IELTS Essay: Offices

IELTS Essay: Offices

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of offices and whether or not offices should have open-space designs or separate rooms.

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IELTS Essay: Offices

Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Many offices these days are opting for open designs over more traditional, compartmentalized floor plans. In my opinion, despite the limited advantages for efficiency, this is a positive change due to its social and work-related benefits.

On the one hand, an open layout can reduce efficiency. When individuals work in private offices or cubicles, they are less likely to be disturbed and can therefore work more effectively. Each time a person is interrupted, this not only requires them to stop working but it may also take an indeterminate amount of time to focus again. Over the course of a day, various interruptions in the aggregate can massively reduce the amount of work completed. Recent research has in fact shown that communication around the office, though beneficial in other ways, does lead to declines in total work output. An office trying to achieve optimal output thus should emphasize private working spaces.

On the other hand, increased communication is a boon both socially and creatively. A standout example of this would be the offices designed by Apple founder Steve Jobs for both Pixar and Apple. He intentionally created offices that directed individuals to meet in common areas and that would facilitate interactions between different divisions in the company. The impact of this on morale is massive as individuals can make friends and enjoy each other’s company throughout the workday. Moreover, the true intention of this design was to facilitate creativity. By meeting others on a regular basis, employees are more likely to combine diverse perspectives and be more imaginative in their work.

In conclusion, although there may be minor tradeoffs in terms of productivity, this is a progressive change as it allows employees to converse and be more creative. Such offices should become the rule, rather than the exception.

Analysis

1. Many offices these days are opting for open designs over more traditional, compartmentalized floor plans. 2. In my opinion, despite the limited advantages for efficiency, this is a positive change due to its social and work-related benefits.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. On the one hand, an open layout can reduce efficiency. 2. When individuals work in private offices or cubicles, they are less likely to be disturbed and can therefore work more effectively. 3. Each time a person is interrupted, this not only requires them to stop working but it may also take an indeterminate amount of time to focus again. 4. Over the course of a day, various interruptions in the aggregate can massively reduce the amount of work completed. 5. Recent research has in fact shown that communication around the office, though beneficial in other ways, does lead to declines in total work output. 6. An office trying to achieve optimal output thus should emphasize private working spaces.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Vary long and short sentences.
  6. Finish development.

1. On the other hand, increased communication is a boon both socially and creatively. 2. A standout example of this would be the offices designed by Apple founder Steve Jobs for both Pixar and Apple. 3. He intentionally created offices that directed individuals to meet in common areas and that would facilitate interactions between different divisions in the company. 4. The impact of this on morale is massive as individuals can make friends and enjoy each other’s company throughout the workday. 5. Moreover, the true intention of this design was to facilitate creativity. 6. By meeting others on a regular basis, employees are more likely to combine diverse perspectives and be more imaginative in their work.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.
  6. State the results as well.

1. In conclusion, although there may be minor tradeoffs in terms of productivity, this is a progressive change as it allows employees to converse and be more creative. 2. Such offices should become the rule, rather than the exception.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Many offices these days are opting for open designs over more traditional, compartmentalized floor plans. In my opinion, despite the limited advantages for efficiency, this is a positive change due to its social and work-related benefits.

On the one hand, an open layout can reduce efficiency. When individuals work in private offices or cubicles, they are less likely to be disturbed and can therefore work more effectively. Each time a person is interrupted, this not only requires them to stop working but it may also take an indeterminate amount of time to focus again. Over the course of a day, various interruptions in the aggregate can massively reduce the amount of work completed. Recent research has in fact shown that communication around the office, though beneficial in other ways, does lead to declines in total work output. An office trying to achieve optimal output thus should emphasize private working spaces.

On the other hand, increased communication is a boon both socially and creatively. A standout example of this would be the offices designed by Apple founder Steve Jobs for both Pixar and Apple. He intentionally created offices that directed individuals to meet in common areas and that would facilitate interactions between different divisions in the company. The impact of this on morale is massive as individuals can make friends and enjoy each other’s company throughout the workday. Moreover, the true intention of this design was to facilitate creativity. By meeting others on a regular basis, employees are more likely to combine diverse perspectives and be more imaginative in their work.

In conclusion, although there may be minor tradeoffs in terms of productivity, this is a progressive change as it allows employees to converse and be more creative. Such offices should become the rule, rather than the exception.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

opting for choosing

open designs lots of space in the floor plan

traditional normal

compartmentalized floor plans offices with lots of cubicles and individual offices

limited advantages small benefits

efficiency productivity

due to because of

social interacting with people

work-related benefits good for your job

open layout office with lots of space

reduce decrease

private offices individual rooms

cubicles spaces sectioned off with walls but not a separate room for work

disturbed interrupted

therefore thus

effectively does it well

interrupted disturbed

requires needs

indeterminate amount of time some period of time

focus concentrate

over the course of a day throughout the day

various different kinds of

in the aggregate all together

massively reduce cut down on a lot

completed finished

recent research has in fact shown new studies indicate

beneficial in other ways good in different ways

lead to causes

total work output amount of work done

achieve optimal output accomplish as much as they can

emphasize private working spaces focus on individual offices

boon benefit

socially talking to others

creatively imaginatively

a standout example of this would be a good instance is

intentionally on purpose

directed pointed at

common areas places to congregate

facilitate interactions make people talk more

different divisions other parts of the company

morale how people in the company feel

massive really big

enjoy each other’s company throughout the workday have fun talking all day

true intention actual reason

facilitate help, enable

on a regular basis normally

combine diverse perspectives learn from others

imaginative creative

minor tradeoffs small disadvantages

in terms of when it comes to

productivity efficiency

progressive change good reform

converse talk

the rule, rather than the exception normal, not rare

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈɒptɪŋ fɔː 
ˈəʊpən dɪˈzaɪnz 
trəˈdɪʃənl
kəmˈpɑːtmənt ˈrɪəlaɪzd flɔː plænz
ˈlɪmɪtɪd ədˈvɑːntɪʤɪz 
ɪˈfɪʃənsi
djuː tuː 
ˈsəʊʃəl 
wɜːk-rɪˈleɪtɪd ˈbɛnɪfɪts
ˈəʊpən ˈleɪaʊt 
rɪˈdjuːs 
ˈpraɪvɪt ˈɒfɪsɪz 
ˈkjuːbɪklz
dɪsˈtɜːbd 
ˈðeəfɔː 
ɪˈfɛktɪvli
ˌɪntəˈrʌptɪd 
rɪˈkwaɪəz 
ˌɪndɪˈtɜːmɪnɪt əˈmaʊnt ɒv taɪm 
ˈfəʊkəs 
ˈəʊvə ðə kɔːs ɒv ə deɪ
ˈveərɪəs 
ɪn ði ˈægrɪgɪt 
ˈmæsɪvli rɪˈdjuːs 
kəmˈpliːtɪd
ˈriːsnt rɪˈsɜːʧ hæz ɪn fækt ʃəʊn 
ˌbɛnɪˈfɪʃəl ɪn ˈʌðə weɪz
liːd tuː 
ˈtəʊtl wɜːk ˈaʊtpʊt
əˈʧiːv ˈɒptɪməl ˈaʊtpʊt 
ˈɛmfəsaɪz ˈpraɪvɪt ˈwɜːkɪŋ ˈspeɪsɪz
buːn 
ˈsəʊʃəli 
kri(ː)ˈeɪtɪvli
ə ˈstændaʊt ɪgˈzɑːmpl ɒv ðɪs wʊd biː 
ɪnˈtɛnʃənli 
dɪˈrɛktɪd 
ˈkɒmən ˈeərɪəz 
fəˈsɪlɪteɪt ˌɪntərˈækʃənz 
ˈdɪfrənt dɪˈvɪʒənz 
mɒˈrɑːl 
ˈmæsɪv 
ɪnˈʤɔɪ iːʧ ˈʌðəz ˈkʌmpəni θru(ː)ˈaʊt ðə ˈwɜːkdeɪ
truː ɪnˈtɛnʃən 
fəˈsɪlɪteɪt 
ɒn ə ˈrɛgjʊlə ˈbeɪsɪs 
ˈkɒmbaɪn daɪˈvɜːs pəˈspɛktɪvz 
ɪˈmæʤɪnətɪv 
ˈmaɪnə treɪd ɒfs 
ɪn tɜːmz ɒv 
ˌprɒdʌkˈtɪvɪti
prəʊˈgrɛsɪv ʧeɪnʤ
kənˈvɜːs 
ðə ruːlˈrɑːðə ðæn ði ɪkˈsɛpʃən

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Many offices these days are o_______________r o_____________s over more t_____________l, c_________________________s. In my opinion, despite the l____________________s for e______________y, this is a positive change d______o its s______l and w_______________________s.

On the one hand, an o______________t can r__________e efficiency. When individuals work in p______________s or c_________s, they are less likely to be d_________d and can t__________e work more e____________y. Each time a person is i_______________d, this not only r_________s them to stop working but it may also take an i____________________________e to f______s again. O_____________________y, v_________s interruptions i_______________e can m_____________e the amount of work c_________d. R______________________________n that communication around the office, though b__________________s, does l_________o declines in t__________________t. An office trying to a___________________t thus should e______________________s.

On the other hand, increased communication is a b_____n both s_________y and c_________y. A_________________________________e the offices designed by Apple founder Steve Jobs for both Pixar and Apple. He i________________y created offices that d___________d individuals to meet in c_____________s and that would f__________________s between d___________________s in the company. The impact of this on m_________e is m_________e as individuals can make friends and e_____________________________________________y. Moreover, the t______________n of this design was to f__________e creativity. By meeting others o_________________s, employees are more likely to c__________________________s and be more i_______________e in their work.

In conclusion, although there may be m_________________________________y, this is a p_________________e as it allows employees to c_______________e and be more creative. Such offices should become t__________________________________n.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.creativebloq.com/design/design-offices-912828

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Offices

  1. Do you work in an office?
  2. Is it common for people in your country to work in office?
  3. Where do most of your friends work?
  4. Would you like to design an office?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do.

Do you agree or disagree?

https://howtodoielts.com/ielts-essay-continuing-to-work/

IELTS Essay: Governments and Private Companies

IELTS Essay: Governments and Private Companies

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of governments and private companies and which ones should carry out scientific research.

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IELTS Essay: Governments and Private Companies

Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some feel that scientific research should be conducted by governments instead of private entities. I am largely in disagreement with this sentiment since the risks for public health entailed do not outweigh the competencies of corporations.

Those in favor of state control over research argue governments are not motivated to generate revenue. Companies are inherently concerned with amassing capital and maximizing returns for shareholders and equity partners. An illustrative example of the threat here would be the opioid crisis currently ravaging the United States. Purdue, a privately-owned pharmaceutical manufacturer, produced a pill with knowledge of its extremely addictive properties and intentionally misled the public. The results have been millions of deaths and rising addiction rates to opioids such as heroin. In contrast, the government is able to prioritize public health since they do not have to earn a profit.

However, the example above is an extreme exception as most companies are motivated to innovate and contribute to the public good. The examples of this behavior abound though they are less likely to receive excessive media attention. Such breakthroughs include medicines such as the vaccine for Covid-19 developed by Pfizer and the technologies that companies such as Apple, Google, and Samsung have pioneered in recent decades. These private companies are able to hire and pay the best employees and are often led by visionary leaders who are driven to excel and overcome competition from other firms. The corporate environment creates the catalyst for scientists and researchers to develop transformative devices and make discoveries that benefit the general citizenry.

In conclusion, although companies are likely to pursue profits at all costs, they are also more motivated to innovate. The role of government is therefore to contain the worst excesses of the corporate world.

Analysis

1. Some feel that scientific research should be conducted by governments instead of private entities. 2. I am largely in disagreement with this sentiment since the risks for public health entailed do not outweigh the competencies of corporations.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those in favor of state control over research argue governments are not motivated to generate revenue. 2. Companies are inherently concerned with amassing capital and maximizing returns for shareholders and equity partners. 3. An illustrative example of the threat here would be the opioid crisis currently ravaging the United States. 4. Purdue, a privately-owned pharmaceutical manufacturer, produced a pill with knowledge of its extremely addictive properties and intentionally misled the public. 5. The results have been millions of deaths and rising addiction rates to opioids such as heroin. 6. In contrast, the government is able to prioritize public health since they do not have to earn a profit.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Vary long and short sentences.
  6. Finish development.

1. However, the example above is an extreme exception as most companies are motivated to innovate and contribute to the public good. 2. The examples of this behavior abound though they are less likely to receive excessive media attention. 3. Such breakthroughs include medicines such as the vaccine for Covid-19 developed by Pfizer and the technologies that companies such as Apple, Google, and Samsung have pioneered in recent decades. 4. These private companies are able to hire and pay the best employees and are often led by visionary leaders who are driven to excel and overcome competition from other firms. 5. The corporate environment creates the catalyst for scientists and researchers to develop transformative devices and make discoveries that benefit the general citizenry.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.

1. In conclusion, although companies are likely to pursue profits at all costs, they are also more motivated to innovate. 2. The role of government is therefore to contain the worst excesses of the corporate world.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some feel that scientific research should be conducted by governments instead of private entities. I am largely in disagreement with this sentiment since the risks for public health entailed do not outweigh the competencies of corporations.

Those in favor of state control over research argue governments are not motivated to generate revenue. Companies are inherently concerned with amassing capital and maximizing returns for shareholders and equity partners. An illustrative example of the threat here would be the opioid crisis currently ravaging the United States. Purdue, a privately-owned pharmaceutical manufacturer, produced a pill with knowledge of its extremely addictive properties and intentionally misled the public. The results have been millions of deaths and rising addiction rates to opioids such as heroin. In contrast, the government is able to prioritize public health since they do not have to earn a profit.

However, the example above is an extreme exception as most companies are motivated to innovate and contribute to the public good. The examples of this behavior abound though they are less likely to receive excessive media attention. Such breakthroughs include medicines such as the vaccine for Covid-19 developed by Pfizer and the technologies that companies such as Apple, Google, and Samsung have pioneered in recent decades. These private companies are able to hire and pay the best employees and are often led by visionary leaders who are driven to excel and overcome competition from other firms. The corporate environment creates the catalyst for scientists and researchers to develop transformative devices and make discoveries that benefit the general citizenry.

In conclusion, although companies are likely to pursue profits at all costs, they are also more motivated to innovate. The role of government is therefore to contain the worst excesses of the corporate world.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

scientific research studying topics such as medicine and technology

conducted by done by

governments nations, countries, federal governments

instead of rather than

private entities companies

largely in disagreement mostly don’t agree

sentiment opinion

risks threats

public health entailed how healthy people are included

outweigh stronger than

competencies abilities

corporations companies

those in favor of people who support

state control governments in charge

argue point out

motivated encouraged to

generate revenue make money

inherently concerned naturally care about

amassing capital making more money

maximizing returns making the most possible money

shareholders investors

equity partners people who own part of the company

threat risk

opioid crisis using drugs derived from the poppy flower

currently ravaging now destroying

privately-owned pharmaceutical manufacturer drug company

pill tablet, medicine

extremely addictive properties makes people very dependent

intentionally misled deliberately lied to

results effects

rising addiction rates more people using the drugs

heroin an opioid drug

prioritize public health care more about the health of people

earn make

profit money

extreme exception rare outlier case

innovate come up with new ideas

contribute to add to

the public good the welfare of all

abound are common

receive excessive media attention are on the news a lot

breakthroughs new discoveries, advances

vaccine shot that prevents a disease

pioneered first made

hire give a job

led by visionary leaders created by smart founders

driven motivated

excel do really well

overcome do better than

firms companies

environment atmosphere

catalyst cause

develop transformative devices make new products

make discoveries uncover things

benefit get a lot out of

general citizenry all people, the public

pursue profits try to make a lot of money

at all costs by any means necessary

innovate create something new

role part

contain have inside them

worst excesses biggest harms

corporate world companies

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˌsaɪənˈtɪfɪk rɪˈsɜːʧ 
kənˈdʌktɪd baɪ 
ˈgʌvnmənts 
ɪnˈstɛd ɒv 
ˈpraɪvɪt ˈɛntɪtiz
ˈlɑːʤli ɪn ˌdɪsəˈgriːmənt 
ˈsɛntɪmənt 
rɪsks 
ˈpʌblɪk hɛlθ ɪnˈteɪld 
aʊtˈweɪ 
ˈkɒmpɪtənsiz 
ˌkɔːpəˈreɪʃənz
ðəʊz ɪn ˈfeɪvər ɒv 
steɪt kənˈtrəʊl 
ˈɑːgjuː 
ˈməʊtɪveɪtɪd 
ˈʤɛnəreɪt ˈrɛvɪnjuː
ɪnˈhɪərəntli kənˈsɜːnd 
əˈmæsɪŋ ˈkæpɪtl 
ˈmæksɪmaɪzɪŋ rɪˈtɜːnz 
ˈʃeəˌhəʊldəz 
ˈɛkwɪti ˈpɑːtnəz
θrɛt 
əʊpi:ɔɪd ˈkraɪsɪs 
ˈkʌrəntli ˈrævɪʤɪŋ 
ˈpraɪvɪtli-əʊnd ˌfɑːməˈsjuːtɪkəl ˌmænjʊˈfækʧərə
pɪl 
ɪksˈtriːmli əˈdɪktɪv ˈprɒpətiz 
ɪnˈtɛnʃənli mɪsˈlɛd 
rɪˈzʌlts 
ˈraɪzɪŋ əˈdɪkʃ(ə)n reɪts 
ˈhɛrəʊɪn
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz ˈpʌblɪk hɛlθ 
ɜːn 
ˈprɒfɪt
ɪksˈtriːm ɪkˈsɛpʃən 
ˈɪnəʊveɪt 
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)t tuː 
ðə ˈpʌblɪk gʊd
əˈbaʊnd 
rɪˈsiːv ɪkˈsɛsɪv ˈmiːdiə əˈtɛnʃ(ə)n 
ˈbreɪkˌθruːz 
ˈvæksiːn 
ˌpaɪəˈnɪəd 
ˈhaɪə 
lɛd baɪ ˈvɪʒnəri ˈliːdəz 
ˈdrɪvn 
ɪkˈsɛl 
ˌəʊvəˈkʌm 
fɜːmz
ɪnˈvaɪərənmənt 
ˈkætəlɪst 
dɪˈvɛləp ˌtrænsˈfɔːmətɪv dɪˈvaɪsɪz 
meɪk dɪsˈkʌvəriz 
ˈbɛnɪfɪt 
ˈʤɛnərəl ˈsɪtɪznri
pəˈsjuː ˈprɒfɪts 
æt ɔːl kɒsts
ˈɪnəʊveɪt 
rəʊl 
kənˈteɪn 
wɜːst ɪkˈsɛsɪz 
ˈkɔːpərɪt wɜːld

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Some feel that s_________________h should be c_____________y g______________s i___________f p____________s. I am l____________________t with this s___________t since the r_____s for p___________h e___________d do not o__________h the c______________s of c_____________s.

T___________________f s____________l over research a_____e governments are not m___________d to g____________________e. Companies are i______________________d with a____________________l and m______________________s for s______________rs and e____________________s. An illustrative example of the t___________t here would be the o________________________g the United States. Purdue, a p_______________________________________________r, produced a p____l with knowledge of its e____________________________s and i______________________d the public. The r________s have been millions of deaths and r__________________s to opioids such as h________n. In contrast, the government is able to p_____________________h since they do not have to e____n a p______t.

However, the example above is an e_________________n as most companies are motivated to i______________e and c__________________o t______________________d. The examples of this behavior a________d though they are less likely to r________________________________n. Such b________________s include medicines such as the v_________e for Covid-19 developed by Pfizer and the technologies that companies such as Apple, Google, and Samsung have p___________d in recent decades. These private companies are able to h____e and pay the best employees and are often l_________y v______________________s who are d_______n to e_______l and o____________e competition from other f_______s. The corporate e______________t creates the c___________t for scientists and researchers to d________________________________s and m_______________s that b_________t the g__________________y.

In conclusion, although companies are likely to p______________s a_______________s, they are also more motivated to i____________e. The r_____e of government is therefore to c________n the w____________________s of the c_______________d.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.nytimes.com/spotlight/opioid-epidemic

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Science

  1. Were you good at science when you were in school?
  2. What was your favorite scientific subject?
  3. How do you use science in your life now?
  4. Are science majors common in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

Research into medical treatments are essential to improve health and fight disease.

Who do you think should fund this research: individuals, private companies or governments?

IELTS Essay Task 1: Employment for Men and Women

IELTS Essay Task 1: Employment for Men and Women

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of employment for men and women in 1970 and 2000 in Belgium, the USA, Japan, and Indonesia in a bar chart from the real IELTS exam.

Find my full IELTS Ebooks here.

Dave

IELTS Essay Task 1: Employment for Men and Women

The bar charts detail men and women between the ages of 60 and 64 working in Belgium, the USA, Japan, and Indonesia in 1970 and 2000. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that men had higher employment figures for all countries in both years with the largest disparity being the difference between men and women in Belgium and the USA in 2000. Proportions of males and females employed decreased across all nations, especially in Belgium.

In the United States in 1970, 88% of men between 60 and 64 were employed compared to just under 80% of women. These proportions were broadly similar to Belgium (79% and 62%) and Indonesia (83% and 63%). The disparity in Japan was slightly larger with 78% of men working and 55% of women.

By 2000, figures for the United States had declined to 79% of men and 41% of women, the second largest drop recorded. Belgium had the largest fall for female employment (down to fewer than 10% working) with a more moderate fall for men to 51%. In Indonesia, employed males fell to 72% as their counterparts slipped by 12% to 50%. Finally, Japan displayed the narrowest gap between genders with 51% of men working and 48% of women.

Analysis

1. The bar charts detail men and women between the ages of 60 and 64 working in Belgium, the USA, Japan, and Indonesia in 1970 and 2000. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that men had higher employment figures for all countries in both years with the largest disparity being the difference between men and women in Belgium and the USA in 2000. 3. Proportions of males and females employed decreased across all nations, especially in Belgium.

  1. Paraphrase what the bar chart shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the differences.
  3. You might need another sentence for your overview.

1. In the United States in 1970, 88% of men between 60 and 64 were employed compared to just under 80% of women. 2. These proportions were broadly similar to Belgium (79% and 62%) and Indonesia (83% and 63%). 3. The disparity in Japan was slightly larger with 78% of men working and 55% of women.

  1. Begin writing about the data for the first categories.
  2. Make sure you compare as much as possible.
  3. Vary long and short sentences.

1. By 2000, figures for the United States had declined to 79% of men and 41% of women, the second largest drop recorded. 2. Belgium had the largest fall for female employment (down to fewer than 10% working) with a more moderate fall for men to 51%. 3. In Indonesia, employed males fell to 72% as their counterparts slipped by 12% to 50%. Finally, Japan displayed the narrowest gap between genders with 51% of men working and 48% of women.

  1. Write about the final other parts of the graph – include everything!
  2. Compare the categories.
  3. Finish with the rest of the data.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Take some notes on a piece of paper to aid your memory:

The bar charts detail men and women between the ages of 60 and 64 working in Belgium, the USA, Japan, and Indonesia in 1970 and 2000. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that men had higher employment figures for all countries in both years with the largest disparity being the difference between men and women in Belgium and the USA in 2000. Proportions of males and females employed decreased across all nations, especially in Belgium.

In the United States in 1970, 88% of men between 60 and 64 were employed compared to just under 80% of women. These proportions were broadly similar to Belgium (79% and 62%) and Indonesia (83% and 63%). The disparity in Japan was slightly larger with 78% of men working and 55% of women.

By 2000, figures for the United States had declined to 79% of men and 41% of women, the second largest drop recorded. Belgium had the largest fall for female employment (down to fewer than 10% working) with a more moderate fall for men to 51%. In Indonesia, employed males fell to 72% as their counterparts slipped by 12% to 50%. Finally, Japan displayed the narrowest gap between genders with 51% of men working and 48% of women.

Answers

Try to write down or think of an antonym/opposite word for further practice:

detail show

between from … to ….

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent overall

employment figures numbers of people hired

largest disparity biggest difference

across all nations in all countries

especially in particularly in

compared to relative to

just under a little less than

proportions percentages

broadly similar almost the same as

slightly larger a little bigger

declined decreased

second largest drop recorded not the biggest fall

fewer than less than

moderate fall small drop

counterparts slipped opposites declined

displayed shown

narrowest gap smallest difference

genders male and female

Pronunciation

Practice saying the words below using this tip with Google voice dictation:

ˈdiːteɪl 
bɪˈtwiːn 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt 
ɪmˈplɔɪmənt ˈfɪgəz
ˈlɑːʤɪst dɪsˈpærɪti 
prəˈpɔːʃənz 
əˈkrɒs ɔːl ˈneɪʃənz
ɪsˈpɛʃəli ɪn 
kəmˈpeəd tuː 
ʤʌst ˈʌndə 
prəˈpɔːʃənz 
ˈbrɔːdli ˈsɪmɪlə 
ˈslaɪtli ˈlɑːʤə 
dɪˈklaɪnd 
ˈsɛkənd ˈlɑːʤɪst drɒp rɪˈkɔːdɪd
ˈfjuːə ðæn 
ˈmɒdərɪt fɔːl 
ˈkaʊntəpɑːts slɪpt 
dɪsˈpleɪd 
ˈnærəʊɪst gæp 
ˈʤɛndəz 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks. Note it on a piece of paper so you can remember better:

The bar charts d_________l men and women b_________n the ages of 60 and 64 working in Belgium, the USA, Japan, and Indonesia in 1970 and 2000. L__________________________________________t that men had higher e___________________s for all countries in both years with the l____________________y being the difference between men and women in Belgium and the USA in 2000. P________________s of males and females employed decreased a___________________s, e_______________n Belgium.

In the United States in 1970, 88% of men between 60 and 64 were employed c______________o j______________r 80% of women. These p_______________s were b_______________r to Belgium (79% and 62%) and Indonesia (83% and 63%). The disparity in Japan was s_________________r with 78% of men working and 55% of women.

By 2000, figures for the United States had d__________d to 79% of men and 41% of women, the s____________________________d. Belgium had the largest fall for female employment (down to fewer than 10% working) with a more m_____________l for men to 51%. In Indonesia, employed males fell to 72% as their c___________________d by 12% to 50%. Finally, Japan d___________d the n________________p between g_________s with 51% of men working and 48% of women.

Listening Practice

Listen to the related topic below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.washingtonpost.com/business/2021/11/17/how-to-quit-job/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work

  1. Where are you working at the moment?
  2. Do you want to work in another country?
  3. Do you like your job?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related chart below and then check with my sample answer:

IELTS Essay: Fuel Costs

IELTS Essay: Fuel Costs

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of fuel costs from the real IELTS general training exam.

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IELTS Essay: Fuel Costs

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some feel that the optimal solution to the current environmental crisis is to raise fuel costs for various private vehicles. In my opinion, though this would have a tangible impact, a more holistic approach is advisable.

On the one hand, increasing the price of fuel would have a clearly identifiable impact. In both developing and developed countries, private vehicles are becoming more common. More expensive fuel costs would discourage individuals from taking long trips and encourage them to seek alternative modes of transport such as walking, riding a bicycle, sharing transportation, and using public transportation. The average family that struggles to pay their bills every month might then decide to stay home rather than take a short trip on weekends if the cost of travel outweighs the potential enjoyment. Governments would be able to clearly chart the effects produced by these taxes and adjust them accordingly.

On the other hand, a wide variety of measures that do not target less affluent segments of society would have a greater effect. A single remedy is unlikely to produce the desired result as the majority of middle and upper class citizens would not be deterred by minor taxes. Instead, governments should consider all the relevant environment issues ranging from deforestation and single-use plastics to fossil fuel consumption in industry and the methane released in factory farming. To truly and sustainably counter these issues, governments will need to employ a variety of tactics that will likely include not only taxes but also regulations and various educational initiatives. The tackling of a single cause, such as the fuel used in private vehicles, will have marginal impact at best.

In conclusion, despite tangible results that a tax might engender, governments should opt for a more comprehensive environmental policy. This is a pressing issue and requires a nuanced, long-term approach.

Analysis

1. Some feel that the optimal solution to the current environmental crisis is to raise fuel costs for various private vehicles. 2. In my opinion, though this would have a tangible impact, a more holistic approach is advisable.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. On the one hand, increasing the price of fuel would have a clearly identifiable impact. 2. In both developing and developed countries, private vehicles are becoming more common. 3. More expensive fuel costs would discourage individuals from taking long trips and encourage them to seek alternative modes of transport such as walking, riding a bicycle, sharing transportation, and using public transportation. 4. The average family that struggles to pay their bills every month might then decide to stay home rather than take a short trip on weekends if the cost of travel outweighs the potential enjoyment. 5. Governments would be able to clearly chart the effects produced by these taxes and adjust them accordingly.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.
  5. Finish strong.

1. On the other hand, a wide variety of measures that do not target less affluent segments of society would have a greater effect. 2. A single remedy is unlikely to produce the desired result as the majority of middle and upper class citizens would not be deterred by minor taxes. 3. Instead, governments should consider all the relevant environment issues ranging from deforestation and single-use plastics to fossil fuel consumption in industry and the methane released in factory farming. 4. To truly and sustainably counter these issues, governments will need to employ a variety of tactics that will likely include not only taxes but also regulations and various educational initiatives. 5. The tackling of a single cause, such as the fuel used in private vehicles, will have marginal impact at best.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
  5. Develop the example fully.

1. In conclusion, despite tangible results that a tax might engender, governments should opt for a more comprehensive environmental policy. 2. This is a pressing issue and requires a nuanced, long-term approach.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Some feel that the optimal solution to the current environmental crisis is to raise fuel costs for various private vehicles. In my opinion, though this would have a tangible impact, a more holistic approach is advisable.

On the one hand, increasing the price of fuel would have a clearly identifiable impact. In both developing and developed countries, private vehicles are becoming more common. More expensive fuel costs would discourage individuals from taking long trips and encourage them to seek alternative modes of transport such as walking, riding a bicycle, sharing transportation, and using public transportation. The average family that struggles to pay their bills every month might then decide to stay home rather than take a short trip on weekends if the cost of travel outweighs the potential enjoyment. Governments would be able to clearly chart the effects produced by these taxes and adjust them accordingly.

On the other hand, a wide variety of measures that do not target less affluent segments of society would have a greater effect. A single remedy is unlikely to produce the desired result as the majority of middle and upper class citizens would not be deterred by minor taxes. Instead, governments should consider all the relevant environment issues ranging from deforestation and single-use plastics to fossil fuel consumption in industry and the methane released in factory farming. To truly and sustainably counter these issues, governments will need to employ a variety of tactics that will likely include not only taxes but also regulations and various educational initiatives. The tackling of a single cause, such as the fuel used in private vehicles, will have marginal impact at best.

In conclusion, despite tangible results that a tax might engender, governments should opt for a more comprehensive environmental policy. This is a pressing issue and requires a nuanced, long-term approach.

Answers

For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:

optimal solution best method

current environmental crisis problems related to nature happening now

raise fuel costs make gas more expensive

various private vehicles different kinds of cars, etc.

tangible impact real effect

holistic approach comprehensive method

advisable recommended

clearly identifiable impact definite effect

developing and developed countries poor and rich nations

expensive costs a lot

discourage not make someone want to do it

taking long trips traveling far

encourage make people want to do it

alternative modes different ways

transport ways of getting around

sharing transportation travelling together such as in the same car

public transportation buses, subways, etc.

average family normal family

struggles have difficulty

pay their bills afford the cost of

decide choose

rather than instead of

outweighs stronger than

potential enjoyment possible jobs

clearly chart easily record

produced by created by

taxes money paid to governments

adjust change

accordingly based on what they learn

a wide variety of measures different kinds of actions

target less affluent segments focus on poorer areas

remedy fix

produce the desired result create what is meant to be done

majority most of

middle and upper class citizens medium rich and very rich people

deterred not encouraged to

minor small

instead rather than

consider think about

relevant environment issues problems related to nature and climate change

deforestation cutting down trees

single-use plastics bottles, bags, etc.

fossil fuel consumption burning oil

industry business

methane released gas sent into the air

factory farming giant farms

truly definitely

sustainably counter good long-term solution

employ use

tactics strategies

regulations rules, laws

various educational initiatives different kinds of policies

tackling fighting

single cause main source

marginal impact at best small effect in the best case scenario

despite tangible regardless of the real effect

engender create

opt for choose to

comprehensive total

policy laws, regulations

pressing issue important problem

requires needs

nuanced complex

long-term approach thinking of the future, not short-term

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

ˈɒptɪməl səˈluːʃən 
ˈkʌrənt ɪnˌvaɪərənˈmɛntl ˈkraɪsɪs 
reɪz fjʊəl kɒsts 
ˈveərɪəs ˈpraɪvɪt ˈviːɪklz
ˈtænʤəbl ˈɪmpækt
həˈlɪstɪk əˈprəʊʧ 
ədˈvaɪzəbl
ˈklɪəli aɪˈdɛntɪfaɪəbl ˈɪmpækt
dɪˈvɛləpɪŋ ænd dɪˈvɛləpt ˈkʌntriz
ɪksˈpɛnsɪv 
dɪsˈkʌrɪʤ 
ˈteɪkɪŋ lɒŋ trɪps 
ɪnˈkʌrɪʤ 
ɔːlˈtɜːnətɪv məʊdz 
ˈtrænspɔːt 
ˈʃeərɪŋ ˌtrænspɔːˈteɪʃən
ˈpʌblɪk ˌtrænspɔːˈteɪʃən
ˈævərɪʤ ˈfæmɪli 
ˈstrʌglz 
peɪ ðeə bɪlz 
dɪˈsaɪd 
ˈrɑːðə ðæn 
aʊtˈweɪz 
pəʊˈtɛnʃəl ɪnˈʤɔɪmənt
ˈklɪəli ʧɑːt 
prəˈdjuːst baɪ 
ˈtæksɪz 
əˈʤʌst 
əˈkɔːdɪŋli
ə waɪd vəˈraɪəti ɒv ˈmɛʒəz 
ˈtɑːgɪt lɛs ˈæflʊənt ˈsɛgmənts 
ˈrɛmɪdi 
ˈprɒdjuːs ðə dɪˈzaɪəd rɪˈzʌlt 
məˈʤɒrɪti 
ˈmɪdl ænd ˈʌpə klɑːs ˈsɪtɪznz 
dɪˈtɜːd 
ˈmaɪnə 
ɪnˈstɛd
kənˈsɪdə 
ˈrɛlɪvənt ɪnˈvaɪərənmənt ˈɪʃuːz 
dɪˌfɒrɪˈsteɪʃ(ə)n 
ˈsɪŋgl-juːz ˈplæstɪks 
ˈfɒsl fjʊəl kənˈsʌm(p)ʃən 
ˈɪndəstri 
ˈmiːθeɪn rɪˈliːst 
ˈfæktəri ˈfɑːmɪŋ 
ˈtruːli 
susteɪnəbliː ˈkaʊntə 
ɪmˈplɔɪ 
ˈtæktɪks 
ˌrɛgjʊˈleɪʃənz 
ˈveərɪəs ˌɛdju(ː)ˈkeɪʃənl ɪˈnɪʃɪətɪvz
ˈtæklɪŋ 
ˈsɪŋgl kɔːz
ˈmɑːʤɪnəl ˈɪmpækt æt bɛst
dɪsˈpaɪt ˈtænʤəbl 
ɪnˈʤɛndə
ɒpt fɔː 
ˌkɒmprɪˈhɛnsɪv 
ˈpɒlɪsi
ˈprɛsɪŋ ˈɪʃuː 
rɪˈkwaɪəz 
nju(ː)ˈɑːnst
ˈlɒŋtɜːm əˈprəʊʧ

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Some feel that the o_________________n to the c____________________________s is to r_______________________s for v___________________________s. In my opinion, though this would have a t________________t, a more h________________h is a_____________e.

On the one hand, increasing the price of fuel would have a c___________________________t. In both d__________________________________s, private vehicles are becoming more common. More e___________e fuel costs would d__________e individuals from t________________s and e_________e them to seek a___________________s of t_____________t such as walking, riding a bicycle, s______________________n, and using p________________________n. The a_________________y that s________________s to p_______________s every month might then d_____e to stay home r___________n take a short trip on weekends if the cost of travel o____________s the p___________________________t. Governments would be able to c_____________t the effects p______________y these t_______s and a_______t them a_____________y.

On the other hand, a_________________________s that do not t_________________________________s of society would have a greater effect. A single r___________y is unlikely to p_________________________t as the m_________y of m______________________________s would not be d___________d by m_____r taxes. I_________d, governments should consider all the r____________________________s ranging from d________________n and s____________________s to f___________________________n in i____________y and the m_________________d in f____________________g. To t_____y and s____________________r these issues, governments will need to e__________y a variety of t__________s that will likely include not only taxes but also r_______________s and v____________________________s. The t___________g of a s______________e, such as the fuel used in private vehicles, will have m__________________________t.

In conclusion, d_________________e results that a tax might e_________r, governments should opt for a more comprehensive environmental p_______y. This is a p___________e and r__________s a n__________d, l________________________h.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.leeds.ac.uk/news-business-economy/news/article/4963/free-green-services-could-substantially-reduce-household-emissions

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Driving

  1. Do you like driving?
  2. Where was the last place you drove?
  3. Where do you like to sit in a car?
  4. Is driving common in your country?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:

The manufacturing and use of cars damages the environment but their popularity is increasing.

Why is this?

How could this be controlled?