IELTS Essay: Time Off Work for Fathers

IELTS Essay: Time Off Work for Fathers

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of fathers having time off from work after their children are born from the real IELTS general training exam.

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IELTS Essay: Time Off Work for Fathers

All fathers should be entitled to time-off from work when their children are born.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is becoming increasingly common for fathers to be granted paternity leave upon the birth of a new child. In my opinion, though this has economic ramifications, it is a progressive reform that should be encouraged.

Critics argue that in the aggregate the implications are negative for the economy. Most companies already account for maternity leave in their yearly budget. If fathers were to take off a similar amount of time, then many corporations would struggle to achieve the same profits. Since most businesses, both large and small, are unwilling to sacrifice revenue for the sake of their employees, the likely result would be a compensating reduction in workers’ wages. This would mean less money for consumers and the very parents who require additional means to provide for their children. Governments might be able to regulate this to an extent but corporate entities are committed to their bottom line over all else.

Nonetheless, this change is illustrative of a positive change in the understanding of gender equality. In the past, there was an historically ingrained, more institutionalised hierarchy between males and females. The shift towards increasingly equal treatment in the last century affects primarily women but must be fair in order to not engender resentment from men. One way of evidencing that gender equality concerns both sexes is paternity leave. Since men do not have to recover physically, this paid leave should be shorter but still significant. Governments can easily propose and force through legislation ensuring that the same protections enshrined in law for women, have a comparable statute safeguarding the rights of fathers.

In conclusion, though there is an economic tradeoff, men should be granted leave to be with their newly born children. The negatives can be mitigated if the time is limited relative to maternity leave.

Analysis

1. It is becoming increasingly common for fathers to be granted paternity leave upon the birth of a new child. 2. In my opinion, though this has economic ramifications, it is a progressive reform that should be encouraged.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Critics argue that in the aggregate the implications are negative for the economy. 2. Most companies already account for maternity leave in their yearly budget. 3. If fathers were to take off a similar amount of time, then many corporations would struggle to achieve the same profits. 4. Since most businesses, both large and small, are unwilling to sacrifice revenue for the sake of their employees, the likely result would be a compensating reduction in workers’ wages. 5. This would mean less money for consumers and the very parents who require additional means to provide for their children. 6. Governments might be able to regulate this to an extent but corporate entities are committed to their bottom line over all else.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific detail.
  4. Continue to develop it.
  5. Develop it as fully as possible.
  6. Any extra development will help your task achievement score.

1. Nonetheless, this change is illustrative of a positive change in the understanding of gender equality. 2. In the past, there was an historically ingrained, more institutionalised hierarchy between males and females. 3. The shift towards increasingly equal treatment in the last century affects primarily women but must be fair in order to not engender resentment from men. 4. One way of evidencing that gender equality concerns both sexes is paternity leave. 5. Since men do not have to recover physically, this paid leave should be shorter but still significant. 6. Governments can easily propose and force through legislation ensuring that the same protections enshrined in law for women, have a comparable statute safeguarding the rights of fathers.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. The more specific, the better.
  5. Add on any extra detail that you can that is related for a better task achievement score.
  6. This paragraph can be slightly longer but not too much!

1. In conclusion, though there is an economic tradeoff, men should be granted leave to be with their newly born children. 2. The negatives can be mitigated if the time is limited relative to maternity leave.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Take notes on a piece of paper so that you remember them better:

It is becoming increasingly common for fathers to be granted paternity leave upon the birth of a new child. In my opinion, though this has economic ramifications, it is a progressive reform that should be encouraged.

Critics argue that in the aggregate the implications are negative for the economy. Most companies already account for maternity leave in their yearly budget. If fathers were to take off a similar amount of time, then many corporations would struggle to achieve the same profits. Since most businesses, both large and small, are unwilling to sacrifice revenue for the sake of their employees, the likely result would be a compensating reduction in workers’ wages. This would mean less money for consumers and the very parents who require additional means to provide for their children. Governments might be able to regulate this to an extent but corporate entities are committed to their bottom line over all else.

Nonetheless, this change is illustrative of a positive change in the understanding of gender equality. In the past, there was an historically ingrained, more institutionalised hierarchy between males and females. The shift towards increasingly equal treatment in the last century affects primarily women but must be fair in order to not engender resentment from men. One way of evidencing that gender equality concerns both sexes is paternity leave. Since men do not have to recover physically, this paid leave should be shorter but still significant. Governments can easily propose and force through legislation ensuring that the same protections enshrined in law for women, have a comparable statute safeguarding the rights of fathers.

In conclusion, though there is an economic tradeoff, men should be granted leave to be with their newly born children. The negatives can be mitigated if the time is limited relative to maternity leave.

Answers

increasingly common more and more pervasive

granted given

paternity leave time off from work to be with your child after birth

economic ramifications implications for the economy

progressive reform positive, modern change

encouraged promoted

critics those who disagree

in the aggregate overall

implications effects

account for make up

yearly budget money earned/spent in a year

take off not work

struggle have difficulty

achieve get done

unwilling not wanting to

sacrifice revenue give up money

sake interest

likely result probably end in

reduction making it less

consumers customers

require need

means money earned

provide for take care of

regulate make laws, restrictions, etc.

to an extent to some degree

corporate entities companies

committed caring about

bottom line how much money they make

over all else above everything

nonetheless regardless

illustrative evidences

understanding changed thinking on

gender equality fairness between men and women

historically ingrained from a long time past part of society

institutionalised hierarchy the entities that order people within society

shift change

treatment how someone is dealt with

century 100 years

primarily mostly

engender resentment create a counter-reaction

evidencing showing

sexes genders

paternity leave time off for men to stay with newborns

recover get better

physically related to the body

paid leave time off with pay/salary

significant important

easily without effort

propose suggest

force through make sure

ensuring making it sure

protections safeguards

enshrined codified

comparable can be compared

statute law

safeguarding protecting

tradeoff downside

newly born just born

mitigated curbed, lessened

limited constrained

relative to in comparison to

Pronunciation

ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˈkɒmən 
ˈgrɑːntɪd 
pəˈtɜːnɪti liːv 
ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk ˌræmɪfɪˈkeɪʃənz
prəʊˈgrɛsɪv ˌriːˈfɔːm 
ɪnˈkʌrɪʤd
ˈkrɪtɪks 
ɪn ði ˈægrɪgɪt 
ˌɪmplɪˈkeɪʃənz 
əˈkaʊnt fɔː 
ˈjɪəli ˈbʌʤɪt
teɪk ɒf 
ˈstrʌgl 
əˈʧiːv 
ʌnˈwɪlɪŋ 
ˈsækrɪfaɪs ˈrɛvɪnjuː 
seɪk 
ˈlaɪkli rɪˈzʌlt 
rɪˈdʌkʃən 
kənˈsjuːməz 
rɪˈkwaɪə 
miːnz 
prəˈvaɪd fɔː 
ˈrɛgjʊleɪt 
tuː ən ɪksˈtɛnt 
ˈkɔːpərɪt ˈɛntɪtiz 
kəˈmɪtɪd 
ˈbɒtəm laɪn 
ˈəʊvər ɔːl ɛls
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ˈɪləstreɪtɪv 
ˌʌndəˈstændɪŋ 
ˈʤɛndər i(ː)ˈkwɒlɪti
hɪsˈtɒrɪkəli ɪnˈgreɪnd
ˌɪnstɪˈtjuːʃənəlaɪzd ˈhaɪərɑːki
ʃɪft 
ˈtriːtmənt 
ˈsɛnʧʊri 
ˈpraɪmərɪli 
ɪnˈʤɛndə rɪˈzɛntmənt 
ˈɛvɪdənsɪŋ 
ˈsɛksɪz 
pəˈtɜːnɪti liːv
rɪˈkʌvə 
ˈfɪzɪkəli
peɪd liːv 
sɪgˈnɪfɪkənt
ˈiːzɪli 
prəˈpəʊz 
fɔːs θruː 
ɪnˈʃʊərɪŋ 
prəˈtɛkʃənz 
ɪnˈʃraɪnd 
ˈkɒmpərəbl 
ˈstætjuːt 
ˈseɪfgɑːdɪŋ 
treɪd ɒf
ˈnjuːli bɔːn 
ˈmɪtɪgeɪtɪd 
ˈlɪmɪtɪd 
ˈrɛlətɪv tuː 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

It is becoming i________________________n for fathers to be g_________d p__________________e upon the birth of a new child. In my opinion, though this has e_________________________s, it is a p_________________m that should be e__________________d.

C_________s argue that i________________e the i______________s are negative for the economy. Most companies already a___________r maternity leave in their y________________t. If fathers were to t_________f a similar amount of time, then many corporations would s_________e to a_________e the same profits. Since most businesses, both large and small, are u__________g to s___________________e for the s________e of their employees, the l_____________t would be a compensating r_________n in workers’ wages. This would mean less money for c___________s and the very parents who r________e additional m_________s to p____________r their children. Governments might be able to r___________e this t____________t but c_________________s are c__________d to their b_______________e o_______________e.

N_______________s, this change is i_______________e of a positive change in the u______________g of g______________y. In the past, there was an h________________d, more i__________________________y between males and females. The s____t towards increasingly equal t_____________t in the last c________y affects p__________y women but must be fair in order to not e__________r r______________t from men. One way of e__________g that gender equality concerns both s______s is p_______________e. Since men do not have to r_________r p____________y, this p__________e should be shorter but still s___________t. Governments can e________________e and f________________h legislation e__________g that the same p_____________s e___________d in law for women, have a c______________e s_____________e s__________________g the rights of fathers.

In conclusion, though there is an economic t___________f, men should be granted leave to be with their n__________n children. The negatives can be m______________d if the time is l_________d r_______________o maternity leave.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oPjtoZJAJi4

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.nytimes.com/2020/02/19/parenting/why-dads-dont-take-parental-leave.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work

  1. Why did you choose your job?
  2. How much work do you do in a week?
  3. Do you have to work on weekends as well?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:

Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children.

To what extent do you agree?

IELTS Essay Task 1: Price of Bananas

IELTS Essay Task 1: Price of Bananas

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of the price of bananas imported in 5 different countries.

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IELTS Essay Task 1: Price of Bananas

The line graph shows the sales figures for bananas imported to 4 countries from 1996 to 2004.

The line chart details total import figures in USD per kg for bananas between 1996 and 2004. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the USA imported by far the least despite a small upwards trend, while Japan (in decline) imported the most. France was stable overall and tied for most imports by the end and Germany rose marginally.

Looking more specifically, the United States began the period importing 1 USD per kg of bananas and this number fluctuated within a narrow range, finishing at $1.2. In contrast, Japan’s imports started at $2 before a sharp rise to 3 USD per kg by 1998, erratic numbers between $2 and $2.5 after that, and a sudden drop followed by a partial recovery to end at $2.

Similarly, France began and finished at 2 USD per kg, however, its figures remained below $2 most of the period. Germany’s imports were at $1.5 in 1996, preceding a surge to over $2.5 in 1998, a crash to a low point of $1.3 the following year, then a steady rise to $2 and a final pullback to finish the period at $1.7.

Analysis

1. The line chart details total import figures in USD per kg for bananas between 1996 and 2004. 2. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the USA imported by far the least despite a small upwards trend, while Japan (in decline) imported the most. 3. France was stable overall and tied for most imports by the end and Germany rose marginally.

  1. Paraphrase what the graph shows.
  2. Write a clear overview summarising the major trends and differences.
  3. Add an extra sentence to be sure that you have covered everything.

1. Looking more specifically, the United States began the period importing 1 USD per kg of bananas and this number fluctuated within a narrow range, finishing at $1.2. 2. In contrast, Japan’s imports started at $2 before a sharp rise to 3 USD per kg by 1998, erratic numbers between $2 and $2.5 after that, and a sudden drop followed by a partial recovery to end at $2.

  1. Begin writing about the differences.
  2. Compare as much as possible.

1. Similarly, France began and finished at 2 USD per kg, however, its figures remained below $2 most of the period. 2. Germany’s imports were at $1.5 in 1996, preceding a surge to over $2.5 in 1998, a crash to a low point of $1.3 the following year, then a steady rise to $2 and a final pullback to finish the period at $1.7.

  1. Write about the rest of the information.
  2. Make sure you have detailed all the information.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Take some notes on a piece of paper to aid your memory:

The line chart details total import figures in USD per kg for bananas between 1996 and 2004. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the USA imported by far the least despite a small upwards trend, while Japan (in decline) imported the most. France was stable overall and tied for most imports by the end and Germany rose marginally.

Looking more specifically, the United States began the period importing 1 USD per kg of bananas and this number fluctuated within a narrow range, finishing at $1.2. In contrast, Japan’s imports started at $2 before a sharp rise to 3 USD per kg by 1998, erratic numbers between $2 and $2.5 after that, and a sudden drop followed by a partial recovery to end at $2.

Similarly, France began and finished at 2 USD per kg, however, its figures remained below $2 most of the period. Germany’s imports were at $1.5 in 1996, preceding a surge to over $2.5 in 1998, a crash to a low point of $1.3 the following year, then a steady rise to $2 and a final pullback to finish the period at $1.7.

Answers

details shows

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall

by far a lot more than

least lowest amount

despite regardless of

upwards trend going up

decline going down

stable overall no rise or fall by the end of the period

tied even

by the end at the end of the period

rose marginally increased a little

looking more specifically first of all

began the period started the timeframe

fluctuated was erratic/went up and down

narrow range limited scope

started began

sharp rise increased a lot

erratic numbers fluctuated

sudden drop fell a lot

followed by after that

partial recovery came back up partly

end (verb) finish

similarly not so different

remained below stayed under

most of the period the majority of the timeframe

preceding before

surge rapid increase

crash rapid decrease

low point lowest number

the following year year after that

steady rise going up at regular intervals

pullback decrease after increasing for a while

Pronunciation

ˈdiːteɪlz 
ˈlʊkɪŋ frɒm ən ˈəʊvərɔːl pəˈspɛktɪvɪt ɪz ˈrɛdɪli əˈpærənt ðæt 
baɪ fɑː 
liːst 
dɪsˈpaɪt 
ˈʌpwədz trɛnd
dɪˈklaɪn
ˈsteɪbl ˈəʊvərɔːl 
taɪd 
baɪ ði ɛnd 
rəʊz ˈmɑːʤɪnəli
ˈlʊkɪŋ mɔː spəˈsɪfɪk(ə)li
bɪˈgæn ðə ˈpɪərɪəd 
ˈflʌktjʊeɪtɪd 
ˈnærəʊ reɪnʤ
ˈstɑːtɪd 
ʃɑːp raɪz 
ɪˈrætɪk ˈnʌmbəz 
ˈsʌdn drɒp 
ˈfɒləʊd baɪ 
ˈpɑːʃəl rɪˈkʌvəri 
ɛnd 
ˈsɪmɪləli
rɪˈmeɪnd bɪˈləʊ 
məʊst ɒv ðə ˈpɪərɪəd
pri(ː)ˈsiːdɪŋ 
sɜːʤ 
kræʃ 
ləʊ pɔɪnt 
ðə ˈfɒləʊɪŋ jɪə
ˈstɛdi raɪz 
ˈpʊlbæk 

Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

The line chart d_______s total import figures in USD per kg for bananas between 1996 and 2004. L________________________________________________t the USA imported b______r the l____________e a small u_____________d, while Japan (in d________e) imported the most. France was s___________l and t____d for most imports b__________d and Germany r________________y.

L_______________________y, the United States b________________d importing 1 USD per kg of bananas and this number f_______________d within a n_______________e, finishing at $1.2. In contrast, Japan’s imports s________d at $2 before a s_____________e to 3 USD per kg by 1998, e_________________s between $2 and $2.5 after that, and a s_______________p f_______________y a p________________y to e___d at $2.

S______________y, France began and finished at 2 USD per kg, however, its figures r___________________w $2 m_________________d. Germany’s imports were at $1.5 in 1996, p___________g a s_____e to over $2.5 in 1998, a c______h to a l___________t of $1.3 t_____________________r, then a s____________e to $2 and a final p___________k to finish the period at $1.7.

Listening Practice

Listen to the related topic below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.healthline.com/nutrition/foods/bananas

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following related questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Food

  1. What kinds of foods do you like to eat?
  2. How different is food in your country today from when you were younger?
  3. Which foods do you dislike?
  4. What foods do people in your country buy at the market?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related graph below and then check with my sample answer:

IELTS Task 1 Essay: Line Graph (Steel)
IELTS Essay: Robots Helping at Home and Work

IELTS Essay: Robots Helping at Home and Work

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of robots helping at home and work from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Robots Helping at Home and Work

Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home.

Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the robotics industry is beginning to penetrate both home and work environments. In my opinion, advances in robotics generally and artificial intelligence more specifically have their merits but are isolating.

Proponents of these innovations point to the eradication of inefficiencies. This applies to both workplaces and homes. At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security. As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel. In homes, the situation is similar as robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.

Nonetheless, the growth of a robotics industry exacerbates a modern trend towards isolation. People today are seemingly more connected than ever before thanks to the internet and social media, however, real world connection is on the decline. The workplace and home are two of the last remaining spaces to build meaningful, interpersonal relationships. A rise in the number of robots, as is the case in Japan where it is now possible to purchase a robot companion, will lead to a concomitant decrease in human relations. It seems unlikely that people would completely stop talking to each other but the pervasiveness of online life can serve as a warning that humanity is only too willing to subsist on one-way, inauthentic relationships.

In conclusion, despite the benefits robots bring for productivity, their isolating effect will make them a negative on level. Individuals must therefore strive to maintain strong human relationships.

Analysis

1. Nowadays, the robotics industry is beginning to penetrate both home and work environments. 2. In my opinion, advances in robotics generally and artificial intelligence more specifically have their merits but are isolating.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Proponents of these innovations point to the eradication of inefficiencies. This applies to both workplaces and homes. 2. At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security. 3. As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel. 4. In homes, the situation is similar as robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific examples.
  4. Keep developing it fully.

1. Nonetheless, the growth of a robotics industry exacerbates a modern trend towards isolation. 2. People today are seemingly more connected than ever before thanks to the internet and social media, however, real world connection is on the decline. 3. The workplace and home are two of the last remaining spaces to build meaningful, interpersonal relationships. 4. A rise in the number of robots, as is the case in Japan where it is now possible to purchase a robot companion, will lead to a concomitant decrease in human relations. 5. It seems unlikely that people would completely stop talking to each other but the pervasiveness of online life can serve as a warning that humanity is only too willing to subsist on one-way, inauthentic relationships.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Continue developing it…
  5. as fully as possible!

1. In conclusion, despite the benefits robots bring for productivity, their isolating effect will make them a negative on level. 2. Individuals must therefore strive to maintain strong human relationships.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

Nowadays, the robotics industry is beginning to penetrate both home and work environments. In my opinion, advances in robotics generally and artificial intelligence more specifically have their merits but are isolating.

Proponents of these innovations point to the eradication of inefficiencies. This applies to both workplaces and homes. At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security. As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel. In homes, the situation is similar as robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.

Nonetheless, the growth of a robotics industry exacerbates a modern trend towards isolation. People today are seemingly more connected than ever before thanks to the internet and social media, however, real world connection is on the decline. The workplace and home are two of the last remaining spaces to build meaningful, interpersonal relationships. A rise in the number of robots, as is the case in Japan where it is now possible to purchase a robot companion, will lead to a concomitant decrease in human relations. It seems unlikely that people would completely stop talking to each other but the pervasiveness of online life can serve as a warning that humanity is only too willing to subsist on one-way, inauthentic relationships.

In conclusion, despite the benefits robots bring for productivity, their isolating effect will make them a negative on level. Individuals must therefore strive to maintain strong human relationships.

Answers

robotics industry companies working in making robots

penetrate enter the markets, spread into

work environments offices, factories, etc.

advances innovations

generally overall

artificial intelligence smart computers/robots

merits benefits

isolating staying all alone

proponents supporters

innovations advances

eradication getting rid of

inefficiencies not making good use of resources

range of responsibilities many different duties

carried out doing them

ranging from including

photocopying making copies of papers

slightly more robust tasks a little more complex duties

data input putting numbers into a computer

security protecting a place

self-sufficient can work on their own

efficiency not wasting resources

prioritise consider more important

most excel do their best work

situation context

take over replace

chores cleaning up at home

freeing up allowing for

focus on concentrate on

pleasurable pastimes hobbies

exacerbates makes it worse

modern trend pattern these days

towards in the direction of

isolation alone

seemingly ostensible

connected brought together

thanks to due to

real world connection talking in real life

on the decline getting worse

last remaining spaces final areas

build strengthen

interpersonal between people

as is the case in for example

now possible happens at the moment

concomitant related

human relations people together, bonds between people

pervasiveness common

can serve as a warning is a possible sign that this will happen

only too willing to too happy to settle to do this

subsist make do with

one-way not real interaction

inauthentic not real

isolating effect making people stay alone

on level in general

strive try for

maintain keep up

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

rəʊˈbɒtɪks ˈɪndəstri 
ˈpɛnɪtreɪt 
wɜːk ɪnˈvaɪərənmənts
ədˈvɑːnsɪz 
ˈʤɛnərəli 
ˌɑːtɪˈfɪʃ(ə)l ɪnˈtɛlɪʤəns 
ˈmɛrɪts 
ˈaɪsəleɪtɪŋ
prəˈpəʊnənts 
ˌɪnəʊˈveɪʃənz 
ɪˌrædɪˈkeɪʃən 
ˌɪnɪˈfɪʃənsiz
reɪnʤ ɒv rɪsˌpɒnsəˈbɪlɪtiz 
ˈkærid aʊt 
ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm 
ˈfəʊtəʊˌkɒpiɪŋ 
ˈslaɪtli mɔː rəʊˈbʌst tɑːsks 
ˈdeɪtə ˈɪnpʊt 
sɪˈkjʊərɪti
sɛlf-səˈfɪʃənt 
ɪˈfɪʃənsi 
praɪˈɒrɪˌtaɪz 
məʊst ɪkˈsɛl
ˌsɪtjʊˈeɪʃən 
teɪk ˈəʊvə 
ʧɔːz 
ˈfriːɪŋ ʌp 
ˈfəʊkəs ɒn 
ˈplɛʒərəbl ˈpɑːstaɪmz
ɛksˈæsə(ː)beɪts 
ˈmɒdən trɛnd 
təˈwɔːdz 
ˌaɪsəʊˈleɪʃən
ˈsiːmɪŋli 
kəˈnɛktɪd 
θæŋks tuː 
rɪəl wɜːld kəˈnɛkʃən 
ɒn ðə dɪˈklaɪn
lɑːst rɪˈmeɪnɪŋ ˈspeɪsɪz 
bɪld 
ˌɪntəˈpɜːsən(ə)l 
æz ɪz ðə keɪs ɪn 
naʊ ˈpɒsəbl 
kənˈkɒmɪtənt 
ˈhjuːmən rɪˈleɪʃənz
pɜːˈveɪsɪvnəs 
kæn sɜːv æz ə ˈwɔːnɪŋ 
ˈəʊnli tuː ˈwɪlɪŋ tuː 
səbˈsɪst 
wʌn-weɪ
ɪn ɔːˈθɛntɪk 
ˈaɪsəleɪtɪŋ ɪˈfɛkt 
ɒn ˈlɛvl
straɪv 
meɪnˈteɪn 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

Nowadays, the r__________________y is beginning to p___________e both home and w____________________s. In my opinion, a___________s in robotics g_____________y and a_______________________e more specifically have their m_______s but are i___________g.

P______________s of these i_______________s point to the e______________n of i_________________s. This applies to both workplaces and homes. At work, there are a r_________________________s being c_______________t by humans that could be done by robots r______________m the transportation of goods and p______________g to s_____________________________s such as d____________t and s__________y. As artificial intelligence becomes more s______________t it is likely that companies will be able to increase e___________y and humans can p____________e the areas where they m__________l. In homes, the s__________n is similar as robots may be able to t___________r c_______s such as washing the dishing and cleaning, f_____________p individuals to f__________n more p______________________s.

Nonetheless, the growth of a robotics industry e_____________s a m___________________________n. People today are s_____________y more c__________d than ever before t_____________o the internet and social media, however, r_________________________n is o_______________e. The workplace and home are two of the l______________________s to b_______d meaningful, i____________________l relationships. A rise in the number of robots, a______________________n Japan where it is n_____________________e to purchase a robot companion, will lead to a c_______________t decrease in h____________________s. It seems unlikely that people would completely stop talking to each other but the p_________________s of online life c_____________________g that humanity is o_________________________t on o______________y, i_____________c relationships.

In conclusion, despite the benefits robots bring for productivity, their i________________t will make them a negative o____________l. Individuals must therefore s_________e to m___________n strong human relationships.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.wired.com/story/covid-19-robot-companions/

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Friends

  1. Do you talk about yourself to your friends?
  2. Do you like to listen or talk with your friends?
  3. Do you often change your mind about your friends?
  4. Is it important to have friends?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:

Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

IELTS Essay: Walking

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Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking.

Why is this?

What can be done to encourage more walking?

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IELTS Essay: Multinational Companies

IELTS Essay: Multinational Companies

This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay on the topic of multinational companies from the real IELTS exam.

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IELTS Essay: Multinational Companies

The growth of multinational companies and the resulting rise of globalization creates positive effects for all.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The pervasiveness of multinationals has led many to question their relative merits. In my opinion, their impact is negative on the whole despite legitimate economic advantages.

Those in favor of a globalised world argue that international conglomerates bring wealth to a country. This is the result of a variety of related effects including increased tax revenue, employment opportunities, and, most importantly, the spread of expertise. A good example of this would be producers of consumer electronics such as Apple. Apple provides jobs in countries all around the world ranging from marketers and factory workers to graphic designers and supply agents. All these employees receive salaries typically above the average wages in a given region, which is then directed back towards the local consumer economy. Such workers are also likely to pick up specialised skills that they can utilize in the long-term and later pass on to others.

Nonetheless, multinationals are negative due to their effects on local businesses and the environment. A good example of the former point would be the rise of fast food chains globally. Well-known brands such as McDonald’s and KFC are in hundreds of countries and provide serious competition to local restaurants. Their ability to offer cheap, uniform meals with limited nutritional value that are very addictive hurt both the health of the local populace and also make it harder for small restaurants to turn a profit and remain in operation. Moreover, such large corporations contribute to climate change by exploiting the use of airplanes and trucks to ship their products globally. Combined with the plastic packaging often employed by these companies, their impact on the environment far surpasses the minor lifestyle choices of individuals.

In conclusion, despite meagre economic benefits arising from multinationals, I believe this is a negative trend due to the effect on small businesses and the environment. Governments must therefore attempt to carefully regulate and balance the introduction of international companies.

Analysis

1. The pervasiveness of multinationals has led many to question their relative merits. 2. In my opinion, their impact is negative on the whole despite legitimate economic advantages.

  1. Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
  2. Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here.

1. Those in favor of a globalised world argue that international conglomerates bring wealth to a country. 2. This is the result of a variety of related effects including increased tax revenue, employment opportunities, and, most importantly, the spread of expertise. 3. A good example of this would be producers of consumer electronics such as Apple. 4. Apple provides jobs in countries all around the world ranging from marketers and factory workers to graphic designers and supply agents. 5. All these employees receive salaries typically above the average wages in a given region, which is then directed back towards the local consumer economy. 6. Such workers are also likely to pick up specialised skills that they can utilize in the long-term and later pass on to others.

  1. Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your main idea.
  3. Develop it with specific examples.
  4. Keep developing.
  5. Develop it fully.
  6. The more detail, the higher your task achievement score.

1. Nonetheless, multinationals are negative due to their effects on local businesses and the environment. 2. A good example of the former point would be the rise of fast food chains globally. 3. Well-known brands such as McDonald’s and KFC are in hundreds of countries and provide serious competition to local restaurants. 4. Their ability to offer cheap, uniform meals with limited nutritional value that are very addictive hurt both the health of the local populace and also make it harder for small restaurants to turn a profit and remain in operation. 5. Moreover, such large corporations contribute to climate change by exploiting the use of airplanes and trucks to ship their products globally. 6. Combined with the plastic packaging often employed by these companies, their impact on the environment far surpasses the minor lifestyle choices of individuals.

  1. Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
  2. Explain your new main idea.
  3. Include specific details and examples.
  4. Continue developing or switch to a second disadvantage.
  5. Develop this one fully.
  6. State the furthest possible result.

1. In conclusion, despite meagre economic benefits arising from multinationals, I believe this is a negative trend due to the effect on small businesses and the environment. 2. Governments must therefore attempt to carefully regulate and balance the introduction of international companies.

  1. Summarise your main ideas.
  2. Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.

Vocabulary

What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.

The pervasiveness of multinationals has led many to question their relative merits. In my opinion, their impact is negative on the whole despite legitimate economic advantages.

Those in favor of a globalised world argue that international conglomerates bring wealth to a country. This is the result of a variety of related effects including increased tax revenue, employment opportunities, and, most importantly, the spread of expertise. A good example of this would be producers of consumer electronics such as Apple. Apple provides jobs in countries all around the world ranging from marketers and factory workers to graphic designers and supply agents. All these employees receive salaries typically above the average wages in a given region, which is then directed back towards the local consumer economy. Such workers are also likely to pick up specialised skills that they can utilize in the long-term and later pass on to others.

Nonetheless, multinationals are negative due to their effects on local businesses and the environment. A good example of the former point would be the rise of fast food chains globally. Well-known brands such as McDonald’s and KFC are in hundreds of countries and provide serious competition to local restaurants. Their ability to offer cheap, uniform meals with limited nutritional value that are very addictive hurt both the health of the local populace and also make it harder for small restaurants to turn a profit and remain in operation. Moreover, such large corporations contribute to climate change by exploiting the use of airplanes and trucks to ship their products globally. Combined with the plastic packaging often employed by these companies, their impact on the environment far surpasses the minor lifestyle choices of individuals.

In conclusion, despite meagre economic benefits arising from multinationals, I believe this is a negative trend due to the effect on small businesses and the environment. Governments must therefore attempt to carefully regulate and balance the introduction of international companies.

Answers

pervasiveness ubiquity

multinationals international companies

question doubt

relative merits how much value they actually have

negative on the whole bad overall

legitimate real, justified

those in favor of supporters

globalised world world where everyone is connected

international conglomerates big companies

wealth money

this is the result of the cause of this is

variety lots of different kinds

increased tax revenue more money from taxes

employment opportunities chances to get a job

most importantly more valuable

spread of expertise people learning more

producers of consumer electronics people who make phones, etc.

ranging from marketers including advertisers

factory workers people working in factories

graphic designers those who design images for publications and online

supply agents those who help in supplying, getting items

average wages normal salaries

in a given region in one specific area

directed back sent back to

local consumer economy the economy in the country

pick up learn

specialised skills useful abilities

utilize take advantage of

long-term over a long period of time

later pass on to others after that tell other people

nonetheless regardless

former point mentioned before

fast food chains KFC, McDonald’s, etc.

well-known brands famous companies

provide serious competition make it very difficult

uniform meals food all the same

limited nutritional value not healthy

addictive can’t stop eating

local populace people living there

turn a profit earn money

remain in operation stay in business

contribute add to

exploiting tasking advantage of

ship their products globally send items around the world

combined with in conjunction with

plastic packaging wrappers, boxes, etc.

far surpasses much more than

minor not major

meagre insignificant

arising from coming from

carefully regulate control well

balance keep equal

introduction entering the market

Pronunciation

Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search:

pɜːˈveɪsɪvnəs 
ˌmʌltɪˈnæʃənlz 
ˈkwɛsʧən 
ˈrɛlətɪv ˈmɛrɪts
ˈnɛgətɪv ɒn ðə həʊl 
lɪˈʤɪtɪmɪt 
ðəʊz ɪn ˈfeɪvər ɒv 
ˌgləʊb(ə)laɪˈzd wɜːld 
ˌɪntə(ː)ˈnæʃənl kənˈglɒmərɪts 
wɛlθ 
ðɪs ɪz ðə rɪˈzʌlt ɒv 
vəˈraɪəti 
ɪnˈkriːst tæks ˈrɛvɪnjuː
ɪmˈplɔɪmənt ˌɒpəˈtjuːnɪtiz
məʊst ɪmˈpɔːtəntli 
sprɛd ɒv ˌɛkspɜːˈtiːz
prəˈdjuːsəz ɒv kənˈsjuːmər ɪlɛkˈtrɒnɪks 
ˈreɪnʤɪŋ frɒm ˈmɑːkɪtəz 
ˈfæktəri ˈwɜːkəz 
ˈgræfɪk dɪˈzaɪnəz 
səˈplaɪ ˈeɪʤənts
ˈævərɪʤ ˈweɪʤɪz 
ɪn ə ˈgɪvn ˈriːʤən
dɪˈrɛktɪd bæk 
ˈləʊkəl kənˈsjuːmər i(ː)ˈkɒnəmi
pɪk ʌp 
ˈspɛʃ(ə)laɪzd skɪlz 
ˈjuːtɪˌlaɪz 
ˈlɒŋtɜːm 
ˈleɪtə pɑːs ɒn tuː ˈʌðəz
ˌnʌnðəˈlɛs
ˈfɔːmə pɔɪnt 
fɑːst fuːd ʧeɪnz 
wɛl-nəʊn brændz 
prəˈvaɪd ˈsɪərɪəs ˌkɒmpɪˈtɪʃən 
ˈjuːnɪfɔːm miːlz 
ˈlɪmɪtɪd nju(ː)ˈtrɪʃən(ə)l ˈvæljuː 
əˈdɪktɪv 
ˈləʊkəl ˈpɒpjʊləs 
tɜːn ə ˈprɒfɪt 
rɪˈmeɪn ɪn ˌɒpəˈreɪʃən
kənˈtrɪbju(ː)t 
ɪksˈplɔɪtɪŋ 
ʃɪp ðeə ˈprɒdʌkts ˈgləʊbəli
kəmˈbaɪnd wɪð 
ˈplæstɪk ˈpækɪʤɪŋ 
fɑː sɜːˈpɑːsɪz 
ˈmaɪnə 
ˈmiːgə 
əˈraɪzɪŋ frɒm 
ˈkeəfli ˈrɛgjʊleɪt 
ˈbæləns 
ˌɪntrəˈdʌkʃən 

Vocabulary Practice

I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:

The p______________s of m________________s has led many to q_________n their r__________________s. In my opinion, their impact is n_______________________e despite l____________e economic advantages.

T________________f a g_________________d argue that i__________________________s bring w_________h to a country. T_____________________f a v___________y of related effects including i_____________________e, e__________________________________s, and, m__________________y, the s_________________e. A good example of this would be p______________________________s such as Apple. Apple provides jobs in countries all around the world r________________________s and f_____________________s to g___________________s and s________________s. All these employees receive salaries typically above the a_________________s i___________________________n, which is then d__________________k towards the l_______________________________y. Such workers are also likely to p___________________________________s that they can u_________e in the l____________m and l______________________________s.

N___________________s, multinationals are negative due to their effects on local businesses and the environment. A good example of the f________________t would be the rise of f___________________s globally. W______________________s such as McDonald’s and KFC are in hundreds of countries and p_________________________n to local restaurants. Their ability to offer cheap, u___________________s with l__________________________e that are very a_____________e hurt both the health of the l________________e and also make it harder for small restaurants to t_______________t and r___________________________n. Moreover, such large corporations c_____________e to climate change by e______________g the use of airplanes and trucks to s_____________________________y. C_________________h the p______________________g often employed by these companies, their impact on the environment f___________________s the m__________r lifestyle choices of individuals.

In conclusion, despite m___________e economic benefits a______________m multinationals, I believe this is a negative trend due to the effect on small businesses and the environment. Governments must therefore attempt to c_______________________e and b___________e the i___________________n of international companies.

Listening Practice

Learn more about this topic in the video below and practice with these activities:

Reading Practice

Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice:

https://www.nytimes.com/2020/03/05/business/coronavirus-globalism.html

Speaking Practice

Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam:

Work 1 (Model answer available on my Patreon)

  1. Do you work or are you a student?
  2. Do you like your current job?
  3. In the future, do you want to change jobs?

Writing Practice

Practice with the related topic below and then check with my sample answer:

In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?