IELTS Essay: Proposed Plan

IELTS Essay: Proposed Plan

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay from the real test related to a proposed plan.

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IELTS Cambridge 17 Essay: Proposed Plan

The map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the town has become more industrial and accessible with additional roads though the majority of the town is largely unchanged in terms of the structures.

In the present day, there is an airfield to the northwest which connects to a long street (A2) that runs south. The road contains a roundabout from which another road leads east to bisect a railway line near a gas station. The presented plan would move the roundabout slightly south and the airfield would be replaced by an industrial estate with a new road going directly east to the railway. The railway itself would also be interrupted by a new roundabout near the same gas station.

In the easternmost part of the town, there is currently a town center and built-up area around Ring Road, both of which will be unaltered in the future. The final additions suggested are a new road (A4) going from the town center along the southern edge of the town to connect with A2 in the west. There will also be one further street from the town center that will allow for passage to the east and north of the town.

Analysis

1. The map details a town now and a proposed future layout. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the town has become more industrial and accessible with additional roads though the majority of the town is largely unchanged in terms of the structures.

  1. Paraphrase what the table shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.

1. In the present day, there is an airfield to the northwest which connects to a long street (A2) that runs south. 2. The road contains a roundabout from which another road leads east to bisect a railway line near a gas station. 3. The presented plan would move the roundabout slightly south and the airfield would be replaced by an industrial estate with a new road going directly east to the railway. 4. The railway itself would also be interrupted by a new roundabout near the same gas station.

  1. Begin writing about the first part of the map.
  2. Make sure you compare as much as possible.
  3. You can describe one map separately or both together.
  4. Don’t leave anything out!

1. In the easternmost part of the town, there is currently a town center and built-up area around Ring Road, both of which will be unaltered in the future. 2. The final additions suggested are a new road (A4) going from the town center along the southern edge of the town to connect with A2 in the west. 3. There will also be one further street from the town center that will allow for passage to the east and north of the town.

  1. Write about the final, other parts of the map – include everything!
  2. Mention anything that has not changed on the map too.
  3. If it is a little long that’s ok, but include everything.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

The map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the town has become more industrial and accessible with additional roads though the majority of the town is largely unchanged in terms of the structures.

In the present day, there is an airfield to the northwest which connects to a long street (A2) that runs south. The road contains a roundabout from which another road leads east to bisect a railway line near a gas station. The presented plan would move the roundabout slightly south and the airfield would be replaced by an industrial estate with a new road going directly east to the railway. The railway itself would also be interrupted by a new roundabout near the same gas station.

In the easternmost part of the town, there is currently a town center and built-up area around Ring Road, both of which will be unaltered in the future. The final additions suggested are a new road (A4) going from the town center along the southern edge of the town to connect with A2 in the west. There will also be one further street from the town center that will allow for passage to the east and north of the town.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

details shows

proposed future layout suggested plan

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

industrial related to making things and industry

accessible able to get there

additional roads extra streets

the majority of the town most of the area

largely unchanged in terms of mostly unchanged concerning

structures buildings

In the present day now

airfield place to land planes

connects joins

runs goes along

roundabout from which rotary by which

bisect a railway line near a gas station cut in half a railroad next to a petrol station

presented shows

slightly a little

replaced by takes the place of

industrial estate place for making things

going directly east to the heading to the right

interrupted by stopped by

In the easternmost part of the town all the way over to the right

both of which the two of them

unaltered unchanged

final additions suggested last alterations in the plan

town center middle of a city

southern edge of the town to connect with bottom part of the city to join with

one further street another road

allow for passage to the make it possible to go to

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈdiːteɪlz 
prəˈpəʊzd ˈfjuːʧə ˈleɪaʊt 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
ɪnˈdʌstrɪəl 
əkˈsɛsəbᵊl 
əˈdɪʃənl rəʊdz 
ðə məˈʤɒrəti ɒv ðə taʊn 
ˈlɑːʤli ʌnˈʧeɪnʤd ɪn tɜːmz ɒv 
ˈstrʌkʧəz 
ɪn ðə ˈprɛzᵊnt deɪ 
ˈeəfiːld 
kəˈnɛkts 
rʌnz 
ˈraʊndəbaʊt frɒm wɪʧ 
baɪˈsɛkt ə ˈreɪlweɪ laɪn nɪər ə ɡæs ˈsteɪʃᵊn 
prɪˈzɛntɪd 
ˈslaɪtli 
rɪˈpleɪst baɪ 
ɪnˈdʌstrɪəl ɪsˈteɪt 
ˈɡəʊɪŋ dɪˈrɛktli iːst tuː ðiː 
ˌɪntəˈrʌptɪd baɪ 
ɪn ði ˈiːstənməʊst pɑːt ɒv ðə taʊn 
bəʊθ ɒv wɪʧ 
ʌnˈɔːltəd 
ˈfaɪnl əˈdɪʃᵊnz səˈʤɛstɪd 
taʊn ˈsɛntə 
ˈsʌðən ɛʤ ɒv ðə taʊn tuː kəˈnɛkt wɪð 
wʌn ˈfɜːðə striːt 
əˈlaʊ fɔː ˈpæsɪʤ tuː ðiː 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

The map d________s a town now and a p________________t. L__________________________________________________t the town has become more i_____________l and a__________e with a_____________s though t_______________________n is l_________________________f the s____________s.

I_____________________y, there is an a________d to the northwest which c_________s to a long street that r____s south. The road contains a r__________________________h another road leads east to b__________________________________n. The p___________d plan would move the roundabout s________y south and the airfield would be r______________y an i_________________e with a new road g____________________________e railway. The railway itself would also be i__________________y a new roundabout near the same gas station.

I___________________________________________n, there is currently a town center and built-up area around Ring Road, b_____________h will be u__________d in the future. The f_________________d are a new road (A4) going from the t______________r along the s___________________________________h A2 in the west. There will also be o____________________t from the town center that will a_________________________e east and north of the town.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.re-thinkingthefuture.com/2020/11/28/a2181-8-cities-in-the-world-famous-for-their-urban-planning/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Where you Live

  1. Where is your hometown?
  2. Would you like to live there in the future?
  3. What don’t you like about your home?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:

IELTS Essay: Attention Spans

IELTS Essay: Attention Spans

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of attention spans from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Attention Spans

Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some today have argued that individuals now possess generally shorter attention spans largely as a result of the growth of various social media platforms. In my opinion, though this claim might be slightly overstated, it is true on the whole.

Those who argue that shorter attention spans are not due to social media point out the influence of other new forms of media and technology. The length of a person’s attention span was never a topic of consideration for debate before the onset of the digital age and the development of television, radio, the internet, and so on. The stimulation from these technologies represents unprecedented challenges for humans who have not evolved to live in a digital world. Although modern kinds of media lead to over-stimulation and an addictive craving for more, constant stimulation, social media is merely one distraction among many.

However, social media is the greatest single cause of declining attention spans due to their unique design features. Social media companies have specifically crafted their applications to provide momentary bursts of pleasure. For instance, an application like TikTok is specifically designed to provide a stream of addictive videos under 10 seconds in length. As their algorithm perfects a curated feed for any given user, individuals easily become hooked on short entertainment and their attention spans concomitantly suffer. This is in marked contrast to the focus required to watch a film or listen to a radio broadcast.

In conclusion, I agree social media has caused the average person to struggle with concentration for extended periods due to the manner in which these websites have been constructed. Governments should therefore regulate them in order to mitigate the harms they cause for society as a whole.

Analysis

1. Some today have argued that individuals now possess generally shorter attention spans largely as a result of the growth of various social media platforms. 2. In my opinion, though this claim might be slightly overstated, it is true on the whole.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who argue that shorter attention spans are not due to social media point out the influence of other new forms of media and technology. 2. The length of a person’s attention span was never a topic of consideration for debate before the onset of the digital age and the development of television, radio, the internet, and so on. 3. The stimulation from these technologies represents unprecedented challenges for humans who have not evolved to live in a digital world. 4. Although modern kinds of media lead to over-stimulation and an addictive craving for more, constant stimulation, social media is merely one distraction among many.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. However, social media is the greatest single cause of declining attention spans due to their unique design features. 2. Social media companies have specifically crafted their applications to provide momentary bursts of pleasure. 3. For instance, an application like TikTok is specifically designed to provide a stream of addictive videos under 10 seconds in length. 4. As their algorithm perfects a curated feed for any given user, individuals easily become hooked on short entertainment and their attention spans concomitantly suffer. 5. This is in marked contrast to the focus required to watch a film or listen to a radio broadcast.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. In conclusion, I agree social media has caused the average person to struggle with concentration for extended periods due to the manner in which these websites have been constructed. 2. Governments should therefore regulate them in order to mitigate the harms they cause for society as a whole.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some today have argued that individuals now possess generally shorter attention spans largely as a result of the growth of various social media platforms. In my opinion, though this claim might be slightly overstated, it is true on the whole.

Those who argue that shorter attention spans are not due to social media point out the influence of other new forms of media and technology. The length of a person’s attention span was never a topic of consideration for debate before the onset of the digital age and the development of television, radio, the internet, and so on. The stimulation from these technologies represents unprecedented challenges for humans who have not evolved to live in a digital world. Although modern kinds of media lead to over-stimulation and an addictive craving for more, constant stimulation, social media is merely one distraction among many.

However, social media is the greatest single cause of declining attention spans due to their unique design features. Social media companies have specifically crafted their applications to provide momentary bursts of pleasure. For instance, an application like TikTok is specifically designed to provide a stream of addictive videos under 10 seconds in length. As their algorithm perfects a curated feed for any given user, individuals easily become hooked on short entertainment and their attention spans concomitantly suffer. This is in marked contrast to the focus required to watch a film or listen to a radio broadcast.

In conclusion, I agree social media has caused the average person to struggle with concentration for extended periods due to the manner in which these websites have been constructed. Governments should therefore regulate them in order to mitigate the harms they cause for society as a whole.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

possess have

generally shorter attention spans overall can’t focus for as long on one thing

largely as a result of mostly because of

growth of various social media platforms development of sites like Facebook, Instagram, etc.

claim state

slightly overstated a bit too strong

true on the whole correct overall

point out argue

influence impact

new forms of media and technology different kinds of sites and products

length how long it is

topic of consideration for debate before thing people argued about earlier

onset beginning of

the digital age computers, online, etc.

and so on etc.

stimulation watching things, having your attention held by something

represents unprecedented challenges poses new problems

evolved to live in a digital world adapted to online life

over-stimulation too much too watch, listen to, etc.

addictive craving for can’t stop using something

constant keeps happening

merely one distraction among many just one thing to focus on next to others

greatest single cause of declining one biggest source

unique design features special aspects of the apps

specifically crafted their applications to made their problems to

provide momentary bursts of pleasure give temporary feelings of happiness

application something on your phone, a program

specifically for this particular purpose

stream of addictive videos lots of videos in a row

in length how long they are

algorithm perfects a curated feed for any given user program that chooses the videos you will watch next on an app or a website

hooked on addicted to

concomitantly suffer as a result hurts

This is in marked contrast to totally different compared to

focus required attention needed

broadcast sent out

the average person normal citizen

struggle with concentration for extended periods due to have difficulty focusing

manner in which way that it happens

constructed built

regulate makes laws to control

mitigate lesson

harms downsides

society as a whole all of society

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

pəˈzɛs 
ˈʤɛnərəli ˈʃɔːtər əˈtɛnʃᵊn spænz 
ˈlɑːʤli æz ə rɪˈzʌlt ɒv 
ɡrəʊθ ɒv ˈveərɪəs ˈsəʊʃəl ˈmiːdiə ˈplætfɔːmz 
kleɪm 
ˈslaɪtli ˌəʊvəˈsteɪtɪd 
truː ɒn ðə həʊl 
pɔɪnt aʊt 
ˈɪnflʊəns 
njuː fɔːmz ɒv ˈmiːdiə ænd tɛkˈnɒləʤi 
lɛŋθ 
ˈtɒpɪk ɒv kənˌsɪdəˈreɪʃᵊn ɒv dɪˈbeɪt bɪˈfɔː 
ˈɒnsɛt 
ðə ˈdɪʤɪtl eɪʤ 
ænd səʊ ɒn 
ˌstɪmjʊˈleɪʃᵊn 
ˌrɛprɪˈzɛnts ʌnˈprɛsɪdəntɪd ˈʧælɪnʤɪz 
ɪˈvɒlvd tuː lɪv ɪn ə ˈdɪʤɪtl wɜːld 
ˈəʊvə-ˌstɪmjʊˈleɪʃᵊn 
əˈdɪktɪv ˈkreɪvɪŋ fɔː 
ˈkɒnstənt 
ˈmɪəli wʌn dɪsˈtrækʃᵊn əˈmʌŋ ˈmɛni 
ˈɡreɪtɪst ˈsɪŋɡl kɔːz ɒv dɪˈklaɪnɪŋ 
juːˈniːk dɪˈzaɪn ˈfiːʧəz 
spəˈsɪfɪkᵊli ˈkrɑːftɪd ðeər ˌæplɪˈkeɪʃᵊnz tuː 
prəˈvaɪd ˈməʊməntəri bɜːsts ɒv ˈplɛʒə 
ˌæplɪˈkeɪʃᵊn 
spəˈsɪfɪkᵊli 
striːm ɒv əˈdɪktɪv ˈvɪdɪəʊz 
ɪn lɛŋθ 
ˈælɡərɪðm ˈpɜːfɪkts ə ˈkjʊərɪtɪd fiːd fɔːr ˈɛni ˈɡɪvn ˈjuːzə 
hʊkt ɒn 
kənˈkɒmɪtəntli ˈsʌfə 
ðɪs ɪz ɪn mɑːkt ˈkɒntrɑːst tuː 
ˈfəʊkəs rɪˈkwaɪəd 
ˈbrɔːdkɑːst.
ði ˈævərɪʤ ˈpɜːsᵊn 
ˈstrʌɡl wɪð ˌkɒnsənˈtreɪʃᵊn fɔːr ɪksˈtɛndɪd ˈpɪərɪədz djuː tuː 
ˈmænər ɪn wɪʧ 
kənˈstrʌktɪd 
ˈrɛɡjʊleɪt 
ˈmɪtɪɡeɪt 
hɑːmz 
səˈsaɪəti æz ə həʊl 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Some today have argued that individuals now p____________s g________________________________s l_______________________f the g_________________________________s. In my opinion, though this c___m might be s_____________________d, it is t__________________e.

Those who argue that shorter attention spans are not due to social media p____________t the i________e of other n______________________________y. The l_______h of a person’s attention span was never a t_______________________________________e the o______t of t______________e and the development of television, radio, the internet, a___________n. The s__________________________n from these technologies r_______________________________s for humans who have not e_____________________________d. Although modern kinds of media lead to o______________n and an a________________________r more, c________t stimulation, social media is m_________________________________y.

However, social media is the g_________________________________g attention spans due to their u_________________________________s. Social media companies have s______________________________________o p__________________________________________e. For instance, an a_________n like TikTok is s_____________y designed to provide a s____________________________s under 10 seconds i___________h. As their a_________________________________________________________________r, individuals easily become h____________n short entertainment and their attention spans c__________________r. T_______________________________o the f______________________d to watch a film or listen to a radio b____________t.

In conclusion, I agree social media has caused t_________________________n to s_________________________________________________________________o the m______________________h these websites have been c______________d. Governments should therefore r____________e them in order to m____________e the h________s they cause for s_______________________e.

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.cnn.com/2023/01/11/health/short-attention-span-wellness/index.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Notes

  1. Do you often write down notes?
  2. Do you make a lot of lists on your phone?
  3. When do you usually make notes?
  4. Is it common in your country for people to write notes?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:

Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Task 1 Essay: Building with 3 Maps

IELTS Task 1 Essay: Building with 3 Maps

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of a map of a ground floor in a building and containing 3 maps.

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You can find maps here and line charts here and bar charts here.

Dave

IELTS Task 1 Essay: Building with 3 Maps

The floorplan shows how a building has changed from 1958 to the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the building has served both commercial and residential purposes with the only area remaining unchanged being the kitchen. At present, the flower shop has a more open layout relative to when it was an apartment and office.

In 1958, the building was used as an office with a meeting room in the top left corner of the floorplan, an assistant’s and secretary’s office below there and a toilet in the bottom left corner. In 1985, the meeting room was extended and turned into a living room and a large bathroom and shower took the place of the offices and toilet. The florist shop contained a gift card room in the top left, above a large open space for flowers and a play area in the bottom left corner.

On the right side, the kitchen in the top corner was unaltered across all iterations of the ground floor. In comparison, there was a manager’s office on the right hand side and a reception area in the bottom corner. These spaces were allocated for bedrooms in the apartment and are now an office and additional space for flowers.

Analysis

1. The floorplan shows how a building has changed from 1958 to the present day. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the building has served both commercial and residential purposes with the only area remaining unchanged being the kitchen. 3. At present, the flower shop has a more open layout relative to when it was an apartment and office.

  1. Paraphrase what the map shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.
  3. Add a second sentence to make sure everything is covered.

1. In 1958, the building was used as an office with a meeting room in the top left corner of the floorplan, an assistant’s and secretary’s office below there and a toilet in the bottom left corner. 2. In 1985, the meeting room was extended and turned into a living room and a large bathroom and shower took the place of the offices and toilet. 3. The florist shop contained a gift card room in the top left, above a large open space for flowers and a play area in the bottom left corner.

  1. Begin writing about the map.
  2. Make sure you compare as much as possible.
  3. Don’t leave anything out.

1. On the right side, the kitchen in the top corner was unaltered across all iterations of the ground floor. 2. In comparison, there was a manager’s office on the right hand side and a reception area in the bottom corner. 3. These spaces were allocated for bedrooms in the apartment and are now an office and additional space for flowers.

  1. Write about the final, other parts of the map – include everything!
  2. Compare the categories.
  3. Add in everything, even what has not changed.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Take some notes on a piece of paper to aid your memory:

The floorplan shows how a building has changed from 1958 to the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the building has served both commercial and residential purposes with the only area remaining unchanged being the kitchen. At present, the flower shop has a more open layout relative to when it was an apartment and office.

In 1958, the building was used as an office with a meeting room in the top left corner of the floor, an assistant’s and secretary’s office below there and a toilet in the bottom left corner. In 1985, the meeting room was extended and turned into a living room and a large bathroom and shower took the place of the offices and toilet. The florist shop contained a gift card room in the top left, above a large open space for flowers and a play area in the bottom left corner.

On the right side, the kitchen in the top corner was unaltered across all iterations of the ground floor. In comparison, there was a manager’s office on the right hand side and a reception area in the bottom corner. These spaces were allocated for bedrooms in the apartment and are now an office and additional space for flowers.

Answers

Try to write down or think of an antonym/opposite word for further practice:

floorplan blueprint

from to the present day starting then up until now

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

served both commercial and residential purposes was for business and for living

remaining unchanged was not altered

At present now

open layout lots of space

relative to when compared to the time

meeting room place to meet

top left corner northwest

assistant’s people helping out

secretary’s office below assistant’s working space under that

bottom left corner southwest

extended lengthened

turned into transformed into

took the place of replaced

florist shop contained flower shop has

gift card room place to sell cards

play area where kid’s can play

unaltered across all iterations of the ground floor didn’t change through the years

In comparison compared to that

manager’s boss’s

on the right hand side to the right

reception area area to get help from a receptionist

allocated for made for

additional extra

Pronunciation

Practice saying the words below using this tip with Google voice dictation:

flɔː plæn 
frɒm … tuː ðə ˈprɛznt deɪ 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
sɜːvd bəʊθ kəˈmɜːʃəl ænd ˌrɛzɪˈdɛnʃəl ˈpɜːpəsɪz 
rɪˈmeɪnɪŋ ʌnˈʧeɪnʤd 
æt ˈprɛznt 
ˈəʊpən ˈleɪaʊt 
ˈrɛlətɪv tuː wɛn 
ˈmiːtɪŋ ruːm 
tɒp lɛft ˈkɔːnə 
əˈsɪstənts 
ˈsɛkrətriz ˈɒfɪs bɪˈləʊ 
ˈbɒtəm lɛft ˈkɔːnə 
ɪksˈtɛndɪd 
tɜːnd ˈɪntuː 
tʊk ðə pleɪs ɒv 
ˈflɒrɪst ʃɒp kənˈteɪnd 
ɡɪft kɑːd ruːm
pleɪ ˈeərɪə 
ʌnˈɔːltəd əˈkrɒs ɔːl ˌɪtəˈreɪʃᵊnz ɒv ðə ɡraʊnd flɔː 
ɪn kəmˈpærɪsn 
ˈmænɪʤəz 
ɒn ðə raɪt hænd saɪd 
rɪˈsɛpʃᵊn ˈeərɪə 
ˈæləʊkeɪtɪd fɔː 
əˈdɪʃənl 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks. Note it on a piece of paper so you can remember better:

The f_________n shows how a building has changed f____m 1958 t_________________y. L______________________________________________________________t the building has s_____________________________________________s with the only area r_____________________d being the kitchen. A_________________t, the flower shop has a more o_____________________________n it was an apartment and office.

In 1958, the building was used as an office with a m_________________m in the t______________r of the floor, an a_______________s and s________________________w there and a toilet in the b__________________r. In 1985, the meeting room was e___________d and t______________o a living room and a large bathroom and shower t___________________f the offices and toilet. The f______________________d a g__________d room in the top left, above a large open space for flowers and a p__________a in the bottom left corner.

On the right side, the kitchen in the top corner was u______________________________________________________r. I_______________n, there was a m___________s office o___________________e and a r_____________a in the bottom corner. These spaces were a______________r bedrooms in the apartment and are now an office and a_______________l space for flowers.

Listening Practice

Listen to the related topic below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

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https://thursd.com/articles/8-floral-shops-from-around-the-world-you-should-visit

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Offices

  1. Do you work in an office?
  2. Is it common for people in your country to work in office?
  3. Where do most of your friends work?
  4. Would you like to design an office?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related map below and then check with my sample answer:

IELTS Essay: Early Language Learning

IELTS Essay: Early Language Learning

This is my IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of early language learning from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Early Language Learning

Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many have argued that the earlier students begin learning a language in school the better. Although this can pose challenges for schools, I am in complete agreement with this opinion.

Those against early foreign language courses contend it is not always practical. In many school systems, the cost of such courses can be prohibitive. More specifically, in more remote areas, teachers will often not have the ability to teach another language and it may be difficult to recruit foreign native language speakers. If the schools teach a foreign language anyway, then they will have to rely largely on textbooks and the classes are not likely to be as productive. This reality can create a situation where wealthier school districts receive a disproportionately superior education.

However, even when the conditions are not ideal, there is tremendous value in learning a language early relative to learning it later in life. Studies have shown that languages can be acquired far more easily early in one’s education. As a person gets older, the muscles in the mouth become more fixed making it more difficult to pronounce sounds from another language similar to a native speaker. Their brains are also less flexible and this is clearly evidenced in the considerably slower progress for adults when learning a new language. Attempting to acquire another language younger therefore has greater overall value for any given individual.

In conclusion, the effectiveness of early language acquisition justifies its inclusion in curricula at all schools. This educational reform should be a priority.

Analysis

1. Many have argued that the earlier students begin learning a language in school the better. 2. Although this can pose challenges for schools, I am in complete agreement with this opinion.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those against early foreign language courses contend it is not always practical. 2. In many school systems, the cost of such courses can be prohibitive. 3. More specifically, in more remote areas, teachers will often not have the ability to teach another language and it may be difficult to recruit foreign native language speakers. 4. If the schools teach a foreign language anyway, then they will have to rely largely on textbooks and the classes are not likely to be as productive. 5. This reality can create a situation where wealthier school districts receive a disproportionately superior education.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. The more detail, the better!

1. However, even when the conditions are not ideal, there is tremendous value in learning a language early relative to learning it later in life. 2. Studies have shown that languages can be acquired far more easily early in one’s education. 3. As a person gets older, the muscles in the mouth become more fixed making it more difficult to pronounce sounds from another language similar to a native speaker. 4. Their brains are also less flexible and this is clearly evidenced in the considerably slower progress for adults when learning a new language. 5. Attempting to acquire another language younger therefore has greater overall value for any given individual.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Keep adding in the result to develop your ideas more.

1. In conclusion, the effectiveness of early language acquisition justifies its inclusion in curricula at all schools. 2. This educational reform should be a priority.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many have argued that the earlier students begin learning a language in school the better. Although this can pose challenges for schools, I am in complete agreement with this opinion.

Those against early foreign language courses contend it is not always practical. In many school systems, the cost of such courses can be prohibitive. More specifically, in more remote areas, teachers will often not have the ability to teach another language and it may be difficult to recruit foreign native language speakers. If the schools teach a foreign language anyway, then they will have to rely largely on textbooks and the classes are not likely to be as productive. This reality can create a situation where wealthier school districts receive a disproportionately superior education.

However, even when the conditions are not ideal, there is tremendous value in learning a language early relative to learning it later in life. Studies have shown that languages can be acquired far more easily early in one’s education. As a person gets older, the muscles in the mouth become more fixed making it more difficult to pronounce sounds from another language similar to a native speaker. Their brains are also less flexible and this is clearly evidenced in the considerably slower progress for adults when learning a new language. Attempting to acquire another language younger therefore has greater overall value for any given individual.

In conclusion, the effectiveness of early language acquisition justifies its inclusion in curricula at all schools. This educational reform should be a priority.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

Many have argued that lots of people think that

the earlier the better sooner in life is superior

Although but

pose challenges creates problems

I am in complete agreement with this opinion I agree 100%

contend argue

practical works, is possible

school systems the schools in a specific town/district

courses classes

prohibitive prevent you from doing it

More specifically in particular

in more remote areas in the countryside

recruit foreign native language speakers find teachers from other countries

rely largely on textbooks use books too much

productive efficient

reality situation, fact

create a situation lead to the problem

where wealthier school districts in which richer schools

receive a disproportionately superior education have better schools

even when in the case that

conditions situations

not ideal bad

tremendous value in lots of importance in

relative to learning it later in life compared to learning later on

Studies have shown that research indicates that

acquired far more easily learned more efficiently

As a person gets older as you age

muscles parts of the mouth

fixed unable to change

pronounce sounds from articulate, say

similar to a native speaker not that different from a foreigner

less flexible more rigid, fixed

this is clearly evidenced in this is definitely the case

considerably slower progress for not nearly as fast

Attempting trying

acquire get

greater overall value more importance

any given individual a person

effectiveness how well it works

early language acquisition justifies learning a language early in life is reasonable because

inclusion adding it to

curricula what is learned in class

educational reform changes to school

priority important

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

M________________________t t_______________r students begin learning a language in school t______________r. A__________h this can p____________________s for schools, I_______________________________________________n.

Those against early foreign language courses c__________d it is not always p_________l. In many s_____________s, the cost of such c_________s can be p____________e. M_____________y, i_________________________s, teachers will often not have the ability to teach another language and it may be difficult to r____________________________________s. If the schools teach a foreign language anyway, then they will have to r_____________________________s and the classes are not likely to be as p___________e. This r________y can c_______________________________e w___________________________________________________________________________________n.

However, e_________n the c__________s are n__________l, there is t__________________n learning a language early r_____________o l____________________e. S__________________t languages can be a____________________y early in one’s education. A____________________r, the m______s in the mouth become more f_____d making it more difficult to p_______________________m another language s________________________r. Their brains are also l_____________e and t______________________n the c___________________________r adults when learning a new language. A___________g to a_________e another language younger therefore has g___________________e for a_________________________l.

In conclusion, the e___________________s of e___________________________s its i___________n in c___________a at all schools. This e____________________m should be a p___________y.

Pronunciation

ˈmɛni hæv ˈɑːɡjuːd ðæt 
ði ˈɜːlɪə … ðə ˈbɛtə
ɔːlˈðəʊ 
pəʊz ˈʧælɪnʤɪz 
aɪ æm ɪn kəmˈpliːt əˈɡriːmənt wɪð ðɪs əˈpɪnjən 
kənˈtɛnd 
ˈpræktɪkəl 
skuːl ˈsɪstəmz 
ˈkɔːsɪz 
prəˈhɪbɪtɪv 
mɔː spəˈsɪfɪkᵊli 
ɪn mɔː rɪˈməʊt ˈeərɪəz 
rɪˈkruːt ˈfɒrɪn ˈneɪtɪv ˈlæŋɡwɪʤ ˈspiːkəz 
rɪˈlaɪ ˈlɑːʤli ɒn ˈtɛkstbʊks 
prəˈdʌktɪv 
riˈæləti 
kriˈeɪt ə ˌsɪtjʊˈeɪʃᵊn 
weə ˈwɛlθɪə skuːl ˈdɪstrɪkts 
rɪˈsiːv ə ˌdɪsprəˈpɔːʃnɪtli suːˈpɪəriər ˌɛdjʊˈkeɪʃᵊn 
ˈiːvən wɛn 
kənˈdɪʃᵊnz 
nɒt aɪˈdɪəl 
trɪˈmɛndəs ˈvæljuː ɪn 
ˈrɛlətɪv tuː ˈlɜːnɪŋ ɪt ˈleɪtər ɪn laɪf 
ˈstʌdiz hæv ʃəʊn ðæt 
əˈkwaɪəd fɑː mɔːr ˈiːzɪli 
æz ə ˈpɜːsᵊn ɡɛts ˈəʊldə 
ˈmʌslz 
fɪkst 
prəˈnaʊns saʊndz frɒm 
ˈsɪmɪlə tuː ə ˈneɪtɪv ˈspiːkə 
lɛs ˈflɛksəbᵊl 
ðɪs ɪz ˈklɪəli ˈɛvɪdənst ɪn 
kənˈsɪdərəbᵊli ˈsləʊə ˈprəʊɡrəs fɔː 
əˈtɛmptɪŋ 
əˈkwaɪə 
ˈɡreɪtər ˈəʊvərɔːl ˈvæljuː 
ˈɛni ˈɡɪvn ˌɪndɪˈvɪʤuəl 
ɪˈfɛktɪvnəs 
ˈɜːli ˈlæŋɡwɪʤ ˌækwɪˈzɪʃᵊn ˈʤʌstɪfaɪz 
ɪnˈkluːʒən 
kəˈrɪkjʊlə 
ˌɛdjʊˈkeɪʃᵊnᵊl ˌriːˈfɔːm 
praɪˈɒrəti 

Listening Practice

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Reading Practice

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https://resources.unbabel.com/blog/japanese-finnish-or-chinese-the-10-hardest-languages-for-english-speakers-to-learn

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Talk about a goal that you want to achieve in the future. Include:

What the goal is

When you thought of it

How you will accomplish it

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topics below:

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

IELTS Essay: Expenditure Bar Chart

IELTS Essay: Expenditure Bar Chart

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of expenditure.

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IELTS Essay: Expenditure Bar Chart

The bar chart describes spending in five lifestyle categories for residents of four different nations in 2009. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that housing, food, and transportation are the biggest expenses in nearly all countries, with those in the United States spending the most on their homes and those in Japan the most on food. Healthcare and clothing are smaller expenses and transportation is a greater expenditure than food in only Canada and the US.

Expenditure on food ranges from a low of 14% in the United States to a high of 22% for Japan, with Canada (15%) and the UK (21%) in between. Housing costs represented at least a slightly higher percentage in all countries: 26% in the US, 24% in the UK, 21% in Japan, and 20% in Canada. The numbers were more variable for transportation as Canada stood at 20%, just above the USA at 19% while the UK and Japan were lower at 15% and 10%, respectively.

In terms of healthcare, by far the most is allocated for medical expenses in the USA (8%) while all other countries are below 5%. For clothing, Canada spends the most of their income (7%), followed by the UK (6%), Japan (4%), and finally the United States (3%).

Analysis

1. The bar chart describes spending in five lifestyle categories for residents of four different nations in 2009. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that housing, food, and transportation are the biggest expenses in nearly all countries, with those in the United States spending the most on their homes and those in Japan the most on food. 3. Healthcare and clothing are smaller expenses and transportation is a greater expenditure than food in only Canada and the US.

  1. Paraphrase what the bar chart shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences and the overall trend.
  3. This one is a little complex so it needs a second sentence for the overview.

1. Expenditure on food ranges from a low of 14% in the United States to a high of 22% for Japan, with Canada (15%) and the UK (21%) in between. 2. Housing costs represented at least a slightly higher percentage in all countries: 26% in the US, 24% in the UK, 21% in Japan, and 20% in Canada. 3. The numbers were more variable for transportation as Canada stood at 20%, just above the USA at 19% while the UK and Japan were lower at 15% and 10%, respectively.

  1. Begin writing about the data for the first categories.
  2. Compare between each sentence.
  3. One paragraph can be longer than the other.

1. In terms of healthcare, by far the most is allocated for medical expenses in the USA (8%) while all other countries are below 5%. 2. For clothing, Canada spends the most of their income (7%), followed by the UK (6%), Japan (4%), and finally the United States (3%).

  1. Write about the final other parts of the graph – include everything!
  2. Compare the categories.
  3. Add as much detail as possible.
  4. Keep comparing…
  5. This one is a bit long, but better than being too short!

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

The bar chart describes spending in five lifestyle categories for residents of four different nations in 2009. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that housing, food, and transportation are the biggest expenses in nearly all countries, with those in the United States spending the most on their homes and those in Japan the most on food. Healthcare and clothing are smaller expenses and transportation is a greater expenditure than food in only Canada and the US.

Expenditure on food ranges from a low of 14% in the United States to a high of 22% for Japan, with Canada (15%) and the UK (21%) in between. Housing costs represented at least a slightly higher percentage in all countries: 26% in the US, 24% in the UK, 21% in Japan, and 20% in Canada. The numbers were more variable for transportation as Canada stood at 20%, just above the USA at 19% while the UK and Japan were lower at 15% and 10%, respectively.

In terms of healthcare, by far the most is allocated for medical expenses in the USA (8%) while all other countries are below 5%. For clothing, Canada spends the most of their income (7%), followed by the UK (6%), Japan (4%), and finally the United States (3%).

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

describes spending shows how much money is used

categories areas

residents people living there

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

biggest expenses what is spent on the most

nearly almost

Healthcare hospitals, doctors, etc.

greater expenditure than more spent on

ranges from a low of goes from … to …

a high of the most at

in between in the middle

represented at least a slightly higher percentage was a little bit more

variable is more different

stood at was at

just above slightly over

while in contrast

lower less than

respectively for each

In terms of concerning

by far a lot more

allocated given to that / for each

medical expenses healthcare

income money earned

followed by after that

finally lastly

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

dɪsˈkraɪbz ˈspɛndɪŋ 
ˈkætɪɡəriz 
ˈrɛzɪdənts 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
ˈbɪɡɪst ɪksˈpɛnsɪz 
ˈnɪəli 
ˈhɛlθkeə 
ˈɡreɪtər ɪksˈpɛndɪʧə ðæn 
ˈreɪnʤɪz frɒm ə ləʊ ɒv 
ə haɪ ɒv 
ɪn bɪˈtwiːn 
ˌrɛprɪˈzɛntɪd æt liːst ə ˈslaɪtli ˈhaɪə pəˈsɛntɪʤ 
ˈveərɪəbᵊl 
stʊd æt 
ʤʌst əˈbʌv 
waɪl 
ˈləʊə 
rɪsˈpɛktɪvli 
ɪn tɜːmz ɒv 
baɪ fɑː 
ˈæləʊkeɪtɪd 
ˈmɛdɪkəl ɪksˈpɛnsɪz 
ˈɪnkʌm 
ˈfɒləʊd baɪ 
ˈfaɪnəli 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

The bar chart d__________________g in five lifestyle c___________s for r____________s of four different nations in 2009. L__________________________________________________________________________t housing, food, and transportation are the b______________s in n________y all countries, with those in the United States spending the most on their homes and those in Japan the most on food. H_____________e and clothing are smaller expenses and transportation is a g_________________________n food in only Canada and the US.

Expenditure on food r____________________f 14% in the United States to a_________f 22% for Japan, with Canada (15%) and the UK (21%) i____________n. Housing costs r_______________________________________e in all countries: 26% in the US, 24% in the UK, 21% in Japan, and 20% in Canada. The numbers were more v________e for transportation as Canada s________t 20%, j_________e the USA at 19% w_____e the UK and Japan were l_______r at 15% and 10%, r____________y.

I_______________f healthcare, b_______r the most is a_________d for m______________s in the USA (8%) while all other countries are below 5%. For clothing, Canada spends the most of their i___________e (7%), f___________y the UK (6%), Japan (4%), and f_________y the United States (3%).

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching from YouTube below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://nypost.com/2023/03/30/how-we-know-the-super-rich-are-finally-clamping-down-on-spending/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Shopping

  1. What do you usually shop for?
  2. Do you often go to malls?
  3. Do you shop online a lot?
  4. How common are shopping centers in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS chart below: