IELTS Band 7 Essays (with Corrections and Comments – Task 2)

IELTS Band 7 Essays (with Corrections and Comments – Task 2)

Here are some band 7 IELTS essays for writing task 2 that I have marked and corrected for past students.

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IELTS Band 7 Essays

IELTS Essay: Copying

IELTS Essay: Copying

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of copying from the real IELTS general training exam.

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IELTS Essay: Copying

The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods.

To what extent do you agree?

Some have suggested that the popularity of specific consumer trends evidences a natural human inclination to copy one another. In my opinion, this is largely true though there are other potential practical explanations.

Those who oppose this belief argue that imitation is rooted in reason. There are legitimate practical justifications to follow others. If a product such as a new smartphone is popular, then that is evidence it is a quality item. In this way, people are copying on a rational basis, not out of an inborn human desire. Moreover, popular items are likely cheaper and more widely available. A trendy pair of jeans made by Levy’s, for instance, is produced in the millions and stocked in department stores around the world. Individuals will encounter these jeans frequently and their purchase is simply a matter of convenience.

However, I believe that copying others satisfies a deeper human drive to feel part of a larger group. The natural tendency of humans to congregate also compels them to adopt similar customs and habits. Imitation shows that there is commonality and eases the fear of otherness. For example, Apple has built their brand based on the power of an inclusive community of like-minded users. By joining such an ecosystem, people are no longer isolated and feel part of a larger whole that elevates their individual self-esteem and protects them from other groups. Humans do not now face significant physical threats from nature but the desire to copy one another in order to join a modern-day tribe persists in contemporary consumer culture.

In conclusion, the popularity of similar consumer items illustrates an underlying need in humans to imitate one another in order to feel safe and accepted. This is not necessarily a negative insight though it should be managed carefully by individuals.

Analysis

1. Some have suggested that the popularity of specific consumer trends evidences a natural human inclination to copy one another. 2. In my opinion, this is largely true though there are other potential practical explanations.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those who oppose this belief argue that imitation is rooted in reason. 2. There are legitimate practical justifications to follow others. 3. If a product such as a new smartphone is popular, then that is evidence it is a quality item. 4. In this way, people are copying on a rational basis, not out of an inborn human desire. 5. Moreover, popular items are likely cheaper and more widely available. 6. A trendy pair of jeans made by Levy’s, for instance, is produced in the millions and stocked in department stores around the world. 7. Individuals will encounter these jeans frequently and their purchase is simply a matter of convenience.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Add more deatil.
  6. Make sure you use really specific examples.
  7. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. However, I believe that copying others satisfies a deeper human drive to feel part of a larger group. 2. The natural tendency of humans to congregate also compels them to adopt similar customs and habits. 3. Imitation shows that there is commonality and eases the fear of otherness. 4. For example, Apple has built their brand based on the power of an inclusive community of like-minded users. 5. By joining such an ecosystem, people are no longer isolated and feel part of a larger whole that elevates their individual self-esteem and protects them from other groups. 6. Humans do not now face significant physical threats from nature but the desire to copy one another in order to join a modern-day tribe persists in contemporary consumer culture.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.
  6. Make sure this paragraph is stronger.

1. In conclusion, the popularity of similar consumer items illustrates an underlying need in humans to imitate one another in order to feel safe and accepted. 2. This is not necessarily a negative insight though it should be managed carefully by individuals.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some have suggested that the popularity of specific consumer trends evidences a natural human inclination to copy one another. In my opinion, this is largely true though there are other potential practical explanations.

Those who oppose this belief argue that imitation is rooted in reason. There are legitimate practical justifications to follow others. If a product such as a new smartphone is popular, then that is evidence it is a quality item. In this way, people are copying on a rational basis, not out of an inborn human desire. Moreover, popular items are likely cheaper and more widely available. A trendy pair of jeans made by Levy’s, for instance, is produced in the millions and stocked in department stores around the world. Individuals will encounter these jeans frequently and their purchase is simply a matter of convenience.

However, I believe that copying others satisfies a deeper human drive to feel part of a larger group. The natural tendency of humans to congregate also compels them to adopt similar customs and habits. Imitation shows that there is commonality and eases the fear of otherness. For example, Apple has built their brand based on the power of an inclusive community of like-minded users. By joining such an ecosystem, people are no longer isolated and feel part of a larger whole that elevates their individual self-esteem and protects them from other groups. Humans do not now face significant physical threats from nature but the desire to copy one another in order to join a modern-day tribe persists in contemporary consumer culture.

In conclusion, the popularity of similar consumer items illustrates an underlying need in humans to imitate one another in order to feel safe and accepted. This is not necessarily a negative insight though it should be managed carefully by individuals.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

suggested give the opinion that

popularity ubiquity

specific consumer trends buying habits

evidences shows

natural human inclination normal desire, human nature

copy one another imitate each other

largely true mostly the case

potential practical explanations possible simple reasons

oppose work against

argue point out

imitation copying

rooted based in

legitimate practical justifications actual reasons related to convenience

smartphone mobile phone

quality item good product

in this way therefore

rational basis reasonable foundation

inborn human desire normal human inclination

cheaper not expensive

widely available common

trendy popular

Levy’s a jeans maker

produced made

stocked put on the shelves

department stores big stores for selling things

encounter come in contact with

frequently often

a matter of convenience easier to do it

satisfies completes

deeper human drive natural instinct

part of a larger group joining a bunch of people

natural tendency normal inclination

congregate group together

compels forces

adopt similar customs act the same way

habits ways of behaving

commonality things in common

eases makes easier

fear worry

otherness people being different

built their brand created their business

based on with the foundation of

inclusive accepting

like-minded users people who think the same way

joining becoming part of

ecosystem environment

no longer isolated not on its own

part of a larger whole in a group

elevates raises up

individual self-esteem

protects keeps safe

significant physical threats real risks of being hurt

modern-day tribe persists contemporary grouping stays the same

contemporary consumer culture modern shopping habits

underlying need basic desire

negative insight bad circumstance

managed carefully watch cautiously

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

səˈʤɛstɪd 
ˌpɒpjʊˈlærɪti 
spɪˈsɪfɪk kənˈsjuːmə trɛndz 
ˈɛvɪdənsɪz 
ˈnæʧrəl ˈhjuːmən ˌɪnklɪˈneɪʃən 
ˈkɒpi wʌn əˈnʌðə 
ˈlɑːʤli truː 
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl ˈpræktɪkəl ˌɛkspləˈneɪʃənz
əˈpəʊz 
ˈɑːgjuː 
ˌɪmɪˈteɪʃən 
ˈruːtɪd 
lɪˈʤɪtɪmɪt ˈpræktɪkəl ˌʤʌstɪfɪˈkeɪʃənz 
ˈsmɑːtfəʊn 
ˈkwɒlɪti ˈaɪtəm
ɪn ðɪs weɪ
ˈræʃənl ˈbeɪsɪs
ˌɪnˈbɔːn ˈhjuːmən dɪˈzaɪə
ˈʧiːpə 
ˈwaɪdli əˈveɪləbl.
ˈtrɛndi 
ˈlɛviz
prəˈdjuːst 
stɒkt 
dɪˈpɑːtmənt stɔːz 
ɪnˈkaʊntə 
ˈfriːkwəntli 
ə ˈmætər ɒv kənˈviːniəns
ˈsætɪsfaɪz 
ˈdiːpə ˈhjuːmən draɪv 
pɑːt ɒv ə ˈlɑːʤə gruːp 
ˈnæʧrəl ˈtɛndənsi 
ˈkɒŋgrɪgeɪt 
kəmˈpɛlz 
əˈdɒpt ˈsɪmɪlə ˈkʌstəmz 
ˈhæbɪts
ˈkɒmənˈælɪti
ˈiːzɪz 
fɪə 
ˈʌðənəs
bɪlt ðeə brænd 
beɪst ɒn 
ɪnˈkluːsɪv 
ˈlaɪkˈmaɪndɪd ˈjuːzəz 
ˈʤɔɪnɪŋ 
ˈiːkəʊˌsɪstəm
nəʊ ˈlɒŋgər ˈaɪsəleɪtɪd 
pɑːt ɒv ə ˈlɑːʤə həʊl 
ˈɛlɪveɪts 
ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəl sɛlf-ɪsˈtiːm 
prəˈtɛkts 
sɪgˈnɪfɪkənt ˈfɪzɪkəl θrɛts 
ˈmɒdən-deɪ traɪb pəˈsɪsts 
kənˈtɛmpərəri kənˈsjuːmə ˈkʌlʧə
ˌʌndəˈlaɪɪŋ niːd 
ˈnɛgətɪv ˈɪnsaɪt 
ˈmænɪʤd ˈkeəfli 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Some have s____________d that the p___________y of s_________________________s e_____________s a n____________________________n to c________________________r. In my opinion, this is l________________e though there are other p__________________________________s.

Those who o____________e this belief a_______e that i______________n is r__________d in reason. There are l_____________________________s to follow others. If a product such as a new s___________e is popular, then that is evidence it is a q_____________m. I_______________y, people are copying on a r___________________s, not out of an i_______________________e. Moreover, popular items are likely c___________r and more w_________________e. A t_______y pair of jeans made by L______s, for instance, is p__________d in the millions and s_____________d in d________________________s around the world. Individuals will e____________________r these jeans f___________________y and their purchase is simply a______________________________e.

However, I believe that copying others s____________s a d__________________________e to feel p________________________p. The n_____________________y of humans to c_______________e also c_________s them to a____________________s and h________s. Imitation shows that there is c_________________y and e______s the f_____r of o_____________s. For example, Apple has b_______________________d b__________n the power of an i________e community of l_____________________s. By j__________g such an e_____________m, people are n_____________________d and feel p__________________e that e______________s their i______________________m and p_____________s them from other groups. Humans do not now face s__________________________s from nature but the desire to copy one another in order to join a m______________________e p___________s in c___________________________e.

In conclusion, the popularity of similar consumer items illustrates an u_________________________d in humans to imitate one another in order to feel safe and accepted. This is not necessarily a n__________________t though it should be m______________________y by individuals.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.theatlantic.com/daily-dish/archive/2009/12/on-human-cloning/193009/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Society

Do people in your country often copy each other?

Is copying an important part of society?

How has technology changed society?

Will society continue to change in future? And if so, in what ways?

Do you feel people in your country are in touch with more traditional social customs?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

The number of people who are interested in and wearing fashionable clothes is increasing.

Is this a positive or negative development?

IELTS Essay: Continuing to Work

IELTS Essay: Continuing to Work

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of continuing to work later in life and older people from the real IELTS general training exam.

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IELTS Essay: Continuing to Work

Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do.

Do you agree or disagree?

Many feel older individuals should be allowed to continue working long past the normal age of retirement. In my opinion, this is advisable for a minority who are still capable of working but the majority should enjoy other pursuits.

On the one hand, many older people find satisfaction in work. This is the case when their mental and physical health has not begun to deteriorate dramatically. The best examples of this would be those who in a technical or artistic field, such as designers, painters, actors, and poets. These individuals often do their best work later in life. Moreover, older people with less glamorous jobs may not have family to spend time with and need the emotional and financial support of a job. Without a job, it is common in many countries for retired individuals to feel needlessly adrift and without direction or security.

However, most older people struggle to adapt to changes in society and would be better served enjoying their retirement. Most jobs today require at least a passing familiarity with technology and old people can become a hindrance in such positions. This is negative for the employer but especially the older person who may feel unwanted. Instead, it is possible for older people, as long as they have the financial means, to dedicate more time to their family and pursuing their passions and pastimes. For instance, many retirees are able to devote time and energy to learning crafts such as woodworking and painting, thereby expressing themselves artistically and gaining a new sense of satisfaction.

In conclusion, the exceptional few elderly citizens who can still work to a high level should not be prevented from doing so though most should retire with dignity. This is the best solution for older generations.

Analysis

1. Many feel older individuals should be allowed to continue working long past the normal age of retirement. 2. In my opinion, this is advisable for a minority who are still capable of working but the majority should enjoy other pursuits.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. On the one hand, many older people find satisfaction in work. 2. This is the case when their mental and physical health has not begun to deteriorate dramatically. 3. The best examples of this would be those who in a technical or artistic field, such as designers, painters, actors, and poets. 4. These individuals often do their best work later in life. 5. Moreover, older people with less glamorous jobs may not have family to spend time with and need the emotional and financial support of a job. 6. Without a job, it is common in many countries for retired individuals to feel needlessly adrift and without direction or security.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Add more deatil.
  6. Finish the paragraph strong.

1. However, most older people struggle to adapt to changes in society and would be better served enjoying their retirement. 2. Most jobs today require at least a passing familiarity with technology and old people can become a hindrance in such positions. 3. This is negative for the employer but especially the older person who may feel unwanted. 4. Instead, it is possible for older people, as long as they have the financial means, to dedicate more time to their family and pursuing their passions and pastimes. 5. For instance, many retirees are able to devote time and energy to learning crafts such as woodworking and painting, thereby expressing themselves artistically and gaining a new sense of satisfaction.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.

1. In conclusion, the exceptional few elderly citizens who can still work to a high level should not be prevented from doing so though most should retire with dignity. 2. This is the best solution for older generations.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many feel older individuals should be allowed to continue working long past the normal age of retirement. In my opinion, this is advisable for a minority who are still capable of working but the majority should enjoy other pursuits.

On the one hand, many older people find satisfaction in work. This is the case when their mental and physical health has not begun to deteriorate dramatically. The best examples of this would be those who in a technical or artistic field, such as designers, painters, actors, and poets. These individuals often do their best work later in life. Moreover, older people with less glamorous jobs may not have family to spend time with and need the emotional and financial support of a job. Without a job, it is common in many countries for retired individuals to feel needlessly adrift and without direction or security.

However, most older people struggle to adapt to changes in society and would be better served enjoying their retirement. Most jobs today require at least a passing familiarity with technology and old people can become a hindrance in such positions. This is negative for the employer but especially the older person who may feel unwanted. Instead, it is possible for older people, as long as they have the financial means, to dedicate more time to their family and pursuing their passions and pastimes. For instance, many retirees are able to devote time and energy to learning crafts such as woodworking and painting, thereby expressing themselves artistically and gaining a new sense of satisfaction.

In conclusion, the exceptional few elderly citizens who can still work to a high level should not be prevented from doing so though most should retire with dignity. This is the best solution for older generations.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

long past far beyond

retirement the age when you stop working

advisable good idea to do it

minority very few

capable able to do it

majority most of

pursuits passions

on the one hand on the one side

find satisfaction feel good

This is the case when only true if

mental and physical health how healthy you are in spirit and body

begun started

deteriorate dramatically get a lot worse

The best examples of this would be greatest instances include

technical related to expertise

artistic field the arts

designers people who draw and create things

painters people who draw

actors people who act

poets people who write poems

best work later in life pinnacle of their career later

glamorous fancy

spend time with spent more time around

emotional related to feelings

financial support money

retired individuals people who have stopped working

needlessly adrift without purpose, lost

without direction or security no clear focus or path

struggle have difficulty with

adapt change

better served get more out of

require need

at least at the minimum

a passing familiarity some experience with

hindrance makes things worse

positions jobs

employer boss

especially in particular

unwanted not wanted, disliked

instead rather

possible can be done

as long as in the case that

financial means enough money

dedicate invest

pursuing their passions and pastimes do their hobbies

retirees people who have retired

devote give

energy strength

crafts items that you make

woodworking making things in wood

painting picture

expressing themselves artistically create artworks

gaining getting

sense feel

satisfaction enjoyment

exceptional few the best

high level well

prevented stopped

dignity respect

best solution ideal remedy

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

lɒŋ pɑːst 
rɪˈtaɪəmənt
ədˈvaɪzəbl 
maɪˈnɒrɪti 
ˈkeɪpəbl 
məˈʤɒrɪti 
pəˈsjuːts
ɒn ðə wʌn hænd
faɪnd ˌsætɪsˈfækʃən 
ðɪs ɪz ðə keɪs wɛn 
ˈmɛntl ænd ˈfɪzɪkəl hɛlθ 
bɪˈgʌn 
dɪˈtɪərɪəreɪt drəˈmætɪk(ə)li
ðə bɛst ɪgˈzɑːmplz ɒv ðɪs wʊd biː 
ˈtɛknɪkəl 
ɑːˈtɪstɪk fiːld
dɪˈzaɪnəz
ˈpeɪntəz
ˈæktəz
ˈpəʊɪts
bɛst wɜːk ˈleɪtər ɪn laɪf
ˈglæmərəs 
spɛnd taɪm wɪð 
ɪˈməʊʃənl 
faɪˈnænʃəl səˈpɔːt 
rɪˈtaɪəd ˌɪndɪˈvɪdjʊəlz 
ˈniːdlɪsli əˈdrɪft 
wɪˈðaʊt dɪˈrɛkʃən ɔː sɪˈkjʊərɪti
ˈstrʌgl 
əˈdæpt 
ˈbɛtə sɜːvd 
rɪˈkwaɪə 
æt liːst 
ə ˈpɑːsɪŋ fəˌmɪlɪˈærɪti 
ˈhɪndrəns 
pəˈzɪʃənz
ɪmˈplɔɪə 
ɪsˈpɛʃəli 
ʌnˈwɒntɪd
ɪnˈstɛd
ˈpɒsəbl 
æz lɒŋ æz 
faɪˈnænʃəl miːnz
ˈdɛdɪkeɪt 
pəˈsjuːɪŋ ðeə ˈpæʃənz ænd ˈpɑːstaɪmz
rɪˌtaɪəˈriːz 
dɪˈvəʊt 
ˈɛnəʤi 
krɑːfts 
ˈwʊdwɜːkɪŋ 
ˈpeɪntɪŋ,
ɪksˈprɛsɪŋ ðəmˈsɛlvz ɑːˈtɪstɪk(ə)li 
ˈgeɪnɪŋ 
sɛns 
ˌsætɪsˈfækʃən
ɪkˈsɛpʃənl fjuː 
haɪ ˈlɛvl 
prɪˈvɛntɪd 
ˈdɪgnɪti
bɛst səˈluːʃən 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many feel older individuals should be allowed to continue working l___________t the normal age of r__________t. In my opinion, this is a___________e for a m___________y who are still c__________e of working but the m________y should enjoy other p__________s.

O_______________d, many older people f__________________n in work. T_____________________n their m________________________h has not b________n to d___________________________y. T___________________________________e those who in a t____________l or a_______________d, such as d___________s, p__________s, a________s, and p______s. These individuals often do their b_____________________e. Moreover, older people with less g______________s jobs may not have family to s__________________h and need the e______________l and f___________________t of a job. Without a job, it is common in many countries for r__________________________s to feel n___________________________t and w__________________________y.

However, most older people s_______________e to a______t to changes in society and would be b______________d enjoying their retirement. Most jobs today r____________e a________t a______________________y with technology and old people can become a h_________-e in such p_________s. This is negative for the e___________r but e____________y the older person who may feel u____________d. I__________d, it is p_________e for older people, a____________s they have the f__________________s, to d_____________e more time to their family and p____________________________________s. For instance, many r________s are able to d________e time and e_________y to learning c_________s such as w___________________g and p____________g, thereby e_______________________________y and g___________g a new s________e of s______________n.

In conclusion, the e__________________w elderly citizens who can still work to a h______________l should not be p___________d from doing so though most should retire with d____________y. This is the b_______________n for older generations.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.ramseysolutions.com/retirement/how-to-retire-early

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Retirement

When do people in your country usually retire?

Should everyone retire?

What are the reasons that people do not retire?

Will retirement ages keep getting later?

What do retired people do in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Nowadays people live longer after they retire.

How does this affect individuals and society?

What can be done about this?

IELTS Essay: Fast Food, Families, Nutrition & the Environment (5 Paragraph Essay)

IELTS Essay: Fast Food, Families, Nutrition & the Environment (5 Paragraph Essay)

This is a very rare 5 paragraph IELTS essay from me – the only one on my site!

I did this because there were 3 areas to deal with in the question prompt so it made sense to have one paragraph for each.

The drawback is that each idea has less development than most of my other essays.

Dave

IELTS Essay: Fast Food, Families, Nutrition & the Environment

Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families.

To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some would argue that the prevalence of fast food in society negatively impacts families, nutrition, and the environment. I am in complete agreement with this sentiment.

Firstly, fast food has destabilized traditional family meals. In the past, it was common for individuals to spend time eating a family meal so that parents and children could share quality time together. Fast food does not make this impossible, however, consumers are more likely to eat fast food while driving, watching television, or outside the home. The impact on families is marginal since fast food meals may be the exception though it is also decidedly negative.

Secondly, few would claim that fast food is healthy. The products at most fast food establishments are extremely high in sugar, fat, calories, and chemical preservatives. For instance, a cheeseburger from McDonald’s contains red meat that has been treated with steroids, salty cheese, and various other ingredients with, at best, doubtful dietary implications. This applies for the majority of fast food and is the main reason many today strive to eat at home or at healthier restaurants.

Finally, the production of fast food has significant environmental repercussions. Firstly, this involves factory farming. In order to supply beef, chicken, and pork there are massive farms that not only occupy land but also produce methane and other gases harmful to the ozone layer. Secondly, the transportation of goods that ensures consistency across franchises requires fossil fuel consumption. The chief culprits here are cars, trucks, and airplanes.

In conclusion, though there may be limited benefits related to convenience, fast food is an overwhelming negative in terms of families, eating habits, and the natural world. Whenever possible, consumers should not opt for fast food.

Analysis

1. Some would argue that the prevalence of fast food in society negatively impacts families, nutrition, and the environment. 2. I am in complete agreement with this sentiment.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Firstly, fast food has destabilized traditional family meals. 2. In the past, it was common for individuals to spend time eating a family meal so that parents and children could share quality time together. 3. Fast food does not make this impossible, however, consumers are more likely to eat fast food while driving, watching television, or outside the home. 4. The impact on families is marginal since fast food meals may be the exception though it is also decidedly negative.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. Secondly, few would claim that fast food is healthy. 2. The products at most fast food establishments are extremely high in sugar, fat, calories, and chemical preservatives. 3. For instance, a cheeseburger from McDonald’s contains red meat that has been treated with steroids, salty cheese, and various other ingredients with, at best, doubtful dietary implications. 4. This applies for the majority of fast food and is the main reason many today strive to eat at home or at healthier restaurants.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Continue developing it…

1. Finally, the production of fast food has significant environmental repercussions. 2. Firstly, this involves factory farming. 3. In order to supply beef, chicken, and pork there are massive farms that not only occupy land but also produce methane and other gases harmful to the ozone layer. 4. Secondly, the transportation of goods that ensures consistency across franchises requires fossil fuel consumption. 5. The chief culprits here are cars, trucks, and airplanes.

  1. In this odd essay with 5 paragraphs, add the last main idea here.
  2. Begin developing the first part.
  3. Add more detail.
  4. In this I have another main idea to develop.
  5. Make sure there is at least one more sentence of development.

1. In conclusion, though there may be limited benefits related to convenience, fast food is an overwhelming negative in terms of families, eating habits, and the natural world. 2. Whenever possible, consumers should not opt for fast food.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some would argue that the prevalence of fast food in society negatively impacts families, nutrition, and the environment. I am in complete agreement with this sentiment.

Firstly, fast food has destabilized traditional family meals. In the past, it was common for individuals to spend time eating a family meal so that parents and children could share quality time together. Fast food does not make this impossible, however, consumers are more likely to eat fast food while driving, watching television, or outside the home. The impact on families is marginal since fast food meals may be the exception though it is also decidedly negative.

Secondly, few would claim that fast food is healthy. The products at most fast food establishments are extremely high in sugar, fat, calories, and chemical preservatives. For instance, a cheeseburger from McDonald’s contains red meat that has been treated with steroids, salty cheese, and various other ingredients with, at best, doubtful dietary implications. This applies for the majority of fast food and is the main reason many today strive to eat at home or at healthier restaurants.

Finally, the production of fast food has significant environmental repercussions. Firstly, this involves factory farming. In order to supply beef, chicken, and pork there are massive farms that not only occupy land but also produce methane and other gases harmful to the ozone layer. Secondly, the transportation of goods that ensures consistency across franchises requires fossil fuel consumption. The chief culprits here are cars, trucks, and airplanes.

In conclusion, though there may be limited benefits related to convenience, fast food is an overwhelming negative in terms of families, eating habits, and the natural world. Whenever possible, consumers should not opt for fast food.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

argue claim

prevalence how common it is

fast food McDonald’s, KFC, Domino’s, etc.

negatively impacts hurts

nutrition healthy foods

complete agreement 100% on the same side

sentiment belief

destabilized weakened

traditional family meals normal dinners with family

common pervasive

share quality time together have a nice time together as a family

impossible can’t happen

consumers people who buy

outside not indoors

marginal slight

exception not normal

decidedly negative definitely bad

claim argue

establishments places

extremely high in a lot of in it

sugar sweetness

fat from butter, cheese, etc.

calories measurement for how much is in a food

chemical preservatives artificial additives

contains red meat has beef, pork, lamb in it

treated with steroids had a chemical injected into it

salty full of salt

various different kinds

ingredients what’s inside it

at best in the best situation

doubtful dietary implications questionable nutrition

applies is also true for

majority most of

strive try hard

production making of

significant big

repercussions effects

involves factory farming concerns big farms

in order to supply so that they have enough

massive large

occupy land take up the space

produce methane make gas

gases harmful to emissions that hurt

ozone layer atmosphere

transportation cars, trains, etc.

ensures consistency keeps it all the same

across franchises different restaurants all under the same brand

requires fossil fuel consumption needs gas

chief culprits main causes

limited benefits not much help

related to concerning

convenience makes it easy

overwhelming massive

whenever possible if they can

not opt for not choose

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈɑːgjuː 
ˈprɛvələns 
fɑːst fuːd 
ˈnɛgətɪvli ˈɪmpækts 
nju(ː)ˈtrɪʃən
kəmˈpliːt əˈgriːmənt 
ˈsɛntɪmənt
ˌdiːˈsteɪb(ə)laɪzd 
trəˈdɪʃənl ˈfæmɪli miːlz
ˈkɒmən 
ʃeə ˈkwɒlɪti taɪm təˈgɛðə 
ɪmˈpɒsəbl
kənˈsjuːməz 
ˌaʊtˈsaɪd 
ˈmɑːʤɪnəl 
ɪkˈsɛpʃən 
dɪˈsaɪdɪdli ˈnɛgətɪv
kleɪm 
ɪsˈtæblɪʃmənts 
ɪksˈtriːmli haɪ ɪn 
ˈʃʊgə
fæt
ˈkæləriz 
ˈkɛmɪkəl prɪˈzɜːvətɪvz
kənˈteɪnz rɛd miːt 
ˈtriːtɪd wɪð ˈstɛrɔɪdz
ˈsɔːlti 
ˈveərɪəs 
ɪnˈgriːdiənts 
æt bɛst
ˈdaʊtfʊl ˈdaɪətəri ˌɪmplɪˈkeɪʃənz 
əˈplaɪz 
məˈʤɒrɪti 
straɪv 
prəˈdʌkʃən 
sɪgˈnɪfɪkənt 
ˌriːpɜːˈkʌʃənz
ɪnˈvɒlvz ˈfæktəri ˈfɑːmɪŋ
ɪn ˈɔːdə tuː səˈplaɪ 
ˈmæsɪv 
ˈɒkjʊpaɪ lænd 
ˈprɒdjuːs ˈmiːθeɪn 
ˈgæsɪz ˈhɑːmfʊl tuː 
ˈəʊzəʊn ˈleɪə 
ˌtrænspɔːˈteɪʃən 
ɪnˈʃʊəz kənˈsɪstənsi 
əˈkrɒs ˈfrænʧaɪzɪz 
rɪˈkwaɪəz ˈfɒsl fjʊəl kənˈsʌm(p)ʃən
ʧiːf ˈkʌlprɪts 
ˈlɪmɪtɪd ˈbɛnɪfɪts 
rɪˈleɪtɪd tuː 
kənˈviːniəns
ˌəʊvəˈwɛlmɪŋ 
wɛnˈɛvə ˈpɒsəbl
nɒt ɒpt fɔː 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Some would a____e that the p___________e of f___________d in society n_________________s families, n_____________n, and the environment. I am in c_____________________t with this s_____________t.

Firstly, fast food has d________________d t_________________________s. In the past, it was c__________n for individuals to spend time eating a family meal so that parents and children could s___________________________r. Fast food does not make this i______________e, however, c____________s are more likely to eat fast food while driving, watching television, or o___________e the home. The impact on families is m_________l since fast food meals may be the e____________n though it is also d_________________e.

Secondly, few would c_____m that fast food is healthy. The products at most fast food e________________s are e_____________________n s________r, f___t, c_________s, and c_________________________s. For instance, a cheeseburger from McDonald’s c_________________________t that has been t____________________________s, s________y cheese, and v__________s other i________________s with, a_________t, d________________________________s. This a_________s for the m___________y of fast food and is the main reason many today s________e to eat at home or at healthier restaurants.

Finally, the p____________n of fast food has s_____________t environmental r_________________s. Firstly, this i____________________g. I________________________y beef, chicken, and pork there are m__________e farms that not only o________________d but also p_________________e and other g___________________o the o_____________r. Secondly, the t________________n of goods that e____________________________________s r_________________________________________n. The c________________s here are cars, trucks, and airplanes.

In conclusion, though there may be l_______________________s r__________________________e, fast food is an o______________g negative in terms of families, eating habits, and the natural world. W___________________e, consumers should n______________r fast food.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.healthline.com/health/fast-food-effects-on-body

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the IELTS speaking exam:

Discuss a food that you really like. Include

What it is

Why you like it

When you had it last

How much it costs

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available.

Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

IELTS Essay: Celebrity Views

IELTS Essay: Celebrity Views

Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession.

Is this a positive or negative development?

It is common for famous figures with large platforms to share their viewpoints on various topics. In my opinion, though there is potential for abuse, it is a positive overall as they can contribute diverse perspectives.

Critics of the publicity celebrities receive for their comments argue they are not always well informed. There are experts in every field, ranging from politics and science to sports and the arts and yet stars in the entertainment world possess outsized platforms. For instance, many actors, athletes, and singers have become part of the anti-vaccination movement. The views of health experts and epidemiologists are often subordinated to celebrity comments more likely to generate online traffic and ratings. However, this argument is undermined by research showing that professionals are notoriously poor at making predictions concerning their own area of expertise.

Moreover, celebrities in film and music engender diversity. The entertainment world, relative to other professional spheres, is made up of a wide variety of ethnicities and socioeconomic backgrounds. Most actors move to Hollywood from a different part of the world and then later become stars. In the music industry, listeners actively seek out new voices, styles, nationalities, and personalities. These individuals can then provide the average person an insightful glimpse into another part of society. The most recent example of this would be the awareness raised related to environmental issues by various singers and actors when they accept awards.

In conclusion, although there is risk that celebrities will be uninformed on a topic, their opinions are still important as they are typically candid, authentic, and diverse. In this era of inclusivity, it is important to value all viewpoints.

Analysis

1. It is common for famous figures with large platforms to share their viewpoints on various topics. 2. In my opinion, though there is potential for abuse, it is a positive overall as they can contribute diverse perspectives.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Critics of the publicity celebrities receive for their comments argue they are not always well informed. 2. There are experts in every field, ranging from politics and science to sports and the arts and yet stars in the entertainment world possess outsized platforms. 3. For instance, many actors, athletes, and singers have become part of the anti-vaccination movement. 4. The views of health experts and epidemiologists are often subordinated to celebrity comments more likely to generate online traffic and ratings. 5. However, this argument is undermined by research showing that professionals are notoriously poor at making predictions concerning their own area of expertise.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. I end here by switching to the other side – the side I agree with.

1. Moreover, celebrities in film and music engender diversity. 2. The entertainment world, relative to other professional spheres, is made up of a wide variety of ethnicities and socioeconomic backgrounds. 3. Most actors move to Hollywood from a different part of the world and then later become stars. 4. In the music industry, listeners actively seek out new voices, styles, nationalities, and personalities. 5. These individuals can then provide the average person an insightful glimpse into another part of society. 6. The most recent example of this would be the awareness raised related to environmental issues by various singers and actors when they accept awards.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.
  6. Vary long and short sentences.

1. In conclusion, although there is risk that celebrities will be uninformed on a topic, their opinions are still important as they are typically candid, authentic, and diverse. 2. In this era of inclusivity, it is important to value all viewpoints.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

It is common for famous figures with large platforms to share their viewpoints on various topics. In my opinion, though there is potential for abuse, it is a positive overall as they can contribute diverse perspectives.

Critics of the publicity celebrities receive for their comments argue they are not always well informed. There are experts in every field, ranging from politics and science to sports and the arts and yet stars in the entertainment world possess outsized platforms. For instance, many actors, athletes, and singers have become part of the anti-vaccination movement. The views of health experts and epidemiologists are often subordinated to celebrity comments more likely to generate online traffic and ratings. However, this argument is undermined by research showing that professionals are notoriously poor at making predictions concerning their own area of expertise.

Moreover, celebrities in film and music engender diversity. The entertainment world, relative to other professional spheres, is made up of a wide variety of ethnicities and socioeconomic backgrounds. Most actors move to Hollywood from a different part of the world and then later become stars. In the music industry, listeners actively seek out new voices, styles, nationalities, and personalities. These individuals can then provide the average person an insightful glimpse into another part of society. The most recent example of this would be the awareness raised related to environmental issues by various singers and actors when they accept awards.

In conclusion, although there is risk that celebrities will be uninformed on a topic, their opinions are still important as they are typically candid, authentic, and diverse. In this era of inclusivity, it is important to value all viewpoints.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

common pervasive

famous figures celebrities

large platforms big audiences

share tell others

viewpoints opinions

various topics different areas

potential possible

abuse being hurt

positive overall good generally

contribute diverse perspectives add in more opinions

critics people who are against

publicity celebrities coverage famous people get

comments what they say

argue point out

not always well informed not usually knowledgeable

experts professionals

field area

ranging from and to and including

stars famous people

entertainment world movies, music, etc.

outsized platforms too large audiences

anti-vaccination movement people against getting vaccinations

epidemiologists people who study infectious diseases

subordinated lower than

generate online traffic get more people to come to a website

ratings how many people are watching

undermined weakened

notoriously poor famously bad

predictions projections for the future

concerning relating to

area of expertise where they work

engender diversity create difference

relative to concerning

professional spheres jobs

wide variety of ethnicities many different groups of people from various countries

socioeconomic backgrounds rich and poor

actively seek out look for

nationalities country you are from

provide give

average person normal citizen

insightful glimpse meaningful look into

recent happened not that long ago

awareness raised help people know about

environmental issues problems related to climate change

various different kinds

accept awards get prizes

risk threat

uninformed don’t know much about

typically candid usually honest

authentic real

diverse varied

in this era of inclusivity today’s more open and accepting world

value importance

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈkɒmən 
ˈfeɪməs ˈfɪgəz 
lɑːʤ ˈplætfɔːmz 
ʃeə 
ˈvjuːpɔɪnts 
ˈveərɪəs ˈtɒpɪks
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl 
əˈbjuːs
ˈpɒzətɪv ˈəʊvərɔːl 
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)t daɪˈvɜːs pəˈspɛktɪvz
ˈkrɪtɪks 
pʌbˈlɪsɪti sɪˈlɛbrɪtiz 
ˈkɒmɛnts 
ˈɑːgjuː 
nɒt ˈɔːlweɪz wɛl ɪnˈfɔːmd
ˈɛkspɜːts 
fiːld
ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm … ænd … tuː … ænd 
stɑːz 
ˌɛntəˈteɪnmənt wɜːld 
ˈaʊtsaɪzd ˈplætfɔːmz
ˈænti-ˌvæksɪˈneɪʃən ˈmuːvmənt
ˌɛpɪˌdiːmɪˈɒləʤɪsts 
səˈbɔːdɪneɪtɪd 
ˈʤɛnəreɪt ˈɒnˌlaɪn ˈtræfɪk 
ˈreɪtɪŋz
ˌʌndəˈmaɪnd 
nəʊˈtɔːrɪəsli pʊə 
prɪˈdɪkʃənz 
kənˈsɜːnɪŋ 
ˈeərɪə ɒv ˌɛkspɜːˈtiːz
ɪnˈʤɛndə daɪˈvɜːsɪti
ˈrɛlətɪv tuː 
prəˈfɛʃənl sfɪəz
waɪd vəˈraɪəti ɒv ɛθˈnɪsɪtiz 
ˌsəʊsɪəʊˌɛkəˈnɒmɪk ˈbækgraʊndz
ˈæktɪvli siːk aʊt 
ˌnæʃəˈnælɪtiz
prəˈvaɪd 
ˈævərɪʤ ˈpɜːsn 
ˈɪnsaɪtf(ə)l glɪmps 
ˈriːsnt 
əˈweənəs reɪzd 
ɪnˌvaɪərənˈmɛntl ˈɪʃuːz 
ˈveərɪəs 
əkˈsɛpt əˈwɔːdz
rɪsk 
ˌʌnɪnˈfɔːmd 
ˈtɪpɪk(ə)li ˈkændɪd
ɔːˈθɛntɪk 
daɪˈvɜːs
ɪn ðɪs ˈɪərə ɒv ɪnˈkluːsɪvɪtiː
ˈvæljuː 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

It is c________n for f________________s with l_________________s to s______e their v______________s on v______________s. In my opinion, though there is p____________l for a_____e, it is a p________________l as they can c___________________________s.

C______s of the p___________________s receive for their c___________s a______e they are n______________________d. There are e_______s in every f______d, r__________________m politics a__d science t__ sports a___d the arts and yet s____s in the e_______________d possess o_____________________s. For instance, many actors, athletes, and singers have become part of the a______________________________t. The views of health experts and e________________s are often s_______________d to celebrity comments more likely to g_________________________c and r___________s. However, this argument is u____________d by research showing that professionals are n__________________r at making p____________s c_________________g their own a________________e.

Moreover, celebrities in film and music e___________________y. The entertainment world, r___________o other p_____________________s, is made up of a w_______________________________s and s___________________________s. Most actors move to Hollywood from a different part of the world and then later become stars. In the music industry, listeners a___________________t new voices, styles, n_______________s, and personalities. These individuals can then p_________e the a________________n an i__________________________e into another part of society. The most r________t example of this would be the a__________________d related to e__________________________s by v_________s singers and actors when they a_______________s.

In conclusion, although there is r____k that celebrities will be u______________d on a topic, their opinions are still important as they are t____________y c_________d, a___________c, and d_________e. I_______________________y, it is important to v_____e all viewpoints.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.insider.com/celebrity-interviews-controversial-aged-poorly-2020-6

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Famous People

  1. Have you ever met a celebrity?
  2. What kinds of celebrities are you interested in?
  3. Are there any celebrities you would want to interview?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Some people think that famous people can help international aid organizations to draw attention to important problems. Others believe that the celebrities can make the problems seem less important.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.