addictive videos under 10 seconds in length. 4. As their algorithm perfects a curated feed for any given user, individuals easily become hooked on short entertainment and their attention spans concomitantly suffer. 5. This is in marked contrast to the focus required to watch a film or listen to a radio broadcast.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. In conclusion, I agree social media has caused the average person to struggle with concentration for extended periods due to the manner in which these websites have been constructed. 2. Governments should therefore regulate them in order to mitigate the harms they cause for society as a whole.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some today have argued that individuals now possess generally shorter attention spans largely as a result of the growth of various social media platforms. In my opinion, though this claim might be slightly overstated, it is true on the whole.

Those who argue that shorter attention spans are not due to social media point out the influence of other new forms of media and technology. The length of a person’s attention span was never a topic of consideration for debate before the onset of the digital age and the development of television, radio, the internet, and so on. The stimulation from these technologies represents unprecedented challenges for humans who have not evolved to live in a digital world. Although modern kinds of media lead to over-stimulation and an addictive craving for more, constant stimulation, social media is merely one distraction among many.

However, social media is the greatest single cause of declining attention spans due to their unique design features. Social media companies have specifically crafted their applications to provide momentary bursts of pleasure. For instance, an application like TikTok is specifically designed to provide a stream of addictive videos under 10 seconds in length. As their algorithm perfects a curated feed for any given user, individuals easily become hooked on short entertainment and their attention spans concomitantly suffer. This is in marked contrast to the focus required to watch a film or listen to a radio broadcast.

In conclusion, I agree social media has caused the average person to struggle with concentration for extended periods due to the manner in which these websites have been constructed. Governments should therefore regulate them in order to mitigate the harms they cause for society as a whole.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

possess have

generally shorter attention spans overall can’t focus for as long on one thing

largely as a result of mostly because of

growth of various social media platforms development of sites like Facebook, Instagram, etc.

claim state

slightly overstated a bit too strong

true on the whole correct overall

point out argue

influence impact

new forms of media and technology different kinds of sites and products

length how long it is

topic of consideration for debate before thing people argued about earlier

onset beginning of

the digital age computers, online, etc.

and so on etc.

stimulation watching things, having your attention held by something

represents unprecedented challenges poses new problems

evolved to live in a digital world adapted to online life

over-stimulation too much too watch, listen to, etc.

addictive craving for can’t stop using something

constant keeps happening

merely one distraction among many just one thing to focus on next to others

greatest single cause of declining one biggest source

unique design features special aspects of the apps

specifically crafted their applications to made their problems to

provide momentary bursts of pleasure give temporary feelings of happiness

application something on your phone, a program

specifically for this particular purpose

stream of addictive videos lots of videos in a row

in length how long they are

algorithm perfects a curated feed for any given user program that chooses the videos you will watch next on an app or a website

hooked on addicted to

concomitantly suffer as a result hurts

This is in marked contrast to totally different compared to

focus required attention needed

broadcast sent out

the average person normal citizen

struggle with concentration for extended periods due to have difficulty focusing

manner in which way that it happens

constructed built

regulate makes laws to control

mitigate lesson

harms downsides

society as a whole all of society

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

pəˈzɛs 
ˈʤɛnərəli ˈʃɔːtər əˈtɛnʃᵊn spænz 
ˈlɑːʤli æz ə rɪˈzʌlt ɒv 
ɡrəʊθ ɒv ˈveərɪəs ˈsəʊʃəl ˈmiːdiə ˈplætfɔːmz 
kleɪm 
ˈslaɪtli ˌəʊvəˈsteɪtɪd 
truː ɒn ðə həʊl 
pɔɪnt aʊt 
ˈɪnflʊəns 
njuː fɔːmz ɒv ˈmiːdiə ænd tɛkˈnɒləʤi 
lɛŋθ 
ˈtɒpɪk ɒv kənˌsɪdəˈreɪʃᵊn ɒv dɪˈbeɪt bɪˈfɔː 
ˈɒnsɛt 
ðə ˈdɪʤɪtl eɪʤ 
ænd səʊ ɒn 
ˌstɪmjʊˈleɪʃᵊn 
ˌrɛprɪˈzɛnts ʌnˈprɛsɪdəntɪd ˈʧælɪnʤɪz 
ɪˈvɒlvd tuː lɪv ɪn ə ˈdɪʤɪtl wɜːld 
ˈəʊvə-ˌstɪmjʊˈleɪʃᵊn 
əˈdɪktɪv ˈkreɪvɪŋ fɔː 
ˈkɒnstənt 
ˈmɪəli wʌn dɪsˈtrækʃᵊn əˈmʌŋ ˈmɛni 
ˈɡreɪtɪst ˈsɪŋɡl kɔːz ɒv dɪˈklaɪnɪŋ 
juːˈniːk dɪˈzaɪn ˈfiːʧəz 
spəˈsɪfɪkᵊli ˈkrɑːftɪd ðeər ˌæplɪˈkeɪʃᵊnz tuː 
prəˈvaɪd ˈməʊməntəri bɜːsts ɒv ˈplɛʒə 
ˌæplɪˈkeɪʃᵊn 
spəˈsɪfɪkᵊli 
striːm ɒv əˈdɪktɪv ˈvɪdɪəʊz 
ɪn lɛŋθ 
ˈælɡərɪðm ˈpɜːfɪkts ə ˈkjʊərɪtɪd fiːd fɔːr ˈɛni ˈɡɪvn ˈjuːzə 
hʊkt ɒn 
kənˈkɒmɪtəntli ˈsʌfə 
ðɪs ɪz ɪn mɑːkt ˈkɒntrɑːst tuː 
ˈfəʊkəs rɪˈkwaɪəd 
ˈbrɔːdkɑːst.
ði ˈævərɪʤ ˈpɜːsᵊn 
ˈstrʌɡl wɪð ˌkɒnsənˈtreɪʃᵊn fɔːr ɪksˈtɛndɪd ˈpɪərɪədz djuː tuː 
ˈmænər ɪn wɪʧ 
kənˈstrʌktɪd 
ˈrɛɡjʊleɪt 
ˈmɪtɪɡeɪt 
hɑːmz 
səˈsaɪəti æz ə həʊl 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Some today have argued that individuals now p____________s g________________________________s l_______________________f the g_________________________________s. In my opinion, though this c___m might be s_____________________d, it is t__________________e.

Those who argue that shorter attention spans are not due to social media p____________t the i________e of other n______________________________y. The l_______h of a person’s attention span was never a t_______________________________________e the o______t of t______________e and the development of television, radio, the internet, a___________n. The s__________________________n from these technologies r_______________________________s for humans who have not e_____________________________d. Although modern kinds of media lead to o______________n and an a________________________r more, c________t stimulation, social media is m_________________________________y.

However, social media is the g_________________________________g attention spans due to their u_________________________________s. Social media companies have s______________________________________o p__________________________________________e. For instance, an a_________n like TikTok is s_____________y designed to provide a s____________________________s under 10 seconds i___________h. As their a_________________________________________________________________r, individuals easily become h____________n short entertainment and their attention spans c__________________r. T_______________________________o the f______________________d to watch a film or listen to a radio b____________t.

In conclusion, I agree social media has caused t_________________________n to s_________________________________________________________________o the m______________________h these websites have been c______________d. Governments should therefore r____________e them in order to m____________e the h________s they cause for s_______________________e.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.cnn.com/2023/01/11/health/short-attention-span-wellness/index.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Notes

  1. Do you often write down notes?
  2. Do you make a lot of lists on your phone?
  3. When do you usually make notes?
  4. Is it common in your country for people to write notes?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:

Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Task 1 Essay: Building with 3 Maps

IELTS Task 1 Essay: Building with 3 Maps

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of a map of a ground floor in a building and containing 3 maps.

Find my full IELTS Ebooks here.

You can find maps here and line charts here and bar charts here.

Dave

IELTS Task 1 Essay: Building with 3 Maps

The floorplan shows how a building has changed from 1958 to the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the building has served both commercial and residential purposes with the only area remaining unchanged being the kitchen. At present, the flower shop has a more open layout relative to when it was an apartment and office.

In 1958, the building was used as an office with a meeting room in the top left corner of the floorplan, an assistant’s and secretary’s office below there and a toilet in the bottom left corner. In 1985, the meeting room was extended and turned into a living room and a large bathroom and shower took the place of the offices and toilet. The florist shop contained a gift card room in the top left, above a large open space for flowers and a play area in the bottom left corner.

On the right side, the kitchen in the top corner was unaltered across all iterations of the ground floor. In comparison, there was a manager’s office on the right hand side and a reception area in the bottom corner. These spaces were allocated for bedrooms in the apartment and are now an office and additional space for flowers.

Analysis

1. The floorplan shows how a building has changed from 1958 to the present day. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the building has served both commercial and residential purposes with the only area remaining unchanged being the kitchen. 3. At present, the flower shop has a more open layout relative to when it was an apartment and office.

  1. Paraphrase what the map shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.
  3. Add a second sentence to make sure everything is covered.

1. In 1958, the building was used as an office with a meeting room in the top left corner of the floorplan, an assistant’s and secretary’s office below there and a toilet in the bottom left corner. 2. In 1985, the meeting room was extended and turned into a living room and a large bathroom and shower took the place of the offices and toilet. 3. The florist shop contained a gift card room in the top left, above a large open space for flowers and a play area in the bottom left corner.

  1. Begin writing about the map.
  2. Make sure you compare as much as possible.
  3. Don’t leave anything out.

1. On the right side, the kitchen in the top corner was unaltered across all iterations of the ground floor. 2. In comparison, there was a manager’s office on the right hand side and a reception area in the bottom corner. 3. These spaces were allocated for bedrooms in the apartment and are now an office and additional space for flowers.

  1. Write about the final, other parts of the map – include everything!
  2. Compare the categories.
  3. Add in everything, even what has not changed.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Take some notes on a piece of paper to aid your memory:

The floorplan shows how a building has changed from 1958 to the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the building has served both commercial and residential purposes with the only area remaining unchanged being the kitchen. At present, the flower shop has a more open layout relative to when it was an apartment and office.

In 1958, the building was used as an office with a meeting room in the top left corner of the floor, an assistant’s and secretary’s office below there and a toilet in the bottom left corner. In 1985, the meeting room was extended and turned into a living room and a large bathroom and shower took the place of the offices and toilet. The florist shop contained a gift card room in the top left, above a large open space for flowers and a play area in the bottom left corner.

On the right side, the kitchen in the top corner was unaltered across all iterations of the ground floor. In comparison, there was a manager’s office on the right hand side and a reception area in the bottom corner. These spaces were allocated for bedrooms in the apartment and are now an office and additional space for flowers.

Answers

Try to write down or think of an antonym/opposite word for further practice:

floorplan blueprint

from to the present day starting then up until now

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

served both commercial and residential purposes was for business and for living

remaining unchanged was not altered

At present now

open layout lots of space

relative to when compared to the time

meeting room place to meet

top left corner northwest

assistant’s people helping out

secretary’s office below assistant’s working space under that

bottom left corner southwest

extended lengthened

turned into transformed into

took the place of replaced

florist shop contained flower shop has

gift card room place to sell cards

play area where kid’s can play

unaltered across all iterations of the ground floor didn’t change through the years

In comparison compared to that

manager’s boss’s

on the right hand side to the right

reception area area to get help from a receptionist

allocated for made for

additional extra

Pronunciation

Practice saying the words below using this tip with Google voice dictation:

flɔː plæn 
frɒm … tuː ðə ˈprɛznt deɪ 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
sɜːvd bəʊθ kəˈmɜːʃəl ænd ˌrɛzɪˈdɛnʃəl ˈpɜːpəsɪz 
rɪˈmeɪnɪŋ ʌnˈʧeɪnʤd 
æt ˈprɛznt 
ˈəʊpən ˈleɪaʊt 
ˈrɛlətɪv tuː wɛn 
ˈmiːtɪŋ ruːm 
tɒp lɛft ˈkɔːnə 
əˈsɪstənts 
ˈsɛkrətriz ˈɒfɪs bɪˈləʊ 
ˈbɒtəm lɛft ˈkɔːnə 
ɪksˈtɛndɪd 
tɜːnd ˈɪntuː 
tʊk ðə pleɪs ɒv 
ˈflɒrɪst ʃɒp kənˈteɪnd 
ɡɪft kɑːd ruːm
pleɪ ˈeərɪə 
ʌnˈɔːltəd əˈkrɒs ɔːl ˌɪtəˈreɪʃᵊnz ɒv ðə ɡraʊnd flɔː 
ɪn kəmˈpærɪsn 
ˈmænɪʤəz 
ɒn ðə raɪt hænd saɪd 
rɪˈsɛpʃᵊn ˈeərɪə 
ˈæləʊkeɪtɪd fɔː 
əˈdɪʃənl 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks. Note it on a piece of paper so you can remember better:

The f_________n shows how a building has changed f____m 1958 t_________________y. L______________________________________________________________t the building has s_____________________________________________s with the only area r_____________________d being the kitchen. A_________________t, the flower shop has a more o_____________________________n it was an apartment and office.

In 1958, the building was used as an office with a m_________________m in the t______________r of the floor, an a_______________s and s________________________w there and a toilet in the b__________________r. In 1985, the meeting room was e___________d and t______________o a living room and a large bathroom and shower t___________________f the offices and toilet. The f______________________d a g__________d room in the top left, above a large open space for flowers and a p__________a in the bottom left corner.

On the right side, the kitchen in the top corner was u______________________________________________________r. I_______________n, there was a m___________s office o___________________e and a r_____________a in the bottom corner. These spaces were a______________r bedrooms in the apartment and are now an office and a_______________l space for flowers.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

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https://thursd.com/articles/8-floral-shops-from-around-the-world-you-should-visit

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Offices

  1. Do you work in an office?
  2. Is it common for people in your country to work in office?
  3. Where do most of your friends work?
  4. Would you like to design an office?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related map below and then check with my sample answer: